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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma aur sabhi log aakharee padav me pahochte hai aur kaise karma aur knowledge book ka aamana saamana hota hai .
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Knowledge book-thik hai main tumhe mujhe pane ka rasta bata deti hu.mujhe pana hai to mere adhure prashn (question) ko pura karna hoga aur uska uttar (answer) dena hoga.aur sirf itna hi nahi jab tak mere prashn (question) ka uttar (answer) nahi de dete tab tak mere rakshak se ladte rahna hoga.haa agar tab tak zinda rahe to aur mere adhure prashan ko pura nahi kiya ya kisi tarah pura kar bhi liya to uska uttar bhi ek dum sahi hi hona chahiye q ki galat uttar tum ko hamesa hamesa k liye mujh me kaid kr dega.ab to tum sab kuchh samajh gaye na.haa agar koee aakhri ichchha ho mujhe bata do q ki ab tum yaha se pichhe nahi hat sakte ho.

Main-haa haa haa (jor jor se haste huve) mujhe koee nahi maar sakta hai.bhala mare huve ko koee maar sakta hai.ha aur rahi baat aakhri ichchha ki to mera koee aisi ichchha nahi hai.lekin mujhe kuchh aur jaanana hai tuhmare bare me.

Knowledge book-itna ghamand achchhi baat nahi hai shadow.mujhe malum hai tumhe philal k liye koee nahi maar sakta iska matlab ye nahi hai ki tumhe kaid nahi kiya ja sakta hai.tum sayad abhi mere bare me kuchh bhi nahi jante ho nahi to aisi baat nahi karte.mujhe aaj tak na jane kitne logo ne pane ki kosis kiya lekin aaj tak koee bhi mujhe paa nahi saka.dekhti hu tum kya kar lete ho.aur puch lo tum bhi apne jeevan k kuchh antim prashano ko.

Main-dekhte hai kisko ghamand hai ye to kuchh hi samay me pata chal jaye ga.abhi to tum sirf mere prashano ka javab hi de do .mujhe jaanana hai ki tum vastav me kaun ho tuhme har koee q nahi pa sakta hai.

Knowledge book-main ek maaya bi kitab hu jiske pass lagbhag har duniya k raaz aur hare k jadu ka tod aur hare k cheej ko hasil karne ka tarika hai. lekin main abhi puri nahi hu mera ek aur bhag hai jiske bare me kisi ko nahi pata hai yaha tak ki mujhe bhi sirf apne dusre bhaag ki thoda bahot hi jaankari hai. Aur Jab tak mera dusre bhaag mujhe se nahi mil jata tab tak main apurn hu.mujhe bahot se duniya k jadugaro ne mil kar kar banaya tha.aur unhi logo ne hi mera 2 bhag kar diya taki koee bhi mera galat istamaal na kar sake.aur sath hi mujhe tak sirf vahi pahoch sakta hai jo ek shadow ho ab ye maat puchna ki sirf shadow hi mujhe tak q pahoch sakte hai is bare me philal mujhe kuchh bhi gyat nahi hai bus mujhe itna hi bataya gaya tha mere maliko dwara ki tum tak sirf shadow hi pahoch sakte hai q ye nahi bataya mujhe.

Main-thik hai ab apna prashan pucho mere pass jada samay nahi hai.

{dosto mahaamantree ne bhi minta ko aur teharma k rajkumar ko bhi yahi bataya tha ki. us patra (letter) me bhi yahi likh tha.us kitab ko ek parachhaee (shadow) hi chhu sakta hai aur agar koee bhi insaan agar maaya bi kitaab k pass agar jane ki kosis kiya to vo kaid ya mritu hona hi hai uska. Q ki unlogo ko abhi tak karma k bare me pata nahi tha ki vo shadow baan gaya hai .isiliye vo teeno itna nischint the ki unki jeet hono pakki hai. }

Knowledge book-bato phir Khajaana lutaaya jaye badhta jaye? Is prashan ko pura karo aur usko uttar do.jab tak uttar nahi dete tak tab mera rakshak swagat kare ga tumhara.

