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Thriller AB MERI BARI HAI BY VIVJO (RESTARTED)

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Hello :hello:

Story me aur do jagah post kar chuka hu but dono jagah adhuri hi post ki hai kyunki mene puri story likhi hi nai hai

i hope ki is bar me complete kardu ye story

me jese jese time milta rahega update post karta rahunga

aur rahi bat aage likhne ki to me roj thoda bahot likhta rahunga taki story jaldi se jaldi khatam ho sake aur kuchh log meri jaan chhode :hint: mili

and special thanks to Milan2010 jisne mujhe ukshaya hai ki tu story yaha pe post kar

usko bhi pata hai ki meri story itni achhi nai hai but fir bhi mera mazak udane k liye usne ye sab karvaya hai

shayad agar tum logo ko lage ki ye story kahi aur kisi aur ne likhi hai to id hogi vivjo aur agar ye id se nai padi to me apne aap ko mahan manunga ki kisi ko meri story pasand aayi aur unhone cnp mari

this thread is dedicated to milan2010

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PROLOGUE

MILEGA KAHI SE TO DALUNGA WARNA SIDHA FIRST UPDATE
 
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UPDATE 1

zee nagar (mera banaya huwa hai) ek bahot hi sunder city jaha sab ko apni puri zindgi bitani hai kyuki ye city hai hi esa ki ye sabko apni puri life yahi rehne pe majboor karde ye city dunia ke best cities me se ek hai lekin ek mahine pehle yaha pe koi aana nahi chahta tha aur jo bhi log pehle se yaha rehte the wo bhi bhag jana chahte the uski bajah thi sirf crime, lekin is waqt to yaha crime na ke barabar tha jiski bajah thi city me aaya huwa naya SP aur uska Inspector dost

zee nagar dopaher ke 4 baje...

zee nagar ke sector no.3 ke road no.5 pe do car khadi thi ek thi police van aur dusri thi BMW x1 lekin is BMW car ke pichhe likha tha "Suprintendent of Police" yani ye is city ke SP ki car thi aur isi car pe tek lagaye do aadmi bate kar rahe the

bate kuchh is prakar ki thi

pehla aadmi: tumhe niru ki bahot yaad aati hai na?

dusra aadmi: aryan tu har waqt ek hi bat kyu karta hai... aryan: batana tujhe niru ki yaad aati hai na?
dusra aadmi: haa mujhe uski bahot yaad aati hai me uska saga bhai na hote huwe bhi usne mujhe uske sage bhai se bhi zyada pyar diya hai lekin me hi un sabko chhod ke chala gaya tha


aryan: to ab chale jao... ab tumhe kon rok sakta hai...

dusra aadmi: lekin yaar dar lagta hai me baki sabko to kuchh bhi keh ke chhup kar dunga lekin niru se mujhe dar lagta hai

aryan: Vivek tu......

tabhi pichhe se ek hawaldar aata hai aur kehta hai: sir sector 4 se ek ladki ko kidnap kiya gaya hai aur jis car me use kidnap kiya hai wo humari aur hi aarahi hai

aur tabhi waha se ek car bahot tezi se guzarti hai

vivek: aryan tum ise aur dusri team ko leke pichhe aao me tab tak ise rokta hu

aryan kuchh bolta isse pehle hi vivek apni x1 me beth ke full speed se us car ke pichhe bhaga deta hai

aryan hawaldar se: chalo betho car me... aur apni car me se control room me call karke ek team bulwata hai aur fir wo bhi unke pichhe chal deta hai

hawaldar car drive karte waqt: sir lagta hai aaj fir kisi ki shamat aayi hai vivek sir jarur in ki haddi tod rahe honge is waqt

aryan: ha lekin agar wo log vivek ko jante hoge aur apne aap ko surrender kar denge to esa kuchh nahi hoga

tabhi aryan ko control room se msg aata hai ki kidnap ki gayi ladki "Dreamcity" ke commissioner ki beti hai... aryan msg padhke thoda soch ne ke bad muskuradeta hai


dusri taraf vivek ko wo car dikh gayi jisme ladki ko kidnap kiya gaya tha aur wo aur tezi ke sath drive karne lagta hai

