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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma all parts (completed)

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Dragon bekabu hokar apni aag idhar udhar phek raha
tha lekin jaise hi main uske samne aaya aur Maine bola …
Main.. Ruk jao .. Mere awaj ka asar hua aur dragon shant
ho gaya aur mujhe dekhne laga …
Main udte huye uske pith pe sawar ho gaya aur niche
agaye …
Mohan .. Bhai sach me aap dragon king ho .. Dragons aap
ki baat mante hai ..
Main.. Ha wo to pata hai lekin ye dragon bechara yaha
tak pahucha kaose …
Queen… is duniya me dragons nahi hai .. Aur ye bhi mujhe
lagta hai us waqt yaha aaya hoga jab crimson yaha aaya
tha …
Main.. Crimson .. Ye crimson kon hai ..

Queen .. Crimson asal me light magic ka guardian hai ..
Jab bhi light magic spell kiya jata hai tab crimson ka ke
naam se suru hota hai…
Main.. Ha main bhi light magic spell me crimson ka naam
istemal karta hu …
Husna .. Crimson sayad unhi taqato mese ek hoga .. Jisne
dungeon's banaya tha …
Main.. Hmm lekin wo yaha aaya hi kiu tha ..
Queen .. Apne purane malik ke mrotyu ke baad crimson
duniya bhar me bhatak raha tha naye malik ki talash me
Tabhi wo yaha bhi aaya aur uske aane ke baad hi
adventurer city bani hai … crimson ke karan na Jane
kitne hi duniya se naye naye log yaha aate hai ..jinko
crimson parakhta hai .. Lekin mujhe lagta hai ab tak
crimson ki talash puri nahi hui apne malik ki ..
Main.. Hmm to ye chakkar hai ..
Queen .. Ha aur kehte hai na jaha achhai aati hai burai
bhi uska picha karti hai .. Usi tarah crimson ke piche
crimson ki taqat ko kabu karne ke liye devil bhi yaha
pahuch gaya lekin crimson ki taqat ke samne wo tik na

saka aur pata nahi kaha gayab ho gaya bas rah gayi devil
Queen ….
Main.. Crimson ne devil Queen ko kiu nahi Mara …
Queen .. Kiu ke devil se ladai ke baad crimson ki taqat kafi
Ghat gayi thi kiu ke uska koi malik nahi tha isliye use
nayi urja nahi mil rahi thi .. Kehte hai hathiyar kitna bhi
dhardar kiu na ho jabtak usko chalane wala mahir na ho
wo hathiyar bhi kuch nahi kar sakta…
Apne Ghat te taqat ko dekhte huye crimson ne naye malik
ki talash karna hi jaruri samjha aur gayab ho gaya .. Tab
se crimson ko kisi ne nahi dekha ..
Main.. Ye kab ki baat hai ..
Queen .. Kayiso saal pehle ki baat hai aab to main ginti bhi
bhul chuki hu …
Main .. Waise aap ki umar kitni hai ..
Queen .. Yehi koi 1000 saal hogi ..
Main.. Kya 1000 saal ..
Queen .. Ha meri umar nahi badhti main ne bahut sa waqt
dekha hai .. Achha bura …
Mohan .. Bhai aab is dragon ka kya kiya jaye ..

Main.. Ise apne sath dusre padao pe nahi le ja sakte na hi
yaha rakh sakte hai ..
Yumina .. Dady ise bahar mukt kar dijiye aur kisi pahadi
ki aur Jane ko keh dijiye .. Jab hum yaha aapna karya
pura kar lenge tab ise sath le chalenge ..
Main.. Yehi Uttam hoga ...Maine hath aage kiya aue gate
spell ka istemal kiya.. Aur mere ishare se hi black dragon
us gate ke raste nikal gaya …
Husna …. Malik agle padao ki aur chale ..
Main.. Ha lekin abki baar sena hamara raste roke khadi
hogi 11 we padao pe ..
Yumina .. Agar aisa hua to aab unko main rokungi ..
Main.. Nahi yumina main unko saza de sakta tha lekin
unka kya kasur hai wo us nakli Rani ke hukum ke adhin
hai ..
Husna .. Malik lagta hai aab hamare tote ko ek chota aa
karya karna hi chahiye …
Main.. Hahaha .. Ha monark tum karo ye karya bas unko
dara ke bhagana hai .. Kisi ko nukshan nahi pahuchna ..

Monark .. Jo hukum malik .. Monark ne apna roop le liya
aur bahar ki aur chal pada ..
Bahar 11 we padao ke gate ke karib 40 sainik the
hathiyaro ke sath tainat hame dekhte hi war kar dete ..
Tabhi 10 we padao se fungkarte huye nikla bhayankar
roop liye monark …
Uski funkar hi itni bhayankar thi ke sena use dekh titar
bitar ho gayi …
Hum gate ke karib prakat ho gaye gate spell ki madat se ..
Aur sena ko hath dikhate hute andar chal pade …
Monark kuch der aur sena ko gate se dur rakh bapas roop
badal hamare pass pahuch gaya …
Jaise hi hum andar pahuche andhere rasto se nikal ek
jagmagati hui khule faile huye hisse me pahuch gaye ..
Lekin yaha kuch nahi dikh raha tha .. Bas Charo aur the
to bas chattan chote bade.
Hum kafi waqt se waha bhatak rahe the lekin kuch hasil
nahi hua jaise hi hum kuch aur andar pahuche Tabhi
kuch hua Lekin kya pata nahi mujhe mahsoos hua jaise

kuch hil raha hai humne najar dali lekin koi danav nahi
dikh raha tha .. Tabhi achanak ..
Wo hua jise dekh hum bhi chock gaye the … wo hilne wala
koi aur nahi zameen pe pade pathar ke tukre the …
Tabhi ek bada tukra udta hua akar mujhse takraya …
main balance khokar gir pada .. Mujhe koi chot to nahi
aayi Lekin gir gaya bhar us bade pathar ke bhar ke karan

