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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

Aapko Kahani kese lag rahi hai...

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Nky

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Update - 12

abhi tak aapne dekha ..... Abhi k paanchve janamdin ki tayarri

Patal lok meinAbhi ki ek Shakti Madalsa
Abhi ka Gupt Shivalaya mein jaana aur box kholna.....

aur ek dahad ab aage.....


Jaise hi aakriti ne Sher ka roop dharan kiya aur dahada toh jaane kyu abhi ussko dekhkar darne k baajaye muskurane laga aur sher ko jaise hi haa lagane wala tha tabhi Mahaguru R.V.S ko lekar waha pragat hogaye aur turrant Abhi ko rok diya.

Dono ke waha aane se Abhi ka dhyan bhang ho gaya...aur woh behosh ho gaya

R.V.S uss sher ko dekhkar ashchyara chakit ho gaya, kyu ki woh aam Shero se 4 guna bada tha, aur uski aankhon se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi

R.V.S - Gurudev yeh sab kya hai...aur yeh sher kaha se aaya....kahi yeh mere putra ko nuksan na pahucha de

Mahaguru - tumahare saare sawalo k jawab tumhe milenge putra...paratu pahle mein woh kaam kar lu jiske liye mein aaya hu

itna kahkar MAHAGURU ne Tridevo ka dhyan kar ke unki aagya mangi fir unhi k mantro ko padte hue Uss sher par jal k chitte kiye.......aur tabhi R.V.S
K ashcharya ki koi sima nahi rahi

woh bhayankar Sher badal gaya en 5 saal ne bade hi maasoom balak mein jo dikhne mein chandrama k saman shital dikh raha tha aur R.V.S ki taraf dekhkar muskura raha tha..

Mahaguru - putra yeh tumahare iss putra ki Sangharak shakti hai jo kaal ka hi pratiroop hai ...

R.V.S - parantu gurudev hamare vansh mein mili hui sangharak shakti toh mere paas bhi hai ...toh ussne toh kabhi aisa roop dharan nahi kiya

Mahaguru - Putra tumahari sangharak shakti kewal iss prithvi lok tak hi simit ha ......aur isski Sangharak shaki ....tumahare vansh ko mila vardan ,Abhi ki Shastra shakti aur PARASHAKTI ki urja teeno ko milakar
bani hai .. Abhi chahe toh iss shakti dwara pal bhar mein iss prithvi ka naash kar sakta hai abhi yeh abhi shant swaroop mein hai...... jab bhi Abhi par koi sankat aayega tab hi yeh sakriya hoga aur apne KAAL roop mein aayega....

abhi hume isse ek sansarik naam dena hoga

R.V.S - Gurudev mein isse naam deta hu RAKESH...

phir mahaguru ne Rakesh ko apni shaktiyo dwara apne aashram pahucha diya...Tab tak Abhi ko bhi hosh aagaya.... hosh mein aate hi woh idhar udhar dekhne laga

Abhi - Papa mera sher kaha gaya muzhe woh chahiye....woh mera dost hai papa.....muzhe milna hai usse

R.V.S - jarur milenge Beta, lekin yeh baat apni mom ko mat batana, bahi toh woh dar jaayegi aur tumhe milne nahi degi

ABHI - nahi bataunga mein promise
karta hu papa

R.V.S - thats like a good boy

Mahaguru - Rana putra ab iss safed box ko kholne ka bhi samay aagaya hai aaj hawan k baad tum isse khol dena

ab R.V.S Mahaguru aur Abhi k saath hawan mandap mein pahuch gaya..

tab tak Naina aur Ritu bhi tayar hokar waha pahuch gayi thi aur abhi ko dhund rahi thi, mahaguru ne apni maya se rache hue sunder varstro se Abhi ko ekdum Raaj kumar ki tarah bana diya tha,

Apne bete koo itne sunder roop mein dekhkar Naina bahut khush ho gayi

Abhi - Maa ..maa yeh dekho Guruji ne kitne sunder kapde diye hai....kaisa lag raha hu mein

Naina - arre mera betu toh bikul Raja lag raha hai ...khai kisi ki nazar na lag jaaye...itna kahkar naina ne apni aankho se kajal nikalkar Abhi k kaan k picche laga diya.

