Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Sy Kumar]

Update plz

 

[smart Vishal]

Nice story

 

[ckkhandu]

ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR



Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai

Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai

prithvi se upar 7 lok

भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और सत्यलोक

Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok,

तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म

स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है

इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है

ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है

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अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu

Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh Adira ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....
agla update jald hi......

nice update bro

 

[ckkhandu]

Update - 19

ab tak aapne dekha....A1ki apne shastro ko prapt karne k liye yatra shuru ho gayi hai ...

aur abhi raat ko apne ghar mein ek nakab posh ko dekhta hai......aur fir uska chera dekhkar hairan ho jaata ha.....

ab aageee....

Raat mein apne papa ko iss tarah dekh kar mein bada hairan tha......

tabhi muzhe aawaj aayi.......Bete apne papa ko aise chup chup kar nahi dekha karte ......yaha saamne aao ..

mein papa k saamne jaakar
--- Papa aap inn ..kapdo ..mein ...kaise kya...kar rahe ho .....aur aise choro ki tarah apne hi ghar mein .....
aakir aap jaun hooo .....kya sachaayi hai aapki......

R.V.S - arre ...arre ...arre beta thoda saans toh le.....ek saath itne sawal

aao meri study mein chal hai wahi baat karenge .....

mein papa k saath unke study room mein pahunch gaya.....

papa - baitho beta ...tumahare saare sawalo ka jawab milega...
beta jab Parmatma kisi ko kuch shaktiya deta hai toh usska iss sansar k prati kuch kartaya banta hai
beta Shaktiyo k saath jimmedaari bhi aajati hai ....

mein - papa kaun si shaktiya aur kaisi jimmedariya...

Fir papa muzhe 5 pidio pahle hamare purvaj dwara ki hui tapasya aur vardan mien unke pariwar ko mili hui teen shaktiyo k baare mein batate hai

muzhe unki baatopar vishwas nahi hua toh Papa ne ne hawa mein haath uper kiya aur apni aankhien band ki aur unke haatho mein pragat hui ek badi si talwar




uss laal rang ki roshni se chamkti hui talwar ko dekhkar mein bada hairan hua......
Papa - Beta yeh hai Sangharak ki khooni talwar ....jo hamesha apradhiyo k khoon ki pyasi rahti hai

Mein - Sangaharak .... kahi yeh RAW ka wahi agent toh nahi ...jiske baare mein baare kuch log sirf kahani maante hai kuch log hakkikat

papa - Haa beta wahi hai

mein - toh papa yeh Talwar aapke k paas kya kar rahi hai.....

Papa - Kyu ki beta mein hi hu woh
apradhiyo ka Bhakshak aur acche logo ka Rakshak SANGHARAK

aur yahi baat tumhe batane k liye hi aaj tumahare saamne iss bhesh mein aaya hu ....kyu ki ab tumahari training ka dusra safar shuru karne ka samay aagaya hai ....

Ab chalo itna kahkar papa ne apni aankhein band ki aur phir Apne normal kapdo mein aagaye

Ab mein Papa k saath apne Ghar k bbasement mein Jaha hamari Cars aur bikes Rakhi jaati thi

mein - papa yaha garrage mein kya hai ..hum yaha kyu aaye hai..

Papa beta thoda ruk jaao bas dekhte raho...
Phir papa waha ek diwar k paas pahunch gaye aur mera haath pakadkar ho gaye deewar k aar paar

mein hairani se papa ki aur dekhta hu

papa hairan hone ki jarurat kahi yeh koi deewar nahi just image thi ki dekh walo ko yaha sirf deewar dikhe aur kuch nahi ...
saamne ek glass ki bani hui lift thi ...
mein uss lift mein papa k saath ander chala gaya aur , pahuch gaya ek corridor mein jisske dono taraf kamre bane hue the
beta yeh rooms yaha rahenewalo k liye aur kuch rooms storerooom aur weapon rooms k liye use hote hai

uss laambe corridor se chalte chalte meine andaja lagaya tha ki yaha kam se kam 1000 rooms k lagbhag honge

aur phir hum pahunch gaye ek bade se hall mein jaha 5000 log aaram se rah sakte ho, waha chaaro taraf screen mein kuch videos chal rahi thi aur ..kareeb kareeb 1000 log waha ki monitoring kar rahe the







apne ghar k niche itna bada control room dekhkar hairaan ho gayaa..

Papa - yeh hai yaha ka control room , yaha se poori State ki gatividhiyo par najar rakhi jaati hai ....aur humare Desh mein jitne bhi mere agents hai issi k jariye muzhse connected rahte hai .. aur yeh saara system meri iss watch se......
abhi mein yeh sab soch raha tha ki

papa - beta kaha kho gaye abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai....ab papa ne apni watch mein kuch kiya tabhi waha ek aur lift aagayi aur uuke iariye hum pahunch gaye aur niche yaha ek bahut bada hall tha jaha kuch log....
advaced weapon aur fighting skills ki training kar rahe the....papa ko dekhkar sabhi ruk gaye .....aur unme se 5 ne aakar salute kiya ....

papa - beta yeh 5 hai yaha k best agents kal se yahi tumahari training shuru hogi....
mein - Par papa mein toh master se martial art ki training kar hi raha hu

papa - beta yaha tumhe fighting skills k saath saath computer programming aur hacking bhi sikhayi jaayegi...

tumne abhi tak kya sikha jara hum bhi dekhe ......toh jara ho jaaye do do haath innse.....