Tabhi ek pathar akar yumina ki aur badha lekin abtak
hum satark ho gaye the .. Yumina ne apno talwar chala us
chattan ke do tukre kar diye ..aisa hi Charo aur se hone
laga him jaise nishana tha wo pathar hame nishana bana
rahe the . lekin him maharath ke sath sabhi chattano ko
ROK rahe the … queen ko humne apne where ke bich me
rakha tha ..
Kuch der me chattane aana band ho gayi .. Lekin tabhi
kuch alag hone laga ..WO chattane ek jagah jama hone
lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte sabhi chattan ek dusre se judte

chale gaye aur ek akar lene laga ek bade danav ka hum
dekhte hi rah gaye ..
WO bishal kai danav hame dekh joro se dahad raha tha
jaise keh raha ho main tumsab ko apne pairo ke niche
kuchal dunga …
Aur jaise hi uska dahadna band hua wo hamari taraf
badh ne laga aur apne pairo ke niche hame Kuchalne ki
kosis karne laga …
Hum usse bachte huye idhar udhar bhag rahe the ..
Yumina ne talwar se hamla kiya lekin chattan pe uska
asar nahi hua …
Hum us chattan se bachne ki kosis karne lage …
Mohan .. Bhai kuch karo aise kaise chalega …
Maine hath aage kiya aur thandar bolt spell ka istemal
kiya us chattan danav pe jor ki bijli giri .. Jisse ek bada
bisfot hua wo danav ke chithde ud gate chattan bikhar
gaye … jaise hi humne socha hum jeet gaye hai tabhi
dobarase chattane jama hone lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte

danav bapas akar le liya … is bar chattan danav pehle se
gusse me tha aur main uski kamjori dhund raha tha… koi
na koi kamjori to hogi hi …
Yumina ne ice magic ka use kiya aur kuch der ke liye
danav ko baraf me jama diya … itna waqt kafi tha sochne
ke liye ..
Baraf ko tukre tukre kar danav mukt ho gaya ..
Main … yumina ye danav chattano se bana hai hame kisi
tarah iska nature badalna hoga ..
Yumina .. Nature ..
Main.. Ha chattan ko agar sahi tapman pe tapaya jaye to
chattan siseme badal jata hai ..
Yumina .. Fire magic ..
Main.. Ha lekin tum sab yaha is aur ajao ye kaam khud
mujhko karna hoga fire magic sirf mujhe aata hai yaha …
Yumina mohan aur queen tino side me chali gayi main
danav ka akela samna karne laga …


 

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Maine apne andar ki aag ki urja ko bahar nikalne laga
aur apni raftar se danav ke Charo aue ghumne laga ..
Mere raftar se aue aag ki taqat se us ghere ki jamin se
lekar hawa bhi garam ho gayi aur itna tapman banane
lagi ke danav pighalne laga .. Jab wo puri tarah pichal
gaya … tabhi Maine apne apna magic badal diya aur ice
magic se us Jane huye Anshu ko baraf se jhatke me
thanda kar diya … wo pura hissa ek bade sishe ke dher me
badal gaya …
Maine apni talwar nikal ek jordar war kiya wo sishe ka
ansh chur chur ho gaya …
Maine chain ki sans li ..
Yumina .. Aap ne kamal kar diya dady ..

Main.. Ha thoda dimag lagana pada… Lekin aab sab kuch
thhik hai .. Wo dekho magic stone matlab danav khatam
ho gaya ..
Queen .. Sach me Maine aaj tak kabhi koi itna taqatwar
mage aur yodha nahi dekha …
Main.. Sukriya rani sahiba ..
Yumina .. Dady chalte hai yaha se 12 we padao ki aur ..
Main.. Nahi yumina thoda sabar rakhna sikho .. Hum aab
akhri padao ki aur badhne wale hai lekin usse pehle tum
tino ko thode aram ki awasakta hai ..
Yumina .. Main main bilkul thik hun dady ..
Main.. Yumina josh me thakawat ka pata nahi chalta ..
Mere khayal se bahar raat ho gayi hai .. Hame thoda yahi
aram kar Lena chahiye .. Husna bandibast karo ..
Husna .. Ji malik .. Husna ne jaldi hi ek chote ghar ka
intezam kar diya gufa ke andar hi …
Hum aabhi aram kar rahe the raat kafi ho gayi thi mohan
aur queen buri tarah thak chuke the .. Yumina bhi thak
chuki thi ..

