Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Abhi123]

Bhai mane aptak bahut kahania padi hai par aapki kahani lajawab hai ,mane asi bahut kahani padi hai par aadhi aduri kahai padi hai aapne kahani puri likhi isake lia danawad .
Kahani ka ant bahut shandar tha ..

 

[abhi1008]

Bhai mane aptak bahut kahania padi hai par aapki kahani lajawab hai ,mane asi bahut kahani padi hai par aadhi aduri kahai padi hai aapne kahani puri likhi isake lia danawad .
Kahani ka ant bahut shandar tha ..

Bahut bahut shukriya dost .....Khushi hui jaankar k aapko kahani pasand aayi......

Thanku once again for appreciating my efforts

Kahani ka dusra part bhi shuru hai ...hope aapko ..accha lagega ....

 

[Sam star 7]

Bhai bohot shandar kahani he maine poori padhi bas buri kismat ki kahani ke end hone ke baad mujhe ye mili lekin padhke bohot maza aaya aap bohot achcha likhte hain ab aapki running story padhunga or uspe comments karunga ek or baar congratulations itni achchi story ke liye

 

[abhi1008]

Bhai bohot shandar kahani he maine poori padhi bas buri kismat ki kahani ke end hone ke baad mujhe ye mili lekin padhke bohot maza aaya aap bohot achcha likhte hain ab aapki running story padhunga or uspe comments karunga ek or baar congratulations itni achchi story ke liye

Thanku soo much Bhai ..aapke appreciation k liye ..Jaankar bahut khushi hui k aapko kahani pasand aayi ...

aasha karta hu aapko agli kahani bhi pasand aayegi ..saath bane rahiye..

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR



Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai

Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai

prithvi se upar 7 lok

भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और सत्यलोक

Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok,

तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म

स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है

इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है

ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है

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अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu

Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh Adira ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....
agla update jald hi......

Achi shurwaat bro.

 

[abhi1008]

Achi shurwaat bro.

Thanks a lot bhai..& welcme to the thread

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Update -- 2

Abhi tak aapne dekha hero ka operation chal raha hai ........ ab aage

R.V.S ne dekha operation thetor ka light band ho hua , sabhi ka dhyan uski taraf hi tha, tabhi Doc ko bahar aate dekha toh teeno docter k paas pahuch gaya , doctor ne R.V.S aankon hi aanko mein ishara kake alag bulaya

R.V.S -- kya hua doc sab mera beta kaisa hai ab, chahe jo bhi karo kisi specialist ko bulana hai toh bulao mera beta thik hona chahiye doc
(itna kahkar aanko se aansoo nikal pade)
Doc -- dhyray rakhe Rana sahab , hum puri koshish ka rahe hai , aapka beta ki will ppower hairan karnewali hai 12 goli lagne k baad bhi aur 1goli dil mein lagne par bhi woh jeevan se haar nahi man raha humne saari goliya nikal di, ab dekhte hai kya hota hai
R.V.S -- Kab tak hosh aajaayega usse

Doc -- abhi kuch kah nahi sakte, 24 hrs bahut critical hai

maa se raha nahi gaya aur woh bhi doc k paas aakar puchne lagi

Maa -- kya hua doc , kya kah rahe hai mera beta thik toh ho jaayega na , agar usse kuch ho gaya toh, tum jaante ho kya hoga
(itna kahkar maa jor jor se rone lagi, aankein puri lal ho gayi R.V.S ne kuch anarth ki aashanka se usse gale laga liye aur shant karne lage , aise hi gale lage rote rote maa behosh ho gayi)
maa ko ek chair par bitha kar Rakesh se bole
R.V.S -- Suno beta jara ritu ko bhi dekh aao kaisi hai tab tak mein yaha dekhta hu
Rakesh -- Uncle meri doc se baat ho gayi hai , di abhi behosh hai weakness ki wajah se ,jaldi thik ho jaayegi

