Rohit1988
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Dear Bhai,
Bhai maja aa gaya bhai
Fantastic bhai ese hi likhte raho bhai
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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*
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update to dhasu tha bhai lekin tumne 3k hi sath itni sari shaktiyo ko mila diya hai bahut hi cofusiaa gaye hain hum........ Pahle level 1ki body osli blue shakti,,,, phiirr shadow ki takat or ab tum book ke pichhe akhir kitne shaktishali banige bhai....... Waha wo dungun intezaar me hai or tum ho ki yaha bhase ho.... Khair dekhte hai.... Badhiya wala update hai
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Hello, Ladies 
& Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
& Gentleman, We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
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sab se pahale tiwari bhai thank you so much mere story ko read karne k liye.and keep supporting.aur mujhe bahot achchha laga aap ne ye se sab kuchh mujhse puchha.main kosis karinga aap ka dought clear ho jaye.phir bhi nahi huva to phir se bhai puchh lena.
bhai karma k pass abhi sirf black shadow ki power hai.level 1 ;blue enery aur morank simba cromson ye sabhi se karma k dil ki jagah liya hai.inhi sabhi shakito k madat se kama din me insaan bana rahata hai. aur rahi baat book ka uska razz bhi aage pata chal jaye ga bhai.keep supporting aur koee sugession ho to bhai jarur share karna.next update thodi der me.
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UPDATE-24
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma dusre padav me pahochta hai yumina aur zinda bache huve logo k sath.
Ab aage……
Main-aur mere sath lagbhag 100 k ass pass log is samay jungle me the.hum sabhi ko lagbhag andaja to ho hi gaya tha. ki hum ab dusre padav me aa gaye hai.sabhi log aapas me bate kar rahe the. sirf do ko chod k. jaise undono ko kisi se kuchh lena dena hi na ho (dosto aap log to samjh hi gaye honge vo dono kaun hai chalo main hi bata deta hu ek to main aur dusra yumina).aur sath hi sabhi logo k chehare pe dusre padav pe pahunchane ki khusi saf dikh rahi thi is samay.tabhi ek aavaaj hum sabko sunaee deta hai.jaise hum sab ne us aavaaj ka pichha kiya to hame pata chala ye to dusre jadugar (mage) ki aavaaj hai. jisne hare rang ka kapda pahane k aasamaan me khada tha.jaise ki dosto maine aap sab ko pahale hi bataya tha kul 4 jadugar hai. ek ko to maine pahale padav me khatam kar diya tha. aur us jadugar ne pahale padav me chocolaty kapda pahana huva tha.aur is jadugar k kapde ka rang hara tha is samay .aur saiyog to dekhye is samay hum sab log jungle me the.ye sab kuchh dekh k ab mujhe samaj me aa gaya tha. jo jadugar jisa kadpa pahana ho ga usi k samband me ham sab pe musibate aaengee.aur ye dusra jadugar tha jiska hum sabne aavaaj suna tha.
Dusra(2) jadugar dusara padav-
Jadugar aasamaan me khada ho k swagat hai tum sabhi ka dusre padav me aur usi k sath apna dono haath upar kar deta hai .phir kya dhire dhire jungle aur bhi jada ghana hone laga.aur ab to itna ghana ho gaya tha ki .ek dusre k bagal me kaun khada hai usko bhi dekh pana bahot muskil hai ho raha tha tabhi.
Phir se usi jadugar (mage) ki aavaaj –hum ko sunaee deta hai.tum sab ye samajh ne ki bilkul bhool mat karna .ki ye sab ek maaya hai ye sab kuchh ek dum sach hai aur tum sab log ek aise jungle me ho jaha se aaj tak na koee bhi vapas zinda bahar aaya ho. aur nahi hi is jungle ko paar kar paya hai.itna bol kar jadugar shaant ho jata hai.