Main monark ko pehre pe laga so gaya .
Raat beet ne lagi monark ghar ke chat pe pehre pe tha aur
hum aram se so rahe the tabhi ek jor ke dhamake se
hamari nind tut gayi hum jaldi se bahar agaye .. Aur
bahar ka najara dekh hasi arahi thi ..
Sena nayak ke sath mantri aur sena ki ek badi tukri
jameen pe giri padi thi .. Aur samne that monark … ye
dhamaka monark ke muh se nikle aag ke gole ka tha ..
Main.. Monark kya hua ..
Monark .. Malik ye chupke dhire se aage badh rahe the
isliye bas dara diya ..
Main.. To bhai bas apna ye bada akar dikha dete dekho
becharo ka kya hal kiya hai …
Monark .. Maafi malik..
Main.. Aab isme maafi mangne ki kya baat hai .. Sena
nayak aur mantri ji aap dono sena ke sath yaha ghumne
to nahi aaye honge na ..

Sena nayak utha aur kuch bolne hi wala tha ke queen ko
dekh ruk gaya .. Aur ascharya se Queen ko dekhte huye
thoda haklate huye bola ..
Sena nayak .. My queen aap yaha aap ki ye halat kisne ki
hai .. Kya aap ko agwa kiya gaya hai ..
Main.. Sena nayak ye aap ko Nahi pehchanti .. Waise yehi
hai aap ki asli queen jo mahal me hai wo devil queen ..
Sena nayak .. Kya keh rahe ho ye kaise ho sakta hai ..
Main.. Yehi sach hai 9 we padao se humne inko ajad kiya
hai .. Aur bas waqt ki baat hai hum 12 we padao ki aur ja
rahe hai …
Mantri .. Aisa kabhi nahi hoga .. My queen ka adesh hai
tum logo ko jinda ya murda unke samne pesh kiya jaye
waise bhi tumhare pass kya sabut hai ye asli Queen hai ..
Yehi devil queen hui to ..
Main.. Mantri ji aap budhe ho gaye hai aab ye padbi chod
dijiye .. Aur rahi baat hame jinda ya murda pakadne ki to
wo bhul jaiye is desh me hi nahi is duniya me aisa koi nahi
jo hame nukshan pahucha sake .. Ye ghamand Nahi

biswas hai …monark jara inko apne taqat ka namuna
dikhao ..
Tabhi monark hawa me uthne laga aur wind magic ke
sath apne fire ko mix kar bade bawandar ko bana Sena ke
taraf badhne laga .. Aur aisa maha bishal danav ko dekh
puri Sena bhag khadi hui sath me mantri bhi .. Sena
nayak bhi dar ke piche hat gaya lekin wo thoda himmat
wala tha .. Lekin taqat ke bina himmat Jada der tik Nahi
sakti .. Aur yaha bhi yahi hua sena nayak ko bhi akhirkar
loutna pada ..
Yumina...dady aab hame bhi chalna chahiye 12 wa padao
hamara intezar kar raha hai ..
Main.. Monark lout aao .. Monark bapas tote ke roop lekar
bapas agaya .. Aur Maine gate spell ka istemal kiya aur 12
we padao ke gate pe ja pahuche …
Hum aage badh gaye jaise hi kuch aage badhe gufa ke
dusre muh se nikale aur jaha pahuche wo ek bada hall tha
uske aur samne ka najara dekh Queen dar gayi .. ..
Queen .. Ye ye ye to devil king hai ..

Main.. Kya yehi devil king hai wo to mar chuka tha na ..
Hamare samne dusre chor pe ek singhasan laga hua tha
aur uspe baitha hua tha ek kale libas pehne bhayankar
roop wala 20 fit ucha insani roop wala devil king ..
Queen .. Ha wo to mar chuka tha .. Lekin ye wohi hai ..
Main.. Ye kaise sambhab hai jo mar chuka hai wo jinda
kaise ho sakta hai ..
Tabhi devil king ki awaj gunji waha…
Devil king .. Aao aao bahadur insan aao kabile tarif sabhi
padao ko par kar liya .. Aur mujhe to tumko sukriya
kehna chahiye ..
Main.. Sukriya kis baat ka sukriya ..
Devil king .. Tumhare wajah se hi aaj main dobara jinda
ho paya hu .. Hahaha.
Main.. Hamare wajah se ..
Devil king .. Ha tumhare wajah se tumhare jama kiye
gaye magic stone ke wajah se hahaha main pehle se kayi
guna taqatwar ho chuka hu .. Tumhari himmat ko taqat
ko main sarahta hu tum mere senapati banne ke layak ho

