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ab tak aapne dekha.....
Kalasur ki tapasaya poori hui
aur assuri mata ne Rakshak ko samapt karne ka tarika bataya
ab agee.....
Mayasur ne Abhi k dwara band kiya hua assuro ka raasta KS ki di hui babhuti se khol diya tha......
Aur woh wapas pritvi lok aagaya....
ab chalte hai patal lok se upar RASATAL LOK.....Yaha naaglok hai
rasatal mein iss samay ...........
Nagraj Prasana ka raaj tha....
jinki Patni Naagmata ULUPI thi....jo Maa parvati ki param bhakt thi..
aur inki ek sunder kanya thi
naag rajkumari SULEKHA
Sulekha apne kaksh mein koi chitra bana rahi thi......aur jab chitra ban gaya...toh...
Sulekha - uff aaj phir wahi chitra ban gaya .....kuan ho tum ....mein chitra kuch aur banana chahti hu...aur jab ban jaata hai....toh tum saamne aajaate ho.......
Tabhi Uski sakhi...Vinaya.....
kya baat hai sakhi aise...akele kisse baat kar rahi thi......
tabhi Sulekha apne banaye chitra k aage khadi ho gayi.....
Vinaya - arre kya hua...dekhne toh do
....phir chitra dekhkar....ohho toh apne priyatam se baate ho rahi hai....
hi....hi..hi...
Sulekha - kya sakhi tum bhi...mein toh isse jaanti bhi nahi hu.....na jaane kyu bar bar inka chitra hi ban jaata hai
Vinaya - chinta kyu karti ho sakhi ek din jarur aisa aayega....jis din woh swayam tera varan karega ....
tabhi Usski mata ki awaaj aayi.....
aur ussne woh chitra chupa diya...
Ulupi - Sulekha beta.....mein aur tumahare pita tum se kisi baat par charcha karna chate hai...
Sulekha - ne apne maa k charan sparsh kiye...toh maa ne gale laga liya .....Kya mata shri aisi kya mahatv purna baat humse karni hai jiski purva suchna..aapko hume dena pad raha hai.....
Ulupi - baitho putri abhi tumahare pita aate hi honge.....
Tabhi Naagraj Prassana ( NP ) ander aate hue....beta yeh baat tumahare jeewan k saath saath sampoorna naglok se judi hai.....
Naagraj ko dekh kar sakhi chali gayi..
Sulekaha ne apne pita k charan chuye
aur NP ne sur par haath pherte hue ...
aao beta baithkar baat karte hai....
NP - Dekho putri Tum ab badi ho gayi ho.....tum hamari ek hi santan ho...
hamare baad iss lok ki saari jimmedari tumpar hi...hai....
isiliye bahut vichar karne k baad humne tumahara vivah larne ka socha
humare rajya k param pratapi shurveer Senapati Vishank - ne aapse vivah karne ka prastav rakha hai ..
unse accha hume iss poore Naaglok mein aur koi nahi dikha toh humne unke haa kar diya hai....
anpe pita ki baat sunkar Sulekga k upar toh jaise vajrapaat ho gaya....
aur toh haise jad si ho gayi.....
Mata - kya hua putri ...kuch toh bolo..
aur kandho par haath rakha toh ....
apni mata ko apne samip dekhkar gale lag kar rone lagi.....
achanak apni haste hur beti ko yu rote hue dekhkar dono bahut pareshan ho gaye....
Ulupi - kya hua putri kuch toh bolo..
hum tumahare liye khushi ka sandesh laaye aur tum aise ro rahi ho...
Sulekha - maa nein yeh vivah nahi kar sakti hu....
NP - Aakhir kyu putri ....senapati poore naaglok mein sabse sunder hai balwan hai....kya kami hai unnmein
Sulekha - Mein kisi aur se prem karti hu....unhe hi maine mann hi mann pati maan liya hai......ab mein usske siwa kisi aur se vivah nahi kar sakti.....