R.V.S -- Tumhe pata hai kaun the woh log jinhone yeh kiya hai

Rakesh -- Uncle jab mein waha pahuncha tab woh log wha se nikal rahe the , unka picha karna chahta tha lekin wha abhi ki aisi haalat aur ritu di ka rona dekhkar mein unhe yaha le aaya
R.V.S -- koi baat nahi beta, aaj mein tumahara karjdar hogaya kis muh se tumahara shukriya karu beta.
ab mein dekhlunga unko jinki maut ab koi nahi rok sakta

itna kahkar R.V.S I.G ko ph lagate hai

yaha Rakesh mann mein( uncle aap se pahele mein unko aisi maut dunga ki dekhne walo ki ruh kaaph jaayegi) aur
usski aanko se aag nikalne lagi jaise garam lava ho , lekin jaldi hi usne apne upar control kar liya

yaha ph par IG se
R.V.S -- IG sahab jadli se pata kijiye unka nahi toh aap ko pata hai mein kya kya kar sakta hu
IG -- Rana sahab aap chinta mat kariye, abhi mein aapka hi kaam kar raha hu jaldi hi pata lag jaayega

yha maa ko bhi hosh aagaya , ritu ko bhi alag room mein shift kar diya tha.
teeno ne hero ko icu k bahar lage shise se dekha toh dil mein ek tees uthi abhi ka hasta muskurata chehra aankon k saamne aaya
ab teeno ritu k room mein uske hosh aane ka intejar kar rahe the
ki achanak ek chikh gunji ...........

next update soon

Bohat hi acha update bro.

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Update -- 3

ab tak aapne dekha hero ka opretion ho gaya hai ........ aur R.V.S , Naina aur Rakesh teeno Ritu k paas baithe hai.... ab aage.....

Achanak Ritu chikhte hue uthi ... Nahi ... Abhi ko chod do usse kuch mat karo ... aur idhar udhar dekhkar jor jor se rone lagi .. abhi beti ka aisa haal dekhkar dono mata pita k aanko mein aaso aa gaye

Naina ne aage badkar gale laga liya aur pyar se sir par haath pherte hue boli

Naina -- Beti chup ho jaao kuch nahi hoga hamare Abhi ko , shaant ho jaa beta hamahra pyar aur vishwas Abhi ko kuch nahi hone dega

maa aisi hi hoti hai ek taraf toh bete ki haalat dekhkar dil ghabra raha hai aur dusri tarf apne dil ka dard chupa kar beti ke dukh ko kam kar rahi hai

R.V.S -- Ritu k sir par pyar se haath pherte hue ---

Beta Ritu chup ho meri Gudiya , dekh tu toh meri pyari beti hai aise himmat haaregi toh kaise chalega, Doc se meri baat ho gayi hai beta , Kal tak abhi ko hosh aajayega

R.V.S ka mann saari baatein ritu se puchne ka mann ka raha tha lekin beti ki aisi haalat dekhkar puch na paaya
Aur Rakesh jaane kaha khoya hua tha kya soch raha tha

ph k ring ki aawaj sunkar Rakesh ka dhyan uss tarf gaya, toh dekha Rana sahab ka ph par call aarahi thi, call dekhkkar R.V.S bahar aaye aur call pick karke bolne lage aur yaha Rakesh ne bhi apni shravan shakti uss aur laga di
R.V.S -- Haa bolo IG kya khabar hai

IG -- Rana sahab humne pata kar liya hai , jaha yeh ghatna hui waha ki cctv footage se kuch jaankaari haasil hui

R.V.S -- Kaun the woh log

IG --- Sir hamlawar k muh dhake hue the , lekin unki gaadi ka number mil gaya hai,

R.V.S -- Kiski hai woh gaadi pata kiya

IG - Sir gaadi toh MLA Raghav ki hai , lekin unhone uski chori hone ki complaint 4 din pahele ki thi
sir lagta hai yeh hamla preplanned tha koi gahri saazish lagti hai, jald hi apradhi aapke saamne hoga

call khatam hote hi woh wapas room mein aaye ,Rakesh kuch sochte hue bola -- Uncle muzhe kuch bahut jaaruri kaam hai , agar aapki izzazat ho toh ho aau

