Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Black water]

Awesome update

 

[Aryanv]

Update - 50

ab tak aapne college mein Lima ka confession .....princi ka range haatho pakda jaana..
dekha

ab aage......

Jaise hi office ka door khula toh ander ka nazara dekh kar sab shock ho gaye ....muzhe chodka......ander princi ka sharir bejan fan se latak rahi tha...

sabhi students ekdum dar gaye .....
tab tak aur bhi professsors aagaye...
meine dad ko call karke sab bata diya

aur unhone police ko inform kiya.....
aur case ko secret rakhne ko kaha

police aayi aur unhone princi ki laash ko niche utara .....table par unhe princi ka sucide note mila jismein ussne ...apna gunah kabul kiya tha...

jab police ne waha ki talashi li waha unhe bahut maatra mein drugs mili ..

meine socha chalo yeh chapter toh close ho gaya ....lekin abhi bahut kuch karna tha......

college mein hue kaand ki wajah se
jaldi chutti hi gayi phir ...mein waha se nikalkar Rimpy ko ghar par choda aur ghar aagaya.......

Mom - accha hua beta tu aagaya.....
abhi sab nikalne hi wale the......

Mein sab se mila Dada dadi apne gaon chale gaye.....aur Nana nani bhi

Chacha ji aur dono bua apne private jet se nikal gaye.....Sona toh muzhe chod ne ko tayar hi nahi thi....lekin meine usse jald hi aane ka vaada kiya

Ab ghar khali ho gaya tha......

phir mein basement mein chala gaya

waha control room k office mien jaakar dad se mila......

Dad - beta aaj jo kuch college mein hua ....woh bahut pahele roka ja sakta tha.....lekin bahar ka kaam karte karte mera iss aur dhyan hi nahi gaya.....
yeh meri jimmedari thi ...lekin mein hi isse nahi sambhal paaya....

aur yeh sab ho gaya......ab beta aage ka kaam tumhe hi dekhna....hai....
Samay aagaya hai ab Sangharak ki saari jimmedari tum sambhalo...

mein - Nahi dad.....aap apne aapko isska doshi kyu samaz rahe ho ...abhi aapke saath ki bahut jarurat hai....

Dad - waise bhi tum ne apni Warriors ki team bana rakhi hai jo bahut kuch kar rahi hai , iss baat ka muzhe pata hai.....

( meine apni ek team bana rakhi hai jimein mere select kiye hue fighters the ...unki special training mosad commados ki tarah karyi gayi thi....
College mein gundo ka safaya karne baad unko hi maine ph karke laasho ko waha se hatane k liye jaha tha...)

meri team k kuch kuch agents Raw mein bhi the......

Shalaka - best hacker....& kun - fu fighter...

Arnold - 7 ft ka wrestler ...jo ek mukke se kisi aam insan ko uper ka ticket dede

Neeraj - best shooter...

Saahu....Rajni....aur Sameer

yeh main the ....inke under mein 100 log aur the jo underworld ki hulchul par nazar rak rahe hai......

mein - Aapke aur mere itna alert rahne par bhi yeh drugs ka karobar humare shahar mein chal raha hai

aur hum unn tak pahunch nahi paaye...lekin ab meri powers muzhe mil gayi hai.....ab bahut jald unki maut unke saamne hogi......

Mein - Kaal .....jaise hi pukara
Rakesh mere bhitar se pragat hua...

mein - dekho Rakesh .....mein tumhe yeh kaam saunp raha hu .....24 hrs mein muzhe un sab ki list chahiye jo yeh sab kar rahe hai.....

inhe mein apne haato se aisi maut dunga..ki ab duniya dekhegi...

Aur Rakesh cahal gaya....

Jinn students ko nashe ki lat lagi hui thi unke liye rehabilition Centre jagah jagah Shuruwat karne ki planning ki

aur phir lag gaya apne kaam mein

Rakesh pata laga chuka tah ki yeh sab isiliye nahi pakda jaa raha tha kyuki ..underworld ka koi bhi iss kaam ko nahi kar raha tha.......

iss kaam ko woh log kar rahe the....
jo gunde the jo netao k bhes mein chupe the......

Aur iss kaam k liye....woh lawaris baccho ka istemaal ka istemaal kar
rahe the.......

