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ye kahani aek sidhe sadhe ladke ki hai ...kaise vivah ke baad uski life me toofan ate hai kya wo unse lad payega or haar man ke ghutne tek dega..
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Thnx brosuperb update waise mujhe nai lagta hai ki ab salil ke pass koi option bacha hai I think use ya to ab ghutne tek dene chahiye ya khud ko in sab jhamelon se door kar lena chahiye baki writer sahaab ki marji aur kitna tadpate hain salil ko
Han vro ek baat kahunga ki jab salil ne ex cm ke bete ko aur ex cm tak ko peet diya tha ye baat Arjun sir ko nai pata chali ab tak ki jo itni had tak dileer hote hain unka majaak nai banate hain upar se ek ex cm ke aage bhi sp ki koi aukaat nai hoti hai.pagal se duniya hari hai bas pagalpan suru hone ka intzaar hai.
Keh sakte ho vro Maine gifted hero par jab story likhi to kisi ko pasand nhi ayi a introvertbaki ki dono story me bhi hero ka lagbhag wahi haal hai struggle hi ho raha wahan I think writer ka test hai struggle
Door ho jayega to sirf salil ki story koi padega nhiपर वो दोनो कुछ न कुछ ऐसा करते हैं जिससे अगले को अपनी गलती कुछ समय के लिए रोकनी पड़ती थी। जब तक फुल पावर नही आई।
इसमें पावर नही आयेगी, तो वो खुद ही थोड़ा दूर हो जाए इनकी जिंदगी से। सबको इससे प्यार है, दूरियां कुछ तो अहसास जगाएंगी की वो कहां गलत हैं इसके प्रति।
Vro meri story me go* power jisa kuch nhi hota.Nahi hoga door agar usko god power de diya Jaye tab bhi jaise uski ek story me hota hai ki uski bahen usko goli maar deti hai wo kisi tarah se alag logon ke bich jinda bachta hai wahan ek achchi ladki usko milti hai baad me power bhi milti hai ek Bawa bhi milte hain jo usko wapas aane se rokte hue bolte hai dard aur takleef milegi fir bhi wo wapas aata hai us dard ko jine ki liye brother yahan aur baki ki dono story me bhi lagbhag wahi sab same yahan point ye hai ki agar condition aapke control me nai aa Rahi to khud ko door kar lo unse lekin nai inko jina hai ishi dard ke sath fir hiro rich ho ya na ho super power hon na ho kya farak padta hai.filhaal ye ek nayi sonch hai mai respect karta hun aisi sonch ka kuch naya padhne ko mil raha hai hame ishiliye cool story hi to hai enjoy
ab kahi ja kr aarohi ke chudne ka raaz khulna shuru hua thik se.. lagey raho bhai...
Nice update bhai
Nice and superb update.....
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Creepy story bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
Vro aarohi ke bhai ne salil ke pair pakad kar maafi bhi mangi hai.Bhai Salil suru se hi pit raha h
Kabhi aarohi ka bhai kabhi anusuiya pit dete hai
Thnx man salil intekam ko lekar kya sochta hai iska khulasa upcoming episode me hogaBhai aapne salil ko baizzat karne ki koi kasar nahi chodi! Ek tohnsalil ek simple sa ladka hai but dimag nahi hai uske pass, khar story pah itna kahunga ki writer neh kuch soch kar salil ko baizaat kiya hai, salil ka intaqaam tagadaa hota chihiye
Thnx man.salil ko ho raha hai uska kuch bhi pata nahi chal raha. Hotel pa first day gaya to rohit ko dekh kar gussa ho gaya Gaya tha salil par uske baad arohi par ya Rohit par dhyan hi nahi diya or unko akele hi chhod diya... or vaise bhi arohi salil ko juth pe juth bolti rehti hai..
Salil ke mama ke sath arohi or unke bhai ki purani dushmani hai.. or dushmani ki wajah bhi shayad arohi hai.. arohi ke sath kuch to hua hai past me.
Salil ne apne ghar me to camera lagva diye par arohi to ab hotel me jyada rehti hai waha apne liye rakha hua hai.. and or agar usse kisi ke sath sex karna hi hoga ya kuch or karna hoga to woh hotel ke luxury room chhod kar ghar thodi aayegi?.
Salil ne Arjun ke ghar jakar pata to laga liya ki woh zinda hai or arjun ne bhi bahot kuch bata diya arohi or uske sambandh ke bare me or salil jalil hokar waha se nikal gaya hai..
Khair salil ab kya karega? Arohi par gussa hoga jhagda karega.. or khud suicide karne ki koshish karega..
Don't worry01.
Bhai aapne kahani ka name or tag jo bhi diye ho par apne poll me options diye hai or vaha sab ne vote diye hai.
Salil hum readers ke liye hero hai or uss nazar se hi kahani read karte hai sab hi readers.. Khair kahani kaise bhi chale par sirf salil ko thoda majbut or samajdar banao baki sab theek hai.
Aese jivan ke piche koi na koi wajh haiYou know, मैं कभी कॉम्पेल नही करता किसी को, स्टोरी आपकी, जैसा भी लिखो, बस दिल से लिखो।
वो सब बस एक रीडर की सोच होती है। रीडर की सोच से कहानी में चेंज मत करना कभी भी।
हां रीडर की एक चाहत होती है, कि आखिरी में सब कुछ सही हो, जिस कारण से भी हीरो इतनी जिल्लत भरी जिंदगी जी रहा है, उसका या तो कोई सॉलिड कारण हो, या कम से कम वो अपनी अहमियत का अहसास करवा सके सबको, और सुधार भी सके जहां तक संभव हो।
Ok vroExcellent Story. Please Continue
Option 3 is the best.
Jaise writer ne story ki kalpna ki hai waise hi chalna chahiye.
Beech raaste mein manjil nahi badalte
Thnx lagend vroNice Update
Bhai salil sub batyn jaldi he bhul jata ha jasy us ny Rohit ko deakh k gussa Kiya lakin Bd mein us ny koi reaction he ni diya
Ab Salil ny confirm kr liya k Aarohi ny jhut bola k Arjun k bary mein aur un k affair k bary mein bh. Ab deakhna ya ha k ab wo Kiya krta ha. Lakin Jahan Tak mujy lagta ha k Aarohi phr sy usy idr udr he batyn kr k phr sy tal Dy gi aur Salil bh man Jay ha ku k abi tak yahi ho raha ha.
Ab next update mein deakhty hain k Kiya hota ha lakin Salil broker to bany ga he story k title ko deakh k to asy lagta ha.
Aur last I think is story mein koi hero ni ha. Salil bh hero ni ha Bs wo apni story suna Raha ha to sub ko lagta ha k jo story sunata ha wohi hero hota ha story ka.