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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*
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UPDATE-43 PART 2 (MEGA UPDATE)
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma medusa ko usi k shakti se usko harata hai.aur phir pahoch jata hai ek bahot hi bade kale rang k gate k pass.
Ab aage-
Main-jaise hi kale rang k gate k pass pahucha tabhi ek baar phir se mere gale k locket ne apna rang badalna suru kar diya.lekin is baar mujhe kuchh ajeeb sa maisus ho raha tha .q ki pahale 2 baar jab mere locket ne apna rang badla tha to maine kuchh bhi ajeeb maisus nahi kiya tha .lekin is baar ki baat hi kuchh alag tha.mujhe bahot ajeeb sa maisus ho raha tha .mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki jaise mere sath bahot kuchh bura hone vala hai.aur main cha kar bhi apni soch ko kabu me nahi kar pa raha tha.aur rah rah kar mere jahaan me sirf ek hi baat aa raha tha .abhi jarur mere sath kuchh bahot bura hone vala hai aur mera mujhse sab kuchh chhin jaye ga.ye sab kuchh mere maan me mere sath tab tak chalta raha .jab tak ki mere gale k locket me apna rang puri tarah badal na liya.lekin
Is baar mere gale k locket ne apne aap ko 2 rang me black-orange me badla tha. Jab puri tarah mere locket me apna raang badal liya tab kahee ja kar mujhe kuchh achchha maisus huva.mujhe aisa laga ki jaise main koee sapne dekh raha hu aur ek dum se kisi ne mujhko jagaya ho aur main vartamaan me aa gaya hu.is samay mere dimaag me sirf ek hi baat chal raha tha .ki ye abhi jo kuchh bhi mere sath huva kya ye koee braham tha ya sach me mere sath kisi anhoni hone ka sanket hai.aur vahee
Main-apne maan me bhagvaan se sirf ek hi prathana kar raha tha bhagvaan jaldi se mujhe is no return land se nikal do kasam se aaj k baad main is manus jagah par pair bhi nahi rakhunga.bhagvaan bus is baar meri madat kar do.main aisi hi tarah taraf ki minate kar raha tha.q ki aaj se pahale maine kabhi bhi ye sab kuchh nahi kiya tha. pata nahi aaj mere sath kya ho raha hai.maine aaj se pahale apne aap ko kabhi bhi itna laachaar aur asahaay nahi samajha tha .mujhe to kuchh bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha .ki ye sab kuchh ho kya raha hai.main kabhi der tak us kale gate k pass khada ho kar ajeebo gareeb cheejo k bare me soch raha tha .kabhi bhagvaan se minate karta to kabhi aage k khatre k bare me sochne lagat to kabhi darta aur na jane kya kya chal raha tha mere dimaag me. lekin main cha kar bhi apne soch ko apne vash me kabu nahi kar pa raha tha.aur to aur aisa to aaj tak mere sath kabhi bhi nahi huva tha.isliye main thak haar k black shadow ko bulaya lekin vo mere bulane pe nahi aa raha tha phir maine seona ko bhi bulaya vo bhi nahi aaee.phir kya tha
Mera-gussa badhne laga q ki dono mere bulane par bhi nahi aa rahe the.isliye maine gusse me aa kar apne gale k locket ko pakad k bahot jor se khicha.aur
Maine-jaise apne gale k locket ko khicha mujhe bahot joor se ek jhatka laga.vo jhatka itna jada jez tha ki ek baar to mujhe laga ki mere praan hi nilak jayenge aur main apne ghutne pe baith k lambi lambi sase lene laga. Jab main kuchh der tak lambi lambi sase liya tab kahee ja k mera gussa thoda sa shaant huva .lekin in sab me mera fayada ho gaya q ki ab mere gussa shaant ho gaya tha aur sath hi mere dimaag me chal rahe sare vichhar bhi ruk gaye the .ek tarah se socha jaye to vo jhatka mere liye kisi raam baan se kaam nahi tha.ab mujhe ek dum achchha lag raha tha.isliye maine black shadow ko phir se apne maan me bulaya .tabhi
Black shadow-maalik aap ne mujhe kaise yaad kiya .
