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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Thank you so much every one dosto.mujhe itna support karne k liye.bimaar hone k vaja se mera office work bahot pending ho gaya tha.isliye mujhe time hi nahi mil pa raha tha work se.isliye main aap logo ko update nahi de pa raha tha.lekin ab sab kuchh thik hai.next update thodi der me.aur dosto kal se daily 9-10pm ko main update post karung.good night dosto keep supporting.read and enjoy the update and give your valuable comments.
 
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UPDATE-31

Recap-

Pichhale update me aap logo ne padha kaise yumina pratiyogita k khel me vijeta banti hai
Ab aage….

Yumina-jaise hi khel ki vijeta banti hai apni pratiyogee ruchi ko hara kar vaha baithe sabhi log jo pratiyogita k khel ka anand le rahe the sabhi log khade hokar apni jagah par yumina k liye taaleeya (claps) baja kar uska abhinandan karne lagte hai aur jor jor se usko badhaee dene lagta hai.kuchh der tak sab kuchh aise hi chalta raha log shor karte rahe .jab tak ki teharma k mahaamantree ne sab ko shant hone ka aadesh nahi diya.

Mahaamantree-sabhi log shant ho jaaye….kuchh der baad….

Sabhi log-mahaamantree k kahane par shant ho jate hai.

Mahaamantree-sabse pahale main teharma k mahaaraaj minta aur rajkumar aur mahaaraj k parivaar k taraf se melboalfan ki rajkumari yumina ko is pratiyogita k khel ki vijeta banane par badhaee deta hu.

Sabhi log-ek baar phir se logo ne taaleeya (claps) bajakar yumina ka abhinandan karte hai.

Mahaamantree-king minata aur raajya k sabhi log k taraf se sabhi raajyo k raajao ka bhi abhinandan karata hu.aur inta bol kar mahaamantree king minata k pass chala jata hai.

Minata-mere desh k vaasiyo aur sabhi raajy k raajao ka main sukriya karta hu aur asha hai aap sabhi logo ne is khel k bharpur anand liya ho ga.ab se kuchh hi der me rajkumar ka raajtilak hone vala hai.mera sabhi se vinanti hai sabhi log raajmahal me upasthit rahe aur raajkumar k apna aasheervaad de.ab main rajkumari yumina ko khel ka inam dena ka ghona karta hu.aur sathi main chata hu jo hamare vishesh atithi king karma hai yaha aa kar do (2) sabd kahe.

Main-sukriya king minta.mera naam to aap logo ko pata hi chal gaya ho ga.aur main hi melboalfan ka king karma hu.aur main yumina ko badhaee deta hu jisne ek baar phir se ye sabhit kar diya hai melboalfan k yoddhao k saamane koee bhi nahi tik sakta hai.itna bol kar main apne jagah par baith jata hu.lekin kisi ko meri ye baat achchhi nahi lagi.

Yumina –ruchi se tum to bahot achchha ladti ho.bahot dino k baad main kisi aise se ladi hu jisne mujhe takar diya ho.

Ruchi-raajkumari yumina apna sir niche kar k aap to sach me bahot hi achchhi tarah se ladti hai .main to aap k saamane kuchh bhi nahi hu.lekin mere maan me ek baat baar baar aa raha hai.ki aap k pita aur aap ki umaar to mujhe jada fark nahi lagti hai.

Yumina-ruchi ki baat sun k.smile k sath tumhe mujhe raajkumari bulane ki koee jarurat nahi hai. tum mujhe yumina hi bulao .ha rahi baat mere dady ki to unko chirinjiv ka vardaan mila hai.isliye mere dady hamesa javan hi dikhange .kya tum mere dost bano gi.

Ruchi-ha ha q nahi.mujhe bahot khusi ho gi aap ka dost ban kar.dono abhi bate hi kar rahe the.ki tab tak ek sainik yumina ko ek sanduk de deta hai.aur vaha se chala jata hai.

Yumina-sandok ko khol kar usko dekhti hai vo sandook pura platinum siko se bhara tha.yumina ruchi ko vo sanduk de deti hai.ye lo hamari dosti k tarf se.

