Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[sandychoudhary]

Thanku soo much frnds for your wonder ful support & comment


Aise hi saath banaye rakhe....

Latest update 92 posted......

GB

 

[Hiran]

Super update bro

 

[The_Punisher]

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[Anv]

Superb Excellent fantasy story i hve ever read, ismein jo yog aur 14 loko ka varnan hai lagta hai aane bahut research ki hai...
Thanku for such a masterpeice

 

[Anv]

ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR



Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai

Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai

prithvi se upar 7 lok

भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और सत्यलोक

Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok,

तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म

स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है

इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है

ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है

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Family Introduction ♡

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अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu

Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh Adira ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....
agla update jald hi......

ek number super start

 

[jaggi57]

Update - 75


ab tak aapne dekha ....k PN ne Abhi bankar 10 logo ki hataya ki jiska ilzam Abhi pat aaya......aur usse graftar hona pada......
aur RVS ka MLA dwara kidnap hone......

ab aagee ..........

MLA .....PN.....aur....RVS ....ko lekar.......apne secret chamber k godown mein lekar gaya.........iss secrat chamber ko ussne Eblis ki shaktiyo se aise surakshit kiya tha k bina uski icca k yaha koi bhi pravesh nahi kar sakta tha.........

iss kaali shaktiyon k shield ko bahar se nahi ....andar se hi toda jaasakta tha.......

MLA - kyu RVS kaise ho.......kahi safar mein toh koi pareshani nahi hui.......ha...ha...ha....
chinta mat karo bahut jald tumahara saara pariwar tumahare saamne hoga........

aur woh jo tumahara beta .....jo....Rakshak bana ghumta hai........usko tum sab ko bachane k liye apne prano ki aahuti deni hi hogi ......chahe woh kitna bhi shaktishali kyu na ho ......woh yaha tak mere kaali shaktiyon k suraksha ghere ko todkar nahi aasakta......

RVS - muskurate hue.......hmmm lagta hai.badi jaldi hai tumhe ...apne maut se milne ki......toh chalo tumahari yeh iccha bhi puri kar dete hai.......

MLA - kaun maarega muzhe yaha ........ha...ha...ha.....mein jaanta hu k ab tumahre paas koi shakti nahi hai........

RVS - Acha toh phir khud hi dekh lo .....aur tabhi yske haath mein Shaki Trishul pragat hota hai.....
jisse dekhkar MLA aur PN dono hairan ho jaate hai........

MLA - yehh ...Shakti ...Trishool tumahare pass .....kaun ho...tum...

RVS - Wahi jiska tumhe intejar tha tumahari maut...........tabhi RVS ka roop badal jaata hai ....aur Waha RVS ki jagah tha....ABHI

Abhi ko apne saamne dekhkar MLA aur PN chauk gaye ......

Abhi ne der na karte hue , turant MLA k banaye kaali shakti k shield ko Skakti trishul ki urja se khatam kar diya....aur Aur aur ek aisi shield bana di ...jisse koi kaali shakti bhed nahi sakti......

MLA - tuuumm.....yaha...kaise....tum toh.....jial mein ...the.....aur tumhe kaise pata chala ....k ...hamari ....yojna k baare mein ........


Short flash back.....

Hua yeh tha jab Abhi ne Hospital mein news dekhi thi ....toh samaz gaya ki MLA ki yeh unko badnam karne ki chal hai.........

Abhi ne bhi MLA ko chal ko hi hatiyar banakar waar karne ka socha ......... aur hospital se nikalne se pahele........washroom gaya......waha usne Apna ek pratiroop banaya aur usse hospital k bahar bhej diya ....jisse ..police abhi samazkar pakad kar le gayi thi........

Aur khud Rimpy k paas pahunch gaya........Rimpy PN ka main computer hack kar chuki thi........aur har mail par nazar rakh rahi thi.....

Yaha jab RVS thane mein Abhi ko chudane pahuncha toh ....tab usse Abhi se milne ka mauka mila .....waha usse Abhi ki chal ka pata chala........

Yaha Abhi aur Rimpy PN k personal computer k saath connected the .....tabhi ek mail PN k personal computer se kai jagah bheja gaya.......

Jab Abhi ne usse open kiya toh pata chala ki PN ne kai netao aur Business man ko meeting k liye mail bheja tha .......aur ek code k jariye meeting ki jagah bhi batayi thi.....

Yeh code jagah ki lattitude aur longitude ko milakar banaya tha......jisse Abhi ne aasani se decode kiya tha........

Abhi ne Meeting mein shamil hone wale ek bhrast neta ko uske hi ghar mein bandi banaya ...aur khud uska roop banakar ....meeting mein pahunch gaya.........waha meeting mein ....aanewale sabhi desh drohi the ...........

meeting mein PN ne sabko lalach diya aur ...baaki sab bhrasht netao se bhi sampark karne k liye kaha ......aur jitne bhi imandar neta hai unko maarkar Apne gulam netao ko unki jagah bithakar ......
iss desh par raaj karne ka plan banya jaa raha tha....

Abhi bas meeting mein saari baatien sunta raha.......aur jab meeting khatam hui aur sab neta jaane lage toh waha se nikalne se pahele...

. Abhi ne waha table k niche ek chota sa micro ph laga diya tha ....jo Abhi k ph se connected....tha....

Ab Abhi waha se nikalkar Teleport ho ghar par apne room mein pahunch gaya .....aur Ph par PN k Office mein hone wali baatien sunne laga .......tabhi usse MLA ki aawaj aai ....

MLA - Beta jab tak RVS aur Rakshak jinda hai.....tab tak... hum apna business aur raj iss desh
mein nahi phaila sakte .....iskeliye unhe marna hoga...

PN - par kaise dad .......

MLA - Beta acche logo ki kamjori hoti hai unki accayi aur woh log jinko woh bahut pyar karta hai.......

pahele hum Abhi ki family ko apne kabze mein karenge aur ...phir unhi k sahare hum khatam karege uss Rakshak ko .......

phir hume yaha pritvi lok ka bhagwan bannane se koi nahi rok sakta.....ha...ha..ha....

