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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)
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ab tak aapne A1 ----- ki shiksha dekhi maha guru k
aashram mein....aur Shalini...
ka saath.......C.T aur rakesh ki dosti......Aur Uday k saath
nok - jhonk ....inn sab paatro ko yaap rakhe yeh kahani mein aham bhumika mein hai.....
ab A1 ko apni traning karne dete hai.... dekhte hai udhar Rana mahal mein jo Abhi hai waha kya chal rah hai..
Janamdin k utsav k baad R.V.S Ritu ko lekar sahar chale gaye the aur yaha Abhi aur naina rah gaye the gaon ke Rana mahal mein.
Abhi ko gaon k shudh vatavaran aur harliyali , waha k logo ka saadgi se bhara jeewan bahut accha lag raha tha .....Lekin apni pyari Ritu di ki kami bahut khali thi....
Gaon mein Abhi k dadaji R.S.S kushti k bade shaukin the Toh abhi ko abhi apne saath kushti k aakhade le jaate the aur kasrat karwate the.....Abhi ko yeh ladna khushti waigere pasand nahi thi ..isiliye woh bahane bannane ki koshish karta tha lekin dadaji k aage uski ek nahi chalti thi ...
R.S.S ko Abhi ko lekar badi chinta hoti thi ki kaise woh virasat mein milne wali shaktiyo ko sambhalega....
R.S.S Abhi k sach se anjan the...
Apne bete R.V.S k gaddi par baithne k baad unhone apni shaktiya sankalp karke tyag di thi aur sadharan jeewan jina swikar kiya tha
aise hi ek din jab woh apne farmhouse gaye the Abhi ko lekar..... aur waha kheti kaam kane wale majduro ki samsya sun rahe the the ...ki tabhi
waha bane Ghode k astabal mein ek bada sa kala Ghoda Bekaabu ho gaya tha... astabal k ki rassiya aur bandhan usko rok nahi paa rahe tha......abhi bhi waha paas mein ghum raha tha....5 -5
log milkar bhi usse nahi sambhal paa rahe the ...kisi ne R.S.S ko khabar kar di ..R.S.S abhi paahunchte isse pahele ghode ne saare bandhan tod diye aur Daud laga di ...wahi Jab Abhi ne dekha k bada sa ghoda uski taraf hi bade veg se aaraha hai toh woh bahut dar gaya aur apna haath aage kar diya
Tab tak Abhi k dada bhi waha pahunch gaye aur unhone Abhi k haath se blue colour ki urja nikal te hue dekhi jo uss Kaale ghode ko chute hi woh shaant ho gaya
yeh Dekhkar R.S.S k mann mein Abhi ko lekar jitni chintaye thi sab samapt ho gayi
(kabhi kabhi bhay ki adhikta k kaaran humare ander chippi hui shakti bahar aati hai)
R.S.S - Beta Abhi aapni aankhein toh kholo bete Dekho kitna sunder ghoda hai
Abhi - nahi Dadu muzhe dar lag raha hai ..yeh toh bahut bada ghoda hai
tabhi Abhi ko apne haatho par kuch gila gila sa mahsus hota hai .....
jab woh aankhien kholkar dekhta hai toh ghoda shant khada tha aur usska haath chat raha tha...
Abhi - chi ...chi dekho na dadaji issne mera haath ganda kar diya
R.S.S - beta yeh tumse dosti karna chahta hai ...isska naam VAAYU hai
kya tum dosti karoge isse...
Abhi - Sach dadu kya yeh muzhse dosti karega....
Dadu - haa beta ..tum ek baar isska naam pukar kar toh dekho
Abhi -- Vyaau kya tum muzhe dosti karoge...
Ghode ne bhi hinhinakar jawab diya
ab abhi ussi Ghode vyaau par baithkar gaon ghumne laga...posts
Naina ka garb ab 9 mahine ka ho gaya tha ..ab kabhi bhi baccha ho sakta hai isiliye R.V.S bhi Ritu k saath gaon aagaya tha .....apni Ritu di se milkar bahut khush ho gaya ...
aise hi Naina ne ek bahut sunder kanya ko janam diya .......
ek baar phir Mahal khushiyon se jagmagane laga......sab bahut khush the......Abhi toh jaise uss nahi pari ko dekhkar sab kuch mil gaya tha......
kyu na ho Abhi k Pran aur pranshakti Mahaguru ne iss kanya mein jo daali thi. jaise kisi jaadugar k pran kissi chidiya mein rakh diye jaate the waise hi...