Dosto chalo ek baar teharma rajya me dekhte hai .vaha kya chal raha hai.ye kya dosto yaha to pratiyogita k maidaan k charo taraf ek kavach jaisa ban gaya hai is samay aur hum sabhi usme dikhaee de rahe the .aur hum sab log jo bhi bate kar rahe the aur jungle me kaha hai aur kaun kaha hai ye sabhi teharma raajya me baithe sabhi logo ko spast (clear) rup se dekh rahe the.aisa magic logo ko ashchary kar raha tha aur hum sab is samay kaha hai .ye kisi ko nahi pata tha sirf kuchh logo ko chhod kar.phir bhi sabhi log ham logo ko pratiyogita k maidaan se dekh sakte the.jis se sabhi logo ki dilachaspee aur badh gai thi .aur ab aage kya hone vala hai.in sabhi logo ko hamare khel ka anand lene do. Aur ek baar hum phir se Dosto chalet hai apni manzli ki tarf phir se usi jungle me.
Main-kuchh hi der me ab jungle ki halat pahale se bahot jada badal gaya tha. pahale jaha isi junge ko dekh k maan ko bahot sukun aur shaanti mil rahi thi. ab usi jungle ko dekh k aisa lag raha hai ki vo hi hamara kaal banne vala hai .jungle bahot jada ghana ho gaya hai aur din andera me badal gaya hai. ye sab kuchh dekh k mujhe kisi anjaan khatra ane ka abhaas hone laga.maine apne maan me abhi soch hi tha ki pata nahi kaha se safed dhund aana suru ho gaya. hum sabhi abhi ek musibat se nikle nahi the ki ek aur musibat aa gai.dhund mujhe bahot achchhi tarah se dikh rahi thi aur itna hi nahi mujhe ye bhi dikh raha tha kaun kaha khada hai aur to aur kis k maan me kya chal raha hai.ab aap log yahi soch rahe honge mujhe andhere me inta achchhe tarah se kaise dekh pa raha hu vo bhi bina kisi spell k .so to dosto main aap sab ek baat yaad dila deta hu .ab main black shadow ka malik hu jo kali duna aur kali saktiya ka pratik mana jata hai aur mani uska mailk hu aur raat hi to black shadow ki sabse badi takat hai .isliye ab meri takate bhi raat ko bahot jada badh jati hai.aur is jungle ne mera kaam aur jada aasaan kar diya tha.
Is samay sabhi log apne maan me yahi soch rahe hai aage kya karna hai kaise karna aur kaise is jungle me us black stone ko dhundenge aur ab kis tarah ki musibat aane vali hai.ek baat to sab ko pata tha jo bhi musibat aaye gi vo pahle vali se badi aur khatarnak ho gi.
Main-jungle me jitne log the lag bhag sabhi k maan me yahi chal raha tha. lekin log apni taraf aane vale khatre se anjan the. sirf kuchh gine chune logo ko chod k .kuchh gine chune log to bahot utsaahit dikhi de rahe the.aur isme meri gudiya bhi thi.abhi main kisi aur ki maan ki baat jaan pata .ek baar phir se suru ho gaya logo ki cheekhne aur tadapne ki aavaaj aane lagi charao taraf se sirf dard bhari cheekhe aa rahi thi .jaise jaise vo safed dhund badh rahi thi .vaise vaise logi ki chhekhe bhi badti jaa rahi thi .ye cheekhe koee sadharan nahi thi. aisa lag raha tha jaise koee to hai jo logo ko tadpa tadpa k maar raha hai aur sath hi un sabhi ki atmao ko nigal raha hai. Isliye marne vale loga ka sarir hame dikh nahi raha tha.
Main-bhi us safed dunnd ki taraf badhne laga lekin ye kya ye koee dhund nahi hai ye to vishaila zahar (poision) hai.aur jaise hi mujhe is baat ka pata chala maine bahot joor chilla k bolo logo se ye koee dhund nahi hai ye ek vishaila zahar sabhi apne aap ko kavach se surakshit kar le.aur isi k sath turant maine apne wind magic se us vishaila zaher ko aasamaan ki taraf mood diya.lekin itne der me us vishaila zahar ne apna kaam kar diya diya tha .40 log uski bali chad gaye the.lekin kuchh hi der me sabhi logo ne apne aap ko sabhal liya aur sath hi apni magic use karne lage the bahot se logo ne fire or light magic use kiya .aur jungle me jaise hi sabki fire or light ek jagah aai to hum sab k hosh hi ud gaye jitne log bhi mare gaye the un sabhi ki jagah ab rakh padi huvi thi unki haddiya bhi nahi bachi thi .isse hum logo ko pata chala ki vo vishaila zahar kitna ghatak tha.hum sabhi log ab ek sath aa gaye the aur apas me ek sath baat karne lage aage kya karna hai .q ki abhi tak hame hamara dusman dikha bhi nahi tha .lekin ek baat to pakki thi vo jo bhi hai bahot hi khatarnak hai.tabhi pata nahi kaha se aag ki barish hone lagi .iske vaja se hum sab log alag ho gaye lekin aag jisko ko chu raha tha vo sab bhaaph (steam) me badal ja raha tha.is aag me bahot log bali chad gaye lekin abhi bhi hum logo ko kuchh pata hi nahi chal raha tha akhir ye sab kar kaun raha hai.tabhi achanak se ek vishal kaee ajgar hum sabke samne aa gaya.jise dekh k koee bhi dar jaye 50foot ka dikh raha tha vo.vo bhi koee sadharan nahi tha .ye to hum sab ko dekh k hi pata chal gaya tha.
