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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi ka Sweety aur Divya ki khij mein jaana....
khandhar mein manav bhediyo se saamna.....
aur ek saaye ka pragat hona..
ab aage.....aur aawaj

Mahakaal ka ansh hu mein
kaal hu mein
Shaitan dhyan se dekh muzhko
maut hu mein...


jaise hi Dad ne uss saye ko dekha aur aawaj suni toh unke chehre par halki muskurahat aagyi
mein soch mein tha ki ab yeh kaun aagaya....

Jaise hi uss bhediye ne
Kaal (rakesh ka asli rup) ka naam suna usski hasee ruk gay ....thodi der k kiye dar gaya...lekin phir...

bhediya - kaal tu bhi aagaya......
ab pahele tuzhe ki khatam karunga..
phir inn macharo ko masulnga bada maza aayega.....
tab tak mom ko hosh aagaya tha
mere paas aakar.....

mom - Betu tu thik toh hai na .....
dehko ji maine pahle hi iss outing k liye aapko mana kiya tha....dekho kitni chot lagi hai isse.....
phir maa ne muzhe gale lagaya...

aisi hi hoti hai maa ..khud toh dard mein thi aur mere chot ki chinta kar rahi thi...

mein - mom muzhe kuch nahi hua hai ....dekho mein bilkul thik hu....

dad - Naina kuch nahi hua hai isse
mere sher beta hai .......

ab dad k 5 agents bhi sambhal gaye the woh bhi humare paas aagye .....

Tabhi woh Mahabhediya bade krodh se daudta hua aaya aur kaal par humla kar diya ...lekin uss tak pahunchta usse pahele hi kaal ne ek energy beam uss par chodi ...aur woh uchalta hua dur jaakar gira...

ab usska krodh bahut bad haya tha ...
usne haath upaar kiye aur ek chamkti hui bijli jaise urja usske haath mein aagayi...aur ussne ..kaal par humla kar diya...... tabhi badla kaal ka roop
aur badal gaya uska chehra bhayankar sher k roop mein.....

aur gunji bhayankar dahad ....uss dahad ....ki urja se woh biji jaane kaha gayab ho gayi

palak zhapkte hi kaal pahunch gaya uss k paas aur garden se pakadkar

kaal - bahut hua khel tera.....
itna kahkar kaal ne apna panja ghusa diya uske chati mein aur dil bahar

dekhte hi dekhte woh khatam hua aur uske sharir k tukde ho gaye...

kaal wapas apne yoddha rup mein aaya aur ek nazar meri taraf dekha aur muskurate he waha se adrishya ho gaya..

jaane kya usski aankon mein tha ...
jo muzhe kuch apnapan se laga

tabhi dad ki aawaj se mera dhyan tuta

Dad - agents inn sab bhediyo ki bodies ko khatam kar do..

abhi chalo ander dekhte hai

jab hum ander tahkhane mein pahunche....toh waha dekha kareeb 50 ladkiya badi buri condition mein thi sabhi behosh thi.....unke haath aur pair bandhe hue the unhi mei muzhe
Divya bhi dikhi aur wahi paas ek kone mein jakhmi haalat mein sweety padi hui thi .....usske sir se khoon bahraha tha.....meine check kiya toh ...uski saanse badi dheemi dheemi chal rahi thi .......dad ....yaha aao dekho isse

tabhi bahar se chopper ki aawaje aane lagi......jo shayad papa ne hi bulaye the ...
ab tak un sabhi ladkiyo ko khol diya gaya tha .....lekin hosh nahi aaya tha shayad....koi drugs diya gaya ho

tabhi waha kuch doctors ki team aagayi .. sab ladkiyo ko waha se Hospital le jaaya gaya....Sweety ka bhi first aid kar k hospital le jaaya gaya..

ab dad , mom aur mein waha pahunche ,jaha di , addu aur saare frnds the ...waha sabhi tense the addu bar bar mere baare mein puch rahi thi aur di usse sambhal rahi thi .....

commandos apna kaam kar rahe the
Rimpy aur sabhi frnds humara intejar ka rahe the....

tabhi sab ne muzhe dad aur mom k saath aate dekha ....Addu daud kar mere gale gayi ....

Addu - arre bhai aap kaha gaye the
mein kab se didu ko puch rahi thi ...woh muzhe bata hi nahi rahi thi....

mein - kahi nahi betu mom & dad hume surprise karne aarahe the...
toh unhi ko receive karne gaya tha...

Addu k gale lagte hi jaane kaise mera saara dard chala gaya tha......

phir di aur saare frnds muzhe puchne lage ....betu yeh kya ...mom dad yaha kaise......aur Divya aur Sweety ko dhundne gaya tha kya woh mili......
aur tere saath jo comm gaye the woh kaha hai....

ab mein kya batata di ko....toh dad ki taraf dekha.....

Dad - arre arre ...beta ...ek saath ...kitne sawal
woh baat aisi hai ....humne socha ki tum sabko join kar ke surprise du
abhi hum yaha pahunche hi the ki muzhe Abhi ka ph aagaya ..tab meine
comm k chief se baat ki ...
jungle mein dhundne par woh dono mil gayi bas behosh ki....

toh comm unhe apne saath hospital
le gaye jab abhi wapas aaraha tha toh yeh hume yahi mila..

cahalo ab so jaao kal subah dekhte hai.....

subah hui hum mein se kisi ka mann nahi tha enjoy karne ka .....
leki mom , dad aur addu k kahne par thoda bhaut ghume aur sham ko wapis laut gaye..

Ghar pahunch ka Rimpy ne apni frnds ko milne ki iccha ki ...toh Dad ne kal saath chalbe ka wada kiya

di addu ko lekat room mein chali gayi aur mein mom aur dad k room mein

mein - ab dad aap dono mein se koi muzhe batayega ....ki yeh dab kya ho raha hai ...aur mom aapke paas yeh super powers..

Dad - aane wale samay mein ek mahayudh honewala hai yeh ussi ki tayyari samaz lo.....

aur beta humari family koi sadharan nahi tum , mein, naina ritu aur addu
sab mein kuch na kuch powers hai...

lekin saati baate jannane ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai....

mein - uff yeh sahi samay ...sahi samay.....kab aayega woh..

dusre din hum sabhi hospital mein unn sabhi ladkiyo ki tabiyat dekhne gaye Rimpy bhi saath thi

sab hosh mein aagayi thi sirf sweety hi behosh thi....dad k kahne se Dsp sahab bhi aaye the aur sabhi ladkiyo
se unke ghar ka pata puch rahe the.

phir hum Sweety k paas gaye jo abhi tak behosh thi...Usse dekhkar Rimpy ko bahut bura lag raha tha

Addu - bhai yeh Rimpy di ki frnd hai na kys hua hai isse.....

mein - kuch nahi betu bas thodi bimar hai..
addu - Shayad ibnhe bukhar hai mein dekhu ...itna kahkar addu ne apna haath usske maathe par rakha...aur tabhi usse hosh aagaya ....

innko yahi chodte hai dekhte hai villan party kya kar rahi hai......

Durmukhasur bade krod se. ----
nahii ...yeh tune....accha nahi kiya kaal......meri pooja mein tune vighna daala hai
pitashri toh tap kar rahe hai aur mein kanyamedh yagya k dwara Ham sabke maalik Eblis ko ko prasanna karke aur shaktiyo ko prapt karna chahta tha....

aaj ki aahutiya aakhri thi...tune accha nahi kiya....

DA - snenapati Durjaya prithvi par jo hum burai paap...aur nasha gailarahe hai woh kaisa chal raha hai....

senapati - yuraj.....waha pata nahi Sangharah nasm se koi hai jo hamare
karyo ko rok raha hai ......

DA - toh pata kari usska...kaun hai woh.....ek manav humare karyo mein badha pahuncha raha hai aur tum shaktishali asur hokar kuc nahi kar rahe ho ..

dhyan rahe iss shristi k 7 lok poore hamare adhin hai ...unn ka upayog karo....

Krodhasur, lobhasur aur mohasutum jaskar manushya k man badlo

aur maya sur tum waha jaakar waha k vigyan ko dekho ......

phir sabha samapt hui.....

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla MEGA UPDATE aaj raat ko...
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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha ki kaise Rakesh ne kaal ka roop dharkar ...sabki ki raksha ki ....
sabhi ladkiyo ko bachaya gaya
kuch patal lok ki baatein
ab aage ....


Durmukhasur ke kahne par yaha dharti par asur failne lage...
mohasur....lobhasur aur kaamasur manav man ko badlkar usme paap karne ki bhavnao ko badane lage

woh unhi ko apne mohra bannte jo naashe ka aadi ho ya swabav se kuch durgun inke ander ho

aur mayasur adhunik vigyan mein bhi danavo ki pakad majboot karne mein laga hua tha usne DK REASEARCH
INSTITUDE k naam se ek company shuru ki jaha kai tarh k experiments kiye jaa rahe the jisse manavo ko vinashkari asur mein parivartit kiya jaaye....

aur usne dusri tarag hacking k liye
alag alag deshi mein kul 12 computer institude banaye ...jaha se hacking k jariye anek aapradho ko kiya jaa raha tha....
ek din Abhi aur R.V.S ghar k niche bane hue basement mein screens dekh rahe the...
ki waha k ek operator....ne kaha

operator - sir hamare system ko koi hack karne ki koshish kar raha hai.

dad - toh abhi kya situation hai...

operator - sir humara system world ka best system mein se hai jisse hack karna possible nahi....
humne pata kiya hacker k baare toh pata nahi kar paa rahe hai sir..

yahi chinta ki baat hai humare paas best hackers hai woh bhi pata nahi laga paa rahe hai....aap yeh dekhiye sir

tabhi usne ek news channel se connect kiya
news reporter - aaj kaal desh mein yeh kya ho raha hai....
kya humara paisa ab banko mein bhi surakshit nahi.....
ho raha hai logo k account se paise gayab........
kai banko aur govt. office ka ho gaya hai data chori ....

mein - dad yeh sab kuan log hai..
aap kuch karte kyu nahi ho...

dad - beta mein unko track karne ki bahut koshish kar raha hu lekin nahi kar paa raha hu....

jaane kaunsi shakti hai jo muzhe rok rahi hai ....mein bhi issi baat ko lekar pareshan hu...

tabhi Dad ko call aata hai hai

Dad - accha...haa ..kya ....mein abhi aata hu ...
mein - kya hua dad..