R.V.S -- arre beta issme puchne wali kaunsi baat hai ,tu bhi kal se yahi hai

Rakesh -- Thik hai uncle , mein jaldi hi aajaaunga , aur uncle aap logo ne kal se kuch khaaya nahi hai , yadi aap muzhe apna beta maate hai toh toh Aunty aur Ritu di ko kuch khila dijiye aur aap bhi kuch kha lijiye

itna kahkar Woh bahar chala gaya

Ritu -- Papa muzhe Abhi ko dekhna hai muzhe waha le chaliye

R.V.S -- nahi beta hum abhi uss room mein nahi jaa sakte ,

Ritu -- nahi papa muzhe dekhna hai mere bhai ko , bahar se hi dekh lungi

R.V.S -- Thik hai beta lekin tumhe kasam hai abhi ki k uske baad tumhe kuch khakar aaram kana hoga, nahi toh abhi jab hosh mein aayega aur tumhe iss haal mein dekhega toh usspar kya bitegi
naina tum nurse ko saath lekar Ritu ko le jaao mein canteen se hokar aata hu

ab tak Rana ne yeh baat bahar nahi jaane di lekin na jaane kaise media ko baat pata chal gayi, Jaise Rana saahab caanteen ki aur jaane lage waha lage tv par yeh news chalne lagi
Desh k top business man Rana Vikram Singh k bete par jaanlewa humla ....

Aur hospital k bahar media walo gadiyo ki kataar badti jaa rahi

jis Baat ka dar tha wahi hua ab saare rishtedaro k call pe call aane lage, R.V.S yn sabko jawab dete dete pareshan hogaya toh ph silent mode par kar diya

inn sabko ko yahi chodkar dekhte hai hero ka haal

Ek safed prakash se paripurna manav aakriti kisi aisi jagah jaa rahi thi jaha chaaro taraf divyata ka vatavaran tha
woh manav aakrti yani k Rana Abhinav Singh matlab hamara hero Abhi
ab abhi ko mein likhunga

aaj muzhe aisa mehsus ho raha hai ki jaise mein mukt hu na koi bhav hai na vichar...na koi takleef , lag raha hai jaise asim aanand aur shakti ka srot mein hu ,

ek taraf hospital mein rakha mera sharir aur dusri taraf mein ......sab kuch dekh raha hu lekin koi bhav nahi najaane yeh kaisi stithi hai ....badh chala hu mein na jaane kis manzil ki or

chaaro taraf kamal k pushpo ki sugandh thi.... jab meine dekha toh ek vishal saagar k madhya mein khada tha ... jiska jal dudh jaisa tha....muzhe ashcharya hua ki mein toh waha hospital mein tha ......toh yaha kaise , kaha hu

kaise mein paani par khada hu kuch samaz nahi aa raha tha.

tabhi waha ek aawaj gunji itne pareshan kyu ho putra aao miane hi tumhe yaha bulaya hai

jab maine dekha toh saamne ek bada se safed kamal pushp pragat hua aur uspar baithe hue safed prakash se bharpur ek divya vibhuti

meine jab unka darshan kiya toh dekha unke 4 sir the aur char haath safed divya vastra tab muzhe dhyan aaya k yeh chavi toh Brahma ji ki hai mein yaha kaise kahi yeh sapna toh nahi yaa maar toh nahi gaya tabhi unki aawaj aayi

Brahma ji -- Sahi pehchana putra iss samay tum Brahmalok mein ho aur abhi tum mrityu ko prapt nahi hue ho putra,

mein -- Pranam parampita aapko shat shat naman . Hey shristikarta mera sharir toh prithivi par hai toh phir mein yaha kaise mere aaprado ko kshama karna prabhu aapse prashn puch raha hu

Brahma ji - Putra jo dharti par hai woh tumahara haad maas ka bana hua sthool sharir hai aur yaha jo hai woh sukshma sharir hai jo keval urja se bana hai .......

agla Update jald hi

Shandaar update bro.

