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UPDATE -4
Rat ko khana kha kar hum sub bethe huwe the
Papa ne mujse kaha Beta kabir Tumhara admission yaha ke school me kara deta hu thoda adjust Karlena tum
Kabir...thik he papa
Kya me apse kuch puch sakta hu
Umer....ha bolo beta
Kabir.....ye sab kya horaha he papa hum achanak alska chhoad kar kyu yaha agaye
Umer.....is ki ek bhoot badi wajah he beta waqt nahi aya abi in sub bat ka jub waqt ayega me
Tumhe khud batuga lekin tum muje wada karo
Jub tak tumhe bata ne ka waqt nahi ata tum apni padhai pe dhyan do ge thik he
Kabir...thik he papa ye keh kar apne kamre ki or chal deta he
Kabir ke jane ke bad
Suhan....akhir kab tak hum ese bhag te rahe ge
Umer......jane man tum itni udas mat raha karo ek waqt aye ga dekh na hamra beta hum sub ko ek kar ke rahega or ham sub fir se ek hojayge bus intezar he to kabir ke bada hone ka ek waqt esa ayega ke kabir ko bhot hi badi taklif se gujarna hoga uske bad kabir jo karega wo dekh ne layak hoga bus muje us pal ka intezar he bl tum mera sath dena suhan
Jess abi tak dete ayi ho me wada kar ta hu me tumhe tumhari family se milakar hi rahuga or hum sub eksath rehne lage ge hamra bhi pariwar hoga
Suhan.....me to hamesa apke sath hu
Or tum kabir ki kis taklif ki bat kar rahe ho
Umer......waqt ane par bata duga chalo hub sone chalte he mera mood ban raha he kuc karne ka
Suhan...tumhara to mood ka koi time he ke nahi jub dekho tub shuru ho jate ho
Umer.....kya karu darling tum ho hi esi ke soye huwe dil ke arman jaga deti ho
Suhan ....pata he muje tumhare konse dil ke soye huwe arman jag rahe he besarm kahi ke
Umer....teri ye aada pe to hamra dil fida he
Suhan .....chalo chalo bhot hogaya hub jo bolna kamre me jake karlena
Umer....smile karte huwe
Mujse jada to tumhe jaldi he ye keh kar
Suhan ko goud me utha leta he or chal deta he apne kamre me
Idher india me ronak
Shamsher ko zoravar ke duwara banaye huwe Khan hospital me admit karwa deta he
Zoravar khan bi hospital phoch kar apne bete ki hal chal ka jayeza leta he
Or ro nak se kehta he ye jis kisi ne bi kiya he
Usne zoravar ko lalkara he
Zoravar ronak tum waps jao alska or waha jakar khud taps karo ye sub kese huwa or kisne kar waya he jub tap pata nai chalta tub tak apn muh mat dikhana muje
Shera tum hospital ki sari security badha to jub tak shamsher thik na hojaye tum khud yaha par raho ge ye keh kar zoravar nikal jat he gher ki or
Shera ronak se beta tum dada bhai (shera zoravar khan ko pehle se hi dada bulta he )ki bato ka bura manna wo abi apne beto ko lekar tention me he
Tum waha khud akhele jao or khud tehkikat karo kisi or ko mat bhej na thik he
Ronak....papa wo me apko kuch bata na chata tha
Shera ....bolo beta kya bat he
Ronak ....papa wo me haklate huwe
Shera....ha bolo beta ese hakla kyu rahe ho
Ronak.....papa mene waha umer jiju ko dekhatha
Shera....shock se kya kab or kaha
Ronak.....alaska me or umer jiju ko dekha tha mene or shamsher bhai ka operations bi umer jiju ne hi kiya he or jo huwa sub bata deta he
Shera....dada bhai ko tumne iske bare me kuch batay
Ronak....kya papa aap bi meri to ga*****nd fatti padi thi jub shamsher bhai ko goli lagi thi
Us waqt muje kuch samj nai arahta or umer jiju ke dekh ne ke bad se to mera dimag kam karna hi band kardiya tha to kese unko bata ta me
Ye kam apko hi karna padega