Dad - kissi ne RAW ka server hack kar liya hai hume waha jaldi jaana chahiye
phir dad ne apni best hacking expert Juli ko lekr jaane wale the tabhi mein

dad mein bhi chalunga saath ho sakta hai mein kuch madat karu

Bete woh RAW ka head office hai abhi waha har koi nahi jaa sakta ..phir bhi yadi tumahari jarurat hui toh mein chief se kah kar tumhe bula lunga

phir dad ne aankhein band ki aur aagya apne mask wale roop mein aur juli ko lekar chal diye

tabhi mera ph baj utha ...dekha toh Rimpy ki call thi........meine call pick ki ...
Rimpy - hii mera babu shona kya kar rahe ho ...
mein - kuch nahi rimpy vas computer par kuch kaam kar raha hu

tum batao meri sweetu kaisi ho
aajkaal toh tum call bhi nahi karti

Rimpy - zhoot ...busy toh tum rahete ho ....humesha mein hi tumhe call karti hu..

accha chodo pahle yeh batao kyu pareshan ho ...kya hua

mein - nahi sweetu mein kaha pareshan hu ...kuch nahi hua hai

Rimpy - dekho zhoot mat bolo...muzhe pata chal jaata hai batao na tumhe meri kasam

mein - kya yr Rimpy tum bhi ..kasam dene ki kya jarurat thi...thik hai toh suno .....yaha kisi ka computer hack ho raha gai saara daata transfer ho raha hai kisi server par ...woh data bahut imp hai ......ussme bahut si jindagiya daw par lagi hai.....

kya karu kuch samaz nahi aaraha hai

Rimpy - aisa kiska computer hai jiske hack hone se itni prob ho jaayegi
aur tum bhi toh aajkal computer programming sikh rahe ho kya tum nahi rok sakte iss hacking ko...

tabhi dad ki call aayi..
mein - Rimpy tumahare paas iska koi solution ho toh batana abhi mein koshish karke dekhta hu ....

mein - haa ..hello... dad

dad beta yaha sarra data kisi anjan servr par transfer ho raha hai

abhi sirf 15 min hai humare paas
kta tum kuch kar sakte ho

Dad mein try kar sakta hu i will try my best..
lekin mein waha kaise itne jaldi aau

tabhi dad mere saamne aaye aur muzhe lekar teleport ho gaye ...
waha sabhi vadi koshish kar rahe the.

mein bhi baith gaya aur key board par kuch karne laga.....kaafi try karne k baad badi mushkil se thodi der rok paaya ...tabhi muzhe Rimpy ka call aaya.....
Rimpy - babu iss samay tum city library k base ment mein kya kar rahe ho ..
mein - tumhe kaise pata chal ..

Rimpy - tumhare ph se ...woh chodo hacking ruki

mein -
koshish kar raha hu

Rimpy - kya iss samay tumne woh watch pehni hai jo maine gift ki thi

mein - haa kyu

Rimpy - woh watch k saath saath ek gadget bhi hai usske upper ek daimond jaisa button hai usse push karo usse waha usb point open hoga usko waha connect karo ...bas fir mein dekhti hu ...
maine waise hi kiya thodi hi der mein sab computer band pad gsye ...abhi mein soch hi raha hai yeh kya ho gaya tabhi saare pc on ho gaye aur screen par aaya Data retriving.....

tabhi hall mein taliya bajne lagi

wah se nikal kar dad k saath ghar wapas aagaya ...aur Rimpy ko call kiya...
mein - thanks my sweetu ...magar yeh tumne kaise kiya ..aur yeh gadgets

Rimpy - aise meine bahut se gadgets banaye ..tumne watch waha connect ki toh mera system waha se connect ho gaya......aur maine....apne ghar baithe baithe apne pc par se sab kiya ....
waise tum RAW k hq mein kya kar rahe the

mein - tumhe kasie pata....

Rimpy - arre buddhu jab mera pc waha se connect ho gaya toh muzhe pata nahi chalega kya ..

mein - you are too jenious my swwetu

innhe yahi chodte hai aur dekhte hai A1 kya kar raha hai

Bhuvalok mein yaksho se apni gada prapt karke GK ko lekar mein pahuch

gaya mein China tibbet mein satluj nadi k kinare se thodi dur rakshas taal

GK - mitra mein bas yahi tak aapke saath hu aage bhagwan bholenath ka kshetra shuru hota hai

mein - thik hai mitr ab tum jaao jab bhi muzhe jarurat hogi mein tumhe bula lunga..

GK muzhse vida lekar chal gaya ...

waha meinne chaaro taraf deka bada sunder drishya tha Madhya mein mansarover zhil uske pashchim disha mein rakshash taal jaha mein iss samay khada tha aur uttar disha mein param paawan Bhagwan bholenath ka niwassthan Kailash Parvat...

rakshas taal se thodi dur behne wali satlauj nadi mein snan kiya phir vichar kiya Ki bholenath k kshetra mein bina unke aashirwad se kaise karya safal hoga toh maine wahi nadi ki mitti se parthiv shivling banaya aur jal se rudraabhishek kya aur Bholenth se apne karya ki sidfhi k liye aashirwad maanga......aur chal pada manjil ki aur

rakshas taal se chalte chalte pahunch gaya mein mansarover

abhi sandhya ka samay ho raha tha
yaha tak toh badi aasani se pahuch gaya tha .....aashram mein hume sikhaya gaye tha ki suryaastha k baad jal k kisi srot ko cheda nahi jaata ...

toh ab subah hi kuch ka sakta tha

toh mainr socha ki thoda dhyan hi kiya jaaye...

mein dhyan mein baith gaya...
aaj badi jaldi mein aagya chakra tak pahuch gaya tha ...wha muzhe aasim urja ka ashsas hone laga uss dhyan mein muzhe alag alag divya aakritiya dikhne lagi ..aise hi badi der tak dhyan karta rah ...jab mera dhyan khula toh

dekga madhya raatri ho gayi thi ab iss sunsaan sarover k kinare thandi thandi hawaye bah rahi thi .....muzhe bhuk aur nind ka abhas bhi ho raha tha ...
apni shaktiyo k dwara mein iiski vyasta bhi kar sakta tha lekin uss kshetra mein apni shaktiyon ka prayog nahi karna chahta tha

tabi meine dekha ek naga sanyasi badibadi jataye jinke sir par thi aur pure sharir par bhasm ....

sanyasi - aare beta yah thand mein aise akele ...lagta hai tumhe bhook bhi lagi hai ...lo yeh fal lo kga lo

unhone apne kamandal se se kuch fal nikal kar meri aur badaye ...
aur meine unse fal le liye aur khane laga tabhi muzhe apne piche kuch aawaj aai maine mudkar dekha toh koi nahi ths....aur aage dekha tih woh naga baba - bhi gayab

mein samaz gaya ho na ho yeh saakshat bolenath hi the......
maine unhe man hi man pranam kiya

aur vichar karne laga ki tabhi meri anguthi chamakne lagi

aur aai Mahaguru ki aawaj
putra kal Diwali ka shubh muhurt hai

subah 4 baje sabhi tridev aur sabhi devta yaha snan karne aate hai...

sabse phale tridev snan karte hai usdke baad devta ...dhyan rahe jab tridev k snan k baad devta snsn kar rahe ho wohi samay hai tumhe tumahare lakshya ko paane ka ...

aur aawaj band ho gayi.....

subah 4 baje maine dekha k 3 prakash punj aakar uss saraver mein sama gayi ...aur woh sarover adbhut urja se chamkne laga....

aaj k liye itna hi ..

agla update kal..
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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha A1 masarover pahunch gaya hai hai......subah 4 baje 3 prakash punj uss jhil mein pravesh kar gaye.......ab aage..


Unn 3 parash punj ke jhil mein pravesh karte hi woh jhil ek dum chamak lagi .....bada hi divya drishya tha .....woh jhil 3 prakar k prakash se prakashit ho rahi thi......waha se nikalti urja ki kirne muzh tak bhi pahunch rahi thi ...jaise hi woh kirne muzh tak pahunchti ....toh muzhe aisa lagta tha jaise koi sneh se mere sir par haath pher raha ho....

tabhi woh teeno prakash punj uss jhil se nikle ...thodi der aakash mein sthit hue......muzhe aisa lag raha tha jaise woh muzhe hi dekh rahe hai

phir woh teeno prakash punj aakash mein villin ho gaye.....

abhi mein jhil k shant jal ko dekh raha hi tha aur soch raha tha ki aage kya karna hai......tabhi maine anek prakar ki urja ko waha mrhsus kiya...

lekin muzhe dikh kuch nahi raha tha

tabhi muzhe guru ji ki baat yaad aati hai......jo hame inn chamde ki aankhon se nahi dikh paata woh gyan chakshu se dikh jaata hai...

tabhi maine aapni urja ko aagya chakra par kendrit kar diya .....ab muzhe woh chakra spashta roop se dikhne laga tha......do dal wale kamal k saman.....jisske bhiter anant urja ka ek bindu......iss chakra mein paach tatvo ki ektrit urja hoti hai.....aur devta hai panch Mukhi SAMB SADASHIV
jo parabrahm ja hi sagun roop hai

itni urja k jaagrit hone baad maine aur sarover ki aur dhyan diya toh dekh alag alag jagah se prakash punj uss jhil mein prevesh kar rahe the....

tabhi maine bhi jhil mein pravesh karne ka socha aur chal diya jhil ki aur...
jaise hi maine apna pair jil k paani mein dala toh waise hi tez zhatka muzhe laga aur mein piche ki aur gira

Bhuva lok mein toh mera saama yaksho k saatjh hua tha jo taamsik shakti ka prayog karte hai...

parantu yaha toh har taraf satvik urja hai jisska mein saamna kaise karu
samaz nahi aaraha tha.....

maine 2 ---3 baar koshish ki lekin sab vyarth raha uss jhil mein main pravesh hi nahi kar paa raha tha.....abhi samay bhi kam tha suraj nikalne se pahele muzhe apna kaam karna tha....

tabhi mere mann k bhiter se aawaj aai ....arre bhai kab tak murkho ki tarah girte padte rahega.....aawaj spastha aai ....mein idhar udhar dekhne laga

phir se aawaj aayi ....arre idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai.....mein tumahara hi ek hissa manomaya kosh hu.....
dhyan se suno devtao se devta hi bankar mil sakte ho .....iss baat ko dhyan mein rakho...

mein - accha toh phir devta kaise banu ...

tumahare aagya chakra se upar Bramarandhra hai waha apni urja ko ekatrit karo....

abhi bahut kam samay bacha tha ...

maine phir aapni samasth urja ko waha le jaane ka pratna karane laga
parantu asafal raha.....

mein haash hogaya tha ek gudev ko kya kahunga....

tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya .....guru bina gyan nahi ....ab toh woh hi iss sankat se muzhe ubaar sakte hai....

maine man hi man gurudev ko pukara
tabhi mere mann mein aawaj gunji

putra tum jinse milna chahte ho unki aagya liye bina aur sahayta k bina kaise unn se milna sambhav

swasti vaachan se unhe prasanna karo aur prarthna karo....

tabhi meine ...swasthi vaachan ka paath shuru kiya

SWASTHI NA INDRO BRIDHASHRAVA
SWASTI NAHA PUSHA........

phir maine prarthana ki ---
Hey Indra dev mein Apne guruvar ki aagya se yaha aaya hu kripya meri sahyata kijiye ....tabhi sarover k aur se ek safed urja muzh par padi aur mein mera dhyan Brahamarandhra mein pahuch gaya aur mera sharir prakashwan ho gaya ab mein aaram se jal mein utar gaya...

jaise hi mein jhil k jal mein utra toh waha ek bahut bada devtao ka samuh
mere saamne tha....jinnka sahri bhaut hi divya tha sabke hi sharir se alag alag tarah ki urja nikal rahi thi

unn sab k aage jo the woh bada sa mukut aur safed prakash se jagmaga rahe the...
meine unhe pranam kiya ...