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Update - 4

ab tak aapne dekha......... hero ka sukshma sharir Bramhalok mein hai....aur ab aage ..........

Mein yeh soch raha tha ki yeh sab ky chakkar hai aur yeh suksma sharir kya hai , tabhi ...

Bramha ji :- Beta har vyakti k 3 sharir hote hai
sthool sharir... jo 5 tatv
( elements ) ka bana hota hai,

Dusra sukshma sharir yeh yeh indriyo ki urja, antarman aur kundlishakti se banna hua hai

Teesra kaaran sharir jo karmo k faal se banta bigadta hai hai

mein - yeh parampita aap toh iss shrishti k nirman karte hai , toh phir muzh jaise ek sadharan manav ko yaha aane ka saubhagya kaise prapt hua, kyuki jaha tak maine suna hai aap tridev k darshan toh devtao ko bhi durlabh hai, phir mera jaisa ek bahut hi sadharan manav par yeh kripa kyu

Bramha ji -- Putr tum yaha ho ,isse jan lo ki tum koi sadharan nahi ho,
tum hum tridevo k ansh se banne ho,
tum har kaliyug mein bramhand k rakshak ho putra

Mein - Rakshak aur mein ....kaise prabhu ..mein toh kuch gundo ka bhi saamna nahi kar paaya ....toh phir rakshak kaise

Bramha ji - Putra tum apni shaktiyo ko jagrit karo ab samay aagaya hai , putra

itna kah kar unke haato mein rakhe ved se ek prakash nikla aur mere bhitar samane laga, muzhe mere bhitar anneko ved mantra gunjte hue se mahsus hue, aur unn mantro se utpan honewali urja ko mein mahsus kar raha tha, ek divyata ka anbhav


Brahma ji -Putra ab isse aage ka raasta tumahare guru batayenge

mein - Parantu prabhu mere sharir ki aisi haalat..

Brahma ji -- kuch nahi hua putr , tum bilkul swastha ho , jab tumhe tumahare pranshakti ki dharak sparsh karegi , tab tumhe chetna aajaayege
aur tum iss yatra ko bhul jaaoge sirf mera diya hua vedo ka gyan hi jagrit hoga

jab tum apne swarup aur shaktio ko paa loge tabhi hum tridevo ko apne bhitar paaoge
yashshvi buav putra ..
.ab mein vaha mere samne se brahma lok ka drishya adrishya ho ho gaya aur prkashrup ho gaya aur chal pada apni manjil ki aur

ab muzhe dikh raha hai hospital mein pada mera sharir aur usse dekhte hi saari bhavnaye aur yaadein meri jagrit ho gayi

tabhi muzhe kiski dard bhari pukar sunai di k jaise koi muzhe pukaar raha hai..... uss pukar ki taraf jaise hi mera dhyan gaya toh pahuch gaya ek room mein waha maine dekha ek bed par meri Ritu di baithi hai unko dekhte hi muzhe ek dard ka ahsas hua

Di aankhien band kar k baithi hui hai unke gaalo par sukh chuke aansoon k nishan dikh rahe hai , aur band aankon se bhi aansoo bah rahe hai ,

di k dil ki pukar muzhe sunai de rahi hai ( uth jaa na bhai dekh tere bina tere di ka kya haal ho gaya hai betu, agar aaj tu nahi utha toh mein iss duniya se hi uth jaaungi.. meri wajah se hi yeh sab hua hai ...jab tu hi nahi rahega toh mei jee kar kya karungi)

