Birendra Sharma
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Intro ka intzar rhega
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Thanks BhaiRochak aur Romanchak. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Thanks BhaiCool Start bohut sunder huwa hay or Lady ke Entry bhi bohut sunsani khaz thee please keep going dusro kee turha kuch update day kay gayab naa hu jana kahani kuch achi lug rahi hay keep going and WELL COME TO START A NEW STORY
Good startUpdate 1
Mumbai ke ek hostel ke kisi room
Ladka 1: Ashu aaj hmare exam bhi khatam hogye aur ab tu ye bag kyo pack kr rha he
Ladka 2: Haa yrr aaj to hmm party bhi krne vale the naa
Ashu : tumhe to pata hi hna ki meri SK Grp of companies me placement hui he to unn logo ne muje jald jald join hone ke liye kha h to me aaj hi delhi ke liye nikal rha hu aur plzz yrr muje maaf krdna mne tumhara plan fail kr diya sorrry .aur aashu unke saamne kaan pakadke maafi mangta h
Ladka 1: Per yrr tu mere sath bhi yo kaam kr skta hnna fir kuu kisi aur ke pass kaam krna chata h
Ashu : Mohit tuje to pta hi hna me apne dum per kuch krna chata hu
Mohit : haa haa smj gya ki tu kisi ka eshaan nhi chata h but promise krr agar tuje life me kabhi bhi koi problem hogi to tu muje jrur khega
Ashu : Promise
Ladka 2 : Bss bhai tu hme bhul mt jaana
Ashu : Rohan tu kesi baat kr asa kabhi nhi hoga tum dono to mere dil ki jaan ho
fir teeno aaps me gle lg jaate he aur thodi ase hi khade rhte
teeno ki aankho me kuch aashu hote jo inke intne saal sath rhene ke baad aaj alag hone per nikle the
Ashu : chlo chlo rona bnd kro fir mess me chlte fir meri flight bhi h
Mohit : Saale khud rulata hai chl fir aaj cllg ka last lunch sath krte hai
3no dost lunch krte h issi me 1 ghanta nikal dete h
mohit : yrr ashu jldi krr teri flight kaa bhi time hogya h khi flight miss nhi ho jaaye
Ashu : bss mohi hogya aa rha hu
teeno jldi se airport ki trf nikal pdte h
teeno sad hote h kyoki aaj 8saal baad jb se ye mile the ab alag hone jaa rhe the
Ashu : chlo me chlta hu apna dhyaan rkhna aur tension mt lo hm hrr month mila krenge kabhi tum vha to kabhi me yha
Rohan & Mohit : beta tu ek baar mt milna fir hmm tuje btayenge
teeno hass pdte h
aur Ashu airport ke andar jaane lgta h aaj 3no ko vo peechle 8 saal me bitaye lmhe yaad aane lgte vo mastiya , logo preshan krna prr unhe bhi pta tha ek din to inn sabb yaado ko peeche chodkar aage bhdna hi tha
Mohit aur Rohan bhi Ashu ko see off krne ke baad hostel ke liye nikal pdte kyoki unhe bhi ab ghar jaana tha kyoki yha rukar ab koi fayda nhi tha
Ashu jb flight me apni seat per baitha tha uska pass ek 30 35 saal ki ek aurat aakr baith jaati h
Aurat :kya tum tyar ho ashu aage ke liye soch lo abhi bhi time h
Ashu : no mam that final me sb kuch plan kr rkha h aapko to pta hi h
aur thodi der me flight take off kr jaati h ................
