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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*
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Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma aur baki logo ne mil k ek sath dusre padav ki museebat ko khatam kiya .
Ab aage---
Main- Dosto ab main teesare padav me pahoch gaya hu aur mere sath 24 log aur hai jaha hum pahale 1000 se jada the pahale padav me vaha ab hum keval 25 hi rah gaye hai mujko mila k.is samay hum sab ek nadee k kinare khade hai aur hamre pichhe ek bahot hi ghana jungle hai.hum sabhi abhi lambi lambi saase le rahe the.aur lete bhi q nahi akhir itne bhayank ajgar se jaan jo bachi thi hum logo ki.lekin ab hum sab k samane ek aur bahot bada samasya khada ho gaya tha .hame jungle ki taraf jana hai ya nadee(river) ki taraf jana hai.hamara manzil kaha hai ye abhi tak hame pata nahi chala tha.hum sab log isi soch me dube the .lekin koee kisi se kuchh bol nahi raha tha.ab maahool aisa tha ki kuchh log nadee ki tarf dekh rahe the to kuchh ki nigaahe jungle ki taraf thi aur kuchh log baithe huve the .lekin koee bhi na to nadee ki tarf badh raha tha nahi hi jungle ki taraf sabhi apni apni hi soch me dube the.ab aage kya hone vala hai ye kisi ko bhi pata nahi tha.tabhi hamaare samane ek nile rang ka kapde pahane huva jadugar hum sab k samne nadi k kinare aa jata hai.Jaise hi vo jadugar aaya hum sabhi ki nigaahe us jadugar pe tik gai.
Jadugar-ye tum sabhi ka teesara padav hai.aur main teesraa jadugar hu.pahale do jadugar ki tarah hi main tum logo ko is padav k bare me batane aaya hu.
Teesara (3)jadugar teesara padav-
Jadugar – maine tum sab ko jaise bataya ki main teesare padav ka jadugar hu.ab tak tum logo ko achachhe se ye pata nahi hota hoga ki pahale do padav me tumhe kya karna tha.lekin is padav me main tum logo ko sab kuchh bataunga tumhe kya karna hai aur tum logo ka manzil kya.ye padav sab se asan hai mere nazariye me.isliye ek baar phir se main tum sabhi ka teesare padav me swagat karta hu.aur tumhara teesara padav bahot hi aasaan hai .tum sabhi logo ko sirf nadee (river) k bicho bich jo pahadi hai na us pahadi pe pahochna hai vaha tumhe black stone mile ga.is padav me tum sabhi ko us pahadi pe jana hai jo nadee k bicho bich hai.hain na kitna aasaan.itna bol kar jadugar gaayab ho jata hai.
Jadugar k jane k baad bahot se logo k chehare par khusi jhalakane lagi.aur log khus hote bhi q nahi akhir kaar teesare padav k jadugar ne hum logo ko sab kuchh bata jo diya tha aur ye bhi bata diya tha teesara padav kitna aasaan hai.
Main-ab hum sabhi ko apni manzil pata tha.lekin mujhe jadugar k chere par ki khusi kuchh raas nahi aaya tha .jo jadugar k jane k samay maine dekha tha.uski chehare ki khusi se mujhe kisi prakar ka chal nazar ra raha tha.abhi main apne maan me soch vichar kar rah tha aur sathi hi maine apni search magic use kar k dekha kahi nadi me koee maaya bi janvar to nahi hai.lekin mujhe kuchh nahi mila.ye dekh mujhe bhi lagne laga sayad jadugar sach bol raha tha.main apne maan me lagta hai main kuchh jada hi shak karne laga hu.abhi mere maan me yahi sab vichar chal raha tha.tabhi
Kuchh log- aapas me baat karne lagte hai. Tabhi ek bolta hai dosto main to ja raha hu us pahadi par aur jin logo ko bhi wind magic aata hai vo mere sath chal sakta hai.aur dekhte hi dekhte us k ksath 5 log aur aa gaye.ab vo 6 log ho gaye the.
Maine-abhi kuch bolta usase pahale hi…vo sab us pahadi ki taraf chal pade.lekin jaise hi vo nadee k kinare se kuchh dur gaye hi the ki vo sabhi 6 logo ko nadee ne apne andar khich liya aur un bechar ko to apni madat magne ka bhi ek mauka nahi mil paya.aur hum sab bus nadee k kinare se un sabhi ko tadapte huve nadee me samate huve dekhte rah gaye.aur hum log kuchh kar bhi nahi pae unlogo k liye.ab jaha kuchh der pahale sabhi k chere par khusi chhaee huee thi .ab sabhi k maan me ek baar phir se dar panapne laga 6 logo ko aise marte dekh k.
