Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

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[ANUJ KUMAR]

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Deepu phir aage badha ....tab tak MP ...k roop mein jo asur tha ...jiski Abhi k maar k kaaran haalat kharab thi woh sambhal chuka tha .....usne Jab ...Deepu ko Darmen ki taraf badhte hue dekha ....toh ....apni poori urja ekatrit karke ...picche se Deepu par vaar kiya .....woh vaar Deepu tak pahunchta .....k ussi samay waha aayi Kirti ne dekh liya ...aur uss vaar ko apni talwar se rok diya ....

ab aagee.......

Kirti MP ki taraf apni talwar lekar badhi .....MP bhi ab apne asur roop mein tha ..woh apna khadag lekar Kirti ki taraf tezi se badha ....aur apne khadag ka bharpur vaar Kirti par kiya ...Kirti bhi satark thi .....usne turant ek taraf hatkar ..apni talwar ...ka vaar uspar kiya ..jisase ucki baju mein ek cut lag gaya ...aur khoon bahne laga .....usne bhi palatkar ...Kirti par phir se vaar kiya ....jisse Kirti ne apni talwar se bakubi block kiya ....

Dusri Taraf Shivom bhi Darmen k roop se ladh raha tha ...Shivom ne apni maya ka prayog karke usse bharmane k liye apne kai roop banaye ....jo Datmen ki urja k vaar se saare nasht ho gaye ....

Darmen - bacche tumahari yeh choti moti maaya ka muzh par koi asar nahi hoga dekho maya isse kahte hai ....
itna kahkar Darmen ne waha ek visfot kiya ...uss visfot k hote hi ..Shivom ko ..dikhne laga ..k ..woh ....ek vishal sagar ki lahro mein ghir chuka hai ..woh ..lahere usse jal k bhiter khinch rahi thiv.....woh chahkar bhi tair nahi paaraha hai ....bade bade samudri jeev usse khane k liye uski taraf badh rahe hai ....woh jaanta tha k yeh satya nahi hai ...lekin ....usse lagne laga k kahi iss mayavi samudra mein faskar uski mrityu na jo jaaye ....uski koi shakti kaam nahi kar rahi thi ....jiskaaran ghabrahat mein woh haath pair maarne k alawa kuch nahi kar paa raha tha ...

Tabhi uske mann mein Abhi ki aawaj gunji ...apna dhyan ekagrachit karo ....apne chakro ki urja ko jaagrit karo .....itna sunte hi Shivom ne haath pair marna band kar diya ...aur ...shant ..ho gaya .bahari sagar ki lahro ka shor ...usse vichalit kar raha tha ..paratnu phir bhi usne apne man ko ekagrachit kiya ..aur chakro ki urja ko jagrit kiya ...

Uske aisa karte hi Darmen ki woh naya nasht ho gayi ...Shivom maya se vahar aakar abhi sambhal bhi nahi paaya tha ...Darmen ki urja ka ek vaar uske seene se takraya ....jisase woh dur jaa gira uske seene mein bhayankar pida hone lagi ...thi ....aur saath saath ab uska krodh bhi badh gaya tha ...jiss kaaran ..Yaksha ...roop ..mein uska tamogun ..bahut badh gaya .....

Shivom ab apni pida ki parvah kiye bina ....Darmen par zhapat pada ....ab woh ..lagatar ...Darmen par apni urja ka prahaar karne laga ....Jisse Darmen ka woh roop zhel nahi paa raha tha ...ab Shivom ne apni Maarak shakti ka aawahan kiya ...aur ...Darmen par vaar kiya ..Jisase Darmen k sharir k do tukde ho gaye ....

Shivom usko mara hua samazkar aage badhne laga ..lekin dekhte hi dekhte woh do tukde aapas mein jud gaye ....aur Darmen ka woh roop phir jeevit ho utha ...

Krish apne urja chakra k lagatar prahaar ...Darmen k ek roop par kar raha tha ....jisse Darmen apni urja ki ek dhal banakar bakhubi rok raha tha aur saath saath ..Krish par ....vaar bhi kar raha tha .....Krish ..ne hab dekha k uske prahar ...Darmen ki dhal k kaaran bekar ho rahe hai ....toh usne apne prahar aur teevra kar diye aur prahaar karte hue tezi aage badhne laga ....

