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episode 9
flashback ..

un dino mai bhut udas rehta tha aek taraf ziyan ka sadma tha any di akela chhod kar chali gayi thi US din bhi mai office har din ki tarah suicidal thoughts sonchte hue office araha tha..
raste se hatoooooo... Aaaa..
lift ki taraf jate hue wo mujhse akar takrai ..hatho me files liye kandhe par bag latkaye muJhse takrate hi uski files hatho se chhut kar gir gayi.
ladki : tum dekh kar nhi chal sakte.. Pehle se hi late hon tumhari wajah se aur ho rahi hon.
Mai : excuse me.. Tum mujhse akar takrai ho..
kehte hue mai uski file uthane me help karne laga jisme uska bio data tha..
ladki : ohh Hello tum dekh kar nhi chal sakte..
Mai : saraswati dixit...
saraswati : tum me zara bhi manners nhi hai lao do mujhe.
jaise hi mai uska resume kholkar padne lagta wo mujhse chhin leti hai.

Mai : to tum accountant super visior ki job Ke liye interview dene aayi ho.

saraswati : kya tum bhi isi job ka interview dene aaye ho.

maine sar hilaya .

saraswati : tumhare documents kaha hain..

Maine Receptionist ki taraf dekha.

Saraswati : uske pass jama hain.
Maine Ankhe uchka kar use dekhte hue fir sar hilaya..

Saraswati : oye bachu agar apni bhalai chahte ho to apne documents lo aur chalte bano mere bhai bhut bade gunde hai unse kahungi to wo tumhare hath pair tod denge.. Ye job sirf meri hai samjhe..

Maine Fir Sar Hila diya..

saraswati : aese paglo ki tarah kya kar rahe ho receptionist se documents lo aur ghar jao apne warna pata hai mai kya karungi..

mai chalte hue receptionist Ke pass aya.

mai : rita is ladki ka interview Mai lunga jiske sath Abhi mai tha.



rita se kehkar mai apne cabin me akar baith gaya..

kuch der baad knock hua Maine remote se Gate open kiya..

good morning Sir.

Mai : baith jao saraswati.

saraswati : sir ye meri file.. Maine 2 sal accountant ka course kiya aek minute aapko mera nam kaise pata Sir..

maine chair uski taraf ghuma di..

saraswati : aap Sir... Gayi bhains pani ME..
aur wo apne mathe par hath rakh ke innocent face banakar mujhe dekhne lagi.


mai: apne bhaio ko nahi layi mere hath pair tudwane ke liye..

saraswati : aaah haannn Sir mera koi Bhai nhi bas aapko darane ke liye keh di...gala faad kar hichkiyan lete hue wo rone lagi..

mai : are rone kyo lagi mai konsa tumhe kha jaunga..

seat se uthkar Mai uske pass jate hue bola..

saraswati : I'm really really sorry Sir sab anjane me kahi.. Sir mujhe ye job har haal me chahiye.. Pichle 6 mahino se mai bas interview hi deti arahi hon.. Kehte hue wo baithe hue Hi mere pet se apna sar sata deti hai aur hath se meri peeth me ghera daal leti hai..aur mooh chupakar rone lagti hai..

shhssss shhssss rote hue nak nikalne par wo mere coat se hi poch leti hai.

Mai : saraswati Rona Band karo job tumhe mil gayi hai..

saraswati : sach me sir..
kehte hue wo khadi hui .

Mai : han...

saraswati : thank you thank you so much sir.
kehte hue saraswati mere gale lag jati hai...

Mai :tumne apni behti naak mere coat se poch li...
saraswati : sorry sorry Sir abhi saaf karti hon..


is Tarah Ham dono ki friendship hui. Har roz wo mere cabin me ati mujhse baten karti kabhi kabhi apna tiffin bhi mere sath share karti..
Maine use uski innocence ko dekhkar use Job di thi fir wo karib aane lagi is Tarah Ham dono me friendship hui.. Dhire dhire wo mere karib aane lagi aur mai pagal use pyar samajh baitha fir aek din Maine use propose kiya..

aur usne ye kehkar thukra diya Main sanwla hon..

apni kabiliat ke dam par aaj wo h. R. Ban gayi hai..


akanksha : Bhai aapne bataya nhi aap kon hai.

