Thriller AB MERI BARI HAI BY VIVJO (RESTARTED)

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Milan2010 The_lost_love -:AARAV143:-

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[lone_hunterr]

for new story -:Demon King:- bhai____ Aaj aapke pahle 10 update padhe____ Story ka base bhut acha hai___Ruthless cop, friends, Family, love etc..... Vaise in 10 update se bhut kuch jyada to pata laga nhi story ka par base bhut acha ban gaya hai___ Vivek seems to be the main character___ A rich, rebellious cop jiske paas power aur paisa dono hai..... Aisa lagta hai ki story aab dreamcity ke around hi ghumegi and vivek fill fight the crimes of the city__ Villain aur antagonists ka kuch khaas Idea laga nhi aur vivek ki past life bhi ek mystery hai.

Aap se request hai ki aap paragraph dete hue thoda dhyaan de kyunki kahi jagah pe sentence complete hue bina hi paragraph de diya and vo ek sentence 2 para mein likha hua hai........ Isse thoda uncomfortable lagta hai padhte hue

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[Anshu0Kraj]

Present metre story bahut hi acchi ja rahi hai dekhte hain flashback mein kya hota hai
Next update ka besabri se intezar

 

[Black water]

Awe

UPDATE 43

vivek 5 mahine se gunga bana betha tha... uke sath training me jo ladki thi usne socha aaj ke task me to is bolna hi padega agar nahi bola to me isse aaj jarur bat karungi...

task de diya gaya tha jisme unhe 25 aatnakiyon ko marna tha aur uske liye un logo ko 3 ghante milethe aur aaj ke liye sirf ye ek last hi task bacha tha.... lekin agar wo is task me fail hote hai to unhe ye task dubara suru karna padta... yani jab tak success nahi hote tab tak kam karna hi padta..


jaha ye charo log khade the waha fir se wo speaker ki aawaz gunji... "your time start now.."

speaker ki aawaz jese hi gunji charo ne apni guns kasli aur aage badhne lage... lekin yaha in logo ne galti karo ki aatanki yon ko pakadne ke liye in logo ne koi plan nahi banaya tha ese hi chal diye hathiyar uthake...

charo log me wo ladki aur dono ladke aaps me bate aur ishare kabhi kabhi kar lete the lekin vivek apni hi dhun me tha vivek aage badhta raha har jagah sawdhani rakhne ki bajahye vivek sidha kahi bhi jake khada ho jata aur fire kar deta... uska nishana pehle se hi achha tha...

vivek ne yunhi berukhi se 20 aadmi ko wahi mar dala tha jaha wo use dikhe.. un logo ko goli chalane ka moka bhi nahi diya tha.. sirf aadhe time me vivek ne 20 aadmi ko mar diya tha baki ke tino ko kuchh samaj hi nahi aaraha tha.. yunhi aadha ghanta guzar jata hai lekin waha pe baki ke bache log unhe kahi nahi dikhte...

achanak hi charo aur se firing suru hogyi aur charo bachte huwe yaha waha chhup gaye goliyan chalni band hogyi lekin is hamle me untino ka power 80 % tak kam ho chuka tha kyuki wo log to vivek kya kar raha hai wahi soch me dube rahe the..

jabki vivek ka power 40 % tak kam ho chuka tha... ab sabhi log chonkane ho chuke the..

kuchh palo bad vivek ko kuchh sujta hai to wo ek taraf chal deta hai aur waha 3 fire karta hai aur tino nishane pe hi mar deta hai.. ab sirf do log bache the.. lekin tabhi vivek ke kano me fire ki aawaz aayi jab wo pichhe mud ke dekhta hai to uske pichhe ek aadmi tha jo jammen pe gir raha tha thik uske pichhe vivek ki

sathi ladki khadi thi... tabhi wo ladki pichhe mudti hai aur ek aur fire kar deti hai..

tabhi waha pe speaker ki aawaz gunjti hai "aaj ka ye free task khatam huwa kal aapko target practice ke liye jana hai"

speaker ki bate sunke sabhi thode shocked hogye... abhi wapis target practice kis liye..

lekin koi kuchh nahi bolta sabhi rest room me aajate hai... vivek ki sathi ladki ab bhi soch me dubi huyi thi ki is gunge se kese bat ki jaye..

thodi der me sabhi fresh hogye.. unke bad dinner karne ke time wo ladki vivek ke pass aake dinner karne bethti hai.. vivek sirf ek bar use dekhta hai.. thodi der shanti chhayi rehti hai tabhi ladki is sannate ko chirti hai...

ladki:"gunge ho kya

vivek apni gardan na me hilata hai.... kuchh der fir se shani chha jati hai.. fir is bar vivek bolta hai..

vivek"thanks"

ladki ko to apne kano me wishwas bhi nahi ho raha tha ki usne is gunge ki aawaz suni..