Di ka yeh dard muzhse saha nahi jaa raha tha mein unhe batana chahta tha lekin mein kuch kar nahi paa raha tha

tab maine apne aapko shaant kiya aur di ko mann mein pukara

mein -- Di aap se dur hoke kaha jaa sakta hu mein , muzhe kuch nahi hua di ....tumhe aisi haalat mein nahi dekh sakta di chup ho jaao.... ab mein aagaya hu .. lekin muzhe apni di ka wahi khilta hua chehra dekhna hai

di ko apne dil mein meri aawaj sunai deti hai woh aankein khol kar chaaro taraf dekhti hai

Ritu - betu kaha hai tu .....kyu chup raha hai...betu saamne aaja na

di ki aawaj wah baithi maa sun leti hai

Maa - kya hua beta ..kisko pukar rahi hai

maa ki aawaj sunkar mera dhyan unki taraf gaya toh dekha unki aankhein bhi ro rokar lal ho gayi hai muzhe unke dil mein chupa hua dard dikhayi dene laga , dil mein mamta ka saagar aur mera thik hone ki niranter bhagwan ki prarthana dekh kar mera man unko gale lagane ka hua ..lekin mein abhi asamarth tha

Ritu di -- maa abhi Betu ne muzhse baat ki woh aanewala hai maa....bhai thik ho gay hai maa ...itna kah kar di washroom mein chali gayi

ab mein papa ko dhundne laga toh dekha woh waiting room mein meri puri family se ghire hue hai ..sab aaye hai Dada, dadi ... Nana ,nani dono bua ki family , Mama mausi sab rishtedar aur papa apne dil ka dard chupakar unko saari sthiti bata rahe the

ki tabhi waha par kisi ki aawaj aayi
papa ....... jab mera dhyan uss taraf gaya toh dekha meri jaan jisme basti hai .. mere dil ka tukda ...meri chotti behan ...Adira

Duad kar aai aur papa k gale lagkar rone lagi ...ussko rote dekhkar sabke aankon mein aanso aagaye aur papa bhi apne aap ko nahi rok paaye

Papa -- Chup ho jaao meri gudiya

Adira -- Papa aap bahut bure ho ....itna kuch ho gaya aapne muzhe bataya nahi ..maine bhai ko ph karne ki bahut koshish ki lekin meri baat nahi hui ..aur pata nahi kyu muzhe bar bar rona aaraha tha,tab maine yaha aane ka socha ... aur jab mein ghar gayi toh waha koi nahi tha .....shankar kaka ne kaha ki sab bahar gaye hai unhone bhi kuch nahi bataya .....lekin jab maine tv par news dekhi toh sab pata chala

aur woh jor jor se rone lagi , uska dard dekhkar mein bhi dard se tadaf utha

Adira -- Papa muzhe abhi le chalo bhai k paas muzhe abhi dekhna hai bhai ko

Papa - Beta dekho abhi wo ICU mein hai hum usse sirf bahar se dekh sakte hai

Adira - mein kuch nahi jaanti papa muzhe abhi bhai se milna hai aap kuch bhi karo
yeh kahkar woh jor jor se rone lagi

apne dil k tudkde ki aisi haalat dekhkar R.V.S ne doc se baat ki aur badi mushkil se srif ek ko jaane ki permission mili


papa Adira ko lekar ICU ki taraf chal pade waha jaakar dekha toh maa aur Ritu di bhi ICU k bahar mili Adira ko lekin sirf apne bhai ko dekhne ki jaldi thi iss pahele maa aur di kuch kahti doc ne ICU ka door khol diya aur Adira turant ander chali gayi aur saath hi saath mein bhi sukshma rup se bhiter gaya, aur ander apne sharir ko dekhne laga jaha oxigen cylender laga hua tha aur saline se koi dawa meri andar pahuchayi jaa rahi thi kuch machine bhi lagi hui thi jo awaj se mere jivit hone ka praman de rahi thi