( pran shakti matlab jab krodh aaye toh kissi k bhi pran sokh le aur jab daya aaye toh kissi bhi rog ko pal bhar mein thik kar de --- healing power)
Ab Abhi wapas city mein aagaya tha
R.V.S ne Abhi ka admission Ritu k hi School mein karvaya...
yeh R.V.S dwara banaya gaya school
hai .....yaha har tarah ki education hoti hai , yeh ek bahut bade area mein faila hua hai, Jaha bahut saare section hai
R.V.S Kidz zhone, RVS Vidya mandir
R.V.S Institute for higher studies
R.V.S - institute of science & technology
aaj Abhi ka school mein pahla din tha
Abhi ka admission first standerd mein hua tha.
School ka pahla din New uniform aur itne saare bacche dekhkar Abhi bahut khush ho gaya tha.......Ritu ne abhi ko usske class tak choda..
Ritu di - Betu yeh rahi tumahari class yaha sb tumahare dost hai , ghabrana nahi ...aur haa lunch time mein main aaungi hum saath mein lunch karenge
itna kahkar mein class k andaar chala gaya toh dekha sabhi jagah full hai
sirf last bench par jagah khali hai jaha ek dubla patla sa ladka baitha tha....mein waha jaakar baith gaya
maine apna haath aage kiya ...
haaye mein Abhi kya tum muzhse dosti karoge ... mere aisa kahne par ussne meri taraf dekha toh usski aankon mein aansun the
mein - arre ...arre...arre aise rote kyu ho agar dosti nahi karni toh koi baat nahi.
ladka - nahi aisi koi baat nahi yaha aaya tab se sab muzhe chida rahe hai
ek tum hi ho jisne muzh se acche se baat ki ....mera naam Bhanu hai....
friends...
tabhi class mein hulchul hui...aur sabhi khade ho gaye ...toh mein bhi
ho gaya
ek madam jo dikhne mein bahut strict lag rahi thi
Madam - Sitdown all of you, My name is Savalani and i am your class teacher...... and now my little students give your introduction one by one
Sabhi apna apna intro de rahe the
Toh maine bhi Apna naam bata diya
ab baari aayi Bhanu ki toh woh bhi khada ho gaya
Madam - hey you... tum bina uniform k kaise aagaye ...pata nahi kaha kaha se aate hai......kal apne parents ko laana uniform k saath nahi toh nahi aana...
madam baato se Bhanu ki aakhon mein aansoo aagaye, aur muzhe bhi bahut bura laga....
aise hi lunch time aagaya aur didu lunch k liye muzhe lene aagayi..
mein - chalo bhanu tum bhi chalo na saath
bhanu - nahi muzhe bhukh nahi hai tum jaao
mein - agar tum nahi jaaoge toh mein bhi nahi jaaunga
bhanu - thik hai phir chalte hai
didu k saath hum canteen pahuch gaye , waha didu ne order diya ..tab tak maine aaj class mein kya hua sab bata diya ...
didi - kyu Bhanu tumne Uniform kyu nahi pehni
Bhanu - di mere papa nahi hai aur maa gharo mein kaam karke apna ghar chalati hai , woh bhi chati hai k mein kaabil bannu ...isiliye unhone mera admission yaha karwaya
Admission toh free mein ho gaya lekin humare paas uniform k paise nahi hai
Di ko uski baatien snkar bahut bura laga toh di ne ussi samay papa ko school bulaya....jab Rana sahab ne pucha toh di ne kaha
di - papa aapne garibo k liye free education toh kar di , lekin unke unifrom ka aur khanne k baare mein nahi socha ....mein chahti hu ki aaj se hi yeh saari facilities provide karni chahiye
R.V.S - muzhe tumpar garv hai beta ki tumhe abhi se apni dusro k dukho ka ahsas ho raha hai .. mein aaj hi Ek meeting fix karke ye saare changes laane ki koshish karunga..
issi tarah pahla din bit gaya .......
aur shuru hua school ka dusra din..
aaj Bhanu muzhe class k bahar hi mil gaya ...naayi Uniform aur naaye bag aur shoes k saath bahut khush lag raha tha, ussne muzhe dekhte ki khushi se gale laga liya..phir hum pahunche class mein aur baith gaye apni jagah ...last bench..