.. Hahaha .. Puri duniya hamare kadmo me hogi .. Bas ban
jao mera gulam .. Hahaha ..
Main.. Offer to achha hai lekin no thanks .. Aab main kisi
mare huye ki gulami kiu karu ..
Devil king .. Main jinda ho chuka hu ..
Main.. To aab mare jaoge mere hatho …
Devil king .. Hahahaha main tum pe raham kar raha tha
aab nahi .. Tabhi devil king ne ishara kiya aur us hall ke
dono taraf ke diwaro se do bhayankar danav bahar nikle
jo dikhne me minator jaise the lekin unke sar ke singh pe
aag dahak rahi thi .. Sath sath unke hatho me bada sa
kulhadi jaisa hathiyar tha. ..
Main… yumina mohan sambhal ke ye khatarnak lag rahe
hai …
Dono danav hamare taraf doud pade ..
Main ek taraf aur dusri taraf yumina mohan …
Mohan ne apne wind magic se talwar bana us danav pe
war kiya lekin wo danav tezz tha wo war se Bach te huye
yumina ke taraf badha .. Lekin yumina bhi tezz thi jaise hi
danav ne yumina pe war kiya yumina war sath sath

badhte huye apni talwar ghuma danav ke hath pe waar
kiya hath kat ke gir gaya .. Danav gusse me apna sar
ghuma yumina ko apne singho se Marne badha lekin
tabtak yumina ne dusra war kar diya aur ye war sidha
danav ke gale se hote huye par ho ho gaya …
Danav wohi gir pada …
Idhar dusra danav aur main amne samne se aage badhe
aur jaise hi danav ne war ke liye hath uthaya maine apni
raftar ka kamal dikhaya aur danav ke do tukre kar diye
..sidha war kamar ko kat ta hua dusre side se nikal gaya ..
Danav bich se do tukro me bat gaya …
Apne danavo ko marte dekh devil king muakurane laga …
tabhi dono mare huye danav kisi chumbak ki tarah
khichte huye ek dusre se Jud gaye sur dekhte hi dekhte
dono danav ek sath mil gsye …

 

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Hum ek jagah akar khade ho gaye
Yumina .. Ye kya ho raha hai dady ..
Main… lagta hai dono danav Jud rahe hai aab inki taqat
double ho jayegi .. Aur jaisa majne kaha waise hi dono
danav dur gaye do sar 4 hath unme 2 hathiyar.
Bhayankar akar ka jisam .. Aisa lag raha tha jaise isse
ghinowna kuch ho hi nahi sakta ..
Tabhi jor jor se wo danav dahadne laga aur bapas
hamare taraf doud pada isbar uski raftar badh chuki thi ..
Aur akar bhi taqat bhi ..
Danav tezise hamari taraf badh raha tha
Main .. Yumina sambhalna mohan sambhalna .. Wo danav
sidha akar humse takraya … hum kuch kar pate usse
pehle hum takkar se udte huye dur ja gire .. Hamare

suraksha kabach ke karan hame chot nahi aayi .. Hum
uth khade huye danav yumina ki aur badha aur yumina
bhi ab taiyar thi wo bhi danav ke taraf doud padi ..
Yumina ne apni talwar chalayi aur danav ne apni .. Dono
ke talwar takraya .. Aur yumina udte huye dur ja giri us
impact se ..
Abki baar danav meri taraf badha usi tarike se lekin usko
kya pata mujhse sidhe takrane ka kya asar ho sakta hai ..
Main.. Simba taiyar ho jao .. Hum dono samne se talwar
chalate huye aage badhe aur jaise hi meri talwar danav
ki talwar se takrayi danav ki talwar kisi makhan ki taraf
bich se kat gayi aur meri talwar ne danav ka ek sir kat
diya ..
Danav dard se tadap utha tabhi jab danav ka sir dobara
judne gaya Maine ek aur war kiya aur ye war sar ke upar
se niche tak tha danav do hisso me bat gaya sath sath jo
magic stone UA danav me tha uske bhi kayi tukre ho gaye
danav turant Mara gaya isbar kuch nahi hua magic Stone
ki taqat hi danav ko jinda rakhe huye thi tabhi mere

dimag me baat aayi .. MATLAB devil King me bhi magic
stone hai .. Aur ye usi ka asar hai jo devil king jinda hai ..
Main devil king ki aur muda hi tha ke Is tabhi hamare
Charo taraf ke diwar se chote bade danav prakat hone
lage abtak ke sabhi padao me dikhe danav bahar nikal
hame gher chuke the …
Devil king .. Hahahaha tumne itna asan samjha tha kya
hahaha .. Aaj tum mese koi nahi bache ga phir bari aayegi
adventurer city ki waqt achuka hai pap ke samrajya
hahahaha …
Maine jor laga pukara … monark samne aao … tabhi
monark mere samne agaya .
Main.. Monark waqt agaya hai apni taqat ka pura istemal
karo aur bata do yaha taqat kise kehte hai …
Maine apni talwar ko aage kar pakda …aur bola… simba
bahar aao aur dekha do in Danavo ko taqat kya hota hai

Maine hath upar kar diya aur gate spell ka istemal kiya ..
Tabhi us gate se black dragon bhi agaya …
Main chalang ke sath black dragon pe chadh gaya …

Main .. Mere sathio meri taqato is haiwan ki sena ko batao
taqat kya hoti hai ….
Idhar devil king unko dekh shok me tha black spirit king
white spirit king aur black dragon …
Mere hamle ka ishara karte hi sabhi kud pade un danavo
ko kuchalne me …
Monark ne unpe aag ko barish kar di ..
Simba ke panjo ke har war se danavo ke chithde ud rahe
the .. Sath sath uski dahad ke aage sabhi danav tukro me
bat ja rahe the .. Aur main dragon pe sawar ho dragon ko
danavo ki sena pe aag ki barish karne ko kehne laga udte
huye aag ki barish ho rahi thi un danavo pe ..
Udhar yumina aur mohan bhi piche nahi the yumina
apne water aur earth magic ke sath danavo ko bahar
muli ki tarah kat rahi thi ..mohan apne wind magic se
danavo ko hawa me utha bapas jamin pe patak ke Marne
laga …
Quern in Sab se dur ek kone me khadi sabkuch dekh rahi
thi wo bhi ascharya me thi .. Tabhi devil king ka gusse se
bhara chikh Sunai diya ..

