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ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR



Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai
Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai prithvi se upar 7 lok भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और सत्यलोक
Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok, तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म
स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है
इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है
ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है


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Update 1

अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu

Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh naina ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....
agla update jald hi

Fentastik start bhai abhi ghayal kese huva ye janna padega or saktiyan uske pas he ya eske baad aayegi waiting for next update and congrets for new thred

 

[abhi1008]

Nice start bhai, aage dekhte hai story kaise chalegi...best wishes for new thread... waiting for next

Thanks bhai for your lovely support
aise hi saath banaye rakhe

 

[abhi1008]

Fentastik start bhai abhi ghayal kese huva ye janna padega or saktiyan uske pas he ya eske baad aayegi waiting for next update and congrets for new thred

Welcome bhai ,
Thanks bhai for your wonderful support, aise hi saath banaye rakhe

 

[abhi1008]

Congrats bro for new thread

Thanks bhai for your support

 

[Hayaan]

ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR



Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai
Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai prithvi se upar 7 lok भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और सत्यलोक
Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok, तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म
स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है
इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है
ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है


Code:

Update 1	update 2	update 3	update 4	update 5
update 6	update 7	update 8	update 9	update 10

Update 1

अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu

Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh naina ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....
agla update jald hi

Congratulation Sir Ji..
For New Thread....

Thanks !!

 

[abhi1008]

Update -- 2

Abhi tak aapne dekha hero ka operation chal raha hai ........ ab aage

R.V.S ne dekha operation thetor ka light band ho hua , sabhi ka dhyan uski taraf hi tha, tabhi Doc ko bahar aate dekha toh teeno docter k paas pahuch gaya , doctor ne R.V.S aankon hi aanko mein ishara kake alag bulaya

R.V.S -- kya hua doc sab mera beta kaisa hai ab, chahe jo bhi karo kisi specialist ko bulana hai toh bulao mera beta thik hona chahiye doc
(itna kahkar aanko se aansoo nikal pade)
Doc -- dhyray rakhe Rana sahab , hum puri koshish ka rahe hai , aapka beta ki will ppower hairan karnewali hai 12 goli lagne k baad bhi aur 1goli dil mein lagne par bhi woh jeevan se haar nahi man raha humne saari goliya nikal di, ab dekhte hai kya hota hai
R.V.S -- Kab tak hosh aajaayega usse

Doc -- abhi kuch kah nahi sakte, 24 hrs bahut critical hai

maa se raha nahi gaya aur woh bhi doc k paas aakar puchne lagi

Maa -- kya hua doc , kya kah rahe hai mera beta thik toh ho jaayega na , agar usse kuch ho gaya toh, tum jaante ho kya hoga
(itna kahkar maa jor jor se rone lagi, aankein puri lal ho gayi R.V.S ne kuch anarth ki aashanka se usse gale laga liye aur shant karne lage , aise hi gale lage rote rote maa behosh ho gayi)
maa ko ek chair par bitha kar Rakesh se bole
R.V.S -- Suno beta jara ritu ko bhi dekh aao kaisi hai tab tak mein yaha dekhta hu
Rakesh -- Uncle meri doc se baat ho gayi hai , di abhi behosh hai weakness ki wajah se ,jaldi thik ho jaayegi

R.V.S -- Tumhe pata hai kaun the woh log jinhone yeh kiya hai

Rakesh -- Uncle jab mein waha pahuncha tab woh log wha se nikal rahe the , unka picha karna chahta tha lekin wha abhi ki aisi haalat aur ritu di ka rona dekhkar mein unhe yaha le aaya
R.V.S -- koi baat nahi beta, aaj mein tumahara karjdar hogaya kis muh se tumahara shukriya karu beta.
ab mein dekhlunga unko jinki maut ab koi nahi rok sakta

itna kahkar R.V.S I.G ko ph lagate hai

yaha Rakesh mann mein( uncle aap se pahele mein unko aisi maut dunga ki dekhne walo ki ruh kaaph jaayegi) aur
usski aanko se aag nikalne lagi jaise garam lava ho , lekin jaldi hi usne apne upar control kar liya

yaha ph par IG se
R.V.S -- IG sahab jadli se pata kijiye unka nahi toh aap ko pata hai mein kya kya kar sakta hu
IG -- Rana sahab aap chinta mat kariye, abhi mein aapka hi kaam kar raha hu jaldi hi pata lag jaayega

yha maa ko bhi hosh aagaya , ritu ko bhi alag room mein shift kar diya tha.
teeno ne hero ko icu k bahar lage shise se dekha toh dil mein ek tees uthi abhi ka hasta muskurata chehra aankon k saamne aaya
ab teeno ritu k room mein uske hosh aane ka intejar kar rahe the
ki achanak ek chikh gunji ...........

next update soon

 

[abhi1008]

Congratulation Sir Ji..
For New Thread....