Ruchi-nahi yumina main nahi le sakti hu.ye tumne jeta hai.ye inam tumahara hai.

Yumina-tumhe meri kasam hai tumko ye lena hi pade ga.vo sanduk ruchi ko de deti hai.

Ruchi-ye kasam de kar yr tumne bikul achchha nahi kiya.ruchi yumina se tum meri dost ho na tumko bhi ye inaam lena pade ga nahi to main nahi lungi tumko bhi meri dosti ki kasam hai.

Yumina-thik hai ruche. tum ab itna bol rahi to hum dono adha adha le lenge ab to khus ho na.chalao main tumhe apne dady aur mom se milavati hu.itna bol kar vo dono maidan se bahar nikal kar mere pass aane lagti hai.tabhi..

Teharma ki raajkumari-main teharma ki raajkumari melboalfan ko chunavti deti ho.usne sirf itna hi bola tha ki…eka ek pura vatavarn ek dum shant ho jata hai.jase sabhi ko sanp sung gaya ho.

Dosto to huva ye tha ki mere kahne k baad teharma ki raajkumari ka para hi chad gaya .ek to usko apni takat aur apne pita k takat par bahot ghamand tha.aur hota bhi q nahi duniya k sabse badi desh k raajkumari jo thi aur sath hi uska raajya bhi sabse bada tha aur aaj tak teharma ko koee hara nahi paya tha.inhi sab k vaja se usko meri baat hazam nahi huvi.aur bina soche samjhe meboalfan ko chunavti de di.kahte hai na vinas kale viprit budhi .jab logo ka bura samay aane vala rahta hai na tab uska dimaak bhi uska sath dena chod deta hai.yahi hal tha teharma ki raajkumari ka tha.turant

Raajkumar-ne jasie hi apne bahan ki ghosana suni turant apni bahan ka pass ja kar rupvati.(dosto teharma ki raajkumari ka naam rupvati hoga ab se).ye tumne kya kiya .tum ko kuchh pata hai kya tumne abhi kya kiya aur kisko challage kaiya hai.

Rupvati-bhai aap to aisa bol rahe hi jaise aap lad chuke ho.lekin aap se maine aisi asha nahi rakhi thi.mujhe to laga tha ki aap mujhe is baat k liye sabasi denge lekin aap to mujhe hi suna rahe ho.pahale to aap aise nahi the.aur vaise bhi agar aaj melboalfan ko nahi roka to chote deso ki aur himmat badh jaye ga.dekha nahi apne us karma ne hamare hi desh me aa kar hame hi chunavte de raha hai.suna nahi kya aap ne kya kha usne melboalfan k yoddha ka samne ko bhi nahi tak sakta hai.agar abhi humne usko uski aukat nahi dikhaya na sabhi chote aur sabse jada to hamara padosi raajya garja hum pe hase ga.kasie melboalfan hume suna kar chala gaya aur hum log kuchh kar bhi nahi paye.tabhi

Raajkumar-bahan to bikul thik kaha rahi ho.lekin usko aur uski beti ko harana lagbhag namumkin hai.main bhi chata hu rupvati lekin main abhi tak kuchh kar nahi paya.inta bol kar vo shant ho jata hai.

Rupvati –bhai aap mujhpe bharosa rakhao aaj aap ko bhi pata chal jaye ga main kya hu aur mujhe bhi pata chal jaye ga karma aur uski beti sach me itna takatvar hai bhi ya sarif dikha va hai.

Minta-rupvati ye sab kuchh kya hai….aur dusri tarf sabhi log apsas me khusur phusr karne lage.chaliye hum bhi sunte hai log kya bate kar rahe hai.ye raajkumari ne bahot hi achchha kiya .ab hamare yoddha k takat ka bhi pata chale ga melboalfan k king ko.aisa hi sabhi log kuchh na kuchh bate kar rahe the. kuchh raajkumari k sath the aur unke faisle k khus the to kuchh nahi bhi the.

