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Update 6
manusya(humans),iswar dwara banai gai sabse ascharyajanak creation hai,ek manusya janm lene ke bad marne tak anek riste banata hai,or use bakhubi nibhana v janta hai,usi risto me se ek hota hai,pyar ya prem,yahi prem ya pyar ki saktiya manusyo ko brahmand(universe) ki sabse saktisali jivo me se ek banati hai,lekin ascharya to ye hai ki aajtak pyar ki ekdam sahi paribhasha koi nahi bata paya,sabhi apne apne tarike se ise define karte chale gaye,ab dekhna ye hai ki ye kahani hame pyaar ki kaisi paribhasha deti hai........??
khoon se sani hui dharti,aisa lag raha tha ki charo taraf khoon ki nadiya bah rahi ho,uspar se charo taraf lashe hi lashe,kisi ki dhar se sar alag tha,kisi ki aankhe phati hui thi or wo apne antim sanse gin raha tha,to kisi ke dono hanth or dono pair me ek ek talwar(sword) ghusi hui thi,ye sabhi chije milkar aapas me nark(hell) se v badtar mahaul bana rahi thi,
vanhi un lasho ke dher ke bichobich khoon se nahaya hua ek saksh,jisne ek talwar pakar rakha tha,us talwar se hote hue abhi bhi khoon ki bunde tapak rahi thi,wo saksh charo taraf satarkta se dekh raha tha,is baat se anjaan ki dur kanhi se ek bhala(spear) bijli ki gati se uske taraf badh raha tha,wo saksha jabtak kuch samajh pata,spear thik uske piche aa chuka tha,tabhi ek bahut jor ki chikh use sunai deta hai,wo jaise hi pich mura ek ladki(girl) uske majboot hantho me jhul chuki thi,chehre par dard,aansu, or ek pyari muskaan ke sath..............
koi sonch v nahi sakta ki itni jabardast perfect body,or ek majboot mentality se bhara hua viraaj khurana,kuch second pahle dekhe gai sapne ki wajah se thar thar kaap raha tha,pasine se lath path body uske dar ki had bata rahi thi,kitne dino baad viraaj ne phir se vahi sapna dekha tha,baar baar ek hi sapna dekne ke bawjood,jab v wo dobara is sapne ko dekhta tha to use har baar naya hi lagta tha,ab to uske dimag me us larki ki chavi ekdam baith chuki thi....use is baat ki chinta nahi thi ki wo wanha nark jaise jagah par talwar lekar kya kar raha tha,use bas is baat ki chinta thi ki "akhir wo larki koun thi,jisse aajtak wo kabhi mila hi nahi,phir wo sapne me kaise,kya kabhi wo milega us larki se,use itna ghabrahat kyo ho rahi hai,ye ek sapna hi to tha??"
viraj ab tak apne aap ko sambhal chuka tha,usne ek gahri saans li or ghari me time dekha,subah ke 4:30 baj chuke the,uske liye aaj ka din uske jindgi ke liye ek nai subah lane wala hai,aaj uske sapne pure hone wale hai,bachpan se jo usne doctor ban kar logo ki madad karne ka sapna dekha tha,uske taraf wo pahla kadam badhane ja raha hai,mumbai ke mashoor medical college me apne balbute uska admission hone wala hai,aaj viraj ka interview hai,or vo isme late nahi hona chahta.....
jaldi se apne aalishaan bed se uthkar wo sidha bathroom chala gaya,15 min me fresh hokar exercise karne ghar me hi bane jim me chal para,1 ghante jim me pasina bahane ke bawjood, dimag se abtak us sapne ko nahi nikal paya,
wo mood fresh karne ke liye nahane chala jata hai,subah ke 6 baj chuke the,viraj puri tarah se taiyaar ho chuka tha,black pant, white shirt with tie,ladkiyo ke dhadkan badhane ke liye kafi the.....
jaldi se usne sare documents ikattha kiya,or nikal para ek nai suruaat ke liye..............