Main-sabhi k maan me kya chal raha hai aur kitna sabhi dar rahe hai. main maisus kar sakta tha.mujhe bhi abhi tak kuchh samaj me nahi aa raha tha .kaise us pahari tak pahucha jaye.main apne maan me is minata ;prince aur mahaamantree ne koee kasar nahi chhoda hai meri gudiya ko mujhe chhinane ka.vo to aacha hai main yaha par hu nahi to pata nahi kahi kuchh ho jata to main apne aap ko kabhi nahi maaf kar pata.aakhir maine bhi to is khel k liye hami bhari thi.
Main- gusse se apne maan me bolta hu.Teeno ne sirf apna badla lene k liye mujhse aur yumina se kitna jano ki bali chada di is khel k naam pe.in teeno k sath main ab isisa khel khelunga ki vo jindagee me kabhi koee khel ka ayojan nahi karenge.
Main-ab mujhe yehi kosis karna hai kam se kam log is khel ki bhet(bali) chadhe maan me main bolta hu.tabhi mujhe ek ladki ki aavaaj sunaee deti.vo mujhe dekh apna hath hila kar isara kar rahi thi.dosto ab main kuchh logo ka intro deta hu.ab hum log 19 hi bache hai.jisme sirf 3 ladkiya hai baki sab ladke hai.
Maine-us ladki ki taraf apne chehara kar k (dosto main abhi bhi apne kavach me tha puri tarah helmet k sath q ki. khel jab se suru huva tha main tabhi se shadow k rup me hu.jab main shadow banta hu meri aavaaj bi badal jati).g mujh se aap bol rahi ho.
Ladki-ha ha aap ko bol rahi hu main.mera naam ruchi hai aur main garga desh ki night hu.aur aap kaun ho.kaha se ho.aapka naam kya hai…inta bolte bolte vo ab tak mere pass aa gai thi.
Main-ruchi g log mujhe shadow naam se bulate hai.q ye to mujhe pata nahi.mera koee ghar nahi hai. na hi main kisi raaya ka hu.jaha maan chahe vahi chala jata hu.(dosto us ladki se baat karte samay mujhe jo bhi thik laga maine usko vahi bol diya…vaise bhi main kosi ko apni sachaee nahi bta sakta tha.)
Ladki –shadow jaisa naam vaisa kaam bhi hai.aap to bahot hi mahir talvaar baaj lagte hai.kaise palak japkte hi us ajgar ka sir uske sar se alag kar diya tha.kya main is shadow ka chehara dekh sakti hu.
Main-(dosto ye vahi ladki hai jisne us ajgar ka munh band karne ka doodh ka sujhav aur doodh vala magic kiya tha).main us ladki ki baat sun k .kya baat hai ruchi g mera chehara dekhni chahati hai kahi aap ko mujhe…..itna bol kar main usko dekhne laga.vaise vo sach me inta gori thi jaisa dood ki bani ho.dekh k lag raha tha .yumina se ek do hi saal badi ho.agar main shadow nahi to uski jagah ek insan hota to ab tak pata nahi hum dono k bich kya kuchh ho chuka hota tha . usme itna akarshan jo tha.lekin jaab se main shadow baana hu ye sab ka mujpe koee asar nahi padta hai.jab tak ki meri khud hi ichchha na ho.
Ruchi-sharma kar nahi nahi aisa kuchh bi nahi .mujhe to bus us mahaan k darshan karna hai jiske karan hum sab teesare padav me pahoche hai.(lekin maan me uske kuchh aur hi chal raha tha…vo to aap logo ko baad me pata chale ga dosto).tab tak yumina bhi mere pass aa gai.
Yumina-mera naam yumina hai aur main melboalfan ki yoddha hai.(apni pahachan chupa kar).maine bhi ap jaisa talvaar baaj nahi dekha hai.meri bhi ichchhha hai aap ko dekh ne ki.
Main-dekhie abhi to apne jeene ka koee thikana nahi hai.lekin aakharee padav agar hum sab ne paar kar liye to main jarur apna chera dikha dunga thik hai na ab .lekin daar maat jana mujhe dekh k main haste huve ye baat bolta hu.ab hamare pass lag bhag sabhi log aa gaye the.sabhi se baat karne pe mujhe ye pata chala is khel me koee bi teharama raajya ka nahi hai sabhi log alag alag raajyo se hai.main dosto hum sabhi ko mil kar is padav ko bhi paar karna hoga nahi to hum is padav ko paar nahi kar sakte hai.