Meri aisi haalat dekhkar Chotti ki aankon se aansu bah nikle , aur kahne lagi

Adira -- Uth jaao na bhai dekho aapki gudiya aapko pukar rahi hai, aapne muzhse roj baat karne ka waada kiya tha utho na bhai ...ab mein aapse koi jid nahi karungi .. bhai agar aap aaj nahi uthe toh mein bhi aaj k baad kisi se baat nahi karungi

itna kahte hue wih aage badi aur mera haath pakad liya...... jaise hi gudiya ne mera haath pakda gudiya ki aankon se white roshni nikalne lagi .... aur woh safed urja uske haato k jariye mere bhitar jaa rahi thi

bahar se mom, dad aur di glass mein se dekh rahe the lekin unhe woh prakash nazar nahi aaya

achanak muzhe aaisa laga jaise muzhe apne sharir mein koi shakti khich rahi hai aur mein prevesh kar gaya apne sharir mein

Gudiya ne mehsus kiya ki mera haath hil raha hai toh uski pakd aur majbut ho gayi aur bhai bhai karke pukarne lagi.

tabhi dhere dhere meri aankien khula aur mera muh se nikla .....gudiya

abhi k liye itna hi ..... next update soon

Shandaar update bro.

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Update - 5

ab tak aapne dekha ....adira k chunne se hero ka sukshma sharir wapas uske sharir mein aajaata hai....... aur hero ki aankhein khulti hai..... ab aage

Mein - Gudiya .... mera baccha

Meri aawaj sunkar woh mere gale lagkar rone lagi
Adira - bhayia ..aap bahut bure ho aap apni gudiya ko chod kar jaa rahe the na
mein - nahi meri pyari aadu mein kaise tumko chod kar jaa sakta hu
aur mein pyar se uske sir par haath pherne laga
yaha bahar khade mom ,dad aur di ne muzhe hosh mein aate hue aur gudiya se baat karte dekha
dad ne fauran paas khade doc ko aawaj dekar bulaya , aur teeno doc k saath ander aagaye
ander aate hi doc ne machines check ki toh sab normal dekhkar hairan ho gaya .
mom aur di muzhe hosh mein dekhkar bahut khush huye aur unki aankon se khusi k aanso nikal ne

yeh aanso bhi ajab chij hai, gum ho yaa khushi, bahar aane ko tayyar rahete hai

tabhi di ne pyar se mere sir par haath rakha toh unka mere liye pyar dekhkar mere aankon mein bhi aansoo aagaye

Ritu di - Mat ro betu dekhab tu jadi thik ho jaayega, tune muzhe toh rone k liye mana kiya tha aur ab tu khud ro raha hai
muzhe kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ki di kya kah rahi hai, kyu ki mein suksma shari dwara dekha gaya sab kuch bhul gaya tha

mom ne aage badh k mere aanson poche Addu bahi tak mere upar gale lagi hui sisak rahi thi
jaise agar woh chod degi toh mein kahi chala jaaunga

Doc - Rana sahab abhi aap isse akela chod de please, abhi hume inko check-up karna hai , phir inhe room mein shift karna hai, waha aap sab mil sakte ho

papa meri taraf dekh rahe the apne dil ka dard dil mein chupaaye, aur mera sir par unhone ne haath rakha , aur bole ...... mera pyara bahadur beta in choti moti choto se Hamare khoon ko kuch nahi ho sakta ....bete abhi toh bahut lambi ladayi hai

maa - kya ji aap abhi mera beta hosh mein aaya aur aap ladayi ki baat lekar baith gaye, kahi nahi jaane dungi apne lal ko kahkar ....apne aanchal se mero muh saaf karne lagi ..... maa ke aanchal ki woh divya sugandh ne mere sharir ko ek aaram sa mila.....aurmuzhe achanak nind si aagayi

maa - doc dekho na ky hua phir se

doc - kuch nahi maa ji abhi patient ko aaram ki jarurat hai

papa - beta addu chod do ab bhai ko dekho unko aaram ki jarurat hai, tum chati ho na ki tumahara bhai jaldi thik ho jaaye

