Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Black water]

Super fantastic update bhai

 

[RAAZ]

Dekhtay hai narayan ke ab 2 bhakt aamne saamne honge to kia hota hain aur abhi kaisay is jatil. Samaya ko jal karta hain. Aur dekhtay hi rakesh jo khud mahakal ka ansh hai kia woh us bomb se bach pata hain aur us bomb ke phootne ke kia parinaam nikalte Hain. Abhi to aapki story me kaafi peechay hoon par jaldi hi sath hoonga.

Update - 102

ab tak aapne dekha k sutal lok mein KS k danavo mein Vikat k kaaran matbhed ho gaya......
Uaday ko Asuro dwara horahe shadyantra k baate mein pata chal ...
Sanghatak aur uski team jeevit hai .....
Shivali Aur Vibhakta k kaaran Asuro mein badle hue manav thik hone lage ........

Ab aagee ......

Sutal lok mein Veeru paksh k bhawan ek kahsh mein .....ek danav kanya .....CHAITALI.....jo VK ...ki beti thi ...baithi kisi k vicharo mein khoyi thi .......

Chaitali mann mein - Na jaane kaun hai woh ....jab se dekha hai .....ussiki k baare mein soch rahi hu .....yeh muzhe kya ho gaya hai.......hayye kya balwan hai ...kaise uss Vajrabahu ko ....ussne charo khane chit kar diya .......
usse dekhkar aise lag raha hai jaise mein issika janm janmanter se pratiksha kar rahi thi.........Sach mein naam ki tarah tum bhi bade Vikat ho........

Aur Bhawan k bahar dhire dhire ek ek karke KS k Danav Vikat ki taraf hone lage ......jo bhi Danav ek baar usse milta woh ussi ki taraf ho jaata .....

Yaha Aapko batana jaruri hai ....Danav aur Asur dono alag prajati k hai.......
Danav jaha janm se hi vishal kay aur balwan hote hai .....Aur dikhne mein bhi koi khas nahi hote ...yeh bal pradhan jaati hai .....inka janam kashyap rishi ki Danu naam ki patni se hua tha

aur Asur Roop ... bal aur mein devtao jaise hi hote hai....yeh bal k saath saath apne gyan ka bhi prayog karte hai....bas inmein tamogun ki adhikta ..ahankar.....Aur burai k prati prem k kaaran ...patal lok mila hai.....yeh kashyap rishi ki Diti naam ki patni se utpanna hur hai.....

Vk jab dekha toh Vikat se baat karne k liye apne bhawan bulaya ........

Jab Chaitali ko pata chala K Vikat uske pitshri se milne Bhawan aaya hai ....toh woh bhi usse dekhne ki iccha se Darwaje ki oot mein khadi ho gayi ...jaha se usse Vikat saf dhikayi de raha tha jo baatein waha ho rahi thi woh sab sunayi bhi de raha tha....

VK - Aahir tum chahte kya ho .....apne aapko hamre dal ka hi batate ho aur hum se virudh danavo ka bhadka rahe ho.......muhze toh yeh bhi lag raha k tum koi vastavik danav bhi ho k nahi......

Vikat - aap meri baat chodo ...parantu aap toh ek danav hi hona ......

VK - haa hu ...toh.....tum kahna kya chahte ho ....

Vikat - mere kahne ka yeh tatparya hai k aap ek danv hokar bhi danavo ko vinash k marg par le jaa rahe ho.......Jiss lok mein rahte ho ussi k raja k virudh shadyantra rachte ho ....

VK - mein danavo k virudh nahi hu .......yeh lok hum danavo ka hai aur ispar hamara hi adhikar hona chahiye.....lekin Bali toh ek asur hai....hume uski satta sweekar nahi .....

Vikat - Yadi M.Bali Asur hai toh KS kya hai woh bhi toh ek asur hai.......

VK - Haa asur hai parantu unhone hume vachan diya hai k Raja bali ko yaha se hatakar Yaha humara raj sthapit karenge .......

Vikat - wah KS ne kaha aur aapne maan liya ......app kya sochtr ho ks aise hi aapko yeh lok aaup dega ......Kya aap uske chal ko nahi jaante .......MBali k hatte hi woh sab danavo ko apna gulam bana lega ........

aur ek baat aap baataye kya MBali ne kabhi yaha danavo par koi atyavhar koya ya unhe apna sewak banaya ....nahi na .....Unhone toh apne se shatruta rakhnewale Aur baar baar shadyantra bannanewale Danavo ko kuch nahi kiya .....

aap kya samzhte hai ....kya unhe aapke chal k baare mein nahi pata ...woh sab jaante hue bhi chup hai ...issi aasha mein k aap sab ek na ek din sambhal jaaoge .......

Aur yadi aap yaha apni saata chahte ho ...toh sidhe usne baat karo ....muzhe poora vishwash hai k aapki samasya ka haal nikal aayega .......

VK - Parantu woh Vishnu ka pujari hai jissne hamesha hum danavo ka nash hi kiya hai.......

Vikay - Nash unhi danavo ka hua hai jo shristi ka vinash hi chahte the .....jo asahay logo ko maarte the ....jo ....Apne bal k mad mein andhe hokar Apne ko hi bhagwan maaan baithe the ...

VK - Shayad tum thik kahte ho parantu KS ...yadi ab hum usski iccha k virudhh kuch karenge toh woh hume jeevit nahi chodega .......ab bahut der ho gayi hai....

Vikat - aap KS ki chinta na kare .......iskliye ...
mein aapko vachan deta hu k KS Aapka kuch ahit nahi kar paayega ...

VK - Tum itne Vishwas k saath kaise kah sakte ho .....tum danav nahi ho sakte........kuan ho tum ..

Vikat ne Pahele VK ki aankho mein dekhkar uske man k bhavo ko padha phir apne Vastavik roop mein pragat ho gaya ......ab waha Abhi tha ...

Abhi ko dekhar VK k chehre par muskurahat aagyi.....

VK - ohhhh toh Brahmand ka rakshak Abhinav .....mera andesha sahi tha .....jab achanak Hamare danav tumahare paksh mein hogaye tab muzhe laga k tum koi danav nahi ho....

Abhi - toh ab aapka kya vichar hai.......

VK - mein aapke saath hu ......Parantu aap apna vachan yaad rakhna .......

yaha darwaje k piche chipkar VK ki putri Chaitali sabhi baato ko sun rahi thi....aur jab ussne Abhi k vastavik roop ko dekha toh chauk gayi .....lekin Abhi ki baato ne aur uske roop ne Chaitali k hridaya mein uske prati aadar aur prem jaga diya .......

Abhi - Aap iss baare mein apni putri se bhi vichar kar sakte ho.....jo chipkar hamari baatein sun rahi hai.....

Chaitali Apne baare mein sukar ...turant ...VK ....k saamne aayi ......

Chaitali .- Nahi pitashri ......meine kuch nahi suna ...mein toh bas....

VK - accha agar nahi suni toh tumhe kaise pata inhone aapke baare mein kuch kaha.......

Vk ki baat sunkar Chaitali ko apni bewakufi aur utawla pan samaz aagaya aur sharmakar chali gayi .....

VK - Meri beti hai Chaitali ...badi toh ho gayi hai...lekin abhi bhi bachpana nahi gaya....

phir thodi der aise hi baate hoti rahi......

Ab KS k paksh k Adhiktam danav Abhi k paksh mein ho gaye the ....bas kuch hi bacche the jinko burayi mein hi maza aata tha.....

Yaha KS ko bhi andaja ho gaya tha .....k kuch toh gadbad chal rahi hai Sutal lok mein .....issliye ussne .....kissi aise Asur ko bhejne ka socha .....jo Bali ki hi tarah Narayan ka upasak ho .......

Badi khoj k baad usse Bibhishan k vash ka asur ....Pralamb ...mila jo Narayan ka upasak tha...aur uske paas Swayam narayan dwara diya gaya Narayanastra tha .......Ram Ravan yudh k baad Ram ji ne Bibhishan k vansh ko Abhaydan diya tha....jiske Kaaran Narayan ya unka avtar ...uske vansh k kisi bhi asur ki hatya nahi karega ...

