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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)
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Congratulations for your story Bhai
Nice start h bhai
Nice start h bhai
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Thanks bhai for your support
aise hi saath banaye rakhe
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Great update bhaiUpdate - 5
ab tak aapne dekha ....adira k chunne se hero ka sukshma sharir wapas uske sharir mein aajaata hai....... aur hero ki aankhein khulti hai..... ab aage
Mein - Gudiya .... mera baccha
Meri aawaj sunkar woh mere gale lagkar rone lagi
Adira - bhayia ..aap bahut bure ho aap apni gudiya ko chod kar jaa rahe the na
mein - nahi meri pyari aadu mein kaise tumko chod kar jaa sakta hu
aur mein pyar se uske sir par haath pherne laga
yaha bahar khade mom ,dad aur di ne muzhe hosh mein aate hue aur gudiya se baat karte dekha
dad ne fauran paas khade doc ko aawaj dekar bulaya , aur teeno doc k saath ander aagaye
ander aate hi doc ne machines check ki toh sab normal dekhkar hairan ho gaya .
mom aur di muzhe hosh mein dekhkar bahut khush huye aur unki aankon se khusi k aanso nikal ne
yeh aanso bhi ajab chij hai, gum ho yaa khushi, bahar aane ko tayyar rahete hai
tabhi di ne pyar se mere sir par haath rakha toh unka mere liye pyar dekhkar mere aankon mein bhi aansoo aagaye
Ritu di - Mat ro betu dekhab tu jadi thik ho jaayega, tune muzhe toh rone k liye mana kiya tha aur ab tu khud ro raha hai
muzhe kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ki di kya kah rahi hai, kyu ki mein suksma shari dwara dekha gaya sab kuch bhul gaya tha
mom ne aage badh k mere aanson poche Addu bahi tak mere upar gale lagi hui sisak rahi thi
jaise agar woh chod degi toh mein kahi chala jaaunga
Doc - Rana sahab abhi aap isse akela chod de please, abhi hume inko check-up karna hai , phir inhe room mein shift karna hai, waha aap sab mil sakte ho
papa meri taraf dekh rahe the apne dil ka dard dil mein chupaaye, aur mera sir par unhone ne haath rakha , aur bole ...... mera pyara bahadur beta in choti moti choto se Hamare khoon ko kuch nahi ho sakta ....bete abhi toh bahut lambi ladayi hai
maa - kya ji aap abhi mera beta hosh mein aaya aur aap ladayi ki baat lekar baith gaye, kahi nahi jaane dungi apne lal ko kahkar ....apne aanchal se mero muh saaf karne lagi ..... maa ke aanchal ki woh divya sugandh ne mere sharir ko ek aaram sa mila.....aurmuzhe achanak nind si aagayi
maa - doc dekho na ky hua phir se
doc - kuch nahi maa ji abhi patient ko aaram ki jarurat hai
papa - beta addu chod do ab bhai ko dekho unko aaram ki jarurat hai, tum chati ho na ki tumahara bhai jaldi thik ho jaaye
Adira(addu) - lekin papa mein bhi bhai k ......
papa - lekin vekin kuch nahi , kya tum apne bhai ko takleef dena chahti ho
itna sunte hi addu uth gayi....
nahi papa mein bhai ko kaise taklif pahucha sakti hu.... aap jo bologe mein woh karungi
phir sab bahar aagaye , aur doc ne muzhe check karna shuru kiya , toh woh hairaan rah gaye
doc - Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta, its impossible, its really a miracle ...kaise ho sakta hai yeh
assistant - kya hua sir kya nahi ho sakta
doc - idhar dekho iss patient ke saare ghav apne aap kaise bhar gaye ,aur operation ka nisshan kaha gaya
assis - haa sir yeh toh unbealivable hai
doc - ek baat dhyan rahe yeh baat bahar nahi naikalni chahiye , nahi toh kai sawal khade ho jaayenge
assis - ji sir jaisa aap kahe
ab muzhe ek bade se room mein shift kar diya gaya , yeh ek bada room tha kyu ki doc ko pata tha ki visitors ki list bahut lambi hai
aur mein yaha sapne mein ek golden color k room mein apne aap ko dekgta hu jaha vedo k mantra gunj rahe hai
aur dheere dheere woh mantra mere buddhi mein apni jagah bana rahe hai ...mein unki urja mehsus kar raha hu
jaise hi mantra dhwani ruki ek aawaj gunji aaj k liye itna hi putr
aur phir meri aankhein khul gayi aur maine aapne aapko ek room mein paaya mera sir maa ki godi mein tha aur woh pyar se muzhe hi dekh rahi thi , muzhe hosh mein aate dekhkar unke chehre par muskurahat aagayi
meri gudiya aur di bhi muzhe utha dekhkar khushi se gale lag gayi .
aur bhi bhi sapne ki baato mein khoya hua tha , muzhe ander ek nayi urja ka ahsas ho raha tha , mere mastishk mein kai mantro ka aabhas hone laga abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki yeh mantra mere bhitar kaha se aaye to gudiya ne muzhe hilaye
addu - bhai kaha kho gaye ho mein aapse kuch bol rahi hu...