BACK TO KARTIK
sare saman kartik ne pack kar liya tha,apne ghar ke gate par khara intejaar kar raha tha,ki tabhi samne ek car aakar rukti hai,jisme vicky or uska driver baitha tha,vicky nikal kar,
vicky,
"or bhai sab ready?"
kartik andar ke taraf dekhte hue,
"ha bas papa se baat kar lu tab nikalte hai"
tabhi kartik ke papa v bahar aate hue,
ashok(kartik ke papa),
"kya hua baccho sab acche se taiyaari hogayi"
vicky,
"haa uncle sab taiyaari hogayi,bas aapki hi ashirwaad lena baki tha"
vicky or kartik dono jhuk kar pair chute hai,
ashok,
"tum dono apne sapno ko paa lo yahi meri ashirwaad hai,vaise vicky beta jara kartik ka dhyaan rakhna,aaj se pahle aise bahar kabhi raha nahi hai"
kartik man me-dil to mera abhi bhi nahi ho raha aapko chor ke jane ka papa...
vicky,
"aap tention mat lijiye uncle,ab ye meri chatrachaya me rahega,ab to ye doctor ban ke hi aayega"
phir isi tarah kuch der hasi majaak hoti hai,ashok mahoul ko khusnuma banaye rakhne ki koshish me laga raha,wah apne bete ke dil ki baat samajh sakte tha,par vah kuch kar v nahi sakte the,unhe pata tha ki kartik ki padhai v jaroori hai,dono bap bete ki aankho me dekhne se pata chal raha tha ki dono ko aapas me bahut kuch baate karni hai,ekdusre se pyar jatana hai,par afsos ki dono ko ye sab karna aata hi nahi tha,we dono dil or aanko se hi baate kar liya karte the,
kuch isi tarah baate karne ke baad,ashok dono ko bahut kuch samjhate hai,or phir dono ashok se vidai lekar nikal jate hai ek nai safar pe...........
manusya(humans),iswar dwara banai gai sabse ascharyajanak creation hai,ek manusya janm lene ke bad marne tak anek riste banata hai,or use bakhubi nibhana v janta hai,usi risto me se ek hota hai,pyar ya prem,yahi prem ya pyar ki saktiya manusyo ko brahmand(universe) ki sabse saktisali jivo me se ek banati hai,lekin ascharya to ye hai ki aajtak pyar ki ekdam sahi paribhasha koi nahi bata paya,sabhi apne apne tarike se ise define karte chale gaye,ab dekhna ye hai ki ye kahani hame pyaar ki kaisi paribhasha deti hai........??
khoon se sani hui dharti,aisa lag raha tha ki charo taraf khoon ki nadiya bah rahi ho,uspar se charo taraf lashe hi lashe,kisi ki dhar se sar alag tha,kisi ki aankhe phati hui thi or wo apne antim sanse gin raha tha,to kisi ke dono hanth or dono pair me ek ek talwar(sword) ghusi hui thi,ye sabhi chije milkar aapas me nark(hell) se v badtar mahaul bana rahi thi,
vanhi un lasho ke dher ke bichobich khoon se nahaya hua ek saksh,jisne ek talwar pakar rakha tha,us talwar se hote hue abhi bhi khoon ki bunde tapak rahi thi,wo saksh charo taraf satarkta se dekh raha tha,is baat se anjaan ki dur kanhi se ek bhala(spear) bijli ki gati se uske taraf badh raha tha,wo saksha jabtak kuch samajh pata,spear thik uske piche aa chuka tha,tabhi ek bahut jor ki chikh use sunai deta hai,wo jaise hi pich mura ek ladki(girl) uske majboot hantho me jhul chuki thi,chehre par dard,aansu, or ek pyari muskaan ke sath..............