Aur jab RVS .....Ritu aur Addu ko Abhi aur unki sachayi k baare mein bata rahe the...

ussi samay PN ki bheji hui bhid bahar hungama macha rahi thi .......

aur jab RVS bhid ka saamna karne niche aaya toh hall mein hi Abhi unse mila ...aur unhe apne room mein bhejkar khud RVS ka roop lekar niche aagaya......

back to story line......

Abhi ko waha dekhkar PN apne aapko rok nahi saka.......Aur revolwar nikalkar uspar fire kar diya....

Abhi turant waha se hat gaya aur ek pal mein hi uske paas pahunchkar ...aur uska haath pakadkar mod diya jissase uske haath ki haddi tut gayi .....aur dard k maare woh chila utha.......

MLA ne apne bete ko khatre mein dekhkar apni kaali shaki ki urja ka prahaar ...Abhi par kiya ........
jo Abhi k pith par jaakar laga .......usse aisa laga jaise usski pith oar jalta hua lawa daal diya ho ....aur woh niche gir gaya.......

MLA - ha.....ha..ha..itna aasan nahi hai.....muzhe maarna......

tab tak Abhi ne apne aapko sambhala aur uthte hi pahle ek jordar kick paas khade PN ko maari ....jiise woh dur deewar se takra kar behosh ho gaya.....

MLA - nahiiii....Yeh tune thik nahi kiya .........ab dekh .....aur apni kaali shaktiyo ka ek bada sa gola banaka Abhi k taraf phenka.........jisse Abhi ne apne shakti Trishool se khatam kar diya..........

jab tak MLA apna disra waar karta Abhi uss tak pahunch gaya aur usse garden se uthakar jameen par phenk diya ........aur ek jordar kick uske pet mein maari ...jissase woh deewar se jaakar takara gaya........

lekin yeh kya MLA phir khada hogaya .....usse is waar se jara bhi farak nahi pada.........

MLA - issbar kali shakti aur k waar Abhi par lagatar karne laga .....jisse Abhi ne panch tatva ki dhaal banakr roka Aur saath saath mein MLA par bhi war karne laga ........

MLA ne Eblis ko apni aatma samarpit ki thi ....jiske wajah se Abhi k waar ka uspar koi asar nahi ho raha tha..........

MLA se mukabla karte karte...Abhi ne dhyan diya k ek MLA ka kiya hua ek war uske dhal se takrakar wapas MLA ko laga jisse MLA thoda jakhmi hua ........

Abhi ko MLA k khatme ka raaj pata chal gaya.......

Abhi ab mla ko chod kar ..PN k paas pahuncha ......aur ek laat aur maari ........aur usse maarne k liye apni gada ka awahan kiya ......

MLA ne apne bete par bhayankar war hote dekhar ....apni poori urja ka ek bada sa gola banaya aur Abhi par chod diya.........lekin woh waar Abhi ko lagta usse pahele....hi Abhi ne apni gada k jordar prahar se uss urja k gole ko MLA par hi chod diya .......uss....waar..ke lagte hi ....MLA.....ki jordar chikh nikli ......ahhhhh..ahhh

Abhi - kyu Sudhakar kaise rahi.......

MLA - tadapta hua ......Rakshak yeh tumne mere saath dhoka kiya hai....ahhhh

Abhi - Dhoka maine nahi tumne kiya hai iss desh k saath .....maanav jaati k saath ....aur apne aap k saath......tumhe shayad yeh kisi ne nahi bataya ....k insan ki bure karm hi uske ant ka kaaran bante hai .......jis kaali shaktiyo ki tumne dusro ka anth karne k liye upasna ki ....aaj woh hi kaali shakti ...tumahare ant ka kaaran ban rahi hai.....

MLA - Tum muzhe toh maar doge lekin ab mere jeevo se logo ko kaise bachaoge ..........aur ussne aoni jeb se ek remote jaisa kou gadget nikala aur uska laal button daba diya.........

mein toh mar raha hu lekin ab yeh shahar bhi nahi bachega.....mera sandesh ab untak pahunch gaya hai ........

Abhi - Sorry Sudhakar tumara yeh khwab bhi adhura hi rah jaayega.......

Tabhi uss hall ka darwaja jor ki aawaj k saath tukar gir gaya......aur waha se ....RAKEH .....GK....SHIVALI ..aur SULEKHA ander aaye......

MLA k secret chamber k 3 parts the ...ek part usske personl use k liye tha .....aur ek mein ....uske paale hue gunde.......aur 3 part mein uske bhayanak jeev ......

Jab Abhi yaha aaya toh usse yaha k baare mein pata chal....

Usne Shivali ko mann se sandesh bheja ...aur yaha k jeevi ko khatam karne k liye kaha.....
Shivali ...Rakesh....Sulekha ....aur GK ko lekar yaha aayi....

aur jab Abhi MLA ka samna kar raha tha...tab woh yaha k jeevo aur gundo ko yamlok pahuncha rahe the.....

MLA ab apni antim saas le chuka tha.....uske marte hi Abhi ne Apne Agni tatva ki urja se yske sharir ko nasht kar diya.........

ab usne PN ko hosh mein laaya.....Abhi ka mann toh kar raha tha k Issko bhi khatam kar de.......lekin abhi kaanoon aur samaj ke saamne Apni begunahi ko saabit karna tha.....

Abhi ne PN k mind ko control kiya aur usske mind mein bas yeh hi bitha diya ki usse apna gunah kabool karna hai........

Phir Abhi apne team k saath PN ko lekar waha se nikal gaya.......aur usse thane k aage chod diya ....aur sab ko lekar apne ghar aagaya.......

Aadhi raat ka samay ho gaya tha.......Thane se Abhi SHO bahar nikla hi tha k apne saame Abhi ko dekhkar hairan ho gaya.....SHO usse pakadte hue .....abe tu bahar kaise aaya.....
hawaldar Ganguram....

Hawaldar - yes ...sir ....

SHO - kaisi duty karte ho tum log yeh kaidi bahar kaise aaya.....

Hawaldar - pan ..saaheb ....haa ...kaidi toh ..lockup mein tha....
kaay re bahar kasa aala tu .....aur usse pakadkar ander le jaata hai.....
toh dekhta hai andet lockup mein ek aur Abhi hai.......

