Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 20

ab tak aapne dekhna R.V.S ne kuch raaj Abhi k saamne khole,
Aur Abhi bhi apni training mein laga hua hai.......
Rimpy k ander dikhi urja ka kya raaz hai ......yeh aage pata chalega

abhi toh Abhi ko bahut jannana hai ...sikhna hai
Abhi tak ki powers dono A1 aur Abhi jaldi isiliye sikh paaya kyu ki woh janm se hi isske ander thi .....( bahut kathin hai dagar panghat ki)
aage raaste mein bahut kathinayia aayengi....

khair ab dekhte hai A1 kaha hai .....

Mahaguru k aashram se nikal kar A1 nikal gaya gandhmadan parvat ki aur

yaha virajte hai Sakal jagat k paalanhaar Bhagwan Badrinath

Abhi apne vayu tatva ki shaki k dwara Yaha tak toh pahuch gaya.....lekin aage ki yaatra usse paidal hi jana tha
kyuki wohi shaktiya hume jeewan mein saath deti hai jo hume kathin parishram se prapt hui ho........
aur Mahaguru ka bhi yahi nirdesh tha,
apni shaktiyo ka prayog tabhi karna jab aur koi raasta na ho....


Gandhmaadan parvat mein Narayan parvat par Bhagwan Badrinath aur chaaro taraf Barf k parvat ...kal..kal behti hui maa alaknanda ....sab kuch itna sunder aur divya tha ki yaha pahunch kar Abhi ko apne bhiter ek nayi urja aur divyata ka anubhav hua...

Waha pahuch kar Garam paani k kund mein snan kiya Aur Phir darshan karke nikal gaya Aage ki yaatra par..

Aage jab mein ..Manda gaon pahucha
kar toh waha bane mitti k ghar dekhe aur sidhe saral log.... kuch log waha aane walo ko khanne pine ki chije de rahe the
( mazedar baat yeh hai ki itni shaktiya hasil karne k baad bhi...hero ka vyavharik gyan shunya tha, usse jab woh Mahaguru se aqgya lekar jaane laga tha toh unka bhi iss aur dhyan gaya, ...phir socha chalo bahari logo k sampark mein jab aayega toh apne aap hi sikh jaayega.....)

Abhi ko yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki yeh log khane ki chije aise hi nahi de rahe the bech rahe the....

aage ka haal A1 ki jubaani ...

ab muzhe bhi bhuk lagane lagi toh mein bhi ek jagah pahucha...
aur baithne k liye ek lakdi ka bench dekhkar baith gaya...

waha k log muzhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahe the ....muzhe kuch ajeeb bhi lag raha tha.....ki jab se mein yaha aaya hu aur jaha se bhi jaa raha hu log muzhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai....

maine socha ki chodo apna kaam karte hai.... maine jo admi sab ko khane pine ki chije de rqha tha

Maine waha khde aadmi se jo logo ko khanne pine ki chije de rha tha usko bola.....Bhaiya muzhe bhi kuch khanne ko do... meri baat sunkar woh meri taraf ghur kar dekhne laga.....
aur hasne laga..... waha khde log bhi hasne lage ....

kyu bhai kaha se aaye ho pahle yeh toh bataao tumhe dekhkar toh aisa lag raha hai k sidhe mahabharat kaal se yaha aaye ho ...itna kah kar phir hasne laga .......tabhi waha ek bujurg vyakti aaya .....aur usne uss vyakti ko ghur ke dekha ..toh woh chup hogaya..

bujurg (Manda Gaon k Mukhiya)
- kya baat hai shambhu yahi tarika hai tumhara yaha aanewale logo k saath

kya tum bhul gaye hamre gaon ki parampara ko .....aise majak ydate ho mehmano ka...

Shambhu - maaf karna Mukhiya ji lekin issne kapde hi .....

Mukhiya - bas chup ho jaao ......phir meri taraf ......aao beta mere saath aao ...
unke beta kahne mein muzhe bahut apnapan lagne laga tih chal diya mein unke saath....
ab saari baat muzhe samaj mein aagayi thi mere kapde wahi aashram k the aur baal bhi bade bade jo yaha k logo se kaafi alg the....

Mukhiya - Kaun ho beta tum ....kisi gaon ya shaher k toh lagte nahi ho,
dekho tum muzhe baata sakte ho ho sakta hai mein tumahri kuch madat kar saku.....

mein - Baba ...kya mein aapko baba kah sakta hu.....

mukhiya - kyu nahi bete jarur

mein - Baba jyada toh mein nahi bata sakta ...lekin itna hi ki mein apne Guru ki aagya se hi ...yaha par aaya hu aur muzhe aage nilkant parvat par jaana hai..

tab tak mukhiya ji ka ghar bhi aagaya tha ...jo purane jammane ka mitti se bana hua tha....

ghar mein pahuch kar unhone muzhe baithne k liye aasan diya......
arre Jaanki (mukhiya ki wife) jara dekho toh kaun aaya hai....aur haa pani aur gudh leta aana....
tabhi ek mahila paani aur gudh lekar waha aayi woh kuch udaas si lag rahi thi...
meine gudh khakar paani piya, ...
..dhnyawad maaji .....meri aawaj sunkar uhone ne meri traf dekha aur thoda muskuraya,.....maine unki aankhon mein ek alag hi udaasi dekhi

Mein - Baba maa ji ko kya hua ....yeh itni udaas kyu lag rahi hai....

Mukhiya ji - beta woh sab baad mein..
pahle tum muh haath dho lo aur apne kapde badal lo.... suno jaanki apne vishu k kapdo mein se kuch kapde le aao toh...ayr kuch khanne ka bhi prabandh ka do

Jaanki ji ne ek nazar mukiya k taraf dekha aur kuch bolna hi chaha rahi thi ki.....
mukhiya - arre aise kya dekh rahi ho jara isse dekho toh yeh bhi hamare vishu ki tarah lag raha hai...
tab unhone muzhe gaur se dekha toh unki aankhien chalak aayi....aur aage badhkar myzhe gale se lagaya ...haa ji yeh toh kcuh kuch hamre bete jaisa hi hi.....mere sir par pyar se haath pherte
hue....sirf isski naak aur aankhien kuch alag hai...aur baal bhi..

itna kahkar woh ander chali gayi

unka sneh paakar meri bhi aankhon mein aansoo aagaye kuch dhundli dhundli si tasveer dikhne lagi jasie koi mere sir par haath pherte hue sula raha hai .....tabhi mukhiya ji k awaaj se mera dhyan tuta.....
unke diye hue kapde meine pahen liye

mukhiya ji - Toh ab batao beta....tum kah rahe the ki tum apne guru ki aagya se aaye ho ....waise kya naam hai tumahare guru ka..

Mein - MAHAGURU YAGNESH

mukhiya ji ne jaise hi naam suna toh unke haath apne aap jud gaye...aur aankhol mein shradha suman aa gaye

Mukhiya --- Kya ....naam ...bataya..MAHAGURU YAGNESH....yani ki tum bhi mere guru ji k shishya ho...

mein - kya aap bhi Mahaguru ji k shishya ho...phir toh aapne unka aashram toh dekha bhi dekga hoga ...
mein wahi se aaya hu

mukhiya - nahi putra mera itna saubhagya kaha jo unka aasram dekh saku....woh toh yaha bahut pahele aaye the jad mein tumahari hi umar ka tha woh yaha kuch di vyas gufa k paas ruke toh tab unhone yogya paatra ja muzhe Aayruved ka gyan diya tha ..

agar tumhe uhone bheja hai toh jarur koi visheh prayogen hoga.....unhone iss baat ka sanket bhi diya tha

mein - sanket kaisa ...baba

mukhiya - beta unhone muzhe ek anguthi di thi aur kaha tha samay aane par meri yeh amanat koi tumse lene aayega .....phir ander pooja room se angoothi laakar muzhe dete hai



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woh anghuthi mere haath mein aakar chamkne lagi phir sadharan si ho gai

tab tak bhojan tayar ho chuka tha .phir hume bhojan kiya....

mukhiya ji - beta ab thoda aaram kar lo
mein - Mukhiya ji aapke Bete Vishu ka naam toh maine suna hai , lekin woh kahi dikha nahi , kaha hai woh

mukhiya ji (thoda udas hote hue)
beta muzhe kuch dawai baane k liye ek jadi ki jarurat padi thi toh kareeb ek mahine pahle neelkanth parvat ki aur gaya tha tab se lauta nahi hai...
maine usse savdhan bhi kiya tha ki Uss parvat k bhitar na jaaye...kyuki jo bhi ab tak uss parvat par gaya hai woh wapas nahi aaya...

mein - aap chinta na kare mukhiya ji aapka putr aap tak pahuch jaayega yeh mere mann kah raha hai.

phir woh din meine wahi gujara Vyas Gufa ,Bhimpul, aur Saraswati nadi k udgam sthan ka darshan karne k baad so gaya
phir subah 4 baje uthkar apna nitya kram kiya aur Mukhiya ji aur maaji ki aagya lekar chal pada apne lakshya ki taraf...
raaste k sunder najaare dekhkar aise lag raha tha ki swarg ki hi yatra kar raha hu.....aise hi chalte chalte vasudhara pahunch gaya jaha 8 jal ki dharao se niranter sheetal jal bethta rahta hai....kuch der waha vishraam kiya aur chal diya neelkanth parvat ki talhati par bada hi vishal barf se dhaka hua parvat abhi waha pahunchte pahunchte sham ho gayi thi toh wahi paas gufa mein raat ko aaram kiya ....suryaasta k samay ka adbhut nazaara pura parvat sone jaisa chamk raha tha.....
dusre din jaise hi suryodaya hua toh thodi der k liye phir woh parvat chamkne laga...aur maine pahla kadam raha parvat par , ...ki tabhi hawa tez chale lagi aur charo taraf jaise dhue ka badal ne muzhe gher liya aage ka raasta muzhe dikhna band ho gaya.....abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki kaise aage badu ki tabhi woh badal aur ghana hone laga... ki tabhi mere haath ki angoothi jo Mukhiya ji ne di thi chamakne lagi aur usme se ek tez neele rang ki roshni chamki ........aur dekhte hi dekhte saara dhua jaane kaha gyab ho gaya

phir maine jaise hi agla kadam uthaya
toh aise laga jaise kisi ne muzhe uthakar fek diya......mein phir uthkar aage badne laga .......
toh aayi ek aawaj.......Ruk jaao yaha se aage mat jaao laut jao jaha se aaye ho.....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update raat ko