Pranam Indra dev muzhe darshan dene k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad

Idra dev - yashashvi bhava....putra
tum jiss vastu ki khoj mein yaha aaye ho woh tumahari hi hai ......uss mein hum sabhi devtao ki urja samahit hai

isisliye pahle tumhe praman dena hoga ki tum ab uss Talwar ko dharan karne yogya ho gaye ho......

mein - Hey dev aap yeh bhi bata dijiye kis prakar ka praman dena hoga

Indra dev - putra tumhe Agnidev ..Vaayudev....aur Varundev aur mere vahan Airawat k veg ko rok kar dikhana padega...

tabhi Varun Dev aur Vyau dev ki sammilit shakti se waha ek bawander pragat hua......mein kuch samazta usse pahle ussne muzhe apne bhiter sama liya ...yeh itna achanak hua ki muzhe kuch sambhalne ka mauka bhi nahi mila....

mein uss bawander mein fas gaya tha
tabhi agnidev ne bhi apni urja uss bawander mein laga di.....ab waha ka taspmaan bhi bahut badne laga aisa lagne laga ki jaise koi ubalte paani mein duba duba kar nikal raha tha

ab mein aur der nahi kar sakta tha

maine apne aap ko sambhala aur apni 5 tatvi ki sammilt urja se ek aapne chaaro taraf ek kawach ka nirmah kiya ...jissse mein uss bhayankr bawander mein bhi sthir ho gaya

phir meine aakash tatva ki urja se ek
vaccum banaya jissne uss bawander ko apne bhiter sokh liya.....

tabhi muzhe jor se kisine uchal phenka toh dekha kai sund wala ekdum safed ek badasa haathi apni sabhi sund ko upar uthakar chinghad raha hai..

uper se niche aate hue mine usse dekha ...ab woh phir muzhpar waar karne daud kar aaya toh mein usske pairo se bich se bachkar picche ki aur nikal gaya aur punch padakar chalang lagate hue usske pith par sawar ho gaya.........ab woh muzhe girane k liye uchalne laga sabhi devta iss khel ko utsukta se dekh rahe the ...

tabhi devraj Indra...jaldi karo putra abhi bas suryadaya hone hi wala hai
aur aise hote hi hum sab taha se prashthan kar jaayenge....

Tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya ki haathi ankush se hi vash mein hote hai

tab meine apni shaktiyo ko apne haath mein ekatrit kar k waha prahar kiya jaha ankush lagaya jaata hai

aur Airawat shaanth ....

Devraj - Bahut accha putra ab tum vyogya ho gaye ho apni talwar dharan karne k liye .....parantu dhyan rahe yeh param vidhwanskari hai

isska prayog tum tabhi karoge jab ati aawshyakta ho

tabhi sabhi devtao k sharir se urjaye nikal kar ek jagah ektrit ho gayi aur
pragat hui ek vishal chamkti hui divya talwar....





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tabhi woh talwar prakash mein badalkar muzh mein sama gayi, jisse muzhe tez tez zhatke lagne lage aur asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga

mein vahi kathinayi se ussko apne bhiter sahan kar raha tha...tabhi

Varun dev - putra tum yaha jatatva ki pradhanta wale kshetra mein aaye aur apni abilishit vastu ko prapt kiya
isse mein bahut prasanna hu

yeh lo meri taraf se upahar
VARUNASTRA...jo meri shaktiyo se parpurna hai......

varundev se astra paakar meine Sabhi devtao ko ko pranam kiya ....
tab tak suryodaya bhi ho chuka tab aur sabhi devta prasthan kar gaye

maine bhi Surya narayan ko arghya chadaya aur mansarover ko pranam kiya...

pihr Kailash parvat ki parikramma karke wapas rakshas taal par aake apne mitr ko yaad kiya

tabhi waha GK pragat hua

GK - bahut bahut abhinandan mitra.
aapne apne dusre padav ko bhi paar kar liye..ab kaho kya aagya hai

Mein - mitra aabhi toh guru dev k bataye teesre padav ki aur jaana hai ...lekin muzhe abhi mere mitro ki baht yaad aarahi hai..unhe dekhne ka bahut dil kar raha hai kya tum issmein meri sahyata kar sakte ho mitra.....
GK - Kyu nahi mitra jarur....

aur usne apne haath hawa mein lahraya toh waha aashram ka drishya muzhe dikhne laga

jaha mere mitra abhyas kar rahe the
unhe dekhkar mein bafa prasanna tha ...
aise sabko dekha ...Rakesh ko ekanth mein baithkar dhyan karte hue dekha, usske shair se ek adbhut prakash nikal raha tha

phir muzhe dikha aashram ka sarover dikha jaha Shalu ko baithe dekha jo udaas man se jal ki taraf dekh rahi thi , usski aankon mein aansoo dekhkar na jaane kyu mera mann bahut dukhi hone laga..

mein apne mann mein Shalu ...Shalu itna dukhi mat ho .....

tabhi Shalu idhar udhar dekhne lagi..
Abhi... Abhi ..Kaha ho ...
phir ...shyad mera bhram hoga

Tabhi GK - mitr lagta hai aapki aawaj waha tak pahucnh rahi hai...

aapka antahakaran bhi jagrit ho raha hai.....
usski baat samazkar mein phir Shalu se sampark karne laga ..Shalu idhar udhar kya dekh rahi ho mein tumahare hridaya mein hi hu

tum udaas na ho mein jaldi hi aanewala hu....

apne mann mein Abhi ki awaaj sunkar Shalu bahut prasanna hui..

ab mrin chal pada GK saath apne agle padav .....jwalamukhi parvat ki taraf.....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi ....
Mind-blowing update
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha .....A1 ne
mansarover jhil se apni talwar
.....aur Varunasrta prapt kiya ...
GK k shaktiyon dwara aashram mein apne mitro ko dekha .....
aur Shalu se bhi sampark kiya

ab aage......


GK - ab bataye aapko kis aur jaana hai
mein - mitra ab muzhe jwalamukhi parvat jaana hai......

GK - aap yadi meri baat manoge toh kuch kahu.....

mein - haa ..ha kyu nahi issmein sankoch kaisa......kaho

GK - mitra aaj aap yahi aaram kar le toh accha hai .....jiss jaha aap jaa rahe ho waha toh aapko apni bahut urja lagani padegi.......isiliye aap yahi par

apni urja ko aur niyantrit aur satik upayog karne ka abhyas ..


aur apne prapt hue astro k sanchalan ka abhyas kijiye hai.....

mein - bilkul sahi kaha hai mitra....
iss safar mein meri bahut urja ka prayg hua hai .....aur muzhe bhi thakan si mehsus ho rahi hai....

phir GK ne apni shakyon dwara ek sunder kutiya ka nirman kiya ...usske ander .....bhojan jal aur aaramdayak shaiya ka prabandh....

mein - wah mitr bahut accha prabadh kiya hai......abhi toh subah k sirf 9 baj rahe hai....
thoda yudh kala ka abhyas ho jaaye

pihr mein wahi GK k saath yudh kala ka abhyas karne laga....talwar baaji
kushti.....aadi ....lekin iss baat ka bhi dhyan rahk rahe the k kissi ko chot na
aaye ....

aaj mein pahle se bahut bahut behtar aur takaktwar apne aapko mehsus kar raha tha .....shayed mere bhiter sammaye inn astro k kaaran ho...

GK - Bas ...ab muzhse aapka saamna nahi hoga .....aap toh mere jaise kaiyon ko bina shaktiyon k sirf yudh kala mein parast kar sakte ho....

phir - humne saath mein khana khaya
aur aaram kane laga...
GK bhi kal aane ka kahkar chala gaya tha .....mein ab rak k apne safar k baare mein sochte sochte so gaya

meri nind jab khuli tab dekha ki surya asth honewala hai ....mein phir satlij nadi k kinare jaakar snan kiya aur dhyan karne laga.....

Dhyan mein apne bhitar muzhe aapne shastra dikhne ... lage.....aur unki urja
tabhi muzhe mere bhiter se aawaj aayi

arre kyu itna dhyan sadhna aur shaktiyon k picche pada hai......
kya karna tuzhe innshaktiyon ka
jiwan bar bar nahi milta ...khub maze karo aapno ka prem paao ...aur sansar k bhogo ka khub aanand uthawo yehi jeewan hai...

tabhi dusri aawaj -- arre ..arre yeh kya kah raha hai ....tum isski baatein bilkul mat sunnana yeh sab galat bol raha hai......bina uddesya k jeewan bhi koi jeewan hai......aur manav jeewan ki sarthakta toh tabhi hai jab woh lokkalyan aur aatmkalyan kare....

pahli aawaj - nahi yeh galat hai ....aisa jeewan kis kaam ka jisme hum hi aanand na utha sake

dusri aawaj -- tum isski baatein bikul na sunnana.....shaktiya sabhi ko prapt nahi hoti......tumhe ho rahi hai isdka arth hai ki swayam parmatma ne tumhe chuna hai .....

kitne bhagyashali ho tum

dono ka shor sunkar mein bada hairan tha ki ab yeh kya bala hai..

mein - kaun ho tum dono ..aur mere bhitar kya kar rahe ho....

dusri aawaj - hum aapke hi antakaran ka hissa hai.....
aapka manomay kosh puri tarah jagrit ho gaya hai....jiske do rup hai mein antarmann hu aur yrh bahirmsn hai

antarman vyakti ko acche karya k liye prerit karta hai ......aur bahir mann vyaktl ko vasna aur bhogo ki taraf le jaata hai.....

pahli awaaj - Tum kyu isse saare bhed bata rahe ho mera dum ghut raha hai muzhe bachao......mein ander gum ho raha hu.......

tabhi mein dhyan mein aur gahra utra toh muzhe apne bhiter ek divya shwet prakash ka anubhav hua ...aur asim aanand ki anubhuti hui...

phir antarmann se aawaj aayi...
dhnya ho tum ...aaj tumne apne bahir man par vijay prapt ki....jisse bade bade yogi bhi vash mein nahi kar paate......ab se tumhe sansar ki koi burai chu bhi nahi paayege...

ab har prakar ki maaya ki vastavik ta tum antarman mein dhyan lagakar dekh sakte ho...

raat ko phir thoda idhar udhar prakrti ka aanand liya ...aur subah phir chal diya GK k saath Jwala mukhi parvat

GK muzhe jaha lekar gaya waha se thodi dur muzhe bada hi sunder barf se dhaka hua chandi ki tarah chamkta
hua ek parvat dikhayi diya.....

mein aur GK hairan ho gaya

mein - yeh kaha laaye ho mitra yaha toh charo taraf barf k parvat hai ....jawalamukhi parvat kaha hai...

GK -muzhe khud pata nahi cal raha hai ...maine toh apni bhraman shakti
ko Jwalamukhi parvat ka hi aadesh diya tha.....phir hum yaha kaise aakar pahunche....

muzhe kuch sanshay hua ki ho na ho yeh kisi ki maya hai....... mein aage bada thodi hi dur jaakar muzhe bahut jyada garam hawao ka ashsas hua ..jaise ki chaaro taraf aag lagi ho ...

tab maine apne antarman ka sahara lene ka socha aur bhitar dhyan lagaya.

antarmann ka dhyan karte hi uski urja mere netro mein sama gayi aur maine aspne asnkien kholi toh saamne bada hi hairan kar dene wala drishya dekha

jaha mein khada hu usse thoda hi aage pigle hue laal laawe ka jaise bahut bada koi sarover ho ...aur usse aage sarover k anth mein ek dhadhakta hua JWALAMUKHI parvat

ashcharya ki baat yeh thi ki iss garam laave k pass yeh barfili jagah kaise

GK ko kuch samaz mein nahi aaraha tha mein kya dekh raha hu....

ab prashna yeh tha ki satya toh muzhe dikh raha hai ab iss maya ka aant kaise karu.....

tabhi muzhe kuch suzha aur meine aapni prithvi tatva ki urja ko ektrit kiya aur aage lawa ki taraf phenki

aur dekh dekhte waha ki maya samapt ho gayi ...chaaro taraf bahta lawa ..

GK - dekho mitr yeh raha Jwalamukhi parvat

mein - haa mitra

ab prashna yeh tha ki kaise iss bhayankar jawalamukhi k sarover ko paar karke uss parvat par pahuncha jaaye......