Hawaldar daudkar bahar jaata hai abhi SHO ghar jaane k liye gaadi mein baithne hi wala tha....ki

hawaldar.- saheb ...saheb...jaldi ander chaliye.....

SHO - ab kya hua Ganguram ....

Hawaldar - saheb woh ek kaidi toh lockup mein hai aur ek bahar ......sahab dono bilkul ek jaise hai...

SHO - Kya re duty par hi pi li kya ....kaisi baate ka raha hai....

Hawaldar - nahi saheb ek baar ander toh chalo......

Aur SHO ander jaata hai....waha do Abhi dekhkar uska sir chakra jaata hai...

phir puchtach karne par ........PN apne saare gunah kabool kar deta hai....

Adalat mein bhi yeh proif ho jaata hai PN ne mask k jariye apni nakli identity banayi aur apne business empire khada kiya......Aur Abhi banakr Restaurent mein 10 katal kiye jisse Abhi par yeh iljam aaye........

Adalat ne PN ajeeb behaviour ko dekhkar pahle usska dimagi ilaj karne ...mental hospital bhej diya........kyu ki apne gunah kabool karne k siwa woh aur kuch nahi bol raha tha.......

yaha Abhi & family bahut khush thi .......Ab Ritu ko bhi Abhi aur apne family k powets k baare pata chal gaya tha .....

Rimpy ki shakti abhi abhi poori tarah jagrit nahi thi....Aur Ritu Aur Adfu bhi apni shaktiyon se anjan thi .....

Toh Abhi ne socha k teeno ki shaktiya jagane k liye unhe dhyan yog sadhna ki shiksha dena jaruri hai....toh iss kasm k liye usse RAKESH hi best laga....

Abhi haal mein baithkar Apne family k saath issi baat par vichar kar raha tha......aur RVS news dekh rahe the ....k tabhi .......ek news ne sab ka dhyan apni aur khincha.....

10 logo ki hatya aur dhokadhadi k jurm mein saza paaye hue Prabhakaran ...jo apni dimagi haalat k kaaran mental hispital mein tha........
Uska Shav waaj savere pankhe se latkta paaya gaya.......jaanch mein yeh paaya gaya k PN ne apne pagalpan mein aatmhatya ki hai.....

Tabhi Abhi ne Rakesh ko yaad kiya.........

Abhi - muskurate hue .... Rakseh dekha tumne PN ne aatmhatya kar li .....waise abhi tum kaha se aarahe ho......

Rakesh - mein....meinn....haa...yaad aaya....woh thodi khasi thi...(.kkuuuuhu...kuhhhu....khaste hue.)......toh dawa lene hospital gaya tha.....

uski baat sunkar Abhi aur RVS hasne lagte hai....

Abhi - Rahne ..de ..pata..hai.. kaunse hospital gaya tha....

phir Abhi ne Rakesh ko Rimpy ..Ritu..aur Adfu ko trained karne ki jimmedari saunpi....

College ka ruka hua Sports festival bhi poora ho gaya .....Aur Abhi ne Addu ki pranshakti se Vikki ko bhi thik kar diya tha......

College ki exams bhi ab khatam ho gayi thi......

Abhi ne ab apni agli shakti ko prapt karne ka vichar banaya.....
Aur Baaki loko mein asuro k badte kadam ko rokne k liye apni ek alag army bannane ka faisla liya......

Ab dekhte hai aage Abhi kaunsi shakti prapt karta hai aur kin chunawtiyo ka saamna karta hai...

abhi k liye itna hi.......
agla Update kal........

baht hi shandaar ....toh Mla ka hua kaam tammam

 

[Smith_15]

Bhai read this story twice, have any other fantasy story please write that

 

[jaggi57]

Update - 77

ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ka oa Shalu k saath milan ho gaya aur teesri Shakti.....Divya Raksha kawach prapt ho gaya ......

ab aage.......

Milan k baad Abhi ka dusre din Tallok k Raja k roop mein Rajyaabhishek ho gaya........

ab tallok ko apna Raja mil chuka tha......

shalu k saath Abhi waha 5 din ruka.......in 5 dino mein dono ne ek dusre ko khub pyar diya ......

Abhi k sabhi aaashram k mitra bhi titne din wahi the........

yaha Abhi ko pata chala k Asuro ne 14 mein se 2 lok apne adhikar mein le liye hai.....dhire dhire ab unki shakti bhi badh rahi hai...........

Baaki loko mein Asuro ka aatank rokne k liye Abhi ne Rakshak sena k sangathan ki yojna banayi........

Apnr gurukul k 5 Acharya jinse usne 5 tatva ki shiksha li thi unhe bhi Abhi ne waha bulaya ....aur unse vichar vimarsh karke.......Rakshak sena k sangathan ki poori yojana bana li.......

Is sena 7 bhag honge har ek bhag ka ek sena pati hoga......
Aur yeh 7 bhag hamesha ek dusre k sampark mein rahenge .......
in saato tukdiyo k yodhao ka prashikshan ..5 acharyo ko saupa gaya.......
in 7 tukdiyo k senapati ...hai.......
CT ....Kartik.....Vajrabahu.......Uday.....GK.......Shahu.......Kantak ....

Abhi aur uski patniya awashyakta k ansar kisi bhi tukdi ka sanchalan apne haath mein le sakte the ....

inmein .....CT ..kartik aur Vajrabahu ko Pritvi se upar k 7 lok ...Aur Baaki k niche k 7 loko ki Raksha ka bhar saunpa gaya......

Ab Abhi ka Shalu se vida hone ka samay aagaya.....Abhi se milan k baad ab Shalu ka bhi mann usse jud gaya tha.....aur teleport hone ki power bhi aagayi thi.....isilye woh jab chahe Abhi se baat bhi kar sakti thi ....aur jab chahe mil bhi sakti thi......

Abhi k vivah ki ek vishehta yeh thi ...har milan k saath usse apni shakti toh milti hi thi .....aur saath saath mein uske patni ki bhi ....ueja poori tarah se jaag jaati thi........

