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Thriller AB MERI BARI HAI BY VIVJO (RESTARTED)

Naina

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Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye thrill aur suspense ke sath sath romance ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... kuch mysteries se shayad dhire dhire parda hatenge ... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi hai... joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bina mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye apne anmol shadho dwara sonjoye kahani ki jariye... :bow: :bow:
aur -:Demon King:- sir ho sake toh plz samay nikal kar is kahani ko complete kijiye...
 

Pass1234

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-:Demon King:- sir
App ki ye story bhut hi achi lagi
Kahani main kai jagh lga ki story puri hogi but aisa huaa nahi
Plzz apnelife se thoda time nikal ke ye story puri kare

Virus sir apki story main ye kaisa virus aya jisse ye story adhuri rh gyi
Is virus anti virus laga ke ye story complete kr do:yourock::yourock::rock1::attack:
 

Pass1234

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aise na boliye... -:Demon King:- ki writing skill bahot badhiya hai... :approve:
narrations aur language ki pakad bhi kaafi majbut hain... :perfect:
Sahi kha apne inki story ke in updates main koi bhi writting mistake ya language problem Nahi hai:derisive::deal:
 

tpk

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pl continue
 
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