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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Bhai jab pehle hi dusri site par likh chuke ho to jaldi jaldi update de do taki dono site par ek shaat update de do
thnx for sugession bhai.lekin main kuchh changes karne vala hu updates me isliye copy paste nahi kar raha hu.lekin bahot jaldi main sare updates cover kar lunga.asie hi sath bane rahana bhai aur support and sugessions dete rahna bhai.keep supporting.
 

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hi dosto kaise ho aap log.sab se pahale thank you so much everyone.meri story ko read karne k liye and mujhe support karne k liye bhiyo.mujhe pata hai kuchh logo k maan me chal raha hoga maine bola tha daily update dene k liye lekin kal se maine update nahi diya hai.isliye kal maine ek sath 3 updates dunga.dusra reason ye hai update nahi de pane ka elction result and office extra work k vaja se.i hope u all understand my situation. good night dosto kal milte hai phir raat 9:30 ko update k sath.
 
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hi dosto kaise ho aap log.sab se pahale thank you so much everyone.meri story ko read karne k liye and mujhe support karne k liye bhiyo.mujhe pata hai kuchh logo k maan me chal raha hoga maine bola tha daily update dene k liye lekin kal se maine update nahi diya hai.isliye kal maine ek sath 3 updates dunga.dusra reason ye hai update nahi de pane ka elction result and office extra work k vaja se.i hope u all understand my situation. good night dosto kal milte hai phir raat 9:30 ko update k sath.


Dear Bhai

Bhai ham samajh sakte hai bhai
Bass bata diya karo bhai

Hame aapka besbari se intejar rahega bhai

God Bless u bhai
Happy Dhan Terash bhai
 
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Dear Bhai

Bhai ham samajh sakte hai bhai
Bass bata diya karo bhai

Hame aapka besbari se intejar rahega bhai

God Bless u bhai
Happy Dhan Terash bhai
happy dhan teras bhai too and happy diwali in advance .ye raha aaj ka update.keep supporting
 

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UPDATE-22
Recap
Pichhale update me aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma k sath ek vichitr ghatana ho jati hai lekin karma ko us ghatna k bare me kuchh bhi yaad nahi hota.
Ab aage….


Main-jaise hi apne kamare me pahochta hu teleport ki madat se turant main apne aap ko aaeena me dekhne lagta hu aur jaise hi maine apne aap ko aaeene me dekha main ek gahri soch me doob jata hu.q ki jaise main apne aap ko aaeene (mirror) me dekhta hu to mere munh aur honth (lips) k ass pass khoon laga hua tha aur sirf itna hi nahi balki mere kapdo par bhi bahot hi adhik matra me khoon laga hua tha.ye sari cheeje dekhne aur jis tarah maine apne aap ko un saat(7) laasho k pass aur jaise unki halat huvi thi ye sab dekha kar main sochne pe majboor ho gaya.ye sab kuchh kya hai aur mujhe kuchh yaad q nahi hai aur raat bhar main tha kaha aur mere chere aur mere kapado k upar khoon laga to laga kiase.ab to insabhi ka uttar mujhe black shadow hi de sakta hai.aur isi k sath mein apni soch ki duniya se bahar aajata hu.aur main turant black shadow ko bulata hu.

Black shadow-malik kaise apne mujhe yaad kiya.
Maine-(black shadow is samay apne gutne pe baitha huva tha mere samne) black shadow kya tum he pata nahi is samay main kis bare me baat kar raha hu.

Black shadow-(black shadow apni mundi niche kar k) malik aap kis bare me baat kar rahe hai ye main kaise jaan sakta hu.aap mujhe batae main puri kosis karunga aap ki madat karne ka.aap ki madat k liye hi hu main malik.itna bolkar vo sant ho jata hai.
Main-(apne maan me lagta hai isse sach me pata nahi main kis bare me baat kar raha hu) thik hai tumhe nahi pata to koee baat nahi hai.tum sirf mujhe mere prashno ka uttar do.

Black shadow-g malik
Main-raat ko shadow baane k baad kaha gaya tha aur mere uppar itna adhik khoon kaha se aur q laga hai aur mujhe kuchh yaad q nahi hai.aur raat bhar me mere sath kya huva.aur aisa q.mujhe in sabhi prashano ka javab chahiye abhi….samajh gaye na tum.