Main-black shadow ki aavaaj sun k mujhe achchha laga.aur main black shadow se jab maine tumko bulaya to tum mere saamane q nahi aaye.
Black shadow-maalik main kaise aata .is samay to aap shadow k roop me hai.dosto aap logo ko yaad hoga jab main shadow k roop me hota hu to black shadow mere saamane nahi aaj sakta hai.aur
Main-ne jaise hi black shadow ki baat suni tab ja k mere dimaag ki bati jali.q ki dosto black shadow ne mujhe pahale hi bataya tha .ki jab main apne insane rup me raunga tabhi vo mere saamane aa sakta hai.aur main apne maan me ye mujko ho kya gaya hai itni choti choti cheege main bhul raha hu.jab se no return land me aaya hu sab kuchh main bulne laga hu .isliye turant maine apne insani roop me aane ka socha is baar.lekin ye kya main to apni insani roop le hi nahi pa raha tha.phir maine maan me sochne laga ki ab kya karu agar ek baar phir se jada sochne laga to pata nahi kahi phir se apne vicharo kabu kar paunga ki nahi isase achchha hai ki mujhe ab is gate k andar jana cha hiye aur jinta jadli ho sake to yaha se nikal jana cha hiye .q ki main jinta jada yaha rukunga mujhe lgata hai main apne sochne samajhne aur apne shaktiyo ko khote chala jaunga.ye sab kuchh soch kar maine mere saamane k kale rang k gate ko dekhne laga ki kahi koee spell vagera likha huva hai kya.lekin us gate par to kucgh bhi nahi likha huva tha.isliye maine us gate ko apne hath se dhakaa de diya .lekin
Mujhe-umeed to nahi tha. ki vo itni aashani se khul jaye ga .lekin vo gate ekdum aashani se khul gaya.aur jaise gate khula .main gate k andar jane k liye apna kadam badhane laga .abhi maine 2 hi kadam badhaya tha ki 2 aag (fire) se bani huvi janjeero (chain) ne mujhe jakad liye aur gasite huve andar khichane lagi aura main bhi gasite huve andar jane laga .q ki main mujbur tha us jangir k vaje se aur dusra karan ye bhi tha ki cha kar bhi main phichhe bhaag to sakta nahi tha .aur jab tak main kuchh samajh pata tab tak aag se bani jangiro ne mujho jakad liya tha .isliye main bhi apne aap ko uske havale kar diya.aur us samay mujhe vahee sahi lag raha tha .aur vahee
Main-kuchh der tak to mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki mujhe kaha le jaya ja raha hai.aur vaise bhi mera pura dhyaan us aag ki jangir par tha.jab mujhe kuchh hosa aaya to maine apne aap ko javala mukhi aur lava ki nadi k pass paya .main is samay javala mukhi k jameen par tha aur vaha kab kya ho jaye kuchh bhi nahi kah sakte hai .aur no return land k javala mukhi kya kar sakte hai main soch bhi nahi sakta tha. q ki abhi main kaid me tha jisko koee kaid nahi kar sakta hai usko kaid kar diya tha .aag se bani jangiro ne.g ha dosto aap sabhi bukul sahi soch rahe hai main is samay shadow k rup me tha .to bhala koee parachhaee ko kaise kaid kar sakta hai.lekin no return land me sab kuchh mumkin hai. jab main apne aap ko kaid kiya huva maisus kiya tab mujko pata chala.aur main apne maan me yahi soch raha tha .lagta hai isiliye har koee darta hai no return land ka naam sunte hi aur yahee vaja hoga jo ek baar no return land k andar jisne bhi kadam rakh diya to vo kabhi vaha se vapas nahi aaya is samay vo sab kuchh mujko bhi maisus ho raha tha .
Main-ye sab soch hi raha tha tabhi mujhe kisi ki dhadne ki aavaaj sunaae di .jaise hi uski dahaad mere kano tak pahocha javala mukhi me se aag ki barish hone lagi.aur to aur main jaha jameen par leta huva tha .aag k jangiro me kaid vaha ki jameen faat gai aur vaha se lava nikal kar mere shareer me gusne laga aur main cha kar bhi kuchh nahi kar pa raha tha .dhire dhire main us lava me dubne laga .ek baar to mujhe bhi laga ki ye mera ab aakhir paal hai.phir mujhe mera pahale sapna mere maan me mujhe dikhe laga jab main shadow bana tha us ke baad ka pahale sapna .