Par prahna tha k kaise usse Bali k virudfh prayog kare .......

isske liye KS swyam usse mila ....Aur usske saamne apna prastav rakha .......Lekin woh nahi maana .....

KS - Aap samz kyu nahi rahe ho issmein aapka hi laabh hai .........Aapke purvaj ne Ram ji ki kitni sahyata ki thi .....lekin unko kya mila kewal lanka ka raaj .......
Aur Bali ko Sirf yagya karne aur galti se dan karne k kaaran sakshat Narayan ka saath.........

Yadi aap uss lok par apna adhikar karte ho toh aapke isht Narayan sada aapke sang rahenge ....Kyu ki uhone Sutal lok ka dwarpal hone ka vachan diya hai......

Aur unke aapke purvaj ko diya hue Vachan k kaaran aap ko vnka abhaydan prapt hai ...isiliye woh yudh mein aapke saamne nahi aayenge..........

Ek taraf Narayan ka Sanidhya aur meri mitrata Aur dusri taraf saare jeewan Narayan k darshan ki pratiksha ab aap hi vichar kare aapko kya chahiye....

Yaha dusri taraf rajasthan mein Chittorgarh k Gupt Tah khane mein Lobha sur ...Mohasur...aur Kaamasur apne kaam mein lage hue the....

Apne vash mein kiye hue scientist ki team Atomic weapon bannae mein lagi hui thi ....jo itna power ful tha k uske ek visfot se ....Poora ka poora ek shaher ka pal bhar mein nash ho sakta tha .....Aise 4 Weapon waha ban rahe the ........

Lobhasur (LR) - Aur kitna samay lagega ....isske banne mein .....

Sci - Wepon toh ban gaye bas unko activate karne k liye unki chip bana baaki hai ....ek ban gayi hai.......baaki 3 aaj hi ban jaayegi.....

Mohasur (MR) - Bas hum abhi apne lakshya k bikul karib hai .......

Tabhi waha aawaj aayi ....sahi kaha lakshya k karib toh tum pahunch gaye ....lekin woh lakshya hai tumahari maut .....

Jab LR....aur ..MR ne uss taraf dekha toh ....Waha tha sangharak ........Rakesh k kaal roop k saath.......

LR - toh tum zinda bach gaye lekin ab aur nahi........

aur usne apni energy bim Sangharak par chodi ....jisse ..sangharak ne apni talwar par rok diya .....

uss samay Kamasur (KR)....aaya ....aur jab ussne ....Sanghark aur Rakesh ko dekha toh .....Apni energy ball se piche se unpar war karne hi wala tha k Rakesh full speed mein waha pahunch gaya .....Aur uski gardan pakadkar utha diya ek zhatke se aage phenk diya....

aur koi hota toh uski garden hi ukhad jaati ........KR girte hi turant khada ho gaya.......

KR - itne aasani se nahi .....koshis kar k dekh lo ..jara hum bhi dekhe kitna dum hai tummein......

Ab ek taraf the 3 aur ek taraf the 2......

Sangharak ne vichar kiya ki yaha innse ladna matlab kile ka dhwast ho jaana .....toh usne Rakesh ki taraf kuch ishara kiya ......aur tezi se apni talwar se ek portal banakar teeno ko .....Ret se bhare ilake mein le aaye ......

teeno asuro ko pata hi nahi chala k kya hogaya.....jab teeno ne charo taraf dekha toh samaz mein aaya .......

Ab teeno apne energy balls se sangharak par war karne lage .......

( Abhi k sangharak roop k paas sirf divya talwar ki shakti ...fighting skills ....speed aur teleport ki hi shaktiya thi )

Sangharak Tezi se apni talwar gumate hue hue aage badne laga .....unmein se kuch energy balls usse bhi lage jisse thode bahut nishan uske jism par pad gaye......
usne apne speed se aage badkar MR k pet mein kick maari aur Saath hi talwar ka ek jordar war LR ki garden par kiya .......MR toh kick k power se dur jaakar gira .......lekin LR ko kuch nahi hua .....

Sangharak abhi iss baare meh soch hi raha tha ....k ...KR ...ne ...tezi se aakar uske jabde par jordar punch maara .....jisse Sangharak k muh se thoda sa khoon aagaye ....

Teeno asur tahake maarkar hasne lage .....

Bas itna hi jor hai ......Abhi toh shuruwat hai .......

Tab Sangharak ne apna man shant kiya aur unke ant k kaaran k baare mein vichar kiya ......itne mein teeno Uspar tut pade .....lekin sangharak k mann shant hone ki wajah se usse unke ek ek waar ka pata chal raha tha ....aur woh ninja technique ka istemal karke ...unke waar ko ....kabhi back flip kabhi front filp ......se block bhi ka raha tha ......aur saath saath mein kick aur punches se unkpar eaar bhi kar raha tha .......

Tabhi uska ek waar galti se KR k andkosh par pada jisse woh tadap utha .....jisse dekhkar Sangharak ko unke khatme ka raaj pata chala ....

ussne unke naamo par dhyan diya ........
Kamasur k pran uske ling aur Andkosh mein the ....

Lobhasur k pran uske Mann mein ........

Aur Mohasur k pran uske hriday mein the ........

Tab Sangharak ne ek jordar waar KR k dono tango k bich kiya jisse KR ka ling aur Andkosh poori tarah kuchal gaya aur woh chikhte hue niche gir pada aur samapt ho gaya .......

Apne saathi ki aisi maut dekhkar dono asur samz gaye k sangharak ko unke maut ka raaz pata chal gaya hai ........toh unohne yaha se nikalne mein hi apni bhalayi samzi ......

Abhi woh jj paate k sangharak ne apni talwar ko MR k dil ka nishana banakar choda aur Talwar sidha MR k dil k aarpaar ho gayi....aur woh bhi samapt ho gaya......

Lekin tab tak Lobhasur waha se bhag gaya tha.....

Yaha lab mein Rakesh Sangharak k ishare ko samaz gaya tha ........aur unn Atomic Weapon k paas pahuncha .....toh dekha ...k ek weapon activate kar diya hai ....

Usnr Scientist ko pucha lekin woh toh hypnotise the .......Jab tak Rakesh ne unka hypnotism toda tab tak der hi chuki thi .....

Scientist ka kahna tha k ab activate ho chuka weapon ko roka nahi jaa sakta ....yadi iski chip nikal di jaaye toh yeh samay se pahele yahi blast ho jaaye ga ..........aur yeh saara shahr aur kila samapt ho jaaye ga ........abhi 2 hr iske blast mein baaki the .......

Bakki k Teeno wepon ko Rakesh Rakesh ne scientisto ki madat se dismantle kar diya aur ....unke brain se sab yaade mita di .....aur teleport hokar unhe kile par chodkar ......wapas weapon k paas aagaya ...iss sab mein koi 1 hr lag gaye .....

iss weapon ka kya kare usse kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ....

Yaha Lobhasur Patal lok mein KS k paas pahuncha aur sab bata diya .....KS ....ne crysal mein dekha k Rakesh wepon lekar waha se nikal ne hi wala hai .......

KS - murkh asur yadi haarkar hi aana tha toh kuch tabahi macha kar aana tha .....

Tab lobhasur usse batata hai ki bina paasword dale yadi woh weapon waha se hataya jaaega toh woh samay se pahele hi blast ho jaayega ....

Yaha Rakesh jaise hi weapon uthane gaya toh waha screen par usse password manga gaya........Lekin Rakesh ne uss or dhyan nahi diya aur uss weapon ko utha liya .......

uske uthate hi usmein se beep beep ki aawaj tez hone lagi toh Rakesh ne dekha ki ab sirf 1 min baaki hai ...usse kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha....ki kya kare ...woh uss wepon ko lekar antariksh mein gaya .....Aur ussi samay Antariksh mein ek jor dar dhamaka hua jiski gunj prithvi tak pahunch gayi....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update raat ko......



