Erotica 38 saal ke kaale ramesh ne 22 saal ki nisha ko dulhan banaya
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Fir to suggestions ka colum hi na ho like unlike honey chahiye it's up to writer ki wo kya likhna chahta ha a good writer pahle hi script bana leta ha magar jo aise hi hote ha wo changes karte ha I think he is good
bhai ne bataya tha unone kisike kehene par image dala ye suggestion story ko manipulate nehi kiya, presentation ko kiya... presentation, narration wise suggestion honi cahiye...
mera keheneka matlab sayed ap logo ko samjha nehi paya, aur samjhane ki kousish bhi nehi karunga, hum alag alag, hamara bichar alag alag, hum zeyse sochenge zoruri nehi ki aap bhi wsehi soche & vice versa...hum independent hein, hum khud janta hein kiya karna cahiye...no offense...mere comment leke zo baat chit ho raha hein woh idhar hi rok dete hein
story acchi za rahi hein, padhiye, maza liziye, aur bhai ne bataya unko story wise suggestion cahiye, zarur karie...
mera keheneka matlab sayed ap logo ko samjha nehi paya, aur samjhane ki kousish bhi nehi karunga, hum alag alag, hamara bichar alag alag, hum zeyse sochenge zoruri nehi ki aap bhi wsehi soche & vice versa...hum independent hein, hum khud janta hein kiya karna cahiye...no offense...mere comment leke zo baat chit ho raha hein woh idhar hi rok dete hein
story acchi za rahi hein, padhiye, maza liziye, aur bhai ne bataya unko story wise suggestion cahiye, zarur karie...
Fir to suggestions ka colum hi na ho like unlike honey chahiye it's up to writer ki wo kya likhna chahta ha a good writer pahle hi script bana leta ha magar jo aise hi hote ha wo changes karte ha I think he is good
I think we should settle the conversation, i have told sab apne ideas dein and jitna ho payega agar ko suggestion badiya laga to main include karunga kahani ko compromise na karte hue
Kisiko immediate sex chahiye, kisiko shaadi ke baad, sex is story mein bahut important hai, abhi to cheek kiss tak pahunche hai….
Patience rakhein and kahani ka luft uthayein
I think you r going on right track koi farak nahi padta sex before marriage ho ya after but slow sedudetictve ho most important as per my opinion before marriage ho to story ka group erotic ha usko justified karega
Ab aage,
Woh building ke sabse top floor pahunchte hain… jahan par lift khulte hi ek aadmi unhe meeting room ki taraf le jaata hain…
Meeting room ke andar jaise hi ghuste hai… saamne ek 50 years ka vyakti jiska naam anil hai woh baitha hota hai aur uske saath 26 saal ka ladka manish baitha hota hai…
Naresh manish aur anil se haath milta , but manish ke aankhein nisha ke husn ko naap rahi hoti hai
Manish (man mein): kya gazab ki secretary hai naresh ki, roz pelta hoga ise, uff kaash yeh mere ko mil jaaye, isko to 24 ghante apne cabin mein nanga rakhunga
Naresh manish ki nigahein samajh jaata hai par khuch nahi kehta…
Naresh: anil ji, hamari company mein abhi head of purchasing nisha ne join kiya hai… manish ne jo mujhe quotation bheji hai price model mein inhe doubt hai
Anil: koi baat nahi naresh ji, aapko pata hamara aapke business 8 saal se hai, yahan tak ki aajtak humne hi aapko brass supply kiya, 2021 mein mujhe covid ho gaya tha, to maine personally apne bete manish ko handle karne ko diya tha aapka account
Naresh: mujhe pata hai ji aapka swasthya kaisa hai ab
Anil: abhi 1 mahine se hi join kiya hai
Naresh: manish nisha has a few doubts i think we can begin the meeting
Manish thoda pareshan to hota hai ki achanak se yeh meeting kyun hui hai…
Nisha: manish ji… aap kabse naresh ji ko quote kar rahe hain personally
Manish nisha par pressure banane ki koshish karta hai
Manish: aapka matlab kya hai saaf saaf kahiye, baatein ghuma kar nahi, main 4 saal se company dekh raha hun, pichle saal se papa ki tabiyat kharab hone ke baad i am personally looking into the accounts of naresh ji company
Nisha: to phir aap explain kariye ki achanak se price kyun rise kar gaye
Manish: dekhiye aap jaise ladkiyan looks ke dum par naukri to haasil kar leti hain aapko knowledge to hoti hai nahi, aap hamare business relation kharab karne ke liye and boss ko impress karne liye bekar ki baatein le aati hain, naresh ji inhe yeh bhi nahi pata hai last year brass ke rates 15-20% badh chuke hain
Naresh khuch bolne wala hota hai… itne mein nisha bolti hai…
Nisha: manish ji aap mere upar personal attack kar rahe hain, chaliye main aapse baat nahi karna chahungi aapke father se khuch sawal puchne hain
Anil: manish thoda aaram se baat karo, nisha ji aapko jo puchna hai mere se puchiye…
Nisha 3 papers deti hain anil ko aur bolna shuru karti hai
Nisha: anil ji you have an agreement with naresh ji that you will do business at 1-1.5% margin with naresh ji
Anil: yes
Nisha:phir aapne pichle ek saal mein clearance charges per shipment 1-1.5 lakh par shipment kyun badha rakhe hain, hamari total shipment hain 38, to around 50 lakh ka humein aapne extra price bataya
Anil ke hosh udne lagte hain
Nisha: uske upar se bank ke dollar prices ki jagah aapne custom’s ka dollar price lagaya hai jo hamesha 1.5-2% upar hota hai….