Shera.....thik he jub tak shamsher thik nai ho jata tub tak ye bat hum do ke siva kisi ko pata nahi chalni chaiye hub tum jao
Or apna kam khatam karne ke bad
Milte he
Ronak...thik he papa ye keh kar ronak apni manzil ki tarf nikal jata he
Dosto update bhale hi chota he
Lekin naya naya likh na start kiya he mene
To abi muskil lag raha he
Bus ap log ess he apna sath banaye rakhe
Jamesleon
Rat ko khana kha kar hum sub bethe huwe the
Papa ne mujse kaha Beta kabir Tumhara admission yaha ke school me kara deta hu thoda adjust Karlena tum
Kabir...thik he papa
Kya me apse kuch puch sakta hu
Umer....ha bolo beta
Kabir.....ye sab kya horaha he papa hum achanak alska chhoad kar kyu yaha agaye
Umer.....is ki ek bhoot badi wajah he beta waqt nahi aya abi in sub bat ka jub waqt ayega me
Tumhe khud batuga lekin tum muje wada karo
Jub tak tumhe bata ne ka waqt nahi ata tum apni padhai pe dhyan do ge thik he
Kabir...thik he papa ye keh kar apne kamre ki or chal deta he
Kabir ke jane ke bad
Suhan....akhir kab tak hum ese bhag te rahe ge
Umer......jane man tum itni udas mat raha karo ek waqt aye ga dekh na hamra beta hum sub ko ek kar ke rahega or ham sub fir se ek hojayge bus intezar he to kabir ke bada hone ka ek waqt esa ayega ke kabir ko bhot hi badi taklif se gujarna hoga uske bad kabir jo karega wo dekh ne layak hoga bus muje us pal ka intezar he bl tum mera sath dena suhan
Jess abi tak dete ayi ho me wada kar ta hu me tumhe tumhari family se milakar hi rahuga or hum sub eksath rehne lage ge hamra bhi pariwar hoga
Suhan.....me to hamesa apke sath hu
Or tum kabir ki kis taklif ki bat kar rahe ho
Umer......waqt ane par bata duga chalo hub sone chalte he mera mood ban raha he kuc karne ka
Suhan...tumhara to mood ka koi time he ke nahi jub dekho tub shuru ho jate ho
Umer.....kya karu darling tum ho hi esi ke soye huwe dil ke arman jaga deti ho
Suhan ....pata he muje tumhare konse dil ke soye huwe arman jag rahe he besarm kahi ke
Umer....teri ye aada pe to hamra dil fida he
Suhan .....chalo chalo bhot hogaya hub jo bolna kamre me jake karlena
Umer....smile karte huwe
Mujse jada to tumhe jaldi he ye keh kar
Suhan ko goud me utha leta he or chal deta he apne kamre me
Idher india me ronak
Shamsher ko zoravar ke duwara banaye huwe Khan hospital me admit karwa deta he
Zoravar khan bi hospital phoch kar apne bete ki hal chal ka jayeza leta he
Or ro nak se kehta he ye jis kisi ne bi kiya he
Usne zoravar ko lalkara he
Zoravar ronak tum waps jao alska or waha jakar khud taps karo ye sub kese huwa or kisne kar waya he jub tap pata nai chalta tub tak apn muh mat dikhana muje
Shera tum hospital ki sari security badha to jub tak shamsher thik na hojaye tum khud yaha par raho ge ye keh kar zoravar nikal jat he gher ki or
Shera ronak se beta tum dada bhai (shera zoravar khan ko pehle se hi dada bulta he )ki bato ka bura manna wo abi apne beto ko lekar tention me he
Tum waha khud akhele jao or khud tehkikat karo kisi or ko mat bhej na thik he
Ronak....papa wo me apko kuch bata na chata tha
Shera ....bolo beta kya bat he
Ronak ....papa wo me haklate huwe
Shera....ha bolo beta ese hakla kyu rahe ho
Ronak.....papa mene waha umer jiju ko dekhatha
Shera....shock se kya kab or kaha
Ronak.....alaska me or umer jiju ko dekha tha mene or shamsher bhai ka operations bi umer jiju ne hi kiya he or jo huwa sub bata deta he