Mein - ji papa kyu nahi main bhi toh dekhu aapke top agents mein kitna dum hai
papa - toh bolo innmein se se kis ke saath lado ge

toh ussmein se ek ko meine chuna
jisski hieght 6.5ft k karreb thi

papa - Haaruk .... good choice....go on

ab shuru hua mukabla....
ab mein bhi savdhan ho gaya tabhi Haruk ne muzhe kisi bacche ki tarah kandhe par uthaya




aur patak diye ...jisse dekhkar Haruk woh 4 agents bahut khush hue....lekin abhi woh nahi jaante the kisse paala pada hai, tabhi maine mauka derkh kar ek jump maari aur Superman punch sidha Haruk k jabde par aur Aur Haruk dharashayi...
yeh sab itne jaldi hua k kisi ko bhi samz mein nahi aaya,

Papa - wah beta ..i am proud of you ...
Haruk ko ek punch mein dharashayi kar dena matlab ..ab tumhe martial art ke aage ki teaining ka samay aagaya hai......

aise hi ab papa muzhe ab khud hamare vansh ko virasat mein milne wali shaktiyon ko jagrit karne ka prashikshan de rahe the.......

aur computer science aur hacking bhi india k top most hackers se sikh raha tha.....

aap soch rahe honge k aise itne bade jagah ka ghar k niche nirman kaise hua ...toh bata du ...jo pahele bhi likh chuka hu ....jab hero ne Naina k garbh mein pravesh kiya tha toh mahaguru ne usski shaktiyo ka vibhajan kar diya tha...Iss mein jo Srijanatmak shakti
(creation power) Naina mien hi samahit ki gayi thi..... aur jab hero
5 yrs ka hua tha toh dheere Naina ki powers jaagne lag jaati hai jisse R.V.S aur mahaguru usse control karna sikhate hai.......aur issi power se iss basement ka nirman hua hai ....
yeh creation power aage kahani mein bahut kaam aayegi..
lekin abhi hero ko Apne mom k power k baare mein nahi pata...

ab din par din jaane kyu Meri aankon mein kuch badalne laga

aise hi ek din school k lunch time mein mein aur rimpy baithe baatein kar rahe the...

mein Accha rimpy aur baatao tumahari tech ki practice kaisi chal rahi hai ...

Rimpy -( man mein) haaye aaj kitba handsome lag raha hai lagta hai bas inn aankho mein kho jaau ....lekin yeh buddu toh kuch samazta hi nahi ...uff

nahi ..muzhe ye kya ho raha hai...
phir apni hi soch se sharmakar usne dono haatho se apna muh chupa liya..

mein sochne laga abhi iss pagal ladki ko kya ho gaya ...uff..hey ..bhagwan
innko samzna bhi bahut mushkil hai

tabhi muzhe kuch suzha ki yahi samay hai dekhne ka ki papa ki training kya rang laayi hai ..

Mein --Uff Rimpy jara dekho na meri aankon mein kuch chala gaya lagta hai.. ..dekho na vahut jal raha hai

meri baat sunkar woh jaldi se palti aur meri aankhon mein dekhkar funk maarne lagi..... tum bhi abhi kya karte ho ...dhyan nahi rakh sakte a...ab kaisa feel ho raha hai.
issi mauke ka fayda utha kar mien usski aakhon k jariye usske bhitar zhank k dekha toh sab jasn gaya jo woh soch rahi thi.......arre wah beta abhi chahat ka beej yaha bhi panaone laga hai.....abhi mein usski bhanavo ko padh hi rha tha ki ek sky blue colour ki roshni ne mere saamne aagayi......sochne laga ki yeh roshni Rimpy k bhiter kaise ...kaha se

tabhi Rimpy ne muzhe hilakr ...
Arre phir kho gaye.....Abhi tum apna ilaj karawo ....aaj kal baithe baithe jaane kaha kho jaate ho...

meine socha mera waham hoga baad mein papa se puch lunga,....tabhi mere dost log waha aagaye....

Bhanu -- kya baat hai yr aaj Lunch time k baad class mein kyu nahi aaye aur yaha akele baithe kya kar rahe the tum dono chalo abhi ghar bhi jasna hai ya yahi baithna hai...

Bhanu ki baat sunkar hum dono hairan ho gaye aur chal pade apne apne gahr...

Aise hi school..yoga...basement ..aur dosto k bich life chal rahi thi...kabhi kabhi Dadi dadi se milne aur mera dost aapko yaad hoga Vayau Ghoda se milne Gaon jaata tha....

Ritu di k kahne par abhi gaon mein bhi dadu ne college hospitals saari city jaisi saari suvidhaye kar di thi....

Virasat mein milne wali teen powers mein se do ko mein haasil kar chuka tha Mind- controlling aur wepon ...aur ab hacking mein bhi mein expert hone laga tha...

abhi k liye itna hi ..
agla update jald hi ---

awesome update bro

 

[smart Vishal]

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Update - 11

ab tak aapne dekha .....hero ka
janam........ab aage....

Samay aise hi gujarta chala gaya....aur ab nanha Abhi 5 saal ka hone wala tha......
R.V.S bhi apni dhak Bussiness lobby mein aur apne Dusre roop
( Sangharak) jo kahani mein aage dekhne ko milega k roop mein underworld k logo mein apna dar bitha chuka tha.
aise hi ek din jab R.V.S Puja mein baithe the tab unhe antarman mein Mahaguru ki aawaj aai....

Mahaguru - putra ab samay aagaya hai Abhi k janm k dusre padav ka
isiliye tumahare putra k aanewale paanhve janamdin ka utsav tumhe apne mahal mein hi manana padega

R.V.S - Aap jo kahoge wahi hoga gurudev..

Puja se uthkar R.V.S ne apni patni se iss baare mein baat ki , wahi nanha Abhi apne room mein so raha tha aur Ritu wahi baithkar apna homework kar rahi thi .....

tabhi Abhi achanak rote hue uta

Ritu - arre ky hua mere betu ko kyu ro raha hai chup ho jaao ...

Abhi - di ....di .....woh ...bahut bala sher tha di .....woh muzhe kha jaayega
.....meli talaf dekh kal hash raha tha di
itna bol kar rone laga....

Ritu - nahi betu yaha koi sher nahi hai
dekh (gale lagakar) tune sapna dekha hotga betu chup ho jaa....
dekh tu mera bahadur bhai hai na ....itna kahkar ritu k aankhon se bhi aansoo nikalne lage

apni di ki aankhon mein aansoo dekhkar ...abhi apna rona bhul gaya.