ladki" thanks kis liye"

vivek" wo task ke waqt tumne fire karke mera power yani meri jaan bachayi is liye.."

ladki" uske badle me me kuchh mang sakti hun"

vivek kuchh sochke" haan manglo jo bhi mangna hai.. agar mere bas ka raha to jarur dunga"

ladki" mujhe apne bare me batao.. "

vivek kuchh soch me dub jata hai... uske bad wo kehta hai..."diner khatam karke bataunga aur wo bhi ek shrt pe............... "

ladki" konsi shart"

vivek" mujhe tumhare bare me bhi janna hai"

ladki "thik hai me ab bata dungi jitna mujhe mere past ke bare me pata hai"

vivek sirf hmm karta hai aur uske bad dono apna khana yani dinner khatam karte hai...

vivek aur us ladki ko bate karta dekh un dono baki ke ladko ko itna to pata chala ki ye ladka gunga nahi hai...

kuchh der bad vivek us ladki ko kehta hai chalo chhat par beth ke bate karte hai.. ladki turunt ready ho jati hai aur dono chhat par aajate hai.. vivek pehle swal karna suru kar deta hai..

vivek " tumhara nam kya hai" ladki" mera name MOHINI hai..
vivek "nice name" "tum yaha kese aagyi aur tumhara past batao.."

mohini" mere past me to kuchh nahi hai.. mera janm kaha huwa ye mujhe nahi pata me kiski beti hun ye bhi mujhe nahi pata...
haan mujhe kisi ne pala hai aur itna kaha hai ki tu hume raste

me mili thi aur humne tumhe apne ghar lake pala hai... rahi bat yaha aane ki to yaha aane ke kuchh din pehle...

me ek restaurent me thi waha pe mera jagda kuchh ladko se huwa... jisne mere sath battamizi karne ki koshish kari thi to mene un sabko marna suru kar diya... us waqt waha wo jawed sir bhi the jo mujhe yaha laye.. wo mujhe un sab ladko ko marta huwa dekhte rahe..

mera jagda jab waha khatam huwa to do din bad mujhe jawed sir mile usne khud mujhe mere bare me bataya aur kaha ki tum apne desh ke liye kafi kuchh kar sakti ho agar manzur hai to kal tak phone kar dena... uske bad mene kafi time tak ocha fir mene call lagaya... kafi sare test diye uske bad me akeli is rest room me rehti thi..

mohini"to yahi tha mera ab tak ka past" "ab tum apne bare me batao.."

vivek mohini ki taraf dekhta rehta hai fir kehta hai.." kuchh din bad bata dunga" "abhi ke liye hum friends ban sakte hai"

mohini" haan friends hi to hai... lekin tumhe abhi batane me kya problem hai"

vivek" aaj kafi dino bad me kuchh bola hun to mujhe kuchh aaram chahiye me kuchh dino bad samne se tumhe sab kuchh bata dunga..

kuchh din in dono ke to hasi mazak me guzar jate hai vivek ne do tin bar un baki ke dono ladke ke sath bhi bat kari thi jisme vivek ko un dono ke name pata chale the...
aaj sabko task se free kiya gaya tha vivek ne socha chalo in baki ke dono ke bare me bhi jaan liya jaye.. to vivek ne sabko chhat e chale ko kaha..


sabhi log chhat par bethe kafi der bat karte hai.. tabhi vivek kehta hai..

vivek" harry tum apne past ke bare me batao mujhe." harry" me bata to dun lekin meri ek shart hai.."
vivek" teri shart mujhe maloom hai pehle tu bata fir ye aditya batayega aur last me me bata dunga.."

harry vivek ke is tarah jawab dene se hasta hai aur kehta hai" mere past me to kuchh rakha hi nahi hai sala me to paida kaha huwa hun wo bhi mujhe nahi pata... haan me bada huwa hun to tha anath aashram... wo aashram hi meri maa thi aur mera baap tha...

rahi baat yaha kese pahochne ki to " aashram me rehne ke karan me thoda kamina hogya tha.. halanki aashram hume achhe sanskar hi deti thi lekin humne bahar se galat wale sanskar bhi e rakhe the... usi me ek din jawed sir mujhe aake bole ki tere me kuchh talent hai mere liye kam karega.."

"me bola me chahe kesa bhi kamina kyun na ho lo par desh ke khilaf kam na karu... agar kuchh ulta kam karne ko bola to teri khopdi fod dunga.."

jawed sir bole" agar me kahu ki tujhe apne desh ke liye hi kam karna hai to.. "

me bola" to me besak apni jaan bhi de dunga.."