Sabhi ek sath haa shadow tum sahi bol rahe ho.lekin hum is nadee ko paar kaise kare us k paar jae to jae kaise bhai .aur phir kaise paar kare .is samay sabhi ne apni helmet nikaal diya tha sirf mujhe chhod k.tabhi ek ne ek sujhav diya q na hum log is nadi me barf ka pul banye .sabhi logo ko sun k ye sujahv bahot aacha laga.phir kya tha 4 logo ne mil kar nidi me barf ka pul bana diya .barf ka pul abhi tak tika tha.jaise hi logo ne dekha pul pani me nahi dub raha hai turant teen log us par bhag kar paar karne lage.abhi vo teeno pahad k pass pahochne hi vale the ki un k sath bhi vahi huva jo pahle 6 logo k sath huva tha.vo teeno bhi nadi me sama gaye.ye plan bhi hamara fail ho gaya.jaha abhi kuchh der pahle ek asha ki kiran dikhi thi .ek baar phir se nirasa chha gaee.ab hum sirf 16 log rah gaye hai.hum sab jab se nadi k kinare aaye hai tab se yaha raat jaisa vatavaran bana huva tha.sirf chand ki rosni dikh rahi thi.tabhi
Main-sabhi ka dhyaan apni taraf khichte huve dosto q na thodi aag jala liya jaye sayad hume kuchh upay hi mil jaye.jisko koee jaruri kaam hai to pichhe jungle bhi hai.kar sakta hai dosto.tab tak main lkadiya le k aata hu.main jaise hi utha mere sath yumina aur ruchi bhi chalne lagi kuchh log vahi baith gaye aur 4 log hamre sath hi jungle ki taraf badh gaye.jaise hi hum gaye hume ek sukha ped mil gaya.maine jaldi se kuchh lakadiya ped se tor kar niche gira diya yumina aur richa dono niche giri huvi lakadiya utha rahi thi .main ped se niche utra hi tha ki tabhi ek dard bari cheekh jungle me goong gai.tabhi 3 log bhate huye bhago bhago yaha se bhate huye jungle se bahar nikal gaye .ab sirf hum teen rah gaye tabhi hamre samne ek bina sir vale admi apne hath me talvar le k hamare tarf aane laga main dono se tum dono lakdi le k jao main abhi aaya.dono abhi kuchh bolti tab tak usne apni talvar chala di maine bhi apni talvar se uske talvar pe war kar diya uski talvaar tut gai mere talvaar se takrate hi.ye dekh dono khus ho gai.lekin ye kya jise hi uski talvar tuti phir se uski talvaar pahle jaise ho gai lekin ab vo do ho gaye the bina sir vale .ab ruchi aur yumina bhi maidaqn me uthar gai thi.dono ne ek hi jatke me uska ek ek hath kat diya.phir kya do aur aa gaye.maine jaise hi dekh to mujhe samjhte der nahi lagi ki ki is bina sar vale aadmi ko marna bilkul bhi aasaan nahi hai isliye maine bina kuchh bole lakadiya aur dono ko le k sidha nadi k pass aa gaya.tabhi jungle se joor joor se hasne ka aavaaj aane laga.kab tak bacho ge .subha hote main tum sab ko khatam kar dunga.uske baad aavaaj aana band ho jata hai jungle se.
Main-dosto hume jaldi hi kuchh hal nikalna pade ga.is nadee ka .nahi to duri musibat hamara intazar kar raha hai.aur hame samay ka kuchh pata nahi kab subah ho jaye ga.agar subah se pahle hum logo ne is nadee ko nahi paar kiya to pata nahi subaha(morning) me nadee apna kaun sa rang dikhaye gi.subaha to hamari halat dono taraf khai jaise ho jaye gi dosto.aur har bite pal hum apna ek sathi kho rahe hai.ab to ye sab kuchh dekh k dosto hum sab ko josh me hosh se kaam lena ho ga.tab tak maine aag jala diya tha.aur vahi
Ruchi or yumina dono –ek sath shadow tum ne hame ladne q nahi diya us sar kate se.
