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Yad Ho jayenfGE bas episode padte raheKuch samjh nhi aaya itna lamba choda intro .
Mila hai .
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Par kon kya hai ye to khani me hi pta chale ga .
To story ke andar hi dekha jaega.
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Yad Ho jayenfGE bas episode padte raheKuch samjh nhi aaya itna lamba choda intro .
Mila hai .
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Par kon kya hai ye to khani me hi pta chale ga .
To story ke andar hi dekha jaega.
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Tum vro story chod gaye kya dikhai nhi diyeBhai update kab tak do ge new update ki wait ho rahi hai
Bhut se reh gaye hai episode ME again intro ayegaCherchters kuch jyda nhi ho gye..![]()
Kuch Baton ko chhodkar sehmat hon .Aapke baat ke ek ek sabd stayata se paripuran ha dir but...phali baat site koi world level pe popular nahi ha dusri baat maximum log yaha bina account ke story padhte h...3rd yaha koi story likhne ke pese wese nahi ha so writers apne man se hi likhte ha ki wo apne vichar kisi ko sunaye.....kahi koi ek banda to dekhhe.....to ha me ye kah sakti hu ki me story likhu or ek single banada bhi comment de to me motivate ho jati hu next ke liya.....
And mene khud ne khanai suri kari thi kal raat bina soche samjhe bas sab usme hoga unexpected or reality ke najdeek dekhte h kya hota ha....or aapse request rahagi please update dete rahe koi kaam ho to thode time se de but de...and ha update kab aane wala h iske bare me jarur itlaha kare
sam ne kya kia kyo jald hi pata chal jayegaBadhiya shaandar update
Sam n aisa kia ker dia tha Shivani k saath jo usse itna nafrat ker Rahi h or Sam h jo apni maa ko bodyguard provide kerwa raha h yeh bhi nahi pata ki wahi maa use marwana chahti h woh uski ki khud ki bahen se matlab ek teer se 2 shikar any Sam ko maar degi or fir Shivani Any ko kisi tarah fsawa degi or Shivani k maze ayyashi or doosro ka bister garam keregi
Baherhal ab dekhte h Sam ko apni bahen avni milti ha nahi Japan m
Badhiya shaandar update bhai
Bhut se reh gaye hai inme mostly important hai waki ka role chota HI haiBahot behtareen characters se introduce Karaya h
Sala itni badi family h ki poora ek gaon bas jaye
Same here vro.Good to see you back with a new story Creepy story bro. 1st episode padke Accha laga, story interesting lag raha hai. Keep writing.
Kya chod gayeTum vro story chod gaye kya dikhai nhi diye
Tnx vro jo wpas aye Story complete hogi suspense dhire dhire khulte jayenge aur writer ki tarah readers ko gussa nhi dilaunga.Ye ANAYA bdi ajeeb character hai iska kuch smj ni aarha hai jb tk iska ithaas ni pta chlega tb tk ye mystry rhegi
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Lekin maana padega Anaya ki smjdari ko apne bhi ko jhothe pyar ke jaal me fsaane ke lye apni friend ka Sahara le rhe jbki ache se janti hai uska bhai kaisa hai bevkoofi ki hd hoti hai yr
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Ghr me kisne hmla kraya aakhir or Q apni Maa ke office chla gya Hero
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Bhai plz jra pehle Hero ki MAA ka suspense thoda door kro ky Maa ko apne bete se pyar hai ya sirf dikhawa hai Q ki Hero ki Maa ka character smj ni aarha mujhe
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Update pehle ki trh Excellent hai
Bs ese mjedarr update dete rhna aap
And plz story continue rakhna bech me adhuri Mt chordena
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And last request jroori ni ki aap story ko longer kro jitna possible ho bs utna taki story bi complete hojay or readers bi khush or aapbi
Thx manTo entry hogy ghr me Akansha ki but dinner ke time Anaya ko ky hogya jo apni khane ki plate fekk kr chli gy apne room me
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Pehle ki trh abi bi Hero ki Maa ke character smj ni aarha hai ajeeb hai kuch Shivani