Ulupi - kaun hai woh beta...tum toh kabhi iss mahal se bahar bhi nahi gayi ho ....kaha mili ussase ......aur tumne pahle kyu yeh baat nahi batayi....
Sulekha - muzhe nahi pata , ki woh kaun hai......mein kabhi unnse mili bhi nahi hu...
NP - yeh kya vyang kar rahi ho......jissase kabhi mili nahi ...dekha nahi ...usse apna pati maan liya...
Tab Sulekha ne apne banaye hue saare chitra dikhaye.....aur saari baat batayi......
Jaise hi NP ne chitra dekha.....
NP - MahaRakshak Abhi......Nahi yeh nshi ho sakta....yeh toh maharakshak ka chitra hai parantu hazaro varsh se inhe kisi ne nahi dekha hai ....aur inse tumahara vivah......
Tabhi senapati Vishank waha aate hue
Pranam maharaj........
NP - Aao putra Vishank.....Tum senapati se purva hamare putra k samaan ho.....tumahare pita mere param mitra the.....
Vishank - Maharaj yadi aap muzhe apne outra k samasn maante ho toh
mera ek agrah hai .....aap Rajkumari ko humse vivah karne k liye .....badhya nahi karoge.....
maharaj Rajkumari Sulekha meri mitra hai.....aur unki prasanata hi meri prasannta hai......
Sulekha - dhnyawad mitra....
NP - Thik hai putri mein tumhe ek varsh ka samay deta hu .....
itna kahkar waha se sabhi chale gaye
Vishank waha se chalkar ek gufa mein gaya......jaha ek bade se kaale patther k aage ek agni kund prajwalit tha....
woh waha aasan par baith gaya....
usne apne dahine haath ke angute ko waha pade katar se chira lagaya aur khoon ki kuch bunde uss agni mein daal di ....agni aur bhadak gayi....
aur uss kund mein mass ki aahuti dene laga.......uss samay usski aankhien poori tarah laal thi.....
ab dekhte hai Abhi kya kar raha hai
Iss samay college mein sports festival k liye sports ki practice joro se shuru thi......
Abhi - all rounder.....
Rimpy - Tennis aur chess team lead kar rahi thi......
Lima - Runing and Swiming
Sankush aur Rinkush - atheletics...
Usske liye college k pt sir Shursingh
sab students se kadi mehnat kara rahe the...
Rimpy - hafte hue ...haaaa basss ab aur nahi daud sakti abhi ....pls ab kal
Abhi - Aise kaise chalega Rimpy tennis k liye tumhe apna stamina aur badana hai.....
tabhi Sanku aur Rinku ....dono ground
ka chakkar laga kar haafte hue ....
ba.....s bhai ab kya bacche ki jaan lega......sir ..toh chale gaye ab hume bhi jaane de......
Abhi ne sabko thaka hua jaankar ....
chutti de di.....
Ab college k baad Rimpy ko saath leke nikal gaya.......
Rimpy - Shona , abhi mera ghar jaane ko mood nahi hai ,
Abhi - toh , chalo phir se practice shuru karte hai....
Rimpy - haaye re mera anadi sayyinya
na jaane dil ki baat ..
Abhi - accha ji......aaj sweetu badi romantic ho rahi hai.......
ab toh tumhe dikhana hi hoga ki hum anadi nahi khiladi hai......
aur dono cahl pade ussi jagah jaha school time mein Abho outing mein aaya tha.....aur bhediyo se saamna hua tha......
waha pahunchte hi......dono waha k sunder nazare mein kho gaye.....water fall ko dekhte dekhte dono wahi kinare paani mein apne paaon dale baith gaye....
Abhi - sweetu.....
Rimpy - hmmmm
Abhi - jara idhar dekhona...
aur Rimpy ka chehra apni aur ghumate hue......usski aankon mein dekhne lagta hai
Rimpy - Aise mat dekho na jaan.....
tumahari yeh aankhein ....mein kahi doob na jaau......