Madam class mein aayi aur sabki attendence lene lagi ki tabhi ek aawaj aayi .....may i come inn madam...toh sabka dhyan uss taraf dekha toh bahut hi cute ladki khadi thi ..
madam - yeh koi time hai aane ka ..kal toh nahi dekha tha tumhe......
new admission lagti ho chalo aajao ..lakin dyan rahe agli baar koi der hua toh mein allow nahi karungi
ander aao aur apna into do ...
Ladki - mam my name iss Rimpy thakur
mam - now go and take your seat
Rimpy ne puri class mein dekha toh siirf mere bagal mein jagah bachhi thi
toh muh fhulakar pair patakte hue aakar baith gayi....gusse se fule hue laal gaal aur badi badi annkien dekhkar muzhe hasee aane lagi....
maine uske taraf dekhkar dheere se kaha ..friends.....toh ussne tirchi aankhon se dekha.... aur ....huhhh ...
kahkar muh ghuma diya....
wahi par kuch students hamari taraf dekhkar kuch khusar fhusar kar rahe the.....unmein ek mota sa ladke tha GOLU jo muzhe baar baar ghur k dekh raha tha....
lunch time mein aaj phir meun aur bhanu di k saath canteen mein the
aur Rimpy .. thodi hi dur par akeli lunch kar rahi thi aur muzhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi ...tabhi golu bhi rimpy k paas aake baith gaya ...
pata nahi unki kya baatein ho rahi thi
aise hi aaj ka din bhi beet gaya....
abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi.....
ab tak aapne A1 ----- ki shiksha dekhi maha guru k
aashram mein....aur Shalini...
ka saath.......C.T aur rakesh ki dosti......Aur Uday k saath
nok - jhonk ....inn sab paatro ko yaap rakhe yeh kahani mein aham bhumika mein hai.....
ab A1 ko apni traning karne dete hai.... dekhte hai udhar Rana mahal mein jo Abhi hai waha kya chal rah hai..
Janamdin k utsav k baad R.V.S Ritu ko lekar sahar chale gaye the aur yaha Abhi aur naina rah gaye the gaon ke Rana mahal mein.
Abhi ko gaon k shudh vatavaran aur harliyali , waha k logo ka saadgi se bhara jeewan bahut accha lag raha tha .....Lekin apni pyari Ritu di ki kami bahut khali thi....
Gaon mein Abhi k dadaji R.S.S kushti k bade shaukin the Toh abhi ko abhi apne saath kushti k aakhade le jaate the aur kasrat karwate the.....Abhi ko yeh ladna khushti waigere pasand nahi thi ..isiliye woh bahane bannane ki koshish karta tha lekin dadaji k aage uski ek nahi chalti thi ...
R.S.S ko Abhi ko lekar badi chinta hoti thi ki kaise woh virasat mein milne wali shaktiyo ko sambhalega....
R.S.S Abhi k sach se anjan the...