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla update raat ko ......
Badhiya hai bhai update
 

Aryanv

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ab tak aapne dekha ......
mahaguru ne Naina aur Rimpy
dono ki sahayta se drug ki samasya ka hal nikalne ki aur ishara kiya.....
aur saath hi saath ek yudh ki aur ishara kiya.......

ab aage.........


RVS .........Rimpy ki lab mein Abhi ko lekar pahunch jaata hai ......

RVS - beta ....tumne iss chotti si umar mein adbhut gyan paaya hai.....
aaj tumahare hi ......karan hum iss vinash ko rok paaye hai.......

lekin abhi bhi lakho aise hai jinn tak yeh medicine nahi pahunch paa rahi hai....kya kuch aisa ho sakta hai ki hum unn tak yeh antidote pahuncha sake ...........kya kuch aise gadget hai jo medicine ko affected person tak pahuncha kar inject kar de...

Rimpy - Sir medicine ko carry kar k inject kar ne wale 5 micro robot mere paas hai , jo dikhne mein bilkul honey bee ki tarah hai.....hum unhe computer dwara operate kar k kisi patient tak pahucha sakte hai......

yeh khud kisi patient ko pehchan ke antidote inject nahi kar sakte.....

Abhi - agar innmein koi aise sensor laga de jo aurra ko dekhkar pahchan jaaye ki kaun normal hai kaun patient
toh humara kaam ban sakta hai....

yeh drug logo k dna mein badlav laa raha hai......agar dna mein badlav aaraha hai toh aurra mein bhi change aayega .......

Rimpy - haa yeh ho sakta hai ek normal person aur affected dono k body nikalne wali body heat aur waves mein bahut antar hota hai.......
yes hum yeh kar sakte hai....
lekin sir sirf 5 micro robot se kya hoga
hume toh laakho tak yeh antidote pahunchana hai.....

RVS - tum iss baat ki chinta mat karo
jald hi inn mein woh changes karo ...
Abhi tum bhi Rimpy ko madat karo
muzhe kal subah tak result chahiye

Rimpy aur abhi raat bhar apne kaam mein lage rahe aur tayar ho gaye aise 5 Honey bees robot....

RVS unn 5 robots ko Naina k paas le aaya.....Naina ne apni Nirman shakti
( power of creation) se unn 5 ko 5cr
mein badal diya aur RVS ne unnko har un jagah par pahuncha diya
jaha iss drug ka asar dekha gaya tha

aise hi pura din iss kaam mein lag gaya..
RVS ki poori team bahut khush thi ...
Rimpy aur Abhi bhi bahut khush hue

kai raato se jag kar jis kaam mein lage hue the aakhir woh pura hua....


nayi subah ki aasha k saath woh raat bhi beet gayi..

ek nayi urja k saath savera hua ...

Abhi apne room mein so raha tha....
tabhi aisa laga ki jaise ko koi thande paani ka badal uss par fat gaya ho .......chapak

ohhh ahhh ....baarish ...baarish....
karke chillate hue utha ........toh dekhta hai k poora gila ho chuka tha
aur saamne khilkhilati hue Addu haath mein khali balti liye hue....

Addu - ha..ha....hi....hi...hi..bhai....
.......Happy Holi .....hi...hi..hi

mein - Addu ki bacchi ....tu.....toh ruk jaa abhi.....batata hu ...tuzhe holi....
aur bed se uthkar addu ko pakadne k liye dauda.... woh wahi balti chodkar room mein idhar udhar bhaagne lagi...
aur abhi usske piche....

Addu - hi..hi..bhai ...muzhe nahi pakad sakte ......

mein - accha bacchu ..muzhe challenge.....tu ..ruk ab...

aur phir meine addu ko pakad liya aur uske pet mein gudguli karne laga...

woh ...hiiii....hiii...nahiii...hiii.hhhhi
bhai ...chod...do..na....

mein - bahut shaitan ho gayi hai tu gudiya......aise koi uthata hai...
dekho muzhe poora gila kar diya

tabhi mein apne bed k side table par pade hue paani k jug ko uthane k liye muda ......gudiya haath se chutkar door ki taraf bhagi.....aur maine uss jag ka paani uski aur phenka ...lekin tab tak....woh door khol chuki...thi
aur ....chapak.......
saamne Ritu di thi ...jo muzhe uthane aa rahi thi......achanak paani girne se
di bhi hadbada gayi ...

Di - Betu yeh kya chal raha hai yaha
.....subah subah paani se bhiga diye

mein - nahi di ....yeh ..addu ..ne pahle muzhpar paani phenka tha ......isiliye

lekin aap bich mein aagayi....

Di - koi baat nahi betu tum dono ruko muzhe kuch baat karni hai....mein wasroom se hokar aayi.......

di washroom mein chali gayi ...

mein - dekh ...gudiya tere wajah se di
bhig gayi.....

Addu - sorry bhai.....woh aap itne dino se mile nahi ......aur jab mein yaha aayi toh aap soye the....maine aapko aawaj bhi di lekin aap toh uthe hi nahi
isiliye...

Mein - ohh....meri pyari gudiya....mein kaise tuzhe bhul sakta hu ..woh toh mein kaam mein bahut busy tha beta
sorry...mera baccha..

aur mein kaan pakadke niche baith gaya ...toh gudiya bhi uchakar meri goad mein baith gayi aur gale laga liya

tabhi washroom ka darwaja khula aur di haath mein balti lekar.....

hum ne jaise hi dekha hum jaldi khade ho gaye....aur jaise hi door par pahuche ....tabhi mom aagayi aur idhar di ne tab tak paani ka war kar diya tha ...hum jaldi se niche baithe

aur ....chapak........aur mom poori bhig gayi..... yeh sab itne jaldi hua k mom ko kuch samaz hi nahi aaya...

mom - Ritu yeh sab kya hai....kya haalt kar di hai room ki......
tum se aisi ummid nahi thi .....

mein - sorry mom issmein didu ki koi galti nahi hai.....aap unhe mat daato

Addu -- nahi mom yeh meri...

Mom - chup ho jao sab ab ek dusre ki vakalat karna band karo.....aur meri baat suno......aaj hum sab gaon jaa rahe hai.......jaldi se ready ho jaao...

gaon ka naam sunkar hum khush ho gaye ....

yaha RVS apne family ko saath lekar Gaon pahuncha Abhi ..addu ..aur Ritu
apne Dada daadi se milkar bahut khush hue......gaon k khet pahad aur nadi mein sab ne khub enjoy kiya

innhe yahi chodte hai dekhte hai aashram mein kya ho raha hai....


Aashram k sarover k kinare A1 aur shalu baithe hue baatein kar rahe the

Shalu - Abhi tum itne din muzhse dur rahe.....tumhe pata hai....k yeh din kaise gujare hai.......pata nahi kyu ek din bhi tumhe na dekhu toh jeewan niras sa lagne lagta hai......kya tune muzhe kabhi yaad kiya tha....

mein - nahi....

Shalu - isska arth yeh hai k mein hi pagal hu ....tumahare hriday mein mere liye koi prem hi nahi hai...

aur uski aankon mein aansoo aagaye

mein uske aasoon pochte hue----
sach mein Shalu tum pagal ho.......yaad usse kiya jaata hai jise hum kabhi kabhi bhul jaate hai.......
aur tum toh meri prerna ho tumhe kaise bhul sakta hu ....aur phir shalu ko maine gale laga liya.......

tabhi mere gale mein pada locket garam hone laga jisse shalu ko chatka laga ......toh alag hote hue...

Shalu - ohh .....yrh kya hai tumahare gale mein .....garam ....issne toh muzhe jala hi diya.......

ab mein usse kya batata .....

kuch nahi ....yeh toh bas......

Tabhi CT ki aawaj se hum dono ka dhyan uss taraf gaya

CT - Tum dono ka ho gaya ho toh ....
jaldi chali .....gurudev ne bulaya hai

utna kahkar woh chala gaya....

hum bhi waha se uthkar chal diye ..

Guru dev shivalaya k prangan mein aasan par baithe the aur waha par mere sabhi mitr aur shikshak khade the

Mahaguru - baccho ab tumahari shiksha ka pahla charan samapt hua

ab tum sab ko ek yudh mein bhag lena hoga......issko tum pariksha bhi samaz sakte ho .......

yeh pariksha unhi k liye hai jo astra vidya , 5 tatvo ki vidya ka abhyas kar rahe the.....

aaj tum sab apni apni vidhya ka acche se abhyas kar lo......

kal hoga tumahara saamna ....
yeh jaan lo k yeh yudh bada bhyankar hoga ...kai kathinayi aayegi......mrityu ka bhay bhi hoga.......
tumhe usse bhaybhit nahi hona hai

yeh yuddh sansar ki raksha k liye hai
aage chalkar tumhe jis uddyshya ko paana hai uske liye toh bas yeh ek shuruwat hai.....
apne aap par aur apni vidya par vishwas rakho........
aap mein se yaadi koi aisa hai ki jisse sansar se jyada apne jiwan ki chinta hai toh abhi bata de.........

yaha unhi ko chun kar laaya gaya hai.
jinki aage chalkar ek bahut bade uddesya ko poora karne mein bhumika hogi........

mrityu se bhaybhit hone walo ka yaha kaam nahi .......
aur waise bhi - shastra kahta hai

Mrityur janmata viram dehen saha jaayate...

har prani ki mrityu usske janm ke saath hi nirdharit ho jaati hai

issiliye jeewan woh hi hai jo sansaar k kasm aaye....

Maha guru ki baate sunkar muzhe kisi bahut bade yudh ka aabhas ho raha tha.........saare waha khade shishyo k mann mein mahaguru k baato se urja si bhar gayi thi sab ek swar se tayar ho gaye.....aur apne apne kala ko aur tez bannane l liye abhyas mein jut gaye......

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi......
Fantastic update
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha A1 Jwalamukhi parwat pahuch chuka hai.......

ab aage.......


mein aur GK waha khade dhadhakte hue lawa aur parvat ki aur dekh rahe the jisme se niranter visfot ho raha tha aur har visfot k saath nikal raha tha laal laal lawa , maine paas hi pada ek patthar uthakar uusmein phenk kar dekha toh , woh patther uss lawa ko chute hi pighal gaya......

tab maine socha ki agni hui agni ko kewal jal hi shaant kar sakta hai.

tab maine apni jal tatva ki urja ko ektrit karke ek bada sa jal ka gola sa banaya aur saamne lawa k sarover mrin chod diya......jal lawa par girte hi badi maatra mein dhua utpanna hua

GK - wah mitr yeh yukti kaam kar sakti hai......
uske paas bhi jal aur vaayu tatva ki power thi toh woh bhi mere saath uss lawa par jal ki varsha karne laga

hum dono ne itni maatra mein jal barsaya ki utne jal se ek talab bhar jaaye.......
charo tarf dua hi dhua ho gaya....

tab humne vaayu tatva ka prayog karke uss dhuve ko uda diya aur dekha ki lawa upar se thanda ho gaya hai aur kaale patther maidan k jaisa lag raha hai........

humne socha ki hamari yukti kamayab ho gayi....

jaise hi kadam aage badaya toh hua ek bada sa dhamaka....aur sarover ka jame hue lawe ki jamin hilne lagi aur phir woh lawa waise hi ho gaya jaise pahle tha.....

ab hum soch hi rahe the ki kya kiya jaaye .....tabhi uss laawe ki jhil se pragat hue bhayankar agni danav

unka sharir dhadhadkte hue laawe se bana hua tha jinme se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi....unki sankhya lagbhag 100 k kareeb hogi...saare 50 ft k aaspaas hi hogi

pragat hote hi sabhi agni danav jor se garajne lage .....

unko itne sankhya mein dekhkar mein aur GK bhi sawdhan hone lage

hum phir jal tatva ka upayog karke waha musaladhar jal ki varsha karne lage.....

lekin kya jal untak pahunchne se pahle hi bhaf bankar udne laga ab woh danav hamari taraf badne lage

mein aur GK apni apni urja se unnpar war karne lage lekin hamare war ka unn k upar koi asar na hote dekhkar ab hum sochne lage kaise innka saamna kiya jaaye

tabhi ek danav ne mujhpar hamla kar diya.....usska ek prahaar sidha mere chatti par pada aur mein dur jaakar gira...