Ab hawan shuru hua jaise jaise aahutiya padne lagi waise waise ek ek karke Abhi k charo taraf 5 rango ka bana hua ek gol chakra pragat hua aur dheere dheere Abhi mein samane laga
yeg drisya kewal R.V.S ,Acharya Somdutt aur Mahaguruhi dekh paaye


Hawan samapt hua Aur mahaguru k nirdesha anusar safed box khola gaya jissmein se safed energy nikalte hi Naina k garbh mein pal rahi bacchi k ander sama gayi .

Ab Mahaguru ek baar phir R.V.S aur ABHI ko lekar pahuch gaye gupt shivalaya , aur Bhagwan shiv ko pranam kiya

tabhi ABHI bol utha

ABHI - Mahaguru , abhi jaldi hi mera iss manav roop ki shiksha shuru kardo, kyuki isske baad muzhe apni 14 Shaktiya ko bhi punah prapt karna hai...
R.V.S - Abhi ki taraf dekhkar sochne laga ki abhi ko sab pata kaise chala

Tabhi Abhi normal hote hue

Abhi - Papa chalo na muzhe bahut bhukh lagi hai muzhe mom k paas jaana hai

R.V.S ka sir chakra gaya......
Gurudev yeh sab kya hai...

Mahaguru - Putra yeh dono hi tumahare putra k do roop hai
ek roop woh jissko saari baatein pata hai ...jaha tak ki jo gyan muzhe bhi nahi pata woh gyan bhi samaya hai

aur dusra roop sadharan manav ka jo innsab baatoin se anjaan hai

ab iiski shiksha ka bhi samay aagaya hai putra jo mere aashram mein hogi,

tabhi Abhi k Sharir se woh roop bahar aaya dono roop ek jaise Sadharan roop ko lekar R.V.S pahuch gaya Naina k paas aur
Dusre roop ko lekar Mahaguru pahuch gaye apne aashram.....

ab se mein jo Abhi ghar par hai usse Abhi likhunga..
Aur jo ABHI jo Mahaguru se shiksha grahan kar raha hai Usse A1 likhunga

aaj k liye itna hi ....
agla update kal......
Nice update bhai
 

Vickey1211

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Update - 12

abhi tak aapne dekha ..... Abhi k paanchve janamdin ki tayarri

Patal lok meinAbhi ki ek Shakti Madalsa
Abhi ka Gupt Shivalaya mein jaana aur box kholna.....

aur ek dahad ab aage.....


Jaise hi aakriti ne Sher ka roop dharan kiya aur dahada toh jaane kyu abhi ussko dekhkar darne k baajaye muskurane laga aur sher ko jaise hi haa lagane wala tha tabhi Mahaguru R.V.S ko lekar waha pragat hogaye aur turrant Abhi ko rok diya.

Dono ke waha aane se Abhi ka dhyan bhang ho gaya...aur woh behosh ho gaya

R.V.S uss sher ko dekhkar ashchyara chakit ho gaya, kyu ki woh aam Shero se 4 guna bada tha, aur uski aankhon se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi

R.V.S - Gurudev yeh sab kya hai...aur yeh sher kaha se aaya....kahi yeh mere putra ko nuksan na pahucha de

Mahaguru - tumahare saare sawalo k jawab tumhe milenge putra...paratu pahle mein woh kaam kar lu jiske liye mein aaya hu

itna kahkar MAHAGURU ne Tridevo ka dhyan kar ke unki aagya mangi fir unhi k mantro ko padte hue Uss sher par jal k chitte kiye.......aur tabhi R.V.S
K ashcharya ki koi sima nahi rahi

woh bhayankar Sher badal gaya en 5 saal ne bade hi maasoom balak mein jo dikhne mein chandrama k saman shital dikh raha tha aur R.V.S ki taraf dekhkar muskura raha tha..

Mahaguru - putra yeh tumahare iss putra ki Sangharak shakti hai jo kaal ka hi pratiroop hai ...