Apne bete R.V.S k gaddi par baithne k baad unhone apni shaktiya sankalp karke tyag di thi aur sadharan jeewan jina swikar kiya tha
aise hi ek din jab woh apne farmhouse gaye the Abhi ko lekar..... aur waha kheti kaam kane wale majduro ki samsya sun rahe the the ...ki tabhi
waha bane Ghode k astabal mein ek bada sa kala Ghoda Bekaabu ho gaya tha... astabal k ki rassiya aur bandhan usko rok nahi paa rahe tha......abhi bhi waha paas mein ghum raha tha....5 -5
log milkar bhi usse nahi sambhal paa rahe the ...kisi ne R.S.S ko khabar kar di ..R.S.S abhi paahunchte isse pahele ghode ne saare bandhan tod diye aur Daud laga di ...wahi Jab Abhi ne dekha k bada sa ghoda uski taraf hi bade veg se aaraha hai toh woh bahut dar gaya aur apna haath aage kar diya
Tab tak Abhi k dada bhi waha pahunch gaye aur unhone Abhi k haath se blue colour ki urja nikal te hue dekhi jo uss Kaale ghode ko chute hi woh shaant ho gaya
yeh Dekhkar R.S.S k mann mein Abhi ko lekar jitni chintaye thi sab samapt ho gayi
(kabhi kabhi bhay ki adhikta k kaaran humare ander chippi hui shakti bahar aati hai)
R.S.S - Beta Abhi aapni aankhein toh kholo bete Dekho kitna sunder ghoda hai
Abhi - nahi Dadu muzhe dar lag raha hai ..yeh toh bahut bada ghoda hai
tabhi Abhi ko apne haatho par kuch gila gila sa mahsus hota hai .....
jab woh aankhien kholkar dekhta hai toh ghoda shant khada tha aur usska haath chat raha tha...
Abhi - chi ...chi dekho na dadaji issne mera haath ganda kar diya
R.S.S - beta yeh tumse dosti karna chahta hai ...isska naam VAAYU hai
kya tum dosti karoge isse...
Abhi - Sach dadu kya yeh muzhse dosti karega....
Dadu - haa beta ..tum ek baar isska naam pukar kar toh dekho
Abhi -- Vyaau kya tum muzhe dosti karoge...
Ghode ne bhi hinhinakar jawab diya
ab abhi ussi Ghode vyaau par baithkar gaon ghumne laga...posts
Naina ka garb ab 9 mahine ka ho gaya tha ..ab kabhi bhi baccha ho sakta hai isiliye R.V.S bhi Ritu k saath gaon aagaya tha .....apni Ritu di se milkar bahut khush ho gaya ...
aise hi Naina ne ek bahut sunder kanya ko janam diya .......
ek baar phir Mahal khushiyon se jagmagane laga......sab bahut khush the......Abhi toh jaise uss nahi pari ko dekhkar sab kuch mil gaya tha......
kyu na ho Abhi k Pran aur pranshakti Mahaguru ne iss kanya mein jo daali thi. jaise kisi jaadugar k pran kissi chidiya mein rakh diye jaate the waise hi...
( pran shakti matlab jab krodh aaye toh kissi k bhi pran sokh le aur jab daya aaye toh kissi bhi rog ko pal bhar mein thik kar de --- healing power)
Ab Abhi wapas city mein aagaya tha
R.V.S ne Abhi ka admission Ritu k hi School mein karvaya...
yeh R.V.S dwara banaya gaya school
hai .....yaha har tarah ki education hoti hai , yeh ek bahut bade area mein faila hua hai, Jaha bahut saare section hai
R.V.S Kidz zhone, RVS Vidya mandir
R.V.S Institute for higher studies
R.V.S - institute of science & technology
aaj Abhi ka school mein pahla din tha
Abhi ka admission first standerd mein hua tha.
School ka pahla din New uniform aur itne saare bacche dekhkar Abhi bahut khush ho gaya tha.......Ritu ne abhi ko usske class tak choda..
Ritu di - Betu yeh rahi tumahari class yaha sb tumahare dost hai , ghabrana nahi ...aur haa lunch time mein main aaungi hum saath mein lunch karenge
itna kahkar mein class k andaar chala gaya toh dekha sabhi jagah full hai
sirf last bench par jagah khali hai jaha ek dubla patla sa ladka baitha tha....mein waha jaakar baith gaya
maine apna haath aage kiya ...
haaye mein Abhi kya tum muzhse dosti karoge ... mere aisa kahne par ussne meri taraf dekha toh usski aankon mein aansun the
mein - arre ...arre...arre aise rote kyu ho agar dosti nahi karni toh koi baat nahi.
ladka - nahi aisi koi baat nahi yaha aaya tab se sab muzhe chida rahe hai
ek tum hi ho jisne muzh se acche se baat ki ....mera naam Bhanu hai....
friends...