Rakesh - Inmein main MLA sudhakar..
jisne aap par humla kayi the uss Vlilas ka baap...aur Vilas k bade bhai main tha....

Rakesh - Bhai Aap kaho Toh MLA ko hi utha kar yahi par le aau...

mein - pahele hume samaz mein faili hui isski jado ko mitana hai

phir hum lage appne kaam par agle 4 dino tak college k jitne bhi drug addict student the.....unko thik kar diya gaya

kuch ko apni healing power se...
aur kuch ko Rimpy ki banayi hui special medicine se.....

ab college k kachra saaf ho gaya tha
College mein ek naya princi appoint kiya gaya ....jo Raw ka secret agent bhi tha.......

aane wale sports festival jo 6 month baad aane wala tha uuski tayari college mein jor shor se chal rahi thi

Aur yaha Abhi warrior team ko khabar mili k MLA kuch bahut bada plan kar raha hai..........Ek toh apne bete Vilas ki maut ka badla woh lena chahta tha
kahi se shak hua ki Vilas ki maut k matter mein kahi na kahi Ritu di ka link hai.....

Kyu ki Vilas ne gundo ko Ritu di ko kdnap karne k liye bheja tha ....
mere aur security gaurds ki wajah se woh humla nakamyab raha.....

lekin unmein se ek bhag gaya tha ....

Usne iss baat se andaja lagaya k K RVS itne aasani se nahi baitha hoga ....aur ussine usske bete Vilas ko marwaya hoga......

ab woh badle ki aag mein jal raha tha

mein chahta toh ek zhatke mein apni powers se usska namonishan mita sakta tha.......lekin Mahaguru ne sikhaya tha ki powers ka wahi istemal karo jaha jarurat ho......

Hum raat ko uss thikane par bane...

jo bahar se dikne mein ek sadharan colony dikh rahi thi........

Uss colony k saane wale lane mein normal log rah rahe the ...
aur piche ki dono lane mein Mla ka secret adda tha....

har lane mein 20 quaters the......
40 ghar niche k under ground godown se jude hue the......

Maine Skalaka ko ishara kiy ki check karo ki yah koi cctv camera hai

toh pata chal cameras kuch kuch jagah sirf bahar ki aur lage hue hai

jaha sab normal lag raha tha....

Humla karne se pahle hume yeh jaana jaruri tha ki yaha kitne log hai ...
aur kya kya hatiyar hai......

aur kaise hume yaha k logo ko safe karna hai.....

jab muzhe nahi suza toh maine ..Saahu ..Rajni aur sameer jo ninja the ..waha ka poora haal jaane ko bheja......

Arnold - sir aur kitni der hume yaha aise intejar karna hoga sidha humla kar dete hai aur khatam karte hai sabko.......

mein - bas thodi der aur ruk jaao

koi 10 min mein woh aaye

Saahu - ander kareeb 500 k lagbhag gunde hai.....aur ek Quater mein humne kuch 100 k kairib baccho ko bhi dekha jo bure haal mein hai....

waha modern weapon k saath karib 20 gaurds hai......

kuch gundo ki baato se aisa lag raha tha ki bahut bada dhamaka karne wale hai......aur unnki baaton se yeh bhi pata chala k kai ton RDX bhi waha godown mein hai...

saari reports jaanne k baad....
ab muzhe First lane k logo ko bhi safe karna hai ....
baccho ko bhi safely bachana hai....

aur MLA ko bhi zinda pakadna hai ...taaki ....aur connection ka pata chale.....

abhi k liye itna hi ....agla update jald hi

Fantastic update

 

[Aryanv]

Update - 51

ab tak aapne dekha.....Abhi & team MLA k secret adde tak pahunch gaye hai.....

ab aage.......

itne saare logo ki saftey aur .....criminals ka khatma dono ek saath
mushkil lag raha tha......

Abhi ki nazar wah k transformer par padi ..jaha se bijli connection waha supply ho raha tha........kuch sochkar Abhi ne waha ki power line kaat di....

carao taraf andhera ho gaya......

aur Abhi & team full speed se quaters k piche pahunch gaye......

tabhi kisi ki aawaj aayi ...arre koi generator toh chalu karo...dono generator room wahi piche ki aur bana hua tha.....tabhi 5 log torch lekar udhar aate dikhayi diya.....woh paancho generator room pahunche hi the k Abhi ki team ne unke piche jaakar ek hi zhatke mein unki garden tod di.....
Arnold ko chodkar unhone unka uniform pehan liya.....