Abhi - Dub toh mein gaya hu ...tumahare pyar ki gahrayi mein , jitna utarta jaata hu utna hi aur gahra paata hu .....
Rimpy ko Abhi ki baato mein chupe pyar ko dekhkar ussase lipat gayi
( ab abhi ki jubani)
meinne kaskar Rimpy ko gale laga liya
zharne ki aawaj aur Rimpy k saanso ki aawaj mere ander ek sangeet sa paida kar rahi thi....
usske woh gulabi amrit ras se bhare thartharate hoth jaise muzhe nimatran de rahe the......usske gaalo ko chuti lat ko apni ungli se usske kasn k picche lagakar.....meine usse ....naram naram kaalin k jaise ghass par lita diya....aur uske upar aakar ..apne honth ussko honto se mila diye
jaise hi humare honth mile Rimpy ki baahein mere pith par kas gayi ....aur hum ek dusre k hontho ko bas chusne lage........hamare badan ek dusre se aise chipke the k bich se hawa bhi na jaaye.....
ab mere haath usske stano tak pahunch gaye.....aur maine tham liya
Hum dono ki dhadkan ek dum tez ho gayi......aur maine dhire se usske ek stan ko daba diya......
Rimpy - ssssshhh ...ahhhh jaan..
yeh kaisa ahsas hai .....mat karo na
nahi toh mein pagal na ho jaau...
ab mein ussko chumte hue garden tak aagaya ....aut betahasha chumne laga
Rimpy - ahhhh ...kya...k.....kkkkar .
rrrrahe...uffff.....ab mein dusra stan bhi dabane laga......Rimpy kisi jal bin machli ki tarah tadapne lagi
mein - uff sweetu tumahari yeh siskiyan muzhe aur pagal bana rahi hai ......ab mein kapdo k upar se hi usske stano ko chumne laga.....
Rimpy - ahhhh ...uffff ab..bas..karo.
na...babu....
Ab mera chottu akad kar bada ho gaya tha.....aur muzhe bada hi takleef de raha tha.......mein ohir se usske upar aagaya.....aur Rimpy k hoto ko apne hontho mein lekar chusne laga
mera ling kapdo k upar se Rimpy k prem dwar par ragad raha tha.....hamare sharir se peele rang ki urja nikal rahi thi......
Hum dono hi prem aur vasna k milan mein dub rahe the....k tabhi....
mere locket se aawaj aayi jo sirf main hi sun sakta tha......
ruk jaao janu .....yadi tum nahi ruke toh ab tak ks tumahara saara sangharsh vyarth ho jaayega......bina vivah k yadi tumahara milan hua toh
tumahari shaktiya chali jaayegi.....
aur burai ki jeet ho jaayegi.....
Muzhe spna udeshya yaad asgaya aur mein sambhal gaya ...aur Rimpy k upar se haat gaya...
Rimpy - kya hua jaan
mein - nahi Rimpy ...Vivah k bina issase aage hum nahi badh sakte ...yeh galat hoga.....
Rimpy - shona.....tum thik kaj rahe ho
aaj muzhe apne babu par garv hai k
tum chahte toh asj kuch bhi kar sakte the...lekin tumne hume bahne se roka
Love you my shona....
Mein - Love you too my sweetu....
phir humne apne kapde sahi kiya aur nikalne hi wale tha.....k....talab k ek kinare hume kuch alag sa dikha ....
jab hum dono waha gaye toh ek bahut hi sunder ...jaise doodh mein mile hue kesar k jaisi rangat.....gulabi honth
jakhmi haalat mein waha padi thi jisdka aadha sharir paani mein aur aadha bahar.....
abhi k liye itna hi......
agla update kal......
ab tak aapne dekha.....
Kalasur ki tapasaya poori hui
aur assuri mata ne Rakshak ko samapt karne ka tarika bataya
ab agee.....
Mayasur ne Abhi k dwara band kiya hua assuro ka raasta KS ki di hui babhuti se khol diya tha......