tabhi class mein hulchul hui...aur sabhi khade ho gaye ...toh mein bhi
ho gaya
ek madam jo dikhne mein bahut strict lag rahi thi
Madam - Sitdown all of you, My name is Savalani and i am your class teacher...... and now my little students give your introduction one by one
Sabhi apna apna intro de rahe the
Toh maine bhi Apna naam bata diya
ab baari aayi Bhanu ki toh woh bhi khada ho gaya
Madam - hey you... tum bina uniform k kaise aagaye ...pata nahi kaha kaha se aate hai......kal apne parents ko laana uniform k saath nahi toh nahi aana...
madam baato se Bhanu ki aakhon mein aansoo aagaye, aur muzhe bhi bahut bura laga....
aise hi lunch time aagaya aur didu lunch k liye muzhe lene aagayi..
mein - chalo bhanu tum bhi chalo na saath
bhanu - nahi muzhe bhukh nahi hai tum jaao
mein - agar tum nahi jaaoge toh mein bhi nahi jaaunga
bhanu - thik hai phir chalte hai
didu k saath hum canteen pahuch gaye , waha didu ne order diya ..tab tak maine aaj class mein kya hua sab bata diya ...
didi - kyu Bhanu tumne Uniform kyu nahi pehni
Bhanu - di mere papa nahi hai aur maa gharo mein kaam karke apna ghar chalati hai , woh bhi chati hai k mein kaabil bannu ...isiliye unhone mera admission yaha karwaya
Admission toh free mein ho gaya lekin humare paas uniform k paise nahi hai
Di ko uski baatien snkar bahut bura laga toh di ne ussi samay papa ko school bulaya....jab Rana sahab ne pucha toh di ne kaha
di - papa aapne garibo k liye free education toh kar di , lekin unke unifrom ka aur khanne k baare mein nahi socha ....mein chahti hu ki aaj se hi yeh saari facilities provide karni chahiye
R.V.S - muzhe tumpar garv hai beta ki tumhe abhi se apni dusro k dukho ka ahsas ho raha hai .. mein aaj hi Ek meeting fix karke ye saare changes laane ki koshish karunga..
issi tarah pahla din bit gaya .......
aur shuru hua school ka dusra din..
aaj Bhanu muzhe class k bahar hi mil gaya ...naayi Uniform aur naaye bag aur shoes k saath bahut khush lag raha tha, ussne muzhe dekhte ki khushi se gale laga liya..phir hum pahunche class mein aur baith gaye apni jagah ...last bench..
Madam class mein aayi aur sabki attendence lene lagi ki tabhi ek aawaj aayi .....may i come inn madam...toh sabka dhyan uss taraf dekha toh bahut hi cute ladki khadi thi ..
madam - yeh koi time hai aane ka ..kal toh nahi dekha tha tumhe......
new admission lagti ho chalo aajao ..lakin dyan rahe agli baar koi der hua toh mein allow nahi karungi
ander aao aur apna into do ...
Ladki - mam my name iss Rimpy thakur
mam - now go and take your seat
Rimpy ne puri class mein dekha toh siirf mere bagal mein jagah bachhi thi
toh muh fhulakar pair patakte hue aakar baith gayi....gusse se fule hue laal gaal aur badi badi annkien dekhkar muzhe hasee aane lagi....
maine uske taraf dekhkar dheere se kaha ..friends.....toh ussne tirchi aankhon se dekha.... aur ....huhhh ...
kahkar muh ghuma diya....
wahi par kuch students hamari taraf dekhkar kuch khusar fhusar kar rahe the.....unmein ek mota sa ladke tha GOLU jo muzhe baar baar ghur k dekh raha tha....
lunch time mein aaj phir meun aur bhanu di k saath canteen mein the
aur Rimpy .. thodi hi dur par akeli lunch kar rahi thi aur muzhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi ...tabhi golu bhi rimpy k paas aake baith gaya ...
pata nahi unki kya baatein ho rahi thi
aise hi aaj ka din bhi beet gaya....
abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi.....
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aise hi aapka saatha bana rahe
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bahut bahut dhnyawad friends
aapke pyar aur saath k liye
aise hi saath banaye rakhe
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Awesome update bhai
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