R.V.S - parantu gurudev hamare vansh mein mili hui sangharak shakti toh mere paas bhi hai ...toh ussne toh kabhi aisa roop dharan nahi kiya

Mahaguru - Putra tumahari sangharak shakti kewal iss prithvi lok tak hi simit ha ......aur isski Sangharak shaki ....tumahare vansh ko mila vardan ,Abhi ki Shastra shakti aur PARASHAKTI ki urja teeno ko milakar
bani hai .. Abhi chahe toh iss shakti dwara pal bhar mein iss prithvi ka naash kar sakta hai abhi yeh abhi shant swaroop mein hai...... jab bhi Abhi par koi sankat aayega tab hi yeh sakriya hoga aur apne KAAL roop mein aayega....

abhi hume isse ek sansarik naam dena hoga

R.V.S - Gurudev mein isse naam deta hu RAKESH...

phir mahaguru ne Rakesh ko apni shaktiyo dwara apne aashram pahucha diya...Tab tak Abhi ko bhi hosh aagaya.... hosh mein aate hi woh idhar udhar dekhne laga

Abhi - Papa mera sher kaha gaya muzhe woh chahiye....woh mera dost hai papa.....muzhe milna hai usse

R.V.S - jarur milenge Beta, lekin yeh baat apni mom ko mat batana, bahi toh woh dar jaayegi aur tumhe milne nahi degi

ABHI - nahi bataunga mein promise
karta hu papa

R.V.S - thats like a good boy

Mahaguru - Rana putra ab iss safed box ko kholne ka bhi samay aagaya hai aaj hawan k baad tum isse khol dena

ab R.V.S Mahaguru aur Abhi k saath hawan mandap mein pahuch gaya..

tab tak Naina aur Ritu bhi tayar hokar waha pahuch gayi thi aur abhi ko dhund rahi thi, mahaguru ne apni maya se rache hue sunder varstro se Abhi ko ekdum Raaj kumar ki tarah bana diya tha,

Apne bete koo itne sunder roop mein dekhkar Naina bahut khush ho gayi

Abhi - Maa ..maa yeh dekho Guruji ne kitne sunder kapde diye hai....kaisa lag raha hu mein

Naina - arre mera betu toh bikul Raja lag raha hai ...khai kisi ki nazar na lag jaaye...itna kahkar naina ne apni aankho se kajal nikalkar Abhi k kaan k picche laga diya.

Ab hawan shuru hua jaise jaise aahutiya padne lagi waise waise ek ek karke Abhi k charo taraf 5 rango ka bana hua ek gol chakra pragat hua aur dheere dheere Abhi mein samane laga
yeg drisya kewal R.V.S ,Acharya Somdutt aur Mahaguruhi dekh paaye


Hawan samapt hua Aur mahaguru k nirdesha anusar safed box khola gaya jissmein se safed energy nikalte hi Naina k garbh mein pal rahi bacchi k ander sama gayi .

Ab Mahaguru ek baar phir R.V.S aur ABHI ko lekar pahuch gaye gupt shivalaya , aur Bhagwan shiv ko pranam kiya

tabhi ABHI bol utha

ABHI - Mahaguru , abhi jaldi hi mera iss manav roop ki shiksha shuru kardo, kyuki isske baad muzhe apni 14 Shaktiya ko bhi punah prapt karna hai...
R.V.S - Abhi ki taraf dekhkar sochne laga ki abhi ko sab pata kaise chala

Tabhi Abhi normal hote hue

Abhi - Papa chalo na muzhe bahut bhukh lagi hai muzhe mom k paas jaana hai

R.V.S ka sir chakra gaya......
Gurudev yeh sab kya hai...

Mahaguru - Putra yeh dono hi tumahare putra k do roop hai
ek roop woh jissko saari baatein pata hai ...jaha tak ki jo gyan muzhe bhi nahi pata woh gyan bhi samaya hai

aur dusra roop sadharan manav ka jo innsab baatoin se anjaan hai

ab iiski shiksha ka bhi samay aagaya hai putra jo mere aashram mein hogi,

tabhi Abhi k Sharir se woh roop bahar aaya dono roop ek jaise Sadharan roop ko lekar R.V.S pahuch gaya Naina k paas aur
Dusre roop ko lekar Mahaguru pahuch gaye apne aashram.....

ab se mein jo Abhi ghar par hai usse Abhi likhunga..
Aur jo ABHI jo Mahaguru se shiksha grahan kar raha hai Usse A1 likhunga

aaj k liye itna hi ....
agla update kal......
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
 

abhi1008

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abhi tak aapne dekha......kaal ka jnam......aur Abhi k do roop
ab ....aage.....


old Roopnagar mein din mein khub utsav chala aur raat ko ek shandar party .......aaj Abhi k sabhi rishtedar aaye hue the ....raat mein roshni se jagmagata hua mahl aur bhi shandar lag raha tha

Abhi ne apna birthday cake kaata aur shuru hui party......ab shuru hua gifts ka silsila jo Abhi ko bahut pasand aaya ...... lekin abhi ko kisi chij ka intezar tha....... Tabhi Ritu ko dekhkar , Abhi bahut khush hua ......