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[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Asif khan]

Update - 129

Abhi ki nazre jaise taher si gayi thi ......

Woh thi Ritu jisse yaha aane k baad apni satyata ka gyan ho gaya tha ......

aaj usse yeh pata tha k woh Abhi k janmjanmanter ki sangini hai ...Woh haath mein thali lekar ...Abhi ka Swagat karne aayi thi ....aur saath mein the Rajguru Satyananda (RS) aur Jana Lok k mukhya adhikari ...

Ritu aage badi aur Abhi k maathe par tilak lagaya ......Dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekh rahe the ......ek dusre ko gale lagana chahte the .....bahut kuch kahna chahte the ...lekin .....maryada ki dor mein bandhe hue the......

RS - Swagat hai Rakshak aapka apne lok mein ......

Abhi - Pranam Rajguru .....apke iss swagat k liye aapka aabhar ....

Phir Abhi unke saath Mahal k bhiter gaya ......yeh mahal ...swayam prakashit tha ....jo Abhi ne apni nirman shakti k dwara banaya tha .....Safed roshni mein jaise nahaya hua ho .....

yaha k har kaksh Divya phoolo se saje hue the jo kabhi murzhate nahi the ...unki sugandh .....mantra mugdh kar dene wali thi....

Sab waha ki sabha mein pahunche ....jo Indra sabha se koi kam nahi thi ......Rajguru ne poore vidhi vidhan se Abhi ko Singhasan par bithaya.....

RS - Aaj janalok ko phir se Uska Raja mil gaya hai .......Maharaj Abhinav ...aapko punah iss Singhasan par virjman dekhkar hume badi khusi ho rahi hai ......ab muzhe poori aasha hai k punah 14 loko mein ek santulan sthapit ho jaayega .....

Abhi - Rajguru ...sabse pahele toh aapne bade sucharu dhang se meri anupasthi mein iss lok ki jimmedari sambhali .....iske liye aapka bahut bahut dhnyawad ....

aur dusre hume iss Rajya k maharaj kahna thik nahi hoga ....hum toh bas Tidevo ki aagya ka paalan karte hai ...aur unhi k dwara di hui shaktiyo se aur aap jaise Guru k margdarshan se hum inn 14 loko mein Santulan banaye rakhne mein safal hote hai....

RS - Aapka kahna satya hai ....
yahi toh aapki udarta hai .....

Nahi toh pad k ahankar mein Swayam devraj ka bhi kai baar patan hua hai .....

Aur rahi baat aapke aupasthiti mein sanchalan karne ki ... toh humne bhi bas apna kartaya ka nirwaha kiya ......Parantu KS k kaaran ab sthiti humare haath se nikalti jaa rahi...

Kaale dragon k bhiter mein ab Eblis ki tamoguni urja jo supt padi thi woh ab jaag rahi hai .....aur issi kaaran .....usse sambandhit loko mein burai aur paap badte jaa rahe hai ...jisase burai ki takate aur prabal hoti jaa rahi hai .....

Hume shighra hi usse rokna hoga .....

Abhi - Aap satya kah rahe hai ...Rajguru ....pritvi se leka ..patal tak ...logo k mann mein paap karne ki pravriti din par din badti jaa rahi hai ......yadi aise hi raha toh stithi niyantran se bahar ho jaayegi ......Aap baataye ab hume kya karna hoga ......

RS - aap toh sab kuch jaante hi hai .....iske liye aapko satya ki urja k saath saath Safed dragon ki bhi urja ka prayog karna hoga ....

Abhi - hume pata hai ..parantu Abhi humare paas Janlok ki Urja nahi hai ...aur uske bina ..hum Safed dragon ko niyantrit nahi kar sakte ........

RS - Isska bahut saral marg hai ....aapko shigra hi ab Jana lok ki shakti se vivah karna hoga ....
jisase aapko iss lok ki urja ...aur aapki shakti punah prapt ho jaayegi ......

Uske baad sabha mein aur charcha chali ....Abhi ne baaki sabha sado ko Pritvi se upar k 7 loko k pratik Maniyo ki suraksha karne ki jimmedari ek ..ek ..sabhasad ko di ....jisase ..kaali urja ....ki shakti se eblis un maniyo ko bhi dushit karne mein safal na ho jaaye....jo uper k 7 loko k pratik the

aur sabha sthagit ho gayi ....
Sabha mein Rajguru k dwara .....

Abhi aur Ritu k Vivah ka aayojan kal Abhijeet muhurat mein rakha gaya .......

Abhi Ritu k saath apne bhawan aaya ......Apne kaksha mein pair rakhte hi uski poorani yaadien taaza ho gayi k kaise woh apni teeno patniyo k saath ....iss kash mein raha karta tha ....

Ritu ne Abhi ko kinhi yaado mein khoye hue dekha ...toh ....

Ritu - Aise kya vichar kar rahe ho ...

Abhi - Samay k badlte hue roop k baare mein ...ek samay tha ...jab hum ...yaha apni teeno patniyo k saath raman karte the ....

phir samay ki gati ne hume alag kar diya ......aur aaj apni poornata k bahut nikat hu ......

yeh samay ka chakra hi tha jisne pahele toh tumhe meri badi bahen banaya ..aur ..jab muzhe satya gyat hua toh vastavikta pata chali ....

Ritu - ab bhootkaal ko chodkar vartaman mein aayiye ....aaj k liye yahi satya hai k ab hum phir ek hone wale hai ....lekin iss awsar par ...jinhone hume Mata pita ka prem diya ...itne varsh jis pariwar k sang rahe .....unki aupasthiti muzhe khal rahi hai .......yahi dukh hai k mein unke liye kuch kar nahi paayi....

Abhi - woh kahi nahi gaye Ritu yahi hai mere paas ......mere bhiter....
phir Abhi ne Ritu ko poori baat batayi ......

Ritu - badi prasannata k saath .....toh itni der kyu kar rahe ho ....Tridevo k vardan ko falit karo ...mein unhe dekhna chahti hu ....yadi humare vivah k awsar par woh upasthit hue toh isse jayada prasannata ki baat aur kya hogi .....

unke aashirwad k bina himara vivah adhura hai ....

Abhi - unhe jeevit toh mein bhi karna chahta hu ...parantu uske liye muzhe Samridhi shakti ki bhi aawashyakta hai ....jo hamare milan k baad hi muzhe prapt ho sakti hai ......

Ritu - ek marg aur hai ...iss urja ko mein bahar se hi ... aapki urja se mila sakti hu ....

Abhi ko ab marg mil gaya tha ....Woh turant Aasan lagakar dhyan mein baith gaya......Aur 5 kosho ka dhyan karte hue Aanandmaya kosh mein pahuncha ....Waha RVS ...Naina ...aur Ritu ki aatmao ko dekha ....

Abhi Abhi ne ...Pranshakti ....Nirman shakti....Prakriti shakti...teeno ki urja ko ek karke ..teeno ki aatmao ko uss urja se paripurna kiya ....Ritu bhi Apni samridhi shakti ki urja Abhi k bhiter pravesh kara rahi thi .......

Ab woh teeno aatmaye ....,panch kosh se paripurna hogayi thi .....Toh Abhi ab Vibhakt siddhi ka prayog karke unhe apne sharir se alag kiya ....

Ab Teeno ko Teidev k vardan aur Abhi ki urjao k dwara apna sharir prapt ho gaya tha ....Aur saamne khade the ...RVS ...Naina ..aur ..Addu ..apne poorna roop mein ......

Ritu aur Abhi unn teeno ko dekhkar bahut khush hue ......

Ritu toh Naina k gale lag gayi ......dono ki aankhon mein khushi k aansoo the ......