Mai : bataya tha... Mere bare me jankar wo dar gayi thi rote hue usne mere samne hath jod liye...


mai : sirf sanwale hone ki wjah se.

saraswati : ha sam sirf yahi wajah hai..

Mai : duniya bhar me is jaise hazaro offices hai mere saraswati... India ki Sari banks meri mutthi me hai agar mai aek din ke liye server down kar dun To economy zero ho jayegi log bhukmari se marne lagege...ye sab tumhe isliye bata raha hon mai tumhe chahane laga hon..mai agar kuch karta hon to duniyabhar ki sarkar mera kuch nahi bigad sakti jo mai kahunga tum wo karogi..


jab aek chhote bache ko koi khilauna pasand ajata hai To wo har harwa azmata hai use pane Ke liye.. Us waqt mai bhi yahi kar raha tha. Mujhme ghamand nhi apni daulat apni power ko lekar lekin us waqt pata nhi mujhme kaise agaya.. Agle hi pal mujhe apne lafzo par afsos hone laga..


saraswati rote hue mere samne hath jodkar khadi thi..

saraswati : mai sab janti hon sam tum kon ho lekin mai tumhare liye kuch feel nahi karti... Tum taqat ke dam par mujhe paa skate ho lekin mai tumse apni izzat ki bhik mang rahi hon.. Mai yahan bas Job karne aayi thi aur wahi karna chahti hon lekin tum kahoge To mai chali jaungi..

use rota bilakhta dekh mujhe ahsas hua mai kya karne jaa raha tha.

Mai : saraswati pata nhi kaise Maine ye sab keh diya.. I'm ashamed on myself.. Tum Job karo aaj ke baad Ham kabhi nhi milenge..

mai : bas yahi kahani hai..

akanksha : mere pyare se Bhai ko reject karke wo chudail bhut pachtayegi.


mai: usse bas dillagi hui thi ab use bhul chuka hon so leave her.

akanksha : bhai aap sach me bhut beautiful ho..

mai : kam se kam tum To dilase na do.. Kehte hue mai muskura diya..fir pocket se phone nikalkar kisi ko call karne laga..

Mai : archana kal tak mujhe hundred foreign female fighter bodyguards Chahiye..

archana: hojayega sam lekin kis liye.

Mai : Mom Ke liye.. Un bodyguards ki incharge tum hogi. Mom kya karti hain kisse milti hain sari khabar chahiye mujhe..

archana : Ho jayega.. Yahan sab kon dekhega.

mai : wahan ki jimmedari ab rehan sambhalega mana kare To kehna Maine kaha hai.

kehkar Mai call cut kar deta hon fir dad ko call lagata hon.

Shetty : yeah Sam what happened.
Mai :kuch female bodyguards kal ayengi mom ke liye aap unse baat kar lena.

shetty : acha kiya ye karke ..kal kuch hua tha partie me..

mai : nahi dad bas mom Ki security ke liye ye sab kar raha hon.

kehkar mai call cut kar deta hon.




akanksha : aap udas hai apne color ko lekar.
mai : kya farq padta hai..Mai bahot kosish karta hon apne is roop ke sath jine ki lekin Logo ki baten mujhe andar hi andar khokla kar deti hain.

akanksha : mai bhut se beauty products ke bare me janti hon jinhe apply karne se aapki dwacha Meri trah Ho jayegi.

Mai buri trah se embarrass ho gaya tha.

Mai : pagal hai kuch bhi bolti apna dimag chalana Band kar mai kuch aaply nhi karne wala..chal hat yahan se mujhe files check karni hai.

akanksha : Bhai medical world NE bhut tarakki kar li unke pass iska ilaj hai.for example Michael Jackson.

kehkar wo tiktiki lagaye mujhe Dekhne lagi...andar se mai chahta tha aesa kuch Ho jaye lekin aki Ke samne kuch jahir nhi kiya.

mai : aki tum mujhe kam karne dogi ya nhi..

akanksha : Bhai yahan Ke sabse bare hospital me mere sath chale..

mai : akanksha tum samajhti kyo nhi agar plastic surgery karani hoti To mai kabka kra leta..

akanksha : aesa kuch nhi hoga Bhai aap mere sath chale bas. Uthkar wo mere pass aati hai aur mera hath pakd kar le Jane lagti hai.