Main-tum dono abhi bhi us baat ko le k baithi ho jab ki hamare samne inti bari museebat pahale se hai.rahi baat rokne ki to tum dono dekh nahi rahi thi jaise hi uska shareer ya uska talvar usase alag ho raha tha us k utne hi rup baan rahe the .kuchh der agar aur rahte pata nahi kya hota.abhi tum dono uske bare me mat socho .ye socho ki nadee ko kaise paar karna hai.abhi hum sab baat hi kar rahe the ki ek bahot yoddha jor jor se rone laga aur kahne laga ab koee nahi bache ga aur jaha maine aag lagai thi usi me se 2-3 lakadiya pani me fekne lagta hai gusse me .jaise hi meri nazar us jalti huve lakadiyo pe gai vo jaha aag jal raha tha us side ki lakdi pani me tair rahi thi or vahi dusri taraf ki lakadi pane me doop gai thi.mujhe ye dekh k sab samajh me aa gaya tha kaise is nadee ko paar karna hai. Kahate hai na dosto kabhi kabhi dusman ko harane k liye uske dusman ka istamal karna padta hai.jaise aag aur pani.
Main-dosto samay aa gaya hai is nadee ko paar karne ka .itna bol kar maine apne samne dher sari lakadi la di aur uske dono taraf aag laga diya aur sabhi lakadiyo ko nadee k ek chhor se le kar pahadi tak ka ek pul jaisa maine bana diya.maine jisko mere sath chalna hai chalo.main us aag k pul ko dhire dhire paar karte huve pahadi pe pahoch gaya aur mere pichhe pichhe sabhi aa gaye jab unhone dekha main sahi salamat pahoch gaya hu.hamri ek museebat abhi katam hi huva tha tabhi vo jadugar aa gaya jaha black stone rakha tha uske charo tarf pani ka kavach bana diya.jise dekh ruchi aur yumina ko bahot gussa aaya dono ne ek sath war kiya ruchi ne bhale se aur yumina ne fire se .bhala aur aag ka gola sidha jadugar k sine k aar paar ho gaya.aur vo sidha pahadi pe gir k chilate huve aur tadapte huve mar gaya.jaise maine pahale bhi kaha tha josh me hosh nahi khona cha hiye.yaha bhi vahi huva hum logo k sath hamare samne hi black stone tha.lekin kuchh logo ko to sabar naam ka cheej hi nahi hota hai.tabhi 3 log ne sidha us pani k kavch pe apna haath dal diya jisme black stone rakha tha.phir kaya jise hi unhone apna haath dala un teeno k shareer k chithde ud gaye. Ab Hum sab k samne ek aur musibat aa gaya tha black stone kaise le.tabhi main sabhi apni aag ki taakat ka istamal karte hai.sayad ye kavach bhaf ban k ud jaye lekin kuchh bi nahi huva hami aag se.
Tabhi mujhe yaad aata hai hame jadu ko kaam nahi aaye ga. us lakadi ka istamaal karna ho ga jiski madat se humne us nadi ko paar kiya. main turant niche se ek lakdi le aaya sabhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the .main kya kar raha hu.jaise hi maine us pani k kavach me aag vali lakadi dali turant vo pani ka kavach bhaf ban k ud gai.sabhi mujhe ek dum ashcharya se dekhne lage.
Main-samaj gaya ye sab kya puchhne vale hai.main dosto tum sab yahi jaana chahate ho na jab hum sab ne aag ka istama kiya phir bhi kuchh nahi huva lekin ab kaise .dosto yaha par jadu ka istamal ki manahi hai isliye hamara fire spell yaha par kaam nahi kar raha tha.tabhi mujhe yaad aaya q na jis tarike se hum sab ne nadi paar kiya hai usi ka yaha bhi istamal kar k dekhu.uske baad jo kuchh bhi huva aap sab ne dekha hi.meri baat sun k sabhi log tali bajane lage.ab hum sirf 12 log hi bache hai.uske baad turant hum sabne black stone jaise hi chuva hum sab ne apni aap ko ek gufa me paya.aur vahi
Hum sabhi jo bhi kar rahe the ya jo kuchh bhi hamare sath ho raha tha aur sath hi hum sab ne kaise mil kar is padav ko paar kiya ye sabhi teharma me sabhi log dekh rahe the.aur sath hi agle padav ka intazaar bhi kar rahe the….ki aage kya hone vala hai…
to be continued .. .
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma aur baki logo ne mil k ek sath dusre padav ki museebat ko khatam kiya .
