Sirf update dene ki bat ho to roj de du...lekim chahti hu ki quality me update du ...jisse reader ko bhi mja aaye...thoda bht late ho jata hai...
Agr chahti ye update prso hi kr deti lekin usme last wala sex scene nhi hota...
Or sch btau ye sex scene mujhe next update me dalna tha...lekin ye sex story hai isme update me rhoda bht sex n dikhaye to bor lgta hai...ap sbko achha lga islie hi.itna sochti hu wrna mai tho.normal bato ki 10,20line likhu or update kr du...roj kya har din me ese to 2 update kr skti hu mai...pr mn nhu mnata sochti hu kuch dikhe update me...islie itna time lgta hai...pr kuch log kisi ki mburi smjhte nhi hai bs bolne lgte hai...
xossip ka bahana bnate hai...xossip pr story complt hoti...ab wo band ho rha tha to kya sb kaam dham chhokr isi me lg jati mai...esa to ho n skta...
koi story bina btaye adhuri nhi chhodi aajtk...tujhme rab dikhta hai pr bhi "paused"likhwa diya tha taki reader presan n ho..ab bolo konsi adhuri kahani chhodi mene...site bnd hui thi meri glti mt nikalo usme...jo reader ye sochte hai ki writer bs purw din update dene k lie bethe rahte hai ya unhe bs ek bat kahna chahti hu...sellery dena shuru kr do 1 din me 10 update lo....