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Updare - 21

abhi tak aapne dekha ....
A1 apni yaatra mein Manda gaon pahuncha......Mukhiya ji se anguthi prapt karna......
aur Parvat par pahuchna....
waha kuch adrishya shaktiyo ka saamna ....ab aage.....

niche girte hi mein phir aage jane laga .fir kisine muzhe uthakar fenka aur wahi ...bhari si aawaj...
ab muzhe krodh aanelaga tha

phir bhi apne mann ko shant karte hue

mein - kaun hai yaha jo mera raasta rokne ka prayatna kar raha hai..
dekho meri tum se koi shatruta nahi hai .....muzhe jaane do.....

phir aage bada toh fir se wahi...hua

mein - kaun hai saamne kyu nahi aata
bas ab bahut hua.......kahte hai na laato k bhut baaton se nahi mante....

aawaj - ha..ha...ha...bache tu karega humara mukabla......shatruta toh tune kar li hai ..hamari baat na maakar

ab tum khud apni maut ke jimmedar hoge.....ha...ha...ha.....

phir maine Jal aur prithvi tatva ki urja
milakar ek gola tayar kiya aur apne antahakaran (sub concious mind)
ko aur apni ghyanendriyo
(sharir k woh ang jisse hum mehsus karte hai...aankh, naak ..kaan..juban
aur tvacha ) jagrit kiya aur aage kadam badaya ....jaise hi mein aage bada muzhe apni daayi aur se kuch urja ka aabaas hua aur meine do tatvo se bana urja ka gola uski disha mein choda ...phir gunji ek dard naak cheekh....aur jab meine dekha toh saame ek 20 ft uncha daitya niche gira hau karah raha tha......

bada bhayankar tha dikhne mein poora sharir kaala aur badi badi laal aankhien.....

mein -- dekha muzhse ulazne ka parinam ....kahi cjot toh nahi aayi
bacche ...alle ..alle...le

Aawaj - ha ..ha..ha bache achaa andaj hai ...jo niche gira hai woh mein nahi

wasie dum hai tumme ...hazaaro varsho se koi mukable ka mila nahi
ab aayega maza.....

tabhi woh daytya phir khada hua aur apne bade se mudgar jaise lakdi se uthakar prahaar karne aaya jaise hi woh muzhe maarta , mein apni jagah se hat gaya....aur woh phir mitti mein

tabhi mera mann mein iss khel ko khattam kane ka vichar aaya....
aur maine paanch tatvo ki urja ko milakar ek talwar pragat ki aur uska mukh uss daytya par kiya jisse paanch rang ki kirne nikli aur usska sharir paanch tatvo mein vibhajit ho gaya..aur khel khatam.....tabhi kisi ne mere haath par jor se prahaar kiya jisse muzhe bahut dard hua...aur talwar mere haato se dur gir gayi...

mein talwar ko wapas uthata ki tabi ek aur prahaar mujh par hua...

aawaj -- ha ha ....ha abhi toh ek hi khatam hua hai bacche ..kitno ko maaroge ...ek khatam hua tooh do aayenge ab rok ka dihka ...

mein phir se do tatvo ki urja ka gola banane laga ki phir muzhe kisi ne uthakar pheka...ab mere mann mein aaya ki aise toh kuch nahi hoga

iss aawaj wale ko hi dekhna hoga..
phir maine apne chaaro taraf ek bawander banaya aur apne chakro ko jagrit karne mein lag gaya...

aawaj - accha toh bawander mein chup raha hai ....tabhi awaaj ki disha se kuch neeli kirne nikli aur bawander wahi gayab tab tak mein apne 7 chakrao ko jaagrit ka chuka tha....
kyu ki abhi Tak ki shiksha mein inhi 5 ko jaagrit kar paaya tha jo 5 tatvao ki urja ka kendra hai
1 ...MOOLADHAR ...prithvi tatva

2 ... Swadhisthan...... Jal tatva

3..... Manipurak......Agni tatva

4..... Anahat...... Vayu tatva

5.... Vishuddhi.... Aakash tatva

jab uss neeli kirno se mera banaya hua bawander khatam hua ..tab tak mein inn chakro ko jaagrit ka chuka tha aur in 5 tatvo ki urja ko ek karke ek bandhan banaya aur chod diya uss taraf jaha se kirne aayi thi .....
tabhi gunji ek cheekh ....naahiiiii

aur saamne mere urja k bandhan mein tadpta hua ek mahadaytya jo kareeb 20 ft bada aur swarn k aabhushan pehne hue tha ...

mein... ab kya kahte ho ...bahut chup chupkar apni maya dikha rahe the ab kya hua...

Mahadaitya - muuuuzhhe ...kshaama karrr do ..maine tuumhari shakti ko ..ahhh ..nahi ..pehchana...chod...do...muzhe..ab ..mein...tumahara sewak hu...muzhe
chod do..

Mein - nahi muzhe kisi sewak ki jarurat nahi..... na jaane kitne hi maasum logo ko tumne maara hoga..
ab tumhe milegi ..toh..sirf ...mrityu

jaise hi maine uska khel samapt karne k liye ...aage bada ..tabhi meri anguthi jor se chamakne lagi.... aur aayi Mahaguru ki aawaj

Mahaguru - nahi putra isse chod do ..yeh toh apna dayyitva pura kar raha tha ...aur yeh koi daytya nahi hai putra yeh ek ek Yakshya hai...

tab muzhe Mahaguru ki doordarshta ka anubhav hua...ki unhe inn sab ghatnaao ka purvagyan tha ...aur aise hi kisi paristhiti k liye unhone yeh Anguthi mere liye chodi thi...

Mahaguru ki baat sunkar maine uss yaksha ko mukt kiya...

tab usne apna bhyankar roop ko tyag kar sunder roop dharan kar liya....

Yakshya -- aapka muzhe mukt karne k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad ab mein aapka sewak hu......mere liye liye kya aagya hai.......itna kahkar woh apne ghutne par haath jodkar baith gaya...

meine usse uhtaya ....nahi mitra...
tum mere sevak nahi mere mitr ki tarah hi raho toh accha.. hai

Yaksha - aap bahut aache ho ...maine aapko marne ka praytna kiya aur aapne muzhe mitr banaya....

mein - accha ab toh muzhe baatao yaha asia kya hai ...jo yaha par aata hai woh wapas jaa nahi paata.
aur tumahara naam kya hai...

Yaksha - mera naam GUNAAK hai aur Yaha Neelkanth parvat k upar se Bhuvalok ki shuruvat hoti hai , jo ek Shukshma lok hai.. jaha Sthool sharir k saath nahi jaaya jaasakta....waha Yaksho ka raaj hai.....aur Yahi se Dhan k swami KUBER JI ki nagri, ALKAAPURI ki shuruwat hoti hai....
yaha manavo ka aana mana hai ...mein iss marg ka rakshak hu...

mein - toh tum yaha aanewalo ka kya karte ho

GUNAK(GK) - humara bhojan tamsik hota hai isiliye hum yaha aanewale manavo k sharir se unka Shukshma sharir ko alag karke unke sharir ka bhojan karte hai ...aur unke sukshma sharir ko apne rajya le jaakar daas banate hai...

mein - hmmm .... Shayad niyati ne muzhe isiliye bheja hai....ek baat aur batao.....Mein yaha Bhim ji ki gada ko dhundte hue aaya hu...kya tum bata sakte ho woh kaha hai

GK - jee aap jiss gada ko dhund rahe ho woh ALKAPURI mein hi Kuber ji ke mahal mein hai....lekin aap waha jaa nahi sakte ...aur mein bhi iss vishya mein aapki koi sahayta nahi kar sakta

mein - uss ki tum chinta mat karo bas tum muzhe waha tak le jaao....

(yaha mein aapko bata du jab Mahaguru ne Abhi ke do roop banaye the ..toh A1 ka nirman Abhi k sukshma shari ki urja se hua tha)

mein ab GK ke saath uss parvat shikhar par pahuch gaya...

GK - Yaha se shuru hoti hai BHUVLOK
aur ALKA PURI ki seema....

mein - lekin muzhe toh yaha par kuch nahi dikh raha hai..

GK - maine pahle hi kaha tha ki in stool aankhon se iss lok ko dekha nahi jaa sakta...

mein abhi vichar kar hi raha tha ki phir meri anguthi chamakne lagi.....
aur usse ek prakash nikalne laga..usne muzhe poora gher liya ab muzhe aisa lagne laga ki mere sharir k saare sthool ang usme samate jaa rahe hai ....aur muzhe asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga...thodi hi der mein mein sthool sharir k saath hi saara dard bhi lagta hai uss anguthi ne sokh liya tha ....ab muzhe bikul halka lag raha tha jaise ki mera koi vajan hi na ho.....

tab maine apne saamne dekha toh ek bahut sunder divya nagar dikhayi diya



aur phir mein GK k saath uss nagar mein prevesh kar gaya.....jaise jaise mein aage jaane laga uss nagar ki sunderta ko dekhkar chakit ho gaya ..
sara nagar swarn aur herre motiyon se bana hua tha .....kyu na ho kyuki yeh Dhan k Swami KUBER ji ki raajdhani jo tahri.......
GK - mitr mein sadiyon se apne pariwar ko nahi mila hu kya unse mil sakta hu..... aap bhi chalo hamare ghar .....muzhe badi khushi hogi aapki sewa ka mauka paakar.
mein - nahi mitra abhi muzhe bahut kaam karne hai ...abhi tum jaao

GK - Thik hai mitra ...parantu jab tumhe meri aawashyakta ho tab bas ek baar mann mein mera naam lelena
mein ussi samay aajaunga.....aur ek baat...
jis vastu ki aap khoj kar rahe ho woh mahal mein hai.....jo yaha se uttar disha mein sthit hai.....