Ab Abhi waha se apne ghar aagaya.....aur ghar par chode hue Abhi ko apne bhiter sama liya.......

ab woh din bhi aaya jab Abhi ko Apne nanihal jaana tha.......

Abhi ne apne Sabhi doston se Sapark kiya .......aur sabko uske ghar par hi aane kp kaha.......

RVS business k kaaran ..abhi nahi jaarahe the .....woh pooja wale din hi jaanewale the....Addu aur Deepu bade excited the ......

.Aaj Naina badi khush thi .....kyu na ho aaj itne varsho baad woh apne maayke jaa rahi thi........

Sabhi jaane k liye tayar ho gaye........Roopnagar city se Sonpur 5 ghante ki duri par tha ........Gadiyon ka kafila nikal pada ........aur 5 ghante ka safar karte hue ....Pahunch gaye Apni manzil ....SONPUR.....

Sonpur gaon charo traf se choti choti ..pahadi se ghira tha.......ek pahadi se bahte hue jal ka srot ...ek nadi k roop mein bah raha tha jaha se .......poore gaon mein paani supply hota tha....

kuch saal pahele tak iss nadi k bahav k saath swarn kan mili hui ret aati thi jisse chankar sona nikala jaata tha....Shayad isiliye iss gaon ka naam Sonpur pada....aur nadi ka naam Son nadi ......

Gaon k jayadater log kisan the ...aur jagah bhi kaafi upjaau thi.......

Abhi ki gadiyon ka kafila .....gaon mein pravesh kar gaya.......Abhi khidki se gaon ko dekh raha tha.......

Gadiyo ka kaafila dekhkar gaon k kuch log aur baache khade hokar dekhne lage...........

Abhi ne gaon k baare mein jaisa suna tha waisa paaya nahi...........

kisi bhi khet mein fasal nahi dikhi ...saare khet banjar se dikhe .......Aur logo ki aankhon mein ek udaasi thi..........

Abhi k nana THAKUR NIRMAL SINGH ..is gaon ke jammidar the......

Kafila Hawli tak pahunchne wala tha ki ki Achanak Gaadi k aage kisi k aane ki wajah se Aage chalne wali gadi Jismein Naina aur Ritu the woh ruk gayi ....jisse sabhi gadiya bhi ruk gayi......

woh toh accha hua k Gadi k saamne aanewala shaks gadi ne nahi takraya ....nahi ....toh saari khushi matam mein badal jaati.....

Driver uss aadmi ko uthane ki koshish kar raha tha.....woh aundhe muh jameen par pada tha......usske ....sharir se sharab ki bahut badbu aarahi thi k jaise sharab mein dubki lagakar aaya ho.......

Abhi bhi gadi se utar kar dekhne gaya......Abhi ne uss aadmi ko palatkar dekha toh ek dhakja sa laga ....kyuki woh aur koi nahi ....usska ..RAJU Mama ...tha.....jo humesha hasta rahta tha aur sbhi ko hasata tha.......uski aise haalat dekhkar .. Abhi ko bahut dukh hua ........

Tabhi Naina bhi gadi se utri ....kya hua Abhi ..kaun hai ....kya hua hai isse.......

Ab Abhi kaise batata k unka pyara bhai Sharab k nashe mein dhut behosh pada hai.....

Abhi ....koi...nahi maa....lagta hai gaon ka hi koi hai.........lagta hai bimar hai ....aur abhi usse kandhe par iss tarah se uthata hai ki uske chehra ...Maa ko na dikhe.....

Abhi - Aap chalo Maa mein isse iske ghar tak pahuncha k aata hu........

Aur phir sabhi Gadiya haweli ki taraf badi........

Aur Abhi gaon walo ki nazar bachakar waha se teleport hokar sidhe ....Haweli k ander mama k room mein pahuncha........Aur mama ko bed par litakar......jaise hi palta.....toh dhekha Rani mami jo bed k paas ek chair par apne sir par haath rakhkar udas si baithi thi....achanak waha Abhi ko Mama k saath pragat hote dekhkar .....chaunk gayi......

Mami - Abhi .....tum ...yaha...achanak......kahi tum koi bhoot ....toh nahi bangaye......aur dar k maare pche hone lagi.....

Abhi - nahi mami ....mein koi bhut pret nahi hu ....timahara ..bhanja Abhi hu ....mera haath chukar dekhlo .......aur apna haath aage karta hai........

Rani darte hur Abhi k haatho ko chuti hai ....aur jab chu leti hai ......
Sach mein tum Abhi hi ho.........maine babuji ko maaji se baat karte hue suna tha ki tum khas ho
lekin samaz nahi paayi .....lekin aaj apni aakhon se dekh liiya ........

Abhi - mami yeh mama ki aisi haalat aur asp bhi ikuch pareshan lag rahi ho kya baat hai...........

Rani - kuch nahi beta ...woh sab rahne do......accha batao aur kaun kaun aaya hai......

Abhi - mami baat ko taalo mat ...batao na ....yeh sab kya hai.........aur mami ka haath apne haato mein le leta hai.........

Mami rote hue Abhi k gale lag jaati hai ...aur fut futkar rone lagti hai.........

Mami - beta mat puch na ....mein tumhe kuch nahi bata sakti.......babu ji ne hum sabko kasam de rakhi hai.......

Abhi mami ki aankhon mein dekhkar sab baato ko jaan leta hai.......
aur phir Mami k mind se apne aane ki yaad mita deta hai....aur waha se teleport hokar haweli k piche pahunch jaata hai.......

Abhi mann mein sochta hai k Gaon mein itna kuch ho raha hai aur Nana ji ne kuch bhi hume nahi bataya ........muzhe nanaji se baat karni hogi.......

Abhi waha se chalte hue Haweli k saamne pahuncha......yeh Haweli koy 500 saal purani thi lekin acchi maintenance k chalte ab bhi shaan se khadi thi........

Abhi jab Gate par pahuncha ....tab tak sabhi gaadiya pahunch chuki thi Aur sab ka luggage haweli k naukaro dwara ander le jaaya aane laga......

Maa , Ritu di Nana ji se mil rahe the jo gate par hi hum sabka intejar kar rahe the.......