Us ajgar ko dekh k sab log turant ped k pichhe chip gaye mere taraf kam se kam 8-10 log kahe the aur yumina bhi thi.
Main-dosto hum is ajgar ko aamane saamane lad k to nahi hara sakte hai.isliye sabse pahle hame is ki kamjori ko dhundna ho ga tabhi hum ajgar ko mara sakte hai.akela isko marna namumkin hai .sabhi ek sath bolte hai haa tum sabhi bol rahe ho.lekin tab tak kuchh logo ne apni bahaduri dikhane k liye uske samane chale gaye phir kya hona tha .ajgar ne palak japkte hi un 5 logo ko apne munh me khich liya .ye drish hum sabh ped k pichhe se dekh rahe the lekin kar kuchh bhi nahi paye.
Maine-apni shaki ka istamaal kar k ajgar ko bahot dhayan se dekha to mujhe uski takat aur kamjori pata chal gaya.main dosto mujhe lagta hai is ajgar ki takat iska munh hi hai.aur uski aankhe.meri baat dhayan se suno agar usko marna hai aur tisre padav me jana hai to.main jaisa bolunga ga vaise hi karna hoga.
Sabhi log-thik hai .jaisa tum kaho.iske alava chara hi kya hai hum logo k pass. tabhi
Ajgar-mere sikharo kaha chip gaye ho aaj main tum sabka ka kaal baan k aaya hu.jaldi se mere pass aa jao to main tum logo ko kam taklif dunga.nahi to….itna bol k vo jor jor se hasne laga..
Main-sabhi meri baat dhayan se suno sabse pahle hame uske munh ko kisi chip chipi cheej se baand karna hoga taki hame kuchh samay mil sake us ke aankho pe lagatar aag aur ya light energy se hamla karna pade . aur main tab tak uske sir ko use agal kar dunga. Baki log mundi katne k baad usko jala denge.sab samjh gaye na .hum log 11 the .hum sab 3 group me bat gaye main akela aur baki 5 -5 ke .
2nd group me-2 ladkiya aur teen ladke the jis me yumina bhi thi.
3rd group me-5 cho ladke the.
Ab sab se badi baat ye thi us ajgar ka munh kaise band kare.tabhi 2nd group k ladki ne mujhe pata hai uska munh kaise band karna hai.safo ko doodh(milk) pasand nahi hai doodh unke liye jahar k saman hota hai.
Main-to kya.tum kya karne vali ho.
Ladki -2nd group ki.tum sirf mera kamal dekhte jao.
Main –thik hai phir suro ho jao.tabhi
Ladki -2nd group ki main us ajgar ka munh aise chip chipa doodh se bhar dungi jis se vo jitna apna munh khole ga uske munh me utna hi doodh bharte jaye ga aur agar usne usko apne munh se nikala ki kosis kiya to bhi usko nikal nahi paye ga ulta uske pet me jane lege ga aur uske andar jate hi uske har cheej ko dhire dhire pathar ka banate jaye ga .lekin usme ek samasya hai us ajgar k munh me dalenge k kaise .
Main-sabhi log sabhse pahle us ladki k sujhav se bahot khus hote hai lekin akhiri baat uski sun kar dhukhi ho jate hai.tabhi main us ki chinta tum log mat karo ab vo ajgar khud usko khaye ga.
sabhi log- meri baat sun kar mujhe dekhne lage .
main- abhi dikhata hu tum sab bhi ko. ab sab taiyaar ho jao hame usko koee bhi mauka nahi dena hai .maine us ladki se tum apna magic satr karo .