Devil king … tum insan tumhari itni himmat meri sena ka
ye hal karo ..
Main.. Hahaha tumne hame kamjor sanjhtha aab dekho
asal taqat kya hoti hai …
Idhar meri taqato ne lagbhag sabhi danavo ko tabah kar
diya tha ..
Main.. Simba lout aao .. Tabhi simba bapas meri talwar
me shama gaya .. Tabhi ek energy ball mere karib se gujar
gayi .. Use mere taraf phekne wala koi aur nahi devil king
tha ..
Devil king .. Itni jaldi ye mat samajh Lena main har chuka
hu abhi main jinda hu ..aur tum mujhe kabhi hara nahi
paoge ...hahaha ..
Maine tabhi apni puri raftar se spin karte huye apni
talwar ghuma devil king ke gardan pe war kiya … talwar
sidhe gardan se takrayi .. Lekin ye kya meri talwar chitak
gayi devil king pe ek bhi kharch nahi LA payi ..
Devil king .. Tum adne se insan is Choti si talwar se mujhe
Marne aaye ho ..

Tabhi devil king ne ek energy ball bana bapas mere taraf
uchal diya .. Main waha se turant khud ke hat gaya ..
Lekin ball zamin se takrayi to ek bada dhamaka hua ..
Devil king .. Dekhi meri taqat .. Mujhe in danavo jitna
kamjor samjha hai kya .. Tabhi devil king ne apna hath
aage kiya aur kaha .. Devil sword hajir ho .. Tabhi uske
hath me kale rang ka ek talwar agaya … aur devil king
apni puri raftar se mujhpe talwar se hamla kiya .. Maine
uske war ko apne talwar se rok liya .. Hum dono ke talwar
takrane se waha ek bhayankar energy ki lahar uthi jisse
wo hall jaisi jagah kanp utha …
Hum ek dusre ke ankho me ankho me ankhe Dale talwar
se talwar takra khade the .. Hum dono ki phisical power
ek barabar thi na main use piche dhakel pa raha tha na
wo mujhe .. Mujhe aab pata chala devil king itna bhi
kamjor nahi hai .. Hum me talwar bazi suru ho gayi har
takrao ke sath ek tezz energy ki lahar si uthti .. Jisse
jagah hil jati ..

Kafi waqt se hum me talwar bazi ho rahi thi na devil king
piche hata na hi main .. Hamare talwar bhi karib karib ek
barabar taqat liye huye the ..
Tabhi devil king ne talwar se war karna rok mujhpe aag
ke gole phekne suru kar diye .. Lekin main unse bachta
raha .. Phir usne ek energy ka gola pheka lekin usse bhi
main Bach gaya …
Devil king .. Hahaha manna padega insan tum alag ho
kamjor insano se mukhse mukabla kar pana kisi aam
insan ke liye mumkin Nahi .. Tumhare liye nahi kiu ke
mujhse jeet ne ke liye tumhe mujh pe war karna hoga ..
Aur tum dekh hi chuke ho tumhare war mujhpe kaam
nahi aane wale ..
Main.. Wo main dekh lunga .. Abhi tumne meri taqat dekhi
hi kaha hai .. Husna apni taqat mujhe do ..

 

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Tabhi husna akar mujhme shama gayi mera pura jisam
roshni ki tarah chamak utha.
Mere jisam ki roshni ko dekh devil ek pal ke liye satark ho
gaya .. Use mere jisam se nikalti roshni se taklif ho rahi
thi .. Maine apni roshni ki talwar utha dobara devil king
pe war kiya is baar jaise hi meri talwar devil sword se
takrayi devil sword crack agaya .. Jise dekh devil king
piche hat gaya .. Aur usne mujhpe dobara energy ball se
hamla suru kar diya lekin isbar uske is war ka Maine bhi
jawab diya apna hath aage kar roshni ke gole bana devil
king pe phekne laga .. Devil king unse bachne ke liye uchal
ne kudne laga mujhe andaza ho gaya tha devil king ko
mere roshni ki taqat se pareshani ho rahi hai lekin phirvi
mere war ka uspe asar nahi ho raha tha ..
Devil king .. Manna padega tum kafi taqatwar ho lekin
agar yehi tumhari taqat ki had hai to tum mujhe kabhi
hara nahi paoge ..