Abhi - Didu kaha gayi thi aap mein aapko hi dhund raha tha........

Ritu - Kahi nahi betu bas tere liye kuch surprise tha woh hi lene gayi thi
itna kahkar di ne abhi ko ek gift diya

Abhi se raha nahi gaya ussne turrant usse khol kar dekha.... toh ussme ek gold ka mouth organ beshkimati daimonds se jada hua usse dekhkar Abhi bahut khuh hua ......arre didu aapne ne muzhe sabse accha gift diya hai ....wao yeh kitna khubsurat hai

Ritu - accha mere betu ko gift pasand aaya toh ab hum sab ko bajakar bhi suna do

sab baccha party Abhi ko gher kar baith gayi Chacha ki do ladkiya
Payal aur Shreya, .....massi ki dono ladkia Monika Aur Lovely...........
badi bua ki Pari ,avya abhi bahut chotti thi apni maa ko godi mein

Abhi yani meine tabhi dekha Chotti si gudiya ekdum cute doll jaisi pari muzhe tak pahunchne ki koshish kar rahi hai .....alle mujhe jaane do na.....muzhe bhi bhai ko gift dena hai..tabhi usske haath ka gulab baccho ki bhid mein gir gaya ....aur uske chehra udaas ho gaya....

Ritu - kya hua abhi sunao na koi dhun

toh mein didu ko pari ki aur dekhne ko ishare se batata hu.....

Mein -- Pari kya hua meri Gudiya ...

Pari - Dekho na bhai ...yeh chhaale bacche gande hai.... mela lose gila diya ...aul muje aapke paas aane bhi nahi de lahe hai.....

Mein - sb ko side karte hue pari ko apne paas le aata hu....Aise kisi ko gande nahi bolte shona...

Accha rose toh ab gir gaya ab muzhe kya gift dogi shona

meri baat sunkar Pari kuch sochne lagi ....phir meri godi mein chadkar mere galoo par kiss kar diya

aur baith gayi meri godi mein.....

mein - wah mera shona baccha yeh gift toh bahut accha hai ...

meri baat sunkar pari bas mere taraf dekhkar muskura rahi thi..

phir meine mouth Organ bajanna shuru kiya aur kho gaya sangeet mein

mera dhyan sabki taaliyo se tuta ...aise enjoy karte karte party khatam ho gayi ....

Papa ko Shahar jaana pada kisi jaruri kaam se toh woh Ritu di ko saath le gaye....di jana nahi chahti thi lekin school ki wajah se unko janna pada..

Ab mein aur mom Rah gaye Dada dadi k saath mahal mei , yaha mere bahut se dost banne.....yaha ki hariyali , kal kal karti nadi .panchiyo ki awaaje sabhi kuch muzhe bahut accha lagta tha

ab dekhte hai humare Abhi ka dusra roop kya kar raha hai..
Jaise hi Mahaguru muzhe apne saath apne aashram laaye ...waha aashram k bahar ki mere jitna ki koi baccha mere saamne ghutno par baith gaya
.....
Aapka ka swagat hai mere maalik..

usse pahchankar mmaine usse uthakar gale se lagaya.....
A1- mitra tum mere hi shaktiyo k ansh ho ...aur yeh muzhe maalik bulana accha nahi lagta tum muxhe bhai hi bulao.

Rakesh - jaisi aapki iccha bhai

A1 - yeh hui na baat , mere yr

phir Mahaguru ne aacharya somdutta ko mere rahene ki vyastha karne ko kaha

ek kutiya mein meri vyastha kar di gayi
ab meine waha ka najara dekha toh yeh jagah ekdum ekaant mein himalaya ki pahadiyon par sthit thi ... charoo aur unche unche parvat....aur ek bahut badi zheel...jismein paani paas k hi jharne se aata hai ....

wahi paas mein ek maidan jaha kuch vidyarthi shastra kala ka abhyas kar rahe the, zheel k paas hi ek vishal bargad ka ped hai jaha vedo aur upanishido ki shiksha di jaati hai

wahi kuch duri par baag baagicha jaha aashram k liye fal aur sabjiya ugaye jaate hai aur thodi dur par ek Gaushala....jaha bahut se gaumataye rakhi hui thi

aashram ko dekhte dekhte ek baat samaj aagayi thi ki yaha ka saara kaam yaha k vidyaarthi hi karte hai,

yeh aashram Himalaya ki ek ghatti par sthit hai, Mahaguru ki shakti se koi bhi bahar ka vyakti iss aashram ko dekh nahi sakta ...