Addu , deepu ...Rimpy k saath khade mera hi intejar kar rahe the........

Addu - Bhai aap kaha chale gaye the ....main kab se aapka wait kar rahi hu.......

Mein - gudiya uss bimar uncle ko unke ghar chodne gaya tha........

Phir Sabhi Haweli mein pravesh karte hai........Abhi nanaji k charan chuta hai .....Nanaji usse gale laga lete hai.........

Nana - kaisa hai beta.....arre eah tu toh ab gabru jawan ho gaya hai.........

Nana ji k chehre par zhuti muskurahat main saaf saaf dekh sakta tha........

phir hum ander gaye .....Waha mein Nani ji ( Lakshmi Devi ).......Sunita massi ....Pradip fufaji....aur unki do ladkiya ...meri cousins ...Monika aur lovely se mila....dono judwa thi aur addu jitni thi......Nilima massi ...Ritu ki hi umar ki thi........Satish Mama ...aur Shushma mami se mila .....mami abhi pregnent thi.........

Raju mama ko toh unke room mein chod aaya tha ....Rani mami bhi niche aagayi ...unhe yaad hi nahi raha ki abhi kuch der pahele woh muzhe se mili thi....

Main - Rani mami Ritvik (unka beta) kahi dikhayi nahi de raha hai ...kaha hai....

Rani - beta woh apne Nani k yaha gaya hai .....apne aansoo chupar zhooti muskuraht liye hue....

Sab se milkar hum sab fresh hone chale gaye ....aur lunch karke sabhi safar ki thakan ki wakah se apne apne rooms mein jaakar so gaye.........

lekin muzhe nind kaha......iss gaon mein kya chal raha hai yeh jaane k liye mein gaon wale ka bhesh badlke ....gaon mein ghumne laga .....waha log ki aankho mein ek dar aur dard dekha ........

gaon ki chaupal bhi suni thi bahut kam log jine koi jaruri kaam ho vahi gahr se bahar nikle hue the.............

tabhi mein ghumte ghumte ek ghar k paas pahuncha ....jaha se kisi aurat k rone ki aawaj aarahi thi ........tab maine apni indriyo ki shakti ko jagrit karke uss gahr k picche aagaye .....ab muzhe ander ka haal saf saf dikh bhi raha tha aur sunayi bhi de raha hai.........

Aurat chatti putkar ro rahi thi ......hyye mera baccha .....mera munna......le gaye ....legaye ....usse.bhi...uthakar ........koi toh dhund k laao ....muzhe mera baccha chahiye....mere jigar ka tukda...........jaane kaha hoga ...woh ......

uska pati uska muh dabate hue - arri chup hoja .....nahi toh woh saaya phir wapas aajaye ga ....aur hamare chotte bache ko bhi utha kar le jaaye ga........

Meinne waha kuch tamsik urja mehsus ki ....hona ...ho .....jo ..bhi bacche ko lekar gaya hai woh koi insan nahi tha........

mein uss urha ka picha karte hue ......uss gufa tak pahunch gaya jaha se bahta hua jal aage son nadi ka roop leta tha....

.gufa k ander muzhe kuch hulchal mehsus hui ....mein apni gati ka prayog karta hua ........ander pahunch gaya......waha do kaale saaye bacche ko lekar gufa ki band deewar ...mein pravesh kar ne hi wale the k

maine jiske haato mein baccha tha usko piche se garden se pakad liya........jise dekhkar uske dusre saathi .....ne muzhpar apni urja se war kiya lekin muzhpar usska koi asar na hote dekhkar.....woh wahi deewar mein sama gaya............

Air jiski maine garden pakdi thi.......usspar mein apne aagya chakra ki urja se waar karne laga jisse woh tadap utha.....aur baccha uske haath se chut gaya .......

maine bacche ko vayu tatva ki urja se hawa mein hi rok liya .....aur uss saaye k upar apni pakad majboot kar li ......

lekin tabhi woh saaya ......dhua bankar uss gufa ki deewar mein ghus gaya.......

meine check karke dekha ....na toh waha koi portal tha.....aur na hi dwar phir woh saaye kaise iss deewar mein pravesh kar gaye aur yaha se kaha chale gaye.....

khair main bacche ko lekar ysdi ghar k paas pahunch aur aawaj lagane laga........

Ander se wahi aadmi bahar aaya......aur mere haath mein baccha....dekhkar muzhe hi baccha le jaane wala samzha..........

Aadmi - aagaya tu .......mere dusre bete ko bhi lene aagye.......lekin mein tuzhe aisa nahi karne dunga.....aur woh paas mein pada hassiya uthakar meri taraf badh gayi.......

Mein - arre...arre...bhai kya kar rahe ho ........muzhe tumahara baccha ...nadi k kinare behosh pada mila .....toh mein isse yaha le aaya.......

Usska bacha usski god mein dekkar mein wapas jaane k liye hi muda .......ki tabhi usski patni bahar aayi ...aur apna baccha dekhkar ussko apni goad mein le liye aur uske poore chehre ko chumne lagi maano aaj usse sansar ka sabse bada khajana mil gaya ho .....

Main aage bada hi tha k uss aadmi ne mere pair pakad liye....
maaf kar do bhai maine tumhe galat samzha.....tum toh mere liye bhagwan ho ...jo mere bete ko wapas laaye ho......main jaanta hu ki yeh tumhe nadi k kinare nahi mila .

....kyu ki aaj tak bhi unn saayo ne kisi ka baccha aise choda nahi.hai.......tum kaun ho......itna kah sakta hu tum iss gaon k nahi ho .....aur kou sadharan insan nahi ho.....

Main - nahi bhai mein bhi tumahari tarah ek aam insan hu.....bas bholenath ki kuch kripa hai........kya tum muzhe kuch bata sakre ho .....jo iss gaon mein ho raha hai

Phir woh muzhe apne ghar k ander ke gaya.....waha ussne muzhe pine k liye chach aur khane k liye gud ki dali di ........

Waha muzhe pata chala ...k kuch dino se gaon k baache gayab ho rahe hai......kuch logo ne kaale saaye dekhe hai ....isiliye sabka yahi andaja hai k yeh unka hi kaam hai.....