Abhi - Shalaka aur rajni tum dono baccho wale kamre mein jaao aur unnko waha se lekar turant bahar niklo ....aur haa jara dhyan se apni ninja technics ka istemal karna....

Arnold tum 5 min baad generator on karna aur...
mera ishara milte hi andar aajaana

Ab Abhi ...neeraj....Sahu ..aur Sameer

charo waha k gaurds k uniform mein andar ki taraf gaye.....

tabhi kisi ne pucha - kya hua be ab tak generator chalu kyu nahi hua.

Abhi - sir woh kuch wires nikal gayi hai bas abhi thodi der mein chalu ho jaayega.....aur jaise hi wih muda abhi ne apni speed ka istemal karke usse bhi lita diya.....aur sab ander ki taraf chal diya.....

raat k kareeb 12 baj rahe the aur sab befikr......jis ghar mein woh andar gaye the waha sirf 10 log the....

andhere ka fayda uthakar unhone unnsabko khatam kar diya ....tabhi generator bhi on ho gaya.....

Abhi ne Arnold ko msg karke ussko bhi bacche wale ghar ki aur bhej diya

Arnold picche k raaste ....uss room tak pahuncha.......aur khidki tak pahuncha......aur zhankar dekha ..

waha tainat 20 mein se 15 ko shalaka
aur rajni uper pahuncha chuki thi..

lekin abhi bacche 5 ne dono ko gun point par le rakha....tha....

ek - jaldi se boss ko inform karo......
kaun ho tim dono ...batao nahi toh yahi shoot kar denge.....

woh abhi call karte ki tabhi Arnold ne achanak unpar dhawa bol diya.....

jisse woh hadbada gaye......aur itna hi samay kaafi tha.....isse pahele woh gun chalate un paancho ka kaam ho gaya.......ab ab unhone waha jo bacche band the...unko chdaya ..ab itne Saare baccho ko kaise bahar nikala jaaye.....

yaha Abhi apne saatiyo k saath ander godown pahunch chka tha....

waha itni maatra mein weapons aur Rdx dekha ..... waha koi 300 log alag size ke bomb bana rahe the......

uss godown se Sabhi 20 ghar connected the...inn mein se MLA...kis mein hoga yeh samaz nahi aaraha tha

Tabhi ek tunnel se MLA ko aata dekha

MLA - jaldi jaldi haath chalo....

kal iss sahar k RVS k saare company aur ghar mein ek saath blast karna hai ..namonisha mita dena hai usska

Tabhi mein apni speed ka istemal karte hue Mla k picche pahuncha aur usse gun point par le liya....

aise achanak hone se waha khade sab ko pahele toh samz mein nahi aaya...

jab pata chala toh saari guns mere terf mud gayi thi.....

Main - Sameer tum sab ko lekar jaldi baccho ko lekar nikal jaao...

baaki mein dekh lunga....
aur woh chale gaye......

Mein - Bada shauk hai na tuzhe ..yeh maut ka khel khelne ka.......

ab tu dekh maut kya hoti hai....
kaal ....k tabhi Rakesh ...sher manav k roop mein mere bhitar se nikla...

aur kuch hi der main waha chik pukar gunjne lagi kisi ka haath alag toh kisi pair......aur kissi k garden ....

yeh nazara dekhkar MLA thar thar kaanpne laga....

Rakeh - Tera beta bhi aise hi kaanp raha tha maut se pahele.....
aur ab tu bhi......chlo tuzhe waha hi pahuncha deta hu......

Tabhi MLA kamini hassi haste hue..

accha toh tu hai woh jisne mere bete ko maara.....apni jeb se remote nikalte hue.....mein toh marunga hi aur marenge yaha kaid hue bacche....tu aur tere saathi.......aur yaha rahne wala maasoom log..... soch agar 1000kg RDX jab yaha phatega toh yaha ka kya hoga ...

isse pahle ki woh remote dabaye usska haath jamin par kata hua tadap raha tha......tab tak muzhe msg aaya ki sabhi baccho ko bahar nikal diya


Hath katne se woh behosh ho gaya ....aur maine aur Rakesh ne milkar sabhi ko narak bhek diya....

hab MLA ki aankhein khuli.....toh usne apne aapko Ek chair par bandha dekha

Arnold ne itna torture kiya toh ussne sab kuch ugal diya.....

toh pata chala k iiski jade USA aur Dubai tak hai.....aur ministers k kuch naam bhi saamne ...aaye....

humare toture se usski aisi haalat ho gayi thi ..ki woh maut ki bhik masng raha the.....