Aur jaha tak muzhe lagta hai KUBER ji bhi aapse milna chah rahe hai...

mein - tum aise kaise kah sakte ho

GK - kyuki iss nagar mein unki iccha k bina koi pravesh nahi kar sakta aur aap yaha tak pahuch gaye ...issi se aise lagta hai

itna kahkar GK waha se chala gaya
aur mein bhi aage bada thodi hi dur jaakar maine dekha ...ek divya viman
mere saamne utra aur usmein se utre kuch sainik......

aaj k liye itna hi .....
agla update kal......

Bhai bahut hi badhiya hai update

 

[Scared Cat]

So flash back has been ended.

Nice one. Let's see what's happened with Rimpy.
Is she dead or something else happened with her

 

[Vickey1211]

Update - 43

ab tak aapne Flash back mein
Abhi k purva janm se lekar ab tak ka safar dekha....

ab aage.....

mein ab thik tha mom mere pass hi baithi thi.......aur Dad Discharge papers ki formality dekhne gaye the

waise toh hume inn sab formalities ki koi jarurat nahi thi........lekin dad niyam k bade pakke the......aur mere liye sab kuch khud karna chah rahe the.....

Meri nazare darwaje par thi ....kisi ka intezar mein .......sab rishtedar yar dost .......aaye ...lekin woh kyu nahi aayi.....mere dil ki dhadkan Rimpy

maine mom ko baar baar pucha lekin woh bhi baat taal rahi thi .....

mein soch mein gum tha......kaha ho jaan ......kya ab tumhe muzse pyar nahi raha.......yaa tumhe mere baare mein pata hi chal........jaane kyu
usska khayal aate hi dil ghabra raha hai.........Rimpy ......aakhir ..kyu...
nahi aayi...,.

aur meri aankhon se do bund aansoo ki nikal hi aayi ....jo mom ne dekh li

uff yeh kambakhat aansoo.......

Ansoo bata dete hai haalat dil ke
Chahe koi baitha ho bich mehfil ke

mom - Kya baata hai betu........

maine mom ki tarf dekha toh woh bhi mere dil ka haal samaz gayi....

mom - Rimpy aajayegi beta......kahi out of town gayi hogi........tu kyu itna dukhi ho raha hai.......tera yeh dard mein nahi drkh sakti beta...

aur mom ne muzhe gale laga liya...
aur yeh nigode aansoo beh chale...

mein - toh kyu nahi muzhe sach batati ho maa.....main jaanta hu aap jarur muzhse kuch chipa rahi ho

mom mere ansoo pochte hue...

chup ab ....tuzhe meri kasam hai....

mein bhi kya karta....

tabhi Dad bhi aagaye aur hum chal pade ghar ki aur.....

Jaise hum Gadi ghar k gate k ander pahunch se maine dekha
ki pura Ghar phulon se sajaya gaya tha.......Gate se lekar Ghar tak ....

Hum abhi ander jaate k Main door par
Ritu di Aarti ki thali liye khadi thi aur unke pichhe khada tha poora parwar

Mein - yeh asb kya hai didu ........iss sab ki kya jarurat thi

Di - chup .....chup chap khada rah....

Di ne aarti utari aur tilak lagaya...

Ander aate hi maine dadu k pair chue toh unhone khande se pakadkar uthaya ......bas kar mere bacche....

aur gale laga lya....phir dadi k pair chune hi wala tha toh dadi ne rok diye aur mere sir par pyar se haath pherne lagi......arre beta rahne de ......kitno k pair chuega .........

Vinay chacha se mila ......gale lag jaa beta yeh business k chakar mein tuhse milna hi nahi ho raha tha

Tabhi aawaj aayi....Shushila chachi ki

arre hum bhi hai line mein.....
abhi chachi se milta......Payal di , aur Sonu aage aayi aur mere gale lag gayi

chachi - are ..arre ..tum dono bhi na

mein - chachi milne do na ....aaj kitne di baad dekha hai di ko.....

dono alag hui phir chachi se bhi mila
tabhi dekha chachi k piche ek Gudiya
jaisi bacchi haath mein rose liye khadi hai ...aur chup chup kar dekh rahi hai

mein - arre chachi aapne apne piche kis angel ko chupaya hai....

Chachi - arre Sonu kyu aise chup rahi hai.........tabhi toh bol rahi thi ..bhai ko rose dungi ......ab

mein - Chachi .....meri angel ko koi kuch nahi bolega , aur mein niche baith gaya......arre meri pyari angel
apne bhaiya se nahi milogi....

Sonu apni mom ko dekhti hai phir mre paas aati hai .....rose aage karte hue
welcme bhaiya.....

mein uske chote chote haato se rose lekar usse godh mein utha leta hu

aur usske gaal par kiss kar deta hu...

toh woh muzhe dekhkar muskurane lagti hai......

chachi - arre Sona tum toh kisi ko kissi nahi karne nahi deti thi ...aur ab dekho.....

tabhi maine dekha ki Addu aur Pari Sona ko gusse se dekh rahi rahi

mein - arre kya hua Pari addu sirf dekti hi rahogi bhai se nahi milogi

Sharmishta bua - aare beta aise kab tak sabse milta rahe ga tu aaram se baith jaa aur sabhi mil lenge

mein sofe par baith gaya meri ek taraf pari ek taraf Addu ..aur godh mein Sona....

Nirali bua - dekho toh terno maharaniya kaise baithi hai......

Sona -Bua mein mahalaani nahi Shona hu .....aur ghur k bua ko dekhne lagi.....sabhi uski maasumiyat dekhkar hasne lage

phir ek karke sabse mila...

Sunita aur Nilima maasi ....Satish aur Raju mama.....Sarmishtha aur Nirali bua....aur sabhi baccha party...

Mom - Bas ...bas....chodo ab sab Abhi ko ....betu jaa abhi rest karo....thodi der phir fresh hokar aana...

mein - Mom mein thik hu ab ........
rest kar kar k thak gaya.....

mom - bola na ......jaao toh...

main bhi phir apne room mein chala aaya....

Room mein aakar bed par baitha ....ki phir Rimpy ki yaad aane lagi.....

maine socha call kar k dekta hu......
lekin mera ph bhi mere paas nahi tha

tabhi di mere room mein aayi ...aur mere cellph de gayi...

maine phir Rimpy ko call lagaya toh switch off aaraha tha.....

phir maine Uncle
(Rimpy k dad, Khemraj Singh)
ab HM nahi gai...... ko call lagaya..lekin unka bhi number not reachable aaraha rha....

toh mein bed par let gaya aur sochte sochte na jaane kab nind aagayi ...

tabhi meri nind Ph ring se khuli , jab maine dekha Toh Addu aur Pari dono taraf se pakadkar soyi hui thi.......

maine call receive ki aur bed se uthkar balcony mein aagaya.....

Rinku ka call tha ......hllo kya haal hai .......dost....main ..hospital mein aaya tha yr lekin uss time tu soya tha....

mein - Woh sab chod Yeh bata ...Rimpy k baare mein kuch pata hai

Rinku - Nahi yr do din se woh bhi college nahi aarahi hai......

tabhi Nilima maasi Lunch k liye bulaane aayi......aur hum maine Addu aur pari ko uthaya aur Lunch karne chala gaya......

Dinnig Table par sabhi baccha party shor macha rahi thi.....mere dono taraf ki chair par Addu Aur pari baithi thi ......aaj sab kuch meri pasand ka bana hua tha.......maine khana shuru kiya hi tha k dekha pari aur Addu nahi kha rahi thi ......

mein kya hua ...gudiya khana kyu nahi kha rahi ho ....

Addu - muzhe aapke haatho se khana hai ......
pari .....muzhe bhi.....

Ritu di - Addu yeh kya hai yadi betu tum dono ko khilayega toh khud kab
khayega.....

pari - Hum khilayenge bhai ko...

aise hi ek dusre ko khilate hue lunch khatam hua...

Dad k frnds .......mom ki frnds ....Bahut logo se milte milte woh din aise hi beet gaya......

Raat ko bed par lete lete ......apni life k baare ..mein sochne laga......

aise hi sochte sochte raat k 12 baj gaye.....ab mera dhyan baar bssr mobile ki taraf jaa raha tha ...ki na jasne kab Rimpy ki call aaye....

mere har Birthday par raat 12 baje hum dono ek dusre ko wish karte the

jab call nahi asyi toh maine usse ph karne laga lekin wahi switch off...

tabhi mere door par knock hua ...

aur mein darwaja kholne chala gaya ..

jaise hi door khola toh sabhi baccha party k saath...Dad ....mom aur ..Ritu ..di....khade the

aur sabse aage Aadu pane haath mein Cake lekar.....

Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to dear Abhi
Happy Birthday to you

Sabhi ne muzhe Birthday wish kiya
Maine Bhi Mom Dad ka aashirwad liya

Ritu di ne bhi wish kiya aur gale lagaya ...Aur ek chota se box meri tarf badate hue .........yeh chota sa pyara se gift meri taraf se....mera betu

aur phir mere bed Room mein hi cake kaata Aur sabko khilaya...

phir sab baccho ne cake muzhe khilaya......khilaya kya.....cake se mera poori muh hi bhar diya...

Mom - arre.....arre..arre hato sab yeh kya betu ka saara muh bhar diya....

cahlo chalo sb abhi bahut raat ho gayi
betu tu bhi fresh hokar soo ja ab

phir sab chale gaye lekin Addu ..Pari ..
aur Sona toh jaane ko hi tayyar nahi thi.........

mein bhi fresh hokar aagaya aur let gaya addu aur pri aur sona k saath so gaya......

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi.....

Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 22

ab tak aapne dehka......A1 ka GK k ssath yudh.....aur usse harana....KUBER JI ki nagri Alkapuri.... mein pravesh ..
ab aage ........

