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Thriller 100 - Encounter !!!! Journey Of An Innocent Girl (Completed)

nain11ster

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are yaar..:doh: .. bas aise kirdaar na ho jo hero heroine pe hanshe..hero heroine alag bhi ho jaaye phir mil jaaye loyal rahe.. bas itni si request hai... itni si baat maan lijiye :pray:
Btw once get connected ... Mere har kirdar loyal hote hain .. at the good side... Lekin wo aap nahi maan sakti ... Isliye to ab favour karne ka socha hai...

Aap bus kirdaron ko lekar chhoti bhavna likhiye main bade pyar se explain karunga... No matter .. smile please
 

nain11ster

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ab woh is kahani ki heroine bhi hai aur villain bhi.... ab ushe pata nahi hoga toh kise pata hoga... Agar pehle se pata nahi hota itni aashani se kaise chal di ush Uma aur ravi ke sath... dekha nahi kaise cool tarike se baat kar rahi thi kidnapped hone ke baad bhi aur itni relax thi jaise marne nahi balki picnic jaa rahi ho unlogo ke sath :D... .. ju ko tabhi samajh jana chahiye ki puri daal hi kaali hai :D
Haan bilkul aur maine open hi likha tha ye poora section... Koi bahut jyada suspence creat karne ko kosis nahi hui thi ... 100 baar ye scene movie me aaya hai... Kya hi creat karta yahan suspence... Balki aake to poori kahani hi end ke baad suspence me chali jani hai :D
 

Mr.x 2.0

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Yaar bahut he mast storie tha..............
Dil garden garden ho gaya..........
Har Tarah ka misran tha is kahani........
 

nain11ster

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May be you are right after all you are the writer. But I fell you have completed in hest. This is just my feeling. The speed of the story at initiation and after the marriage of nakul it looks like you wanted to complete it any way. I am not questing u neither I can after all it is your story.
Its time to say goodbye to forum. Your story completed Enigma bhai has already excused himself. Now only story worth reading is of AP 316 bhai.
Thanks and best of luck.
U might feel it but I can say only one thing ...... Once I plot the story, then I just follow it. I write neither slow nor fast.....
 
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