Shera....dada bhai ko tumne iske bare me kuch batay
Ronak....kya papa aap bi meri to ga*****nd fatti padi thi jub shamsher bhai ko goli lagi thi
Us waqt muje kuch samj nai arahta or umer jiju ke dekh ne ke bad se to mera dimag kam karna hi band kardiya tha to kese unko bata ta me
Ye kam apko hi karna padega
Shera.....thik he jub tak shamsher thik nai ho jata tub tak ye bat hum do ke siva kisi ko pata nahi chalni chaiye hub tum jao
Or apna kam khatam karne ke bad
Milte he
Ronak...thik he papa ye keh kar ronak apni manzil ki tarf nikal jata he
Dosto update bhale hi chota he
Lekin naya naya likh na start kiya he mene
To abi muskil lag raha he
Bus ap log ess he apna sath banaye rakhe
Jamesleon
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nice update ..ronak ne kisiko nahi bataya umer ke baare me to uske ghar chhanbin karne kaun gaya tha 
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aur ye kabir ke kis taklif se gujarne ki baat kar raha tha umer ..
kuch aur bhi raaz honge jo abhi saamne nahi aaye aisa lagta hai .
..aur ye kabir ke kis taklif se gujarne ki baat kar raha tha umer ..
kuch aur bhi raaz honge jo abhi saamne nahi aaye aisa lagta hai .
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Bhai 3 update me bataya gaya he ronak ne apne aadmi bheje the umer ka gher penice update ..ronak ne kisiko nahi bataya umer ke baare me to uske ghar chhanbin karne kaun gaya tha
aur ye kabir ke kis taklif se gujarne ki baat kar raha tha umer ..
kuch aur bhi raaz honge jo abhi saamne nahi aaye aisa lagta hai .
And thanks for yor coment
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UPDATE 5
Kabir apne room me bethe huwe shoch raha tha ke papa ne to mana kar diya he sub bata ne se or mom se kuch puch bi nahi sakta ye soch kar apna sir pakad kar beth jata he
Kabir.....apne man me ye papa bi na pata nahi kis waqt ki bat kar rahe or wo waqt kab ayega Ye soch te huwe so jata he
Dusre din morning me kabir fresh hokar apne room se baher ata he to dekhta he us ke papa wahi daining tabel pe bethe nasta kar rahe he
Kabir wahi apne papa ke pase jake beth jata he
Umer.....to kabir beta jaldi se breakfast karo tumhara admission karvana he
Kabir...thik he papa
Fir nasta karke kabir or umer nikal jate he
Kabir ka admission karana school me
Dusri tarf
Ronak waps alaska phoch chuka tha apne kuch admiyo ke sath
Ronak....apne admiyo se tum log yaha shmasher bhai jis jagah se ship š³ me bethe the waha ke aspaske jitne bi cctv camera he chek karo tub tak me ek kam nipta ke ata hu ye keh kar ronak umer ke gher ki tarf naikal gaya
Ronak umer ke gher phoch kar gher ki tala si lena suru karta he lekin use waha kuch nahi milta or thak har kar wahi beth jata he or soch ne lagta he
Ronak...ye umer jiju or suhan didi kaha gaye hoge waps ye desh to unho ne chhod hi diya hoga or unka beta kabir ki yad ate hi ronak smile karne lagta he or uth kar gher ki bahar jane lagta he
Ronak ....ne umer ke gher ke pas jo school thi waha jakar kabir ke bare me chan bin karta he to use waha kabir ke name ke siva kuch nahi milta to waps jane ka soch hi raha tha ke use ek studant mil jata he or usse puchta he kya tum kabir ko jante ho
Studant ....kabir ko kon nai janta sir
Hamre school ka topper jo he
Ronak...hmm kya tum muje bata sakte ho kabir ka class kidhar he