Ab aage---
Main- Dosto ab main teesare padav me pahoch gaya hu aur mere sath 24 log aur hai jaha hum pahale 1000 se jada the pahale padav me vaha ab hum keval 25 hi rah gaye hai mujko mila k.is samay hum sab ek nadee k kinare khade hai aur hamre pichhe ek bahot hi ghana jungle hai.hum sabhi abhi lambi lambi saase le rahe the.aur lete bhi q nahi akhir itne bhayank ajgar se jaan jo bachi thi hum logo ki.lekin ab hum sab k samane ek aur bahot bada samasya khada ho gaya tha .hame jungle ki taraf jana hai ya nadee(river) ki taraf jana hai.hamara manzil kaha hai ye abhi tak hame pata nahi chala tha.hum sab log isi soch me dube the .lekin koee kisi se kuchh bol nahi raha tha.ab maahool aisa tha ki kuchh log nadee ki tarf dekh rahe the to kuchh ki nigaahe jungle ki taraf thi aur kuchh log baithe huve the .lekin koee bhi na to nadee ki tarf badh raha tha nahi hi jungle ki taraf sabhi apni apni hi soch me dube the.ab aage kya hone vala hai ye kisi ko bhi pata nahi tha.tabhi hamaare samane ek nile rang ka kapde pahane huva jadugar hum sab k samne nadi k kinare aa jata hai.Jaise hi vo jadugar aaya hum sabhi ki nigaahe us jadugar pe tik gai.
Jadugar-ye tum sabhi ka teesara padav hai.aur main teesraa jadugar hu.pahale do jadugar ki tarah hi main tum logo ko is padav k bare me batane aaya hu.
Teesara (3)jadugar teesara padav-
Jadugar – maine tum sab ko jaise bataya ki main teesare padav ka jadugar hu.ab tak tum logo ko achachhe se ye pata nahi hota hoga ki pahale do padav me tumhe kya karna tha.lekin is padav me main tum logo ko sab kuchh bataunga tumhe kya karna hai aur tum logo ka manzil kya.ye padav sab se asan hai mere nazariye me.isliye ek baar phir se main tum sabhi ka teesare padav me swagat karta hu.aur tumhara teesara padav bahot hi aasaan hai .tum sabhi logo ko sirf nadee (river) k bicho bich jo pahadi hai na us pahadi pe pahochna hai vaha tumhe black stone mile ga.is padav me tum sabhi ko us pahadi pe jana hai jo nadee k bicho bich hai.hain na kitna aasaan.itna bol kar jadugar gaayab ho jata hai.
Jadugar k jane k baad bahot se logo k chehare par khusi jhalakane lagi.aur log khus hote bhi q nahi akhir kaar teesare padav k jadugar ne hum logo ko sab kuchh bata jo diya tha aur ye bhi bata diya tha teesara padav kitna aasaan hai.
Main-ab hum sabhi ko apni manzil pata tha.lekin mujhe jadugar k chere par ki khusi kuchh raas nahi aaya tha .jo jadugar k jane k samay maine dekha tha.uski chehare ki khusi se mujhe kisi prakar ka chal nazar ra raha tha.abhi main apne maan me soch vichar kar rah tha aur sathi hi maine apni search magic use kar k dekha kahi nadi me koee maaya bi janvar to nahi hai.lekin mujhe kuchh nahi mila.ye dekh mujhe bhi lagne laga sayad jadugar sach bol raha tha.main apne maan me lagta hai main kuchh jada hi shak karne laga hu.abhi mere maan me yahi sab vichar chal raha tha.tabhi
Kuchh log- aapas me baat karne lagte hai. Tabhi ek bolta hai dosto main to ja raha hu us pahadi par aur jin logo ko bhi wind magic aata hai vo mere sath chal sakta hai.aur dekhte hi dekhte us k ksath 5 log aur aa gaye.ab vo 6 log ho gaye the.
Maine-abhi kuch bolta usase pahale hi…vo sab us pahadi ki taraf chal pade.lekin jaise hi vo nadee k kinare se kuchh dur gaye hi the ki vo sabhi 6 logo ko nadee ne apne andar khich liya aur un bechar ko to apni madat magne ka bhi ek mauka nahi mil paya.aur hum sab bus nadee k kinare se un sabhi ko tadapte huve nadee me samate huve dekhte rah gaye.aur hum log kuchh kar bhi nahi pae unlogo k liye.ab jaha kuchh der pahale sabhi k chere par khusi chhaee huee thi .ab sabhi k maan me ek baar phir se dar panapne laga 6 logo ko aise marte dekh k.