Abhi - alle meli pyali di ab aap tyu lo lahi ho, dekho mein nahi ro raha na di
ab aap bhi mat rovo

Tabhi Room ke door par knock hota hai.... Ritu jaldi se apne aur apne bhai k ansoo ponchte hue
Ritu - kaun hai , door khula hai aajaao

tabhi ek servant andar aata hai .....
chotti malkin aapki mom aapko niche bula rahi hai...
itna kahkar woh chala gaya

Abhi - di mein bhi chalunga....
thik hai bhai ......phir dono niche aajate hai
niche jaise hi Abhi apni maa ko dekhta hai toh daudkar godi mein baith jaata hai, aur maa k gaalo par ek kiss kar deta hai,
apne bete ka pyar dekhkar naina bhi Abhi ka gaal chum leti hai aur gale lagati hai ....arre mera pyara shona

R.V.S - kya baat hai beta saara pyar maa k liye..... aur humare liye kuch nahi..

Abhi - Papa bhi toh mein maa ko hi pyar karunga aapka number baad mein aayega..

Ritu - accha betu aur mera number

Abhi - arre didu aap yaha aajao na hum dono hi maa ko pyar karenge

ab Ritu bhi apni maa k paas pahunch gayi aur Naina k gaal par kiss karke baith gayi maa ko pakadkar

R.V.S - ( zhooti narajgi jatate hue)
accha ab tum teeno toh ek ho gaye ab gaon jaane ka plan cancel ,
Dada - Dadi se milne ka bhi plan cancel

Abhi - Ritu kaunsa plan papa aapne toh hume bataya hi nahi

R.V.S - beta abhi humare iss nanhe Abhi ka janamdin aane wala hai toh socha issbar gaon k mahal mein sabhi rishtedaaro k saath manayenge ...

aur ab tumahari mom ko bhi jarurat hai toh woh waha kuch din rahegi jab tak nanha mehman nahi aajata

Abhi - kaun aanewala hai papa ,

R.V.S - beta tumahare saath khelne k liye ek nanhi pari aayegi

( ji haan Nanina ko abhi 8 mahine ka garbh hai)

ab R.V.S & family pahunch gaye gaon
janamdin mein honewale utsav k liye mahal ko khub sajaya gaya tha

RANA MAHAL --










RanaMahal ko khub chamkaya gaya
phir aaya woh din ...jab Abhi poore 5 varsha ka hone wala tha...

Aaj poora gaon khush tha ..kyu ki R.S.S ne apne pote k janamdin ki khushi mein, phir apne bhandar gaowalo k liye khol diye

aaj pujan aur hawan ki tayari aacharya somdutta kar rahe the ... tabhi waha Mahaguru yagnesh ka bhi aagman hua..

R.V.S ne bade shradhha bhav se unka swagat kiya aur aasan par bithaya ...

Yaha Abhi apni Dai k godi mein baitha bada khush ho raha tha

Shushmita devi (Dadi)- Beta Naina tum thodi der aaram karo aaj apne lalaa ko mein apne haatho se tayyar karungi

Naina - nahi maa ji mein kar lungi abhi pujan ka bhi samay hone wala hai

Dadi - abhi Mahaguru ji ne bataya ki muhurat mein 4 hrs baaki hai

Ritu - aap kyu pareshan hoti hai dadi mein bhai ko tayar kar lungi

Dadi - arre meri pyari ladoo badi samzjdar ho gayi hai... lekin beta tum apni maa ka dhyan rakho ...mein isse tayyar kar deti hu

Abhi - Haa didu mom ko aaram karne do... Dadi muzhe tayar kar degi..
ab mein bada ho gaya hu

Maa - wah mera betu toh samazdar ho gaya

phir Abhi apne daadi k saath unke room mein chala gaya






wha jaise hi Abhi pahuncha toh na jaane kyu abhi ko nind aane lagi

Abhi - Dadi muzhe bahut nind aarahi hai muzhe sona hai

Dadi - nahi betu abhi toh aapko tayar hona hai puja mein baithne k liye

Abhi - Dadi pls thodi der sone do na

Dadi ne socha abhi abhi toh bahut samay hai .....
thik hai betu so jaa thodi der...

yaha Mahaguru apne aasan par baithakar saari sthiti ka jaayja le rahe the, tabhi kuch sochkar unhone Abhi k Dada aur dadi ko bulawa bheja

mahaguru k bulawe par par Dadi ko turrant Abhi ko sota hua chod kar jaana pada

yaha patal lok mein Durmukhasur (D.S.R) aapne pita k param shatru ki khoj mein laga hua tha ....ki tabhi usse prithvi par Aur 14 loko mein ek alag urja ka aabhas hone laga.
( dhyan rahe aaj Abhi k saath saath 14 loko mein janm lene wali uski shaktiya bhi 5 varsh ki hone wali hai)

tabhi ek nanhi pari si ladki daud kar waha aajaati hai ...bhai ..bhai karte hue rote hue aati hai

D.S.R - arre kya hua meri gudiya kyu ro rahi hai...

ladki - aapko mera janamdin yaad nahi raha ajj

D.S.R - arre meri pyari gudiya nahi bhula aaj raat ko khub jasan hoga

( ji haa yeh K.S ki chotti rani ki putri jo ABHI ki hi shaktiyon mein se ek hai
jisska naam hai - MADALSA)

Yaha dharti par mahel mein Mahaguru ko andesha ho gaya ki durmukhasur Urja ka picha karte hue yaha pahunch sakta hai...toh unhone apne mantra shakti se RANAMAHAL ko ek kawach mein band diya......

yaha achanak Abhi ki nind khul jaati hai woh apne chaaro tarf dekhta hai

usse ek madhur sangeet sunayi deta hai, ausa lagta hai jaise usse koi bula raha hai......

tabhi usski nazar saamne diwar par padi .....waha achanak prakash se chamakta hua darwaja pragat hua...jo mahal mein banne hue gupt SHIVALAYA tak jaata hai......isske baare mein kewal Abhi k Dada Aur papa hi jaante the.