GK ne apni apne bhitar se waisa hi ek danav pragat kiya .....jisske saath mein ladha tha Jab mera saamna usse pahli baar hua tha...

Gk aur uska danav se talwar se un agni danav ka saamna kar rahe the toh maine bhi apni divya talwar ko yaad kiya aur bhid gaya unse...

woh danav lagatar aag se humla kar rahe the....hum bache hue apna war kar rahe the ....maine tabhi ek jordar war saamne aarahe 10 danavo par vaayu ki gati se apni talwar se war kiya....

aur woh danav kat kar wapas laawe mein gir gaye...
apne war ko safal hote dekhkar mein bada prasana hua ki tabhi woh kate hue 10 danav wapas uss laawe se pragat ho gaye..

tabhi ek agni danav k war se Gk ka danav jalkar basm ho gaya .....

yeh dekhkar GK na jaane kyu
muskurane laga ...
tabhi maine dekha ki waha GK k basam hue danav ki raakh se 4 danav aur pragat ho gaye ...woh char danv jaise hi aage badhe toh agni danav k prahar se woh bhi bhasm ho gaye aur unki bhasm se 8 danav pragat ho gaye

mein - yeh kya maya hai mitr...

GK - yeh muzhe mila hua vardan hai mitr isiliye mera naam Gunak hai

jab tak muzhe koi kshati nahi pahunchti yeh aise hi badte rahenge

aise hi GK k danavo ki sankhya 60 k kareeb ho gayi thi hum sab apne war se unn agni danavo ko apni talwr k war se samapt kane ka pratna karne lage.......tabhi ek aag ka gola GK ko aakar laga aur woh dur jaakar gira

aur uske saare daanav jaane kaha gayab ho gaaye....

hum toh abhi lawe k sarover mein bhi pravesh nahi kar paarahe the aur....

aur woh danav waha se nikal nikal kar
hamari aur badh rahe the.....

maine socha ki aise toh hum kabhi uss parvat par pahuch nahi paayenge

ky kiya jaaye .....tabhi mere haath ki anguthi chamkne lagi aur mahaguru ki aawaj aayi...

mahaguru - iss vipatti ka samadhan tumahare hi paas hai putr bas apne buddhi se kaam lo ..vichar kar

tabhi mein vichar karne laga kuch kuch upay nazar aane laga .

mein - Gk tum jal aur vaayu ki urja se ek sheet lahar ka nirman karke ek ek danav par chodo......

Tab maine apni gada ko apne bhitar se pargat kiya ...
Jaise hi GK ne sheet lahar lawa se nikalte hue danao par chodi woh danav pather ki tarah jamne lage aur mein gada se unhe nasht kar raha tha

unka shair meri gada k prahar se pathar k tukdo mein badalne lage

lawa hi unki jeewan shakti thi usse unka sampark tutte hi unka naash hone laga....

aur issi tarah sabhi agni danav samapt hue ......

ab sirf uss jhil ko paar karke parvat tak pahunch na tha..

toh humne sheet lahar ka prayog karke uss jhil ko jammane ka prayatna kiya..........toh phir Mahaguru ki aawaj aayi......
putra dhyan rahe jis astra ko tum prapt karne aaye ho woh agni tatv ki urja k hai ....tumhien unhe iss garam lawa ka saamna karte hue prapt karna hoga.....

ab kya kiya jaaye....

tabhi vichar aaya ki agni ...agni ko jala nahi sakti...

phir maine MANIPURAK chakra ko jaagrit kar k uss ki samprana urja ...

se apne sharir ko agni roop mein badalne laga ...ab mere shari se bhi bhayankar asg ki lapte nikalne lagi

aur mein teevra gati se lawe par chal kar pahuch gaya Jwalamukhi Parvat

aur uss parvat k shikhar par jaakar kud gaya garam laawe k bhiter

tairte hue muzhe ek shool dikha..
iss pighle garam lawe mein bhi woh shool apne swarup mein tha ...

mein samaz gaya ki yahi agni shool hai..usse lekr mein bahar nikala ..

muzhe apni urja kam hoti hui lagi..
mein uss shool ko lekar apni puri urja ko lagakar uss Jwalmukhi parvat se bahar aaya ...waha aakar dekha ki na toh ab koi lawa waha tha aur na hi uss parvat se koi jawalamukhi....

meri bahut si urja iss karya mein lag gayi thi isiliye meri asnkhein band hone lagi aur mein behosh ho gaya...

behoshi ki haalat mein hi muzhe zhatke lagne lage ( agni shool k apni bhayankar urja k saath bhitar pravesh karne k kaarn) aur muzhe aisa lagne laga jaise mein bhayankar agni mein jalraha hu....muzhe badi jalan hone lagi....tabhi achanak woh saari agni lupt ho gayi.......muzhe aise laga ki mere chehre par paani ki bunde pad rahi hai ...aur meri aankhien khuli

jaise meine dekha toh paaya ki do badi badi aankon se aansoo ki bunde mere chehre par pad rahi thi...

mera sir apni goad lekar muzhe pukar rahi thi ...ab mein puri tarah hosh mein tha.......muzhe hosh mein aaya hua dekhkar unn aankon mein khushi chalak uthi .....apne liye athah prem unn aankhon mein dekhkar mein kho gaya.....hum ek dusre ko bas dekhe jaa rahe the......

Tabhi GK k aawaj se humara dhyan hata......

GK - SHIVALI ji abhi humara karya adhura hai.........
ji haa woh Yakhsha kanya Shivali thi jo Kuber ji k Alkapuri mein mili thi

hum dono khade ho gaye....tabhi agnidev pragat ho gaye....

Agnidev - putra aaj tumahare sahas aur veerta dekhkar mein prasanna hua ....mein tumhe vardan deta hu ki meri agni tumhe kabhi kou haani nahi pahunchayegi......

aur upahar k roop mein yeh lo..
AAGNAYASTRA......

Agni shool aur astra paakar yeh padav bhi ab poora ho gaya tha

mein Shivali k taraf dekhkar ...
mein - aap yaha kaise ...

tabhi GK ne kaha -- mitr jab tum behosh ho gaye the maine tumhe bahut uthane ka prayatna kiya par safal nahi ho paaya...

Tabhi muzhe inn Awaaj bar bar sunai de rahi thi....aisa lag raha tha jaise yeh muzhe hi pukar rahi ho...

meine socha ki innke paas tumhe swastha karne ko koi upay hoga .

toh mein inhe yaha le aaya...

Shivali - muzhe na jaane kyu kuch anisht hone ki aashanka ho rahi thi
mera mann bhi na jasne kyu ghabra raha tha...
jab mein dhyan mein baithi toh muzhe yaha ka drisya dikhayi diya

isiliye mein yaha aagayi

mein vichar karne laga ki yeh kaise adbhut sambandh hai jo dusre lok mein hone k paschyat bhi isse meri pida ka anubhav hua....


abhi k liye itna hi ....
adla update kal....
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Aryanv

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ab tak aapne dekha mahaguru apne shisyo k saath Rana mahal pahunch gaye

Abhi k do roop aapas mein mil gaye

aur Abhi ki sangharak shakti , Kaal ( Rakesh) aur usska Vahan Vayu usmein sama gaye

Abhi k dwara banaye gaye port se sab Tallok mein pahunche

ab aage ----+


Jaise hi hum waha pahunche toh dekha ki waha ki jameen pahad sab kaale hai ....ek tarah ki negative energy si waha chaayi hui hai....

tabhi waha ek badbudar hawa ks zhonka chale laga toh humne uss aur dekha jaha se yeh badbu aarahi thi

waha manav laasho ka dher tha...
kuch sadi gali haalt mein toh kuch ki sirf haddiya rah gayi thi .....aur kuch ajeeb se jeev unko ka rahe the



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hum abhi unko dekh hi rahe the k unnka dhyan hamari taraf gaya ....
aur woh kuch ajeeb si awaaje nikalne lage.........aur dekhte hi dekhte waha l000 k lagbhag waha woh jeev ikatthe ho gaye.....

CT - mein soch hi raha tha k koi toh aayega swagat k liye......lo aagaye

mahaguru ne usski aur dekha toh woh chup ho gaya....

woh jeev laar tapkate hue hamari taraf badne lage toh hum bhi tayar ho gaye

humne unpar apar apni shaktiyo k energy balls banakar fenkne lage...

lekin unpar hamare energy balls ka koi asar nahi ho raha tha

Acharaya Agnivesh ne Aag k golo se unpar humla kiya lekin ye kya ...

agni ka unko sparsh hote hi unka sharir pahle se dugna ho gaya...

abhi woh hum tak pahunchne hi wale the k Uday aur Shalu ne prithvi tatva ki urja se saamne ghane pedo ki diwar si bana di aur maine .....prithvi tatva ki urja se unko unhi pedo k tahnio se jakad diya.......

maine dekha k unn saare pedo mein aag lag rahi hai tabhi mahaguru ne kaha.....
yeh thande khoon wale prani hai (cold blooded) inko sheeth lahar se roko
aur sampt karo ....

tab acharya Varun aur Pawan ne apne urja milakar un jeevo par chodi...

aur woh jeev jamne lage ..

mein - sabhi apne apne shastro ko sambhalo ...aur jo jo jeev jamte jaye unhe samapt karo......
mainr bhi apne ek haath se jal tatva aur vayu tatva ki mili hui urja k gole unnjeevo par fenkna shuru kiya aur ek haath mein talwar lekar unka nash

Dekhte hi dekhte unn sab jeevo ka safaya ho gaya....

wahi mayasur ek kaale patter se bane hue ek mahal ek haal mein baitha apni maya se sab dekh raha tha....

MS - ha ...ha..ha....abhi toh sirf mayasur k maaya k shuruwat hai....
tum sab ki mrityu hi tumhe yaha le aayi hai

idhar sabhi jeevo ko samapt karke ,hum sab aage badne lage.....

sab satark the........
mayasur ki maaya k karan hum teleport hokar bhi sidhe usske saamne nahi pahunch sakte the...

abhi hum chal hi rahe the k jamin hilne lagi .....aur aakash se bhi hawa tez bahne lagi tabhi humne dekha ki jamin se danav bahar nikalne lage..

aur bhayankar garjana karne lage....
aur tabhi aakash se bade bade ajeeb se panchi mandrane lage......

Unn danavo ko dekhkar Vajrabahu

innko toh mein maslunga ....tabhi ussne bhi apni aankhien band ki aur woh bhi ek bade se danav k roop mein badal gaya......unn danavo ko pakad pakad kar maslne laga.....

tabhi aakash mein udne wale ajeeb se panchiyon ne bhi humpar humla kar diya......meine maha guru aur sabhi apni apni urja k gole unnpar chod rahe the.......mein bhi apni talwar se unko samapt karne mein laga hua tha....

lekin jaise jaise hum unhe samapt karte unki sankhya aur badti jaati

yaha danav bhi bad rahe the tabhi ek ne CT ko pakad liya aur aakash mein le jaane laga toh meine apne urja se usse roka...