"uske bad kafi sare taste liye gaye written me bhi aur oral me bhi.. mere aashram ki ek bat hi mujhe pasand thi ki wo waha ke har bache ko padhate the.. usi aashram ki bajah se mujhe

padhne ki lat lagi thi. aur mujhe aaj itna knowledge hai...

aaj itne din yaha kat liye to kabhi kabhi waha ki yaad aajati hai.."

bus itna sa tha mera past...

vivek" tumhe kabhi kisi se pyar huwa hai.."

harry" yaha ane tak to nahi huwa tha lekin ayaha kisi ne mera chain jarur churaya hai jise dekh ke me apna har kam bhulne lagta hun"

vivek" kon hai wo"

harry" bata nahi sakta" "akele me milna bata dunga" vivek" to ab aditya tum apne bare me kuchh kaho.."
aditya smile kart huwa" me apne bare me kya kahu... harry aur meri story same hi hai..me bhi aashram me pala bada hun.. lekin haan me ek marathi hun ese muje maloom hai.. me kabhi na kabhi kuchh alag karne ki hi sochta rehta tha.. mujhe apna desh bahot achha lagta tha to me apne desh ke liye kuchh karna chahta tha me police force join karne wala tha ki mujhe jawed sir mile the aur usne mujhe aaj yaha lake khada kar diya "

vivek" tumhari aabkhe keh rahi hai ki tumne kisi se pyar kiya hai"

aditya vivek ki baat sunke apna muh dusri aur kar leta hai to vivek kehta hai" bata yaar kon hai wo"

aditya" wo ladki mere aashram wale city me hi rehti hai me jab 10 sal ka tha tabse usko orz dekhta aa raha hun usko dekhna mujhe bahot achha lagta hai"


vivek" uska name kya hai"

aditya" uska name mujhe bhi tab pata chala jab me uska aakhri bar didar karne
gaya th" uska name hai "deepa"

aditya" to ab tum apne bare me batao.."

vivek" me apne bare me tum tino ko sab kuchh sach sach bata deta hun... lekin uske pele ek wada chahiye ki ye sari bate humare bich hi rehni chahiye chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye..."

mohini" hum sabhi wada karte hai..." lekin esa kyaq hai jo secret rakhna hai"

vivek" mera name vicky nahi vivek khatri hai... me khatri group ke malik S.K. ka beta hun..."

vivek ke itna bolte hi un tino ke muh khule reh jate hai..
uske bad vivek apna sara past suna deta hai.. lekin vivek in tino ko apna maksad nahi batata..

isi din se ye charo achhe dost ban jate hai vivek ko maloomho jata hai ki harry mohini se hi pyar karta hai.. aur vivek ye bhi janta tha ki mohini bi harry ko chahti hai lekin vivek ne us waqt socha ki dono ko ek dusre ko samajne ka moka dete hai..
kuchh waqt aur yun hi guzar jata hai aur aaj pure 8 mahine huwe the in sabki

training ko is bich in logo ne kahi tarah ke torture ko saha tha... in logo ne sarab ko pani ki tarah piya tha.. aur cigret ke kash sans ki tarah liye the..

itne mahino tak kafi kuchh jelne aur sikhne ke bad in logo ko

uska pehla mision milta hai jo ki fake mission hota hai lekin is fake mission ki khabar in charo ko nahi hoti hai..



ye charo log mission ki taiyaari me lag chuke the aaj bhi ye sab wahi rest room use kar rahe the jaha ye pichhle 8 mahine se rehte the..



sabhi ready hoke main hall me aajate hai waha se in sabko mission ke liye nikalna tha...



in charo ko dr. T.K. se milwaya jata hai jo kuchh gedgets dete hai jo mission ke doran madad gar sabit hote the... in sab ko ek tips di gayi wo thi ki "kuchh bhi ho jaye jit ke aana"



in charo ko ek car ki chabi di jati hai vivek car ki key le leta hai aur ye sab jaha mission tha waha ke liye nikal jate hai mission uska ye tha ki unhe aaj bhi aatankiyo ko pakad na tha aur uske pass ek esi chiz hai jisse desh ko khatra tha to ye mission har hal me success hona bhi jaruri tha is liye is bar charo ne milke kuchh plan s bhi banaye the..



kuchh hi der me charo apne mission ki jagah pahoch jate hai jo ki ek hotel jesa lag raha tha jaha kafi sare police wale bhi the (jo duplicate the aur secret service me kam karne wale hi the) yaha kafi sare log the jo secret service ke hi log the...

jese hi ye charo jate hai waha in sabko rok diya jata hai aur police wale kehte hai" yaha pe public ko aana abhi mana hai"



vivek car wapis mode deta hai kyuki un sabko pata tha yaha apni pehcahn nahi apni kabiliyat dkhani hai



kuchh dur jake vivek car ko side me laga ke pichhe bethe harry aur aditya ki taraf dekhta hai aur mohini ki taraf bhi dekhta hai aur kehta hai" chalo ab apna mission suru karte hai"

to be continued...............

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[Milan2010]

Milan2010 The_lost_love -:AARAV143:-

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[harshit1890]

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[Naina]

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