Congratulations for new story!!!!Dosto Aaj Holi ke din ek nayi story start krne jaa rha hu
Nice startUpdate 1
Mumbai ke ek hostel ke kisi room
Ladka 1: Ashu aaj hmare exam bhi khatam hogye aur ab tu ye bag kyo pack kr rha he
Ladka 2: Haa yrr aaj to hmm party bhi krne vale the naa
Ashu : tumhe to pata hi hna ki meri SK Grp of companies me placement hui he to unn logo ne muje jald jald join hone ke liye kha h to me aaj hi delhi ke liye nikal rha hu aur plzz yrr muje maaf krdna mne tumhara plan fail kr diya sorrry .aur aashu unke saamne kaan pakadke maafi mangta h
Ladka 1: Per yrr tu mere sath bhi yo kaam kr skta hnna fir kuu kisi aur ke pass kaam krna chata h
Ashu : Mohit tuje to pta hi hna me apne dum per kuch krna chata hu
Mohit : haa haa smj gya ki tu kisi ka eshaan nhi chata h but promise krr agar tuje life me kabhi bhi koi problem hogi to tu muje jrur khega
Ashu : Promise
Ladka 2 : Bss bhai tu hme bhul mt jaana
Ashu : Rohan tu kesi baat kr asa kabhi nhi hoga tum dono to mere dil ki jaan ho
fir teeno aaps me gle lg jaate he aur thodi ase hi khade rhte
teeno ki aankho me kuch aashu hote jo inke intne saal sath rhene ke baad aaj alag hone per nikle the
Ashu : chlo chlo rona bnd kro fir mess me chlte fir meri flight bhi h
Mohit : Saale khud rulata hai chl fir aaj cllg ka last lunch sath krte hai
3no dost lunch krte h issi me 1 ghanta nikal dete h
mohit : yrr ashu jldi krr teri flight kaa bhi time hogya h khi flight miss nhi ho jaaye
Ashu : bss mohi hogya aa rha hu
teeno jldi se airport ki trf nikal pdte h
teeno sad hote h kyoki aaj 8saal baad jb se ye mile the ab alag hone jaa rhe the
Ashu : chlo me chlta hu apna dhyaan rkhna aur tension mt lo hm hrr month mila krenge kabhi tum vha to kabhi me yha
Rohan & Mohit : beta tu ek baar mt milna fir hmm tuje btayenge
teeno hass pdte h
aur Ashu airport ke andar jaane lgta h aaj 3no ko vo peechle 8 saal me bitaye lmhe yaad aane lgte vo mastiya , logo preshan krna prr unhe bhi pta tha ek din to inn sabb yaado ko peeche chodkar aage bhdna hi tha
Mohit aur Rohan bhi Ashu ko see off krne ke baad hostel ke liye nikal pdte kyoki unhe bhi ab ghar jaana tha kyoki yha rukar ab koi fayda nhi tha
Ashu jb flight me apni seat per baitha tha uska pass ek 30 35 saal ki ek aurat aakr baith jaati h
Aurat :kya tum tyar ho ashu aage ke liye soch lo abhi bhi time h
Ashu : no mam that final me sb kuch plan kr rkha h aapko to pta hi h
aur thodi der me flight take off kr jaati h ................
suspence from startUpdate 1
Mumbai ke ek hostel ke kisi room
Ladka 1: Ashu aaj hmare exam bhi khatam hogye aur ab tu ye bag kyo pack kr rha he
Ladka 2: Haa yrr aaj to hmm party bhi krne vale the naa
Ashu : tumhe to pata hi hna ki meri SK Grp of companies me placement hui he to unn logo ne muje jald jald join hone ke liye kha h to me aaj hi delhi ke liye nikal rha hu aur plzz yrr muje maaf krdna mne tumhara plan fail kr diya sorrry .aur aashu unke saamne kaan pakadke maafi mangta h
Ladka 1: Per yrr tu mere sath bhi yo kaam kr skta hnna fir kuu kisi aur ke pass kaam krna chata h
Ashu : Mohit tuje to pta hi hna me apne dum per kuch krna chata hu
Mohit : haa haa smj gya ki tu kisi ka eshaan nhi chata h but promise krr agar tuje life me kabhi bhi koi problem hogi to tu muje jrur khega
Ashu : Promise
Ladka 2 : Bss bhai tu hme bhul mt jaana
Ashu : Rohan tu kesi baat kr asa kabhi nhi hoga tum dono to mere dil ki jaan ho
fir teeno aaps me gle lg jaate he aur thodi ase hi khade rhte
teeno ki aankho me kuch aashu hote jo inke intne saal sath rhene ke baad aaj alag hone per nikle the
Ashu : chlo chlo rona bnd kro fir mess me chlte fir meri flight bhi h
Mohit : Saale khud rulata hai chl fir aaj cllg ka last lunch sath krte hai
3no dost lunch krte h issi me 1 ghanta nikal dete h
mohit : yrr ashu jldi krr teri flight kaa bhi time hogya h khi flight miss nhi ho jaaye
Ashu : bss mohi hogya aa rha hu
teeno jldi se airport ki trf nikal pdte h
teeno sad hote h kyoki aaj 8saal baad jb se ye mile the ab alag hone jaa rhe the
Ashu : chlo me chlta hu apna dhyaan rkhna aur tension mt lo hm hrr month mila krenge kabhi tum vha to kabhi me yha
Rohan & Mohit : beta tu ek baar mt milna fir hmm tuje btayenge
teeno hass pdte h
aur Ashu airport ke andar jaane lgta h aaj 3no ko vo peechle 8 saal me bitaye lmhe yaad aane lgte vo mastiya , logo preshan krna prr unhe bhi pta tha ek din to inn sabb yaado ko peeche chodkar aage bhdna hi tha
Mohit aur Rohan bhi Ashu ko see off krne ke baad hostel ke liye nikal pdte kyoki unhe bhi ab ghar jaana tha kyoki yha rukar ab koi fayda nhi tha
Ashu jb flight me apni seat per baitha tha uska pass ek 30 35 saal ki ek aurat aakr baith jaati h
Aurat :kya tum tyar ho ashu aage ke liye soch lo abhi bhi time h
Ashu : no mam that final me sb kuch plan kr rkha h aapko to pta hi h
aur thodi der me flight take off kr jaati h ................