koi sonch v nahi sakta ki itni jabardast perfect body,or ek majboot mentality se bhara hua viraaj khurana,kuch second pahle dekhe gai sapne ki wajah se thar thar kaap raha tha,pasine se lath path body uske dar ki had bata rahi thi,kitne dino baad viraaj ne phir se vahi sapna dekha tha,baar baar ek hi sapna dekne ke bawjood,jab v wo dobara is sapne ko dekhta tha to use har baar naya hi lagta tha,ab to uske dimag me us larki ki chavi ekdam baith chuki thi....use is baat ki chinta nahi thi ki wo wanha nark jaise jagah par talwar lekar kya kar raha tha,use bas is baat ki chinta thi ki "akhir wo larki koun thi,jisse aajtak wo kabhi mila hi nahi,phir wo sapne me kaise,kya kabhi wo milega us larki se,use itna ghabrahat kyo ho rahi hai,ye ek sapna hi to tha??"
viraj ab tak apne aap ko sambhal chuka tha,usne ek gahri saans li or ghari me time dekha,subah ke 4:30 baj chuke the,uske liye aaj ka din uske jindgi ke liye ek nai subah lane wala hai,aaj uske sapne pure hone wale hai,bachpan se jo usne doctor ban kar logo ki madad karne ka sapna dekha tha,uske taraf wo pahla kadam badhane ja raha hai,mumbai ke mashoor medical college me apne balbute uska admission hone wala hai,aaj viraj ka interview hai,or vo isme late nahi hona chahta.....
jaldi se apne aalishaan bed se uthkar wo sidha bathroom chala gaya,15 min me fresh hokar exercise karne ghar me hi bane jim me chal para,1 ghante jim me pasina bahane ke bawjood, dimag se abtak us sapne ko nahi nikal paya,
wo mood fresh karne ke liye nahane chala jata hai,subah ke 6 baj chuke the,viraj puri tarah se taiyaar ho chuka tha,black pant, white shirt with tie,ladkiyo ke dhadkan badhane ke liye kafi the.....
jaldi se usne sare documents ikattha kiya,or nikal para ek nai suruaat ke liye..............
BACK TO KARTIK
sare saman kartik ne pack kar liya tha,apne ghar ke gate par khara intejaar kar raha tha,ki tabhi samne ek car aakar rukti hai,jisme vicky or uska driver baitha tha,vicky nikal kar,
vicky,
"or bhai sab ready?"
kartik andar ke taraf dekhte hue,
"ha bas papa se baat kar lu tab nikalte hai"
tabhi kartik ke papa v bahar aate hue,
ashok(kartik ke papa),
"kya hua baccho sab acche se taiyaari hogayi"
vicky,
"haa uncle sab taiyaari hogayi,bas aapki hi ashirwaad lena baki tha"
vicky or kartik dono jhuk kar pair chute hai,
ashok,
"tum dono apne sapno ko paa lo yahi meri ashirwaad hai,vaise vicky beta jara kartik ka dhyaan rakhna,aaj se pahle aise bahar kabhi raha nahi hai"
kartik man me-dil to mera abhi bhi nahi ho raha aapko chor ke jane ka papa...
vicky,
"aap tention mat lijiye uncle,ab ye meri chatrachaya me rahega,ab to ye doctor ban ke hi aayega"
phir isi tarah kuch der hasi majaak hoti hai,ashok mahoul ko khusnuma banaye rakhne ki koshish me laga raha,wah apne bete ke dil ki baat samajh sakte tha,par vah kuch kar v nahi sakte the,unhe pata tha ki kartik ki padhai v jaroori hai,dono bap bete ki aankho me dekhne se pata chal raha tha ki dono ko aapas me bahut kuch baate karni hai,ekdusre se pyar jatana hai,par afsos ki dono ko ye sab karna aata hi nahi tha,we dono dil or aanko se hi baate kar liya karte the,
kuch isi tarah baate karne ke baad,ashok dono ko bahut kuch samjhate hai,or phir dono ashok se vidai lekar nikal jate hai ek nai safar pe...........
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Bhai iska review de Diya hu phir bhi nice update ab jaldi see new update de do
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Sorry john cena bhai,
pichla update delete ho gaya tha,isiliye daal diya,phir se....new update abhi hi kuch der me aa jayega....?
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