Abhi ko aisa laga jaise usse uss darwaje k bhiter koi pukar raha hai ...woh aage bada toh dekha waha nicche ki aur siddiya jaar rahi hai







Un siddiyon se hote hue pahuch gaya Abhi waha bane gupt Shivalaya mein waha adbhut Shivlinga k darshan karte hi Abhi k mukh se mantr nikalne laga OM NAMAHA SHIVAY aur baith gaya dono haath jodkar tabhi uski nazar waha pade do box par padi jinme ek White tha aur ek red

red box se kuch tarange nikalne lagi
aur aawaj aane lagi aao mere maalik apna lo muzhe kab se aapka hi intejaar kar raha tha....Tab ABHI ne woh red box uthaya aur jaise hi khola toh ek tez laal colour ki roshni nikali waise ek energy Abhi k ander se nikli ...jab dono energy aaps mein mili toh pragat hui ek bhayankar aakriti aur phir gunji ek bhaynkar sher ki dahad..

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi....

 

[Amitgupta]

Update - 11

ab tak aapne dekha .....hero ka
janam........ab aage....

Samay aise hi gujarta chala gaya....aur ab nanha Abhi 5 saal ka hone wala tha......
R.V.S bhi apni dhak Bussiness lobby mein aur apne Dusre roop
( Sangharak) jo kahani mein aage dekhne ko milega k roop mein underworld k logo mein apna dar bitha chuka tha.
aise hi ek din jab R.V.S Puja mein baithe the tab unhe antarman mein Mahaguru ki aawaj aai....

Mahaguru - putra ab samay aagaya hai Abhi k janm k dusre padav ka
isiliye tumahare putra k aanewale paanhve janamdin ka utsav tumhe apne mahal mein hi manana padega

R.V.S - Aap jo kahoge wahi hoga gurudev..

Puja se uthkar R.V.S ne apni patni se iss baare mein baat ki , wahi nanha Abhi apne room mein so raha tha aur Ritu wahi baithkar apna homework kar rahi thi .....

tabhi Abhi achanak rote hue uta

Ritu - arre ky hua mere betu ko kyu ro raha hai chup ho jaao ...

Abhi - di ....di .....woh ...bahut bala sher tha di .....woh muzhe kha jaayega
.....meli talaf dekh kal hash raha tha di
itna bol kar rone laga....

Ritu - nahi betu yaha koi sher nahi hai
dekh (gale lagakar) tune sapna dekha hotga betu chup ho jaa....
dekh tu mera bahadur bhai hai na ....itna kahkar ritu k aankhon se bhi aansoo nikalne lage

apni di ki aankhon mein aansoo dekhkar ...abhi apna rona bhul gaya.

Abhi - alle meli pyali di ab aap tyu lo lahi ho, dekho mein nahi ro raha na di
ab aap bhi mat rovo

Tabhi Room ke door par knock hota hai.... Ritu jaldi se apne aur apne bhai k ansoo ponchte hue
Ritu - kaun hai , door khula hai aajaao

tabhi ek servant andar aata hai .....
chotti malkin aapki mom aapko niche bula rahi hai...
itna kahkar woh chala gaya

Abhi - di mein bhi chalunga....
thik hai bhai ......phir dono niche aajate hai
niche jaise hi Abhi apni maa ko dekhta hai toh daudkar godi mein baith jaata hai, aur maa k gaalo par ek kiss kar deta hai,
apne bete ka pyar dekhkar naina bhi Abhi ka gaal chum leti hai aur gale lagati hai ....arre mera pyara shona

R.V.S - kya baat hai beta saara pyar maa k liye..... aur humare liye kuch nahi..

Abhi - Papa bhi toh mein maa ko hi pyar karunga aapka number baad mein aayega..

Ritu - accha betu aur mera number

Abhi - arre didu aap yaha aajao na hum dono hi maa ko pyar karenge

ab Ritu bhi apni maa k paas pahunch gayi aur Naina k gaal par kiss karke baith gayi maa ko pakadkar

R.V.S - ( zhooti narajgi jatate hue)
accha ab tum teeno toh ek ho gaye ab gaon jaane ka plan cancel ,
Dada - Dadi se milne ka bhi plan cancel

Abhi - Ritu kaunsa plan papa aapne toh hume bataya hi nahi

R.V.S - beta abhi humare iss nanhe Abhi ka janamdin aane wala hai toh socha issbar gaon k mahal mein sabhi rishtedaaro k saath manayenge ...

aur ab tumahari mom ko bhi jarurat hai toh woh waha kuch din rahegi jab tak nanha mehman nahi aajata

Abhi - kaun aanewala hai papa ,

R.V.S - beta tumahare saath khelne k liye ek nanhi pari aayegi

( ji haan Nanina ko abhi 8 mahine ka garbh hai)

ab R.V.S & family pahunch gaye gaon
janamdin mein honewale utsav k liye mahal ko khub sajaya gaya tha

RANA MAHAL --










RanaMahal ko khub chamkaya gaya
phir aaya woh din ...jab Abhi poore 5 varsha ka hone wala tha...

Aaj poora gaon khush tha ..kyu ki R.S.S ne apne pote k janamdin ki khushi mein, phir apne bhandar gaowalo k liye khol diye

aaj pujan aur hawan ki tayari aacharya somdutta kar rahe the ... tabhi waha Mahaguru yagnesh ka bhi aagman hua..

R.V.S ne bade shradhha bhav se unka swagat kiya aur aasan par bithaya ...