Thanks !!

Welcome bhai , Thanks for your wonderful support , aise hi saath banaye rakhe

update posted.....

 

[Hayaan]

ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR



Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai
Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai prithvi se upar 7 lok भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और सत्यलोक
Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok, तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म
स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है
इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है
ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है


Code:

Update 1	update 2	update 3	update 4	update 5
update 6	update 7	update 8	update 9	update 10

Update 1

अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu

Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh naina ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....
agla update jald hi

Waise Bhai Ji...
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baaki Readers Par Chhod dijiye...
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Hamara Supports Aapke Saath hai...!!


Kaafi Achha Start hai....
Dekhte hai... Aage Aage hota hai Kya....??
Abhi To Shuruaat hai... Panne khulne Baaki hai..

Waiting for Next..

 

[Hayaan]

Welcome bhai , Thanks for your wonderful support , aise hi saath banaye rakhe

update posted.....

Bas Aap Likhte jayen... Support milta Rahega...

 

[Hayaan]

Update -- 2

Abhi tak aapne dekha hero ka operation chal raha hai ........ ab aage

R.V.S ne dekha operation thetor ka light band ho hua , sabhi ka dhyan uski taraf hi tha, tabhi Doc ko bahar aate dekha toh teeno docter k paas pahuch gaya , doctor ne R.V.S aankon hi aanko mein ishara kake alag bulaya

R.V.S -- kya hua doc sab mera beta kaisa hai ab, chahe jo bhi karo kisi specialist ko bulana hai toh bulao mera beta thik hona chahiye doc
(itna kahkar aanko se aansoo nikal pade)
Doc -- dhyray rakhe Rana sahab , hum puri koshish ka rahe hai , aapka beta ki will ppower hairan karnewali hai 12 goli lagne k baad bhi aur 1goli dil mein lagne par bhi woh jeevan se haar nahi man raha humne saari goliya nikal di, ab dekhte hai kya hota hai
R.V.S -- Kab tak hosh aajaayega usse

Doc -- abhi kuch kah nahi sakte, 24 hrs bahut critical hai

maa se raha nahi gaya aur woh bhi doc k paas aakar puchne lagi

Maa -- kya hua doc , kya kah rahe hai mera beta thik toh ho jaayega na , agar usse kuch ho gaya toh, tum jaante ho kya hoga
(itna kahkar maa jor jor se rone lagi, aankein puri lal ho gayi R.V.S ne kuch anarth ki aashanka se usse gale laga liye aur shant karne lage , aise hi gale lage rote rote maa behosh ho gayi)
maa ko ek chair par bitha kar Rakesh se bole
R.V.S -- Suno beta jara ritu ko bhi dekh aao kaisi hai tab tak mein yaha dekhta hu
Rakesh -- Uncle meri doc se baat ho gayi hai , di abhi behosh hai weakness ki wajah se ,jaldi thik ho jaayegi

R.V.S -- Tumhe pata hai kaun the woh log jinhone yeh kiya hai

Rakesh -- Uncle jab mein waha pahuncha tab woh log wha se nikal rahe the , unka picha karna chahta tha lekin wha abhi ki aisi haalat aur ritu di ka rona dekhkar mein unhe yaha le aaya
R.V.S -- koi baat nahi beta, aaj mein tumahara karjdar hogaya kis muh se tumahara shukriya karu beta.
ab mein dekhlunga unko jinki maut ab koi nahi rok sakta

itna kahkar R.V.S I.G ko ph lagate hai

yaha Rakesh mann mein( uncle aap se pahele mein unko aisi maut dunga ki dekhne walo ki ruh kaaph jaayegi) aur
usski aanko se aag nikalne lagi jaise garam lava ho , lekin jaldi hi usne apne upar control kar liya

yaha ph par IG se
R.V.S -- IG sahab jadli se pata kijiye unka nahi toh aap ko pata hai mein kya kya kar sakta hu
IG -- Rana sahab aap chinta mat kariye, abhi mein aapka hi kaam kar raha hu jaldi hi pata lag jaayega

yha maa ko bhi hosh aagaya , ritu ko bhi alag room mein shift kar diya tha.
teeno ne hero ko icu k bahar lage shise se dekha toh dil mein ek tees uthi abhi ka hasta muskurata chehra aankon k saamne aaya
ab teeno ritu k room mein uske hosh aane ka intejar kar rahe the
ki achanak ek chikh gunji ...........

next update soon

Hmm Lagta Hai... Rakesh ke Paas bhi Power hai...

Dekhte hai Rakesh Kaise Handle karta hai....??

Short But Interesting Update...
Waiting For Next...
Thanks..