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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)
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Excellent update brother
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for ne story Meri traf se best of luck
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Excellent brilliant fantastic good story
Behad shandar nice plot bro
Abhi to start hi hoi h story or itni awesome h agy to dhmakedar bne gi
Great job bro writing skill bhi kafi badhiya h bus thora or focues kro to jo thori boht spelling mistake h khtam ho Jay gi
Behad shandar nice plot bro
Abhi to start hi hoi h story or itni awesome h agy to dhmakedar bne gi
Great job bro writing skill bhi kafi badhiya h bus thora or focues kro to jo thori boht spelling mistake h khtam ho Jay gi
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Update - 7
abhi tak aapne dekha...kaise Rakesh ne kaal bankar ...sanghar kiya...ab aage....
R.V.S - Ritu beta tum aur Addu apni mom k saath abhi ghar jaao , aur kuch aaram kar lo yaha mein hu
mom - nahi mein Abhi ko chodkar kahi nahi jaanewali
Ritu & Adira dono ek saath ...
haa papa hum bhai k saath hi yaha se jaayenge
Papa - Samzha karo tum log, kal se tum dono ne aaram nahi kiya , aise mein dono ki tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi, yaha kya karogi ..... hum kal subah hi Abhi k discharge papers banwa kar usse ghar le aayenge....
Aur ghar mein itne mehman hai.....
kal ki tayari bhi tum logo ko karni hai
Beta Ritu ....aur Addu kya tum apne bhai k thik hone ki khushi aur 18th birthday ki party arrangment nahi karogi...
Ji haa humara hero Abhi ka kal janamdin hai sep 5
Abhi k birthday party k baare mein sunkar teeno ghar jaane k liye maan gaye.
R.V.S ne ph karke driver aur gaurds ko bulaye aur unhe ghar bhej diya.
Abhi aaram ki nind soya tha
R.V.S - beta Rakesh jis kaam k liye tum gaye the uss mein koi pareshani toh nahi aayi (ek rahshymai muskurahat k saath)
Rakesh - ( aankhon mein chamak aur muskurahat k saath) Nahi uncle koi problem nahi aayi .
Yaha farmhouse par dekhte hai
raat k kareeb 10 baj rahe the, aur farmhouse k bahar police k gadiya aur media walo ki bhid lagi hui thi ,
IG - Kya hua sp kya report hai ander ki
SP - sir jab hum yaha aaye bahar teen gaurds ki laashe padi hui mili , aur ek gaurd pagal jaise ho gaya jo bhut bhut bol raha hai, aur jab hum ander gaye toh waha ka sceen dekhkar humare jawano ki haalat kharab ho gayi hai
IG - aisa kya hai ander , ig itna kahkar
ander gaya, arre yeh kya ander jaate hi turant bahar bhag kar aaya aur ultiya karne laga
tab tak foriensik team aur morchury k log aaye aur woh apna kaam karne lage.
wha police ko bahut matra mein drugs aur hatiyar baramad hue jinki kimat lagbhag 5 hazar ccr thi
ab dekhte hai hero k paas powers kaise aai ....kaun hai woh
Jab iss sansar mein kuch nahi tha tab kewal ek shakti yaha sarva vyapt thi
jiska na koi roop tha aur na koi aakar
jo vedo mein aanek naamo se jaani jaati hai jaise ... parbrahma, parashakti, ...ityadi
ussi shakti se ek sankalp utha
एकोऽहं बहुस्यायाम्
iss sankalp se janam hua Trishakti ka
Brahma, Bhagwan Vishnu ,Aur Bhagwan Shiv
jab yeh teen dev pragat ho rahe the tab uss samay jo urja pragat hui woh jab brahmand mien faile charo taraf andhere se mili tab janm hua ek Shaitan ka jisko hum ..eblis ..naam se jaanenge
jab tridevo dwara sansar ki rachna hui 14 lok bane, tab tridevo ne dekha ki sansar mein paap failne laga
Tridevo ne vichar kiya ki humne toh iss paap aur buraiyo ka nirman nahi kiya, toh phir yeh kaha se fail raha hai
tab Maa parashakti ki awaaj waha gunji .... isska meri hi urja aur tamogun se nirman hua hai
shrishti k santulan k liye yeh jaruri hai
acchai k saath burai, sukh k saath dukh tabhi iss sansar ka santulan bana rahega