Main-sabhi k maan me kya chal raha hai aur kitna sabhi dar rahe hai. main maisus kar sakta tha.mujhe bhi abhi tak kuchh samaj me nahi aa raha tha .kaise us pahari tak pahucha jaye.main apne maan me is minata ;prince aur mahaamantree ne koee kasar nahi chhoda hai meri gudiya ko mujhe chhinane ka.vo to aacha hai main yaha par hu nahi to pata nahi kahi kuchh ho jata to main apne aap ko kabhi nahi maaf kar pata.aakhir maine bhi to is khel k liye hami bhari thi.
Main- gusse se apne maan me bolta hu.Teeno ne sirf apna badla lene k liye mujhse aur yumina se kitna jano ki bali chada di is khel k naam pe.in teeno k sath main ab isisa khel khelunga ki vo jindagee me kabhi koee khel ka ayojan nahi karenge.
Main-ab mujhe yehi kosis karna hai kam se kam log is khel ki bhet(bali) chadhe maan me main bolta hu.tabhi mujhe ek ladki ki aavaaj sunaee deti.vo mujhe dekh apna hath hila kar isara kar rahi thi.dosto ab main kuchh logo ka intro deta hu.ab hum log 19 hi bache hai.jisme sirf 3 ladkiya hai baki sab ladke hai.
Maine-us ladki ki taraf apne chehara kar k (dosto main abhi bhi apne kavach me tha puri tarah helmet k sath q ki. khel jab se suru huva tha main tabhi se shadow k rup me hu.jab main shadow banta hu meri aavaaj bi badal jati).g mujh se aap bol rahi ho.
Ladki-ha ha aap ko bol rahi hu main.mera naam ruchi hai aur main garga desh ki night hu.aur aap kaun ho.kaha se ho.aapka naam kya hai…inta bolte bolte vo ab tak mere pass aa gai thi.
Main-ruchi g log mujhe shadow naam se bulate hai.q ye to mujhe pata nahi.mera koee ghar nahi hai. na hi main kisi raaya ka hu.jaha maan chahe vahi chala jata hu.(dosto us ladki se baat karte samay mujhe jo bhi thik laga maine usko vahi bol diya…vaise bhi main kosi ko apni sachaee nahi bta sakta tha.)
Ladki –shadow jaisa naam vaisa kaam bhi hai.aap to bahot hi mahir talvaar baaj lagte hai.kaise palak japkte hi us ajgar ka sir uske sar se alag kar diya tha.kya main is shadow ka chehara dekh sakti hu.
Main-(dosto ye vahi ladki hai jisne us ajgar ka munh band karne ka doodh ka sujhav aur doodh vala magic kiya tha).main us ladki ki baat sun k .kya baat hai ruchi g mera chehara dekhni chahati hai kahi aap ko mujhe…..itna bol kar main usko dekhne laga.vaise vo sach me inta gori thi jaisa dood ki bani ho.dekh k lag raha tha .yumina se ek do hi saal badi ho.agar main shadow nahi to uski jagah ek insan hota to ab tak pata nahi hum dono k bich kya kuchh ho chuka hota tha . usme itna akarshan jo tha.lekin jaab se main shadow baana hu ye sab ka mujpe koee asar nahi padta hai.jab tak ki meri khud hi ichchha na ho.
Ruchi-sharma kar nahi nahi aisa kuchh bi nahi .mujhe to bus us mahaan k darshan karna hai jiske karan hum sab teesare padav me pahoche hai.(lekin maan me uske kuchh aur hi chal raha tha…vo to aap logo ko baad me pata chale ga dosto).tab tak yumina bhi mere pass aa gai.
Yumina-mera naam yumina hai aur main melboalfan ki yoddha hai.(apni pahachan chupa kar).maine bhi ap jaisa talvaar baaj nahi dekha hai.meri bhi ichchhha hai aap ko dekh ne ki.
Main-dekhie abhi to apne jeene ka koee thikana nahi hai.lekin aakharee padav agar hum sab ne paar kar liye to main jarur apna chera dikha dunga thik hai na ab .lekin daar maat jana mujhe dekh k main haste huve ye baat bolta hu.ab hamare pass lag bhag sabhi log aa gaye the.sabhi se baat karne pe mujhe ye pata chala is khel me koee bi teharama raajya ka nahi hai sabhi log alag alag raajyo se hai.main dosto hum sabhi ko mil kar is padav ko bhi paar karna hoga nahi to hum is padav ko paar nahi kar sakte hai.