vivek kidnaper ki car ko overtake karke apni car is tarah rok deta hai jisse dusri car na nikal sake aur vivek apni car me se utar kar apni gun liye kidnaper ki car ke samne khada ho jata hai ye sab itni jaldi hota hai ki kidnapers ko apni car rokni hi padi kidnapers turunt car se nikalte hai aur sath me ladki ko bhi bahar nikalte hai lekin kidnapers vivek ko dekhke use ghure jate hai ek kidnaper jisne ladki ka hath pakad rakha tha wo ladki ka hath chhodke apne sathiyo ke sath apne hath uper karleta hai

tabhi pichhe aryan aur dusri police team pahoch jati hai aur kidnapers ke hatho me hathkadi lagake use police van me dal ke leke chali jati hai... isi bich

aryan ladki se: kya tum dreamcity ke commissioner ki beti ho?

ladki kuchh nahi bolti aur sirf vivek ke samne dekhti rehti hai jo abhi tak gun tane khada tha aur ladki ki taraf hi dekh raha tha

aryan vivek ke pass jake: tujhe kya huwa chal yaha se..

vivek aryan ki bat sunke: tu chal in sabko leke me isko leke aata hu mere office me milte hai

aryan ek bar vivek ko ajib nazro se dekh ke: thik hai... aur aryan chal deta hai

wo ladki ab bhi vivek ko dekhe ja rahi thi vivek uske pass jake khada ho jata hai

ladki vivek ko apne pass dekhke pehle vivek ki chhati pe muka marti hai aur bolti hai: me sapna to nahi dekh rahi?

vivek: nahi

ladki: tum itne sal kaha the? aur kya kar rahe the? aur tum police ki wardi me kese? kafi sawal ek sath kar deti hai

vivek kuchh nahi bolta aur kehta hai: tum car me betho hum raste me bat karte hai

ladki car me beth jati hai aur vivek drive karne lagta hai

ladki fir se bolna suru kar deti hai: police me kabse ho tumhe to policewale pasnad nahi the na? aur wese bhi ek rahiz ko police ki nokri ki kya jarurat.... ladki itna bolke ruk gayi aur vivek ki taraf dekhne lagi

vivek ladki ko dekhta huwa: tumse sadi karne ke liye police ki nokri kar raha hu

ladki ki aankho me khushi ki chamak dikhay deti hai fir bhi wo apni khushi chhipate huwe: mujhse sadi karne ke liye?

vivek lambi sans chhod kar: Reet kya tumne sadi karli hai? reet: ha
vivek ye sunte hi thoda udas ho jata hai jo reet dekh leti hai lekin fir juthi hasi dikha kar vivek bolta hai: kab aur kisse ki?

reet: aaj se 14 sal pehle jab me usse takrayi thi tab mene uske sath apne man se hi sadi karli thi aur uska nam hai 'vivek khatri'


vivek ye sunte hi car ki break laga deta hai aur reet ke samne dekhta huwa khushi se bolta hai: kya tum sach me mujhse sadi karna chahti ho?

reet haste huwe: ha mene pyar tumse hi kiya tha fir sadi bhi tumse hi karungi na... aur vivek ko dekhne lagti hai

vivek usko bethe huwe hi gale laga kar: thank you ki tum mujhe wapis mil gayi pata hai tumhare bina me nahi reh sakta
reet vivek ko dekhke sirf apni pyari smile deti rehti hai (thoda vivek ke bare me bata du... ek 24-25 sal ka handsome
banda uski hight 5.11 inch uski skin fair colour ki thi uski aankhe
aur kan(ear) normal se thode chhote dikhte hai.... uska nature kuchh esa tha ki dusro ko khushi ke pal deke khush hona aur friends ke liye apni jaan dena

ab thoda reet ke bare me bata du: reet bhi 24-25 sal ki dikhne wali khubsoorat ladki hai uski aankhe aur kan(ear) besak vivek se bade hai skin fair hai hamesha apne hotho pe muskurahat leke firti hai.... aur ek khas bat ki isi chhote bachho se bahot lagao hai.... nature bilkul vivek jesa dusro ko khushi deke khush hona jo usne vivek se hi sikha tha)

ab story aage badhte hai

dusti taraf jab aryan police station pahochta hai tab

aryan vivek ke cabin me ja raha hota hai tabhi pichhe se ek ladki aryan ko aawaz deti hai: inspector kya meri friend mil gayi aapko?


aryan pichhe mud ke: ji mil gayi hai wese aap ka nam? ladki: mera nam Nirali Saini hai
aryan: wo ladki commissioner ki beti hai kya?