Aur woh wapas pritvi lok aagaya....
ab chalte hai patal lok se upar RASATAL LOK.....Yaha naaglok hai
rasatal mein iss samay ...........
Nagraj Prasana ka raaj tha....
jinki Patni Naagmata ULUPI thi....jo Maa parvati ki param bhakt thi..
aur inki ek sunder kanya thi
naag rajkumari SULEKHA
Sulekha apne kaksh mein koi chitra bana rahi thi......aur jab chitra ban gaya...toh...
Sulekha - uff aaj phir wahi chitra ban gaya .....kuan ho tum ....mein chitra kuch aur banana chahti hu...aur jab ban jaata hai....toh tum saamne aajaate ho.......
Tabhi Uski sakhi...Vinaya.....
kya baat hai sakhi aise...akele kisse baat kar rahi thi......
tabhi Sulekha apne banaye chitra k aage khadi ho gayi.....
Vinaya - arre kya hua...dekhne toh do
....phir chitra dekhkar....ohho toh apne priyatam se baate ho rahi hai....
hi....hi..hi...
Sulekha - kya sakhi tum bhi...mein toh isse jaanti bhi nahi hu.....na jaane kyu bar bar inka chitra hi ban jaata hai
Vinaya - chinta kyu karti ho sakhi ek din jarur aisa aayega....jis din woh swayam tera varan karega ....
tabhi Usski mata ki awaaj aayi.....
aur ussne woh chitra chupa diya...
Ulupi - Sulekha beta.....mein aur tumahare pita tum se kisi baat par charcha karna chate hai...
Sulekha - ne apne maa k charan sparsh kiye...toh maa ne gale laga liya .....Kya mata shri aisi kya mahatv purna baat humse karni hai jiski purva suchna..aapko hume dena pad raha hai.....
Ulupi - baitho putri abhi tumahare pita aate hi honge.....
Tabhi Naagraj Prassana ( NP ) ander aate hue....beta yeh baat tumahare jeewan k saath saath sampoorna naglok se judi hai.....
Naagraj ko dekh kar sakhi chali gayi..
Sulekaha ne apne pita k charan chuye
aur NP ne sur par haath pherte hue ...
aao beta baithkar baat karte hai....
NP - Dekho putri Tum ab badi ho gayi ho.....tum hamari ek hi santan ho...
hamare baad iss lok ki saari jimmedari tumpar hi...hai....
isiliye bahut vichar karne k baad humne tumahara vivah larne ka socha
humare rajya k param pratapi shurveer Senapati Vishank - ne aapse vivah karne ka prastav rakha hai ..
unse accha hume iss poore Naaglok mein aur koi nahi dikha toh humne unke haa kar diya hai....
anpe pita ki baat sunkar Sulekga k upar toh jaise vajrapaat ho gaya....
aur toh haise jad si ho gayi.....
Mata - kya hua putri ...kuch toh bolo..
aur kandho par haath rakha toh ....
apni mata ko apne samip dekhkar gale lag kar rone lagi.....
achanak apni haste hur beti ko yu rote hue dekhkar dono bahut pareshan ho gaye....
Ulupi - kya hua putri kuch toh bolo..
hum tumahare liye khushi ka sandesh laaye aur tum aise ro rahi ho...
Sulekha - maa nein yeh vivah nahi kar sakti hu....
NP - Aakhir kyu putri ....senapati poore naaglok mein sabse sunder hai balwan hai....kya kami hai unnmein
Sulekha - Mein kisi aur se prem karti hu....unhe hi maine mann hi mann pati maan liya hai......ab mein usske siwa kisi aur se vivah nahi kar sakti.....
Ulupi - kaun hai woh beta...tum toh kabhi iss mahal se bahar bhi nahi gayi ho ....kaha mili ussase ......aur tumne pahle kyu yeh baat nahi batayi....