Adira(addu) - lekin papa mein bhi bhai k ......

papa - lekin vekin kuch nahi , kya tum apne bhai ko takleef dena chahti ho

itna sunte hi addu uth gayi....
nahi papa mein bhai ko kaise taklif pahucha sakti hu.... aap jo bologe mein woh karungi
phir sab bahar aagaye , aur doc ne muzhe check karna shuru kiya , toh woh hairaan rah gaye

doc - Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta, its impossible, its really a miracle ...kaise ho sakta hai yeh

assistant - kya hua sir kya nahi ho sakta

doc - idhar dekho iss patient ke saare ghav apne aap kaise bhar gaye ,aur operation ka nisshan kaha gaya

assis - haa sir yeh toh unbealivable hai
doc - ek baat dhyan rahe yeh baat bahar nahi naikalni chahiye , nahi toh kai sawal khade ho jaayenge

assis - ji sir jaisa aap kahe

ab muzhe ek bade se room mein shift kar diya gaya , yeh ek bada room tha kyu ki doc ko pata tha ki visitors ki list bahut lambi hai

aur mein yaha sapne mein ek golden color k room mein apne aap ko dekgta hu jaha vedo k mantra gunj rahe hai
aur dheere dheere woh mantra mere buddhi mein apni jagah bana rahe hai ...mein unki urja mehsus kar raha hu

jaise hi mantra dhwani ruki ek aawaj gunji aaj k liye itna hi putr

aur phir meri aankhein khul gayi aur maine aapne aapko ek room mein paaya mera sir maa ki godi mein tha aur woh pyar se muzhe hi dekh rahi thi , muzhe hosh mein aate dekhkar unke chehre par muskurahat aagayi

meri gudiya aur di bhi muzhe utha dekhkar khushi se gale lag gayi .
aur bhi bhi sapne ki baato mein khoya hua tha , muzhe ander ek nayi urja ka ahsas ho raha tha , mere mastishk mein kai mantro ka aabhas hone laga abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki yeh mantra mere bhitar kaha se aaye to gudiya ne muzhe hilaye

addu - bhai kaha kho gaye ho mein aapse kuch bol rahi hu...

Mein - mein sun raha hu betu kya bol rahi ho

addu - bhai ab mein hostel nahi jaaungi , aapko chodkar kahi nahi jaaungi,

mein - dekh betu aise jid nahi karte

addu - nahi bhai muzhe aur kuch nahi chahiye ,muzhe sirf aap chahiye

itna kah kar woh rone lagi
mein - chup jo jaa betu mat ro, thik hai jo tu kahegi wahi hoga....aur meri gudiya tu itni rondu kab se ho gayi.
chup hio jaao sona, mein promise karta hu jo tu chahegi wahi hoga

itne mein addu k aansoo band ho gaye aur woh khilakar haste hue boli

addu - aapki gudiya rondu nahi hai bhaiya, ab aapne promise kiya hai

mein sab samaz gaya ki issne natak karke muzhse promise le liye

mein -- addu tu na bahut shaitan ho gayi hai, toh mein pyar se ek chapat uske sir par laga di

mom aur di bhi addu ki nautanki dekhkar hasne lagi

yaha room k bahar doc aur R.V.S

Doc - Rana saheb jo meine dekha mein vishwas nahi kar sakta
lagta hai aapke bete mein powers hai

R.V.S - man mein (kahi doc ne yeh baat bahar bata di toh mushkul hongi... kuch karna hoga) tabhi who bole
Doc sahab jara dheere se nahi toh koi sun lega, aur phir doc ki aankhon mein dekhkar man mein kuch bolne lage .. isse doc ka sir bhari sa hone laga

R.V.S - kya hua doc sahab aap thik toh hai na.....kya kahrahe the aap

Doc - kuch nahi rana sahab halka sa sir dard hai thiik ho jaayega .......
aur haa mein kah raha tha discharge paper kal tak mil jaaenge