Jaise hi mein aage bada toh dekha ek adbhut divya viman aakash se mere saamne utra.....aashram mein maine guru ji se pushpak viman k baare mein suna tha....yeh bhi waisa hi koi tha....
uss viman se kuch sainik utre aur meri taraf anne lage.....
maine socha ki ab yaha bhi yudh karna hoga......
tabhi ek sainik ne kaha .... yuvak Maharaj ne tumhe bulaya hai....
aayiye ..... aur hamare saath chaliye ..

meine socha chalo accha hi hua ab muzhe dhundna nahi padega...

mein unn sainiko k saath baith gaya aur chal pada aakash marg se mahel ki aur......
jab viman utra toh maine dekha ek bahut vishal mahal jo swarn ka bana hua tha..... jab mein waha gaya.....
toh dekha mahal k darwaje par kuch dasiya pushpo ki thaliya lekar khadi thi.....jaise hi mein dwar par pahuncha toh phoolon ki varsha mere upar..

aise swagat jeewan mein pahli baar hua tha......accha toh bahut laga lekin
vichar bhi aaya yeh sab muzhe itne shradhaa bhav se kyu dekh rahe hai...

khair dekte hai aage kya kuch naya hota hai.....

tabhi waha Rajsi bhesh mein ek yaksh aage aaya .....aayie shriman ...Maharaj aapki pratiksha mein hai...

maine socha Swyam Dhan k Swami Kuber ji aur meri pratiksha mein....

mein unke saath chal pada.....aur pahunch gaya ......ek sabha mein ...
jo bahut hi vishal thi.....ek unche se aur Bade Sinhghasan par kisi ko baithe dekha ....unke chere par ek alag hi prakah tha ....sir par heero se jadit swarn mukut...matthe par bana hua tripund......swarn aabhushan....
aur paas mein badi si gada...

mere saath jo yaksha aaya tha usne
Singhasan ki aur shradhha se pranam karte hue..
Pranam maharaj ...aapne jisse kaha tha usse hum le aaye prabhu..

meine bhi pranam kiya.....
Pranam Maharaj.....Aaj mein dhnya ho gaya ....jinn Dhan k Swami Kuber ji k baare mein aashram mein kathao mein suna tha ....aaj shakshat unke darshan paakar mein kritharth ho gaya...
Tabhi Kuber ji ne sabha mein bauthe hue sabko kuch ishara kiya aur pal bhar mein sab gayab......mein thoda chakit hua ....phir socha ki yeh mayavi nagri hai yaha kuch bhi ho sakta hai

tabhi Kuber ji khade hogaye ......
Kuber ji - Dhnya toh hum hue hai , jo aaj aap iss brahmad k rakshak shakshat yaha padhare hai

mein kai hazaar varsho se aapki hi pratiksha mein tha...

Mein apne charo aur dekhne laga ki Swyam Kuber ji kis k swagat k liye khade ho gaye hai ...lekin waha mere siwa aur koi nahi tha

Kuber ji - Aise kya dekh rahe ho...mein aapko hi kah raha hu...

mein - Parantu mein aur brahmand ka
rakshak.....kaise...mein toh ek sadharan balak hu ...jo apne guru ki aagya ka paalan karte hue yaha aaya hu

Kuber ji - muskurate hue...Abhi aap apne vastavik roop se aparichit hai
isiliye aisa kar rahe hai...

mein - muzhe kuch yaad nahi hai...
kya aap mera parichy jaante ho...

Kuber ji - Yadi ab tak aapko aapka parichaya prapt nahi hua toh issmein tridevo ki hi iccha hai.....aur unki iccha k virudh mein aapko aapke baare mein kuch nahi bata sakta...

ab aap iss baat ko chodiye aur aayie aasan grahan kijiye ......

mein bhi waha ek aasan par baith gaya......

Kuber ji -- muzhe pata hai aap yaha kya prapt karne aaye ho.......woh aapki hi amant hai.........pichli baar jab aap yaha aaye the toh aapne hi woh divya gada humare mahal mein sthit sarover mein rakhi thi ...woh waha surakshit hai

mein - thik hai ..kya aap muzhe waha ...pahuncha sakte ho.....

Kuber ji - Aaj aap yahi vishram kijiye
kal pratha hi hum swayam aapko waha le chalenge......

mein - jaisi aapki iccha.....

phir unhone apne sewako ko bulaya
aur mahal k ek vishesh kaksh mein mera ...rahene ka prabadh karawaye

Sewak - Yeh raha aapka kaskh.....yeh ek maya mahal hai .....yaha aapko jis bhi vastu ki aawashyakta hogi bas. uske baare mein soshte hi aapje saamne haazir hogi

mein - toh kya yadi mein gada k baare mein sochu toh woh bhi yaha pragat hi jaayegi

Sewak - muskurate hue.. nahi

ab mein uss kaksh ko dekne laga, phir mein waha k ek aasan par baith gaya .
aur socha ki dekhte hai yaha ki maya kaisi hai

toh maine socha kuch khane k liye mil jaaye ....tabhi waha ek mere hi umar ka yuvak falo ki thaal liye aagaya...

jo dikhne mein meri tarah hi tha bas ...
naak aur kaan ka farak tha....

tabhi muzhe Manda gaon k mukhiya ji ki baat yaad aagayi...

aur maine usski aankon mein ek ajeeb udasi dekhi......woh yaha yaksho se kuch alag lag raha tha .....toh mein saari baat samaz gaya...

mein - kya baat hai tum itne udaas kyu ho....bhai...tum ..toh yaksha nahi lagte..kaun ho tum..

meri - baat sunke usne udaas nazro se ek baar muzhe dekha ..aur jaane laga......ki maine usse phir pukara

mein - Vishu....ruko...
mere usko pukarne par woh phir ek baar muda.....ab uski aankon mein hairani k bhav the ....lekin woh ruka nahi ...

ab muzhe yaha kuch accha nahi lag raha tha ....toh socha apne naye bane mitr ko hi yaad kar lu....aur mann mein pukara.....tabhi mere saamne GK
pragat hua..

GK - aapne muzhe pukaara mitr kaho kya aagya hai

mein - aagya toh kuch nahi bas mera yaha mann nahi lag raha hai , toh socha tumhe yaad kar lu.

GK - mein abhi apne gharwalo ko aapke baare mein hi bata raha tha..
ki aapne yaad kar liya

mein- Chalo tumahare ghar chalte hai

GK - kya sach mein ...aap chalenge

Mein - haa kyu nahi ..yaha akele iss maya mahal mein muzhe accha nahi lag raha
Phir GK ne mera haath pakda aur palak zhapkte pahunch gaya usske ghar

muzhe achanak waha GK k saath dekhkar sabhi hadbada gaye ...
tab Gk ne apne ghar walo se mera parichay karaya.....uski patni, aur do bacche muzhe dekhkar bahut khush hue
Mein - tum toh kah rahe the k tum hazaroo saalo se se pariwar se nahi mile toh ye bacche...itna kah kar mein muskurane laga...

GK - kya mitr aap bhi....yaha yaksho ki aayu bahut hoti hai abhi toh mera yeh chotta beta 5 hazaar sasl ka hai jo prithvi k 5 varsh k baalak k barabar dikhta hai...

phir aise hi kuch baatein aur bhojan k saath woh raat bit gayi ...subah 4 baje mein wapas maya mahal pahunch gaya.....socha abhi apn lakshya ki aur thoda samay hai toh dhyan kiya jaaye aur baith gaya dhyan karne.....

aaj dhyan mein muzhe kuch naye rang ki urja apne bhiter mahsus hui....

uss urja par apna dhyan kendrit karke dekhe laga toh woh aur gahri ho gayi.
phir woh saari urja mere mastak ke piche VISHSHUDDHI chakra se upar ki aur kendrit ho gayi aur dikhne laga .
do dal wal kamal safed urja se paipurna.....aur dikhne lagi kuch aakriti.....tabhi mera dhyan tuta....aur saamne dekha toh KUBER JI khade the...
au jo meri taraf hi dekh rahe the...
usske baad mein Unke saath ek Sarover par pahuncha jaha bader hi sunder kamal khile hue the

Kuber ji - Yahi woh sarover hai jaha aapki amaanat rakhi hai,
isse aapko hi prapt karna hoga...

aur itna kahkar woh waha se chale gaye....
ab mein sarover ki bada aur jaise hi mein jal mein utra ...toh mere pair wahi ruk jagaye , chahkar bhi mein aage nahi bad paa raha tha....

tabhi waha uss jal mein hulchul hui aur jal ne bade se bhawar ka rup le liya.....aur pragat hua ek balshali divya purush, jo dikhne mein bada hi divya aur shaktishali dikh raha tha, aur aai awaaj..

aawaj - kaun ho tum ...jo yaha tak pahunch gaye......

mein - mera naam Abhi hai aur mein yaja ek gada lene aaya hu...

aawaj - hmmm aap yaha kuber ji k saath aaye ho......parantu aap woh gada tabhi prapt kar sakte ho jab aap mere teen prashna ka utter de doge..

yadi aap ek bhi jawab nahi de paaye toh aap issi sarower mein kaid ho jaaoge...
mein - muzhe sweekar hai pucho kya puchna chate ho

1 - Acche karmo k punyo ke nash ka mool kya hai

Mein - कामेन कर्म नाशं स्यात्। hamari bhogo ko bhogne ki vaasnaye hi , hamare karmo ka nash karti hai

2 - Gyan k naash ka mool kya hai

mein - क्रोधेन ज्ञान नाशनम्। jab bhi hume krodh aata hai toh hum sab bhul jaate hai , aur aisa anchit karya kar baithte hai, jisse aage hume hi pareshaniyo ka saamna karna padta hai, isiliye Krodh hi gyan ka naash karta hai

3 - Bhakti k naash ka mool kya hai

mein - लोभेन भक्ति नाशं स्यात्।
lobh hi bhakti k naash ka mool hai, Lobhi vyaki k liye niswarth bhakti ko koi mol nahi

atti uttam aapne sabhi prashno ka sahi utrar diy hai.....mein aapko pahele hi pahchan chuka tha prarntu
yeh mera kartya tha jo muzhe pura karna hi tha......

itna kahkar ussne ek badi chamki hui gada ka roop le liya aur mere haatho mein aagaya, uss gada ko apne haatho mein paakar muzhe apne andar apaar shakti ka anbhav hone laga.......phir woh gada prakash roop mein badal gayi aur mere bhiter sama gayi....

gada prapt karne par mein chal pada apne dusre udeshya ki aur

aur phir Pahunch gaya Kuber ji ki sabha mein...

