Erotica 38 saal ke kaale ramesh ne 22 saal ki nisha ko dulhan banaya

[Betheher0]

ek chizz hamesa mujhe weird lagta hein ki hum writer ko salah dene aate hein, bhai ye karo woh karo, woh na karo, ye ek prakar writer ko manipulate karna hota hein, writer ko apna hisab se likhne do, kiye honewale hein woh unke mind se hi niqalne do.

Criticism suggestion ho saqta hein par presentation wise, kahanii narration ke tor par, baki writer khud zante hein story mein kiya hoga, keyse hoga... ho sake sab ko pasand nehi aye, eysa sayed hi hua ki ek kahani sabhi ko acche laga.

Iss kahani abhi taq acche zaraha hein, ummeed hein ysehi acchi rahe

Bro it's called feedback . We didn't force them.
We just suggest them different idea. It's upto them either they absorb it or not.

 

[Chodubhagat]

Bro it's called feedback . We didn't force them.
We just suggest them different idea. It's upto them either they absorb it or not.

Exactly friend, and your feedback is valuable… keep them coming

 

[reeya batliwala]

bahut badiya
aise hi likhate rahiye

 

[A.B.KING]

Superb update

 

[Chodubhagat]

Doston kal kahani mein thoda twist aayega jis se nisha ki value naresh ki aankhon mein aur badhegi… yeh bhi maanta hai aur readers bhi ki nisha ki husn ke ilawa naresh ko uski aur khubiyaan bhi paati honi chahiye…..

 

[Tony1979]

Waiting bro

 

[Abhi32]

Doston kal kahani mein thoda twist aayega jis se nisha ki value naresh ki aankhon mein aur badhegi… yeh bhi maanta hai aur readers bhi ki nisha ki husn ke ilawa naresh ko uski aur khubiyaan bhi paati honi chahiye…..

Intezar rahega

 

[mkgpkr]

Mast mast bahut hi mast updates

 

[Arup manna]

Bhai nisha ko impregnent jaror krna bro

 

[Chodubhagat]

Super update

Don't introduce sex directly . Slow intimacy Then make them legally married.
Create a romantic first night episode.

Thanks bro