Studant...ha kyu nahi chalo mere stah keh kar
Wo ladke ronak ko kabir ki classs tak le chal ta he
Ronak...kabir ki class me akar kai studants se puch tach kar ta he to pata chal ta he kabir ka ek khas dost he james or wo jubse kabir school nahi aya tub se james ne bi ana band kardiya he or james ka pata thund kar james ke anath ashram phoch jata ta he lekin james se milkar ronak ko kuch khas pata nahi chalta
Idher
India me zoravar apne khayalo me khoya huwa tha
Ke usko apne khande pe kisi ka hat meh sus huwa to picche palt kar dekha to uski bivi jainab khadi thi
Zoravar....kya huwa kuch kam tha kya
Jainab ...rote huwe sirf tumhare ghamand ke wajese pehle meri beti dur hoi thi
Or aaj tumhare galt karnamokin vajese tumhare piche pade tumhare dushman jinhone mere bete kin jan lene ki kosis ki
Mere bete ne kisi ka kya bigada tha
Tumhre kiye huwe karm ki vajese se
aaj mera beta hospital me he or kya baki reh gaya he dekhne ko
Zoravar......esa to mene kya kardiya or konse galt kam ki bat kar rahi ho tum
Jainab....muje sub pata he tumhare chere ke piche or ek chera he jise sirf me hi janti hu bahle hi gher me ya pure samaj ke samne tumhe log aacha insan samje lekin meri najar me tum ek khuni ho jis ne kai logo ke gher ujade he kai yo ki jindagi barbad kardi apne rutbe or samman pane ke chaake me aaj dekho hame kis mood pe aagye he na beti pas me he or ek beta he wo bhi hospita me he
Zoravar....shock hote huwe tumhe ye sub kese pata he
Jainab ...pata to kabse chal gaya tha muje lekin apne baccho ki vajese kuch bol nahi pa rahi thi unhe kya pata unka baap bi koi dudh ka dhula huwa nahi he
Zoravar......jainab apni juban ko lagam do
Keh kar hat utha ne jata ha jainab ke uper
Tabhi gher me shabnam ki aavja atti he jo school se ati he
ddadu me aagai
Ye sunte hi jainab or zoravar apne apko thik karne lgte he
Shabnam apne ddadu ke pas aakr beth jati he
Or apni dadi ke utre huwe chere ko dekh kar puch thi he kya huwa dadi
Jainab....are kuch nahi beta wo bus ese hi tere papa hospital me admit hena is liye
Shabnam....jor se chillate huwe
Kya huwa papa ko
Shannam ko jub hos ata he to use pata chal ta he ko wo kya bol gai
Shabnam ....rote huwe dadu kya huwa he papa ko bolona
Zoravar....are meri gudiya tum ro kyu rahi ho tumhare papa bilkul thik he wo bus unka raste me chota sa accident hogaya tha (jhuut )
Wo thode dino me waps india ajayege
Shabnam ...dadu ap such bol rahe hona
Mujse kuch chupa to nahi rahe
Zoravar....meri gudiya ko me jhut kyu boluga
Tumhe yakin na ho to tumhare papa ko call karu
Shabnam ....nahi nahi
Muje apne dadu pe pura yakin he keh kar apne kamre me chali jati he
Zoravar.....has buch gaya nai to lene ke dene pad jate
Jainab ......kub tuk ye sub chuupa te firoge
Jub inko pata chalega ga ke in ke is dadu ne inse kitna kuch chupaya he tub kya muh dikhao ge aap or khas kar shabnam ko jiski jan aap ke under basti he keh kar chup
Ho
Jati he
Wahi
Zoravar bina kuch kahe uth kar chal deta he gher ki baher ki or jiski ankho me aaj ansu the
Kabir apne room me bethe huwe shoch raha tha ke papa ne to mana kar diya he sub bata ne se or mom se kuch puch bi nahi sakta ye soch kar apna sir pakad kar beth jata he
Kabir.....apne man me ye papa bi na pata nahi kis waqt ki bat kar rahe or wo waqt kab ayega Ye soch te huwe so jata he