Muzhe dekhkar Kuberji bade khush ho gaye

Kuber ji - aakir aapne apni gada ko prapt hi kar liya....ab aapka yaha ka karya pura ho gaya

mein - Abhi kuch karya adhura hai ...
muzhe aapse kuch aur bhi chahiye...

Kuber ji - Kaho Rakshak ...mera vachan hai aapko ..aap ko chahoge aapko woh prapt hoga...

mein - toh phir aap unn sab manushya ko mukt kar do ...jinhe aapne daas bana rakha hai...

Mere aisa kahne par sabha mein hulchul hone lagi

mein - Dekhiye aapne muzhe vachan diya hai...

Kuber ji - Parantu aap unka kya karoge ..unnka sharir toh khatam ho gaya hai

mein - woh sab mein dekh lunga..aap apne vachan ka paalan kare

kuber ji - thik hai parantu unhi ko hum mukt kar sakte hai , jinnka jeewan prithvi par abhi baaki hai....

aap jab hamari seema pa pahunchoge tab sab k sukshma sharir waha pahunch jaayenge..

mein - Thik hai aagya dijiye ab mein chalta hu...

Kuber ji - Jaane se pahle ek baar aap Hamare Alkapuri k Shivalaya mein jarur darshan kijiye..

mein - ji ..jarur
itna kahkar mein mahal k bahar aagaya aur Vichar kiya ki ..jab kuber ji
ne kaha hai toh jarur jana chahiye..

phir meine GK ko yaad kiya aur GK haazir....

Mein - mitr muzhe yaha k Shivalaya jaana hai kya tum muzhe le chalo ge

GK - kyu nahi mitr ...aur ussne mera haath pakda aur pahunch gaye sidha Shiv mandir k aage...

Bada hi sunder Shiv mandir tha adbhut kalakrti ....mandir ki sunderta aur shilpkala ko dekhte dekhte Bhagwan bholenath k Vishal shivling k saamne pahuncha ....woh shivling
swayam prakshit tha ussmein se divya prakash mikal raha tha...mein iss adbhut darshan se bhav vibhore ho gaya tha ...ki tabhi ek bahut hi suril aawaj mein RUDRASTAKAM ki stuti mere kaano mein padi ...

toh meine aawaj ki aur dhyan diya
toh dekha ki ek bahut hi sunder kanya
apni asnkhein band karke tanmayta se gaa rahi thi.....jaane kyu mein usski taraf kheecha chala jaa raha tha......

aur usske aage jaakar niharne laga

jab stuti samapt hui aur usne aapni asnkhien kholi toh muzhe apne saamne dekhkar hairan ho gayi

woh kuch bolna chahti thi lekin bol nahi paa rahi thi ...hum dono bas ek dusre ko dekhe jaa rahe the

mein - mann mein ....na jaane kyu iss dekhkar khicha chala jaa raha hu....
lagta hai jaise mein isse jaanta hu ...
aur mere mann mein yeh kaisi hulchul si mach rahi hai

ladki - mann mein ---- kya mein jo dekh rahi hu woh swapna hai ya satya hai....kitna sunder hai.....kya karu mein ...kaise baat karu....hey Mahadev ...jissko roj mein sapno mein dekti hu ..wahi mere saamne

tabhi GK ki aawaj se hum dono ka dhyan tuta

GK - Arre bete SHIVALI yeh mere swami mere mitra .. Abhi hai

aur mitr Yeh SHIVALI hai jissi mein aaj subah apne pariwar k saath yaha aaya tha tab mila tha
mitr inko yaha badi shradha se dekha jaata hai ...
innka yaha k pujari k yaha hua tha...aur innki aayu yaha k samay ansar nahi balki pritvi k samaay k ansar bad rahi hai..

janm se hi inhe mayavi shakti prapt hui hai...

SHIVALI - Kaka shri kya mein innse ekaanth mein mil sakta hu....

GK ne meri aur dekha ...toh meine bhi ishara kiya jisse woh waha se thodi dur chala gaya..

Mein - haa ji kahiye...

SHIVALI - yaha nahi ...kya aap thodha bahar chaliye....hum mandir k bahar aagaye...

SHIVALI - Aap kya sach mein manushyalok se aaye hai ....

mein -haa

SHIVALI - sharmate hue ...phir baba ne satya kaha tha..

mein - kya kaha tha baba ne...

Ussne apni tirchi nazroo se muzhe dekha...na haane kya tha unn aakon mein aisa toh muzhe Sirf Shalu ki aankon mein dekhkar hota tha...

Shivali - baba se hi puch lo....

tabhi waha pujari ji ko aate dekha ...jab unhone muzhe dekha toh bade khush ho gaye

Pujari - aagye aap ....aapki mein kab se pratiksha kar raha tha.......

mein - meri pratiksha ...kyu

pujari - Shivali ki aur dekhte hue....aapki amaant jo mere paas hai

unki baat sunne k baad Shivali sharmane kagi

kuch kuch meri samaz mein aaraha tha.....aur Shivali ki aankhon mein bhi aapne liye prem dekh liya tha ..
lekin abhi muzhe bahut karya karne the

mein - Pujari ji mein aapki baato ko samaz raha hu ...aur Shivali ki aur dekhkar.... muzhe bhi uss pal ki pratiksha rahegi ...parantu abi muzhe bahut karya karne baaki hai......
aur muzhe jaana hoga.....

meri baat sunkar Shivali ki aanko mein aansoo aagaye...

mein - Shivali se - dekho tumhe dekhkar na jaane muzhe bhi kyu aakarshan hua....aur tumhe chodkar jaane ki baat se mere mann mein bhi dukh ka aubhav ho raha hai

parantu abhi mere kartavya muzhe bula raha hai toh muzhe jaana hoga

lekin mera vachan hai ki mein tumhe lene jarur aaunga....

itna kahkar meine waha se vida li aur GK k ssath pahunch gaya Bhuvalok ki seema oar waha maine dekha lagbhag 12 shukshma sharir jinhe Kuber ji ne mukt kiya tha meri hi peatiksha mein the.

seema se bahar jaate hi meri anguthi se panch rang ki urja nikli aur mera sthool sharir muxhe wapas mil gaya

ab prashna tha ki kaise unn 12 logo ko unke sharir diye jaaye

tabhi mahaguru ki aawaj aayi putra dhyan mein baitho aur apni urja ko aagya chara mein ektrit karo jaise aaj subah kiya tha ...mein samaj gaya aur dhyan karne baith gaya
jab meine apne chakro ka dhyan karte hue Aagya chakra mein pahuncha toh waha se paanch tatva aur jeewan shati ki urja nikalkar sidhe un 12 sukshma sharir par padi aur dekhte hi dekhte unka sthool shari unhe wapas mil gaya

sabhi bahut khush the....mera aabhar vyakt kar rahe the....unhe mein muzhe
vishu bhi mila ....usse dekhkar muzhe badi khushi hui....ki ek maa ko diya hua vachan mein pura kar paaya..

sab ko mvida kiya ........
ab apne agle safar ki chalne ki tayarri
......
abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update jald hi....

Nice update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 23

ab tak aapne dekha......kaise A1 ne gada prapt ki......
Shivali se mulaakat.....
aur vishu aadi bandiyo ko mukt karna
ab aage..........

Vishu aur baaki logo k jaane k baad ..... phir maine apne agle padav..... Maansarover ki traf prasthan karne ki socha....

mein - toh GK chale agle safar par.......ab muzhe Kailash parvat k nikat ....maansarover jaana hai ...

GK - Ji jarur parantu mein kewal aapko Mansarover se pahle Rakshas taal tak hi pahucha sakta hu....
usske aage kailash parvat ka kshetra shuru ho jaata hai ......waha Mahadev k iccha k bina koi mayavi shakti kaam nahi karti....

Mein - thik hai toh phir chalo ......

A1 chal pada apne agle safar par...
ab jara dekhte hai hamara Abhi kya kar raha hai....

Yana Abhi ki training bhi joro se chal rahi thi Woh computer programming mein bhi tezi se progress kara raha tha ,
Rimpy k saath roj school jaana abhi bhi chalu tha...aise hi ek din..

Diwali k 10 din pahele vacation shuru hui.....sabhi friends ne bahar ghumne ka plan banaya.....

Abhi - ( Ph par ) haa ....thik hai Toh Rimpy tayaar ho Adventure k liye....
accha......thik ..hai.....ghana jungle dekhkar phir na kahna ki dar lag raha hai....
abhi ki aawaj sunkar Adira jo Abhi k room mein hi soyi thi....

Addu -( apni aankein malte hue)
kaha jaa rahe ho bhaiya .....mein bhi chalungi saath mein ...bahut maza aayega..

mein - Nahi betu tum abhi bahut chotti ho.....aur waha forest mein pata nahi kuan kuan se jangli janwar honge

Addu - Nahi ...bhaiya mein bhi chalugi....matlab chalungi....ab mein badi ho gayi hu ....bhaiya pls na.....
ab muzhe dar bhi nahi lagta.......
mein brave girl hu...

mein - Nahi betu...jidd mat karo na..
bas 2 din k liye toh jaa raha hu .....samajo karo na gudiya

meri baat sunkar woh jor jor se rone lagi ...uhhhh uhhhh...uhhh
mien bhi chalungi ........nahi....muzhe bhi jaana hai.

itne mein Ritu di bhi aagayi .....arre mera shona baccha....kya hua ..kyu ro raha hai........Abhi ..tune rulaya hai
gudiya ko...( meri taraf badi aankhien kake) khabardar jo meri Addu ko kuch kaha toh...