Black shadow-malik mujhe is vishay me khuch bi gyan nahi hai aap k sath kya huva shadow bane k baad.aap k shadow baane k baad meri shaktiya khatam ho jati hai.mere sath ye sab pahli baar ho raha hai.mujhe bi aap ki tarah kuchh bhi yaad nahi hai.main to kud hairan hu ye sab hua kaise aur mujhe q nahi pata chala mere malik.

Main-kya ! sach me tumhe bhi kuchh yaad nahi hai.ye to sochne vali baat hai hum dono ko hi nahi pata hai raat me kya huva.achha ye batao tumhare pass koee upay hai jisse mujhe kuchh yaad aa jaye raat bhar me mere sath kya hua.

Black shadow-nahi malik mujhe to koee upay nahi malum hai.malik mujhe lagta hai aap k shadow bante hi aap ki power raat me bahot badh jata hai jiska koee limit nahi rahti hai nahi vo kabu me rahta hai jis k vaja se vo aap pe bhari pad raha hai.aur ye ek bahot hi gambhir samasya hai agar aap ne jaldi hi isko kabu me aap ne nahi kiya ye aap pe kabu kar lega.aur to aur aap ko pata hi hoga main kali satiyo ka pratik hu aur aap mere malik.aap ko apni saktiyo ko kabu me karna ka jaldi hi koee upay khojna pade ga.malik mere khayal se aap ko dhyaan me baith jana chahiye ho sakta hai koi upay mil gaye ya kuchh pata chal jaye .

Main-mujhe… black shadow… itna bol kar mere samne se gayab hokar phir se mere parchhaae ban jata hai aur ek baar phir se mere liya chod jata hai ek samsya jate jate.main maan me jaldi hi mujhe apne shadow vale roop ko kabu me karna pade ga nahi to mujhe bahot bhari pad sakta hai. ya mere parivar ko bhi koi nuksaan pahoch sakta hai.yahi sab sochne k baad main apne maan ko sant kar k dhyaan me baith jata hu.q ki ab mujhe dar lagne laga tha jo kuchh bhi raat me huva kahi ye sab mere parivaar k sath hoga to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paunga.is liye maine pure maan se dhyaan karne laga aur kuchh der dhyaan me baithne k baad mujhe maisus hua jaise mera rup badal gaya hai aur main apne shadow rup me hu.tabhi mujhe meri hi aavvaj mere maan me sunai di.

(dosto ye mere maan ki aavaaj hai isko ab main aavaaj likhunga ab se.ye sari bate main apne maan se kar raha hu apne dhyaan me baith kar )

Aavaaj- kya tum mujhe dhud rahe the.main to tum hi hu.main burai hu.

Main-ab apne aap ko sambhal chukka tha.tum burai ho ye kaise ho sakta hai.main to bura nahi ho.phir tum kaise.

Aavaaj-to kya huva tum bure nahi ho .ab bura main tumhe banaunga.itna bol k haaaa (jor jor se hasne lgta hai.) akhir kaar hum dono to ek hi hai.aur jo maja burai me hai vo achchhai me kaha hai.vaise kal raat ko 7 kameno ka khoon pi k aur unki atmao ko kha kar to anand hi anand aa gaya.ahhha maza aagaya mere bhai.dil hi khus ho gaya mera.

Main-kya? tum ye sab kuchh kaise kar sakte ho.mera matlab hai main ye sab kuchh kabhi nahi kar sakta.tum jhut bol rahe ho main maan hi nahi sakta.(dosto maine ye sab kuchh jaan buch k bola taki main jaan sakhu kya vo sach bol raha hai ya mujhe behka raha hai.)

Aavaaj –aacha to ye baat hai.ye lo tum bhi dekh lo .q ki tuhme ko kuchh yaad hi nahi ho ga raat bhar tumhare saath kya hua.ye lo dekho.