Abhi 4 din pahele Thakur sahab k pote bhi achanak gayab ho gaya hai..........uss faon mein ab Khud Thakur sahab bhi surakshit nahi hai toh hum ab kaha jaaye.......

aur jiss din se baccho ka gayab hona shuru ho gaya hai ....yss..din se saari fasal sukh gayi aur saare khet banjar hai.......

saari baato se itna toh main jasn gaya tha k yeh kisi Sukshma jeev Pret ya kisi kaali shakti ka kaam hai...........

phir mein wapas haweli apne room mein aagaya........

Jab mein Room mein pahuncha toh bahar se koi jor jor se darwaja pit raha hai........

Maine kholkar dekha toh saamne ...sanku aur Vikki the.......

Sanku - kya kar raha tha yar kitne der se aawaj laga raha hu......

Kuch nahi .....woh tohda washroom chala gaya tha......

Chal na yaar Rinku ko milkar aate hai......( Rinku pahle hi gaon k liyr nikal chuka tha)

Main - haa thik hai sabko bolde ready eahe mein abhi aata hu......

Sanku - saare ... tera hi intejar kar rahe hai .....jaldi chal ab

Mein bhi ab sabhi frnds k saath chal pada Rinku k ghar ki taraf....

Uska ghar paaka tha ....gaon k gharo k mukable yhoda thik tha.......jab hum uske ghar pahunche ....toh woh waha nhi tha.........

Rinku ki maa ne bataya k woh abhi palbar pahele yahi tha ...ab na..jaane kaha rah gaya.....

aaj k liye itna hi .........
.agla ...update kal........

superb fantastic update

 

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Update - 78

ab tak aapne dekha Abhi apne Family & Friends k saath Sonpur pahunch gaya......
Waha usse gaon mein gayab honewale baccho k baare mein pata chal

ab aage ........,.....

Abhi & frnds Rinku k ghar gaye toh woh waha nahi tha.........
Rinku k Maa ne bataya k abhi toh yahi tha...........
Lima thoda bechain ho gayi ....kyuki ek hafte se na toh Rinku ko usne dekha tha aur na hi koi baat ki thi........

Mein - Chinta mat karo aajayega yahi kahi gaya hoga.........

Sanku - yr yeh bhi koi baat hui.....hum yaha milne k liye aaye lekin bhaisahab ka toh koi pata nahi .

Rinku mom - Shayad bagiche mein gaya ho........

Lima - maa ji kya aap bata sakti ho k kaha hai woh bagicha........

tab Rinku mom ne hume bataya gaon k dakshin disha mein ekdum aakhri chor par hai....

mein nischint tha....kyuki k muzhe pata tha k Rinku iss samay kaha hai aur kya kar raha hai....

jab maine ussse apne atmashakti k ansh se thik kiya tha.....tab se woh muzhse jud chuka tha......

Aur ussi kaaran ussmein kuch shaktiya bhi jagrit ho gayi thi ........

Ab Rinku vaayu ki gati se bhi tez daud sakta tha, ...uska sharir majboot ho gaya tha.......aur ussmein pahle se koi 20 guna yani 20 aadmiyo k lagbhag takat aagayi thi...........

Bagicha yaha se karib 3 km tha .....aur waha paidal k siwa jaane ka koi sadhan nahi tha........
Abhi din dhalne mein bhi jyada samay nahi tha......

Shyam - abe yaar itna dur jaakar aane mein toh andhera ho jaayega ....aur itna chalne ki hume aadat bhi toh nahi hai......aur yadi hum raasta bhatak gaye.....toh pata nahi hum kaha bhatakte firenge....

Ashu - haa yr baat toh thik kah raha hai.......

phir hum waha se chal diye .......

Chalte chalte hum gaon k nadi k kinare aagaye.....sab waha apne apne partner k saath busy ho gaye.........Rimpy aur mein ek jagah baith gaye.....

Rimpy - jaan yaha par kuch thik nahi ho raha hai.....muzhe iss gaon mein kuch alag si feeling aarahi hai.........Lagta hai koi bahut badi baat hai jisse yaha k log chupa rahe hai.....

Mein - tum bilkul thik kah rahi ho jaan.....phir maine usse ssari baatien batayi......

Rimpy - ohhh toh yeh baat hai ......kahi rinku koi musibat mein toh nahi ...........
Lima bechari dekho kaise gumsum baithi hai akele......

Mein - Nahi jaa Rinku ko kuch nahi hoga.......mera uspar pura dhyan hai........

jab usse meri jarurat hogi mein waha pal bhar mein pahunch jaaunga .....,...aise thodi der ghumte hue sham ho gayi din dhalne ka samay ho gaya ...isiliye hum haveli wapas aagaye.....

dekhe toh Rinku kaha hai........

Jab Rinku apne frnds k aane ki rah dekh raha tha.....toh do kaale saaye usske ghar se thodi dur ek ghar se nikalte hue dekhe .........

uss samay hawa tez chal rahi thi aur dhul ud rahi thi ....jissase kisi ko kuch dikhayi nahi de raha tha ......lekin Rinku ko sab kuch dikhayi de raha tha..........

Rinku ne dekha unke haath mein kuch hai......woh samaz gaya ho na ho yeh phir kisi bacche ko le jaa rahe hai.........

Rinku un saayo ka picha karta hua .....dakshin disha mein Gaon k bahar nadi k kinare shamshan tak gaya........

jab unn saayo ne kisi ko itne tezi se pichha karte dekha.......toh shamshan mein stith bargad k ped ki khoh mein uss bacche ko chupaya aur ped k ander samakar dekhne lage ......k kahi yeh wahi ladka toh nahi jissne unka pahele saamna hua tha.....

Lekin jab Rinku ko dekha toh pata chala k yeh koi dusra hai.....unhone Rinku par waar karna shuru kiya .....achanak hue waar se Rinku k pair dagmagaye aur woh jameen par gir pada.......