Rupvati aur raajkumar-dono ek sath pita g ab to kuchh nahi ho sakta hai aur aap dekh nahi rahe ho agar humne bina lade hi aaj melboalfan k jane diya to hamari praja par iska bura prabhav pade ga.aur log tarah tarah k bate karenge .raajkumar pita g agar hum haar bhi gaye to main sab kuchh sambhaal lunga aur jeet gaye to sabhi dusre raajao k maan me ek baar phir se hamara rutva badh jaye ga.aur uski k sath raajkumar k chehre par smile aa jati hai.

Minata –thik hai beta.vaise tum dono thik hi bol rahe ho.chalo jo bhi hoga main sab dekh lunga.

Raajkumar-rupvati se tum tayar ho na bahan.aaj tum mera badla bhi le lena us yumina se.

Rupvati-bhai aap chinta na kare main hu na sab thik kar dungi.lekin main to karma se ladna chahati hu.agar raaja haar gaya to samjo pura desh haar gaya.turant

Raajkumar-nahi…karma ko chunavti dena ka bhool bhi abhi mat karna bahana vo jaisa dikhta hai vo aisa hai nahi.abhi to tum sirf yumina ko hara do.agar tumne usko hara diya to main tuhme karma se bhi ladne ka pratiyogita rakh dunga .samjhi na tum.

Rupvati-thik hai jisa tumhe thik lage aab to mujhe sabar bi nahi ho raha hai.aap jaldi se hamare yoddh ka ghosana karo.

Raajkumar-main king karma se apni bahan k taraf se is tarah se chunavti dene k liya mafi mangta hu.aur main king karma se ek vinti hai ki .jaise aap sabhi log jante hai is pratiyogita k khel me hamara koee bhi sainik ne bhag nahi liya tha. Isliye main ye chata hu ek baar sabhi 5 bade desho k sainik apne apne yuddh kala ka pradarshan kare isase sabhi ko apne yoddha ka kausal k bare me pata chale ga aur itna hi nahi iska fayda sabhi deso ko bhi hoga aur hame bhi pata chale ga hamare sainiko ko kitna aur kya kuchh sinkhna hai.aur isse hum sabhi desho ko aur behatar bane ka muka bhi mile ga aur hum sabhi ki mitrata aur gahri ho jaye gi.

Sabhi log-apne raajkumar k bat sun kar unka taaliyo se swagat karte hai.

Main-apne maan ha beta tera maan me kya chal raha hai saab kuchh pat hai mujhe.ab to tum logo ka ghamand kaise tutata hai ye sari duniya dekhe gi.main raajkumar se aap sahi bol rahe ho .melboapfan k tarf se yumina hamare desh ki yuddh kala ko pesh kare gi.

Rajkumar-teharma k taraf se meri bahan rupvati apne desh ki yuddh kala ko pesh kare gi.isi tarah sabhi 5 bade desho ne apne yoddha ko pratiyogita k maidaan par bhej diya.in 5 deso me teharma;garga;melboalfan;magical city aur burnel the.
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Mast update hai... Badhiya chalo dosti hui ruchi se lekin... Garga ka raja to karma se jalta hai... Kya asar hoga iska... Or ye rupvati bahut hi ghamandi hai.. Dekhte hai kya ye tik pati hai jiske samne koi nhi tikta... Intezaar hai aage ka
 
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Bhut khub bhai jabardast update diya hai
Yamina our ruchi ki dosti ho gai
Lagta hai tehrma rajya ki nasal he kharab hai jisko dhekho khud ko ghamand king samjta hai king tehrma our prince tehrma ka to samaz aata hai but ye rajkumari rupvti ko apne peetha ki tarha kuch jyada he ghamand hai wo be jaldi he yamina our karma tod denge
Shi kha karma ne ...vinash kale viprit bhudhi ...
Agle update ka intzaar rhega bhai
 
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Mast update hai... Badhiya chalo dosti hui ruchi se lekin... Garga ka raja to karma se jalta hai... Kya asar hoga iska... Or ye rupvati bahut hi ghamandi hai.. Dekhte hai kya ye tik pati hai jiske samne koi nhi tikta... Intezaar hai aage ka
thank you so much bhai.aise hi sath bane rahana bhai.keep supporting.rupvati tik paye gi ki nahi ye to 1-2 upadte k baad hi pata chale ga aap ko bhai next update thodi der me.
 