Main-ab mere samne ek picture jaise chalne laga.flash back start.dosto jaise hi mera roop shadow me badla main ek pahadi k pass pahuch gaya.vaha maine dekha kul mila k sat(7)sainik teen(3)ladko ko jungle ki tarf le ja rahe the.vo teeno ladkiya ki aankho se anshu lagatar behe ja rahe the aur unke munh kapde se banda tha.vo teeno bebas aur lachar thi aur kuchh kar bhi nahi sakti thi .dekhne se garib ghar ki lag rahi thi.vaise bhi 7 k saamane 3 ka joor kab tak chalta.ye sainik is rajye k dekh k to nahi lag rahe the.7to ko dekte hi mere aankhe aur jada kali ho gai.jisse mujhe inka ab tak k sare kukarm ka pata chal gaya aur mere chere par devil smile aa gai.q ki ye kaam inka roj ka tha.ab vo sabhi jungle me ja chuke the.main bhi jungle me chala gaya.mujhe apne pahle hi din 10sikar mil chuke the.abhi vo 7to un 3no ladki k kade un k sarir se alag karte usse pahle hi us jungle k vatavaran me cheekh gung ne lagi.huva ye ki jise un me ek saink ne un ladko k taraf hath badaya main uske pichhe ja k khada ho gaya aur uske sine se uska dil nikal liya pichhe se. mere hatho ko is tarah sainik k dil k paar dekhne se sath vale sainik ki cheek nikal gai aur jiska maine dil nikala tha us bechare ko cheekne ka samay bhi nahi mila. Aur vo vahi tadap tadap k jamin pe gir gaya aur turant mar gaya .ye sab dekh k to 3no ladki jaise murat ban gai thi.us sanik k marte hi maine uski aatmo ko nigal liya.(aab to aap ko pata chal gaya hoga meri bhookh atma ko kha k shant hoti hai).sabhi 6sanik dare huve the unko pata chal gaya tha ab kya hune vala tha q ki uske samne ek saitan khada tha jiski na koee dekh sakta hai na nahi pakad sakta hai aur na hi maar sakta hai.main apni bhanak aavaaj me bolta hu ab kaun mere sikar bane ga.haaa mere hasne ki aavaaj pure jungle me gunjane lagi.tabhi ek sainik ek bhala mere upar fekta hai lekin uska bhala mere aarpar ho jata hai.hota bhi q nahi .bhala parchhae ko koee rok sakta hai.phir kya tha maine us sainik ko bicho bich se uske sarir k do tukde k diya jis k khoon k chhite mere upar aa gaya baki 5 jungle me bhagne lage.maine uski ki atma ko bhi khaa liya.teeno ladka isi ka fayda utha k jungle se bhag jati hai.aur main un 5ko dhune me lag gaya tha isi tarah main sabko marte gaya aur akhiri vale ki sara ka sara khoon uske sarir se choos liya aur sabhi k body(laasho) ko ek jagah kar diya .koee bhi un sato(7) ko dekh k kah nahi sakta hai ye sab kuchh kisne kiya hoga aisa haivanit.main vahi aram karne laga un laasho k upar baith k.aur mujhe need aa gai.(uske baad kya hua aap sab ko pata hi hai)

Aavaaj-bus vo teen(3) sikar rah gaye 7 atma hi mili yr. maja aaya na apna naya rup devil karma dekh k.bus 2 din aur uske baad main aacha karma ko hamesa k liye devil larma me badal dunga.uske baad vo sant ho jata hai.

Main-ab mujhe sab kuchh pata chal gaya tha q ki jis tarah usne kaha hai aur jo kuchh bhi maine abhi dekha ye mere liye bahot badi samasy hai.jaise ki usne kaha hai mare pass sirf do din hai aane apko ko puri tarah devil banne me.mujhe jaldi hi uska upay khojna pade ga.isi k sath apni aankhe khol deta hu.turant

Main-husna tum kaha ho.abhi k abhi mere samne aao.turant husna mere samne aa gai.
Husna-g mailk bol kar mujhe aisi halat me apne samne dekh k vo soch me gum ho gai.(ho gi bhi q nahi pahli baar mujhe hi halat me jo dekh rahi thi)

Main-samj gaya vo kya soch rahi hai.main husna se mujhe.. tum he kuchh batana hai aur ab samay aa gaya hai vo.jo maine tumse chupaya hai vo bata do.lekin tum ye dhyan rakhna ye sirf tum aapne tak hi rakhna.(dosto mere dhayan khatam hote hi mai apne insane rup me aa gaya tha aur main abhi vahi kapde pahn rakha tha jis pe dher sara khoon laga tha).maine apne hath husna k sir pe rakh k remember bol deta hu.jisse husna ko sab kuchh yaad aa jata hai kaise main shadow king bana.raat me mere sath kya hua. Sab kuchh main usko bata deta hu.

Husna-bahot bauk ho jati hai aur mere sine se lag k rone lagti hai.malik aap ne hum sab k liye itna kuchh kiya aur hum sab ko kuchh pat bhi nahi chala.abhi aur kuchh bol pati.