{dosto ye vahee sapna hai mere. jaha karma k bachche use nafraat karte hai aur sabhi desh k log mil kar dusri duni se aae huvi sena se lad rahe hote hai aur main vaha nahi hota hu}
Mujhe –jaise hi vo sab kuchh dikhne laga .tabhi maine apne maan me socha lagta hai isi vaja se sab mujhse nafrat karte honge .takat ki bukh ne mujhe bhi andha kar diya. bina jane samajhe main yaha chala aaya aur apni jaano ko sach bhi nahi bata paya.phir mujhe vo din bhi yaaad aa gaya jis din maine shadow banane ka socha kash maine us din yamraaj ki bate sun kar maaya bi jungle se chala jata to sayaad aaj main apni jano k sath hota .kahate hai na aakhri samay me hame hamari sabhi galtiyon ka aisaas ho jata hai aur vahee sab kuchh is samay mere sath ho raha tha.
Main-ab puri taraf lava me dub gaya tha.kuchh hi ansh mere shareer ka bacha tha.kuchh hi der me vo bhi dub gaya.jaise jaise main javala mukhi k lava me samate ja raha tha vaise vaise mujhe apni jeevan ki sare bate yaad ani lagai .ab to main bhi samajh gaya tha. ki ab main kisi bhi pal apne praan chhod dunga.q ki maine aaj se pahale kabi bhi maut ko nahi dekha tha intne karib se .aur
Mere-aankho ki pakle ek dum bhari ho gai thi .main to ab usko khol nahi pa raha tha .aur sath hi mere dil me jalan hone laga lekin main phir bhi kuchh bhi nahi kar pa raha tha.mujhe to aisa maisus ho raha tha jaise koee meri dil ko cheer raha hai aur mere shareer se usko alg kar raha hai aur main ek majboor ki tarah kuchh nahi kar pa raha tha. Ab sirf main apni maut aane ka intazaar kar raha tha .aur main bhagvaan se prathna kar raha tha .ki mujhko is shaap se mukti de do is dard se mukt kar do .q ki main apan dard bardast nahi kar pa raha tha. Phir dekhte hi dekhte main ek dum se behos ho gaya.aur mera pura shareer javal mukhi k lava k andar dubte hi ja raha tha.jaise uski koee seema hi na uski gahraee ki.aur ab to mujhko bhi pata chal gaya tha .ki ab main kisi bhi pal apne sabhi kartaav dard aur se mukt ho jaunga.
Tabhi mujhe-bahot se aavaaje mere kano me sunee dene lagi. lekin main apni aankhe khol nahi pa raha tha.aur un aavaajo ko sun k aisa lag raha tha. jaise vo sabhi aavaajo ko main bahot achchhe se jaanta hu.
Aavaaje-maalik aap aise hi bina kosis kiya kaise haar maan sakte hai. aap k liye hum sabne apna sab kuchh kurbaan kar diya tha.aur apne bhi hum logo ko vada kiya tha ki aap ham sab ko phir se zinda karenge.utho maalik utho.
Main-jaise hi vo aavaajo ne bola mujhe tabhi eka ek mere charo taraf ek kavach jaisa aa gaya .(ye aavaaj mere sabhi takato ki thi in me monark ,simba,crimson,black shadow aur seona the) .sabhi ki aavaaje sunane k baad maine bhi ek baar kosisi kar k dekhne k socha.q ki jab marna hi hai to apni puri kosis karne k baad marta hu. kam se kam pastava to nahi ho ga. ki maine bina kuchh kiye hi haar maan liya.isliye maine ek aakhri baar kosis kiya .sabse pahale maine absorption vala spell padha aur dkhte dekte puri lava mujhme samane laga jaise jaise vo lava mujh me sama rahe the.