Main-prashan sun kar sochne laga aisa kaun sa khajaana hai jisko lutane se badhte jaye ga.abhi main knowledge book ko kuchh bolta tak tab rakshak mujh pe hamla karna suru kar diya tha.vo rakshak ek kale dhoova k rup me tha sirf aur to aur na hi koee uska aakaar na hi sarir sirf hath me ek kali talvaar jisase mujhpe vo lagatar hamla karte jar raha tha.ab mujhe do kaam ek sath karna tha ek ladai dusra mujhe prashn ko pura karna tha aur uska uttar bhi sachi dena tha.main us rakshak se lagataar ladte ja raha tha aur sath me uske uttar ka ko khooj raha tha.jaise jaise samay bite ja raha tha us rakshak k vaar lagatar aur takatvaar hote ja rahe the.jiske karan main soch bhi nahi pa raha tha.lekin

Main-bhi lagatar us pe hamla karte ja raha tha apni black shadow sword lekin usko kuchh bhi nahi ho raha tha.ulta vo samay k sath aur jada sakti Sali hote ja raha tha.ab rakshak mere liye ek pareshani bante ja raha tha.q ki mujhe pata tha vo mujhe maar to nahi sakta hai lekin jaise hi main kamjoor huva vo mujhe jarur kaid karne ka soche ga.aur main bhi usko maar nahi sakta hu.q ki vi to ek maaya hai aur ye khel tab tak chalte rahe ga jab tab main kaid ya us maaya bi kitaab ke prashano ka uttar nahi de deta hu.aur yehi sab kuchh mere dimak me chal raha tha.phir maine apni chaal chali apni maaya .

Maine-bhi apni anek rup kar diya taki kuchh samay mujhe mil sake main abhi us kitaab ko dekh raha tha aur vo kitaab chamak raha thi. jaise kah rahi ho jaldi tumhara kaam khatam hone vala hai.lekin mujhe us kitaab ko dekh kar mujhe uttar aur prashn dono ka jaavab mil gaya tha.ab mujhe bus us kitaab k pass pahochna tha.

Ab tak rakshak ne mere sabhi rupko ka kahatama kar diya tha. Aur main bhi us kitaab k pass pahoch gaya tha aur apna hath ek baar phir se us ke pahale panne pe rakh diya jisase rakshak mere pass aate hi gayab ho gaya .

Knowledge book-batao prashan aur uttar sahi raha to tum mere malik baan jao ge nahi to tum bhi mujhe hi kaid ho jao ge hamesa hamesa k liye.

Main-theek hai to suno phir.Aisa kaun sa khajaana hai jise jitna jyaada lutaaya jay ,wah utna hi jyaada bhadata jata hai? Answer- Gyaan ka khajaana. Jaise hi maine ye uttar usko diya phir kya dekhte hi dekhte vo knowledge book mujhe sama jata hai.aur dhire dhire sab kuchh samanya hone laga main bhi usi ka fayad utha kar husna ko apne rup me aane ka hukum deta hu aur main apne karma k rup me sab k sath ja k baith jata hu.jaise hi main ye sab kuchh karta hu.tab tak sab kuchh samaanya ho chukka tha.aur

Jaise hi sab kuchh samanya hota hai.to kuchh logo ko chere par chinta ki lakire nazar aane lagti hai.in sab me teharma k raaja,raajkumar aur mahaamantree the jaise hi sab kuchh samanya hota hai pratiyogita k maidan par sirf 4 log nazar aa rahe the yuddh karte huve.sabhi darshak us khel ka anad le rahe the kisi ko mere rahne na rahne se koee farak nahi pad raha tha.aur nahi mere sathiyo ko bhi.sabhi apne yuddh me lage the.sirf teen log ki nazjre kuchh dhood rahi rahi lekin unko vo mil hi nahi rahi thi.