Main.. Jarur batayunga tumhe mere roshni ki taqat se
pareshani ho rahi hai aab samna karo mere roshni ki
talwar ka main bijli ki tezi se aage badha aur war pe war
devil king pe karne laga meri talwar devil king ke jisam se
takra to rahi thi lekin uske jisam pe kharch ke siwa kuch
Nahi kar pa rahi thi ..Maine war rok diya ..
Devil king .. Kiu kya hua thak gaye tumne kya socha bas
apni is Choti si roshni ki taqat se mujhe hara doge ..
Andhera hu main andhera mujhe hatane ke liye choti si
law nahi ek bada roshni ka pahad chahiye ..
Tabhi devil king ne apni ankhe band kar li aur tabhi wo
jagah andhere me dubne laga Charo aur andhera hi
andhera tha.. Mere jisam ki roshni se hum BA's kuch dur
tak hi dekh pa rahe the tabhi us andhere se ek energy ka
ball hamari taraf badhne laga .. Maine apne suraksha
kabach magic ka istemal kiya aur hamare charo taraf
suraksha kabach bana diya .. Wo energy ball akar mere
suraksha kabach se takrayi .. Aur bada bisfot hua .. Sabhi
mere karib agaye kiu ke mere jisam se hi roshni nikal rahi
thi ..

Yumina .. Dady aab kya kare .. Tabhi ek aur energy ball
akar mere suraksha kabach se takraya ..
Devil king .. Hahahaha kabtak apne suraksha kabach ke
piche chupge hahaha main andhere ka rakhwala hu
mujhse tum kabhi nahi jeet sakte ..
Tabhi mere kind me ek awaj gunji ..
Awaj .. Ai insano me insan tumne khud ko sabit kar liya
hai .. Tum me himmat prem daya aur sadgun hai aur wo
har chij hai jo main apne malik me talash kar raha tha ..
Main man me .. Kon ho tum samne aao ..
Awaj .. Malik main aapke pass hi hu khud me talash kijiye
pukariye mujhe apni dil ke gehrai se main aap ka hissa
ban chuka hu .. Tabhi mere talwar ke Handel ke karib ek
nishan ban gaya Suraj ke jaisa .. Tabhi mere man me ek
spell aaya .. Maine dhayan laga apne man me ghum rahe
spell ko padha ...aur jod laga spell ko dohraya ..
Main.. Come forth crimson roshni ke rakhwale mujhe
apni taqat do .. Aur tabhi wo hua jise dekh pana kisi ke
liye sambhab nahi tha ..

Tabhi mera jisam aag ki bhatti ki tarah tapne laga mere
jisam ki roshni badhti chali gayi andhere ko dhakelti hui
aage badhti chali gayi Tabhi mujhe devil king ki tadapti
hui awaj Sunai dene lagi .. Roshni itni badh gayi ke aab
koi ankh bhi nahi khol pa raha tha kuch pal mere karib
aag bhi thanda baraf lage …
Mail bhi halke halke chichne laga ye taqat mere jisam me
apni jagah bana rahi thi .. Tabhi roshni jo faili hui thi wo
gayab hone lagi aur rah gaya main mere jisam se roshni
ke lapte nikal rahi thi .. Lekin ab ye roshni garm nahi
thandi thi .. Mere hath pair sar se lekar pair tak ek roshni
ki lapto ne mujhe ghara hua tha mujhe apne andar taqat
hi taqat mahsoos ho raha tha ..
Sabhi ankhe khol mujhe ascharya se dekh rahe the
andhera chat gaya tha bas aab samne tha devil king aur
hum ..
Devil king .. Ye kya kya kya hai …
Main...tumhare mout ki suruwat ...itna hi bola tha ke
main tezise aage badha aur isbar meri raftar dekhi bhi
nahi ja raho thi .. Maine apni talwar ghuma sidha devil

king ke pass prakat hua mujhe itne karib dekh devil king
ne apna hath dar se aage kar diya jo mere talwar se
takrayi .. Lekin isbar meri talwar devil king ke hath ko
makhan ke tarah kat te huye nikal gayi …
Devil king chikh ke sath piche hat gaya ..
Main khada usko dekh raha tha …
Devil king .. Na mumkin na mumkin tum tum mujhe
nukshan kaise pahucha rahe ho ..
Main.. Aise…maine dobara war kiya isbar dusra hath …
devil king tadapte huye jamin pe ja gira …
Devil king tadapte huye .. Tumhe kya lag raha hai tum
jeet jaoge .. Hahaha aisa kabhi nahi hoga … hahaha …
Tabhi devil king ke jisam se lal roshni ki kirne Charo aur
failne lagi …
Crimson mere mind me ..malik devil king ko Marne ka ek
hi tarika hai uske red Cristal se bana dil uske tukre kar
dijiye …
Main. .. Jarur .. Lekin tabtak tabahi suru ho gayi thi jaha
jaha lal kirne takrayi wo diwar me dhamake hone lage ..

Maine apni talwar ko utha ek jordar chalang lagaya aur
talwar ko sidha devil king ke sine me utar diya .. Devil
king turant hi tukro me bat gaya sabhi cristal jo uske
jisam me lage the waha bikhar gaye aur jo red stone heart
wala tha wo talwar ke war se tut gaya … tabhi mujhe
chikh Sunai di .. Wo jagah dhah raha tha .. Maine piche
mud ke dekha to bade bade chattane mere suraksha
kabach pe gir rahe the wo Queen thi jo dar se chikh uthi
thi .. Main turant bapas aagaya ..
Mohan … bhai nikli yaha se ye jagah tabah ho rahi hai ..
Main.. Sahi kaha .. Maine gate spell ka use kiya aur gate
ke raste bahar nikal aaye gufa ke lekin gufa ke bahar ek
aur musibat hamara intezar kar rahi thi wo thi devil
queen …