Sulekha - muzhe nahi pata , ki woh kaun hai......mein kabhi unnse mili bhi nahi hu...
NP - yeh kya vyang kar rahi ho......jissase kabhi mili nahi ...dekha nahi ...usse apna pati maan liya...
Tab Sulekha ne apne banaye hue saare chitra dikhaye.....aur saari baat batayi......
Jaise hi NP ne chitra dekha.....
NP - MahaRakshak Abhi......Nahi yeh nshi ho sakta....yeh toh maharakshak ka chitra hai parantu hazaro varsh se inhe kisi ne nahi dekha hai ....aur inse tumahara vivah......
Tabhi senapati Vishank waha aate hue
Pranam maharaj........
NP - Aao putra Vishank.....Tum senapati se purva hamare putra k samaan ho.....tumahare pita mere param mitra the.....
Vishank - Maharaj yadi aap muzhe apne outra k samasn maante ho toh
mera ek agrah hai .....aap Rajkumari ko humse vivah karne k liye .....badhya nahi karoge.....
maharaj Rajkumari Sulekha meri mitra hai.....aur unki prasanata hi meri prasannta hai......
Sulekha - dhnyawad mitra....
NP - Thik hai putri mein tumhe ek varsh ka samay deta hu .....
itna kahkar waha se sabhi chale gaye
Vishank waha se chalkar ek gufa mein gaya......jaha ek bade se kaale patther k aage ek agni kund prajwalit tha....
woh waha aasan par baith gaya....
usne apne dahine haath ke angute ko waha pade katar se chira lagaya aur khoon ki kuch bunde uss agni mein daal di ....agni aur bhadak gayi....
aur uss kund mein mass ki aahuti dene laga.......uss samay usski aankhien poori tarah laal thi.....
ab dekhte hai Abhi kya kar raha hai
Iss samay college mein sports festival k liye sports ki practice joro se shuru thi......
Abhi - all rounder.....
Rimpy - Tennis aur chess team lead kar rahi thi......
Lima - Runing and Swiming
Sankush aur Rinkush - atheletics...
Usske liye college k pt sir Shursingh
sab students se kadi mehnat kara rahe the...
Rimpy - hafte hue ...haaaa basss ab aur nahi daud sakti abhi ....pls ab kal
Abhi - Aise kaise chalega Rimpy tennis k liye tumhe apna stamina aur badana hai.....
tabhi Sanku aur Rinku ....dono ground
ka chakkar laga kar haafte hue ....
ba.....s bhai ab kya bacche ki jaan lega......sir ..toh chale gaye ab hume bhi jaane de......
Abhi ne sabko thaka hua jaankar ....
chutti de di.....
Ab college k baad Rimpy ko saath leke nikal gaya.......
Rimpy - Shona , abhi mera ghar jaane ko mood nahi hai ,
Abhi - toh , chalo phir se practice shuru karte hai....
Rimpy - haaye re mera anadi sayyinya
na jaane dil ki baat ..
Abhi - accha ji......aaj sweetu badi romantic ho rahi hai.......
ab toh tumhe dikhana hi hoga ki hum anadi nahi khiladi hai......
aur dono cahl pade ussi jagah jaha school time mein Abho outing mein aaya tha.....aur bhediyo se saamna hua tha......
waha pahunchte hi......dono waha k sunder nazare mein kho gaye.....water fall ko dekhte dekhte dono wahi kinare paani mein apne paaon dale baith gaye....
Abhi - sweetu.....
Rimpy - hmmmm
Abhi - jara idhar dekhona...
aur Rimpy ka chehra apni aur ghumate hue......usski aankon mein dekhne lagta hai
Rimpy - Aise mat dekho na jaan.....
tumahari yeh aankhein ....mein kahi doob na jaau......
Abhi - Dub toh mein gaya hu ...tumahare pyar ki gahrayi mein , jitna utarta jaata hu utna hi aur gahra paata hu .....