Addu . nahi ...di ...bhai ko mat daato .
nahi toh mein aapse baat nahi karungi
haa ...yeh mere aur bhaiya ..k bich ki baat hai....

itne mein mom bhi aagayi ....arre kya ho raha hai yaha....Ritu yeh addu kyu ro rhai hai...tune rulya addu ko

Ritu - hey ram ....aise hi hota hai do k zhgde mein ghuso toh baat apne par hi aati hai
nahi ..mom maine kuch nahi nkiya hai mein yaha aai toh yeh ro rahi thi..toh maine Abhi ko thoda sa daant diya ...
toh yeh chutanki muzhe hi aankhien dikha rahi hai...

Addu - sisakte hue ...mein chutanki ..nahi hu ..di

Ritu - haa ..haa bahut badi ho gayi hai tu....chutanki....aur di hasne lagi

Addu - mom dekho na didu muzhe chida rahi hai....mein chutanki nahi hu

inn dono ki yeh natkhat ladayi dekhkar muzhe sur mom ko bahut hasee aarahi thi lekin hum dono apni hasse ko ander hi dabaye the...agar addu ne dekh liya toh aur tufaan aajaayrga....

mom ne aage badkar Addu ko apni godi mein bhitahaya aur uske aansoo pichne lagi...

mom - kya hua gudiya...tum ro kyu rahi thi betu.....

Addu - mom ab bhai na muzhe pahele jaisa pyar nahi karte.....bahi aajkal kaha rahte hai muzhe milte bhi nahi.

aur abhi vacation hai toh bahar ghumne ..jaa rahe hai.....jab mein ..kaja.....muzhe bhi jaana hai....toh bhai ne mana kiya...

tab maine bhi socha ki tarning aur school k chakkar mein sach mein bahut din se mein gudiya se acche se nahi mil paaya.......

mein - sorry gudiya....chup hi jaa betu
apne kaamo k chakkr mein mein tumhe time hi nahi de paaya ....

itna kahkar mein kan padkad kar ghutne par baith gaya.....apni galti ka ahsas hone par meri aankhein bhi bhar aayi

muzhe aise baitha dekhkar ..gudiya mom ki godh se utakar mere paas aai
aur mere aansoo pochte hue.....

Addu - bhai aap sorry mat bolo na .....dekho mein naraj nahi hu...

itna kahkar woh mere gale lag gayi..
aur mere kaan mein bolne lagi .....ab toh muzhe le jaaoge na bhai....

mein - usske barre mein jab Dad aayenge tab baat karenge.......abhi toh bahar chalo icecream party karte hai...

Ritu - yeh kya ..bhai muzhe nahi le chaloge....

mein kyu nahi di aap bhi , aur mom aap bhi chalo na .

Ritu - haa mom chalo na , hum shopping bhi ka lenge.. maza aayega

mom - beta shopping ki kya jarurat hai, iss city mein hamare 4 Shopping mall . Unki site par jo tumhe chahiye woh select karo ...wih yahi aajayega

Ritu - Nahi mom shopping ka alag hi maza hai....

Thik hai tum jaao muzhe abhi kuch kaanm hai....

phir mein Di aur aAddu ko lekar nikalne laga ki tabhi Rimpy ka bhi ph aagaya ....didu k saamne mein uthana nahi chahta tha ...

Ritu - Abhi call kyu nahi utha raha hai kiske hai call la idhar de....
aur di ne mere haath se ph chin liya
aur speaker on kar diya...ki tabhi
mere tote ud gaye.....
Rimpy - itni der kyu lagayi mere babu ne .....Babu sunkar di mere taraf dekhne lagi aur muzhe baat karne ka ka ishara kiya ...
Mein - kya baat hai Rimpy ...mein abhi gadi mein hu Addu aur di k saath ARA shopping mall jaa raha hu ...acha toh mein bhi waha hi aa rahi hu ...
Outing k liye kuch shopping karni hai..
milte hai mall mein shona....

tabhi di - Rimpy kabhi humre bhi itne pyar se call kar liya kar...

Rimpy - arre diiiiiii.....aaap ...haa
aur call cut ho gayi...

di - kya baat hai betu yeh babu ....shona kya chal ..raha hai ...haa

aur Addu bhi muzhe dekh rahi thi ab pata nahi usse kuch samaz mein aaraha tha ki nahi......

mein - nahiiii..... diiiiii ....wohhh ..kuuuch ..nahiii ..aise hi .paagal ladki hai woh....

muzhe aise haklaate dehkar Addu jor jor se hasne lagi.....

tabhi hum pahunch gaye ARA MALL

yeh city ka top most mall tha...jiska naam hum teeno k naam k initial letter jod kar rakha gaya tha ...

Hum waha utar gaye aue driver chala gay gadi park karne k tabhi waha ek aur gadi aakar ruki aur usmein se Rimpy apni do friends k saath utri ..

Rimpy ko dehka toh dekhta rah gaya
sach mein bahut sunder lag rahi thi

Di - arre Rimpy aao aao dekho tumhara shona bhi yahi hai.

Rimpy - sharmate hue nahi di aise kuch nahi ..woh toh ...bas aise hi

di - koi baat nahi chalo shopping kar lete hai ....phir hum ander gaye aur
shuru hui shopping .....uff ....,,3 ghante ho gaye the shopping karte karte.....
mein - Uff di aur kitni der lagegi mein bahut bor ho raha hu aur bhook bhi lagi hai ....

Addu - haa didu bas karo na ab muzhe bhi ice - cream khani hai...

Di - abhi bas thodi der aur lagi betu...
tum aisa kro niche canteen mein chao hum abhi aate hai ...

phi mein addu k saath canteen chala gaya aur ek table apna order diya aur di ka wait karne laga.... thodi der mein humara order bhi aagaya....ki tabhi di
Rimpy aur uski dono friends waga aagayi,

Di ki aakhien lal lag rahi thi ...meine socha kuch toh hua hai.....

Di - Chalo betu hume yaha se chalna chahiye ab .....kahi aur cahlte hai

mein - lekin kyu di ....yaha bhi food bahut tasty hai, ..addu bhi -- haa didu dekho na yeh full cheese pizze ktna accha ha ...khane do na...

tabhi do lafange se ladke piche se aate hue ......jaane man bache ke saath kya karogi jaakar ..humare saath chalo na .....maza aajaayega

unki baat sunkar mera khun khaulne laga.....aur gusse k kaaran meri aakhein lal hone lagi

Di - chodo innko betu chalo na ....

mwin di ki aankon mein dekhkar ..

di aapko muzh par bharosa hai na..

aur di ko shant karne k liye maine thodi power use ki...aur di ab baith gayi ...

Tab Rimpy ne bataya ki jab hum shopping karke niche canteen aarahe the ...tab inme se ek ne di k hip par haath maara aur gande gande comments kiye ......

meine dekha phir woh dono jaha pass hi unke 4 saathi baithe the waha baith gaye , ek ne bola koi nahi chamiya yaha se bahar nikal ka toh jaaogi ...

mein chahu toh toh abhi inn sabko maut de sakta tha lekin maine kuch aur socha aur apne table se uth gaya

di mera haath pakadkar ...nahi betu mat jaa woh 6 hai aur ho sakts hai unke pass hatiyar bhi hai...
hum police mein complaint karenge

Rimpy - haa Abhi inn sab mein main toh bhul hi gayi ..abhi dad ko call kar ti hu ...aur woh call lagane lagi

mein - di jab tak police aati hai mein unse kuch baat karke aata hu ..bharosa rakho muzh par ....

mein pahuch gaya unke table par
unme se g1 --- arre dekho toh kaun aaya hai ....baache tu jaa aur apni di ko bhej ..ha...ha.haa

mein pahle mein kuch baat kar lu aur phir meine ek gunde ki aanko mein dekhkar apna kaam kiya ,

yaha gundo ko g1,g2 likhunga

toh woh sunn ho gaya tabhi g2 ...kya kar raha hai be .....lekin tab tak mein uski aakon mein bhi dekhkar apna kaam kar chuka tha ....aur mein waha se jaane k liye jaise utha to g3....

dekh kya rahe ho pakdo saale ko pata nahi boss par kya jaadu kiya abhi koi muzhe pakadta ki tabhi g2 ne apne hi saathiyo par attack kar diya aur mein aaram se apne table par aakr baith gaya ..

ab sabhi waha ka tamasha dekh lage

g1 bhi humle mein shamil ho gaye g1 aur g2 kabhi aapne baal nochte kabhi un chaaro ko daato se kaatte phir dono ne wha pade fork ko uthaya aur apne saathiyo pa chadkar hamla karne lage wha chikhe gunjne lagi ..
tabhi g1 ki jeb se chaku gir toh usne usse utha liya aur phir bahene laga khun thode hi der mein waha 5 laashe giri padi thi aur g1 khoon se sanaa hu haath mein chaku liye kabhi hass raha tha toh kabhi ro raha tha ...

yeh sab dekhkar kayi log darre hue the aur kuch logo toh ultiya aur chakkr aane lage the.....

tabhi wah entry hui police ki ....

abhi k liye itna hi
agla update raat ko...

Jabardast update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 24

ab tak aapne dekha.......
abhi ka outing k liye programme banna....
mall mein shopping...
aur cafe ka karnama.....
ab aage.......

cafe mein sabhi bahut darre hue the
Rimpy aur di mere tarf dekh rahi thi
aur addu bhi dari hui thi...

Addu - bhai chalo yaha se muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai.....

di - Betu muzhe tuse kuch...

tabhi meine di ko rokte hue....
Di jo bhi baatein hai woh baad mein pahle yaha se chalo...addu dar rahi hai...
jaise hi hum log waha se nikalne lage
toh waha DSP sahab k saath police team aagayi thi

Dsp - Hame dekhkar humari taraf aate hue.... Beta Rimpy HM sir ka ph aaya tha kya hua yaha par..

maine Rimpy ko ishara kiya aur woh samaj gayi .....
uncle hum yaha baithe hue the tab achanak yaha ladayi hui isiliye meine papa ko ph kiya tabhi Dsp sahab dhyan waha hue kand par gaya...

aur woh uss aur chal pade.....
aur hum bhi nikal liye waha se...