Ladki- ne apna magic spell apne maan me bolti hai to mujhe bhi pata chal jata hai vo spell kya hai.tabhi hum sab k samne ek rosni jaisa aa jata hai.ab meri bari thi.
Maine- apne majic se usko ek insani ki sakal de diya us roshni ko jo us ldki ne apne magic se laya tha.
sabhi log- to mujhe aise dekh rahe the jaisa kabhi aaj tak kisi ne aisa maigic nahi dekha ho.lekin yumina k maan me kuchh aur hi chal raha tha.vo kya hai hum baad me dekhnge.
Maine-us insani roop ko ajgar ki tarf jane ka bola jo puri tarh doodh ki magic se bana tha.maine chare ko ajgar k samne bhej diya .ab hum sab ko intazar tha ajgar ko hamara chara nigalne ka.jaise hum sab ne socha tha vaise hi huva.is liye kahte hai adhik lalach theek nahi hota hai.kabhi kabhi lene k dene pad jata hai.
Ajgar-jaise hi usne hamara chara nigla .ab uski halat aisi ho gai hai ki .ab na to usko nikal pa raha tha aur nahi usko khaa pa raha tha.tabhi
Main-dosto jab tak ajdar hamre magic se free ho hame attak karana cha hiye .phir kya tha hum sab ne vahi kiya jo plan banaya tha.uske dono ankho par aag aur light magic use karne lage.ab nahi usko dikhai de raha tha nahi vo apna mumh khol paa raha tha isi ka fayada utha k main bhi apni black sword se ajgar k sar ko uske sarir se alag kar diya aur to aur behara chilla bhi nahi paya .chilata bhi to kaise uska munh to seal ho chuka tha.baki kaam 3rd group ne kar diya lekin uski mundi jal hi nahi rahi thi .sabhi 10 log usko jalane me lage the phir bhi kuchh nahi hora ha tha.tabhi maine dekha uska sar phir se uske sarir se judne k liye pichhe badhne laga .aur ab tak bako log jo pedo k pichhe chhupe the vo bhi aa gaye vo log bhi mundi jalane me madat karne lage.
Maine- dhayan se dekha to mere aankhe aur kali ho gai aur sath hi mujhe pata chala q phir se ajgar ka sar uske sarir se judne ja raha hai .pahale to uske sarir me jo atmaye kaid thi vo madat kar rahi thi aur sath hi vo jadugar bhi .isliye maine sab se pahle us ajgar k sarir ko apne talvar se ek hi jat ke me 2 tukde kar diya aur us ajgar ki sari atmao ko apme andar nigal liya .mujhe is kaam me lagbhag 5 minute lag gaye uski sari atmao ko khane me .aap sab soch sakte hai aab tak na jane kitno k sikar kiya ho ga .itna sari atmao ek ek hi din me khane ka baad mujhe bahot hi sukun maisus ho raha tha .mere aankhe jaise aur gahri kali hogai.ye sab kuchh maine itna jaldi kiya tha kisi ko khuchh dikhi hi nahi diya hoga.aur koee bhi mujhe atmao ko khate nahi dekh sakta hai.logo ko aisa hi lage ga main sirf khada hu.ab us ajgar ka sar jalne laga tha.
Tabhi us jadugar ne ajgar k bache huye sarir pe aag se hamla kar diya .sabhi logo ko laga lagta hai jadugar uski madat kar raha hai .
Maine-jaise hi ye dekha vo kya kar raha hai .main turant uske pass ja k uska sar uske sarir se alag kar diya.sabhi log mujhe aise dekh rahe the ki maine madat karne vale ko q maar diya.abhi kuchh vo puchhte maine khud hi bool diya .vo jadugar ham sab ko yahi kaid karna chata tha .is ajgar k sar me hi hai black stone hai .main ajgar k jale huve sarir k pass pahuch k usko hila ne laga tabhi usme se 30 black stone nikal k niche girne laga.sabhi ye dekh k hairan the. mujhe kaise malum huva black stone ajgar k sarir me hai.
Sabhi ek sath tumhe kaise pata chala.