Mai : chhod aki mai khush hon aese.

akanksha : mujhe kosish karne dijiye plz.. Agar apne roka To kabhi bat nhi karungi..




car se Ham Mumbai ke sabse bade hospital me aaye.
mujhe bithakr akanksha khud Dr. Se bat karne chali gayi...



kuch der baad akanksha aayi .

akanksha : Dr ne bulaya hai apki skin check karna chahti hai..











dhaye dhaye dhaye....

hatho me pistol liye Anaya samne lage board ko shoot kar rahi thi.

aarohi : wow any brilliant nishana hai tumhara bilkul sateek lage hain sare short.

rahul : aakhir girlfriend bhi to hai aek sharpshooter ki.

sandhya : any Rahul bata raha tha tum Ninja ho to ho jaye aek chota sa test.
kehte hue sandhya aek sword uthakar any ki taraf fekti hai jise kick se any wapas table par rakh deti hai.

anaya : nhi Sandy mood nhi hai.

aarohi : plz any aek bar ho jye.

rahul : janu Man jao na..

anaya : okay fine.

sandhya fir sword utha ke any ki taraf fekti hai. Jise any catch karke open karke nikal leti hai.

fir sandhya bees kadmo ki duri par jakar apni pistol ka rukh anaya ki taraf kar deti hai.

aarohi : guys mere teen ginte hi.. One. Two three let's start...

dhaye dhaye dhaye... Khannn khannn khann..

sandhya Teen fire karti hai furti se hath chalate hue any teeno bullets ko kaat deti hai..



Rahul aur aarohi milkar clapping karne lagte hain.

aarohi : great.. You are just awesome any.

rahul : Wow any .

sandhya : apni aankho se na dekhti to kabhi yaqin na karti.

anaya : tumhare hath kanp rahe they..

sandhya : tum thi na samne isliye..











check up karakar mai kafi der se bahar baitha tha akanksha fir Dr. Se bat Kar rahi thi..

Kuch der baad wo aayi hatho me dawaio Ke bhare bag lekar.


akanksha : chale Bhai kal fir ana hai.
mai : IN bag's me kya hai.

akanksha : aapke do hafto ka course iske Bad ap bilkul meri trah gore chitte ho jaoge.

Mai : medicine kis liye.

akanksha : apke blood me badlav ke liye..abhi usi salon me chale Jahan max bhai mujhe le gaye they..











raat me shivani khud drive karte hue bodyguard se bachkar kahin jaa rahi thi...karib half hour baad janglo ke bich sunsan ilaqe me car rokti hai.. Kuch der car me baithe rehne ke baad shivani ko apni hi car ke Piche kisi aur car Ka horn sunai deta hai... Shivani back camera me dekhti car se utarne wala Jimmy tha. Ye dekhkar shivani car unlock krke khud bhi car se utar jati hai.

fir Jimmy ko lekar junglo ke andar Jane lagti hai 10 minutes chalne ke baad shivani ko aek jhopri dikhai deti hai jisme se Lenten ki madhyam roahni nikal rahi thi.


jhopdi ke door ke pass aate hi darwaza apne aap khul jata hai.

shivani : Jimmy mera yahi wait karo mai kuch der me aati hon.

kehte hue shivani jaise hi jhopdi me enter hoti jhopdi ka darwaza apne aap Band ho jata hai..


ajao shivani.. Jidhar se awaz aati hai shivani usi disha me chal deti hai.

samne hi aek aurat baithi hoti hai jo dikhne me karib 30 saal ki lag rahi thi uske darawne chaere ko agar koi din me bhi dekh leta to Dar jata lekin shivani be khauf khadi thi.

shivani : mai apni beti any ke bare me janne aayi hon kya kehti hai tumhari graho ki disha.. Aane wala samay uska kaisa hoga.. Btao mujhe kali witch.

shivani ki baat sunkar kali witch apni aankhe band karke sar ko hilane lagti hai .

kali witch : baaz rasta rokega use pyar se kabu kiya jaa sakta hai ya fir use raste se hata do.

shivani : jab bhi aati hon tum paheliyan bujhati ho saaf saaf kyo nhi batati..

kali witch : Mai saaf nhi dekh sakti.

shivani : meri choti beti kahan hai anvi hai uska naam kya mai kabhi usse mil paungi..