Krish k teevra praharo k kaaran ..Darmen ki urja ki dhal tut gayi thi aur Krish k urja chakra ...Darmen ko jaa lage ....Krish k urja chakro k kaaran Darmen k sharir k kai tukde hogaye ...Krish ..apne vaar Darmen k uss roop ka anth dekhkar Krish thoda nischint hua ...aur ..ghuno par haath rakhkar ...lambhi lambi saansee lene laga ....tabhi usne dekha ...k Darmen k sharir k tukde ...phir jud gaye ...aur kych ki pal mein woh purvavat uske saamne khada tha....

Krish abhi Darmen ki taraf vismay se dekh raha tha ..aur ab isse kaise maare iss baare mein soch raha tha ....k Darmen ne apne dono haath aage karke ek adrishya utha ka vaar Krish par kiya ......woh vaar ..adrishya hone k kaaran Krish usse samaz nahi paaya ...aur uske prabhav se piche dur jaakar gira ...

Woh sambhalkar khada hua ..rabhi ek aur adrishya vaar uspar hua ..aur ...woh ....picche ....dur ..ek ..bade se pattgar se jaa takraya ...jisase ..woh patther chur chur ho gaya . aur ...Krish k sar par kuch chote bhi aayi .....

Krish samaz nahi paa raha tha k kaisi iss adrishya urja ka saamna kiya jaaye ....Krish ne murchit hone ka naatak kiya ...Darmen usse murchit hua samazkar uske saamne aaya ....Krish ..turant ...uspar lapka aur yski gardan pakadkar uss par tabadtod mukke barsane laga ....

wahi ek or Virat bhi Darmen k ek roop se bhida hua tha ...jaha ..Virat apni mansik shakti se ...Darmen par ...kai ...nukile astro se vaar kar raha ..tha .....Darmen ne bhi unn astro ko bich mein hi rok kar nashta kar diya ..aur waise hi ...kai astra ek saath Virat ki taraf chode ....Virat ...apni talawr badi teji se ghumata hua ....unn astro ko kaat raha tha aur saath hi saath Darmen ki aanhon mein dekhkar usse vash mein karne ka prayatna karne laga ....

Do taraf dhyan batne k kaaran kai astra Virat ...se takraye...jisase woh ghayal ho gaya ....Darmen ki aankhon mein dekhte hue ...achanak uska sar bhari hone laga ...usse asie lagne laga k Darmen ..uske mastishik mein pravesh kar raha hai ....uske sar mein asahniya pida hone lagi ......jiss kaaran woh ...nicche baithkar ...apne aapko niyantrit karne laga ...Darmen k astri se woh buri tarah ghayal ho gaya tha aur wahi Darmen uske mastishk se bhi khel raha tha .....

Virat mein satva gun pradhan tha ....aise kissi vikar paristhiti mein ..uske bhiter ...satva gun ki ...urja teevra ho jaati thi .....Virat ko aise bhumi par jakhmi haalat mein baitha dekhkar ...Darmen uspar apna aakhri vaar karne aage aaya ....tabhi ..Virat ka sharir shwet urja se chamakne laga ....uske sharir mein dhase hue astra bahar ho gaye aur dekhte hi dekhte uske ghav bharne lage ..

Darmen Virat par vaar karne hi wala tha ...k Virat ..ne aankhien kholkar uski aankhon mein dekha ...jisase Darmen k sar k chithde ud gaye ...aur uska dhad ..jamin par gir pada ....Darmen k uss roop ko mara hua dekhkar ...Virat ... aage badha ...tabhi uske piche se Darmen k uss roop ne ..jisse Virat mara samazkar aage badha ...uska sar dubara ..aagaya tha ..aur punah jeevit ..hokar .apni urja ka ek jordar vaar Virat ki pith par kiya .....