Abhi woh uthata uske pahele ek ne Rinku k haath pakde ...aur ...ek ne pair.......
aur Rinku ko uper ki or le jaane lage

Riknu - Abe kalluo saalo kaha le jaa rahe ho apne baap ka maal samaz rakha hai........
abe ..chutiyo kuch bologe bhi ya nahi .....saalo haramkhoro....m..cdooo.....kaale..
kaluto.....aur na jaane kitni gaaliya di .......

itni galiya sunkar toh un dono k kaan pak gaye .........unka gussa badne laga aur unhone gusse mein Rinku ko niche phenk diya.......

lekin niche girne k bajaye Rinku hawa mein gulatiya maarte hua aaram se khada ho gaya.....

Rinku - abe kaallu mama apna kiraya toh bata de jo itni mast sair karayi......

Ab dono saayo ka gussa bahut bad gaya tha........aur niche Rinku k saamne aagaye.....

Saaya ek - bahut ho gaya bacche tera khel ab tuzhe zinda nahi chodenge........

unki aawaj sunkar Rinku ki haasi nikal gayi ....kyu ki unki aawaj bahut jyada baarik thi aur aisa lag raha tha ki koi aurat naak se baat kar rahi ho.....

Riku - abeeee teri toh ....kallluve ...... yeh kya hai be ......

Apni khilli udate hue Rinku ko dekhkar dono ab Rinku par zhapat pade .....Rinku bhi yahi chahta tha.........

Waha shamshan mein Bhagwan Bhootnath ki ek murti thi , jisske aage Rinku khada tha......jaise hi dono usspar zhapte Rinku tezi se hat gaya .. aur dono Bholenath ki murti se takraye.....aur unki chikh nikli .....aur dono dur jaakar gire....

Dono ne socha yaha se bhag jaana hi thik hai......Abhi woh uthkar jaane k liye kgade hi hue the k Riku ne waha bholenath ka trishool jor se phenk kar maara ......

Jo sidha ek saaye k pichwade mein jaakar ghusa .....aur wo h aiiiiiii .....karte hue aunde muh jameen par gir gaya........
tab tak dusra dhue mein badalkar nikal gaya......

Bhagwan k trishool k waar k kaarn woh apne aapko dhue mein nahi badal paaraha tha....

Rinku - Trishul pakadar ..hilate hue .....kyu...bhai ...kaalu ......ab batayega kuch ....ya..thodi aur sewa karu.........lekin woh tha ki ajeeb si aawaj mein chikhe jaa raha tha ....lrkin bol kuch nahi raha tha......

Tabhi waha par Abhi uske saamne teleport hokar pahunch gaya.......

Rinku ne dekha k Abhi k haath mein baccha hai........

Abhi - chod de bhai usse ....ab kya uske pichwada mein puri gufa banayega kya........hume isse bahut kuch ugalwana hai.......

Rinku ne ab usse chod diya ......aur trishool bhi nikal diya .....jisse uski aur chikh nikal gayi.......

Abhi ne baccha Rinku ko pakdaya ......Aur apne panch tatva ki urja k bandhan ...aur Varun paash se usko bandh diya ......aur .......waha se thidi dur rinku ka ek aam ka bagicha tha waha le aaye.....

Saare gaon ki jameen aur bagiche banjar pade the ....lekin Rinku ka yeh bagicha hara bhara aur aam k fallo se labalab bhara pada tha......

Uss baagiche mein Rinku k purvajo k dwara kshetra pal ka mandir tha........
jo is jameen ki raksha karta tha..........

Har jamin ka ek kshetra pal hota hai.......jo pret roop mein hota hai...........woh apna kshetra nirdharit karta hai aur usmein vicharan karta hai........
yadi usse prasann kar liya jaaye toh uss jagah ki raksha woh swayam karta hai....

isiliye hamare vedic parampara mein har hawan k baad kshetrapal ki bali ka vidhan hai.......Jimein hum udad ki khichadi...nariyal ...petha ....iisi bhi balu dete hai....usske bina hawan poora nahi hota....


Uss bagiche mein mandir k paas hi ek purana sa kamra tha....Abhi ne yss saaye ko wahi band kar diya .......Abhi k bandhan ko todkar aur kshetra pal k mandir k kaaran na toh ab woh yaha se nikal sakta tha aur na hi uska koi saathi yaha aa sakta tha....

Rinku Abhi ko gale lagate huye ......aaja gale lag jaa mere yaar ....iss chichundar....ki wajah se tuzhse dhang se mil bhi nahi saka.....
Aur Abhi ko kaskar gale laga leta hai......

Abhi - abe chod ....mein koi waisa nahi hu ....iss tarah apni ..Lima ko gale laga liyo.....

Rinku - kya yr......mein bhi koi wisa thodi hu ...aur hasne lagta hai.....

Abhi - Waise yaar ...bahut kam samay mein bahut kuch sikh gaya tu.....aur kya kub mukabla kiya hai dost ......

Rinku - bhai yeh sab teri hi den hai.......accha chod ab muzhe iss bacche ko lekar jaana hai.....isske ghar wale pareshan ho rahe honge.....

Aur Rinku uss bacche ko lekar waha se nikal gaya.....

Ab mein uss saaye ko hosh mein laane ka prayatna karne laga.......

meri badi koshisho k baad ussko hosh aaya .........muzhe apne saamne dekhkar woh ghabra gaya .....kyu ki yeh wahi tha jisski garden uss gufa mein maine pakdi thi.....

Usse kuch puchna bekar tha.....iisiliye mein uski aankho mein se uske dimag mein ghus gaya ...aur ...saari baat....pata karne laga ....maine waha hone wali ghatnao k sabhi kaaran pata kar liye the ... ...

yaha dakshin disha k hi pahadi k piche ghane jungle mein ek jatadhari tantrick jiske gale mein insani haddiyo ki mala thi aur bas ek kaala langot baandhe hue tha , usski aankhien jalte angare jaisi dahak rahi thi......

bade krodh mein apne saamne jalti hui aag mein kuch dalta hai ....jisse uss aag se ek roshni nikalti hai ....aur maane khade ek saaya ko lagti hai .....jisse woh jal jaata hai ...aur pal bhar mein waha tha toh bas rakh ka dher.....