Dosto vo teeno teharma k raaja,raajkumar aur mahaamantree ye teeno us maaya bi kitaab ko dhund rahe the q ki kuchh der pahle tak vo kitaab thi .lekin ab nahi hai hai.isliye teeno apne hi soch ne gum the.in teeno ko philal aise hi chhod dete hai aur dekhte hai prtiyogita k maidan me kya hal hai .ab to sirf 3 hi log bache huve the lekin un sab ki halat har bitate samay k sath bigadti huvi lag rahi thi.tabhi ek aur dhamake k sath ek yoddha is khel ki bali chad jata hai.ab sirf yumina aur ruchi hi bachi hai.
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Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne dekha karma ko kaise knowledge book milti hai aur pratiyogita sthal me sirf yumina aur ruchi hi bachi hai .

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Main-apne dono jaan k sath baith k khel ka maja lene ga aur husna mere kandhe pe baith k maja le rahi thi.

Ruchi-apne maan me he bhagavan koee to rasta dikhao ye sab kuchh sochte huve lagatar apne nakal karne vale yoddha se lad rahi thi.kahate hai na achchhe logo ki madat bhagavan bhi karte hai aur yahi huva ruchi k sath.ruchi ka dhyaan ab us nakal karne vale yoddha par gaya jise vo talavaar chalati vaise vo bhi karta ye sab kuchh dekh kar ruchi ko us nakli yoddha ko khatam karna ka tarika mil gaya.phir kya tha ruchi ne apni hi talavaar apne hi pet k aar par kar liya.

Jaise hi logo ne ye dekha to logo ka shor aur jada tej ho gaya sirf logo ka hi nahi vaha baithe lagbhag sabhi logo ka.sirf 3(teen) ko chhor kar ye teen log kaun hai aap ko pata hi hoga.q ki vo teeno abhi bhi us maaya bi kitaab aur apne plan ko fail hone k bare me soch rahe the.

Main-bhi ek baar ruchi ki aisi harkat dekh kar chauk gaya tha lekin uske khuch der baad jo pratiyogita sthal par jo huva tab mujhe sab kuchh samaj me aa gaya aise ruchi ne q kiya.aur vahee

Jaha log pahale shor kar rahe vahi log ab ashchary ho kar ruchi ko dekh rahe the abhi kya huva jiska umid kisi ne nahi kya tha.chalo dosto main aap sabhi ko batata hu ruchi k apne pet me talavaar aar paar karne k baad kya huva.

Ruchi- ne jaise hi apne pet me talavaar aar paar kiya phir kya usi ka dekh kar nakli yoddha ne bhi yahi kiya jaise hi usne aise kiya turant ruchi ne apne pet se talavaar nikal kar bina samay gavae aur bine apne dard ki parvah kiye us nalki yoddha ka sar uske dhar se alag kar diya aur vo nakli yoddha ek dhamake k sath mitthi me mil gaya.jaise hi nakli yoddha mitti me mila logo ne ruchi ka abhinandan apne shoro aur taliyo se kiya.

Nakli yoddha k marne k baad ruchi apne gutne pe baith kar apne aap ko heal karne lagi.vahi dusri taraf ab logo ki nigaahen yumina par thi.

Shina-mujh se jaan us yoddha ne to apne pet me talavaar aar paar kar liya tha na phir vo bach kaise gai.

Main- (dosto shina ko ruchi k bare nahi pata hai isliye vo use yoddha kah rahi thi) jaan usne apne pet me talavaar aar paar is tarah kiya tha jis se uske jaan ko koee nuksan na ho.ab dekte hai aap ki beti kaise apne aap ko us nakli yoddha se chutkara pati hai.aur usi k sath hum dono yumina k khel dekhne lage.

Yumina-lagatar aur apni puri takat laga kar apne nakli yoddha se lad rahi thi.uske maan me bhi vahi chal raha tha jo ruchi ne kiya tha.q ki puri takat lagane par bhi vo apne same vale yoddha ko hara nahi pa rahi thi.tabhi usko kuchh yaad aata hai aur turant apna talavaar jameen par phek deti hai.uski is harkat se .vahi sabhi log jo pahle shor kar k khel ka maza le rahe tha vahi sabhi log uski is tarah talavaar phek ne ekdum se shaant ho jate hai.