 

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Jaise hi hum gufa ke bahar nikle hamare samne
adventurer city ke sabhi sainko ke sath devil queen sena
nayak aur mantri khada tha …
Mantri… adventurer karma tumne kafi hade par kar li hai
aab apne apko hamare hawale kar do …
Main.. Hade abhi kaha abhi baki hai .. Sena nayak aap
galat jagah khade hai aap ki Queen wo nahi hai ye hai jo
hamare sath khadi hai ..
Devil queen .. Khamosh tumhe kya lagta hai tum aapne
galat MATLAB me kamyab ho jaoge sena nayak jao aur
insabhi ko bandi bana lo ..
Crimson .. Malik devil Queen ki asliyat samne lane ke liye
aap crimson light ka istemal kare us roshni ko devil queen
jhel nahi payegi aur apne asliroop me ajayegi ..
Maine crimson ki salah ko mana aur apne andar jhaka
mujhe crimson light ki spell dikh gayi . .


Main.. Come forth crimson crimsoni light prakat ho .. Aur
tabhi mere jisam se tezz roshni phut padi jo Charo aur fail
gayi devil queen se takrate hi wo tadap uthi aur unke
jisam se jaise ek parat phighalne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte
ek hare rang ki lambe kano wali lambe danto wali aurat
me badal gayi …
Roshni hat te hi puri sena ke sath aabhi devil queen ko
dekh dar ke piche hat gayi ..
Main .. Sena nayak mantri ji yehi hai iski sachai ye devil
queen hai …
Devil Queen .. Ha ha main devil queen hu karma tumne
meri barso ki mehnat ko mitti me mila diya aab main
tumhe uski saza dungi apne king ka badla lungi .. Tabhi
devil queen ne apne dono hath faila diye tabhi asman me
kale badal cha gaye aur dekhte hi dekhte devil Queen ke
hath Pankho me badal gaye jisam ek bhayankar jeev jiske
ankhe lal kan lambe aur pairo me taqatwar panje the …
Wo hawa me uth gayi aur kale badalo me udne lagi ..
Tabhi uska rukh meri taraf ho gaya aur usne apna muh
khola tabhi ek bhayankar ckikh .. KW sath soundwave


akar humare aur badhi .. Maime apne speed ka faida utha
sabhi ko lekar waha se hat gaya …
Aur jaha wo sound wave takrayi waha ek bada dhamaka
hua .. Wo jagah tabah ho gayi gehra gadha ban gaya …
Crimson .. Malik jaldi kare devil queen ko Jada mouka na
de nahi to ye city ko bhi tabah kar degi …
Maine crimson ki baat Mani .. Aur ek chalang ke sath ud
gaya hawa me .. Devil queen ke barabar .. Devil Queen ne
dobara mujhpe sound wave se hamla kiya lekin is baar
main hata nahi aur apne talwar se roshni ki energy ball
bana us aur phek diya dono ki takkar se waha ek
bhayankar bisfot hua .. Hum dono amne samne the hawa
me .. Baki baar devil Queen ke ankho se lesser ki kitne
nikal mere taraf badhi jise Maine apni suraksha kabach
se rok diya .. Jab queen ne dekha uska koi war kaam nahi
kar raha tab usne bola …
Devil Queen .. Hahaha tum mere war ko rok sakte ho lekin
is city ko tabah hone se kaise roko ge
Main ne apni raftar se aage badha devil Queen apna muh
kholke city pe soundwave se hamla karne wali thi lekin


meri talwar ghumi aur devil queen ka sar uske jisam se
alag ho gaya … asman ke kale badal chatne lage bapas se
Charo aur roshni failne lagi … devil queen ka jisam hawa
se jameen ki aur girne laga lekin sath sath jisam tukro me
bat gayab hone laga .. Jamin tak kuch bhi pahuch nahi
paya ..
Main niche utar aaya husna aur crimson dono hi mere
jisam se nikal aaye … Main bapas se normal ho gaya ..
Puri ki puri sena queen ke aage jhuk gayi …
Sena nayak .. Hame maaf kare queen hum us shaitani
devil Queen ke chhal ko samajh nahi PAYE …
Queen .. Isme tum logo ko koi kasur nahi hai devil queen
nw JAL hi aisa racha tha.lekin har Kali raat ke bad ek
sunehri shubha bhi aati hai wo agayi aur use lane wale
hai ye karma aur unke sathi hai …
Mantri .. Mujhe maaf kijiye karma Maine bahut si
galatiya ki hai ..
Main.. Koi baat nahi mantri ji aap sabhi apne biswas pe
atal the mujhe isme koi galati nahi dikhi .. Sachai ko
bahar aana hi tha ..