Kartik apne urja chakro se , RVS talwar se ....Agniwesh...Varun ....Pawan ....Dhara....Aur vyom apne apne urja gole se.....Uday gada se ...Shalu talwar aur apni urja se unnpar humla karne lage ...unnki badti sankhya dekhkar ab mera krodh badne laga aur meine pukara....KAAL

tabhi Kaal ek vishal sher k roop mein unn danawo par tut pada aur meine talwar lekar aakash ki aur chalang lagayi Aur apne vahan Vaayu ki shaki se aakash mein udte hue unn pakshiyo ka sanghar karne laga...

unki badhti sandya ko dekhkar mera krodh aur badne laga ......tabhi mere mann mein mahaguru....puutra shaant ho jaao aur apne gyan netro ka prayog karo .....
tabhi udte hue maine chitt ko ekagra kar k apne chkro ki urja ko jagrit kiy aur pragat hui mere maathe ek prakash kiran .....jo jaha jaha padti waha waha danao aur udne waale jeevo ka nash hone laga....

iss tarah ek aur choti si vijay hume prapt hui.....

tabhi mere mann mein mahaguru ki phir se aawaj aayi .....putra Mayasur k maya ki urja maine yaha mehsus ki hai.....woh hume dekh raha hai....

ab hume usse wahi dikhana hai jo woh dikhana chahta hai......

main gurudev ki baat samaz gaya aur maine apna shakti trishool pragat kiya
aur uski sahayta se sabhi saathiyo ko ek raksha kawach se surakshit kar diya ...jisse mayasur ki maaya bhed nahi sakti thi......

Yaha mayasur sab dekh raha tha ki achanak usne dekha ki sab k sab gayab ho gaye abhi woh yeh soch hi raha tha ki saare kaha chale gaye...

tabhi phir saare ussi jagah dikhayi dene lage......

Mayasur ne dekha ki uske iss humle mein Mahaguru ..abhi aur baaki saathi bhi jakhmi hogaye....

MS - ha...ha..ha chale the muzhe samapt karne ab khud samapt ho jaayenge ....tabhi ussne aur bade aur khatar nak jeevo ko waha bheja.....

Maya sur dekh raha tha unn bhayankar jeevo ko dekhkar Mahaguru samet sab bahut dar gaye
phir bhi sab apni poori shakti lagakar

lad rahe the k tabhi ek jeev ne Mahaguru ko nigal liya apne guru ko aise samapt hote dekhkar sabhi hatash ho gaye.......ab unnsab mein ladne ki urja hi nahi bachi

unki saari urja woh jeev sokh rahe the aur ek ek karke sabko kha rahe the
kuch hi der mein unn jeevo ne Mahaguru aur unke sabhi shshiyo ko apna gras bana liya.....

Apne shatruo ko itni aasani se samapt hua dekhkar unnka ahankar aur badne laga.......
Ahankar hi vinash ka mool hai yeh asuro ko kaun samzhaye...

sab asur prasana the aur mayasur ki jay jaykar karne lage.......

tabhi mayasur ko ek bhayankar visfot ki aawaj sunayi di............

aaj k liye itna hi.......
agla update kal.....
Fantastic update
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha A1 ne apna
teesra astra pyapt kar liya hai

ab aage ....


Shivali ko yu apne taraf dekhte hue dekhte hue dekhkar ....mein

mein - Shivi aise kya dekh rahi hu

shivali - Kya kaha aapne Shivi.......
aapko kiaise pata chal ki mein apne liye aapke muh se yeh hi naam sunnana chahti hu....

mein - kuch baatein apno ki apne aap dil tak pahunch hi jaati hai.....

Shivi - accha ji aap sach mein muzhe apna maante hai....

mein - kyu tum nahi maanti....kya tumhe muzhse prem nahi hai...

Shivi - kuch sharmate hue .....baat ko badalte hue......accha aap woh sab baatein chodiye aur jaldi se apne lakshya ko prapt kijiye......

aur ek locket dete hue ....yeh lijiye locket isse hamesha dharan karke rahiye........isske jariye aap jab chahe muzhse sampark bana sakte ho....

yeh locket aapki agli yaatra mein bahut sahayak hoga....


muzhe locket pahna kar ...ussne ek baar nazar bhar kar muzhe dekha aur adrishya ho gayi.....

ab aage ki yatra kaha karni hai.......isska pata toh gurudev ne nahi bataya tha .........

Mein aur GK wahi baith kar vichar karne lage ki aage kya kiya jaaye

Inhe tahi par chodte hai aur dekhte hai waha Roopnagar mein kya ho raha hai

Yaha Mayasur ab apne paao dheere dheere poore underworld mein failane laga aur Reasearch lab k jariye usske experiments bhi shuru the......


ek bahut bade se hall mein bahut bada ek round table tha aur uske charo taraf kareeb 20 chair lagi hui thi

unn par poore underworld k main main Historyshiter baithe hue the

sab aaps mein khusur phusur kar rahe the .......k unko yaha kyu laaya gaya hai ....kaun hai yaha ........

ki tabhi ek bhari si aawaj gunji .........
chup ho jaao saare kyu shor macha rahe ho........

tabhi ek kursi se Gunda type 6.5 ft ka Pappu bhai khada hua ---

saala ek toh apun ku idher aisaich uthkar laylela hai......aur bc khali phokat humko dum de rahyla hai
....teri maa ki.....tabhi waha krodhasur ko dekhar (jo dikhne mein ek dum kaala aur bhayankar sharir)
aur jaise hi krodha sur ko dekha ....

ki pooja karu ....arre bhidu log bhai aagayle hai ....

aur woh baith ......

ks - abhi boss aarahe hai tum sab ko jawab mil jaayega ki kyu laaye gaye ho tab tak chup bilkul aawaj nahi...

tabhi Mayasur ek alag roop mein black overcoat aakhon par black gaugles haath mein sigaar aur dono taraf apne jism ka numayish karti hui mini skirt mein do ladkiyaa.....

bikul jaise purane filmo mein villan ki entry hoti thi waise hi.....shayed isne bhi koi waisi film se idea liya ho ....

ussko aata hua dekh kar kuch log khade ho gaye

Mayasur (MS) - Aap sabhi ko yaha humne hi bulaya hai .....

aap sabhi apne apne jagah k don ho ..

lekin kuch dino se underworld khauf mein jee raha hai jab se koi nakab posh tumahare addo ko tabah kar raha hai ....

isiliye humne faisla liya hai k ab iss poore under world ko hum handle karenge.....

tabhi ek kala africa don - Hey how dare you to do this .....who are you to order us.......i am not afraid of you....
you know ..i am jack....Jack ..the killer

tabhi KS pal bhar mein waha pahuncha aur Jack ki garden pakadkar ghuma di.....Jack ho gaya pack.....

KS - kisi ko kuch aur bolna hai...

Jack hi aisi haalat dekhkar koi kya kahe.......

Pappu bahi - nahi bhai iss saale k jack k saath aisaich hona mangta tha...
ab toh tumich apun ka maaibbaap hai.......bole toh Godfather..

sabhi ne apna sir jhuka kar MS ko apna head maan liya

MS - toh saathiyo aaj se iss apradh jagat k har kaam par meri nazar hogi..

agar tum sab mere under kaam karoge toh mauj karoge ...nahi toh milegi maut.....

hume sabse pahle logo ki rago mein khun ki jagah nasha bharna hoga .....

sabhi school colledge aur cafe mein hamari drugs pahunchne chahiye..

tabhi India mein drugs ka sabse bada dealer LALA
sir aajkal drugs ...suppy karna aasan nahi hai .....pata nahi kaise jab bhi naaya maal hum supply karne ki sochte hai toh saara maal pakda jaata hai

MS - ab aisa nahi hoga ...kyu ki hamare banaye drugs ko koi bhi pakad nahi paayega - hamara yeh naya drugs ka formula kisi bhi khane pine ki chijo mein milakar supply kar sakte hai.......
bas tum sab log tayar ho jaao aur dekho kaise charo taraf barbadi hiti hai
ha ..ha ....ha...

meeting khatam hui ...

yaha Pappu bhai apne saathiyo se
- saala bahut hi khatarnak hai woh bhai log...

hum log aaj tak chori ...loot... aur choti moti smuggling karte aaye hai
lekin yeh bc toh ...poori duniya ki watt lagana chahta hai.....

tabhi ek - lekin bhai hume bhi unnka saath dena hoga......aur ismein hum bhi fayeda bhi bahut hai...

pappu - arre chottu jab chaaro traf barbadi failegi toh ..psisa kya karenge

hum sab ki hamari family bhi hai...
iss drugs se unko bhi nuksan ho sakta hai...
dekh bhai hum aaj tak logo ko loot loot kar khate the.....
lekin aisi barbadu ka hissa hum nahi kar sakte...

toh bhai hum kya karenge ....

pappu - aisa hai abhi humara chup rahana hi thik hai .....agar police ko batate hai toh pata nahi saala kaun kuan system mein bik chuka hai

kuch hi dino mein MS k bheji hui drugs ...India k kuch schoolo k canteen tak pahunh gaye......

air ab unnka asar shuru ho gaaya

uss durgs k asar se bacche pagal se hone lage.....
unka krodh bad gaya choti choti baato par woh bacche katal karne lage ...

pahle pahele iss drugs k asar mein aanewala dusro k khun ka pyasa ho jaata hai aur dheere dheere jab asar badh jaata hai toh apne hi shair ko daato se katne lage the

charo taraf loot ..rape ..aur murder ki vaardate badhne lagi thi .....
Sabhi dep bade pareshan the ...
crime rate badh gaya tha ...

Yaha MS apne cabin mein - ha....ha.
ha ......ab rok k dikhao Sangharak mere iss waar ko......
abhi toh sirf school aur colleges mein hi drugs pahunchi hai
Bas 10 Din aur uske baad toh phir tum manavo ki tabahi...

ha ...ha..ha...

Yaha RAW ki meeting mei
yeh sab kya ho raha hai sangharak yeh padhnewale bacche achank itne criminal ho gaye hai....

kuch toh pagal ho kar apne aap ko hi khatam karne par tule hue hai.....

RVS- sir mein puri koshish kar raha hu
isska karan jaanane ki ....
kai students ko meine apni powers se thik karne ki koshis ki....
woh shant toh ho gaye lekin unka mind blank ho gaya .....

mein itna jaan paaya ki yeh kisi drug ka asar hai.......

Hamari reasearch lab lekin isko detect nahi ka paa rahi hai.....