Maine- dosto jab ajgar ki mundi jal nahi rah rahi thi tab maine aise hi uske sarir pe ek talvar mar diya tha aur usme se ek pathar jaise kuchh nikal k bahar aaya jise dekhne k baad mujhe pata chala ye to vahi black stone hai.aur mere shak pakka tab huva jab jadugar ne uske sarir pe apne aag se hamla kar diya.ab tak sabne ek ek black stone le liya tha ab hum sirf 25 hi bache the.jaise hi hum sabne black stone ko apne hatho me liya hum sab ek nadi k kinare pahoch gaye.
Dosto ye sab kuchh teharma k log dekh ke achambhit the kaise humne is padav ko bhi paar kar liya.ab sabhi k maan me yahi chal raha tha aur aage kya hone vala hai…aage kya hone vala hai aap logo ko bhi kal pata chale ga to be continued friend…..
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma dusre padav me pahochta hai yumina aur zinda bache huve logo k sath.
Ab aage……
Main-aur mere sath lagbhag 100 k ass pass log is samay jungle me the.hum sabhi ko lagbhag andaja to ho hi gaya tha. ki hum ab dusre padav me aa gaye hai.sabhi log aapas me bate kar rahe the. sirf do ko chod k. jaise undono ko kisi se kuchh lena dena hi na ho (dosto aap log to samjh hi gaye honge vo dono kaun hai chalo main hi bata deta hu ek to main aur dusra yumina).aur sath hi sabhi logo k chehare pe dusre padav pe pahunchane ki khusi saf dikh rahi thi is samay.tabhi ek aavaaj hum sabko sunaee deta hai.jaise hum sab ne us aavaaj ka pichha kiya to hame pata chala ye to dusre jadugar (mage) ki aavaaj hai. jisne hare rang ka kapda pahane k aasamaan me khada tha.jaise ki dosto maine aap sab ko pahale hi bataya tha kul 4 jadugar hai. ek ko to maine pahale padav me khatam kar diya tha. aur us jadugar ne pahale padav me chocolaty kapda pahana huva tha.aur is jadugar k kapde ka rang hara tha is samay .aur saiyog to dekhye is samay hum sab log jungle me the.ye sab kuchh dekh k ab mujhe samaj me aa gaya tha. jo jadugar jisa kadpa pahana ho ga usi k samband me ham sab pe musibate aaengee.aur ye dusra jadugar tha jiska hum sabne aavaaj suna tha.
Dusra(2) jadugar dusara padav-
Jadugar aasamaan me khada ho k swagat hai tum sabhi ka dusre padav me aur usi k sath apna dono haath upar kar deta hai .phir kya dhire dhire jungle aur bhi jada ghana hone laga.aur ab to itna ghana ho gaya tha ki .ek dusre k bagal me kaun khada hai usko bhi dekh pana bahot muskil hai ho raha tha tabhi.
Phir se usi jadugar (mage) ki aavaaj –hum ko sunaee deta hai.tum sab ye samajh ne ki bilkul bhool mat karna .ki ye sab ek maaya hai ye sab kuchh ek dum sach hai aur tum sab log ek aise jungle me ho jaha se aaj tak na koee bhi vapas zinda bahar aaya ho. aur nahi hi is jungle ko paar kar paya hai.itna bol kar jadugar shaant ho jata hai.
Dosto chalo ek baar teharma rajya me dekhte hai .vaha kya chal raha hai.ye kya dosto yaha to pratiyogita k maidaan k charo taraf ek kavach jaisa ban gaya hai is samay aur hum sabhi usme dikhaee de rahe the .aur hum sab log jo bhi bate kar rahe the aur jungle me kaha hai aur kaun kaha hai ye sabhi teharma raajya me baithe sabhi logo ko spast (clear) rup se dekh rahe the.aisa magic logo ko ashchary kar raha tha aur hum sab is samay kaha hai .ye kisi ko nahi pata tha sirf kuchh logo ko chhod kar.phir bhi sabhi log ham logo ko pratiyogita k maidaan se dekh sakte the.jis se sabhi logo ki dilachaspee aur badh gai thi .aur ab aage kya hone vala hai.in sabhi logo ko hamare khel ka anand lene do. Aur ek baar hum phir se Dosto chalet hai apni manzli ki tarf phir se usi jungle me.