Mujhe –to aisa misus ho raha tha .ki jaise koee mujh ko andar se pighla raha ho.us lava ka taapmaan itna jada hone laga ki mujhko ek baar laga kahi main faat na jau.q ki lava khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha .aur maine apni new (naee) kaalee shaktiyo ko kabu me karna sikha nahi tha . aur to aur mujhe ye bhi dar lag raha tha .kahee aise hi kuchh der aur chala to .ya phir aisa hi chlata raha to . tab main kya karunga.lekin main haar bhi is baar nahi maan sakta tha .q ki ab baat sirf mere akele ki nahi rah gaee thi .mere sath sath se kaee logo ki jaan daav pe lagi thi. (monark ,simba ,crimson , black shadow aur seona) .aur main aisa kuchh hone nahi dene vala tha .is baar tabhi maine medusa ki takat ka istamaal kiya apne janjeero par .vo thoda to sakt huva lekin main abhi bhi usko tod nahi pa raha tha .isliye main dhyaan lagane laga aag se bani jangir ki takat ko sokne me kuchh der kosis karne k baad .main aakhir kaar kamyaab ho hi gaya.aur maine us jangir ko tod diya aur apne aap ko azaad kar liya.aur
Maine-jaise apne aap ko azaad kiya turant main us lave se bahar nikal k bahar jameen par aa gaya jaha mere koee intzaar kar raha tha pahale se.lekin jo maine absortion spell use kiya tha vo abhi tak ruka nahi tha vo abhi bhi lava ko sokh raha tha .aur uska natiza ye huva ki mere shadow ka shareer lave k vaje se jalne laga puri tarah se .aur mera shadow roop bhi aag jasisa laal aur usme se aag ki lapte nikalna suru ho gaya tha .ab
Main-to jaise burning shadow ban gaya tha.lekin main ab uski garmi ko bardast kar le raha tha . tabhi jo mere intazaar kar raha tha vo mujh par aag k gole se hamle karne laga.pahale aag k gole se mujhe thoda dard huva lekin uske baad vo mujhpar jitne bhi aag k gole mara mujko kuchh asar hi nahi ho raha tha .q ki main to khud hi aag ki tarh jal raha tha .phir kaha mujhpar aag ka asar hone vala tha.tabhi
Main-tum kun ho aur q mujh par hamla kar rahe ho.jaldi bato nahi to main tumko khatam kar dunga .maine bahot gusse me bola usko.maine jaise hi gussa huva vaise hi aag ki lapte aur jada mere shareer me se nikalne laga.tabhi
Orthros-main hi orthros.yaha ka rakhvala hu.aur tera kaal hu .aaj tera yaha aakhri din hai .
{orthros –kutte jaisa dikhne vala maaya bi jeev hai. jis k pass 2 munh hai aur ek shareer hai.dosto orthros kuchh aisa dikh hai..}
Main-vo to abhi pata chal jaye ga.maine bhi us par aag se hamla kar diya lekin usko kuchh bhi nahi huva.ye dekh main samajh gaya jo yaha ka rakhvala ho.uspar ye lave ka asar kaha hone vala hai.tabhi
Orthros-ne bhi mujh par gusse me apni aag vali jangeer se hamla kar diya.lekin
Main-bhi is baar taiyaar tha.is liye maine sab se pahale absortion shakti ka rukh orthros pe kar diya.q ki main apni absortion shakti ko rokne me abhi kamyaab nahi ho paya tha. lekin maine uski disha badalna sikh liya tha.isliye jaise hi orthros ne mujh par hamla kiya .maine bhi us par hamla kar diya .mujhe pata tha usko harana itna asaan nahi hai. orthros ko sab se pahale kamjor karna pade ga.isliye maine uski shakti sokhne laga aur uske charo taraf lava ki baris karne laga jo sidha ja kar orthros pe gir raha tha.mujko pata tha vo lava uska kuchh bhi nahi bigar sakti hai lekin uska dhayaan to bhatka hi sakti hai .is liye maine lagataar lave ka hamla jari raka aur main kaamyaab bhi hone laga tha. Phir bhi orthros ne apni aag se bani janjeer se mujh par hamla kar diya tha.lekin maine ne samay rahte medusa ki power se aag ki janjeer ko pathar ka bana diya jisase vo janjeer mujh tak pahochne se pahale hi tut k gir gaee. jameen par.lekin maine apna halma jari rakha orthros par aur to aur maine medusa ki shakti se bhi hamla karne laga jisase orthros ka hilna band ho gaya.lekin usko dekh k to mujhe yahi lag raha tha vo abhi bhi bahot shakti Shali hai.