RVS ...bas khade dono ka milap dekh rahe the .....aur Addu ne jab apne bhai ko saamne dekha ...toh ..woh ...bhi bhaiya pukarte hue Abhi k gale lag gayi ....Abhi k bhi aankhon mein apni pyari gudya ko milkar aansoo chalak uthe ......aur Addu bas Abhi k gale lagkar roye jaarahi thi ....

Abhi - bas kar gudiya ....dekh aise rote nahi hai .....
ab sab thik ho gaya hai na....aur tu toh meri bahadur gudiya hai .....dekh aise royegi toh muzhe bhi rona aajayega ....

Abhi ne Addu k aansoo ponche ......

Addu - Bhai . ....muzhe laga tha k ab mein aapse kabhi nahi mil paaungi ....jab uss bure rakshas ne vaar kiya tha .....aapko pata hai muzhe bahut takleef hui thi .....sab jagah dard horaha tha ....phir pata nahi hum sab kaha chale gaye the ......ab hum yaha kaise aagaye .....

RVS Naina aur addu ko apni mrityu k baad se ab tak ka safar kuch yaad nahi tha ....

Teeno apne aapko aur Ritu ko yaha dekhkar hairan the ....Aur woh bhi rajsi vastro mein .....

Addu se milkar Abhi RVS aur Naina k charan chuye .....dono ne Abhi ko gale laga liya ......

Addu - Bhai aap yaha k raja ho .......aap iss dress mein bilkul ek Raja ki tarah lag rahe ho ...aur di bhi kitni beautiful lag rahi hai ....hum kaha par hai ....yeh .mahal kiska hai .....

Abhi - arre gudiya bas ..bas...itne sawal ek saath ....

RVS - haa beta yeh sab kya hai ...aur hum yaha kaise aagaye ...jaha tak hume yaad hai k ...hum par uss asur k dwara pranghatak waar hua tha toh hum bach kaise gaye.....

Niana - aur betu yeh Ritu yaha inn kapdo mein kaise ....yeh kaunsi jagah hai ....Ab muzhe apne andar koi power bhi dikhayi nahi de rahi hai......

Ab Abhi unhe kaise bataye k Ritu aur uski shadi ho rahi hai ....tabhi Rajguru waha aate hai ......

RS - aapke saare prashno ka uttar ...him aapko dete hai .....aur unhone Ritu k janm se lekar ab tak ki saari bastien batayi hai .....

Naina - ohh toh Ritu meri beti nahi ...meri bahu hai ....aur iss lok ki rani hai ...aur betu tu yaha ka Raja .....yeh kaisa samay ka chakra hai ......

Ritu - aapke liye toh mein beti hi thik hu ....

Addu - wow ...bhai toh yeh aapka mahal hai kitna sunder hai aur bada bhi ....... aur Ritu di mein toh aapko hamesha ki tarah di hi bulaungi ......

Ritu ne Addu ko gale laga liya ...bilkul meri gudiya ti toh meri chutanki hai ....

sabka mel milap hua kuch der baatien chali ......RVS aur Naina ko Abhi aur Ritu k vivah k baare mein sunkar kuch atpata laga ...jinko ...bachpan se bhai bahen ki drishti se dekha unka vivah .....lekin Ritu Abhi ki janmjanmanter ki patni hai iss satya ko bhi jaan gaye the .......issiliye unhe iss rishte ko sweekar karna hi pada ......

woh din aise hi mel milap aur baaton mein bit gaya....

Dusre din Vivah ki tayari ho rahi thi ...Ritu ka sapna aaj poora ho raha tha ....woh Apne mata pita k aashrwad se hi Abhi se vivah karna chahti thi ...lekin prithvi ..par usse yeh asambhav lag raha tha .......aaj usse ho sambhav hote dekhkar usse khushi ho rahi thi ....

Naina ne khud Ritu ko tayar kiya .....Addu toh Abhi k saath hi bani hui thi ...Aur RVS dono taraf .....
pritvi lok ki vidhi k anusar hi vivah sampanna hua ......RVS ne kanyadan kiya ....

Dono hi ne RVS aur Naina ka aashirwad liya ....

Vivah k baad RVS ...Naina ...aur Addu ka ek sunder aur Vishal bhawan mein rahne ka prabandh kiya gaya......

Ritu suhag sej par ghunghat odhe Abhi ki aaturta se pratiksha kar rahi thi ....har aahat par uski dhadkanein tez ho jaati ...hai .lagta k Abhi aagaya ....

ab woh samay bhi aaya jab Abhi ne apne kaksh mein pravesh kiya ....aur Ritu ki taraf bada ....


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Update - 130

Abhi tak aapne dekha ...RVS ..Naina ..aur ..Addu ko punah jeevan prapt ho gaya hai .......
Abhi aur Ritu ka vivah ho gaya hai .......

ab aagee ........

Ritu Ghunghat mein shuhag sej par baithi thi....aur Abhi dhire 2 badte hue uss tak pahuncha ........Dono jane kyu ab bhi hichkicha rahe the .......kahna karna bahut kuch chahte the lekin kaha se shuru kare aur kaise shuru kare samaz mein nahi aaraha tha .....

Ritu ne dekha k badi der hogayi .....ab iss chuppi ko usse hi todna hoga ....

Ritu - kya soch rahe hai ....kay abhi bhi aapke man mein koi shanka hai ........jo uss tarah sirf khade hai ....

Abhi - nahi ab kaisi shanka ....woh toh bas ek baar iss naye rishte mein pravesh karne se pahle bachpan se lekar ab tak ki saari yaadien sanjo raha tha .......
(aur bed par Ritu k paas baith jaata hai) lagta hai .....Rani sahiba ko sabar nahi ho raha hai......

Ritu - ab sabar kaise hoga ...itne saal jo intejar kiya hai ....ek Janam k baad aaj hamare punar milan ki ghadi aayi hai .....

Abhi - accha ji ..toh rani sahiba ...yeh ghoonghat kyu ....hum koi aapke liye naye toh nahi jo humse bhi parda kar rahe ho .....

Ritu - yeh toh parampara hai ghunghat tih aapko hi uthana hoga .....tabhi baat aage badegi......

Abhi - jo aagya rani sahiba ki .....( aur Ritu ka ghunghat apne haatho se utha deta hai )
Aaj Ritu ka Saundarya milan ki aas mein aur badh gaya tha .....Abhi bas uski sunderta aur uski aankhon mein kho sa gaya .....

Ritu - lo phir kho gaye janab .......aur Abhi k chehre k aage chutki bajati hai......

Abhi - Ab yeh dil bechara kya kare jor husn wale apne naino k teer se isse ghayal kiye jaa rahe hai ...sambhalne mein kuch wakt toh lagega hi na....

Ritu - lagta hai shruwat mzhe hi karni padegi .......

Ab Ritu Abhi ko bed par dhakka deti hai ....aur uske upar zhuk jaati hai ....kamar se niche ka hissa bed par toh uper ka Abhi k seene par ......

Ritu Abhi k hontho tak zhukti hai ...aur ruk jaati hai ......usko apne stan Abhi k seene mein dabne ka ahsas hota hai....Aur Abhi ki garm saanse ......

Josh mein toh Abhi ko dhakka dekar upar aagayi thi ...lekin abhi usse sharam aarahi thi.....

Abhi ne apne haath Ritu k pith par kas liye ...

Abhi - Ab kya hua Ranisahiba ko ....aap toh shuruwat karne wali thi na ...toh karo na mere honth isse pratiksha mein sukh rahe hai ....

Abhi ki baat sunkar Ritu ne ek chota sa kiss kar diya ...

Abhi - yeh kya tha.....isse kiss kahte hai......

Ritu - toh kisse kahte hai .....

Abhi - accha ji asbkuch jaante samazte hue ...humse hi nautanki ....abhi batate hai kiss kise kahte hai ......

aur Abhi ne ek haath uske sir k piche le jaakar apni taraf khincha.....aur Ritu k hontho ko apne hontho mein bharkar ...chusne laga....