Ghar pahuch kar apne room mein gaye Addu mere saath hi thi aur dari hui thi toh maine apni sammohanshakti k dwara usski woh bhayanak yaadien mita di jisse woh aaram se so gayi , phir mein fresh hone chala gaya ....aur sochne laga di ko kya jawab dunga kyu ki di ki yaadein bhi mein nahi bhula sakta

jab cafe mein maine di ko shant karne k liye unke brain mein jhaank kar dekha toh muzhe di k ander bahut adhik maatra mein pink colour ki urja mehsus hui thi jisse mein jyada der unke mastishk ko control nahi ka paaya tha..... mein samazne ki koshish karne laga toh muzhe kuch samaz mein nahi aaya...toh socha dad se hi puch lunga jawab mil jaayega.

jab mein bathroom se bahar aaya toh di bed par baithe addu k sir par haath pher rahi thi..

mein - di aap ....

di ---- shhhhh chup rahne ka ishara karte hue aone room mein aane ka ishara kiya ..

mein bhi pahuch gaya di k room mein

Di ne mera haath pakadkar apne sir par rakha ....dekh Betu tuzhe meri kasam hai ....sach sach bata tune waha kya kiya tha...

mein apna haath hatate hue ....kya didu kya apne betu par vishwas nahi hai......yeh kasam dene ki kya jarurat hai ......di iss sansar mein aap mere liye ek maa ek frnd ek behan sab kuch ho ....

di - muzhe pata hai betu....aur agar iss sansaar agar kisi par muzhe vishwas hai toh woh tu hai....

mein - aap jannana chahti hai toh
bas itna abhi jaan lo di ki muzh mein kuch special powers hai di bas ussi ka kuch istemal kiya tha

Di - Ek din mein kitne shock dega betu
pahele woh .....babu ..shona....phir ab yeh superpowers .....hey Ram ...betu tu toh Super Hero ban gaya ab....

Mein - Di aisa kuch nahi hai woh toh bas aise hi pata nahi.....

accha di ab aap thodi rest kar lo mein thoda ghum kar aata hu

meine ghar se bahar aakar dad ko ph lagaya...
dad muzhe aapse kuch baat karni gai

Dad - Beta pahle toh congratulatios ..
tumhe apni powers ka use karna shuru kiya ...well done .....

mein - papa aapko kaise pata...sab

dad - Barkhurdar tum bhul rahe ho hum kaun hai ....humari nazar pure desh mein hoti hai toh kya apni family par nahi hogi...

tum abhi yaha basement mein pahuch jaao baaki baatien yahi par karenge

Dad k saath baat hote hi mein basement pahucha waha dad control room mein the ...

muzhe dekhte hi Dad - aao Abhi mere cabin mein chalkar baat karte hai...

phir hum control room k ek side mein bane dad k cabin mein gaye

Dad - haa bolo beta kya baat karni hai

mein - Dad muzhe didu k baare mein jannana hai ....ky unmein bhi.....

Dad - beta jo tum samaz rahe wahi sach hai ..lekin poori baat jannane ka samay nahi aaya hai..

Accha beta yeh jo tumne outing ka programme banaya hai ....kaha jaa rahe ho.....

mein -kya dad aapko yeh bhi pata hai...kuch toh privacy rahkho

dad - accha bete ab tumhe privacy chahiye ....lagta hai ab bade ho rahe ho
accha yeh toh bata do kaha jaa rahe ho
mein - bus dad city k bahar jo forest hai wahi jaa rahe hai.....waha kuch purane khander hai unhe dekhenge

aur wahi paas mein jo pahadi hai waha tracking waigere......

lekin lagta hai plan cancel karna padega..

dad - kyu

mein - dad woh Addu bhi jane ki jidd kar rahi hai ..abhi chotti hai usse kaise le jaau

dad - toh le jaao woh bhi khush ho jaayegi.aur ..haa Ritu ko bhi apne saath le jaana...

mein - lekin dad waha khatra bhi ho sakta hai....

dad - beta humara vansh Shoorveero ka hai , hume aise khatro k baare mein nahi sochan chahiye ....
aur mein hu hi tum chinta mat karo

abhi chalo training hall ek ek haath ho jaaye talwar baaji ki...
aur hum chal diya niche banne hue training hall.....aur dad k saath meri talwar baaji ... dad k special 5 agents wahi the aur humara khel dekh rahe the ....dono mein se koi kam nahi tha

tabhi dad mere piche dekhkar .....arre
tum yaha mein jaise hi mudkar dekhne laga bas usse samay meri talwar dad k war se niche aur talwar meri garden par..

mein - dad aapne cheating ki hai

Dad - beta yudh mein satarkta aur dhyan bahut jaruri hai ...
sawdhani haati durghatna ghati.

phir hum ghar aagye ...gahr jaakar maine Didi aur addu ko bhi Outing par chalne k liye kaha ..toh dono bahut khush ho gaye.....maine saath jaane wale sabhi friends ko call karke bata diya ki sab subah 6 baje yaha pahunch jaaye ....hum yahi se chalenge...

Subah k intejar mein raat beeti saari packing ho gayi thi ....hum koi 24 bacche the , aur 1 bus driver aur uska helper...

aur dusri gadi mein waha lagane k liye tents kuch khane pine ka saaman aur 2 cook

iss tarah hum kul 30 log the
mein , Ritu di, Addu, Bhanu , sameer
Rimpy aur uski do frnds sweety aur Divya, aur baaki kuch hamare school k frnds...

Humara safar chal pada apni manzil ki aur....
Kuch gadiya aur bhi nikli bus se duri banakar rakhe hue......
Didu ki wajah se mein Rimpy k paas bahi baitha tha , bas hum dono chup chup kar ek dusre ko dekh lete hai..
antakshari k gaane gaate gaate hasee khushi se hum pahunch gaye

forest k paas hi ek talab k pass city se bahar prakriti k nikat waha k hare bhare ped , pahad , talab ka nirmal jal
aur taazi hawa ..sab bahut khush the

humne wahi talab k paas apne tent lagayi ...abhi subah k 9 baj rahe the

addu toh itna khush thi k charo tarf dekhti jaati aur har chij k baare mein puchti thi ...Rimpy mere saath kuch samay bitana chahti leki Addu picha chode tab na...

Tabhi Ritu di aayi ....arre addu sirf bhai hi pyara hai humare saath bhi khelo dekho waha paas mein sab jharne par jaa rahe hai.....waterfall ki sunkar addu bhi di k saath cahl di

Di - arre betu chal na ...kya soch raha hai

Mein - nahi di aap ho aao muzhe yaha ka kaam bhi dekhna hai abhi abhi sab k kaun kis tent mein rahe ga yeh bhi dekhna hai...

Rimpy - haa di mein bhi yahi Abhi ki madat k liye ruk jaati hu sab chale dono gadiyon k driver aur helper gaadi mein aaram kar rahe the aur cook apni tayari mei mein Rimpy k saath talab k kinare jaakar baith gaya...

Rimpy - kal toh tum ne marwa hi diya tha...bata nahi sakte the call speakr par hai

mein - di ne ekdum se mob chin liya mein kya karta

Rimpy - tumbhi na ..ab pata nahi di mere baare mein kya soch rahi hogi

mein - kuch nahi soch rahi ..di maine unko samzha diya

Rimpy - aur woh kal kya kiya tha tumne un badmaasho k saath

mein - arre kuch nahi bas hypnotism sikh raha hu wahi kiya tha ...tum in sab baato ko chodo ..
ek baar phir se babu bolo na

Rimpy - accha ji mera babu ko kya sunnana hai

aise hi hamari baatein chal ti rahi ..
water fall se jab sab log aaygye toh humne khub enjoy kiya ...thodi tracking bhi ki ..aise hi din bit gaya ..

aur raat ka andhera charo taraf phaile laga....sabhi aaj thak gaye the isiliye sab apne apne tent mein so gaye....

bahar allav jal raha tha aur mein , di , Rimpy , sweety aur divya baithe aag sek rahe the aur addu di ki goad mein so gayi thi ...
di Accha betu ab bahut der ho gayi hai so jaate hai

mein thik hai di Aap aur Rimpy ek tent mein ho jaao , sweety aur divya ek tent mein mein addu ko lekar apne tent jaa raha hu.....

phir sab apne apne tent mein pahuch gaye......
muzhe bhi nind aarahi thi toh mein bhi soo gaya ....achanak meri nind khul gayi...maune addu ki taraf dekha toh so rahi thi kitni maasoom lag rahi thi

phir maine socha thoda bahar ki hawa kha lu....aur bahar aagaya ...

tabhi jis tent mein Sweety aur Divya so rahe the uss ke piche muzhe kuch sarsarhat ki aawaj aane lagi.....toh maine jaakar unke tent mein dekha
toh........

aaj k liye utna hi ....
agla update kal....

Nice update bro ??

 

[Abbasi]

Very Nice, Fantastic, Awesome update ..................
Keep it up bro .....................
Waiting for next update .....................