Dusre din morning me kabir fresh hokar apne room se baher ata he to dekhta he us ke papa wahi daining tabel pe bethe nasta kar rahe he
Kabir wahi apne papa ke pase jake beth jata he
Umer.....to kabir beta jaldi se breakfast karo tumhara admission karvana he
Kabir...thik he papa
Fir nasta karke kabir or umer nikal jate he
Kabir ka admission karana school me
Dusri tarf
Ronak waps alaska phoch chuka tha apne kuch admiyo ke sath
Ronak....apne admiyo se tum log yaha shmasher bhai jis jagah se ship š³ me bethe the waha ke aspaske jitne bi cctv camera he chek karo tub tak me ek kam nipta ke ata hu ye keh kar ronak umer ke gher ki tarf naikal gaya
Ronak umer ke gher phoch kar gher ki tala si lena suru karta he lekin use waha kuch nahi milta or thak har kar wahi beth jata he or soch ne lagta he
Ronak...ye umer jiju or suhan didi kaha gaye hoge waps ye desh to unho ne chhod hi diya hoga or unka beta kabir ki yad ate hi ronak smile karne lagta he or uth kar gher ki bahar jane lagta he
Ronak ....ne umer ke gher ke pas jo school thi waha jakar kabir ke bare me chan bin karta he to use waha kabir ke name ke siva kuch nahi milta to waps jane ka soch hi raha tha ke use ek studant mil jata he or usse puchta he kya tum kabir ko jante ho
Studant ....kabir ko kon nai janta sir
Hamre school ka topper jo he
Ronak...hmm kya tum muje bata sakte ho kabir ka class kidhar he
Studant...ha kyu nahi chalo mere stah keh kar
Wo ladke ronak ko kabir ki classs tak le chal ta he
Ronak...kabir ki class me akar kai studants se puch tach kar ta he to pata chal ta he kabir ka ek khas dost he james or wo jubse kabir school nahi aya tub se james ne bi ana band kardiya he or james ka pata thund kar james ke anath ashram phoch jata ta he lekin james se milkar ronak ko kuch khas pata nahi chalta
Idher
India me zoravar apne khayalo me khoya huwa tha
Ke usko apne khande pe kisi ka hat meh sus huwa to picche palt kar dekha to uski bivi jainab khadi thi
Zoravar....kya huwa kuch kam tha kya
Jainab ...rote huwe sirf tumhare ghamand ke wajese pehle meri beti dur hoi thi
Or aaj tumhare galt karnamokin vajese tumhare piche pade tumhare dushman jinhone mere bete kin jan lene ki kosis ki
Mere bete ne kisi ka kya bigada tha
Tumhre kiye huwe karm ki vajese se
aaj mera beta hospital me he or kya baki reh gaya he dekhne ko
Zoravar......esa to mene kya kardiya or konse galt kam ki bat kar rahi ho tum
Jainab....muje sub pata he tumhare chere ke piche or ek chera he jise sirf me hi janti hu bahle hi gher me ya pure samaj ke samne tumhe log aacha insan samje lekin meri najar me tum ek khuni ho jis ne kai logo ke gher ujade he kai yo ki jindagi barbad kardi apne rutbe or samman pane ke chaake me aaj dekho hame kis mood pe aagye he na beti pas me he or ek beta he wo bhi hospita me he
Zoravar....shock hote huwe tumhe ye sub kese pata he
Jainab ...pata to kabse chal gaya tha muje lekin apne baccho ki vajese kuch bol nahi pa rahi thi unhe kya pata unka baap bi koi dudh ka dhula huwa nahi he
Zoravar......jainab apni juban ko lagam do
Keh kar hat utha ne jata ha jainab ke uper
Tabhi gher me shabnam ki aavja atti he jo school se ati he
ddadu me aagai
Ye sunte hi jainab or zoravar apne apko thik karne lgte he
Shabnam apne ddadu ke pas aakr beth jati he
Or apni dadi ke utre huwe chere ko dekh kar puch thi he kya huwa dadi
Jainab....are kuch nahi beta wo bus ese hi tere papa hospital me admit hena is liye