Abhi ne pahele uske upper lip ko chusna shuru kiya .......aur Ritu ko apne niche karke ab uske upar aagaya........aur thodi der aise hi honth chune k baad usse alag hua .......

Isse kahte hai kiss .......ab samzhi ....jaaneman .......

Ritu ki saanse Abhi k jabardust kiss se phoolne lagi thi .......jaise haaf rahi ho ...

Ritu - tumne toh meri saanse hi band kar di thi ........yeh bhi koi kiss tha .......kiss hona chahiye sensual ....dekho aise .....aur ......Ritu na .dhire se Abhi k hontho par apne honth rakh diye ..aur sahlane lagi phir dhire 2 Abhi k hontho ko chusne lagi .....Ritu ka dhime gati se chumna ....Abhi ...k andar ek aanand ki lehar si paida kar raha tha....
Aise hi dhime gati se kabhi upper lip kabhi lower lip kabhi ek dusre ki juban dono chuse jaa rahe the......Saans lene k liye dono alag hue ....aur phir shuru hogaye .....

Dono ab madhosh ho rahe the ...ek dusre ki juban ko chuste hue ...ek dusre k bandan ko sahla rahe the... .....Ab Abhi ka haath Ritu k stano tak pahunch gaya tha .....pahle toh ...Sahlakar uske stano ko mehsus karne laga .....phir dhire 2 se Ritu k bade stano ko dabana shuru kiya ....

Abhi k aisa karne se Ritu ki siskaari nikal ne lagi ....uske muh se nikalne wali aawaje Abhi ko aur josh dila rahi thi ..... .

Ritu ki choli mein kase hue stan aur gale mrin pahne hue divya haar Abhi ki chaati mein chubh rahe the ......

Ritu ki saans phulti hui dekhkar Abhi thoda hata aur ...Ritu ko niharne laga ...
Abhi bas ek tak Ritu k Sunderta ko apni aankhon se pi raha tha ....

Ritu aisi lagrahi thi ...jaise kaadev sr milan k liye lalaayit ..Rati .....

Ritu - Abhi ki taraf dekhne lagi ....jaise ..kah rahi ho ......ki kya hua alag kyu ho gaye

Abhi - Ritu ...tumahare siwa aur kya dekh sakta hu ..,..Sach mein tum aaj bahut sunder lag rahi ho
ab Abhi phir uski aankhin mein dekhte hue ...Uske upper aajata hai
Phir se Ritu k hontho ko chumte hue ...saare chehre ko chumne lagta hai ....Ritu k haath Abhi k pith ko sahlarahe the ......Aur Abhi ka haath uske k dono stano ko daba rahe .....

aise hi premleela mein magan dono aage badte hue nirvastra ho jaate hai .....Abhi ek ek karke Ritu k saare gahne utar deta hai ....phir uske ek ek karke vastra...

Ritu bhi iss milan k liye tadap rahi thi isiliye usne bhi Abhi ko nahi roka..

Dono nagn awastha mein bed par ek dusre k aalingan mein bandh gaye....Abhi Ritu k Stano ko masal raha tha ....aur chumte hue uske stano ki or badh raha tha.... aur ek mipple ko muh mein lekar chusne laga ....aur dusre k nipple ko anguthe se masalne laga ......

Abhi k aise karne se Ritu ki tadap aur badh gayi aur uske muh se siskariya tez hone lagi ...
.. yoni kaamras chodne lagi .......

Ritu k haath Abhi k seene par chal rahe the Aur woh bhi Abhi k nipple ko khinch rahi thi ....jisse Abhi ki uttejna bhi badti jaarahi thi .....

Abhi ka Ling poora tan kar akad raha tha ......Abhi ek ..ek karke Ritu k stano ko masalte hue choos raha tha ......ab niche aate hue Ritu k pet ko chumte hue.... apni juban uski naabhi mein dalkar kuredne laga .......

Ritu ne bhi ab Abhi ka ling pakad liya ......aur sahlane lagi ....

jisase ab Abhi ki siskariya nikalne lagi

Ritu ab Abhi k upper aagayi aur Abhi k hilte lambe mote musal jaise ling ko aankhien fade dekhne lagi ........

Ritu ne haath badate hue ....Abhi k ling ko pakad liya ...aur sahlane lagi....dono k badan mein jaise Vasna ki aag bhadak uthi thi.....aur Abhi k pet par chumne lagi....aur chumte hue Ling ki jad tak pahunch gayi.......

Abhi k tane ling ki khushboo usse aur pagal karne lagi thi .....Ab...woh chumte hue Abhi k ling tak aagayi ....
Abhi k laal aur bade tope ko dekhkar Ritu ne uspar kiss kar diya .....jissse Abhi k jism mein sirhan si daud gayi aur uska ling zhatke maarne laga ..

Ritu Abhi k ling ko chum rahi thi chat rahi thi .....thodi der k baad ab Abhi se sabar nahi ho raha tha
Ab Abhi ne Ritu ko bed par litakar uske saate badan ko chumna shuru kiya

Ritu ki aankhien madhoshi mein band hone lagi .....

Abhi ab chumate hue Ritu ki jaangho se hote hue ...uski gori chikni phooli hui yoni tak pahunchta hai aur uspar ek kiss kar deta hai

Ritu - ahhhhh ....shhhhhh......ufff.....jaaaan...... kuch karooo ...karte hue ajeeb si aawaje nikal rahi thi

Abhi ne ab Ritu ki gulabi kamsin kuwari yoni ko dekha ....jiske lips vasna ki adhikta k kaaran fadfada rahe the...aur ussmein se kaamras bahraha tha ....jiski bheeni bheeni khushbu ....Abhi k andar Vasna ko aur bada rahi thi ....

Abhi ab uski yoni par tut pada .....Aur chusne ...chatne laga .....Ritu ...bhi Kamar uthakar Ek haath se Abhi ka sir apni yoni par daba rahi thi .......
Dono ab aur der nahi karna chahte the...aur jald hi apni manzhil tak pahunchna chahte the

Abhi Ritu dono tango k bich aakar ..apne tane ling ko Uski garam yoni par ragadne laga .....
Abhi ne niche zhuk kar pahele Ritu k honth apne hontho mein bhar liye ....

aur ek jahatka maara ......isase Pahele to Ritu ko bahut pida hui ......lekin jaise jaise unki kaam leela aage badhi ......Ritu ko aanand aane laga aur woh bhi kamar uthakar Abhi ka saath dene lagi

Ab dono k sharir se Safed colour ki light nikalkar waha ek prakash punj mein badalne lagi ..

dhire 2 dono ki gati badne lagi .......Aur har dhakke se hone wali aawaje table ki thap ki tarah kamre mein gunj rahi thi ...aur saath mein gunj rahi thi dono ki vasnamayi aawaje....

dono ki gati aur tez hone lagi....dono ko aisa lag raha tha k dono ki urja ek dusre mein samane k liye aatur ho .....

aise hi dono apne charam par pahunche ...aur joro se aawaj karte hue skhalit ho gaye...

Aur woh prakash punj dono k sharir mein sama gaya ...jisase Abhi ko mili Samriddhi shakti aur ...Aur janalok ki urja k ansh ka ek roop

dono thak kar ek dusre ki baaho mein so gaye....

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Update - 131

Ab tak aapne dekha Abhi aur Ritu ka milan ho gaya hai ...aur usse samriddhi shakti .....aur......Janalok ki urja prapt ho gayi hai ...

ab aagee......

Abhi brahma muhurta mein apne samay par utha .........Ritu Abhi ko pakad kar soyi hui thi ...jaane kya sapne mein dekh rahi thi ...jo uske chehre par ek halki si muskurahat thi .....Abhi ne uske mathe par kiss kiya .......aur dhire se uthkar ....kaksh ki gallery mein aagaya .....

Aakash mein yaha yaha taaro ki jagah brahmand k har aakash ganga ka pratibimb tha ......unn aakash gangao ko dekhte hue Abhi ki nazar humahare aakash ganga par pada ......jisse hum Milky way galaxy k naam se jaante hai .....