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Bhut khub bhai jabardast update diya hai
Yamina our ruchi ki dosti ho gai
Lagta hai tehrma rajya ki nasal he kharab hai jisko dhekho khud ko ghamand king samjta hai king tehrma our prince tehrma ka to samaz aata hai but ye rajkumari rupvti ko apne peetha ki tarha kuch jyada he ghamand hai wo be jaldi he yamina our karma tod denge
Shi kha karma ne ...vinash kale viprit bhudhi ...
Agle update ka intzaar rhega bhai
thank you so much bhai.keep supporting.next update thodi der me.bhai story ko le k koee sujhav ya koee question ho to jarur share karna bhai.
 

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UPDATE-32

Recap-

Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise teharma ki raajkumari ne sab k saamane melboalfan ko chunavti deti hai.

Ab aage….

Raajkumar-main teharma ka raajkumar (Tanishk) hamare raajy me aaye huve sabhi deso ko main is yuddh kala pradarshan me nimantaran deta hu.aur mera garga; melboalfan; magical city aur burnel deso se vinti hai ki vo bhi is yuddh kala me aavasya (jarur) bhag le aur main chote deso ko bhi nimantaran hai is yuddha kala pradarshan me.uske baad raajkumar apni jagah pe ja k baith jata hai.(dosto ab aap logo ko teharama k raajkumar ka naam bhi pata chal gaya…tanishk).tabhi mahaamantree.

Mahaamantree-king minata aur raajkumar abhi hum is samay is yuddh pradarshan ko suru nahi kar sakte hai.mahaaraaj abhi to raajkumar k raajtilak ka subh muhurat ka samay ho gaya hai.agar abhi is pradarshan ko suru kiya to subh muhurat nikal jaye ga aur kichh asubh bhi ho sakta hai mahaaraaj.

Minata-tum hi bato mahaamantree ab to ghosana bhi tanishk ne kar diya hai.ab to ye yuddh pradarshan ho k hi rahe ga.nahi to hamari ijjat mitti me mil jaye gi.

Raajkumar-ha mahaamantree pita g bilkul sahi bol rahe hai.ab hum isme kuchh bhi nahi kar sakte hai.tabhi rupvati

Rupvati-kya huva bhai aap chintit dikhaee de rahe hai.

Raajkumar-apni bahan ko sab kuchh bata deta hai jo kuchh bhi mahaamantree ne usko bataya tha.

Rupvati-bus itni si baat.itni chhoti si baat se aap log chintit ho gaye.

Mahaamantree-raajkumari ye koee chhoti baat nahi hai uske sath raajkumar aur minata bhi haa ye koee chhoti baat nahi hai.

Minata-aur rupvati tumhe ye itni chhoti si baat q lagt hai. Kya tumhare pass koee upay hai.

Rupvati-pita g hum is yuddh pradarshan ko bhai k rajtilak k baad rakh lete hai.mujhe nahi lagta is se kisi ko bhi apatti hogi q mahaamantree.

Mahaamantree-g raajkumari hum aise to kar hi sakte hai ye baat to mere dimak me bhi nahi aaya.

Tanishk-vah meri bahana tum ne ek pal me hi iska hal nikal liya bus ab us yumina ko bhi issi tarah uski aukat dikha dena.

Rupvati-bhai aap yuddh pradarshan me dekh lena main uski aisi halat karungi ki vo aaj k baad kabhi talvaar uthane k kabil nahi rahe gi.

Tanishk-bahana mujhe tum par purn viswaas hai.mahaamantree jao aur sabko is samachar se avgat kar do.

Mahaamantree-g raajkumar.abhi karta hu.uske baad mahamantri apne jagah se aage aa kar mere deshvasiyo aur yaha nimantrit sabhi desho ko main ye suchna dena chata hu yuddh pradarshan raajkumar k tajposhi k baad suru hoga aur mera aap sabhi se namr nivedan hai aap sabhi log raajmahal mahal me upasthit rahe.itna bolte hi king minata raajkumar rani aur raajkumari ki jay jay kar hone laga .aur ye sabhi log raajmahal k pass jane k liye nikal gaye.unsabhi k jane k baad dhire dhire sabhi log raajmahal k pass jane lage.