shivani ki baat sunkar kali witch fir aankhe Band kar leti hai.

kali witch aankhe kholte hue: jald tumse akar milegi aur fir baaz ko raste par le aayegi.
shivani : kaha hai wo is samay.

kali witch : mai nahi janti.

shivani : shetty meri koi baat nhi sunta mujhe aaj bhi slave ki trah treat karta hai mai use apna gulam Banana chahti hon.

kali witch : use apna kam ras pilao waki ka kam mai kar dungi tumhareat kam ras pilate hi mujhe pta chal jayega fir mai apna kam shuru kar dungi..

shivani : us din ke baad usne mujhe pyar karna band kar diya wo mujhe touch bhi nhi karta.

kali witch : ye tum jano... Jab tak Mai jaap pura nhi kar leti tab tak wait karo.

shivani : fir aaungi ...mujhe meri beti ko har hal me supreme leader Banana hai tumne har hal me meri help karni hogi kali witch ..kehti hui shivani jhopdi se bahar ko chal deti hai..

chalte hue Shivani Kali witch ki baton ke bare me sonch rahi thi jo uski samajh me kuch aayi kuch Nahi..

darwaze ke bahar hi Jimmy khada hota hai..

Jimmy : chale mam..

shivani : ha chalo...

Kuch dur ane par shivani ki heel me aek kata fas jata hai..aur pair teda karne ki wjah se heel ka stand tut jata hai.
shivani : ouch.. Aahh..
Jimmy : mam aap thik hai

Jimmy ka hath pakad kar shivani khadi hoti hai.

pair utha ke dekhti hai To heel ki stand tut chuki hoti hai.

shivani : Jimmy ab mai chal nhi paungi.. Mai tumhari peeth par.

Jimmy : yeah mam koi bat nhi aaiye.
kehte hue Jimmy baith jata hai.. Shivani uski peeth par baith jati hai. Aur apne pairo se Jimmy ki kamar me ghera bana leti hai.


shivani ne skirt pehni hoti hai jo uske pairo ki knee tak hi hoti hai Jimmy ki peeth par aane ki wajah se jo thigs par ajati hai Jimmy ki peeth me shivani ke 36 c ke boob dab rahe they aur Jimmy Ke hatho me shivani ki dono thigs hoti hai jinki narmahat Jimmy Ke tan badan me aag laga rahi thi peeth me boobs ka ahsas Pate hi Jimmy ka hathiyar rod ki tarah sakht ho jata hai.

Jimmy man me : aaaaaahhh ufffff shivani mam apke jism ki garmi mujhe pagal kar rahi hai.. Aapko apne niche lane ke liye mai kuch bhi karunga..

shivani is sab ko normally le rahi thi wo nhi janti thi Jimmy uske liye pagal ho chuka hai..



























12 din baad........




Mai mirror ke samne khada tha aek box se Maine lense nikale aur apni aankho par laga liye... Aur fir khudko Dekhne laga..

in 12 dino me akanksha 24hour me mujhe five times medicine khilati 11 baje mujhe salon le jati jahan teen ghante tak doctors ki di hui creams salon walo se meri body par lagwati kabhi kabhi khud bhi unka sath deti ..afternoon me fruits Ke juice se bhare bath tub me mujhe Lita kar nehlati..
fir evening me hospital le jati jahan Germany se aaye kai injection mujhe Dr. Se lagwati...is bich aek baar bhi mai office nhi gaya tha..




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ab Mai wo nahi raha tha jo do hafto pehle tak tha.. Mere sharir ki dwacha bilkul safed Ho gayi thi Mom Ki tarah..akanksha Ke Kehne par hi Maine lenses lagane shuru kar diye usne hair color Ke liye kaha To any ke golden brown hair dekh kar Maine bhi wahi color apne liye chose kiya..
Dr. Ne ye bhi kaha tha har 6 mahine Bad mujhe do hafto ke liye ye treatment lena hai do salo tak.
archana ghar agayi thi mom ki bodyguard ban kar mere kehne par hi Maine use khud se dur rehne ke liye kaha.

tayar hokar mai niche aya jahan Mom any dad akanksha bhabi breakfast table par hi baithi thi.
mujhe dekhte hi sab mujhe hairat se dekhne lage.

dad: tum bilkul apne Bhai ziyan ki trah lag rahe ho..

anaya : aanta thop kar aya mooh par kya.
akanksha : nhi di it's natural.
anaya : huh do din baad fir apni auqat me ajayega..

shirya : handsome lag rahe ho devar ji..

akanksha : aakhir Bhai kiske hain.

mom ko chhodkar har kisi ne kuch na kuch kaha.. Mai kisi ka jwab diye bina apni chair par akar baith gaya.