Main-husna abhi rone ka samay nahi hai.tumhe mere liye ek kaam karna ho ga tumhe aaj saam se pahle mere liye knowledge book ka pata lagana hoga.(dosto ye vahi book hai jiske bare me mohini ne bataya tha ab to yaad aa gya ho ga).mujhe lagta hai mujhe devil bane se vahi ek kitab rok sakti hai.husna mujhe sirf itna pata hai vo kitab isi duniya me hai.tuhme aaj saam se pahle kisi bhi halat me us kitab ka koee na koee surag pata karna hi ho ga.aab tum apne kaam me lag jao.

Husna –g mailk (mere kamare se gayab ho jati hai aur apne kaam me lag jati hai ).
Main-bhi apne aap ko aab fresh kar leta hu aur bhar aa jata hu.jaise hi main apne kamare se bahar aata hu daining table par mere dono jaan aur gudiya intazar kar rahi thi pahale se hi.main sabhi ko good morning kar k main bhi naste k liye baith jata hu.nasta bhi lag turant lag jata hai. Main nsata karte huve teeno se need to aach aaya na raat ko.teeno ek sath haa.main achchhi baat hai.aur ek baar phir se sab naste me lag jate hai.aise bate karte karte hamara nasta bhi ho jata hai.hamara nasta katam hote hi.ek sainik mere same jhuk k.

Sainik –king karma aap ko hamare king minata ne yaad kiya .aur aap k liye shai savari bhi bheji hai.sabha me aane k liye.

Main-thik hai tum jao main aata hu.sainik mera desh sun kar chala jata hai .ye sainik teharma rajya ka tha.uske jane k baad main ne teeno se kaha aap teeno yahi raho .main kuchh samay me aa jaunga.turant gudiya bhi mere sath kahadi ho jati hai.

Lelina,Shina-dono mujhe ek sath aap yumina ko bhi apne sath hi lejana.nahi to vo hamari jaan khaye gi.
Main –janta tha ab gudiya ko rukne ko bolne ka koi fada nahi hai.akhir supreme court ka order jo tha.gudiya k chere par ab smile thi hoti bhi q nahi akhir uski ischchha jo puri ho gai bina kuchh bole.main gudiya se chalo chale.

Yumina-g dady.
Main-aur yumina shahi swari pe baithne se pahle maine mahal k ass pass ek kavach bana diya.meri dono jaan pe maine pahle se infinity kavch ka surksha pahle se hi kiya tha.maine jane se pahle apni sena ko savdhan kar diya tha.hum dono swari pe baith k mahal k taraf badh gaye aur ass ka mahol dehte huve.kuchh hi samay me mahal k mukh dawar pe pahuch gaye pure mahal ko bahot hi achchhe se sajaya gaya tha aur suraksha bahot tight nazar aa rahai thi. Mukh dawar pe hi hamare swagat k liye king minata pahle hi khade the aur un k sath bahot sare dass dasiya bhi vo sabhi harmara swagat phoolo se kar rahi thi.main yumina aur king minata k sath ek bahot bade hall me pahoch gaye .jaise hi hum hall me pahochte vaha sabhi k nighahe humare taraf thi sabhi hame dekh k khade ho gaye.dosto is bare se hall me lagbhag sabhi desh k raaja the .sabhi ko dekh k aisa lag raha tha jaise koee meeting hone vali hai yaha.

Minata-sabhi kings(raajao) ko teharma rajya me hardik swagat hai.ye hai king karma.aap k sabhi savala ka jaab king karma hi denge.aur ab king karma kaun se dungeon me jayenge vo bhi.

Main-sukriya king minata.mujhe pata hai aap sabhi k maan me bahot sare prashn chal rahe honge.pahle dungeon k rahasya ko hal karne k baad mujhe ek sakti mili jisk k karan main puri tarah badal gaya.ab rahi baat kis dungeon me jane ga uska faisla dungeon khud karti hai.vo dungeon melboalfan ka hai.uska bula bhi mujhe aa gaya hai.aur isi tarah kuchh der sabha me baat chit chal rahi.akhir kar ye sabha samat ho gaya.is sabha me burnel k king sintel bhi aae huve the aur king jorala aur sohara k sath king homra (garga desh k).