Mahaamantree-king karma maine aap sabhi ka raajmahal tak jane ka pradandh kar diya hai.ab main agay chata hu.

Main –thik hai aap jao.tab tak yumina ruchi ko mere pass le kar aa jati hai.

Lelina ;Shina-jaise hi yumina ko dekha dono ne ek sath yumina ko apne gale laga leti hai.dono ek sath kaise ho beti kahi chot to nahi lagi na.bata to mujhe beti.main aur ruchi dono teeno ko dekh rahe the.maa beti ka pyar.tabhi

Maine-beti mujhse bhi mil lo main bhi line hu .jaise hi maine ye kaha turant yumina mere lage lag jati hai.main vah beti tum to ab bahot samajhdaar aur takatvaar ban gai ho.

Yumina-dady abhi kaha aap k samne to main abhi kuchh bhi nahi hu.haa lekin is khel me mujhe bahot maza aaya.aur sath hi mujhe ye bhi pata chala ki abhi mujhe bahot kuchh sikhna hai dady aap se.dady ghar pahochne k baad aap mujhe training dena.aur mom aap ko pata hai na dady k rahte huve mujhe koee chhu bhi nahi sakta hai.

Main- aur nahi to kya mere rahte huve kaise koee mere gudiya ko chhu sakta hai achchha ye aap k sath kaun hai.

Yumina-oh dady main to bhul hi gai iske bare me batana ye meri dost ruchi hai.aap ne dekha hoga isne mujhe kitni achi takkar diya.

Ruchi-(apne maan me kya suchh me king karma itna takatvaar hai.lekin inko dekh k aisa lagta hi nahi hai ye to abhi rajkumar hi lagte hai .lekin kitne handsome hai…shi main bhi pata nahi kya soch rahi ho ).

Yumina-ruchi se jor se ye mere dady hai.tu kaha khoo gai.

Ruchi-kahi… to nahi (aur apne maan me me bolti hai ab isko kya batu iske hi dady ko dekh k khoo gai thi main).mahaaraaj main garga desh ki night hu .

Main-hmm tumne achchha pradarsan kiya .aise hi mehanet karte rahna tum bahot aage badhogi.

Ruchi-g mahaaraaj.ab agya chahati hu main.

Main-thik hai.tabhi ek sainik mahaaraaj aap ki sahi swari taiyaar hai raajmahal jane k liye.thik hai chalo.main jaan aur gudiya se chale ab.

Teeno-ek sath haa.

Main-aur meri dono jaan aur gudiya hum sabhi raajmahal pahoch gaye.jaha pure raajmahal ko dulahan ki tarah sajaya huva tha. tajposi ka karyakaram raajmahal k vishal bagiche me kiya huva tha.sabhi mehmano ko baithne ka achchha prabandh kiya huva tha .

Mahaamantree-ne hum sabhi ko baithne ka jagah bataya.

Main-hamra jagah stage par thi hum sabhi vaha ja kar baith gaye.tabhi dhol aur nagaro ka aavaaj aane laga sabhi log khade ho jaye aur usi k sath teharma k mahaaraaj k naam ka jay jay kar suru ho gaya aur vo aur unka pariwar aa agaman ho gaya .aur vo sabhi bhi apne apne jagah par aa k baith gaye.lekin is baar mahaaraaj k singhasan par raajkumar baitha tha.phir raajkumar tanishk k tajposi ka karykaram suru ho gaya.jaise hi tajposi purnu huva.

Sbhi log-ek baar phir se king tanishk ki jay jay kar aur dhool nagare bajane suro ho gaya.

Tanishk-surkiya aap sabhi ka jo aap sabhi mere tajposi me aaye.ab aap sabhi yuddh pradarshan ka anand le…..mahaamantree

Mahaamantree-g mahaaraaj .main samjh gaya aap kya kahana chahate hai maine sabhi taiyari kar liya hai…
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Sir aap kabile tarif likhte ho bas update fast dijie. kafi intresting point pe story pahoch gayi he
thank you so much brother.keep supporting.update ab regular aaye ga.aur next update maine post kar diya hai.read and enjoy bro.and keep supporting
 
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