Rimpy ko Abhi ki baato mein chupe pyar ko dekhkar ussase lipat gayi
( ab abhi ki jubani)
meinne kaskar Rimpy ko gale laga liya
zharne ki aawaj aur Rimpy k saanso ki aawaj mere ander ek sangeet sa paida kar rahi thi....
usske woh gulabi amrit ras se bhare thartharate hoth jaise muzhe nimatran de rahe the......usske gaalo ko chuti lat ko apni ungli se usske kasn k picche lagakar.....meine usse ....naram naram kaalin k jaise ghass par lita diya....aur uske upar aakar ..apne honth ussko honto se mila diye
jaise hi humare honth mile Rimpy ki baahein mere pith par kas gayi ....aur hum ek dusre k hontho ko bas chusne lage........hamare badan ek dusre se aise chipke the k bich se hawa bhi na jaaye.....
ab mere haath usske stano tak pahunch gaye.....aur maine tham liya
Hum dono ki dhadkan ek dum tez ho gayi......aur maine dhire se usske ek stan ko daba diya......
Rimpy - ssssshhh ...ahhhh jaan..
yeh kaisa ahsas hai .....mat karo na
nahi toh mein pagal na ho jaau...
ab mein ussko chumte hue garden tak aagaya ....aut betahasha chumne laga
Rimpy - ahhhh ...kya...k.....kkkkar .
rrrrahe...uffff.....ab mein dusra stan bhi dabane laga......Rimpy kisi jal bin machli ki tarah tadapne lagi
mein - uff sweetu tumahari yeh siskiyan muzhe aur pagal bana rahi hai ......ab mein kapdo k upar se hi usske stano ko chumne laga.....
Rimpy - ahhhh ...uffff ab..bas..karo.
na...babu....
Ab mera chottu akad kar bada ho gaya tha.....aur muzhe bada hi takleef de raha tha.......mein ohir se usske upar aagaya.....aur Rimpy k hoto ko apne hontho mein lekar chusne laga
mera ling kapdo k upar se Rimpy k prem dwar par ragad raha tha.....hamare sharir se peele rang ki urja nikal rahi thi......
Hum dono hi prem aur vasna k milan mein dub rahe the....k tabhi....
mere locket se aawaj aayi jo sirf main hi sun sakta tha......
ruk jaao janu .....yadi tum nahi ruke toh ab tak ks tumahara saara sangharsh vyarth ho jaayega......bina vivah k yadi tumahara milan hua toh
tumahari shaktiya chali jaayegi.....
aur burai ki jeet ho jaayegi.....
Muzhe spna udeshya yaad asgaya aur mein sambhal gaya ...aur Rimpy k upar se haat gaya...
Rimpy - kya hua jaan
mein - nahi Rimpy ...Vivah k bina issase aage hum nahi badh sakte ...yeh galat hoga.....
Rimpy - shona.....tum thik kaj rahe ho
aaj muzhe apne babu par garv hai k
tum chahte toh asj kuch bhi kar sakte the...lekin tumne hume bahne se roka
Love you my shona....
Mein - Love you too my sweetu....
phir humne apne kapde sahi kiya aur nikalne hi wale tha.....k....talab k ek kinare hume kuch alag sa dikha ....
jab hum dono waha gaye toh ek bahut hi sunder ...jaise doodh mein mile hue kesar k jaisi rangat.....gulabi honth
jakhmi haalat mein waha padi thi jisdka aadha sharir paani mein aur aadha bahar.....
abhi k liye itna hi......
agla update kal......
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Bahut bahut dhnyawad friends aapke pyar aur support k liye....
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Thanku soo much to all viewers aapke support liye ......
aise hi saath banaye rakhe
Latest update 53 posted......
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Latest update 53 posted......
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Thanku soo much frnds aapke support & comment k liye
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Scared Cat
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Now what's going on. Who is that girl
Awan baba
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Nice fantastic bahi.
Bahi story zaroor complete karna.
Bahi story zaroor complete karna.
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Aryanv
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Fantastic update