(R.V.S ne aise kya kiya ....... jo doc sab bhul gaya.... )
Doc se baat karke R.V.S bete k paas aagaya

papa - uth gaye young man ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho

mein - Ab accha lag raha hai papa , (idhar udhar dekhte hue) papa Rakesh kahi dikhai nahi de raha kaha hai woh

papa - beta woh muzhse puchkar hi gaya tha, aajaayega jaldi

itne mein aawaj aai haa dost ko bada yaad kar raha hai , kabhi hume bhi yaad kar liya karo

meine darwaje par dekha toh merin dono bua aur unki family thi

inn sab k baare mein full family intro mein pata chalega

yaha visitors ka aur media walo ka aur bayan lene k liye police ka tanta laga hua hai...............yaha inhe chodte hai aur chalte hai hai isi shahr k end mein forest k paas ek farm house mein kuch dhamaka honewala hai waha

Roopnagar k dakshin disha mei ek ghanna jungle hai , jaha se jugle shuru hota hai waha kai resorts bane hue hai, wahi hotels aur resorts se kuch duri par ekkanth mein ek aalishan bangla hai.. jiske charo aur 20 ft unchi deeware hai aur ek bada sa gate laga hua hai ... jaha 4 gaurds hamesha
ak 56 se lance pahra dete hai ander ek bahut sunder park aur bich mein water fountain uski sunderta ko char chand laga rahe hai, sham k samay light se aur bhi shandar lag raha tha

bahar se jitna bada dikh raha hai usse jyada ander se bada hai



ander ek choti si drink party chal rahi hai jaha karib 10 ladke sharab aur shabab ka lutf utha rahe the
unmein se ek ... yaar Vilas aaj toh maza aagaya
Vilas (mla ka chotta ladka)- haa yaar aaj toh jasn mannane ka di hai

yeh sab mla ka ladka aur uske dost the jo kisi baat ka jasn manna rahe the....aanewali maut se anjan

Vilas - yaaro aaj khulkar piyo mere raste ka kaanta aaj ukad gaya

baki ko L1,L2 likhunga...

L1 - lekin bhai usska baap bahut powerful hai

vilas - Humne bhi kacchi goliya nahi kheli uska baap toh kya kissi ko bhi pata nahi chalega , yeh hamara kand hai
L2 - wah bhai kamal kar diya, lekin uss fulzhadi Ritu ko kyu chod diya usse le aate toh aaj maza aajaata

L3- arre bewakuf sabar se kaam le , bhai ne kuch socha hoga

Vilas - haa yaar , mere baare mein jissko pata tha, uska woh bhai toh ab nahi raha , jo mere liye kgatra ban sakta tha, uss Ritu ko ab kabhi bhi utha sakte hai

L5 -haa bhai bada uchalta tha Abhi aur woh uska dost haa kya naam tha uska...haa Rakesh itne mein hi ek jor ka dhamaka hua aur hall ka darwaja tut kar gir gaya, Waha ka security alaram baj utha aur dekhte hi dehkte uss bangle k tahkhanne se karib 100 Gaurds aadunik hatiyaro k saath vilas aur usske dosto ki security k liye unko gher kar khade ho gaye

sab tute hue door k tarf dekhte hai toh waha utha dhua chatte hi ek saaya nazar aaya

tabhi waha bhayanak ek aawaj gunji

Maut hu mein ....mahakaal ka ansh tumahara kaal hu mein....

abhi k liye itna hi.....

agla action se bharpur update raat ko

Bohat hi zabardast update bro.

To Abhi k Baap k pas b powers hai Aur uski choti bahen k pas b .
Pr aik baat usse choot gayi k sirf doctor k mind se wo baat nikal de pr uska assistant reh gaya .

Acha to Abhi ko MLA k bete ne Marne ki koshish ki hai q k wo Ritu ko pana chahta hai.

Aur last mai ab shuru hoga tandav yani Rakesh ka tandav.