Yaha Kaal ek saath Darmen k teen roopo se ladh raha tha ....woh apne sher manav k roop mein tha ....Kaal ne D 1 k serne mein apna panja gusata ..lekin aascharya ...uske ..seene mein na toh dil tha aur na hi sharir mein khoon ....Abhi Kaal ka haath D1 k seene mein hi tha ....k D1 ne uski gardan jor se pakad li ...D 2 aur D3 ..bhi Kaal par Vaar kar rahe the ....Kaal ...ab poori tezi se apne pairo par chakra ki tarah ghumne laga ....jisase woh teeno dur chitakkar jaa gire ....Lekin woh bhi badi teevrata se ....Kaal par zhapte ..D1 ne ...uchalkar ek jordar kick Kaal k seene par maari ....toh Kaal ne bhi Badi tezi se uska pair patak kar usse jamin par patak diya ....aur dusre pair par pair rakhkar ...usse bich se chir diya ...tab tak ...D2 ..aur D3 dono ne ek saath Kaal ki pith par jordar vaar kiya jisase woh aunde muh jamin par gir gaya ....

Uske girte hi D2 aur D3 ne uspar laat ghuso ki barsat kar di ....Kaal ne bhi palatkar ..unn dono par chalang laga di ..aur ...unn dono ki gardan pakadkar ...Jamin par ....patak diya ..Kaal ne apne nukile panje unki garden mein ghusakar dono ki gardan ukad di ....lekin tab tak D1 punah jeevit ho gaya tha ....usne .....kaal k sar ...par ek jordar prahar kiya ....jisase uske sar se khun nikalne laga .....

Apne jakham ki parvah kiye bina Kaal ohir D1 par zhapta ....aise woh ek ko maarkar dusre se nipatta tab tak pahele wala phir jeevit ho jaata .. usse samaz nahi aaraha tha k kaise ...inka saamna kare .....

Wahi ek taraf Deepu aur Datmen k ek roop ka sangharsh joro par tha .....dono ...dono talwar vaji k paintre badal badalkar ek dusre par vaar kar rahe the ....Darmen ne badi tezi k saath apni tlwar ka bharpur vaar Deepu k gardan par kiya ..toh Deepu ne bhi ..badi tezi se ek taraf hatkar Darmen ki kalayi par vaar kiya ...jisase Darmen ki kalayi katkar gir gayi ....Deepu ne ek pal bhi aur na gawate hue apni talwar k ek vaar se Datmen ka sar dhad se alag kar diya ...

abhi woh Darmen k dhad ko jamin par girta hua dekh hi raha tha ....k usse aisa laga k koi piche se uspar vaar karne wala hai ...usne badi phurti se piche mudte hue apni talwar se uss vaar ko block kiya toh dekha toh waha ek aur Darmen tha ....Jab tak Deepu isase nipatta tab tak ...pahele wala bhi punar jeevit ho gaya ....Deepu badi tezi aur bahaduri se unn dono ka saamna karne laga .....

wahi Golu ne bhi apne 8 danav pragat kiye the Jo Darmen k pratiroop se ladh rahe the ....tadi ek danavo marta toh uski jagah do pragat ho jaate ...iss tarah Golu k danavo ne Darmen k bahut saare roopo ko thame rakha tha ....Golu bhi apni yaksha vidya ka prayog karte hue ..Darmen k char char roopo se ladh raha tha .....usne bhi kai baar ..Apne ghatak vaaro se Darmen unn roopo ko kai baar maara lekin kuch hi palo mein woh phir jeevit ho jaate ....iss tarah yaksha hone k bawjud woh bhi bahut ghayal hocgaya tha ...yski shakti bhi kshin padne lagi thi ......

Wahi Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ...bhi ...ek saath Darmen k kai roopo ko sambhal rahi thi ....Jaha Shivali Raudra roop mein trishool lekar ...Darmen k kai roopo k saath ladh rahi thi ...wahi Ritu bhi apni ...teevra urja aur astra kala k dwara ...Darmen k kai roopo ka saamna kar rahi thi .....
Vibhakta ne bhi ...pahele unpar tantra aur mantra ka prayog karne lagi lekin jab dekha k uska Darmen k unn pratiroopo par koi asar nahi ho raha hai toh woh apni talwar lekar ..khud padi ....