Shetty : aaj office jaoge..
Mai: ji dad.

Shetty : competition shuru hone me 20 din bache hain. Ab office mat jao aaj Raat se tumhari any aur shirya ki training shuru kar raha hon mai.

Mai: bas dekhne jaa raha hon sab thik hai jald ajaunga.

Shetty: Thik hai.


Breakfast Karke mai akanksha ko lekar office Ke liye nikal gaya...


Apne Cabin me akar Mai files Dekhne laga akanksha window ke pass baithe highway par aati jati gadiyan dekh rahi thi.


Mai : yahan par baithkar mai suicide karne ke bare me sonchta tha tumse milne se pehle.

Akanksha : ab Karna Ho to mujhe sath me lekar karna.

Mai : tum mil gayi ho To iski zarurat nahi hai ab jina chanta hon tumhare sath ..acha batao kyo udas ho.

akanksha : aapko kaise pata mai udas hon.
mai : meri favorite jagah par baithi ho isliye.

akanksha : aapko batayi thi na kisi ko pasand karti hon..
Mai : to kya hua.

akanksha : Maine use dekha nahi fir kabhi..

Mai : ruko abhi uski details nikalta hon.
akanksha : sach Bhai.. You are so sweet.

Maine max ko apne cabin me bulaya .

kuch der baad wo aaya..

max : Sir aek bhut hi achi khabar hai aapke liye..

Mai : kya..

max : sir smart lag rahe hain.

Mai : kya khabar hai batao..

max : aese nhi.. Mujhe treat chahiye.

Mai : Abe bolega bhi..

max : sir anvi mam ka pta chal gaya hai..

achanak se mere hath se files chhut kar gir gayin aur beyakini se mai Max ko Dekhne laga.

max : Sir hamare aek spy ne bataya hai she's in japan..

max ki baat sunkar khusi se meri ankhe nam ho gayi..

Mai chair se uthkar Max ke pass aya.

max : Sir Kissie mat karna..

ummmmhhhh ..

aur Maine max ko pakadkar chum liya.

chatakk ...
Mai : ye der se batane ke liye ..

max: kya Sir pehle pyar karte hain fir marte hain. Mujhe bhi Just abhi pta chala batane hi aaraha tha usse pehle apne bula liya.

Mai : tayari karo ham abhi nikal rahe hain japan ke liye.

akanksha : Bhai kon hai ye anvi.

mai:hamari badi didi..

office se Ham teeno airport aaye aur fir Plane me baithkar chal diye japan ke liye...



aek room me shivani aur anaya baithi hoti hain.

shivani : tum use aaj bhi apna Bhai manti ho any mujhe sandhya ne bataya tha tumhare hath kanpte hai sam ko shoot karte hue..

anaya : nahi Mom aesa kuch nahi hai.

shivani: tum bhul gayi ho any tumhari mom ke sath usne kya kiya.kehte hue shivani rone lagti hai aur fir apne rumal se ansu pochte hue black sun glasses apni aankho par laga leti hai..

shivani : shayad maine tum par bharosa karke galat kiya beti agar yahi meri destiny hai to fir yahi sahi...Mai Us dard ke sath un yadon ke sath aur zinda nahi reh sakti.. Ziyan bhi mujhe chhodkar chala gaya...i love you any i always love you sweetheart.
kehte hue shivani apne purse se gun nikal kar apne sar par shoot karne ke andaz me laga leti hai jise anaya dekh leti hai.

anaya chalte hue shivani ke pass aati hai aur ghutno me baithkar apna sar shivani ki thigs par rakhte hue gun chhin leti hai.

anaya : Mom pagal ho gayi hain aap apke bina mera kya hoga soncha hai apne.

shivani : aur fir mai kya karun US dard ke sath mai aur nahi ji sakti.