Main-kuchh hi der me ab jungle ki halat pahale se bahot jada badal gaya tha. pahale jaha isi junge ko dekh k maan ko bahot sukun aur shaanti mil rahi thi. ab usi jungle ko dekh k aisa lag raha hai ki vo hi hamara kaal banne vala hai .jungle bahot jada ghana ho gaya hai aur din andera me badal gaya hai. ye sab kuchh dekh k mujhe kisi anjaan khatra ane ka abhaas hone laga.maine apne maan me abhi soch hi tha ki pata nahi kaha se safed dhund aana suru ho gaya. hum sabhi abhi ek musibat se nikle nahi the ki ek aur musibat aa gai.dhund mujhe bahot achchhi tarah se dikh rahi thi aur itna hi nahi mujhe ye bhi dikh raha tha kaun kaha khada hai aur to aur kis k maan me kya chal raha hai.ab aap log yahi soch rahe honge mujhe andhere me inta achchhe tarah se kaise dekh pa raha hu vo bhi bina kisi spell k .so to dosto main aap sab ek baat yaad dila deta hu .ab main black shadow ka malik hu jo kali duna aur kali saktiya ka pratik mana jata hai aur mani uska mailk hu aur raat hi to black shadow ki sabse badi takat hai .isliye ab meri takate bhi raat ko bahot jada badh jati hai.aur is jungle ne mera kaam aur jada aasaan kar diya tha.
Is samay sabhi log apne maan me yahi soch rahe hai aage kya karna hai kaise karna aur kaise is jungle me us black stone ko dhundenge aur ab kis tarah ki musibat aane vali hai.ek baat to sab ko pata tha jo bhi musibat aaye gi vo pahle vali se badi aur khatarnak ho gi.
Main-jungle me jitne log the lag bhag sabhi k maan me yahi chal raha tha. lekin log apni taraf aane vale khatre se anjan the. sirf kuchh gine chune logo ko chod k .kuchh gine chune log to bahot utsaahit dikhi de rahe the.aur isme meri gudiya bhi thi.abhi main kisi aur ki maan ki baat jaan pata .ek baar phir se suru ho gaya logo ki cheekhne aur tadapne ki aavaaj aane lagi charao taraf se sirf dard bhari cheekhe aa rahi thi .jaise jaise vo safed dhund badh rahi thi .vaise vaise logi ki chhekhe bhi badti jaa rahi thi .ye cheekhe koee sadharan nahi thi. aisa lag raha tha jaise koee to hai jo logo ko tadpa tadpa k maar raha hai aur sath hi un sabhi ki atmao ko nigal raha hai. Isliye marne vale loga ka sarir hame dikh nahi raha tha.
Main-bhi us safed dunnd ki taraf badhne laga lekin ye kya ye koee dhund nahi hai ye to vishaila zahar (poision) hai.aur jaise hi mujhe is baat ka pata chala maine bahot joor chilla k bolo logo se ye koee dhund nahi hai ye ek vishaila zahar sabhi apne aap ko kavach se surakshit kar le.aur isi k sath turant maine apne wind magic se us vishaila zaher ko aasamaan ki taraf mood diya.lekin itne der me us vishaila zahar ne apna kaam kar diya diya tha .40 log uski bali chad gaye the.lekin kuchh hi der me sabhi logo ne apne aap ko sabhal liya aur sath hi apni magic use karne lage the bahot se logo ne fire or light magic use kiya .aur jungle me jaise hi sabki fire or light ek jagah aai to hum sab k hosh hi ud gaye jitne log bhi mare gaye the un sabhi ki jagah ab rakh padi huvi thi unki haddiya bhi nahi bachi thi .isse hum logo ko pata chala ki vo vishaila zahar kitna ghatak tha.hum sabhi log ab ek sath aa gaye the aur apas me ek sath baat karne lage aage kya karna hai .q ki abhi tak hame hamara dusman dikha bhi nahi tha .lekin ek baat to pakki thi vo jo bhi hai bahot hi khatarnak hai.tabhi pata nahi kaha se aag ki barish hone lagi .iske vaja se hum sab log alag ho gaye lekin aag jisko ko chu raha tha vo sab bhaaph (steam) me badal ja raha tha.is aag me bahot log bali chad gaye lekin abhi bhi hum logo ko kuchh pata hi nahi chal raha tha akhir ye sab kar kaun raha hai.tabhi achanak se ek vishal kaee ajgar hum sabke samne aa gaya.jise dekh k koee bhi dar jaye 50foot ka dikh raha tha vo.vo bhi koee sadharan nahi tha .ye to hum sab ko dekh k hi pata chal gaya tha.