To total transaction value hai 20 million dollar, to 1.5-2 crore ka nuksaan minimum aapne diya hamari company ko… kul milakar you have cheated us by 2.5 crore approx, jabki aapka fixed margin hona chahiye tha 1.5 crore aapne charge kiye humein total 4 crore…
Anil and manish ke paseene chutne lagte hain… anil ko samajh mein nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai and manish ki chori pakdi gayi thi….
Manish: dad yeh jhoot bol rahi hai papers wagerah jhoot hai, naresh ji aap is do kaudi ladki pe mat vishwas kariye
Naresh ke ab gusse ki intehaan ho gayi thi
Naresh: munh band rakh apna manish, nisha meri biwi hai, jo bol rahi hai uska seedha seedha jawab do bas
Naresh khada hokar nisha ke pass chala jaata hai aur uska haath thaam leta hai
Yeh sunkar manish and anil dang reh gaye… nisha proud feel kar rahi thi naresh ne immediately manish ki bolti band kar di
Naresh: manish meri factory mein total 300 aadmi kaam karte hain, covid ke time par dhanda nahi tha, chahta to main factory band bhi kar sakta tha but maine 300 jaano ko poori salary di
Naresh: jab tumne account takeover kiya tha maine tumhe bola tha market position tight hai… rates kam lagana tumne mujhe vishwas dilaya tha margin sirf 1% hai yahan to tum 4% par kaam karne lage woh bhi illegal way se
Manish: main…
Anil (manish ko): chup ho jaa gadhe… ab kya safayi de raha hai saari documented evidence hai inke pass
Manish chup ho jaata hai
Anil: naresh ji galti humse hui hai bataye hum kya karen
Naresh: aapne mere se 2.5 crore jo cheat kiye hain woh + jabse manish kaam par aaya hai woh comission mujhe wapas chahiye
Anil: ji zaroor ho jayega, aur aage se aapka account main handle karunga aur manish will take a break from company for 2 years until he learns business ethics
Manish: but dad yeh to ek hi client hai iske liye aap mujhe
Anil: tumhe sahi galat ki pehchan batane ke liye, jisese tum baat kar rahe ho woh homecorp developers main bhi shareholder hai and textile ka bhi business hai
Nisha aur manish sun kar bhaunchake ho jaate hain, nisha manish ko ek bada businessman samajh rahi thi aaj ke documents dekhkar par woh to business tycoon nikle
Anil: naresh ji, i am very sorry
Naresh: koi baat nahi anil ji mujhe aapka decision bilkul just laga, hum aapki company se business jab tak continue rakhenge jab tak aap har quotation par sign karenge, chalo nisha ab hum chalte hain…
Dono aaj ki meeting ke baad bahut excited hote hain… especially nisha… kyunki use laga usne life mein koi badi cheez haasil ki hai… aur uski itne saalon ki padhai bekar nahi gayi… uske self confidence ko bahut bada boost milta hai..
Jaise hi lift neeche jaane lagti hai naresh excited hokar nisha ko baahon mein bhar ke uske gore gaalon par apne kaale honth laga deta hai….