Yaha Abhi apni Dai k godi mein baitha bada khush ho raha tha

Shushmita devi (Dadi)- Beta Naina tum thodi der aaram karo aaj apne lalaa ko mein apne haatho se tayyar karungi

Naina - nahi maa ji mein kar lungi abhi pujan ka bhi samay hone wala hai

Dadi - abhi Mahaguru ji ne bataya ki muhurat mein 4 hrs baaki hai

Ritu - aap kyu pareshan hoti hai dadi mein bhai ko tayar kar lungi

Dadi - arre meri pyari ladoo badi samzjdar ho gayi hai... lekin beta tum apni maa ka dhyan rakho ...mein isse tayyar kar deti hu

Abhi - Haa didu mom ko aaram karne do... Dadi muzhe tayar kar degi..
ab mein bada ho gaya hu

Maa - wah mera betu toh samazdar ho gaya

phir Abhi apne daadi k saath unke room mein chala gaya






wha jaise hi Abhi pahuncha toh na jaane kyu abhi ko nind aane lagi

Abhi - Dadi muzhe bahut nind aarahi hai muzhe sona hai

Dadi - nahi betu abhi toh aapko tayar hona hai puja mein baithne k liye

Abhi - Dadi pls thodi der sone do na

Dadi ne socha abhi abhi toh bahut samay hai .....
thik hai betu so jaa thodi der...

yaha Mahaguru apne aasan par baithakar saari sthiti ka jaayja le rahe the, tabhi kuch sochkar unhone Abhi k Dada aur dadi ko bulawa bheja

mahaguru k bulawe par par Dadi ko turrant Abhi ko sota hua chod kar jaana pada

yaha patal lok mein Durmukhasur (D.S.R) aapne pita k param shatru ki khoj mein laga hua tha ....ki tabhi usse prithvi par Aur 14 loko mein ek alag urja ka aabhas hone laga.
( dhyan rahe aaj Abhi k saath saath 14 loko mein janm lene wali uski shaktiya bhi 5 varsh ki hone wali hai)

tabhi ek nanhi pari si ladki daud kar waha aajaati hai ...bhai ..bhai karte hue rote hue aati hai

D.S.R - arre kya hua meri gudiya kyu ro rahi hai...

ladki - aapko mera janamdin yaad nahi raha ajj

D.S.R - arre meri pyari gudiya nahi bhula aaj raat ko khub jasan hoga

( ji haa yeh K.S ki chotti rani ki putri jo ABHI ki hi shaktiyon mein se ek hai
jisska naam hai - MADALSA)

Yaha dharti par mahel mein Mahaguru ko andesha ho gaya ki durmukhasur Urja ka picha karte hue yaha pahunch sakta hai...toh unhone apne mantra shakti se RANAMAHAL ko ek kawach mein band diya......

yaha achanak Abhi ki nind khul jaati hai woh apne chaaro tarf dekhta hai

usse ek madhur sangeet sunayi deta hai, ausa lagta hai jaise usse koi bula raha hai......

tabhi usski nazar saamne diwar par padi .....waha achanak prakash se chamakta hua darwaja pragat hua...jo mahal mein banne hue gupt SHIVALAYA tak jaata hai......isske baare mein kewal Abhi k Dada Aur papa hi jaante the.

Abhi ko aisa laga jaise usse uss darwaje k bhiter koi pukar raha hai ...woh aage bada toh dekha waha nicche ki aur siddiya jaar rahi hai







Un siddiyon se hote hue pahuch gaya Abhi waha bane gupt Shivalaya mein waha adbhut Shivlinga k darshan karte hi Abhi k mukh se mantr nikalne laga OM NAMAHA SHIVAY aur baith gaya dono haath jodkar tabhi uski nazar waha pade do box par padi jinme ek White tha aur ek red

red box se kuch tarange nikalne lagi
aur aawaj aane lagi aao mere maalik apna lo muzhe kab se aapka hi intejaar kar raha tha....Tab ABHI ne woh red box uthaya aur jaise hi khola toh ek tez laal colour ki roshni nikali waise ek energy Abhi k ander se nikli ...jab dono energy aaps mein mili toh pragat hui ek bhayankar aakriti aur phir gunji ek bhaynkar sher ki dahad..

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi....

Mast update

 

[drx prince]

Update - 141

Ab tak aapne dekha KS k sabhi Divya asur Abhi k pratiroop aur uski shaktiyo dwara maare jaa cuke hai ....
Kas ab akela yudh k maidan mein khada hai ......

ab Aage -

Abhi k sabhi mitra aur patniya .....ek or khade the ......Abhi ne chaaro or dekha aur yudh ki vibhishika ko dekhkar usse dukh hua ...charo or yodhao k kate hue shav ...aur rakh se laal hui dharti.......parantu shristi ki sthapna k liye yeh sanghar jaruri tha ....

Abhi - Murkh Kalasur dekho apne chaaro taraf ...aaj tum akele khade ho .....apni mahatavakansha k liye tumne yudh ki agni mein apne putro ki aur inn asuro ki bali chada di ....

KS - Tum vyarth ka pravachan na do Rakshak yeh yudh bhumi hai yaha muh nahi astra baatein karte hai .....tum kya samazte ho ....k...muzh akele ko ..apni itni sena k saath parastha kar sakoge ....yeh tumahara bhram hai ....tum sab k liye mein akela hi paryapt hu ...

Aur KS ne ek rath pragat kiya ..aur apna Dhanush lekar uspar chad gaya....aur Abhi ki taraf badne laga ....

Abhi - Itna sabkuch hone k baad abhi bhi tumahari yudh ki iccha miti nahi ....thik hai ...par tum chinta na karo tumse kewal mein hi yudh karunga meri sena nahi ......
aur Abhi ne apne saare pratiroop apne bhiter sama liye .....Abhi ab apne Maha Rakshak k roop mein aagaya tha ....uski saari patniya shakti k roop mein uske piche khadi thi aur kaal Sher ka roop dhar kar Abhi k paas khada tha ......Abhi k sharir se ek divya prakash nikal raha tha ....

Ek baar toh KS Abhi ka roop dekhkar dar gaya ....lekin phir uske ahankar ne usse piche hatne nahi diya ......

KS apna rath lekar Abhi k saamne aaya aur apne dhanush ki pratyancha khichkar ek tankar utpanna karke yudh ki ghoshna ki

Abhi bhi apna divya dhanush lekar sajj ho gaya .....

Aur dekhte hi dekhte dono mein bhayankar yudh chid gaya ....dono or se teero ki aur divyaastro ki varsha hone lagi .....unke takrav se ....dharti kaanpne lagi ...

Abhi ne sakdo divya astra KS par chode lein KS ne bhi unke pratiutter astro se kat diya .....

KS ne anek prakar k divyaastra chalaye parantu aaj saare devta aur Tridev bhi Abhi k saath the ...ek bhi divya astra Abhi ko chu bhi nahi paaya ...Abhi ne sahaj hi un sabko kat diya .....