Ab sab k maan me yahi chal raha tha ye kya karne vali hai.ruchi bhi uski tarf hi dekh rahi thi ab kya karne vali hai yumina.

Lelina ;shina –dono mujhe jaan yumina ne apni talavaar q phek diya.agar meri beti ko kuchh bhi huva to…….turant main bich me bolte huve.

Main-apni dono jaan se usko kuchh nahi hoga. main hu na tum dono sirf dekhti jao vo ab kya karti hai.aur vahi sabhi ki najre is samay yumina par hi thi.hoti bhi q nahi usne kiya hi tha aisa harkat.

Yumina-ne jaise hi apni talavaar jameen par pekh urant nakli yoddha apni talavaar le kar uske taraf badh gaya aur apni talavaar se yumina k pet me aar par karne laga.

Ye drshy dekh kar mere dono jaan ek sath nahi kah kar apni jagah se khadi ho jati hai.undono ki aavaaj sun kar sabhi log un dono ko dekhne lagte hai.aur inta hi nahi teharma k raaja ;raajkumar aur mahaamantree bhi meri dono jaan ki aavaaj sun kar apne soch se bahar aa jate hai aur samane ka drshy dekh kar unsabhi k chere par ek baar phir se khusi ki lahar dikhne lagti hai.

Teeno-apne maan ne chalo kuchh to achchha ho raha hai.teeno ek dusre ko dekh kar isharo me badhaee dene lagte hai.

Main-un teeno ki aise harkat dekh kar muskara raha tha.q ki mujhe pata tha ab kya hone vala tha.main apni jagah par khada ho kar bahot jor se gudiya ab khel khatam karo.jaise hi maine ye bolo.sabhi log mujhe aise dekhne lage jaise maine sabhi logo se unki bahot kemati cheeg maag li ho.meri dono jaan bhi mujhe sabhi logo ki tarah dekh rahi thi.lekin mere kahne k baad yumina k chere par smile aa gai.

Yumina-okay dady.phir kya palak jhapkte hi us nakli yoddha ka shareer k 2 tukde ho gaye .jaise hi suke 2 tukde huve uska shareer bhi ek dhamake k sath mitti me mil gaya.

Lekin ye sab kuchh kaise huva kisi ko kuchh pata hi nahi chal raha tha.jaha kuchh der pahale nakli yoddha apni talavaar se yumina k pet ko aar paar karne ki kosis kar raha tha.achanak aisa kaise ho gaya kisi ko kuchh pata hi nahi chal raha tha.sirf mujhe aur yumina ko hi pata tha.

Lelina ;Shina-dono ek sath jaan abhi kya huva.ye sab kuchh kaise aur aap ne hame pahale q nahi bataya aur aise hi vo lagatar prashn puchte jaa rahi thi.

Main-dono se jaan sabse pahale tum dono shaant ho jao aur baith jao main bata hu.maine apni beti pe ek naya surksha kavach se surakchit kiya hai jisase koee bhi hathiyaar usko chu bhi nahi sakti samjh gai na jaan (dosto maine asli kavach k bare me nahi bataya aap logo ko pata hi hoga jab tak vo khud na cha he koee bhi us tak nahi pahoch sakta hai sirf mere alava).us samay bhi yahi huva tha nakli youda ne apni talavaar to lekar yumina k taraf badh to gaya tha aur usne apni talavaar usko marne ki kisis bhi kar raha tha.yaha tak to sabhi logo ne dekha tha.lekin vo yumina tak pahoch nahi paa raha tha .q ki yumina ko apna pahala padaav yaad aagaya tha hathi yo ne lakh kosis kiya tha lekin us tak pahoch nahi paee thi.isasi ka fayada usne nakali yoddha k khilaf kiya.usko pata tha maine hi usko ye surakhchha kavach diya hoga.