Minata-apne bete k sath sab k samne.aap sabhi ko pata hi hoga aaj saam ko mere beta ka rajya abishek hai usi k khusi me maine aap sabhi k manoranjan k liye ek khel ka prativogita rakhi hai.is khel me kisi bi rajya se koee bhi bhag le sakta hai.inam sarup 1lakh platinum k sike hai.aur ek maya bhi adhuri kitab.ye kitab harmari purkho se hame mili thi.is kitab ko aaj tak koee bhi chu nahi saka nahi koee padh saka hai.iska har mantra adhura hai.khel k sare niyam aap sabhi ko pratiyogita k samay hi pata chale ga .itna bol kar vo vaha se chala gata hai.lekin prince nahi jata hai.

Aur vahi dusri tarf chote aur bade rajya apas me baat karne lagte hai chote rajya platinum sike ko le kar aur bade rajya us maya bi kitab k bare me .in sabko aise hi chod dete aur unko abhi bate karne dete hai.

Main-bhi king sintel se milne chala gaya aur mere pichhe yumina bhi.hum abhi apne bato me lage the tabhi teharma k prince hamare pass aa jate hai.

Prince teharma-king karma aur king sintel aap dono ko mere pranam.hum princess se aagrah karne aaye hai.vo bhi is pratiyogita me apna hunar hamare desh vasiyo ko bhi dikhaye.taki unhe dekh kar hamare logo aur kash kar ladkiyo ko unse prerana mile.maine aap se pahle inta kusal youdha nahi dekh aur main us din k liye aap sabhi se mafi bhi magta hu.

Yumina-agar aisi baat hai to.main jarur bhag lungi.
Main-prince teharma ko mafi magne ki jarurat nahi hai.ab to aap king baane vale hai.hum aap k is aagrah ko jarur pura karenge.

Prince teharma-king karma hame aap se aise hi umid thi.ab main chalta hu.hum aap se pratiyogita k maidaan pe milenge.uski sari jankari aap ko hamare sevak davara bejva diya jaye ga.itna bol kar vo vaha se chala jata hai lekin uske chere par ek devil smile rahti jisko sirf main hi dekh pata hu.

Main-king sintel aur yumina chale mahel.yumina to bahot khus thi aaj vo jo bhi chahati thi bina kuchh bole hi usko sab kuchh mil ja raha tha.

King sintel-king karma ab to aap pahle se bhi jada javan ho gaye ho. mujhe lagta hai prince teharma k maan me kuchh to chal raha hai.mujhe to nahi lagta vo itna jaldi sudhar jaye ga.dekha nahi uske haav bhaav dekh to to bilkul nahi lag raha tha.beti yumina tum sambal k rahna.ye price kutte ki puchh ki tarah hai jisse kitna bi kosis karo sidha karna ka vo kabhi sidha nahi ho sakta hai.maine iski puri janam kundli nikalvahi hai.baap bete dono ek jaise hi hai.

Yumina-chacha g aap fikar na karo main us kutte hi puchh hi is baar kat dungi.
Main-uski baat sun kar main aur sintel dono ko hasi aa gai.main chalo chodo usko hum use baad me dekh lenge.is samay maine aisa bol to diya lekin mujhe thoda chita to ho rahi thi.maine cholo chale ab.maine gate spell use kar ka sidha mahal k pass pauch gaye lekin is baar hamare sath king sintel bhi the.hum teeno sidhe mahal me chale gaye.

Hamare jane k baad prince taharma apne pita minata k pass chala jata hai.pita g maine apna kaam kar diya.apne bhi last me kya chal chala us maya bi kita ka.hamari bejti kiya tha na un baap beti ne.aab vo hamesa k liya kaid ho jaye gi sath me karma bhi. gaya to vo bi khud kaid ho jaye .pita g aur agar aisa ho gaya hum uske rajye pe hamla kar k kabja har lenge.isi k sath dono jor jor se hasne lagte hai……
to be continued.........
 

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Dear bhai,

Bhai bahut hi khoobsurat update hai
Aapki ek writer ki khubi bahut achi or unda hai likhne ka tarika BHI
Bhai God Bless u
Ese hi likhte rahe or ha aapna promises pura kiya karo bhai aapne 3 update ka bola tha aaj chalo koi nahi but kal 2 update try karna please bhai

Happy Diwali bhai
 
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Bhut he khubsurat update diya bhai .lagta hai jaldi he devil karma ko khule medan me dekhne ko moka mell sakta hai
Ager yamina ko kuch huwa to devil is back
 
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