Ghumte ghumte muzhe sham ho gayi

aur pahuch gaya mein apni kutiya mein , ......mein prithvi lok mein janam lene se pahelewale apne swaroop aur usski shaktiyo ko jaanta tha .....isiliye muzhe lagne laga Mahaguru muzhe vyarth yaha le aaye mein toh aapni saari shaktiya jaanta hu....aur muzhe kuch sikhne ki bhi jarurat nahi hai...
aise hi mera samay barbad hoga...

yeh ahankar hi vyakti ki vikas ka baadhak hota hai, mein apni smritiyon k chalte yeh bhul chuka tha ki iss samay mein manav sharir mein hu

aur iss sharir ki kuch simaaye hoti hai jab tak isski shaktiyo ko jaagrit na kiya jaaye

( jaise mobile kitna bhi mehanga aur stylish ho lekin bina charge kiye bekar hi rahta hai)

aur isse jaagrit kiya jaata hai kathin parishram aur abhyas se

tabhi Rakesh kuch fal lekar mere paas aaya..... yeh fal Gurudev ne aapke liye bheje hai ......aur kaha hai aaj aaram karlo ...kal se Shiksha aarambha karenge.....itna kahkr woh jaane laga ..toh maine usse haath pakdkar apne paas bithaya ......arre kaha jaa raha hai yr ....thodi der jara apne dost k paas nahi baithega.......

Rakesh - mein......kaise....aaap k paaas baith saaakta hu

uska aise haklaate bolte hue dekhkar muzhe hasee aagayi...mein bola arre arre kya hua aise ghabra kyu raha hai ..

phir humne saath milkar fal khaaye ab raat ho rahi thi Rakesh muzhe kutiya mein chod kar chala gaya, ab muzhe nind aane lagi toh meine dekha sone k liye sukhi ghass ka k gadda sa banaya tha aur uske upar ek patli si chadar,

raat ka samay aur Himalaya toh aap samaj hi sakte honge ki thand kaisi hogi
thand lagne lagi toh mein bahar nikalkar tahlne laga , khulle aakash mein chamakte taaro ko dekhte dhekte jaa raha tha ki achanak kisi se takra gaya ... tabhi ek surili par gusse se bhari aawaj aayi .....

awaaj - uff.....yeh kaun andha ...bewakuf...langoor ki dum.......akdu ...gadha ....nalayak ..hai

apne liye pahli baar itne aise naamo ko kisi k muh se sunkar muzhe ajeeb sa laga aur saath mein hasee bhi aayi

jab maine saamne dekha toh niche jamin par mere dhake se giri hui ek ladki ko dekha , jiske baal bikhare hue the gusse mein gaal aur laal ho gaye the ...badi badi aankhein ...jinko dekhkar jaane mein kaha kho gaya
ki muzhe dhyan hi nahi raha ki uske muh se mere liye kaisi kaisi upmaye nikal rahi hai.....

tabhi ussnne paas pade ek kankad ko meri tarf phenka jisse mein wapas laut aaya

ladki - ek toh muzhe girate ho aur upar se ghur ghur kar dekhte ho
aur uthate bhi nahi ...batameez kahi k

mein usse uthane k liye apna haath aage kiya , jaise hi ussne mera haath pakda jaane kyu muzhe aisa laga jaise yeh mera hi ek ang hai

tabhi ladki ne apna haath chudaya aur jaane lagi

mein - arre apna naam toh bata do

ladki - mein langoor ko apna naam nahi batati ithna kahkar eoh andhere mein gum ho gayi

itne mein aashram ke hi kisi shsha k haato guruji ne ek kambal bheja jisse lekar chal diya apni kutiya mein sone..

un do aankhon ko sochte sochte jo aaj takarai so gaya gahri nind mein..

abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update jald hi.....
 
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