Us ajgar ko dekh k sab log turant ped k pichhe chip gaye mere taraf kam se kam 8-10 log kahe the aur yumina bhi thi.
Main-dosto hum is ajgar ko aamane saamane lad k to nahi hara sakte hai.isliye sabse pahle hame is ki kamjori ko dhundna ho ga tabhi hum ajgar ko mara sakte hai.akela isko marna namumkin hai .sabhi ek sath bolte hai haa tum sabhi bol rahe ho.lekin tab tak kuchh logo ne apni bahaduri dikhane k liye uske samane chale gaye phir kya hona tha .ajgar ne palak japkte hi un 5 logo ko apne munh me khich liya .ye drish hum sabh ped k pichhe se dekh rahe the lekin kar kuchh bhi nahi paye.
Maine-apni shaki ka istamaal kar k ajgar ko bahot dhayan se dekha to mujhe uski takat aur kamjori pata chal gaya.main dosto mujhe lagta hai is ajgar ki takat iska munh hi hai.aur uski aankhe.meri baat dhayan se suno agar usko marna hai aur tisre padav me jana hai to.main jaisa bolunga ga vaise hi karna hoga.
Sabhi log-thik hai .jaisa tum kaho.iske alava chara hi kya hai hum logo k pass. tabhi
Ajgar-mere sikharo kaha chip gaye ho aaj main tum sabka ka kaal baan k aaya hu.jaldi se mere pass aa jao to main tum logo ko kam taklif dunga.nahi to….itna bol k vo jor jor se hasne laga..
Main-sabhi meri baat dhayan se suno sabse pahle hame uske munh ko kisi chip chipi cheej se baand karna hoga taki hame kuchh samay mil sake us ke aankho pe lagatar aag aur ya light energy se hamla karna pade . aur main tab tak uske sir ko use agal kar dunga. Baki log mundi katne k baad usko jala denge.sab samjh gaye na .hum log 11 the .hum sab 3 group me bat gaye main akela aur baki 5 -5 ke .
2nd group me-2 ladkiya aur teen ladke the jis me yumina bhi thi.
3rd group me-5 cho ladke the.
Ab sab se badi baat ye thi us ajgar ka munh kaise band kare.tabhi 2nd group k ladki ne mujhe pata hai uska munh kaise band karna hai.safo ko doodh(milk) pasand nahi hai doodh unke liye jahar k saman hota hai.
Main-to kya.tum kya karne vali ho.
Ladki -2nd group ki.tum sirf mera kamal dekhte jao.
Main –thik hai phir suro ho jao.tabhi
Ladki -2nd group ki main us ajgar ka munh aise chip chipa doodh se bhar dungi jis se vo jitna apna munh khole ga uske munh me utna hi doodh bharte jaye ga aur agar usne usko apne munh se nikala ki kosis kiya to bhi usko nikal nahi paye ga ulta uske pet me jane lege ga aur uske andar jate hi uske har cheej ko dhire dhire pathar ka banate jaye ga .lekin usme ek samasya hai us ajgar k munh me dalenge k kaise .
Main-sabhi log sabhse pahle us ladki k sujhav se bahot khus hote hai lekin akhiri baat uski sun kar dhukhi ho jate hai.tabhi main us ki chinta tum log mat karo ab vo ajgar khud usko khaye ga.
sabhi log- meri baat sun kar mujhe dekhne lage .
main- abhi dikhata hu tum sab bhi ko. ab sab taiyaar ho jao hame usko koee bhi mauka nahi dena hai .maine us ladki se tum apna magic satr karo .
Ladki- ne apna magic spell apne maan me bolti hai to mujhe bhi pata chal jata hai vo spell kya hai.tabhi hum sab k samne ek rosni jaisa aa jata hai.ab meri bari thi.
Maine- apne majic se usko ek insani ki sakal de diya us roshni ko jo us ldki ne apne magic se laya tha.
sabhi log- to mujhe aise dekh rahe the jaisa kabhi aaj tak kisi ne aisa maigic nahi dekha ho.lekin yumina k maan me kuchh aur hi chal raha tha.vo kya hai hum baad me dekhnge.