Kirti bhi tab tak MP ko maar chuki thi aur woh bhi Abhi ki teeno patniyo ka saath de rahi thi

unn sabke k liye sabse badi pareshani yeh thi k unke anek baar maarne par bhi Darmen k woh pratiroop punah jeevit ho uthte the .....aur lagatar unse yudh karne k kaaran woh sab thak bhi rahe the ..jisase unki urja ksjin ho rahi thi ..aur Darmen k pratiroop unpar haawi hone lage the ...

Wahi Abhi ...k Saamne Darmen k 10 roop the ....Abhi ne ek ek karke ..apne Agni ...Vayu ...aur ..Jal ..aur Prithvi tatva ka prayog un par kiya ....lekin unka Darmen k pratiroopo par koi asar nahi ho raha tha......Darmen bhi lagatar apni urja se Abhi par vaar kar raha tha Abhi ne ab aakaash tatva ...ki urja ...se sampanna shakti trishool ...se Darmen k roopo par vaar karne laga ....kyuki aakash tatva hi aisa tha ..jo sab prakar ki urja ko apne bhiter samet leta hai ....lekin woh jaanta tha ...yeh tabhi kaam karega ...jab ...Asli Darmen par iska prayog hoga ...Woh ek ek karke sab par uski urja ka prahar karne laga ....

Lekin Abhi k saare prayas bekar jaa rahe the .....Abhi ne divya drishti k dwara ...bhi asli Darmen ko khojne ki koshish ki lekin sab vyarth ...Ussi samay ...Abhi par Darmen ne jo adrishya rahkar yeh saara khel kar raha tha ...Eblis ..k kaale saaye ....k prachand urja ka prahaar kiya .....

Abhi k Charo taraf Eblis ka woh kaala saaya ..poore veg se ghumne laga ...Abhi uss saaye par ...apni urja se prahar ...kiye ...lekin woh saya Abhi ki har urja ko sokhne laga ...woh saaya ....jaise Abhi ki urja ko soakhne laga tha ......jiss kaaran ab Abhi ka kroadh badhne laga ....aur woh ab apne poorna ...Rakshak k roop mein aagaye ...Abhi k sharir se nikalte hue prakash k kaaran Eblis ko vahut pida hone lagi aur pal bhar mein woh saaya waha se chala gaya ....

Abhi ko Vikral roop mein dekhkar ....Darmen ne waha kai jagah vishaile visfot kiye ...jisase waha ...charo taraf ..ghatak ..vish ka dhua ..phailne laga ...Uss vish ka asar Abhi ...aur Shivali ko chodkar waha sabhi par hone laga ...Pahele hi lagatar yudh k kaaran ..aur jakhmi hone k kaaran sabki haalat kharab thi aur ab yeh pranghatak vish .....

Abhi ne uss saare vish ko apne bhiter sama liya ....uss Vifot k kaaran ..Abhi ko ab Darmen ki sthiti ka pata chal gaya tha ....Usne apna Shakti trishool ab aakash ki or uthaya .....Aur uski prachad urja ko jaagrit kiya ....uss Prakash k lagte ...hi ..Darmen jo adrishya roop mein aakash mein sthit rahkar ye saara khel rach raha tha ...woh ..apne roop mein pragat ho gaya ....aur dhadam se dharti par aa gira .....

Abhi ab usse aur kissi shadyantra kamauka nahi dena chahta tha ....Issliye ab usne Tridevo ki shakti se sampanna ...urja ka aawahan kiya ..aur Darmen par choda ...uss prachand urja k lagte hi ..ek jordar cheekh k saath . ..Darmen dur jaakar gira ....aur uske saare roop bhi gayab ho gaye .

tridevo ki prachand urja se Darmen jakhmi jarur ho gaya tha ...lekin ab bhi surakshit tha ....apni ..Pida ki sahte hue woh phir khada hua ....

Abhi aascharya chakit sa usse dekhne laga .....k tridevo ki prachand urjk vaar se bhi yeh bach gaya ..ab kya kare kaise isse samapt kare ....

Darmen - Bacche ...muzhe maarna tumahare bas mein nahi hai ...muzhe koi nahi maar sakta ...ha..ha...ha.....