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Update pehle ki trh aaj bi Excellent rha
Keep it up bhai
Vro Maine shuru me HI kaha zarueat padi To adultery ayegi story ko aage badhne ke liye ye zaruri hai. AbHI aesa koi scane nhi aya haiKy ye wakay me Anaya ki sgii MAA hai jisne apni bhooo or beti ka suda krdia or Shirya ko koi dikkat ni hue
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Bhot jhol jhall hai bhai story me Ek Maa hai jo na Hero ki na Beti ki or bhoo ka pta ni or khud kisi or ki bhaoooo me jbki bolti hai sbse ki apne ptii se bhot pyar krti hai
Yr ye kaisa pyar hai
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And Creepy story bhai aapse ek jroori bat pochni hai ki aapne story ko INSECT me rakha hai to ye Adultery ko Q laay ho aap
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Baaz usne Hero ko kaha raste se hatane se matlab uska mar Dena haiBaki to smj aaya lekin ye SHIVANI jb Witch ke pass gy to us Witch ne kisi Baaz ke lye kha or jb Shivani ne Anaya se bat kr rhe thi to kisi ko Marne ke lye bol rhe thi ho.na ho wo jroor Apne HERO ki bat kr rhe hai esa ky hogya jo SHIVANI apne bete ke against hogy hai jbki uska ek he beta hai wo bi eklauta use Q marvana chahti hai ky RAAZ hai esa
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Update kafi suspense full hai abi bi
Keep it up
Very well update
Ameero me kuxh jyda hi bhukh hoti hai pise aur powr ki same hereYhe to sbse jada herani wali bat hai Maa hoke apne eklaute bete ko mrvana or beti ko kisi or ke niche sone ki tyarri ajeeb hai hoskta hai humlog glt soch rhe ho Q ki apni baatoo ke bich in Maa or beti ne Marne Wale ka name ni lia hai baki to suspense open ho to pta chle main reason
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Ye bat mere bolna ka ek reason or bi hai Introduction me SHIVANI ke bare me Jo btaya gya usme esa kuch ni. Btaya hai
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Or jha tk meri thinking hai ek Maa kbi apne bachhoo ka bura ni chahti hai chahe bachha kitna bi glti kre.
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Or Hero ko dout hua to usne tbi apne personal bodyguard ko Shivani ke piche lgaya hai taki hr trh ki information mile
Waise maanaa padega apne Hero ko ye Maa or Beti kitne bi teez Q na ho Hero unse 1 ni blki 100 kadam aage ki chaall chlta hai pta to chl jayga Hero ko sb bat ka bas ab dekhna ye hai ki apni Maa ke sath ky krta hai kaise use use shi raste pe Lata hai ya other koi Dushman ho to use kaise deal krega
Is episode me clear hoejayegaश्रिया को तो साफ साफ बताया है न की अन्या किसको मारने आई है।
आश्चर्य की बात ये है की श्रिया को कोई फर्क नहीं पड़ा इस बात से। या तो वो इस परिवार के राज जानती है, या फिर सैम पर बहुत विश्वास है उसे।
और भाई इस कलयुग में किसी भी रिश्ते में कुछ भी हो सकता है। क्योंकि पैसा बोलता है, बस।
Bhai bat to aapki bilkul shi hai or maine to jo update me read kia bs whe bola or rhe aage ki bat to ab to writer he bta skta hai ki kn shi or kn glt
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Agar story ki bat kre to hseee mjak action suspense apni jgh shi hai lekin Heroine agar Hero ki na hoke kisi or ke sath dikhe to story me wo mja ni aata ye sb jante hai
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Baki readers ki trh Mai bi un story ko ignore krta ho bhai
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Baki readers to bol dete hai ya gussa hote hai but mai kuch ni bolta bs kinaree htt jata ho
फिर आपने Chutiyadr जी की कहानियां नही पढ़ी। जरूर पढ़िए, है कहानी में आपको ऐसा ही लगेगा कि हीरोइन तो हीरो से धोखा कर रही है मगर होता नही ऐसा।
Meri pichli story padh lo vro usme heroine Ki shadi kisi aur se ho jati hai suhagrat Ki raat me hero ko milti hai wo.Unki sb story PDI hai yr bs comment kisi me ni kia maine or story read bi ese time jb complete hogy thi unki story or comment na krne ka reason bta dia maine abi aapko
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