Sabhi log abhi bhi samjhne ki kosis kar rahe the .ki abhi kya huva aur kaise huva.ye drshy dekh kar ek bar phir se kuchh log niras ho gaye.

Minata-ishare se mahaamantee ko bulataha hai aur uske kaan me .mahaamantree se ye sab kuchh kya hai hamra sara plan sab kuchh barbaad ho gaya.

Mahaamantree-mahaaraaj mujhe bhi kuchh samjh me nahi aa raha hai ye sab kuchh kaise ho gaya .mahaaraaj abhi to is khel ko khatam karte hai uske baad hum bate karenge age kya karna hai karma aur yumina ka.

Minata-thik hai yahi sahi rahe ga.

Mahaamantree-apne jagah se aage aa kar Mubarak ho tum dono ko ab tum dono ko apas me ladna hoga jo jite ga usi ka ye are platinum coin honge.inta bol kar mahaamantree apne raaja k pass aa k khada ho jata hai.

Sabhi logo ne khade ho kar yumina aur ruchi ka taliyo se abhinandan kiya.aur apne jagah baith gaye.aage ka khel ka anand lene k liye.

Yumina-ruchi se ab to hum dono hi rah gaye.tum taiyaar ho na.

Ruchi-ha ha main to kab se taiyaar hu.kya tum taiyaar ho.phir shura kare.aur itna bolte hi ruchi yumina se ladne lagti hai.

Dono kafi der tak ladti rahti hai dono me se koee kisi se kaam nahi tha.lekin kahte hai na naseeb bhi sath hona cha hiye.sayab aaj naseeb yumina k sath thi.uske pass infini loop k kavach tha mere isliya usko pahle hi malum tha usko ruchi kabhi nahi hara sakti hai dusra vo khud ek hathiyar thi.isiliye ruchi k lakh kosis k baad bhi vo yumina ko chu bhi nahi pa rahi thi.jiski vaja se vo lagatar apni puri takat se yumina par hamla kar rahi thi.phir bhi kuchh nahi kar paee.ab vo puri tarah bahot hi buri tarah thak gai hi.jaise hi ruchi k hama karne ki takat me kami aae to isi ka phayada yumina ne utha liya.aur plak jhapkate hi apni puri takat laga kar ruchi par hamla kar deti hai.us hamle k liye ruchi taiyaar nahi thi isliye vo yumina ka hamla jheel nahi pati hai aur uske talavaar k 2 tukde ho jate hai aur uski k sath ruchi jameen par gir jati hai.

Yumina-turant apni talavaar le kar ruchi k gardarn par rakh deti hai.aur phir kuchh der baad uska hath pakad kar usko khada kar deti hai.

Ye dekh kar sabhi log khade ho kar yumina ka abhinandan tali baja kar karte hai.vahi ruchi yumina ko abhi bhi dekh rahi thi .usne uski jaan q nahi lee.aur isi k sath teharma ka ayogit pratiyogita k khel ka vijeta mil gaya.
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Dosto jaise ki maine aap logo se kaha tha.maine update post kar diya i hope you all like these 2 update.kuchh dino se main bimaar chal raha tha is liye main aap logo ko update nahi de pa raha tha.but ab main ek dum theek hu to main pura kosis karunga jada se jada aap logo ko update de saku.keep supporting dosto.aur kaise laga aap ko mera update comment kar k jarur batana.bye dosto read and enjoy the story and keep supporting.
 
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Amazing fabulous lajawab update hai Bhai akhirkar contest khtm hua ye by it was a nice contest design by you
Now we will see how karma will react after contest bcz teharma ne apni hade paar krdi hai
 
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Mast mast mast hai ye update jhakkkass..... Lekin phir bhi koi fayda nhi hoga iss kitab ka... Jab tak ki dusra hissa n mil jaye... Ruchi or yumina ne bhi apne dimag ka ustemal kiya... Nhi to mari jati... Cholo... Ab aage kya hota hai ye dekhnab aki hai... Itne logon me se sirf do log bache.... Waiting for next
 
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