Shabnam....jor se chillate huwe
Kya huwa papa ko
Shannam ko jub hos ata he to use pata chal ta he ko wo kya bol gai
Shabnam ....rote huwe dadu kya huwa he papa ko bolona
Zoravar....are meri gudiya tum ro kyu rahi ho tumhare papa bilkul thik he wo bus unka raste me chota sa accident hogaya tha (jhuut )
Wo thode dino me waps india ajayege
Shabnam ...dadu ap such bol rahe hona
Mujse kuch chupa to nahi rahe
Zoravar....meri gudiya ko me jhut kyu boluga
Tumhe yakin na ho to tumhare papa ko call karu
Shabnam ....nahi nahi
Muje apne dadu pe pura yakin he keh kar apne kamre me chali jati he
Zoravar.....has buch gaya nai to lene ke dene pad jate
Jainab ......kub tuk ye sub chuupa te firoge
Jub inko pata chalega ga ke in ke is dadu ne inse kitna kuch chupaya he tub kya muh dikhao ge aap or khas kar shabnam ko jiski jan aap ke under basti he keh kar chup
Ho
Jati he
Wahi
Zoravar bina kuch kahe uth kar chal deta he gher ki baher ki or jiski ankho me aaj ansu the
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kahani mein kayi pehlu aur mod hote hai aur drishya bhi.. kuch sukhad, dukhad, action, drama bhi hote hai... is kahani mein in sabhi facts aur pehlu ko sanjoya gaya hai ..
Baaki Writer sahab ne ek sahi disha deke kahani ko humare samaks pesh karte aa rahe hai har ek update ke sath.... aur isme shat pratishat kamyab bhi ho rahe hai...
Btw jo apna kimti samay deke itni meaningful kahani prastut ki hai hum readers ke liye wo sach mein kabile tarif hai..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
naye readers se yahi request se yehin request hai ki ek baar jarur padhe kahani ko...
Baaki Writer sahab ne ek sahi disha deke kahani ko humare samaks pesh karte aa rahe hai har ek update ke sath.... aur isme shat pratishat kamyab bhi ho rahe hai...
Btw jo apna kimti samay deke itni meaningful kahani prastut ki hai hum readers ke liye wo sach mein kabile tarif hai..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
naye readers se yahi request se yehin request hai ki ek baar jarur padhe kahani ko...
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Thank you so much Naina jikahani mein kayi pehlu aur mod hote hai aur drishya bhi.. kuch sukhad, dukhad, action, drama bhi hote hai... is kahani mein in sabhi facts aur pehlu ko sanjoya gaya hai ..
Baaki Writer sahab ne ek sahi disha deke kahani ko humare samaks pesh karte aa rahe hai har ek update ke sath.... aur isme shat pratishat kamyab bhi ho rahe hai...
Btw jo apna kimti samay deke itni meaningful kahani prastut ki hai hum readers ke liye wo sach mein kabile tarif hai..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
naye readers se yahi request se yehin request hai ki ek baar jarur padhe kahani ko...
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nice update ..to ronak alaska pahuch gaya umer ko dhundne par wo waha mila hi nahi ..
school se pata lagake james ke paas bhi gaya par waha bhi kuch nahi mila .
aur jainab keh rahi hai ki jorawar ne bahut paap kiye hai dekhte hai kya kiya hai usne jo uski saja uska beta bhugat raha hai .
school se pata lagake james ke paas bhi gaya par waha bhi kuch nahi mila .
aur jainab keh rahi hai ki jorawar ne bahut paap kiye hai dekhte hai kya kiya hai usne jo uski saja uska beta bhugat raha hai .
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