Mein - mein sun raha hu betu kya bol rahi ho
addu - bhai ab mein hostel nahi jaaungi , aapko chodkar kahi nahi jaaungi,
mein - dekh betu aise jid nahi karte
addu - nahi bhai muzhe aur kuch nahi chahiye ,muzhe sirf aap chahiye
itna kah kar woh rone lagi
mein - chup jo jaa betu mat ro, thik hai jo tu kahegi wahi hoga....aur meri gudiya tu itni rondu kab se ho gayi.
chup hio jaao sona, mein promise karta hu jo tu chahegi wahi hoga
itne mein addu k aansoo band ho gaye aur woh khilakar haste hue boli
addu - aapki gudiya rondu nahi hai bhaiya, ab aapne promise kiya hai
mein sab samaz gaya ki issne natak karke muzhse promise le liye
mein -- addu tu na bahut shaitan ho gayi hai, toh mein pyar se ek chapat uske sir par laga di
mom aur di bhi addu ki nautanki dekhkar hasne lagi
yaha room k bahar doc aur R.V.S
Doc - Rana saheb jo meine dekha mein vishwas nahi kar sakta
lagta hai aapke bete mein powers hai
R.V.S - man mein (kahi doc ne yeh baat bahar bata di toh mushkul hongi... kuch karna hoga) tabhi who bole
Doc sahab jara dheere se nahi toh koi sun lega, aur phir doc ki aankhon mein dekhkar man mein kuch bolne lage .. isse doc ka sir bhari sa hone laga
R.V.S - kya hua doc sahab aap thik toh hai na.....kya kahrahe the aap
Doc - kuch nahi rana sahab halka sa sir dard hai thiik ho jaayega .......
aur haa mein kah raha tha discharge paper kal tak mil jaaenge
(R.V.S ne aise kya kiya ....... jo doc sab bhul gaya.... )
Doc se baat karke R.V.S bete k paas aagaya
papa - uth gaye young man ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho
mein - Ab accha lag raha hai papa , (idhar udhar dekhte hue) papa Rakesh kahi dikhai nahi de raha kaha hai woh
papa - beta woh muzhse puchkar hi gaya tha, aajaayega jaldi
itne mein aawaj aai haa dost ko bada yaad kar raha hai , kabhi hume bhi yaad kar liya karo
meine darwaje par dekha toh merin dono bua aur unki family thi
inn sab k baare mein full family intro mein pata chalega
yaha visitors ka aur media walo ka aur bayan lene k liye police ka tanta laga hua hai...............yaha inhe chodte hai aur chalte hai hai isi shahr k end mein forest k paas ek farm house mein kuch dhamaka honewala hai waha
Roopnagar k dakshin disha mei ek ghanna jungle hai , jaha se jugle shuru hota hai waha kai resorts bane hue hai, wahi hotels aur resorts se kuch duri par ekkanth mein ek aalishan bangla hai.. jiske charo aur 20 ft unchi deeware hai aur ek bada sa gate laga hua hai ... jaha 4 gaurds hamesha
ak 56 se lance pahra dete hai ander ek bahut sunder park aur bich mein water fountain uski sunderta ko char chand laga rahe hai, sham k samay light se aur bhi shandar lag raha tha
bahar se jitna bada dikh raha hai usse jyada ander se bada hai
ander ek choti si drink party chal rahi hai jaha karib 10 ladke sharab aur shabab ka lutf utha rahe the
unmein se ek ... yaar Vilas aaj toh maza aagaya
Vilas (mla ka chotta ladka)- haa yaar aaj toh jasn mannane ka di hai
yeh sab mla ka ladka aur uske dost the jo kisi baat ka jasn manna rahe the....aanewali maut se anjan
Vilas - yaaro aaj khulkar piyo mere raste ka kaanta aaj ukad gaya
baki ko L1,L2 likhunga...
L1 - lekin bhai usska baap bahut powerful hai
vilas - Humne bhi kacchi goliya nahi kheli uska baap toh kya kissi ko bhi pata nahi chalega , yeh hamara kand hai
L2 - wah bhai kamal kar diya, lekin uss fulzhadi Ritu ko kyu chod diya usse le aate toh aaj maza aajaata
L3- arre bewakuf sabar se kaam le , bhai ne kuch socha hoga
Vilas - haa yaar , mere baare mein jissko pata tha, uska woh bhai toh ab nahi raha , jo mere liye kgatra ban sakta tha, uss Ritu ko ab kabhi bhi utha sakte hai
L5 -haa bhai bada uchalta tha Abhi aur woh uska dost haa kya naam tha uska...haa Rakesh itne mein hi ek jor ka dhamaka hua aur hall ka darwaja tut kar gir gaya, Waha ka security alaram baj utha aur dekhte hi dehkte uss bangle k tahkhanne se karib 100 Gaurds aadunik hatiyaro k saath vilas aur usske dosto ki security k liye unko gher kar khade ho gaye
sab tute hue door k tarf dekhte hai toh waha utha dhua chatte hi ek saaya nazar aaya
tabhi waha bhayanak ek aawaj gunji
Maut hu mein ....mahakaal ka ansh tumahara kaal hu mein....
abhi k liye itna hi.....
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