nirali: ha aur me uski friend aur mere bhai bhi inspector hai dreamcity me

aryan nirali ka nam aur uska bhai inspector hai ye bat sunke kuchh soch kar: kya tumhare bhai ka nam nitin aur shan hai?

nirali thoda chonk kar: ha.. kya aap unhe jante hai?

aryan nirali ki bat ka jawab nahi deta aur fir se bolta hai: kya tumhare ek aur bhai ka nam vivek khatri hai

nirali vivek ka nam sunke thoda udas ho jati hai aurr aryan se kehti hai: ha mere ek bhai ka nam vivek hai .. par kya aap unhe jante hai?

aryan uski bat sunke khush ho jata hai aur bolta hai: niru me bhi tumhara bhai hu vivek ka dost

nirali aryan ke muh se niru sunke bhadak jati hai aur bolti hai: dekho mera nam nirali hai mujhe niru sirf vivek bhai hi bula sakte hai

aryan nirali ki bat sunke bolta hai: gussa mat ho.... kya tum vivek se milna chahti ho?

nirali turunt khushi se bolti hai: ha kaha hai wo aur kese he wo?


aryan: wo bilkul thik hai.... aur kehta hai chalo mere sath

nirali aryan ke sath chal deti hai aur aryan use vivek ke cabin me le jata hai aur kehta hai: tum yahi ruko wo abhi aata hi hoga wahi tumhari friend ko leke aaraha hai

nirali khush hote huwe: pls unhe jaldi bulaiye

aryan ha me sir hilake bahar chal deta hai aur bahar aate hi vivek ko call karta hai vivek call pick karta hai

aryan: kaha ho tum? jaldi se aajao tumhe kisise milwana hai

vivek: mujhe bhi tumhe kisi se milwana hai aur reet ki taraf dekhne lagta hai aur fir kehta hai me bahar hi hu aur call dc karke andar chal deta hai

vivek aur reet jab andar aate hai to aryan turunt vivek ko khich ke uske cabin me le jane lagta hai aur reet bhi undono ke pichhe cabin me chali jati hai vivek ka dhyan abhi bhi aryan ki taraf hi tha reet andar nirali ko dekhkar khush ho jati hai tabhi nirali in tino ko dekh kar dodti huyi tino ke pass aati hai aur sidhi vivek ke gale lag jati hai reet ye sab dekhke chonk jati hai aur dusri taraf aryan khush hota hai aur vivek tab jake nirali ka chehra dekhta hai aur dekhte hi uski chhoti aankhe khushi se chamak jati hai aur thode aansu beh jate hai

nirali vivek se dur hoke: jao mujhe aapse bat nahi karni aap hume chhod ke kyu chale gaye the?

vivek aankh mese aanu pochta hai aur sath me nirali ke pass jake uski aankhose bhi aasu pochhta hai aur kehta hai: wo bahut lambi

kahani hai me tumhe bad me bataunga lekin ye batao ki tum yaha kese?

nirali reet ki taraf hath karke : ye meri friend hai aur hum sab yaha ghumne aaye the

reet jo ab tak chhup khadi thi : nirali kya tum ise janti ho?

nirali: ha yahi hai mere sabse chahite bhai vivek jiski tumne kafi bate suni hai

reet kuchh nahi bolti aur vivek ki taraf dekhne lagti hai aur tabhi fir se nirali vivek ko kehti hai

nirali: kya aap jante hai ab hum dreamcity me rehte hai aur ek bat ki aapke un dono bewkoof dost ko bhi inspector ki job mili hai police me

vivek: me sab janta hu

nirali : to fir aap abhi mere sath ghar chalenge

vivek: me abhi nahi aasakta lekin tumse wada karta hu ki 10 din me me dreamcity aaunga tab tak tumhe ye bat kisiko nahi batani hai ki tum mujhe mili thi aur reet tum bhi kisi ko mat batana me apna aur aryan ka transfer dreamcity me hi karwa lunga

nirali aur reet dono khash ho jati hai aur sath me aryan bhi

tabhi bahar se ek aadmi aata hai aur nirali aur reet ko dekhke: chalo ab hume wapis jane ke liye nikalna hai... ye aadmi driver tha jo nirali aur reet ko wapis le jane aaya tha