Har news cahnnel mein yahi sab chal rahs tha........

dekhte hai RVS kaise iss musibat ka haal nikalte hai.... inhe sochne do thoda

ab chalte hai A1 k paas

A1 baithe baithe soch raha tha ki kya kiya jaaye kaise Vyastra aur Chakra tak pahucha jaaye ....

kya yeh chakra wahi toh nahi jo Bhagwan Vishnu k haath mein hai...

mein aise hi sochne laga ki tabhi waha thandi thandi hawa chalne lagi

GK - wah mitra dekho kitne thandi thandi sugandhit vaayu chal rahi hai

mein - Haa mitr aise hi hamare ashram mein bhi sugandhit hawa chal ti thi...

tabhi muzhe khayal aaya....ki vaayu ka koi ek sthan toh hai nahi woh toh achal nahi chal shakti hai ....

ab muzhe marg pata chal gaya tha ..
har jagah bal nahi kahi kahi buddhi k prayog se hi samasya hal ho jaati hai

mein dhyan main baith gaya aur apni urja ko Vaayu tatva ki urja ka sthan
Anahad Chakra ekatrit kiya

jaise jaise dhyan gahra hota gaya mere chaaro taraf chakra k roop mein hawa chalne lagi aur dheere dheere usne ek chakra vat ka roop le liye

mein bhi uss chakrawat mein gol gol ghumne laga.....usska veg itna tha ki aas paas ki chije uss mein pravesh karne lage jo muzhse takrane lagi

aur mere dhyan mein badha pahunchane lagi ...do baar mera dhyan tuta ...apne aap ko chakra vat mein ghumte hue dekhkar bhi phir aone mann ko ekagrachit jar k Anahat chakra mein dhyan lagaya....toh mere sharir chamakne laga aur bhiter se Anahad naad OM ki dhwani pragat hone lagi jaise hi ANAHAD nad muzhe sunai dene laga waise waise hi woh chakrawat shanth hone laga ...

ab wih puri tarah shanth ho gaya aur muzhe aawaj aayi
utho putra hum bahut prasnanna hai

jab mein dekha toh saamne Vayu dev the

Vayu dev - putr visham paristhitiyon mein bhi tumne aatmasanyam ka parichaya diya ..mein prasanna hu

yeh lo vyavastra upahar meri tarf se

mein - parantu hey dev gurudev ne Chakra bhi kaha tha

Vaayudev - mera jo astra hai wahi chakra k roop mein hai.....

Vaayudev apna var aur aashirwad dekar antardhyan ho gaye ....

ab rah gayi thi aakash tava k astr ki khoj .....

abhi k liye itna hi ...
agla update jald hi.....
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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha ki MS dharti par apne banaye drugs se charo taraf ha-hakar macha raha hai.....
aur yaha A1 4 th astra prapt kar chuka hai...

ab aage ......


mein GK k saath baitha apne agle padav k baare mein vichar kar raha tha .........ki ab Vyomastra aur Trishul kaise prapt kiya jaaye ......itna toh pata tha k yeh aakash tatva ki shaktiyan hai.......

meine socha k jis tarah Vayu tatva k astra tak pahuncha ussi tarah aakash tatva tak bhi pahuncha jaaye

toh meine aakash tatv ka apne sharir mein kendra Vishuddhi chakra par dhyan lagaya ........jaise jaise dhyan gahra hota gaya muzhe alag alag naad sunayi dene lage .....kabhi sangeet ki dhwani .....kabhi Om ki dhwani.....bas badi der tak dhyan karne par bhi kisi nishkarsh par na pahunch saka......

vichar karne laga ki ab kya kiya jaaye.
tabhi muzhe Shivali k dwara diye gaye locket ka dhyan aaya....

toh gale mein pade uss locket ko haath mein lekar meon ussase hi puchne laga ........

mein - locket ko shivali samazkar....
meri pyari Shivi mein toh bhul hi gaya tha ki tum locket k jariye mere saath ho....... itne kam samay mein tumhe muzhse kitna gahra prem ho gaya
ki itne dur se tum mera dard mahsus karti ho

aur mein hu ki tumhe bhul jaata hu ..
tabhi us locket se 2 boond paani k gire aur uska rang lal hogaya.....muzhe aise laga jaise woh meri baate sun raha ho.... aur ro raha ho


mein - arre Shivi tum kyu ro rahi ho...
aise naraj toh na ho ....aur mein uss lacket ko chum liya....toh woh gulabi rang ka ho gaya aur idher udher uchalne laga......

muzhe yeh dekhkar badi hairani hui
ki dekho kaise yeh khushi se uchal raha hai.........yeh meri saari baat samaz raha hai.....

mein - arre tum toh dekho sharmakar kaise gulabi ho gayi ho......ab aise uchalna band karo......aur batao kya tum meri sahyata kar sakti ho..

muzhe aakash tatva k trishul ki khoj hai ..parantu woh kis disha mein prapt hoga iska pata nahi chal raha hai....

tabhi woh locket shitr ho gaya aur chamakne laga usme se ek chitra pragat hua.........usko dekkar..

arre yeh toh humare aashram k Shivalaya ka chitra hai......
parantu muzhe abhi gurudev ka diya hua lakshya pura karna hai...
tum muzhe yeh batao k muxhe woh trishul kaha prapt hoga...

toh phir wahi chitra ......tab muzhe uss sivakaya mein rakhe hue ek purane trishul ka smaran ho aaya.......

idska arth yeh hai ki yeh atim astra muzhe wahi prapt hoga......lekin isse pahle gurudev se aagya maangni hogi

tabhi mera dhyan apne haath mein sthit gurudev k anguthi ka dhyan aaya

maine shraddha se usko pranam kiya
aur man mein --- hey gurudev aapke bataye hue astro mein se antim astra aashram mein hi sthit hai usse prapt karne k liye muzhe waha aashram mein aana padega......ab muzhe waha aane ki sweekriti dijiye gurudev ....

mein abhi yeh bol hi raha tha k achanak waha ka sab drishya badal gaya aur ab mein aasram mein ....ussi Shivalaya mein gurudev k saamne baitha tha........

aise achanak se yaha apne aapko dekhkar hairan ho gaya


gurudev muzhe dekhkar muskura rahe the.....swagat hai putra aakhir tumne unn astro ko paa hi liya...

parantu abhi trishul baaki hai ...

mein - Guru dev yeh sab aapke hi aashirwad ka pratap hai ....aap jaise samarth guru ka aashirwad jisske saath ho woh asafal kaise ho sakta hai............
Trishul toh yahi Shivalaya mein hai gurudev hai ....toh ussko prapt karne mein kaisi kathinayi...

Gurudev - Putra bina aatma k sharir jaise vyarth hota hai waise hi iss trishul ki saari shaktiya kahi aur bandhi hui hai jaha pahunch ne ka marg issi Shivalaya se hokar jaata hai usse tumhe khojna hoga....

ab tum jaso apne mitro ko mil lo aur kal pratha aarti k baad tum apne lakshya ki aur agrasar ho jaana....

aur mein gurudev ko pranam karke chal diya apne mitro ko milne....


jab tak A1 apne mitro ko milta hai hum dekhte hai dusri aur Roopnagar mein

yaha RVS bahut pareshani mein basement mein training hall mein idhar se udhar ghum raha tha tabhi Abhi aur naina bhi waha pahunch jaate hai

Niana - aise pareshan na hoyiye koi na koi haal nikal aayega

RVS- kaise Naina ...kaise ....kya fayeda hai inn shaktiyo ka jab hum kisi ko bacha nahi paa rahe hai

chotte chote bacche students sab jaise pagal se hue hai abhi toh sirf mahanagro aur kuch saharo tak hi yeh hi haha hai aise hi chalta raha toh
pura desh hi isski chapet mein aajayega

mein nahi dekh sakta yeh sab.......apni puri powers lagane par bhi mein yss tak nahi pahunch paa raha hu jisne yeh sab kiya hai....

aur na hi mein unn baccho ko thik kar paa raha hu.......

Naina - aise hosla haarne se kya hoga
aapne ab tak kitno ki jindagiya bachai hai .........Jab jab bhi burayi badti hai toh usske daman k liye parmatma bhi koi na koi upay dhundta hai.....

Abhi - haa dad aap pareshan na ho

tabhi Contro room se msg aaya

Sir RAW chief aapse baat karna chate hai ......phir RVS apne cell se RAW chief se baat karta hai
yes ...haa sir ....koi baat nahi mein abhi waha pahunchta hu.....aisi maut dunga usse k burai karne walo ki ruh kaanp jaayegi.....

mein - kya hua dad...

RVS - bete lagta hai k abhi sab thik ho jaayega

Raw chief k paas mere liye ek msg aaya tha ....ki .......ussmein kssi jagah code batakar muzhe waha aane ka challenge kiya gaya hai
chief uss code kovdecode nahu kar paaye ...lekin mein uss address ko samaz gaya hu
yeh lattitude aur longitude milakar jagah ka code banaya gaya hai....

now lets the hunt begins....

mein - Dad mein bhi chalta hu...

dad phir apne 5 agents muzhe lekar teleport ho gaya hum sab mask mein the........jab hum waha pahunche toh dekha ek chotta sa kamra hai jisme halki si roshni aarahi hai ....waha ek aadmi bada pareshan hokar drink kar raha tha.......

hum sab ko achanak apne saamne dekhkar woh apni chair se uchalkar gira...

aadmi - arre teri toh saala bc tut gayi re kamar......phir hamari traraf dekhkar jor se chillata hua
aree baap re bhooot ...bhooot ..bhoot


saala bc tu bhoot log apun ko maarne aayele ho kya ....kahi tum yum doot toh nahi .....saal pappu tu toh gaya re aaj ......mom ..apun ko bolti thi k galat dhanda mat kar ...lekin nai ...apun ko toh sunne kaich nai tha ...

tum 7 yumdut log akele apun ko lene aaye ho....lekin apun ko marne ka nahi gai re ....

kahkar idhar uhdhar bhag raha tha..
tabhi dad..... hmm toh tu hi hai woh jissne muzhe challenge kiya tha

Pappu - arre Sangharak bhai ...wah apun toh tumkoich dhund rahela tha

dad - yeh sab drugs failakar ab natak kar raha hai...

pappu - arre nahi nahi bhai mana ki mein harami hu lekin itna bada harami nahi hu bhai ....ki chotte chotte bacche logo ko aisi takleef pahunchau

woh toh mein tumko yeh sab karne wale ka naam batana chahta tha...

dad - toh tumne police ko kyun nahi bataya

pappu - Bhai yeh ek bahut bada zhol hai pata nahi kaun kaun saala bik gaya hai....

phir pappu MS k saath hui meeting se lekar ab tak ki saari jaankari.....RVS ko deta hai.....

aur rote hue bahi chodna nahi uss haram k pille ko , mera baccha bhi uss drug ka shikar ho gaya hai bhai..
ghar par bandhkar rakha hai ussko bhai

dad - woh durg kaunsa hai kya tum vata sakte ho...

pappu - naam toh nahi pata lekin apun k paas woh drug pada hai

apun ko bhi yeh kasm diya gayela tha magar apun ka dil hi nahi mana.....
saara drugs apun k godown mein hai

apun unko zhoot boltkar ki drugs supply ho raha hai .bachta raha

phir dad ne usse drug ka sample lekar baaki drugs ko destroy kar diya

aur pahunch gaye reasearch lab
uss drug ka antidod bannane ki koshish jaari hui......

Yaha RVS ne MS tak pahunch ne ka bada praytna kiya lekin unki teleportation ki power bhi unhe waha nahi le jaa rahi thi....

drugs k wajah se school band the

ki Maine socha ki kyu ba aaj Rimpy Ko surprise diya jaaye ....toh pahunch gaya mein unke ghar.....bahut baar unke gahr jaa chuka tha phir bhi pahle ander Rimpy k dad k pa ko inform kiya gaya aur pa ne HM uncle khar permission mil hi gayi...

ander gaya toh Uncle pa se kisi baat ko discuss kar rahe the....muzhe dekhkar......
arre beta aao .....sorry ..takleef k liye
lekin tum samz sakte ho asjkal haalat hi aise hai

jaao beta Rimpy ander hai ...

mein Rimpy k room mein pahuncha toh dekha door khula hai ...room mein enter kiya toh dekha Rimpy nahi hai

maine socha shtad bathroom gayi hogi .
mein room mein idhar udhar ghumne laga toh meri nazar almari k door par padi tabhi dekha k woh door khula aur usmein se nikli Rimpy ...

mein sochne laga ki yeh andar kya kar rahi thi ...muzhe achanak saamne dekhkar wo hadbada gaayi....

abhi k liye itna hi ....
agla update raat ko ......
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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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ab tak aapne dekha A1 Trishul ki khoj mein aashram aaya

aur pappu bhai k dwara RVS ko MS k baare mein pata chala aur drugs sample mila...