Darmen samaz chuka tha k Abhi ab apne poorna roop mein aagaya hai issiliye ab woh sidha uske saath mukabla nahi kar sakta ....Abhi ek rakshak hai ...issiliye ab ...Darmen ne ..aam logo ka vinash karke uske dil par chot karne ka vichar kiya .. aur ..waha se gatab ho gaya

Darmen - Roop nagar k aakash mein sthit hogaya ....ha ha ha ...tmyeh nagar tuze savse pyara hai na ....Toh ab mein tahi se rabahi shuru jarta hu ....itna kah kar Darmen uss saare shahar par Agni k golo ki varsha karne laga ...jo niche ...girkar ek visfot k saath fatne lage ....logi ki ceekh pukar machne lagi ....tabhi Darmen ka picha karta hua Abhi bhi waha aagaya ....aur ....Darmen k barsate hue golo ko rokne laga ...

Ab chalte hai Arin grah par ...Arin k sabhi grah samuho ko punah apne sundar roop mein sthapit karke Abhi Arsalan aur saath kai varsho tak raha ....Abhi ko ab lagne laga k ...uske uss janam ka udesshya poorna ho chuka hai ....issiliye usne Janalok mein Satyanand ji se sampark kiya ....

Abhi aur uski teeno patniya apne kaksh mein baithi hui thi tabhi waha Satyanand ji pragat hue ...

ek taraf toh Abhi Satyanand ji se mansik sampark karke baat kar raha tha ..aur dusri or Aek Satyanand ji uske saamne khade the ...

Abhi - Kaun ho aap jo iss tarah Satyanand ji ka roop banakar aaye ho ....

Satyanand ji - mein bhi Satyanad hi hu samrat ...jo bhavishya se ..yaha samay chakra paar karke aaya hu ...

Abhi ne antarman ki drishti se dekha tab usse pata chala k saamne jo hai woh bhi Satyanand ji hi hai ..

Abhi - Pranam aacharya ji ...kshama kare maine aap par sandeh kiya ...parantu aisi kya aawashyakta aagayi jo aapko bhavishya se yaha aana pada ...

Satyanand ji - kyu ki aapke iss samay ki samasya bhavishya ko badhit kar rahi hai ...yadi usse roka nahi gaya toh sab nasht ho jaayega ...

Abhi - aisi kya samasya ...aagayi hai ...jara vistar se batane ki krupa kare ...

tab Satyanand ji ne Darmen k baare mein sab bata diya ....Abhi ko aascharya hua ...Darmen k itne varsho baad bhavishya mein jeevit hone par ...

Satyanand ji - Samrat har jeev ki mrityu ka kaaran pahele hi nirdharit hota hai ...ussi prakar ..Darmen ki mrityu aapke hi haato dwara aur Arsalan k mahaastra dwara hi sambhav hai ....Maa para shakti ne issi kaaran woh maarak urja Arsalan ko di thi jo ab unke banaye Maha astra mein hai ...Darmen kewal ussi Maha astra se maara jaa sakta hai ...shighra kijiye anyatha bhavishya k uss samay kaal mein maha vinash ho jaayega ....

Satyanand ji ne Abhi ko uss samay kaal k baare mein bataya ..aur waha se adrishya ho gaye ....Abhi bhi ab Maha astra lekar ussi samay kaal mein pahuncha ...jaha ..Darmen aakash mein sthit ho hokar maha vinash phaila raha tha ...Aur Abhi uske vinash ko rokne mein laga hua tha ...

ussi samay Abhi maha astra lekar waha aakash mein sthit ho gaya ...

Abhi - Ruk jaao Darmen bahut ho gaya tumahara khel ...ab tumahara anth samay aagaya hai ....

Abhi ki aawaj sunkar Darmen aur uss samay k Abhi ne Maha astra liye hue Abhi ko dekha ...Darmen Maha astra liye hue Abhi ko dekhkar kaanp gaya ...kyu ki woh jaanta tha ....k ...uss maha astra se hi uski mrityu sambhav hai ....Abhi bhi aakash mein ek aur Abhi ko dekh raha tha ..

Iske pahele ki Darmen kuch aur karta ...Abhi ne maha astra ki urja ka halka vaar Darmen par kiya ...jusase woh kissi kati patang ki tarah bhumi par aakar gira ....Darmen k niche girte hi Abhi ne usse apne urja paash mein bandh diya .....