Sena nayak .. My queen aap ka mahal aap ka intezar kar
raha hai ..
Queen .. Karma yumina mohan chalo tum tino ko hum
khas samman ke sath swagat karna chahenge …
Main .. Nahi Queen .. Hame maaf kijiye lekin aab hum
mahal nahi jayenge hamare loutne ka waqt ho chuka hai
.. Lekin bas mujhe ek permission chahiye .. Main aap ke
city ke kuch khas niwashio ko apne sath le Jana chahta
hu apni duniya me …
Queen .. Thik hai karma tumhe izazat hai .. Le jao tumhara
naam hamare adventurer city ke itihas me sunahre
ankhsaro se likha jayega ..
Maine gate spell ka istemal kiya aur gate ke raste pahuch
gaye latika ke ghar … hame dekhte hi Rita mita hamare
pass agayi ..
Latika mohan ke gale lag gayi ..
Main.. Waqt achuka hai chalne ke liye taiyar ho tum sab ..
Garan .. Kaha chalna hai hame ..
Main.. Garan hum apni duniya me lout rahe hai aur tum
sabhi sath chal rahe ho ..


Rita .. Sukriya malik aap lout aaye ..
Main.. Crimson chalo aab hamare duniya me bapas le
chalo ha dragon ko mat bhulna ..
Crimson .. Ji malik … tabhi waha crimson ki tezz roshni
chamki hame hamare Charo aur roshni hi roshni dikh
rahi thi aisa lag raha tha jaise hum hawa me tair rahe hai
aur kisi taraf badh rahe hai .. Tabhi aisa mahsoos hua
jaise hum kisi jagah pe utre hai ..
Roshni chatne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte roshni gayab ho
gayi crimson bhi gayab ho gaya .. Lekin kahi gaya nahi
mujhme hi tha ..
Humne ankh kholi to Charo aur chamak ti hui chije dikh
rahi thi ye ajeev tha hum sabhi khade ho gaye hum
dungen jagah tha uspe khade the lekin dungeon's gayab
ho chuka tha bas rag gaya tha ek khali jagah jispe
khajana rakha hua tha sone hire jawarat ka khajana..
Hum sabhi ascharya se dekh rahe the hum bapas sindriya
me the … dur dur tak baraf hi baraf … hawa me udta hua
mera black dragon .. Mere kandhe pe baithi husna aur
samne ek bakshe pe baitha tote ke roop me monark ..


Mohan latika ka hath pakde huye .. Garan ascharya se
Charo aur dekhta hua … yumina khushi se jhumti hui …
Main.. Hum lout aaye yumina hum lour aaye ..
Main.. Crimson .. Ye khajana kaisa hai ..
Crimson .. Ye inam hai dungeon ko kabu karne ka sirf
taqat hi nahi doulat bhi chahiye hoti hai jivan me .. Ye
issiliye inam hai ..
Main.. Hmm samajh gaya .. Tum is khajane ke bhi
rakhwala the ..
Crimson .. Ji malik aab ye khajana aap ka hai main is
jimmedari se muqt hua ..
Main.. Abhi is khajane ko gayab kar do jab balu prakat
kardena ..
Crimson .. Ji malik … tabhi khajane gayab ho gaya …
Main.. Sabhi ek dusre ka hath pakad lo hum ja rahe hai
yaha se .. Sabhi ne ek dusre ka hath mazbuti se pakad
kiya aur Maine apne gravity control magic se sabko hawa
me utha liya aur udte huye chal pade sindriya ki aur ..
Hame koi andaza na tha kitna waqt gujar gaya hai is
safar me ..


Hum udte huye sindriya ke mujhya dwar pe agaye tabhi
mahal se king luthar baggi liye pahuch gaye ..
King luthar .. Aap ka swagat hai king karma mujhe
suchna mil gayi thi aap ke loutne ka .. Sukriya aap ne
dungeon pe kabu pa liya ..
Main.. Ji king luthar .. Humne dungeon ko kabu kar liya
hai ..aab aap ko koi pareshani Nahi hogi …
King luthar .. Chaliye aap thak gaye honge aap ke bisram
ke puri bawastha ki ja chuki hai ..
Main.. Waise king luthar mujhe dungen me gaye huye
kitna waqt gujar hai ..
King luthar .. Pure 1 mahine my king .. 1 mahine .. Ye to
kuch Jada hi waqt lag gaya .. Humne Jada se Jada 20 din
gujare the ..
Yumina .. Dady samay ka herpher hoga ..
Main.. Hmm sahi keh rahi ho gudiya .. Hum mahal me
pahuch gaye jaha humara swagat bahut achhe se hua ..
Hame ghar ki yaad to arahi thi mujhe khas kar ke apne
sabhi jaan ki behad yaad arahi thi lekin ek king ki bhi
apni jimmedari hoti hai .. King luthar apna abhar prakat


karna chahte the isliye hum ne wo din aur raat mahal me
hi bitaya sindriya me jashan ka mahol tha …
Mujhe pata nahi kiu lekin apne desh apni ranio ki yaad
kuch Jada hi sata rahi thi .. Mujhe koi andaza nahi tha is
ek mahine me is duniya me itna kuch ho jayega jo mujhe
har badalte pal ke sath pata chala …



End of part 1



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to be continued on.....

Adventure of Karma's(WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD)Part 2*


 
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Uffffff bahi Kia ghazab ki story h zabardast awesome interesting lajawab bemissal sooooooooper dooooper

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Ap ki writing skill boht badhiya h

Ap ne Jo characters Dale hain story mai wo lajawab hain

Or jis trha ap ne story mai sacne create kiye hain dershaya h Kia kaho maiend blowing

Mai khud ko is story mai imagine kr raha tha
 

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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

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Hello Everyone :hello:
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

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