Abhi ne apne secret team k Torchure Room mein usse baadhkar rakha tha....

MLA apni antim saanse le raha tha.., maut uske kareeb thi......


yaha har news channel ...Mla k gum hone ki khabar aur usske godown mein mile wepons aur drugs k baare mein har news channel par khabar chal rahi thi......

bacche jaha kahi se laaye gaye the unhne unn tak pahunchye gaya.....

MLA toh mohra tha asli....criminals ki jade toh kahi Dubai Aur USA mein fail rahi thi...,muzhe kaise bhi karke unn pahunchkar unnhe rokna tha.....

MLA ko mara hua jaankar , Abhi ne usse ghane jungle le jaakr chod diya jaha ..usski team dwara maare gaye gundo ko woh chodta aaya tha.....

abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update kal.......

Awesome update

 

[Scorpionking]

Mla confirm to mara hai na nahi to aap last m mara zaankar nahi likhte .

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Nice update

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 52

abhi tak aapne dekha Abhi ne MLA k secret adde ko tabah kar diya......aur waha se baccho ko chudaya.....

ab aage......

Abhi ne MLA k dwara bandi banaye baccho ko unke ghar wapas bhejne ka socha......kuch ko toh kidnap karke laaya gaya tha......aur kuch ko unke apno ne garibi se tang aakar bech diya tha.....aage chalkar aise bacche
samaj ki thokro se tang aakar galt raasta apna lete hai.....

Sirf apradhiyo k naash se samaj mein sudhar nahi aayega.......apradh ki pravriti jo paida karne wale kaaran ko jaankar hi samaj mein sudhar ..laaya jaa sakta hai...

Abhi ne Apne dad ko bolkar......
aise bachho k liye ek sanstha kholi...
jaha unke rahene se lekar padhai tak
ki saari suvidhaye thi......

Ab dekhte hai yaha Patal lok mein kya ho raha hai.......

Yaha patal lok mein Kalasur k tap k 18 varsh poore ho gaye the.......

Usske tap sthan par achanak bhayankar aawaaje aane lagi....aur pragat hui.....Asuro ki kul devi.....
Devi Nikumbala.......

Devi - Utho putra ....mein tumahare iss tap se bahut prasanna hu.....
Var maango putra.....

Kalasur (KS) - Maa ....aaj mein bahut khush hu ki muzhe aapke darshan ho gaye........Aapse sirf asuro k uthan k liye .......var prapt karna hai maa..

Shristi k aadikaal se hi hum asuro k saath humesha se bhed bhav hota aaraha hai.........hume dabaya jaa raha hai........Jabki hum Bal...vidya ..aur
tej mein devtao se kuch kam nahi hai

mein yahi chahta hu maa ki ab 14 loko mein hum asuro ka raj ho.....hume hamara adhikar mile......aur isske liye muzhe vo shaki chahiye jo Hamesha hamare kaam mein badha utpanna karnewale Tridev ki Uss putra ...

Jisse Brahamad ka Rakshak kaha jaata hai....Abhi......uska nash kar sake....

Devi - Putra...Jisski tum baat kar rahe ho woh iss bar parashakti ki urja aur shaktiyo k saath utpanna hua hai...

Usse tumhe 14 loko mein jo usski shaktiya hai usse prapt karne se rokna hoga.....aur saath hi saath un loko mein se har mahine ki amvasya ko.....ek kuwari kanya ki bali deni hogi

aur aakhri bali woh hogi jisse tum sansar mein sab se jyada prem karte ho.....

iss trarh jab 14 baliya puri ho jaayegi toh tumhe woh mahashakti prapt hogi
jisse saare 14 lok tumahare adhikar mein aajayege aur Rakshak ki saari shaktiya tumhe prapt ho jaayegi...

aur ho jaayega usska anth....