Naresh: nisha you were superb
Nisha sharma jaati hai apni taarif sunkar, aur phir naresh ke kaale gaal par apne gulabi honth laga deti hai
Nisha: aur aap bhi
Naresh: but maine kya kiya
Nisha: covid ke time par aapne 300 logon ko free mein salary di aur aapka decision business continue ka bilkul sahi tha kyunki anil ji ki isme koi galti nahi thi
Naresh: achcha baba means achche kaam karunga to mujhe abse pappi milti rahegi na
Nisha sharmakar chup rehti hai. Par excited rehti hai
Naresh: to maine do achche kaam kiye na aaj, to dusri pappi bhi do dusre gaal par
Nisha: par…. Ufff
Nisha apne ko rok nahi pati aur dusre gaal par bhi kiss kar deti hai… dono kaale gaalon par halki halki pink lipstick lagi hui hotj hai
Nisha: lipstick to poch lijeye
Naresh: kyun poochun yeh to meri biwi ki di hui kiss hai, achcha ab jaakar taiyaar bhi hona hai sharma ke yahan par wedding aniversary hai
Nisha: jiiii…
Itne dono car mein baith kar flat ki taraf nikal jaate hain….
Woh building ke sabse top floor pahunchte hain… jahan par lift khulte hi ek aadmi unhe meeting room ki taraf le jaata hain…
Meeting room ke andar jaise hi ghuste hai… saamne ek 50 years ka vyakti jiska naam anil hai woh baitha hota hai aur uske saath 26 saal ka ladka manish baitha hota hai…
Naresh manish aur anil se haath milta , but manish ke aankhein nisha ke husn ko naap rahi hoti hai
Manish (man mein): kya gazab ki secretary hai naresh ki, roz pelta hoga ise, uff kaash yeh mere ko mil jaaye, isko to 24 ghante apne cabin mein nanga rakhunga
Naresh manish ki nigahein samajh jaata hai par khuch nahi kehta…
Naresh: anil ji, hamari company mein abhi head of purchasing nisha ne join kiya hai… manish ne jo mujhe quotation bheji hai price model mein inhe doubt hai
Anil: koi baat nahi naresh ji, aapko pata hamara aapke business 8 saal se hai, yahan tak ki aajtak humne hi aapko brass supply kiya, 2021 mein mujhe covid ho gaya tha, to maine personally apne bete manish ko handle karne ko diya tha aapka account
Naresh: mujhe pata hai ji aapka swasthya kaisa hai ab
Anil: abhi 1 mahine se hi join kiya hai
Naresh: manish nisha has a few doubts i think we can begin the meeting
Manish thoda pareshan to hota hai ki achanak se yeh meeting kyun hui hai…
Nisha: manish ji… aap kabse naresh ji ko quote kar rahe hain personally
Manish nisha par pressure banane ki koshish karta hai
Manish: aapka matlab kya hai saaf saaf kahiye, baatein ghuma kar nahi, main 4 saal se company dekh raha hun, pichle saal se papa ki tabiyat kharab hone ke baad i am personally looking into the accounts of naresh ji company
Nisha: to phir aap explain kariye ki achanak se price kyun rise kar gaye
Manish: dekhiye aap jaise ladkiyan looks ke dum par naukri to haasil kar leti hain aapko knowledge to hoti hai nahi, aap hamare business relation kharab karne ke liye and boss ko impress karne liye bekar ki baatein le aati hain, naresh ji inhe yeh bhi nahi pata hai last year brass ke rates 15-20% badh chuke hain
Naresh khuch bolne wala hota hai… itne mein nisha bolti hai…
Nisha: manish ji aap mere upar personal attack kar rahe hain, chaliye main aapse baat nahi karna chahungi aapke father se khuch sawal puchne hain
Anil: manish thoda aaram se baat karo, nisha ji aapko jo puchna hai mere se puchiye…
Nisha 3 papers deti hain anil ko aur bolna shuru karti hai
Nisha: anil ji you have an agreement with naresh ji that you will do business at 1-1.5% margin with naresh ji
Anil: yes
Nisha:phir aapne pichle ek saal mein clearance charges per shipment 1-1.5 lakh par shipment kyun badha rakhe hain, hamari total shipment hain 38, to around 50 lakh ka humein aapne extra price bataya
Anil ke hosh udne lagte hain
Nisha: uske upar se bank ke dollar prices ki jagah aapne custom’s ka dollar price lagaya hai jo hamesha 1.5-2% upar hota hai….