Jo hume aakash mein kabhi kabhi safed patti ki yarah nazar aati hai .....Iss galaxy mein 200 billion se bhi jayada taare hai .......Jo surya se ko 2000 billoin light year purane hai.......

Abhi ki nazar humari aakash ganga mein sthit saur mandal par padi .......Abhi ne uss pratibimb mein dekha k koi kaala saaya saur mandal ki ......urja ko soakh raha hai aur usmein burai ki kaali chaya phaila raha hai .......

Yeh dekhkar Abhi samaz gaya k ab aur der karna thik nahi .....isse pahele k Eblis ...kaale draogan ki urja se ...apna kaala samrajya phailaye ...usse rokna hoga.....

Abhi mahal mein sthit sananagar mein gaya.....aur fresh hua ........aur mahal k madhya hi dhyan yog sadhna k liye bane upavan ...mein baithkar dhyan karne laga .....

Dhyan mein Abhi k sabhi chakra jagrit hogye the .....Sabhi chakro mein sthit apni urja aur shaktiyo ko niyanyrit kiya ......

Dhyan karte hua Abhi ...brahama randhra meon pahuncha ..jaha k prakash mein ....usse satya ko shakti k saatha ...Satya dikhi .....Abhi ...ne ...Satya ki urja ko apne bhiter jagrit kiya ....

Dhyan karne k baad Abhi ne dekha ....k parakash ho chuka hai ......Ritu bhi uthkar snan kar chuki thi ....Abhi Ritu k saath ...RVS ...aur Naina ..k kaksh mein gaya aur unka aashirwad liya .......

Addu toh confuse thi k Ritu ko di kahe ya bhabi .....lekin khush bhi thi kyu ki ab woh Ritu ka sach jaanti thi.....

Abhi Ab Ritu k saath uss jagah gaya jaha 14 loko ki urja se paripurna 14 mani sthapit ki hui thi ......

yeh sthan 7 .....7...maniyo k do bhago mein bata hua tha .....

7 mani jo upper k loko k partik the waha ...ek ...ek divya prakash faila hua tha ......woh 7 Mani divya aabha se chamak rahe the .......

aur 7 mani jo niche k 7 loko k pratik the ......woh jagah kaali pad gayi thi ...waha k vatavarn mein Eblis k prabhav k kaaran nakaratmak urja phaili hui thi .....aur maniyo ki bhi chamak kam padti jaa rahi thi.......

Abhi aur Ritu k waha kadam rakhte hi .........waha jo adrishya roop mein safed dragon tha woh pargat hua .......woh abhi kamjor lag raha tha ......ebils k kaale dragon par prabhav k kaaran usspar bhi thoda asar ho raha tha ...jisase uski urja kam ho rahi thi .......

Abhi aur Ritu uss dragon k samip gaye ......woh vishalkaye dragon ....apna ...sir ...jameen par tikaye leta hua tha ......Abhi aur Ritu k waha pahunchne par usne halki si aankhien kholkar dekha .
toh usne uthne ka prayatna kiya ...lekin safal nahi hua ....woh bas thodi si aankhien kholkar ...dono ko dekh raha ....tha .....Uss dragon ne halki si aawaj nikali ...jaise dono ka abhivadan kar raha ho ......

Abhi ne apna haath ..dragon k sir par rakha ....uar pyar se sahlane laga .....Abhi ne satya ka smaran kiya toh Satya pragat hui .....Abhi ....k saath saath usne bhi dragon k sir par haath rakha jisase ek satya ki satvik urja uss dragon k bhiter pravesh karne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte woh dragon swastha ho gaya .....aur satya wapas Abhi mein sama gayi .......

Dragon Abhi ko dekhkar bahut prasanna hua .....Apne swami ko itne varsho baad dekhkar khushi se uchalne laga .....uss visjalkaye dragon k aisa uchalne k kaaran waha ki bhumi hilne lagi ...

usne ab aakash mein ek unchi udan bhari ......aur Gol gol ghumte hue ..Abhi par pushpo ki varsha karne laga ......phiir niche aakar Abhi aur Ritu k saamne siir zhuka kar khada ho gaya ...

Ritu aur Abhi ne phir yske sir par pyar se haath phera ...
aur uss par sawar ho gaye .....Unke sawar hote hi uss dragon ne ek baar phir aakash mein udan bhari .....ab Abhi aur Ritu ....uss dragon par baithe hue ...kaale dragon k kshetra ki taraf bade ......

Jaise hi woh uss kshetra mein pahunche ...ek bhayankar aagka gola unki taraf aaya .......jisse Abhi ne apne paas pahunchne se pahele .....jaltatva ki urja se thanda kar diya .......

Abhi ne dekga k saamne apne pankh phaolaye ek vishalkaye kaala dragon khada tha .....ab uss dragon ne bhi aakash mein udan bhari .......aur niranter unpar aag k gole barsane laga

Abhi apni urja se uske har waar ko vifal kar raha tha .......Abhi ko uss kaale dragon ko bina nuksan pahunchaye uspar kaabu paana tha .......

Aaksh mein udte hue woh dragon ab Abhi par tez garam hawa ki aandhi ka waar karne laga .....Ritu ab safed dragon ka sanchalan karne lagi ...taaki kaale dragon ka taamsik urja se bhara koi bhi waar uss safed dragon par na lage ....

aur Abhi dragon k har waar ko rok raha tha ......ab uss dragon ne kaali shakti se bhara baingani rang ki urja ka vaar karna shuru kiya .......Ritu bakhabi uss waar se apne dragon ko bachane lagi ..

jisase woh waar niche aakar takrata .....Abhi ne dekha k jaha bhi uss urja ka waar girta waha ki jagah poori taraha kaali ho jaati .......

Dragon k iss waar ka uttar tha Abhi k paas ..
lekin uska ptayog karte hi woh niche jamin par girta .....jisase usase sambandhit 7 lok mein bhayankar vinash hota .....isiliye uss dragon ko niche laana awashyak tha .......

Abhi ne uske liye naagshakti ka prayog kiya ......aur vishal naag pash mein uss dragon ....ko bandh diya ...isase pahle woh naag paash mein bandkar ...dharti par girta ....Abhi ...ne aakash tatva aur Vaayu tava ...ki urja ka prayog karke usse aakash mein sthir kar diya .....

Aur dhire dhire niche le aaya.....usmein sthit Eblis ki urja k kaaran naag pash k vish ka Uss dragon par asar nahi hua woh bas pash mein bandha hua jameen par aaya .....

Jamin par aakar bhi kaala dragon pash se mukt hone k liye chatpata raha tha .....uske andar ki eblis ki chaya aur prabal roop dharan karne lagi .....

Aur uss dragon se bahut adhik maatra mein kasle rang ki urja nikalkar ek gole ka roop dharan karne lagi .....

Dragon k ander Eblis ki chaya apni haar bardasht nahi kar paa raha tha .....woh ab uss kasle dragon k adhin unn 7 maniyo par apni kaali urja ka prahar karna wala tha ....

Abhi ne jab uss kasli urja k gole ko dekha toh sab samaz gaya.......

yadi yeh urja unn saath maniyo par padti toh phir niche 7 lok poori tarah Eblis k adhikar mein ho jaate.......phir unn loko ka mukt karana bahut kathin hota ......

Jaise hi woh kaali urja ka gola unn 7 maniyo taraf bada .......Abhi ne Apni saatvik urja .....aur safed dragon ki divya urja ....se uss gole ko eok diya .....Safed dragon aur satya ki urja se woh kaala gola nishprabhav hogaya........

Abhi aur Ritu bhi ab apne dragon k saath niche aaye ......Abhi ko pata tha k apna waar vifal hote dekhkar .....Eblis ab kaali dragon ko hi nuksan pahuncha sakta hai .......

Isiliye usne ab Apni satya ki urja ......Aur uss safed dragon ki urja .....dono milakar ...ek prakash kiran ( Light beam ) kaale dragon par chodi .....jiske karan uss dragon mein shtit eblis ki chaya tadapne lagi ...aur isike kaaran woh dragon bhi tadapne laga......