Aur itna kahkar Devi antardhyan ho gayi......

Ab KS ne Devi ko pranam kiya ....aur chal pada apne mahal......

Apne mahal tak pahuncte pahunchte ussne dekha .....saare asur bas bhog vilas ....aur nashe mein mast ho rahe hai.........asuro ko aise karmhin aur apne udesya se vimuk dekhkar usska Krodh....badne laga.....

jab woh apni sabha mein pahuncha

toh dekha Durmukhasur.....nasshe mein dhut....singhasan par baitha hua hai.....aur asur sundariya.....usski godh mein nagn baithi hui hai....

usse iss baat ka dhyan hi nahi tha k KS waha aagaya hai....

KS - (krodh se) Durmukhasur......

apne pita ki aawaj sunkar woh hadbada kar utha.....lekin nashe ki adhikta k karan niche gir pada....

KS - Kya isiliye mein tumahare bharose tap karne gaya tha.......
meine socha tha tum mere yogya putra ho ...jo .....mere udesya ko pooran karne k liye.....apni poori shakti laga dega.....Lekin tum toh raag rang mein itne magan ho ki Asuro k uttahan k mere maha udesya ko bhi bhul gaya........

aise purta k hone se kya laabh tumahara marna hi uchit hai....

Aur KS ne usse maarne k liye apni talwar pragat hi ki thi ki....

Durmukhasur daud kar usske pairo mein pad gaya....

DSR- kshama kare pitashri.....
kshama kare........maine pura prayatna kiya tha .....aapke udeshya ko pura karne ka......aur Mayasur ko dharti par bhej diya tha......hum bahut had tak safal bhi ho rahe the......

lekin wahi hamara param shatru bich mein aagaya......usske saath yudh mein Mayasur aise ghayal hua ki ab tak achet awastha mein hai.....

Phir DSR ne KS ko saari baatein vistar se batayi.........usske baad humne dharti par bahut baar asuro ko bhejne ka prayatna kiya.......lekin Rakshak k banaye hua kawach k kaaran hum safal nahi hue ......aur iss vajah se humara utsaha bhi jaata raha.....

parantu ab aagye ho.....pitshri ab naye urja k saath hum apne lakshya ki aur agrasar honge......

KS saari baat samaz chuka tha.....
phir woh MS k mahal pahuncha aur apni shaktiyo se usse thik kar diya....

Mayasur ne Asur samrat ko apne saamne dekhkar Pranam kiya.....

KS - Mayasur .....( apne tapobal ki shakti se abhimantrit bhasam usse dete hue) yeh lo aur Aur humare shatru dwara band kiye dwar par dal do.....isse woh kawach hat jaayega aur.....hamare asur phir se dharti aur upar k saato lok jaa sakenge.....

MS bhi chala gaya.....aur Rakshak dwara Tallok se prithvi lok jaane wala marg asuro k liye khol diya tha.....

KS ne iss baat ki bhi hidayat di thi k jab tak woh apne udeshya ko poora na kar le ...tab tak gupt rahe.....jisse Rakshak ko iss baare mein pata na chale.....

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla update jald hi.....

 

[abhi1008]

Superb update bhai...
Jab bhi koi action scene likh ko olz thora detail mei likhna

Bahut bahut dhnyawad bhai aapke saath k liye.....?????

Bhai abhi toh sahi action ki shruwat hi nahi hui hai....kahani bahut laambi hai
Abhi 14 Loko mein bahut si fights aur kai vaar asuro se saamba hone wala hai.....aapki salah k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad.......
mein poori koshish karunga....

bas aise hi saath banaye rakhe...

Latest update 52 posted....

 

[abhi1008]

Mast update h bhai

Bahut badiya update bhai

Mast update ????

Excellent update

Mast hai bhai

shandar update....

Awesome update

Fantastic update

Awesome update

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Nice update

Thanku to all my wonderful frnds for your love , support & comments...
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keep reading...& pls stay connected

Latest update 52 posted...

 

[abhi1008]

Mla confirm to mara hai na nahi to aap last m mara zaankar nahi likhte .

Thanku so much bhai aapke support aur comment k liye..?????

MLA bhi ek raaj hai bhai jo aage jaakar khulega

aise hi saatha banaye rakhe...

Latest update 52 posted....