To total transaction value hai 20 million dollar, to 1.5-2 crore ka nuksaan minimum aapne diya hamari company ko… kul milakar you have cheated us by 2.5 crore approx, jabki aapka fixed margin hona chahiye tha 1.5 crore aapne charge kiye humein total 4 crore…
Anil and manish ke paseene chutne lagte hain… anil ko samajh mein nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai and manish ki chori pakdi gayi thi….
Manish: dad yeh jhoot bol rahi hai papers wagerah jhoot hai, naresh ji aap is do kaudi ladki pe mat vishwas kariye
Naresh ke ab gusse ki intehaan ho gayi thi
Naresh: munh band rakh apna manish, nisha meri biwi hai, jo bol rahi hai uska seedha seedha jawab do bas
Naresh khada hokar nisha ke pass chala jaata hai aur uska haath thaam leta hai
Yeh sunkar manish and anil dang reh gaye… nisha proud feel kar rahi thi naresh ne immediately manish ki bolti band kar di
Naresh: manish meri factory mein total 300 aadmi kaam karte hain, covid ke time par dhanda nahi tha, chahta to main factory band bhi kar sakta tha but maine 300 jaano ko poori salary di
Naresh: jab tumne account takeover kiya tha maine tumhe bola tha market position tight hai… rates kam lagana tumne mujhe vishwas dilaya tha margin sirf 1% hai yahan to tum 4% par kaam karne lage woh bhi illegal way se
Manish: main…
Anil (manish ko): chup ho jaa gadhe… ab kya safayi de raha hai saari documented evidence hai inke pass
Manish chup ho jaata hai
Anil: naresh ji galti humse hui hai bataye hum kya karen
Naresh: aapne mere se 2.5 crore jo cheat kiye hain woh + jabse manish kaam par aaya hai woh comission mujhe wapas chahiye
Anil: ji zaroor ho jayega, aur aage se aapka account main handle karunga aur manish will take a break from company for 2 years until he learns business ethics
Manish: but dad yeh to ek hi client hai iske liye aap mujhe
Anil: tumhe sahi galat ki pehchan batane ke liye, jisese tum baat kar rahe ho woh homecorp developers main bhi shareholder hai and textile ka bhi business hai
Nisha aur manish sun kar bhaunchake ho jaate hain, nisha manish ko ek bada businessman samajh rahi thi aaj ke documents dekhkar par woh to business tycoon nikle
Anil: naresh ji, i am very sorry
Naresh: koi baat nahi anil ji mujhe aapka decision bilkul just laga, hum aapki company se business jab tak continue rakhenge jab tak aap har quotation par sign karenge, chalo nisha ab hum chalte hain…
Dono aaj ki meeting ke baad bahut excited hote hain… especially nisha… kyunki use laga usne life mein koi badi cheez haasil ki hai… aur uski itne saalon ki padhai bekar nahi gayi… uske self confidence ko bahut bada boost milta hai..
Jaise hi lift neeche jaane lagti hai naresh excited hokar nisha ko baahon mein bhar ke uske gore gaalon par apne kaale honth laga deta hai….
Naresh: nisha you were superb
Nisha sharma jaati hai apni taarif sunkar, aur phir naresh ke kaale gaal par apne gulabi honth laga deti hai
Nisha: aur aap bhi
Naresh: but maine kya kiya
Nisha: covid ke time par aapne 300 logon ko free mein salary di aur aapka decision business continue ka bilkul sahi tha kyunki anil ji ki isme koi galti nahi thi
Naresh: achcha baba means achche kaam karunga to mujhe abse pappi milti rahegi na
Nisha sharmakar chup rehti hai. Par excited rehti hai
Naresh: to maine do achche kaam kiye na aaj, to dusri pappi bhi do dusre gaal par
Nisha: par…. Ufff
Nisha apne ko rok nahi pati aur dusre gaal par bhi kiss kar deti hai… dono kaale gaalon par halki halki pink lipstick lagi hui hotj hai
Nisha: lipstick to poch lijeye
Naresh: kyun poochun yeh to meri biwi ki di hui kiss hai, achcha ab jaakar taiyaar bhi hona hai sharma ke yahan par wedding aniversary hai
Nisha: jiiii…
Itne dono car mein baith kar flat ki taraf nikal jaate hain….
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