anaya : Mom wada karti hon apke har ansu ka apki dard Me nikli har aaaahh ka badla sam se lungi use tadpa tadpa ke marungi jitna dard usne aapko diya hai Mai usse kahin jyda dard use dungi.

shivani : kaise.. Aur kab tumhare dono cousin's bhi ab tak kuch nahi kar paye.

anaya : Mom information is everything mai aapki tarah nahi Dad ki tarah sonchti hon.. Use maar diya To soncha hai aage kya hoga use Marne se pehle mai uski Sari information nikalna chahti hon taki bad me hame koi problam na Ho.. Use aese hi mar diya To Dad aek hi din me pata laga lenge....sare consiquenceses ko mind me rakh kar hi use marungi.

shivani : competition shuru Karne se pehle hi use maar do.

anaya : okay mom.. Aap uske sath ache se rahe dad ko sabse pehle aap par hi shaq hoga..










raat ke 8 baje Hamara plane japan Land hua.. Itne salo baad di se milunga sonchkar hi ankho ME aansu aane lage...
Baki to smj aaya lekin ye SHIVANI jb Witch ke pass gy to us Witch ne kisi Baaz ke lye kha or jb Shivani ne Anaya se bat kr rhe thi to kisi ko Marne ke lye bol rhe thi ho.na ho wo jroor Apne HERO ki bat kr rhe hai esa ky hogya jo SHIVANI apne bete ke against hogy hai jbki uska ek he beta hai wo bi eklauta use Q marvana chahti hai ky RAAZ hai esa
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Update kafi suspense full hai abi bi
Keep it up
Very well update
 

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Baki to smj aaya lekin ye SHIVANI jb Witch ke pass gy to us Witch ne kisi Baaz ke lye kha or jb Shivani ne Anaya se bat kr rhe thi to kisi ko Marne ke lye bol rhe thi ho.na ho wo jroor Apne HERO ki bat kr rhe hai esa ky hogya jo SHIVANI apne bete ke against hogy hai jbki uska ek he beta hai wo bi eklauta use Q marvana chahti hai ky RAAZ hai esa
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Update kafi suspense full hai abi bi
Keep it up
Very well update
उसी इकलौते बेटे के कारण मां की अय्याशियां बाप को पता चल गई, और बाप अब मां को हाथ भी नहीं लगता। इसीलिए शिवानी अपने ही इकलौते बचे बेटे को भी मरवाना चाहती है, और बेटी को किसी के नीचे लेटना।
 

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उसी इकलौते बेटे के कारण मां की अय्याशियां बाप को पता चल गई, और बाप अब मां को हाथ भी नहीं लगता। इसीलिए शिवानी अपने ही इकलौते बचे बेटे को भी मरवाना चाहती है, और बेटी को किसी के नीचे लेटना।
Yhe to sbse jada herani wali bat hai Maa hoke apne eklaute bete ko mrvana or beti ko kisi or ke niche sone ki tyarri ajeeb hai hoskta hai humlog glt soch rhe ho Q ki apni baatoo ke bich in Maa or beti ne Marne Wale ka name ni lia hai baki to suspense open ho to pta chle main reason
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Ye bat mere bolna ka ek reason or bi hai Introduction me SHIVANI ke bare me Jo btaya gya usme esa kuch ni. Btaya hai
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Or jha tk meri thinking hai ek Maa kbi apne bachhoo ka bura ni chahti hai chahe bachha kitna bi glti kre.
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Or Hero ko dout hua to usne tbi apne personal bodyguard ko Shivani ke piche lgaya hai taki hr trh ki information mile
Waise maanaa padega apne Hero ko ye Maa or Beti kitne bi teez Q na ho Hero unse 1 ni blki 100 kadam aage ki chaall chlta hai pta to chl jayga Hero ko sb bat ka bas ab dekhna ye hai ki apni Maa ke sath ky krta hai kaise use use shi raste pe Lata hai ya other koi Dushman ho to use kaise deal krega
 