Abhi Rimpy k ghar mein gaya
usse Rimpy wardrobe se nikalte dihki....

ab aage......,.......


abhi mein Rimpy k room ko dekh hi raha tha ki meine wardrobe k darwaje se Rimpy ko dejh jo muzhe aise aapne saamne dekhkar hadbada rahi thi

mein - arre sweetu tum wardrobe mein kya kar rahi thi .....wardrobe kapde rakhne k liye hota hai.......
insaano k rahne k liye nahi.....

Rimpy - woh .....w....oh ......mein ..
kkkkkkuch nahi.....baas aaaaise hi

mein usske paas gaya - toh itna ghabra kyu rahi ho.....usske maathe par aaya padina pochte hue ......
aur dekho toh a/c chalu hote hue bhi kitna paseena aarahi hai......

aur maine usse apne gale laga liya

Rimpy - Babu tum jaante ho ki main Reasearch ka kaam karti hu

mein - haa jaanta hu .....toh issmein kya hai...

Rimpy - aao mein tumhe kuch dikhati hu
aur mera haath pakadkar wardrobe k ander le jaane lagi

mein - arre... arre yeh kya kar rahi ho muzhe isske andar kyu le jaarahi ho

tabhi ussne wardrobe ka darwaja khola ....toh ussmein muzhe ek screen dhikayi di ....woh jab uske aage khadi hui toh ussmein se ek ray nikli aur uske chehre par padi aur waha ek door open hua ...mein hairan tha yeh dekh kar .......ki kya ho raha hai ....
ek secret chamber mere ghar k nichee aur ek yaha bhi ...
jab mein ander gaya toh waha ek lab dikhayi di jaha tarah k tarah k chemicals the aur dihayi diye bahut saare gadgets ....tabhi humare saamne ek chotti bachi aayi ....

welcome mom mein aapke liye kya kar sakti hu

mein - yeh sab kya hai Rimpy ..aur yeh pyari si bacchi kaun hai....lekin yeh kuch alag tarike se baat kyu kar rahi hai ....aur tumhe mom kyu kah rahi hai....

Rimpy -- arre arre babu ek saath kitne sawal....thik hai toh suno

Yeh hai meri personal privat lab jaha mein apne experiments karti hu ...

aur yeh hai guddi meri banayi hui humanoid robot....

lekin abhi inn sab baato ko chodo aur

idhar dekho.......
woh muzhe ek screen k aage le gayi

dekho aajkal jo bimari school k baccho mein fail rahi hai jisse sab jagah tabhai mach rahi hai.

mein uspar reasearch kar rahi hu

yaha dekho meine aise hi ek bacche ka blood sample ek hospital se badi mushkil se haasil kiya ...

aur jab meine uupar reasearch kiya toh paaya k yeh koi bimari nahi hai

kuch aur hai yeh koi aisa siram ya drug hai jisse vaccho k DNA mein change aaraha hai......
its too dangerous..... lekin aam human body iss change ko accept nahi kar paa rahi issiliye woh sab pagal ho rahe hai aur apne ko hi khatam kar rahe hai......
agar kisi ki body is DNA change ko accept karti hai toh human se badal kar kuch aur ho jaayega....

shayad koi ajeeb sa jeev ya kuch aur

kyu ki jaisa change inke dna mein aaraha hai waisa dna iss dharti par kisi ka bhi nahi ho sakta...

mein - ohh god agar yeh bilkul aisa hi hai jaise tum kah rahi ho toh sach mein bahut dangerous hai yeh ...

issko rokne ka koi upay

Rimpy - Science mein kuch bhi impossible nahi hai .....agar iss duniya mein koi sawal paida hota hai toh saath saath uska jawab bhi paida ho jaata hai.....

jaha tak meine reasearch ki hai ....
toh isska antidod ussi drug se ban sakta hai jisse yeh Dna mein change aaraha hai.....

mein - Rimpy ismein hamari koi madad kar sakta hai......tum kaho toh unhe yaha bula sakta hu....

Rimpy - haa lekin iss jagah ki privacy barkarar rahni chahiye....

mein - abhi yaha itni badi problem hai aur tumhe privacy ki padi hai

Rimpy - tum muzhe galat mat samjho
yaha tum dekh rahe ho kitne saare gadgets hai.....agar yeh kisi aise k haath lage jo desh ka dushman ho toh aur nayi problem aajaayegi

mein - tumne aise gadgets banaye hi kyu jo vinash ka karan bane...

Rimpy -- Vinash toh weapons aur
atomic weapon bhi karte hai lekin woh desh ki suraksha k liye jaruri hai
isiliye .....

mein - tum iss baat ki chnta mat karo kyu ki jinhe mein bulane wala hu woh desh k gaddro k liye chalti phirti maut hai....

phir meine dad ko call lagayi.....
Mein - Agent sir shayad aap kjis solution ko dhund rahe ho woh mil gaya hai.....jaldi se aap HM sir k ghar k ander ek secret chamber hai waha aajao....

dad samaz gaye ki unhe yaha Sangharak k roop mein aana hai..

tabhi woh waha teleport hokar aagaye

unko sangharak k roop mein acahanak apne saamne pragat hote dekh kar.....rimpy ghabra gayi ..aur mere taraf dekhne lagi...

Dad - awaaj change karke - ghabrao mat beti ........

Rimpy - siiir ...yadi mein galat nahi hu toh kya ...woh hi ....RAW k famous agent hai jiske naam se hi underworld khanpta hai...

dad - bilkul thik beti mein woh hi hu

phir Maine dad ko saari baatein batayi

jisse sunkar unhe ek aasha ki kiran dhikhayi di

dad - welldone beta ...agar yeh safal raha toh saari problem solve ho jaayegi... ...kya tum humari reasearch lab chalogi.....

Rimpy sir - mein abhi sabke saamne aana nahi chahti ....yadi aap muzhe woh drug laa de toh.....
agar antidod ban gaya toh uss formula se aap apne lab mein bhi ussko bana sakte ho...

fir dad waha se teleport hokar chale gaye aur wapas uss drug k saath aagaye.

Rimpy uss drug k sample ko decode karne ki koshidh karne lagi ..

kareeb 2 hr ho gaye ussko try karte hue.
Rimpy - sir yeh drug homeopathic medecine bannane k tarike se bana hua hai ......jisme alcohal k jariye kisi bhi chij ki power nikal kar mother tincher banaya jaata hai ...

jaise poison k asar ko rokne k liye poison se hi medicine banti hai ussi tarah.....

phir Rimpy ne ek tube mein uss drug ko milaya phir koi chemical
aur uss tube k chaaro taraf 4 chote gadgets rakh diye.....jis mein se rays nikal kar uss tube par pad raha tha

Rimpy iss process mein 8 hr lagenge

aur aapka antidode tayar..

dad - hume bahut maatra mein isse banana hoga....
toh iskeliye tih hume bahut matra mein drugs lagegi

Rimpy - no sir ...ek baar yeh medicine tayar ho jaaye toh homeopathic formule se issi se hum bahut maatra mein antidode vana sakte hai...

ab hume 8 ghante intejar karna tha..

ab dekhte hai A1 kya kar raha hai...


guru ji se milkar jaise hi mein waha pahucha kaha mere saare mitr yudh kala ka abhyas kar rahe the

muzhe jab unhone aate dekha toh saare bahut khush ho gaye sab mere gale mile .....

Rakesh - abhinandan mitra jo tune prapt kita hai usske upalakshya mein aur mere gale lag gaya...

CT - yaar tu toh bilkul badal hi gaya
yeh tera shari pahle se bahut mazboot hogaya......baajuon ko chute hue

arre yeh toh kisi vajra k saman kathor ho gaye hai ....aise kya kha k aaya bahar se.....

sab muzhe bahar ki duniya k baare mein puchne lage...toh maine manda gaon ki baat batayi toh sab hasne lage

Uday - tu jitna marji shaktishali ban jaa lekin rahega langoor ka langoor hi
arre bahar ki duniya mein dhan ki awasyakta hoti hai...
Shalu sahi kahti hai tuzhe langoor

tabhi mein - acha mitr muzhe kuch kaam hai, sandhya ki aarti mein milte hai

CT - khub jaanta hu tere kasm ko

jaa sarover par ...wahi par milegi

main bhi muskurate hue nikal faya sarover ki taraf

waha jaakar maine dekha Shalu gumsum si kinare par baithi thi ek tak
jal mein dekhto hui...

jo Shalu humesha shararti aur khush rahti thi ussko aise udaas dekhkat muzhe kuch accha nahi lag raha tha

tabhi mere gale ka locket garam hone laga toh muzhe ajeeb laga...
mein locket se - ohho toh meri Shivi ko Shalu se jalan ho rahi hai...
tabhi maine uss locket ko chuma toh phir woh gulabi ho gaya aur sheetal ho gaya.
mein - Dekho Shivi mere prem par bharosa rakho.....

phir mein ek ped k piche chupkar

Shalu.... meri pyari Shalu ...tu ..badi chalu

phir meib apni gati se sthan badalkar dusri taraf chala gaya aur waha se bhi usse pukara...

meri aawaj sunkar woh charo taraf dekhne lagi ....lekin mein usse kahi par bhi nazar nahi aaya ..

toh phir woh vahi baith gayi ...

Shalu - Dekho na aaj muzhe kya ho gaya ab tum muzhe charo taraf se tumahari hi awaaj aarahi hai...

mere kaan bajne lage.....hai jaldi aajao na abhi dekho tumahare bina tumahari Shalu kya haal ho gaya hai

tabhi mein achanak usske saamne aa
gaya....

ab muzhe dekhkar ....
Shalu - mein jaanti hu ki tum yaha nahi ho....abhi mein tumhe haath lagaungi tum gayab ho jaaoge ...aur woh rone lagi....

mein usske pass jakar uske aansoo ponchte hue - arre meri shalu ki aankhon mein yeh aansoo bikul bhi acche nahi lagte ...

jab ussbe muzhe dekha ki nein sach mein uske saamne khada hu...
toh ussne jor se muzhe gale lagaya

muzhe gale lagaye woh roti rahi ..
jab thodi der baad woh chup hui toh bahut saari baatein humare bich hui

samay kaise beet gaya pata hi nahi chala.......sandhya ki aarti ...mitro k saath bhojan aur Rakesh k saath dhyan.....

Dusre din subah k nityakarm aur dhyan k paschyat mein mandir gaya

aarti khatam hone k baad mein jaha woh trishul raha tha waha gaya ...yss trishool kovdhyan se dekha toh uske ek taraf surya bana hua tha toh dusri taraf chandrama ka....

ab uss trishool ki urja ko khojne k liye uss mandir k ek ek kone ko bade dhyan se dekhne lagai tabhi ek jagah mandir ki parakrama mein piche ki aur muzhe wahi nisan dikhayi diye jo trishul par ankit the

meine unn nishano dabakar dekha toh niche ek chotta sa raasta khul gaya ..
toh mein bhi ussmein chala gaya toh dekha ek galiyaara hai ....mein chalte jaa raha tha ki galiyara tha ki khatam hone ka naam nahi le raha tha
tabhi meri drishti waha k deewar par vane hue chitro par padi.....

aaj k liye itna hi ......
agla update kal........
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