Maine-us insani roop ko ajgar ki tarf jane ka bola jo puri tarh doodh ki magic se bana tha.maine chare ko ajgar k samne bhej diya .ab hum sab ko intazar tha ajgar ko hamara chara nigalne ka.jaise hum sab ne socha tha vaise hi huva.is liye kahte hai adhik lalach theek nahi hota hai.kabhi kabhi lene k dene pad jata hai.
Ajgar-jaise hi usne hamara chara nigla .ab uski halat aisi ho gai hai ki .ab na to usko nikal pa raha tha aur nahi usko khaa pa raha tha.tabhi
Main-dosto jab tak ajdar hamre magic se free ho hame attak karana cha hiye .phir kya tha hum sab ne vahi kiya jo plan banaya tha.uske dono ankho par aag aur light magic use karne lage.ab nahi usko dikhai de raha tha nahi vo apna mumh khol paa raha tha isi ka fayada utha k main bhi apni black sword se ajgar k sar ko uske sarir se alag kar diya aur to aur behara chilla bhi nahi paya .chilata bhi to kaise uska munh to seal ho chuka tha.baki kaam 3rd group ne kar diya lekin uski mundi jal hi nahi rahi thi .sabhi 10 log usko jalane me lage the phir bhi kuchh nahi hora ha tha.tabhi maine dekha uska sar phir se uske sarir se judne k liye pichhe badhne laga .aur ab tak bako log jo pedo k pichhe chhupe the vo bhi aa gaye vo log bhi mundi jalane me madat karne lage.
Maine- dhayan se dekha to mere aankhe aur kali ho gai aur sath hi mujhe pata chala q phir se ajgar ka sar uske sarir se judne ja raha hai .pahale to uske sarir me jo atmaye kaid thi vo madat kar rahi thi aur sath hi vo jadugar bhi .isliye maine sab se pahle us ajgar k sarir ko apne talvar se ek hi jat ke me 2 tukde kar diya aur us ajgar ki sari atmao ko apme andar nigal liya .mujhe is kaam me lagbhag 5 minute lag gaye uski sari atmao ko khane me .aap sab soch sakte hai aab tak na jane kitno k sikar kiya ho ga .itna sari atmao ek ek hi din me khane ka baad mujhe bahot hi sukun maisus ho raha tha .mere aankhe jaise aur gahri kali hogai.ye sab kuchh maine itna jaldi kiya tha kisi ko khuchh dikhi hi nahi diya hoga.aur koee bhi mujhe atmao ko khate nahi dekh sakta hai.logo ko aisa hi lage ga main sirf khada hu.ab us ajgar ka sar jalne laga tha.
Tabhi us jadugar ne ajgar k bache huye sarir pe aag se hamla kar diya .sabhi logo ko laga lagta hai jadugar uski madat kar raha hai .
Maine-jaise hi ye dekha vo kya kar raha hai .main turant uske pass ja k uska sar uske sarir se alag kar diya.sabhi log mujhe aise dekh rahe the ki maine madat karne vale ko q maar diya.abhi kuchh vo puchhte maine khud hi bool diya .vo jadugar ham sab ko yahi kaid karna chata tha .is ajgar k sar me hi hai black stone hai .main ajgar k jale huve sarir k pass pahuch k usko hila ne laga tabhi usme se 30 black stone nikal k niche girne laga.sabhi ye dekh k hairan the. mujhe kaise malum huva black stone ajgar k sarir me hai.
Sabhi ek sath tumhe kaise pata chala.
Maine- dosto jab ajgar ki mundi jal nahi rah rahi thi tab maine aise hi uske sarir pe ek talvar mar diya tha aur usme se ek pathar jaise kuchh nikal k bahar aaya jise dekhne k baad mujhe pata chala ye to vahi black stone hai.aur mere shak pakka tab huva jab jadugar ne uske sarir pe apne aag se hamla kar diya.ab tak sabne ek ek black stone le liya tha ab hum sirf 25 hi bache the.jaise hi hum sabne black stone ko apne hatho me liya hum sab ek nadi k kinare pahoch gaye.
Dosto ye sab kuchh teharma k log dekh ke achambhit the kaise humne is padav ko bhi paar kar liya.ab sabhi k maan me yahi chal raha tha aur aage kya hone vala hai…aage kya hone vala hai aap logo ko bhi kal pata chale ga to be continued friend…..
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