KS ne ab Eblis ki kaali urja se vyapt saikdo teer Abhi par chode ....ek bhayankar kaala saaya sa Abhi ki or badne laga ....toh Abhi ne bhi Satya lok ki satya se prapt urja Se uss kaale saaye ko nasht kar diya ......

Abhi ne ab apne teero se KS k dhanush ko kaat daala ......Dhanush k katne par KS ne panch tatvo ki urja se pariporna ek tejomay shool Abhi ki k taraf de maara .....

Abhi ne apne Shakti trishool ka prayog karke uss Shool ki saari urja soakh li aur usse nishkriya kar diya....

Aur saath hi uss trishool ki bhayankar urja se KS k rath par vaar kiya jisase uska rath tut gaya ....aur Woh niche aagira .....

KS turant ek dhal aur talwar lekar Abhi ki or dauda ......lekin Abhi ne turant Apni divya talwar k prhar se uski dhal ko kaat diya .....

KS ne bhi apni talwar ka vaar Abhi par kiya jo uske baaju par laga ...Lekin ks k vaar se Abhi ko ek kharoch bhi nahi aayi ....aur Abhi ne ek kickr KS ki chati par maari jisase wih piche ki taraf jaa gira ......

KS ab phir sambhalkar apni talwar lekar Abhi ki taraf tezi se dauda ...Abhi ne bhi apne talwar ka bhapur vaar karke KS ki talwar ko kaat diya ....aur ek mukka uske muh par de maara ....jisase KS k muh se khoon nikalne laga .....

Lekin KS bhi bada jeevat tha usne uski koi parvah nahi ki ......

Ab woh ek Bada se kantila Mudgar lekar Abhi par vaar karne laga ....Abhi bhi apni divya gada k prahar se KS k vaar ko block karne laga ...aur saath saath KS par prahar bhi karne laga ....

Abhi ki gada se KS aahat hone laga ....aaj uski koi shakti koi bal kaam nahi aaraha tha ......usne apne mudgar ka jordar prahar Abhi k sir par karna chaha lekin Abhi ne apni gada k jordar prahar se uska midgar bhi chaknachur kar diya...

Ab wo asur nihatha hi badi tezi se Abhi ki or bada Toh Abhi ne bhi shastra tyag diye .....KS ne dono haatho ka ek jordar mukka Abhi ki chati par maara jisase Abhi kuch piche hata ....

Ab Abhi ne bhi ek mukka Ks k pet mein de maara ..jisase woh pet pakadkar piche ki or gira ....apni dard ko sahan kar ke woh asur fhir khada hua .....

Aur uchalka Abhi k taraf lapka Aur Abhi ko aakash mein le uda .....Abhi apne vahan vaayu ki shakti k kaaran aakash mein bhi sthir hokar yudh kar raha tha ......Dono ek dusre par prahar kar rahe the ...

KS ne tabadtod kai mukke Abhi k pet mein maare .....Abhi ne ab KS ki gardan pakadkar utha liya ..aur usse aakash se jor se dharti par patak diya ...

Niche girte hi uske muh se jordar cheekh nikli ......lekin phir bhi ab apni saari urja ekatrit karke ek bada sa gola banaya .......Aur Abhi ki taraf ....Dauda ......

KS ki woh urja poori nakaratmakta se bhari hui thi ...yadi Abhi uss gole ko nasht karta ..toh usko nakartmak urja charo or phail jaati ...Har tarah ki nakaratmakta ko sokhne ki shakti Prakriti mein hoti hai ....

Abhi ne bhi Rimpy ki or dekha jo uski prakriti ki urja ka srot thi ...phir uss urja ka prayog kar k ek bada sa ghera banaya ...Jisne KS ki saari urja sokh li ....

saari urja samapt hone k baad aur bahut ghayal awastha ...mein hone k kaaran KS ..dharti par ..gir gaya ....uski haalt bahut dayniya ho gayi thi ....

KS ne Abhi ki taraf dekhkar haath jode ...phir apni beti Madalsa ki taraf ......KS ki aankhon mein aansoo the .....

Abhi - Dekha KS kya paaya tumne ....apne aahankar ki poorti mein ....tumne apne saathi ...apne putra ..apna ..pariwar ...tap ..shakti ..sab kich kho diya ..hai ...kya ..paaya tumne ...burai aur paap k raaste par chalkar ......

Burai k raaste mein tum itne andhe ho gaye the k shakti prapt karne k liye apni hi beti ki bali tak dene ki soch baithe the ...dekho apne charo taraf tumahare iss paap ka parinaam ...
abhi bhi samay hai ...sacche mann se prayaschit kar lo...aur apne patal lok ko sambhalo...

KS - muzhe kshama kar do Rakshak mein bahut hi paapi nich ..hu ...tumne sahi kaha ...kya paaya maine .....ab muzhe mar jaana chahiye ....muzhe samapt kar do ....apne saathiyo aur baccho ki mrityu ko bohj ab mein inn kandho par

beti madalsa muzhe kshama kar do ..mein tumahara apradhi ...hu ....mein apne pita hone ka kartvya nahi nibha paaya ......

parantu muzhe khushi hai ...k ..tumhe tumahare hi ankul ek accha jeevan saathi mila....ab mein aur nahi jeena cahata ......

Aur ek kattar apne aapko maarne k liye utha leta hai .....

Madalsa KS ko aise karte hue dekhkar turant aage aayi aur KS k haath se kattar lekar chin li ...aur KS k saamne niche baith gayi .....

Madalsa - nahi pitashri aapko apne kiye hue karmo ka paschatap hai ....ab aapko apne pran lene ki koi awashyak ta nahi hai .....

KS - Sahi kaha putri mizhe apne pran dene ki kya awashyakta hai ......pran toh ab tere linga mein .....Aur Madalsa ka gala pakad leta hai ......

Tu hi meri iss haar ka kaaran hai ...aaj ..yadi tu ...iss Rakshak se na mili hoti toh mein amar ho jaata ....mein toh marunga par ab tuzhe maarkar hi marunga ....