Iska prabhav ..pritvi se lekar patal tak hua ...unn saato loko mein kai jagah bhukamp k zhatke mahsus hue ....

Naag paash mein bande hone k kaaran Eblis ki chaya mukt nahi ho paa rahi thi ....Abhi ne tirant Uss dragon ko naagpaash se mukt kiya ......

jisase uske ander ki eblis ki chaya bahar nikli aur bhayankar aawaj karte hue jana lok sw bahar chali gayi ......

Eblis uss kaale dragon ki bahut si urja ko soakh chuka tha jisase woh dragon kamjor hokar niche gir pada.....

jiska prabhav usase sambandhit loko mein hone laga ......waha ....k saare jeevo ka shwas rukne laga sabki sakti shithil padne lagi .....waha k saare aishwarya lupt hone lage ...

Abhi ..aur ..Ritu ...ne Samriddhi shakti ...ki ...urja...ka prayog ....uss kaale dragon ....par karne lage jisase uski shakti usse punah prapt hui ........aur saato loko urja aur Aishwarya se ek baar phir paripoorna ho gaye.......

Ab woh saat mani bhi jinki Ebils k prabhav k kaaran chamak chali gayi thi ...dubara chamakne lage.......

Kaala dragon ab shant ho gaya tha..... Abhi aur ritu k saamne woh bhi ab sir zhukaye khada tha.......Dono ne uske sir par haath phera .....ab Abhi us dragon par sawar hogaya .....aur aakash mein udan bharne laga.....

dono thodi der unn dragons k saath hi rahe .....

Abhi ne ab waha se gaon k dragon wale mandir tak banaya hua Eblis ka portal bandh kar diya aur satya ki urja ka kawch nirman karke uss jaha ko kasli shaktiyon k pravesh se surakshit kar diya....

Janalok ki asthirta ko punah Abhi ne sthir kar diya ...jisase 14 loko mein santulan banaye rakhe ..

yaha ka kaam abhi k liye samapt ho gaya tha Abhi ko ab patalok ki or jaana tha......

Abhi Rvs ..Naina ...aur Addu ko surakshit rakhna chahta tha ...isiliye jab tak KS ka khatma na ho jaaye ....woh unhe isi lok mein rakhne ka faisla leta hai ......

Teeno ab pritvi lok jaana chahte the ...apne paiwar se milna chahte the ...lekin Abhi k samzhane par unhe uski baad maanni padi .......

Abhi ab unhe wahi chodkar Ritu k saath .....nikal gaya Rasatal ....k naaglok mein ......

Yaha saato loko mein phaili burai phir khatam hone lagi ....pooja paath ...hawan yagya ...daan ....sab phir shuru hogaye .....logo k manobhav acvhe hone lage ....

jiske kaaran KS ko apni janalok ki yojna ki haar Aur Abhi k jeevit hone ka pata chala .......

Parantu iss baat ki pushti k liye woh puja mein baitha aur Eblis se sampark kiye .....lekin koi sampark nahi ho paaya ...

jisase usse apni iss morche par bhi haar ka pata chal gaya ...ab uska krodh saatve aasman tak pahunch gaya tha....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update kal.....

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Update - 132

ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ne kaale dragon ko Eblis k prabhav se mukt kar diya jiske kaaran niche k 7 loko par uska prabhav khatam hua ...aur sab pahele ki tarah normal ho gaya ....

ab aagee .....

Yaha patal lok mein jab KS ko jab apni aur Eblis ki haar ka pata chala toh uska krodh aur badh gaya .....Usne Apne sabhi asur jo carodo ki tadat mein the unhe patal lok mein sanghathit hone ka aadesh diya ....ab ...woh aamne saamne ka yudh karna chahta tha .......

janalok k samay mein aur patal k samay mein bahut antar tha ..Abhi ne janalok mein sava din bitaya tha jo yaha k hisab se 13 din k barabar tha ........

KS ko apni aakhri bali dene mein ab 2 din baaki the .....usne Madalsa ki bali k baare mein kisi ko nahi bataya tha......

Madalsa ki bali k liye usse Durmukhasur ko apne vishwas mein lena tha ......

KS ne Apne dono bete Durmukhasur aur Bhayaksha .....ko apne kaskh mein bulaya ....

Dono bhai KS k kaskh mein aate hi KS ko pranam kiya ......

KS - aao putro baitho ......

DR - Pitashri kya aadesh hai aapne hume kis kaaran bulaya hai .....

KS - putra sabse pahle kya tumhe pata chala k Rakshak aur uska pariwar jeevit hai .....

DR - Haa pitashri parantu yeh samaz nahi aaraha yeh kaise sambhav hua .........

KS - Putra tum abhi Rakshak ki shaktiyon ko nahi jaante .....tum kya sochte ho k itni shaktiya aur asuri maya ka swami hone par bhi main kyu itne varsho se sadhna mein baitha hu .....

DR - aapka kathan satya hai pitashri .....Tridevo ki maarak shaki se mere bharpur vaar se uska saara pariwar samapt ho gaya tha ......parantu...na jaane kis shakti k dwara usne apne aapko aur apne pariwar ko bachaya.....muzhe ab lagta hai ....k maine vyarth hi itni tapasya karke shakti ko prapt kiya ......

KS - putra tapasya se prapt hui shakti kabhi vyart nahi hoti .......jaha tak mein jaanta hu tumahari shakti ..amogh hai .....tumhe uska satik prayog karna hoga ...abhi bhi do awasar hai tumahare paas.....

abhi isske liye do din aur shesh hai kal raatri ko meri 14 bali poorna hogi aur muzhe prapt hojaayegi woh shakti jisase Rakshak ka ant ho jaayega aur uski saari shakti bhi muzhe prapt ho jaayegi aur mein ban jaaunga sarva shaktiman .......

Yaha tumhe bulane ka kaaran ek yeh bhi hai k kal hone wali bali k baare mein tumse vichar vimarsh karna hai....

DR - pitashri aapne aaj tak toh kisi bali k baare mein humse vichar vimarsh nahi kiya ....aur aapko iski aawashyakta bhi kya hai ....aap asur samrat ho ...sarva samarth ho .......bali k liye humse puchne ki baat hi kaha se aayi .....

KS - putra sarvapratham yeh batao k tum asur samrajya k prati kitne nishtha van ho .....

DR - pitashri aaj yeh prashna kyu ......kya aapko meri nishtha par koi shanka hai .......pitashri mein aapko yeh vachan deta hu k Asuro k utthan k liye aur aapki vijay k liye mein apne prano k tyag karne k liye bhi tayar hu .....

KS - apne prano ko nahi putra parantu kya kisi apne priya vyakti k prano ko nyochavar karne k liye tayar ho ......

DR - aap kya aur kisiki baat kar rahe hai pitashri ...spasht kahiye ......

KS - Madalsa ki ....

DR - Madalsa ki ....woh inb sab k bich mein kaha aagayi ...uska iss sab se kya lena dena ....

KS - lena dena hai putra ....lena dena hai ....kyu ki jiski muzhe antim bali nahi deni hai woh Madalsa hi hai .....

DR - Pitashri .....nahi .....Aap aisa nahi karenge ....Madalsa toh aapki sabse priya putri hai ...aur hum jaante hai k sansar mein yadi aap kissi se sabse adhik prem karte hai toh woh hai Madalsa ..aap kisi aur ki bhi bali de sakte hai....phir Madalsa hi kyu....

KS - iske alawa aur koi marg nahi hai putra ....hume bhi iss baat ka bahut dukh hai ...parantu hamare asur samrajya sthapit karne k uddeshya k liya yeh aawashyak hai ......Madalsa ko hum sansar mein sabse jyada prem karte hai .....hamara wohi prem uski bali ka kaaran ban gaya hai putra .......