yeh jab jab apni sima paar karne ki koshish karega tab isska daman karne wali shakti ka nirman tumein hi karna hoga
ussi samay tridevo k sharir se urja nikal kar ek aakar lene lagi Aur janam hua 14 loko mein santulan banaye rakhnewale Rakshak ka
Usne prgat hote hi Tridevo ko pranam kiya
Bhagwan Shiv - Yashasvi bhav putr tum hum teeno ki urja se prgat hue ho , isiliye tummhe hum teeno ki shakiya hogi putra . tumhe aayu aur samay kabhi badhit nahi karega isiliye tumahara naam hoga Abhinav
Abhinav - Aagya kare prabhu muzhe kya karna hoga
Vishnu ji - putra tumhe in 14 loko ka santulan banaye rakhna hai
shrishti k niyam k anusar burai aur paap ko raaj k liye prithvi se niche k 7 lok diye gaye hai.....jab jab yeh apni seema todkar upar k 7 loko mein aane ki koshish kare tumhe innka daman karna padega
tridevo k kahne par hi har yug mein Abhinav apni iccha anusar naya sharir dharan karta hua 14 loko ka raksha karnelaga,
jab jab bhi Eblis ne apna paap ka rajya failane k liye kisi kali shakti ka nirman kiya , tab tab hi Abhinav ne unka nash kiya
ab aate hai iss samay chal rahe kaliyug ki aur
aaj se lagbhag sava panch hazaar saal pahele mahabharat yudh k baad hi kaliyug ki shuruwat hui
tab Ebils ne socha ab toh kaliyug hai aur iss yug mein mera raaj phailane se koi nahi rok sakta
toh Eblis ne kurukshetra mein mahabharat yudh k samay maare gaye paapi logo ki aatmao ko aur unke rakt ko ikaatha kar k nirman kiya ek param shaktishali Asur Kaalaasur ka
aur apni shaki aur maya se nirman kiya uske saathi yodhao ka jinme Eblis ne apni shaktiyon ka sanchar kar diya......
innke naam hai .....
Mayasur, (senapati) ,Lobhasur, Kaamasur, Krodhasur, Mohasur, madasur, aur matsarasur
yeh sab milkar kaliyug mein burai aur paap failane lage tab Abhinav ne iss yug mein pragat hone ka socha
kyu ki prithvi par divya sharir nahi manav sharir dharan karke hi karm karna padta hai
isiliye devtao ko bhi aapna dayitva nibhane k liye yaha avtar lena padta hai
aise hi yogya vansh mein janm lene k liye prithvi par khoj karne laga
tabhi tridevo ki prena se pahunch gaya Roopnagar k purva disha mein ek sarovar k paas Ek bada shivalaya hai waha ek vishal yagya chal raha tha aur yagya kar rahe the waha k rana
RANA VIKRAM SINGH aur unki patni apne divya roop se Abhinav ne dekha ki Rana k chehre par ek tej hai aur Bhagwan Shiv ki kuch shaktiya bhi
tab Abhinav ne kuch faisla liya aur badal gaya prakash roop mein aur Sama gaya R.V.S k saath hawan mein baithi hui Naina Devi k garbh mein....
Abhi k liye itna hi .....
agla update jald hi .........
abhi tak aapne dekha...kaise Rakesh ne kaal bankar ...sanghar kiya...ab aage....
R.V.S - Ritu beta tum aur Addu apni mom k saath abhi ghar jaao , aur kuch aaram kar lo yaha mein hu
mom - nahi mein Abhi ko chodkar kahi nahi jaanewali
Ritu & Adira dono ek saath ...
haa papa hum bhai k saath hi yaha se jaayenge
Papa - Samzha karo tum log, kal se tum dono ne aaram nahi kiya , aise mein dono ki tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi, yaha kya karogi ..... hum kal subah hi Abhi k discharge papers banwa kar usse ghar le aayenge....
Aur ghar mein itne mehman hai.....
kal ki tayari bhi tum logo ko karni hai
Beta Ritu ....aur Addu kya tum apne bhai k thik hone ki khushi aur 18th birthday ki party arrangment nahi karogi...
Ji haa humara hero Abhi ka kal janamdin hai sep 5
Abhi k birthday party k baare mein sunkar teeno ghar jaane k liye maan gaye.
R.V.S ne ph karke driver aur gaurds ko bulaye aur unhe ghar bhej diya.
Abhi aaram ki nind soya tha
R.V.S - beta Rakesh jis kaam k liye tum gaye the uss mein koi pareshani toh nahi aayi (ek rahshymai muskurahat k saath)
Rakesh - ( aankhon mein chamak aur muskurahat k saath) Nahi uncle koi problem nahi aayi .