Sabhi ek sath haa shadow tum sahi bol rahe ho.lekin hum is nadee ko paar kaise kare us k paar jae to jae kaise bhai .aur phir kaise paar kare .is samay sabhi ne apni helmet nikaal diya tha sirf mujhe chhod k.tabhi ek ne ek sujhav diya q na hum log is nadi me barf ka pul banye .sabhi logo ko sun k ye sujahv bahot aacha laga.phir kya tha 4 logo ne mil kar nidi me barf ka pul bana diya .barf ka pul abhi tak tika tha.jaise hi logo ne dekha pul pani me nahi dub raha hai turant teen log us par bhag kar paar karne lage.abhi vo teeno pahad k pass pahochne hi vale the ki un k sath bhi vahi huva jo pahle 6 logo k sath huva tha.vo teeno bhi nadi me sama gaye.ye plan bhi hamara fail ho gaya.jaha abhi kuchh der pahle ek asha ki kiran dikhi thi .ek baar phir se nirasa chha gaee.ab hum sirf 16 log rah gaye hai.hum sab jab se nadi k kinare aaye hai tab se yaha raat jaisa vatavaran bana huva tha.sirf chand ki rosni dikh rahi thi.tabhi
Main-sabhi ka dhyaan apni taraf khichte huve dosto q na thodi aag jala liya jaye sayad hume kuchh upay hi mil jaye.jisko koee jaruri kaam hai to pichhe jungle bhi hai.kar sakta hai dosto.tab tak main lkadiya le k aata hu.main jaise hi utha mere sath yumina aur ruchi bhi chalne lagi kuchh log vahi baith gaye aur 4 log hamre sath hi jungle ki taraf badh gaye.jaise hi hum gaye hume ek sukha ped mil gaya.maine jaldi se kuchh lakadiya ped se tor kar niche gira diya yumina aur richa dono niche giri huvi lakadiya utha rahi thi .main ped se niche utra hi tha ki tabhi ek dard bari cheekh jungle me goong gai.tabhi 3 log bhate huye bhago bhago yaha se bhate huye jungle se bahar nikal gaye .ab sirf hum teen rah gaye tabhi hamre samne ek bina sir vale admi apne hath me talvar le k hamare tarf aane laga main dono se tum dono lakdi le k jao main abhi aaya.dono abhi kuchh bolti tab tak usne apni talvar chala di maine bhi apni talvar se uske talvar pe war kar diya uski talvaar tut gai mere talvaar se takrate hi.ye dekh dono khus ho gai.lekin ye kya jise hi uski talvar tuti phir se uski talvaar pahle jaise ho gai lekin ab vo do ho gaye the bina sir vale .ab ruchi aur yumina bhi maidaqn me uthar gai thi.dono ne ek hi jatke me uska ek ek hath kat diya.phir kya do aur aa gaye.maine jaise hi dekh to mujhe samjhte der nahi lagi ki ki is bina sar vale aadmi ko marna bilkul bhi aasaan nahi hai isliye maine bina kuchh bole lakadiya aur dono ko le k sidha nadi k pass aa gaya.tabhi jungle se joor joor se hasne ka aavaaj aane laga.kab tak bacho ge .subha hote main tum sab ko khatam kar dunga.uske baad aavaaj aana band ho jata hai jungle se.
Main-dosto hume jaldi hi kuchh hal nikalna pade ga.is nadee ka .nahi to duri musibat hamara intazar kar raha hai.aur hame samay ka kuchh pata nahi kab subah ho jaye ga.agar subah se pahle hum logo ne is nadee ko nahi paar kiya to pata nahi subaha(morning) me nadee apna kaun sa rang dikhaye gi.subaha to hamari halat dono taraf khai jaise ho jaye gi dosto.aur har bite pal hum apna ek sathi kho rahe hai.ab to ye sab kuchh dekh k dosto hum sab ko josh me hosh se kaam lena ho ga.tab tak maine aag jala diya tha.aur vahi
Ruchi or yumina dono –ek sath shadow tum ne hame ladne q nahi diya us sar kate se.
Main-tum dono abhi bhi us baat ko le k baithi ho jab ki hamare samne inti bari museebat pahale se hai.rahi baat rokne ki to tum dono dekh nahi rahi thi jaise hi uska shareer ya uska talvar usase alag ho raha tha us k utne hi rup baan rahe the .kuchh der agar aur rahte pata nahi kya hota.abhi tum dono uske bare me mat socho .ye socho ki nadee ko kaise paar karna hai.abhi hum sab baat hi kar rahe the ki ek bahot yoddha jor jor se rone laga aur kahne laga ab koee nahi bache ga aur jaha maine aag lagai thi usi me se 2-3 lakadiya pani me fekne lagta hai gusse me .jaise hi meri nazar us jalti huve lakadiyo pe gai vo jaha aag jal raha tha us side ki lakdi pani me tair rahi thi or vahi dusri taraf ki lakadi pane me doop gai thi.mujhe ye dekh k sab samajh me aa gaya tha kaise is nadee ko paar karna hai. Kahate hai na dosto kabhi kabhi dusman ko harane k liye uske dusman ka istamal karna padta hai.jaise aag aur pani.