DR - pitashri aap yeh sab Rakshak k ant k liye hi kar rahe ho na ....yadi mein uss Rakshak ko hi samapt kar du toh ......aapko phir iss bali ki koi aawashyakta nahi hogi .....kal k suryo day se purva ..Rakshak ka mritdeh aapke sanmukh hoga ...yeh mera vachan hai ......
hir aapko Madalsa ki bali dene ki koi aawashyakta nahi hogi .....

Muzhe aagya de ......

Bhayaksha - Haa pitashri ....muzhe bhi bhai ki baat sahi lag rahi hai .......main bhi apne dono bhaiyo ka badla ...Rakshak se lene k liye tadap raha hu ...muzhe bhi bhaiya k saath jaane ki aagya de ......

KS mann mein - ( aise kaise itne varsho ki sadhna ko mein adhura chod du shaktiya parpt karne k liye toh Madalsa ko ab marna hi hoga )

Yaha jab yeh teeno baat kar rahe the ..tab bahar ...Madalsa ki maa Madnassa sab sun rahi thi......usse iss baat ka bahut dhakka laga ..k ..kaisi ek pita ...apne swarth k liye apni hi maasum purti ki hatya ka nirnay le sakta hai ....uss ghin hone lagi apne pati se .....

KS - Thik hai putro humara aashirwad tumahare saath hai ......

DR ..aur Bhayaksh apne pita ko pranam karke waha se nikal gaye ....

Madnassa ne jab dekha k dono bahar hi aarahe hai ...toh woh turant waha se chali gayi lekin KS ki nazro se bach naa saki ......

Madnassa apni putri k prano ki raksha karna chahti thi ....isiliye woh Madalsa ko KS ki hakikat batakar waha se nikalna chahti thi .....

Madnassa jab Madalsa k kaksh mein pahunchi ...tab woh apne bister par baithi gumsum si Abhi k hi khayalo mein thi ....baar baar woh Abhi ko apne dil se nikalne ka prayatna karti thi ....lekin uska perm aur gahra hota jaata tha ....

Madnassa apni putri ko aise khayalo mein khoye dekhkar ....uske paas jaakar uske sir par haath phera ....

Abhi k baare mein sochte hue uski aankho mein baar baar aansoo aajaate the ....jab Madalsa ne apni maa ko apne nikat dekha toh turant apne ansoo poch diye ......

Madalsa - maa aap ...accha hua aap aai mera bada mann tha aap se milne ka ......

Madnassa - toh putri aai kyu nahi ...apni maa se milne k liye bhi itna vichar karna padta hai.......kuch din se dekh rahi hu tum bahut udas si khoyi khoyi si rahti ho ....sahi se apna dyan bhi nahi rakti ho ......tumahare chehre ki woh chamak kaha gayi putri .....kya baat hai ...apne maa ko nahi baataogi ....

Madalsa - kuch nahi maa bas aise hi ......

Madnaasa ne pyar se yske sir par haath phera ......beta dekh mein teri maa hu ...aur teri sakhi bhi ....kya baat hai beta ....iss prakar tumhe andar hi andar ghutate hue dekhkar muzhe bahut dukh hota hai ........

Apni maa ka pyar paakar Madalsa apni maa k gale lag jaati hai aur ..apne dil ka bojh aansoo dwara bahar nikalti hai ....

Madnassa bhi uski pith thapthapakar usse santvana deti hai .....

apni maa k gale lagkar usse ab thoda aacha lagne laga tha ......madnassa ne apne haatho se uske aansoo ponche ......

Madalsa ne ab apni maa ko poori baat batayi ki kaise Abhi kai varsho se uske sapne mein aata tha .....kis prakar woh usse ghayal awastha mein mila aur uske uska upchar kiya .....Woh Abhi ko apna sarwaswa mann chuki thi ...apna pati mann chuko thi ....

lekin jab usse pata chal k jisse woh apna sabkuch maan chuki hai woh hi uske bhaiyo ka hatyara hai aur asur vansh ka sabse bada shatru ....toh ussne Abhi ko bhulne ka bahut praytna kiya lekin aisa kar nahi saki ......

Madalsa ki baat sunkar Madnassa bahut khush hui .......Putri abhi tum Apne pita aur bhaiyo k satya se awgat nahi ho ....unke liye tum apne prem ko thukrao mat ......

Tumhe pata hai tumare janm k samay maa bhagwati ne swapna mien muzhe yeh sanket diya tha k yeh kanya meri amanat hai ....Mera swami k ansh se hi utpanaa veer hoga isska pati jo damay par isse lene aayega ...

Putri itne varsho se mein iski pratiksha kar rahi thi ...ab jab tumne bataya toh ....pata chala jiski mein pratiksha kar rahi thi woh tumse mil chuka hai ....Haa putri yeh Rakshak hi hai ....tum apne pita ki chinta mat karo....

Madalsa - Parantu maa....Woh toh Pitashri k sabse bade shatru hai .....aur hamare bhaiyo k hatyar bhi ....

Madnassa - putri tum abhi apne pita aur bhaiyo k karmo k baare mein nahi jaanti ho ...tumhe ab shigra hi yaha se nikalna hoga ....ussi gupt raaste se jo tumhe pahele se hi pata hai ....kyuki kal tumahare pita ......

Abhi Madnassa aage kuch bol paati k tabhi waha KS aagaya .......

KS - kya baatein ho rahi hai maa beti mein .....jara hume bhi toh pata chale ....

Madnassa - kuch nahi ji ....bahut dino se hamari putri yaha mahal mein hi band hai ....toh socha .thoda kahi bahar bhi nikle yahi baat ho rahi thi ....

KS madalsa k sir par haath pherte hue ....Kal tak yeh kahi nahi jaayegi ....putri kal maha pooja hai .aur tumahar hona waha bahut jaruri hai ......kya tum nahi saath dogi apne pita ka ......kal meri sadhna poori ho rahi hai ....uske baad tum mukt ho .....

Madalsa - kyu nahi pitashri ...mein kahi nahi jaa rahi hu ....Muzhe toh bahut khushi hai k kal aapki itne varsh ki tapasya poorna ho rahi hai ....jiske kaaran aap muzhse bhi nahi mil paate the ..

Madalsa k sir par pyar se haath pherte hui ......Accha ab mein chalta hu putri ....aur haa tumahari mata se abhi muzhe kuch kaam hai ......chalo ...Madnassa .....muzhe tumse kuch baat karni hai ..

Aur KS Madnassa ko waha se lejane lagta hai ....jaate jaate Madnassa ...Madalsa ko kuch ishara karti hai lekin woh samaz hi nahi paati hai ....

KS madnasa ko apne kaksh mein lejaakar dharti par patak dera hai ......

KS - meri beti ko mere hi virudh bhadka rahi thi .....tumhe dar bhi nahi laga yu chipkar humari baate sunte hui ......

Madnassa - toh kya karu ...ek beti ko pita k hi haato marne du ....

KS - haa ...woh ..meri ..sampatti hai ....mere hi dwara uska janm hua hai ...mein kuch bhi kar sakta hu ....tumne bahut badi galti kar di ...madnassa humare bich aakar ...

mann toh kar raha hai k abhi tumhe samapt kar du .....
paratu tumse maine prem kiya tha woh hi muzhe rok raha hai.... aur phir KS ne Madnassa ko apne gupt tahkhane mein kaid kar liya ....


KS ko pata tha k Abhi apni aakhri shakti prapt karne patal lok mein jarur aayega.......usne Madalsa aur Madnassa ki saari baatien sun le thi .......

Ab uske madalsa k kaksh ko bhi poori traha ek kaid mein badal diya ......aur aisi vyastha ki k waha ki har gatvidhi par uski nazar bani rahe ....

KS ne Patal lok ki suraksha aur bada di Apne mayavi asur bhi gupt roop se patal lok ki seema par tainat kar diye ........

usne Patal lok ki seema ko devi nikumbla ki shakti se bandh diye jiske kaaran ...sirf...asur hi usmein pravesh paa sakta tha .......

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