Yaha farmhouse par dekhte hai
raat k kareeb 10 baj rahe the, aur farmhouse k bahar police k gadiya aur media walo ki bhid lagi hui thi ,
IG - Kya hua sp kya report hai ander ki
SP - sir jab hum yaha aaye bahar teen gaurds ki laashe padi hui mili , aur ek gaurd pagal jaise ho gaya jo bhut bhut bol raha hai, aur jab hum ander gaye toh waha ka sceen dekhkar humare jawano ki haalat kharab ho gayi hai
IG - aisa kya hai ander , ig itna kahkar
ander gaya, arre yeh kya ander jaate hi turant bahar bhag kar aaya aur ultiya karne laga
tab tak foriensik team aur morchury k log aaye aur woh apna kaam karne lage.
wha police ko bahut matra mein drugs aur hatiyar baramad hue jinki kimat lagbhag 5 hazar ccr thi
ab dekhte hai hero k paas powers kaise aai ....kaun hai woh
Jab iss sansar mein kuch nahi tha tab kewal ek shakti yaha sarva vyapt thi
jiska na koi roop tha aur na koi aakar
jo vedo mein aanek naamo se jaani jaati hai jaise ... parbrahma, parashakti, ...ityadi
ussi shakti se ek sankalp utha
एकोऽहं बहुस्यायाम्
iss sankalp se janam hua Trishakti ka
Brahma, Bhagwan Vishnu ,Aur Bhagwan Shiv
jab yeh teen dev pragat ho rahe the tab uss samay jo urja pragat hui woh jab brahmand mien faile charo taraf andhere se mili tab janm hua ek Shaitan ka jisko hum ..eblis ..naam se jaanenge
jab tridevo dwara sansar ki rachna hui 14 lok bane, tab tridevo ne dekha ki sansar mein paap failne laga
Tridevo ne vichar kiya ki humne toh iss paap aur buraiyo ka nirman nahi kiya, toh phir yeh kaha se fail raha hai
tab Maa parashakti ki awaaj waha gunji .... isska meri hi urja aur tamogun se nirman hua hai
shrishti k santulan k liye yeh jaruri hai
acchai k saath burai, sukh k saath dukh tabhi iss sansar ka santulan bana rahega
yeh jab jab apni sima paar karne ki koshish karega tab isska daman karne wali shakti ka nirman tumein hi karna hoga
ussi samay tridevo k sharir se urja nikal kar ek aakar lene lagi Aur janam hua 14 loko mein santulan banaye rakhnewale Rakshak ka
Usne prgat hote hi Tridevo ko pranam kiya
Bhagwan Shiv - Yashasvi bhav putr tum hum teeno ki urja se prgat hue ho , isiliye tummhe hum teeno ki shakiya hogi putra . tumhe aayu aur samay kabhi badhit nahi karega isiliye tumahara naam hoga Abhinav
Abhinav - Aagya kare prabhu muzhe kya karna hoga
Vishnu ji - putra tumhe in 14 loko ka santulan banaye rakhna hai
shrishti k niyam k anusar burai aur paap ko raaj k liye prithvi se niche k 7 lok diye gaye hai.....jab jab yeh apni seema todkar upar k 7 loko mein aane ki koshish kare tumhe innka daman karna padega
tridevo k kahne par hi har yug mein Abhinav apni iccha anusar naya sharir dharan karta hua 14 loko ka raksha karnelaga,
jab jab bhi Eblis ne apna paap ka rajya failane k liye kisi kali shakti ka nirman kiya , tab tab hi Abhinav ne unka nash kiya
ab aate hai iss samay chal rahe kaliyug ki aur
aaj se lagbhag sava panch hazaar saal pahele mahabharat yudh k baad hi kaliyug ki shuruwat hui
tab Ebils ne socha ab toh kaliyug hai aur iss yug mein mera raaj phailane se koi nahi rok sakta
toh Eblis ne kurukshetra mein mahabharat yudh k samay maare gaye paapi logo ki aatmao ko aur unke rakt ko ikaatha kar k nirman kiya ek param shaktishali Asur Kaalaasur ka
aur apni shaki aur maya se nirman kiya uske saathi yodhao ka jinme Eblis ne apni shaktiyon ka sanchar kar diya......
innke naam hai .....
Mayasur, (senapati) ,Lobhasur, Kaamasur, Krodhasur, Mohasur, madasur, aur matsarasur
yeh sab milkar kaliyug mein burai aur paap failane lage tab Abhinav ne iss yug mein pragat hone ka socha
kyu ki prithvi par divya sharir nahi manav sharir dharan karke hi karm karna padta hai
isiliye devtao ko bhi aapna dayitva nibhane k liye yaha avtar lena padta hai
aise hi yogya vansh mein janm lene k liye prithvi par khoj karne laga
tabhi tridevo ki prena se pahunch gaya Roopnagar k purva disha mein ek sarovar k paas Ek bada shivalaya hai waha ek vishal yagya chal raha tha aur yagya kar rahe the waha k rana
RANA VIKRAM SINGH aur unki patni apne divya roop se Abhinav ne dekha ki Rana k chehre par ek tej hai aur Bhagwan Shiv ki kuch shaktiya bhi
tab Abhinav ne kuch faisla liya aur badal gaya prakash roop mein aur Sama gaya R.V.S k saath hawan mein baithi hui Naina Devi k garbh mein....
Abhi k liye itna hi .....
agla update jald hi .........
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