Adultery AAKHIR AISA KYO KIYA..

[Real don]

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[Lovly singh]

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[Ankitshrivastava]

arre mere kehne ka matlab bas ye tha ki jitna lamba puneet ka likha utna lamba puja ka bhi likhna. short mein match matt kar dena...

tum to meri har baat ka galat matab nikalte ho to bura maan jate ho

ab kya bolu.. theekk hai aage se comment hi nahi karunga,.. okkkk....

Ab isme gussa kya.....jaisa qus waisa ans......aur puja ka POV itna lamba nhi hoga....kyoki common baaten repete nhi hogi......

Baki comment karna ya na karna reader ka personal decision hai.....usme main kuch nhi bolta....

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[Ankitshrivastava]

Nahi bhi aap best writer ho

200 page complete bro

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Thoda wait karo.....update aa raha hai........

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[Ankitshrivastava]

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UPDATE AAJ AYEGA PTA CHALNE KE BAAD MAIN

Hmm...dhaka-dhak bhi hoga....thoda wait karo.....

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[Ankitshrivastava]

Congrats for 200 pages

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[Ankitshrivastava]

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Update comming withing 1 hr.....

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[luckysearch12]

Ab isme gussa kya.....jaisa qus waisa ans......aur puja ka POV itna lamba nhi hoga....kyoki common baaten repete nhi hogi......

Baki comment karna ya na karna reader ka personal decision hai.....usme main kuch nhi bolta....

Thanks buddy..............

are itna samjhdar to main bhi hun ki common wali repete nahi hongi...

jaise tum khuud ko accha writer bol rahe ho .. apne fans par bhi to inta bharosa rakho ki wo itna bewkooof nahi...

par maine dekha hai ki tum meri baat ka galat matlab jaroor nikalte ho har baar.. pata nahi kyun...

maine kabhi tumhari writing skill par question nahi kia... bas feedbak dia kab muujhe accha laga aur kab disappoint hua...

ab agar tumko sirf acche comments hi chahiye to to bol do ki mere par negeative comments koi na kare... to main bas tabhi karunga jab muujhe accha lage..

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[Nilesh dheshmukh]

Ak bhai maine ek story bhadi thi badala2 usmai bhi aapki story jaisa tha ..uski gf rahti hai our sisters jo hiro dikhayatha uski gf dost ke shat pyar karti hai but usmai kaise kiya khuch bhi detail nahi bhataya o sifr bhadhla leta hi yehi dikhaya mast hai story lekin detail nahi bhataya khuch bhi..plz aap aisa mat karna karna poora detail mai bhatana..pooja ka jo hame samjne ko hona..kyu kiya aisa pooja ne..plz