nirali vivek ki aur dekhke: dekho wada mat todna 10 din me aajana warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga abhi me ja rahi hu.....
aur bahar ki taraf chal deti hai aur aryan bhi uske pichhe chal deta hai fir reet vivek ke pass jake

reet: tumhara mob. no. mujhe do me tumhe call karungi. aur
vivek use apna number de deta hai aur dono sath me bahar aajate hai

nirali aur reet dono hi car me beth jati hai dono ki aankho me khushi thi ek ko apna bhai wapis mila tha to ek ko apna pyar.....
aur car highway ki aur chal deti hai

vivek aur aryan car ko jata huwa dekhte rehte aur bad me aryan vivek ki taraf dekhke

aryan: aaj to tu khush hoga na?

vivek uski taraf dekhke turunt bolta hai: aaj to me bahot khush hu chalo apne jane ki taiyaari suru kardo..... aur wo dono wapis police station ke andar chal dete hai... aryan vivek ki office me aake beth jata hai aur vivek apni chai pe beth jata hai tabhi
aryan bolta hai

aryan: tu mujhe kisi se milwane wala tha...

vivek: ha meto bhul hi gaya aaj mujhe wo mil gayi.... aur uske charepe fir se hasi chha jati hai

aryan thoda chonkte huwe: kya... kab mili tumhe?

vivek : are wo ladki aur koi nahi niru ki friend Reet hi hai...
lekin abhi tak niru kobhi pata nahi hai ki uska bhai kise pyar karta hai aur reet ko bhi nahi pata ki niru meri bahen hai.

aryan bhi sab sunke khush ho jata hai aur bolta hai: chal me jane ki taiyaari suru karta hu tu hamara transfer karwa

vivek sirf ha me gardan hilata hai aur apna kam karne lagta hai aryan bhi bahar aake un kidnapers ki thodi dhulai karta hai




To be continued....
 

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for old story on new forum :D
vivek bhai title purana wala hi rakho :yo:
jo old reader the wo bhi aa jayenge story padhne..
update regular dena usmein koi fekugiri na chalengi :D
:reading: kar ke rebo deta..

 
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Hello :hello:

Story me aur do jagah post kar chuka hu but dono jagah adhuri hi post ki hai kyunki mene puri story likhi hi nai hai

i hope ki is bar me complete kardu ye story

me jese jese time milta rahega update post karta rahunga

aur rahi bat aage likhne ki to me roj thoda bahot likhta rahunga taki story jaldi se jaldi khatam ho sake aur kuchh log meri jaan chhode :hint: mili

and special thanks to Milan2010 jisne mujhe ukshaya hai ki tu story yaha pe post kar

usko bhi pata hai ki meri story itni achhi nai hai but fir bhi mera mazak udane k liye usne ye sab karvaya hai

shayad agar tum logo ko lage ki ye story kahi aur kisi aur ne likhi hai to id hogi vivjo aur agar ye id se nai padi to me apne aap ko mahan manunga ki kisi ko meri story pasand aayi aur unhone cnp mari

this thread is dedicated to milan2010

:ciao:
Har baar apki g*nd me chool aa jata h dost... Isliye har baar band ho jati h story... And this thread to dedicate sarvajanik maal Milan2010
Keep doing ungali to Virus... So he can write more....What a irony.... One kaamchor is backing another Kamchor... ???????
 
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Hello :hello:

Story me aur do jagah post kar chuka hu but dono jagah adhuri hi post ki hai kyunki mene puri story likhi hi nai hai

i hope ki is bar me complete kardu ye story

me jese jese time milta rahega update post karta rahunga

aur rahi bat aage likhne ki to me roj thoda bahot likhta rahunga taki story jaldi se jaldi khatam ho sake aur kuchh log meri jaan chhode :hint: mili

and special thanks to Milan2010 jisne mujhe ukshaya hai ki tu story yaha pe post kar

usko bhi pata hai ki meri story itni achhi nai hai but fir bhi mera mazak udane k liye usne ye sab karvaya hai

shayad agar tum logo ko lage ki ye story kahi aur kisi aur ne likhi hai to id hogi vivjo aur agar ye id se nai padi to me apne aap ko mahan manunga ki kisi ko meri story pasand aayi aur unhone cnp mari

this thread is dedicated to milan2010

:ciao:
:congrats: for starting new story
iss baar kahani ko pura nahi kiya tha :slap:
 
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