Madalsa ko ek baar phir apne pita se dhoka mila tha ....uski aankhon se aansoo bahne lage ...

Madalsa ...Abhi ..aur Patal lok ki urja se bana hua Abhi ka Asur roop waha pragat hua ......aur usne Abhi ki maarak urja ko pukara ...KAAL.....aur kaal ..ek bade se khadk ka roop dharan karke uske haath mein aagaya ...aur

Abhi k asur roop ne apne khadak k ek hi prahar se KS ka sir dhad se alag kar diya ....aur KS ka dhad ek taraf ludak gaya ....

issprakar ant hua KALASUR ka ......

Abhi ka Asur roop Aur kaal wapas Abhi mein sama gaye .......

Abhi ne Madalsa ko gale se lagakar ... santvana di .....
KS k ant par Devtao ne bhi Abhi aur uski patniyo par phool barsaye
saari Rakshak sena mein khushi ki lehar daud gayi ........Jis yudh ki tayari itne dino se chal rahi thi aaj woh samapt hua ..aur ek baar phir dharam ki vijay hui ......

Uske baad Abhi RVS ..Naina ..Aur..Addu ko janalok se prithvi lok le aaya ....aur Apne gaon mein apne Dadi dadi se milwaya ....Abhi ne apne saare pariwar ko unke aur apne jeevit hone ki suchna di .....aur apni Nirman shakti k prayog se ...phir se Apne ghar ka nirman kiya .......

Abhi ne 14 loko mein apne 14 roop sthapit kar diye .....aur ...sadharan roop mein ab pritvi par apne pariwar Aur 14 patniyo k saath rahne laga ....

Ritu k saath kabhi kabhi Janalok jaakar ...waha ki sthiti aur 14 maniyo ka bhi nirikshan karta .....

Pritvi par ab bhi Sangharak k roop mein ..apradhiyo aur under world par nazar banaye rakhta...aur samay samay par unka daman bhi karta ...aur Sadharan roop se apne pita ki business mein bhi madat karta ......

Rimpy ne bhi ek sundar se baalak ko janm diya .Abhi ne uska naam Thakur Deepak Singh (Deepu) rakha ....

Abhi k Dada dadi ...RVS ..aur Naina ...apna jeevan kaal poora karke moksha ko prapt ho gaye ......

Abhi ki Rimpy baaki patniyo se bhi santane hui ....

Golu aur Abhi k dwara un sabka bhi prashikshan hua ......
Jab bacche bade hue toh Abhi ne Deepu ko apni sangharak ki shaktiya aur daitva diya ...
Ab Deepu sangharak bankar bakhubi apne kartavya ka nirwaha karne laga ......

Naati ....pote...bahuye Abhi ka poora bhara poora pariwar hua

Apna jeevan kaal pritvi par poora karke Abhi ne pritvi lok ka sharir tyag diya ...

aur divya sharir dharan karke ...phir janalok k singhasan par virajman hua ...

Abhi ki sabhi patniyan bhi apne mool teen roopo mein sama gayi .....Shivali ...Rituja ....aur Vibhakta ..
aur woh bhi Abhi k saath divya sharir dharan kar ke .....
JANALOK ...mein Abhi k saath sthit ho gayi .......



THE END

Very nice story कलासुर ko kitni bar mauke mile lekin usne har mauke ko gawankar burai ka hi sath chuna aur ant me apni maut ko prapt hua

 

[mehug]

Update - 13

abhi tak aapne dekha......kaal ka jnam......aur Abhi k do roop
ab ....aage.....

old Roopnagar mein din mein khub utsav chala aur raat ko ek shandar party .......aaj Abhi k sabhi rishtedar aaye hue the ....raat mein roshni se jagmagata hua mahl aur bhi shandar lag raha tha

Abhi ne apna birthday cake kaata aur shuru hui party......ab shuru hua gifts ka silsila jo Abhi ko bahut pasand aaya ...... lekin abhi ko kisi chij ka intezar tha....... Tabhi Ritu ko dekhkar , Abhi bahut khush hua ......

Abhi - Didu kaha gayi thi aap mein aapko hi dhund raha tha........

Ritu - Kahi nahi betu bas tere liye kuch surprise tha woh hi lene gayi thi
itna kahkar di ne abhi ko ek gift diya

Abhi se raha nahi gaya ussne turrant usse khol kar dekha.... toh ussme ek gold ka mouth organ beshkimati daimonds se jada hua usse dekhkar Abhi bahut khuh hua ......arre didu aapne ne muzhe sabse accha gift diya hai ....wao yeh kitna khubsurat hai

Ritu - accha mere betu ko gift pasand aaya toh ab hum sab ko bajakar bhi suna do

sab baccha party Abhi ko gher kar baith gayi Chacha ki do ladkiya
Payal aur Shreya, .....massi ki dono ladkia Monika Aur Lovely...........
badi bua ki Pari ,avya abhi bahut chotti thi apni maa ko godi mein

Abhi yani meine tabhi dekha Chotti si gudiya ekdum cute doll jaisi pari muzhe tak pahunchne ki koshish kar rahi hai .....alle mujhe jaane do na.....muzhe bhi bhai ko gift dena hai..tabhi usske haath ka gulab baccho ki bhid mein gir gaya ....aur uske chehra udaas ho gaya....

Ritu - kya hua abhi sunao na koi dhun

toh mein didu ko pari ki aur dekhne ko ishare se batata hu.....

Mein -- Pari kya hua meri Gudiya ...

Pari - Dekho na bhai ...yeh chhaale bacche gande hai.... mela lose gila diya ...aul muje aapke paas aane bhi nahi de lahe hai.....

Mein - sb ko side karte hue pari ko apne paas le aata hu....Aise kisi ko gande nahi bolte shona...

Accha rose toh ab gir gaya ab muzhe kya gift dogi shona

meri baat sunkar Pari kuch sochne lagi ....phir meri godi mein chadkar mere galoo par kiss kar diya

aur baith gayi meri godi mein.....

mein - wah mera shona baccha yeh gift toh bahut accha hai ...

meri baat sunkar pari bas mere taraf dekhkar muskura rahi thi..

phir meine mouth Organ bajanna shuru kiya aur kho gaya sangeet mein

mera dhyan sabki taaliyo se tuta ...aise enjoy karte karte party khatam ho gayi ....