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 25

abhi tak aapne dekha....
Abhi & frnds ka outing k liye jaana.....
mauj masti k saath din ki ...samapti....aur Abhi ko kuch aawaj aana......aur Sweety aur Divya k tent mein dekhna...

ab aage.....

maine unke tent mein dekha toh dono waha nahi thi.....aur unka tent bhi piche se fata hua tha.....

muzhe kisi bahut bade khatre ka andesha hone laga ....tabhi .....
piche zhadiyon mein se kuch aawaj aayi mein turant waha jaakar dekhne laga toh kuch dikhayi nahi de raha tha.
wapas unke tent mein aaya toh ek jagah kuch khoon k nishan dekhkar ,
dil aur ghabrane laga.....

tabhi khyal aaya ki Addu bhi tent mein akeli hai........mein daudkar waha gaya toh , usse aaram se sota hua dekhkar
meri jan mein jaan aayi.....

mein ab soch mein pad gaya kya karu
agar unko dhundne jaata hu toh yaha kuch aur gadbad na ho jaaye ..aur yadi na jaau toh apni hi nazaro mein gir jaaunga......tabhi muzhe dad ka khayal aaya ....toh meine unko call karne ki sochi.......jab cell mein dekha toh ....network nahi aaraha tha...

phir maine kuch socha......aur sab tent mein jaskar sab ko jagaaya ,
jab sab log ek jagah ikkatha hua....
sab soch rahe the ...aisi kya baat hui hai ...meine unko itni raat ko jagaya

sab meri tarf hi dekh rahe the....

di - kya baat hai betu tune hum sabko itni raat ko ekattha kiya hua hai....
aur itna pareshan kyu lag raha hai....

mein - sabhi pahle shaant ...ho jaao
aur dyan se meri baat suno....

tab maine unko saari baat batayi..

jisse sukar sab pareshan ho rahe the

Rimpy - Abhi ....kaise bhi kar ke hume unhe dhundna hoga ...mein unke parents ko kya jawab dungi.....
pata nahi kya hua hoga mera dil bahu ghabra raha hai...

mein - aise ghabrane se kuch nahi hoga......hume dhyarya se kaam lena hoga...

di - Abhi ...Addu kahi dikh nahi rahi hai ...kaha hai woh

mein - di abhi woh tent mein so rahi hai....
di - Betu ab yaha tent mein safe nahi hai ...tum yahi ruko mein addu ko lekar aati hu ....
di saath 4 sameer aur bhanu bhi chal diye....
tabhi waha kuch 20 commandos ki team aayi ...aur .....
mein soch hi raha tha ..ki ab yeh kaun hai........tabhi unka chief bol pada..

Chief - Sir hum aapki hi security k liye hai ... R.V.S sir ne hi appoint kiya hai

Tab tak di bhi addu ko lekar aagayi


chief -hum dur se hi aap sab par najar banaye rakhte hai......

hume waha jungle mein kuch hulchul mehsus hui aur kuch awaaje aayi

....usski ka pata karne jaa hi rahe the ki tabhi hume unn 4 commandos ka signal mila jo aapke shivir k piche ki securtiy dekh rahe the

jab hum waha ...pahunche toh... waha unki laashe padi hui thi ....

humne aapko alert karne k liye call lagaya toh dekha sab k mob k network hi band hai......yaha tak ki satellite ph bhi band pad gaye hai......

maine unhe yaha jo hua bataya.....
to chief ne kaha

chief - aaplogo ka yaha rahna abhi thik nahi hai.....aap log abhi yaha se jaao aap ke saath 10 commandos jaayenge ...hum yaha dekh lenge

sab aapas mein baat kane lage

sameer - Nahi sir hum sab aaye hai toh saath jab tak hamare dono frnds ka pata nahi lagta hum yahi rahenge

chief ne samzhane ki koshish ki lekin koi sunnane ko tayyar nahi tha

tab tay hua ki 10 com yaha rahenge

mein - Sir mein bhi aapke saath chalunga...yeh sab meri hi jimmedari par aaye hai

chief ne bahut mana kiya ...

mein - aap shayad bhul gaye hai k mein kiska beta hu ...aise darkar dubakna mein nahi kar sakta....

sameer - mein bhi chalunga saath mein.
mein - nahi Sameer tumahara yaha rahna jyada jaruri hai...

di - lekin betu tu.......

mein di ko rok te hue ...di bharosa rakho muzh par ..kuch nahi hoga

phir chal pada mein 10 comm ki team k saath ghane jungle k ander ,

abhi hum koi 1 km ander aagaye the
lekin kahi kuch aisa dikh nahi raha tha ki kuch surag haath lage........

aise hi chalte chalte hum ghane jungle k aur ander purane mahal k khandhar tak pahunch gaye .....hum abhi badne hi wale the ki muzhe waha kuch khatra mehsus hua....

hum wahi ruk gaye chief ne 2 comm do bheja ....aur unhe sirf waha ki jaankari laane ki hidayat di...

hum intezar kar rahe the .....tabhi woh dono aagaye
chief - kaho kya kuch hai waha

comm - Sir uss khandhar k nicche ek tahkhana hai humne waha kuch roshni dekhi ..aur tahkhane k ander jaane ka raasta iss khander k back side se hai hum waha kuch logo ko ander jaate hue dekha hai....

Chief - accha yeh pata chala kitne log hai waha.
com - nahi sir . yeh toh pata nahi chal paaya...hum phir chal pade uss tahkhanne ki aur.....chief ne muzhe ek pistol di saftey k liye

tahkhanne k enterance tak pahunche hi the ki kuch 10 log ander se bahar aate hue dikhe..

hum wahi andhere mein chup gaye

unn logo k haato mein kuch tha...
woh log wahi bahar baith gaye ..aur kuch khanne lage ...jjab humne dhyan se dekha toh wah ek mara hua hiran tha aur woh log usse noch noch kar kha rahe the....

hum sab hairan the ki koi insan kaise iss tarah kga sakta hai ....tabi unmein se koi..

arre yr ab inn jaanwaro ko khaane mein maza nahi aaraha hai......
ander itni saari ladkiya hai ...ek ko agar hum kha lenge toh kitna maza aayega....
naram naram maas aur garam garam khoon maza aajaega

dusra - abe soch samaz k baat kar ...
tu jaanta hai na yeh sab kiski amanat hai.....phir
haa jaanta hu lekin jin do ko abhi hum laaye hai unmein se ek ko toh chot lagi hai ... isiliye ab kaam ki nahi rahi

usse toh kha sakte hai....

unki baate sunkar muzhe ek baat toh pata chal gyi k yeh insaan toh ho nahi sakte .....jo kisi insaan ko jinda khane ki soch rahe hai....
ab humne jyada der na karte hue andhere mein unko gher liya aur phir fire.......aur isse pahele woh kuch samazte gunji goliyon ki aawaj aur unki ceekhe...

humne socha ki ki saare maare gaye .
aur hum aage bade hi the k uss khandhar k chaaro taraf se badi bhayankar guraahat k saath aaye kuch saaye humne apne aapko jab charo taraf se ghire hue paaya.......

unmein se kuch aage aaye toh waha jalti hui mashalo ki roshni mein unko dekha toh hume aapni aankho par vishwas nahi hua......yeh sab aadhe bhediye aur aadhe insaan( warewolf)

hume samaz mein nahi aaya ki kya kare tabhi ...dhyan aaya ki janwar aag se darte hai......

toh maine ek jump laagyi aur mashal haath mein le li, muzhe dekhkar comm bhi mashal lene aage bade ki tabhi 2 wf ne 2 comm par humla kar diya aur khatam.......

tabhi chief ne fire ka order diya
banduke chikhi lekin yeh kya , innper goliyon ka koi asar na hote hue dekhkar badi hairani hui hume ab apni maut saamne dikhne lagi.....

humne apne haath mein mashal lekar ghera banaya aur aap k jarye aapne aapko bachane k koshish karne lage

aachanak unohone hum par humla kardiya.....lekin woh hum tak pahunch paate tab unke aur humare bich aaye 6 nakab posh jinke haato chamkti hui talwar ne unhe rok diya tha aur kuch bhediye shaitan ko pyare....

mein unhe pachan gaya ...yeh dad aur unke agents....the...

tabhi ek bhediya jo shayad unnka head tha gurraya

grrrh hmmm kaun ho tum kyu hamare bich mein pad rahe ho.....

dad - Main hu SANGHARAK tum sab ki maut ....phir shuru hui maar kaat

dad ne ek talwar mere taraf badayi aur ab mein bhi unnbhediyo kaa saamna karne laga,.......bhediye katte jaa rahe the phir bhi khayam nahi ho rahe the..

dad ki speed dekhkar mein hairan tha

mere saath aaye sbahi comm ne bahut mukabla kiya lekin woh unn bhediyo ka saamna na ka paaye...

jaise jaise mein ladta jaa raha tha meri speed badti hi jaa rahi thi mein bhi baat se hairan tha....

bhediye the ki khattam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahe the......

bhediya - ha hah ..ha kitno ko maaroge tum log aise ladte ladte thak jaaoge toh....phir toh tum sabki maut

tabhi waha ek pink colour ki shield se woh jagah cover ho gayi jisse bhediyo ki sankhya badni baan ho gayi.....aur sabhi bhediye k kate sgarir jamin par

tabhi uper se woh shield haati aur jo ussmein jo saamne aaya usko dekh kar toh mein shock ho gaya

mein - arre mom ...ap yaha...kaise aur ..yeh sab....kya....dad

Dad - bata abhi samay nahi hai inn baato ka ...jaao niche jaskar sabhi ladkiyo ko le aao......

abhi mein ander jaane hi laga tha ki jor se hawa chalne lagi.....aur dehkte hi dekhte....sabhi mare hue bhediye mein se black smoke sa nikal aur ek jagah ikkhatha ho gaya aur roop liya ek mahabhyabkar bhediya manv ka
jo karib 30 ft uncha tha

aur gunji hasee-- ha..ha..ha....tuch
manav tum karoge humara mukabla

toh aao apne marne ka shauk pura karo.....
mom ne kuch haath aage karke karne ki koshish ki tabhi uss bhediye ne black energy se humla kiya aur mom du jaakar gir gayi ....aur behosh ho gayi

mein .....mom .....Darinde ab toh tu gaya ...aur talwar lekar pahuch gaya uske saamne.....
dad - aise nahi hum sabhi ko humla karna hoga.....aur hum sab ek saath
badhe ....tabhi usske haath mein mudgar pragat hua aur usne ek hi waar mein hum sabko dharashayi kar diya .....humari haalat bahut buri thi
ab apne upar gussa aaraha tha k mein apne mom dad k liye kuch nahi kar paa raha hu.......

Tabhi waha ek laal roshni ka ghera
pragat hua aur uss mein se nikla ek saaya....

Bhediya - ab tum kaun ho ..jo maut lene aaye ho
tabh ek bhayankar aawaj gunji.......

MAHAKAAL KA ANSH HU MAIN
SHAITAN DHYAN SE DEKH MUZHKO
MAUT HU MEIN.....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi.....

Kal hu me Rakesh aa gya bhai
& Nice update bro