Tantrik Aghora - yeh kaun aagaya hai jo hamre kaam mein bada pahuncha raha hai........asaflta k Aghora k paas ek hi saja hai maut ..........

phir waha sthit Pertraj ki murti par apna anguthe ko chira lagakar kuch bunde khun ki chidak ta hai ........

Aghora - yeh mere maalik bas 2 din aur uske baad amavasya ko 101 baccho ki bali tuzhe chadaunga ...aur unke garam garam khoon se tera abhishek karunga ......tab....tak mere hi khoon se apni pyas bujzha........

Bas 2 din aur usske baad iss pritvi par mein ban jasunga sabse shaktishali.......ha...ha....ha......

Timbak.....Kal sandhya kaal mein ..... hamre adhin in 5 preto ko le jaana .........aur bali ki sankhya ko pura karna .....ab humare paas kal ka hi din sheh hai......aur haa Savdhan .....lagta hai gaon mein kisi adbhut shaki ne pravesh kiya hai

Timbak - ji Gurudev......dhyan rakhunga.....aur aapka aashirwad toh saath hi hai........dek luga uss shakti ko bhi ......kal raat tak woh ..aur bali k liye baaki bacche aapke charno mein honge......

Aghora - yadi tumse koi chuk hui toh pahele tumahri hi bali chadegi dhyan rakhna

Aur Timbak waha se preto ko lekar nikal gaya.......

Uske baad aghora ....waha jamin k niche jaati hui sidiyo se hote hue ........under ground thikane mein pahuncha .......waha 95 bacche bandhi bane hue behosh pade the.......

101 ki sankhya pooei karne k liye ...Aghora ko bas 6 ki aur jarurat thi.........

Yaha Abhi ne pakde hue saaye se sab kuch pata kar ke usse khatam kar diya.........

Usse pata tha k Aghora apni bali ki sankhya poori karne k liye jarur kissi ko bhejega ........

Abhi sochne laga k ab aisa kya kiya jaaye ...jissase Aghora k changul se Sabhi baccho ko surakshit bachaya jaa sake........

isske liye woh maya ka bhi prayog nahi kar sakta .....kyuki pret Sukshma jeev hote hai jisse koi bhi maaya unko bhramit nahi kar sakti......

Toh ab kya kare ......Phir Abhi ko dhyan aaya.....iss ....vishaya.mein Rimpy hi hai jo madat kar sakti hai........

Aur Abhi waha se teleport hokar sidha gaweli k chat par pahuncha ......aur waha se utarte hue .....niche Rimpy k kamre ki taraf jaane laga .......abhi aadhi raat kka samay ho gaya tha.........

Abhi Rimpy k Room ki khidki tak pahuncha aur ander dekha toh .....Rimpy k Room mein Lima .....aur ...Sophia bhi hai.....Abhi Teleport hokaar ander gaya ..aur ....chupke se Rimpy ko uthakar room k bahar teleport ho gaya......

Rimpy ne Abhi k gale mein baahen daal di aur apne aakhien khol di ....

Abhi - tum ..abhi jaagi ho ....phir sone ka natak kyu ki ......

Rimpy - tumahare paas hone ka ahsas yeh dil hi bata deta hai.......jo tumhe mehsus karke jor jor se dhadkne lagta hai......

Abhi .ne usse niche utara ......Jaan muzhe kuch baat karni hai ....yaha koi bhi aa sakta hai ...chat par chalo.......

Aur Abhi Rimpy ko lekar chat ki taraf le chalta hai..........

Do aankhien thi jo inhe chup kar dekh rahi thi ..........

Aur woh do aankhien Chat tak Abhi k piche piche gayi ...wahi sidhiyo par khade rahakar dono ki baaton ko sunnane laga......

Raat bit gayi subah nayi aasha ki kiran k saath sabhi uthe ..........Gaon mein mele ki tayariya hone lagi .....kisi bhi gram vasi aur Thakur sahab ka gaon mein hone wali gahtnao k kaaran mela karne ka maan nahi tha .....lekin purkho k dwara shuru ki gayi parampara ko aise chod naho sakte the.......

Subah ka breakfast....karne hum sab baithe the ......tabhi Raju mama ......jo pichle kai dino se sarab mein dhut the......jinki haalat dekhkar mom ko bhi bahut dukh hua tha........

aaj woh bina piye dinning table k paas aaye ..bade fresh lag rahe the.....

Mom apne bhai ko thik dekhkar baddi khush hogayi.....

Raju mama - aaj mein apne pyare bhanje k saath breakfast karunga......

Aur woh abhi k paas wali chair par baith gaye addu bhi apne bhai k paas baithi thi ........

Breakfast karte hue Abhi ka dhyan ...Raju mama ki thali par gaya.....

Abhi - arre mama .....aap...kheer...kyu nahi kha rahe ho ...bahut tasty hai...

Satish mama - Rahne de beta ...isse mitha pasand nahi ........la idhar de main hi kha lunga.......

Nilima maasi ne jaise hi Katori uthane ko haath badaya.......Raju mama ne rok diya.....

arre rahne de Nilima aaj mein apne bhanje ko apne haatho se kheer khilaunga.......

Nani - Kya baat hai beta aaj bhanje par bada pyar aaraha hai.....

Raju mama - kyu nahi aayega ....aakhir iklauta Bhanja jo hai ........

Aur Raju Abhi ko apne haatho se apne katore se kheer khilane lage.......

Addu - mamu muzhe bhi khilao na .....

Raju - arre nahi addu yeh sirf Abhi k liye hai .......

Abhi - kyu mamu .....adddduuu...ko.....ahhhh

aur bolte bolte Abhi jamin par pada tadapne laga uske muh se jhaag nikalne laga......

Yaha gaon Timbak gaon mein bali k liye bacche dhund raha tha ....lekin poore gaon mein ek bhi baccha nazar nahi aaya......

Apne preto k saath ghumte ghumte nadi k kinare aaya toh waha ka nazara dekh kar woh bahut khush ho gaya.........

Nadi mein ,6 bacche pani khel rahe the....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update raat ko .....

kya shandaar shabdo ka chayan hai aur writing skills yoh jabardast

 

[Sy Kumar]

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