Papa ko Shahar jaana pada kisi jaruri kaam se toh woh Ritu di ko saath le gaye....di jana nahi chahti thi lekin school ki wajah se unko janna pada..

Ab mein aur mom Rah gaye Dada dadi k saath mahal mei , yaha mere bahut se dost banne.....yaha ki hariyali , kal kal karti nadi .panchiyo ki awaaje sabhi kuch muzhe bahut accha lagta tha

ab dekhte hai humare Abhi ka dusra roop kya kar raha hai..
Jaise hi Mahaguru muzhe apne saath apne aashram laaye ...waha aashram k bahar ki mere jitna ki koi baccha mere saamne ghutno par baith gaya
.....
Aapka ka swagat hai mere maalik..

usse pahchankar mmaine usse uthakar gale se lagaya.....
A1- mitra tum mere hi shaktiyo k ansh ho ...aur yeh muzhe maalik bulana accha nahi lagta tum muxhe bhai hi bulao.

Rakesh - jaisi aapki iccha bhai

A1 - yeh hui na baat , mere yr

phir Mahaguru ne aacharya somdutta ko mere rahene ki vyastha karne ko kaha

ek kutiya mein meri vyastha kar di gayi
ab meine waha ka najara dekha toh yeh jagah ekdum ekaant mein himalaya ki pahadiyon par sthit thi ... charoo aur unche unche parvat....aur ek bahut badi zheel...jismein paani paas k hi jharne se aata hai ....

wahi paas mein ek maidan jaha kuch vidyarthi shastra kala ka abhyas kar rahe the, zheel k paas hi ek vishal bargad ka ped hai jaha vedo aur upanishido ki shiksha di jaati hai

wahi kuch duri par baag baagicha jaha aashram k liye fal aur sabjiya ugaye jaate hai aur thodi dur par ek Gaushala....jaha bahut se gaumataye rakhi hui thi

aashram ko dekhte dekhte ek baat samaj aagayi thi ki yaha ka saara kaam yaha k vidyaarthi hi karte hai,

yeh aashram Himalaya ki ek ghatti par sthit hai, Mahaguru ki shakti se koi bhi bahar ka vyakti iss aashram ko dekh nahi sakta ...

Ghumte ghumte muzhe sham ho gayi
aur pahuch gaya mein apni kutiya mein , ......mein prithvi lok mein janam lene se pahelewale apne swaroop aur usski shaktiyo ko jaanta tha .....isiliye muzhe lagne laga Mahaguru muzhe vyarth yaha le aaye mein toh aapni saari shaktiya jaanta hu....aur muzhe kuch sikhne ki bhi jarurat nahi hai...
aise hi mera samay barbad hoga...

yeh ahankar hi vyakti ki vikas ka baadhak hota hai, mein apni smritiyon k chalte yeh bhul chuka tha ki iss samay mein manav sharir mein hu

aur iss sharir ki kuch simaaye hoti hai jab tak isski shaktiyo ko jaagrit na kiya jaaye

( jaise mobile kitna bhi mehanga aur stylish ho lekin bina charge kiye bekar hi rahta hai)

aur isse jaagrit kiya jaata hai kathin parishram aur abhyas se

tabhi Rakesh kuch fal lekar mere paas aaya..... yeh fal Gurudev ne aapke liye bheje hai ......aur kaha hai aaj aaram karlo ...kal se Shiksha aarambha karenge.....itna kahkr woh jaane laga ..toh maine usse haath pakdkar apne paas bithaya ......arre kaha jaa raha hai yr ....thodi der jara apne dost k paas nahi baithega.......

Rakesh - mein......kaise....aaap k paaas baith saaakta hu

uska aise haklaate bolte hue dekhkar muzhe hasee aagayi...mein bola arre arre kya hua aise ghabra kyu raha hai ..
phir humne saath milkar fal khaaye ab raat ho rahi thi Rakesh muzhe kutiya mein chod kar chala gaya, ab muzhe nind aane lagi toh meine dekha sone k liye sukhi ghass ka k gadda sa banaya tha aur uske upar ek patli si chadar,

raat ka samay aur Himalaya toh aap samaj hi sakte honge ki thand kaisi hogi
thand lagne lagi toh mein bahar nikalkar tahlne laga , khulle aakash mein chamakte taaro ko dekhte dhekte jaa raha tha ki achanak kisi se takra gaya ... tabhi ek surili par gusse se bhari aawaj aayi .....

awaaj - uff.....yeh kaun andha ...bewakuf...langoor ki dum.......akdu ...gadha ....nalayak ..hai

apne liye pahli baar itne aise naamo ko kisi k muh se sunkar muzhe ajeeb sa laga aur saath mein hasee bhi aayi

jab maine saamne dekha toh niche jamin par mere dhake se giri hui ek ladki ko dekha , jiske baal bikhare hue the gusse mein gaal aur laal ho gaye the ...badi badi aankhein ...jinko dekhkar jaane mein kaha kho gaya
ki muzhe dhyan hi nahi raha ki uske muh se mere liye kaisi kaisi upmaye nikal rahi hai.....

tabhi ussnne paas pade ek kankad ko meri tarf phenka jisse mein wapas laut aaya

ladki - ek toh muzhe girate ho aur upar se ghur ghur kar dekhte ho
aur uthate bhi nahi ...batameez kahi k

mein usse uthane k liye apna haath aage kiya , jaise hi ussne mera haath pakda jaane kyu muzhe aisa laga jaise yeh mera hi ek ang hai

tabhi ladki ne apna haath chudaya aur jaane lagi

mein - arre apna naam toh bata do

ladki - mein langoor ko apna naam nahi batati ithna kahkar eoh andhere mein gum ho gayi

itne mein aashram ke hi kisi shsha k haato guruji ne ek kambal bheja jisse lekar chal diya apni kutiya mein sone..

un do aankhon ko sochte sochte jo aaj takarai so gaya gahri nind mein..

abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update jald hi.....

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