Ab dono Abhi aamne samne the ....Abhi apne bhutkaal k roop ko dekhkar bahut prasanna hua ....Darmen k saath yudh karte hue ..jab Abhi apne poorna roop mein aaya toh usse ..Darmen ki mrityu ka rahasya oata chala ...aur ysne Janalok mein Satyanand ji se sampark karke ...bhutkaal mein jaakar Uss samay k Abhi tak yeh baat pahunchane ki jimmedari saunpi ....

Vartaman Aur Bhootkaal k Abhi dono aame saamne the .....aur dono hi prasanna the kyuki Darmen ki mrityu ka saath hi dono k janam ka udesshya poorna hone wala tha .....

Abhi ab Darmen aur Maha astra lekar wapas apne samay mein Arin grah le aaya ....Abhi apne pita Arsalan aur sabhi Arin grah k wasiyo k saamne Darmen ko mrityu dand dena chahta tha ...

Arin Grah laakar .....Arsalan k mahal k saamne Vishal ...maidan k bicho bich Darmen ..Abhi k yrja paash mein bandha hua tha ....

Arsalan - Darmen dekho aaj apne aapko tumne kya paaya .....tumne Raaj ...aur shaktiyo lk laalach mein burai ka raasta chuna .....jab k tum bhi meri hi tarah para shakti ki sanran the ...tum mein woh kabiliyat thi ..k tum aache marg se bhi sarvatra pooje jaate ....aaj tum apna sab kuch kho chuke ho...apna pariwar apni shaktiya sabhi ..Jiss Eblis ki baaton mein aakar tum uske gulam bane dekho aaj woh bhi tumahara saath chodkar jaa chuka hai .....

Darmen - Arsalan yeh sab anargal prapap band karo ....maine kych bhi galat nahi kiya .....mahatva kansha rakhne aur usse poora karne ka prayatna karne ka sabko adhikar hai ....myzhe mauka mila toh main phir se iss grah ko tabah kar dunga ....jisne kabhi muzhe apna nahi samzha ....Tumhe aur tumahare saare pariqar ko samapt kar dunga jo meri barbadi ka kaaran hai .....mein tum se jyada balshali tha ..phir bhi ...tumhe yaha ka raaj mila aur mein bas tumahara sevak bankar rah gaya ....maine jo bhi kiya uska muzhe koi malal nahi

Abhi - bas ab bahut ho gaya Darmen yeh kahkar tumne apni mrityu sunishchit kar li ....yadi tum aaj sacche hriday se kshama maangte toh ek baar tumhe jeevan dan dene k baare mein sochta bhi ..parantu ab aur nahi ....

itna kahkar Abhi ne Uss maha astra ki maarak urja ka Darmen par prahaar kiya ....uske lagte hi ...Darmen ka sharir dhu dhu kar k jalne laga uski chwekhe waha gunjne lagi ..aur dekhte hi dekhte woh raakh k dher mein badal gaya .....aur anth hua Darmen k yug ka ...

Darmen ki mrityu k kuch samay baad Abhi aur teeno patniyo ne apna woh sharir tyaga aur apne mool roop mein aagaye ....Arsalan aur uske puteo ko Abhi ne apne divya roop k darshan karaye ..aur apni patniyo k saath wapas Janalok aagaya ....

Yaha Vartaman ka Abhi ..bhoot kaal k Abhi k Darmen k saath jaane k baad .....waha se wapas ...ussi jagah pahuncha jaha ....ek Shivali ko chodkar ...buri awastha mein the ....Abhi aur Shivali ne milkar Sabhi ko heal kiya .....aur wapas apne ghar aagaye ....

Samay par Deepu aur Kirti ka vivah hua ...Shiviom ..Krish ..aur ..Virat ..ka bhi .unke anusar yogya kanya se vivah hua .....Kuch hi varsho mein RVS aur Naina ki bhi mukti hui

Apne pritvi k uss janam ka kartavya poora karke Abhi aur usski patniya ...Uss manav sharir ko tyagkar ...Divya roop se wapas Janalok mein sthit ho gaye ....

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