Main-dosto samay aa gaya hai is nadee ko paar karne ka .itna bol kar maine apne samne dher sari lakadi la di aur uske dono taraf aag laga diya aur sabhi lakadiyo ko nadee k ek chhor se le kar pahadi tak ka ek pul jaisa maine bana diya.maine jisko mere sath chalna hai chalo.main us aag k pul ko dhire dhire paar karte huve pahadi pe pahoch gaya aur mere pichhe pichhe sabhi aa gaye jab unhone dekha main sahi salamat pahoch gaya hu.hamri ek museebat abhi katam hi huva tha tabhi vo jadugar aa gaya jaha black stone rakha tha uske charo tarf pani ka kavach bana diya.jise dekh ruchi aur yumina ko bahot gussa aaya dono ne ek sath war kiya ruchi ne bhale se aur yumina ne fire se .bhala aur aag ka gola sidha jadugar k sine k aar paar ho gaya.aur vo sidha pahadi pe gir k chilate huve aur tadapte huve mar gaya.jaise maine pahale bhi kaha tha josh me hosh nahi khona cha hiye.yaha bhi vahi huva hum logo k sath hamare samne hi black stone tha.lekin kuchh logo ko to sabar naam ka cheej hi nahi hota hai.tabhi 3 log ne sidha us pani k kavch pe apna haath dal diya jisme black stone rakha tha.phir kaya jise hi unhone apna haath dala un teeno k shareer k chithde ud gaye. Ab Hum sab k samne ek aur musibat aa gaya tha black stone kaise le.tabhi main sabhi apni aag ki taakat ka istamal karte hai.sayad ye kavach bhaf ban k ud jaye lekin kuchh bi nahi huva hami aag se.
Tabhi mujhe yaad aata hai hame jadu ko kaam nahi aaye ga. us lakadi ka istamaal karna ho ga jiski madat se humne us nadi ko paar kiya. main turant niche se ek lakdi le aaya sabhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the .main kya kar raha hu.jaise hi maine us pani k kavach me aag vali lakadi dali turant vo pani ka kavach bhaf ban k ud gai.sabhi mujhe ek dum ashcharya se dekhne lage.
Main-samaj gaya ye sab kya puchhne vale hai.main dosto tum sab yahi jaana chahate ho na jab hum sab ne aag ka istama kiya phir bhi kuchh nahi huva lekin ab kaise .dosto yaha par jadu ka istamal ki manahi hai isliye hamara fire spell yaha par kaam nahi kar raha tha.tabhi mujhe yaad aaya q na jis tarike se hum sab ne nadi paar kiya hai usi ka yaha bhi istamal kar k dekhu.uske baad jo kuchh bhi huva aap sab ne dekha hi.meri baat sun k sabhi log tali bajane lage.ab hum sirf 12 log hi bache hai.uske baad turant hum sabne black stone jaise hi chuva hum sab ne apni aap ko ek gufa me paya.aur vahi
Hum sabhi jo bhi kar rahe the ya jo kuchh bhi hamare sath ho raha tha aur sath hi hum sab ne kaise mil kar is padav ko paar kiya ye sabhi teharma me sabhi log dekh rahe the.aur sath hi agle padav ka intazaar bhi kar rahe the….ki aage kya hone vala hai…
to be continued .. .
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Lagta hai ruchi be karma ki next wife ke lest me jurne wali hai jaldi he
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And time to time update be aa rhe hai
Mega size update pleses bhai story ko aise he continue rakhna
Sabka entertainment karte rho ham sab aapko full support krenge
Lagta hai ruchi be karma ki next wife ke lest me jurne wali hai jaldi he
Teharma king and prince our mahamantri ne bhut he bada khel khela hai yamina ke saat me but teharma king ko pta nai ki karma be khel me bhag le rha hai
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Bahut jabarzast update bhai... Sar kata ghumne wala edhar kua tha udhar khai.... Mast tha.... Demag laga ke kisi tarah idea nikal hi liya... Hosh se kaam liya one update.... Next ka Intezaar hai
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