Riky007

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Yhe to sbse jada herani wali bat hai Maa hoke apne eklaute bete ko mrvana or beti ko kisi or ke niche sone ki tyarri ajeeb hai hoskta hai humlog glt soch rhe ho Q ki apni baatoo ke bich in Maa or beti ne Marne Wale ka name ni lia hai baki to suspense open ho to pta chle main reason
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Ye bat mere bolna ka ek reason or bi hai Introduction me SHIVANI ke bare me Jo btaya gya usme esa kuch ni. Btaya hai
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Or jha tk meri thinking hai ek Maa kbi apne bachhoo ka bura ni chahti hai chahe bachha kitna bi glti kre.
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Or Hero ko dout hua to usne tbi apne personal bodyguard ko Shivani ke piche lgaya hai taki hr trh ki information mile
Waise maanaa padega apne Hero ko ye Maa or Beti kitne bi teez Q na ho Hero unse 1 ni blki 100 kadam aage ki chaall chlta hai pta to chl jayga Hero ko sb bat ka bas ab dekhna ye hai ki apni Maa ke sath ky krta hai kaise use use shi raste pe Lata hai ya other koi Dushman ho to use kaise deal krega
श्रिया को तो साफ साफ बताया है न की अन्या किसको मारने आई है।

आश्चर्य की बात ये है की श्रिया को कोई फर्क नहीं पड़ा इस बात से। या तो वो इस परिवार के राज जानती है, या फिर सैम पर बहुत विश्वास है उसे।

और भाई इस कलयुग में किसी भी रिश्ते में कुछ भी हो सकता है। क्योंकि पैसा बोलता है, बस।
 

MAD DEVIL

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श्रिया को तो साफ साफ बताया है न की अन्या किसको मारने आई है।

आश्चर्य की बात ये है की श्रिया को कोई फर्क नहीं पड़ा इस बात से। या तो वो इस परिवार के राज जानती है, या फिर सैम पर बहुत विश्वास है उसे।

और भाई इस कलयुग में किसी भी रिश्ते में कुछ भी हो सकता है। क्योंकि पैसा बोलता है, बस।

Bhai bat to aapki bilkul shi hai or maine to jo update me read kia bs whe bola or rhe aage ki bat to ab to writer he bta skta hai ki kn shi or kn glt
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Agar story ki bat kre to hseee mjak action suspense apni jgh shi hai lekin Heroine agar Hero ki na hoke kisi or ke sath dikhe to story me wo mja ni aata ye sb jante hai
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Baki readers ki trh Mai bi un story ko ignore krta ho bhai
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Baki readers to bol dete hai ya gussa hote hai but mai kuch ni bolta bs kinaree htt jata ho
 
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Riky007

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Bhai bat to aapki bilkul shi hai or maine to jo update me read kia bs whe bola or rhe aage ki bat to ab to writer he bta skta hai ki kn shi or kn glt
.
Agar story ki bat kre to hseee mjak action suspense apni jgh shi hai lekin Heroine agar Hero ki na hoke kisi or ke sath dikhe to story me wo mja ni aata ye sb jante hai
.
Baki readers ki trh Mai bi un story ko ignore krta ho bhai
.
Baki readers to bol dete hai ya gussa hote hai but mai kuch ni bolta bs kinaree htt jata ho
फिर आपने Chutiyadr जी की कहानियां नही पढ़ी। जरूर पढ़िए, है कहानी में आपको ऐसा ही लगेगा कि हीरोइन तो हीरो से धोखा कर रही है मगर होता नही ऐसा।
 

MAD DEVIL

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फिर आपने Chutiyadr जी की कहानियां नही पढ़ी। जरूर पढ़िए, है कहानी में आपको ऐसा ही लगेगा कि हीरोइन तो हीरो से धोखा कर रही है मगर होता नही ऐसा।
Unki sb story PDI hai yr bs comment kisi me ni kia maine or story read bi ese time jb complete hogy thi unki story or comment na krne ka reason bta dia maine abi aapko
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Unki sb story PDI hai yr bs comment kisi me ni kia maine or story read bi ese time jb complete hogy thi unki story or comment na krne ka reason bta dia maine abi aapko
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No comments no likes
अपनी अपनी चॉइस, मगर कोई अच्छा लेखक अपने हीरो को cuchold नही बनता
 

thefoxy

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nice story....add GIF and continue with hard incest . Wish u the best
 

Creepy story

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Bhai story achhi jaa rhi h
Aap khud enjoy kro story likhna

Aur plot kaafi bda aur intresting h may be yaad ho jaye story padhte padhte
Ho jayega Mai story me hi intro de dujga
 
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