Main-apne maan me sochne laga kaise isko haraya jaye.mere hamle lagataar chaalu the.lekin uska kuchh kar nahi pa rahe the.tabhi meri nazar aag se bani janjeer par padi jo jamin par girne k baad apne asli rup me phir se aa gai the.jisko maine pathar bana k toda tha aur maine ek aur khas vsesta us janjeer ka dekha sabhi lava apni disha badal le rahi thi .jaha vo janjeer padi thi .yaha tak ki jis lave se main hamla kar raha tha vo sabhi bhi.phir maine soch q na us jangir ka upyog orthros pe kiya jaya sayad kaam baan jaye lekin main shadow baan k nahi kar sakta tha .q ki main kuchh der pahale usme kaid tha. Ab mujhe apni insane roop me aana ho ga aur uske liye mujha samay cha hiya .aur uske liye mujh ko orthros ko bahot jada kamjor karna pade ga.q ki jaise hi main apni insane roop me aaunga meri new (naee) kaalee shaktiya kaam karna band ho jaye gi.isliye maine apni puri jaan laga di orthros ko kamjor karne me .usme lagbhag maine bahot jada shaktiyo ko kho diya.jab maine dekh ki orthros behos ho gaya hai.turant maine apni insani roop lene ka soch.aur kuchh der kosis karne k baad main usme kaamyaab ho gaya.aur turant us aag se bani jangiro le kar orthros ko band diya.tabhi
Locket-2% . itna bol kar shaant ho jata hai.
Main- samajh gaya mere pass sirf 2% shakti bachi hai.is liye maine apni black shadow sword ko yaad kiya aur chal diya orthros k taraf abhi main us par hamla karta tabhi phir se.
Locket-tum yaha kisi ko nahi maar sakte ho .ab vo haar gaya hai. Phir bhi tumne usko mara to tum yaha se aage nahi badh pao ge aur yahi kaid ho jao ge itna bol kar vo shaant ho jata hai.
Main-locket ki baat sun kar main turant ruk jata hu.aur apni talvaar ko vapas bhej deta hu.aur sochne lagta hu. ho na ho abhi yaha ka kaam pura nahi huva hai.nahi to main agle padav par jarur chala jata.aur vaise bhi mujhe har padav me kuchh saktiya mili hai.chalo ek baar main apne search magic use kar k dekhu kuchh hai kya yaha.kuchh der baad mujhe ek black box javala mukhi k andar rakha huva dikha.
Main –ne turant apna rup badal kar shadow ban k javal mukhi k andar pahoch aur jaise hi maine us black box ko touch kiya mere andar bahot si shaktiya samane lagi.mujhe aisa maisus hone laga jaise meri shaktiya lakho guna badh gai ho.aur main ab bilkul achchha maisus kar raha tha. aisa laga jaise mujhe mere sari chhini guvi shaktiya bhi mil gai ho.aur ab main kaee guna jada taktvaar ho gaya hu aisa maisus karne laga .lekin mujhe abhi tak ye nahi pata chala tha ki ye kaun si shaktiya hai aur kis tarake ki takate hai inme aur main inka kaise istamaal kar sakta hu .tabhi phir se vahi aavaaj.
locket-mubarak ho tumne sabhi padav paar kar liya hai .main ab tumhe tumhare manzil k pass le jaraha hu.aur tumhari shakti bhi 100 % ho gai hai. itna bol kar vo shaant ho jata hai.
Maine-jaise locket ki baat suni main to bahot khus ho gaya apne maan me chalo aakhir kaar black unicorn se ab milunga.aur dekhte hi dekhte main ek kaal lothri me pahoch gaya.
Main- jaise hi us kaal kothri me pahocha ek baar phir se mere saamane vahi nazara aa gaya jab maine no return land me kadam rakha tha aur vo drishya tha infinite gate ka aur ab main jaha khada tha mere saamane ka drishya infinite kaal Kothari ka tha.sabhi infinite gateo ko dekh kar mere saamajh .me ye nahi aa raha tha aakhir kaar kya yaha itne sare black unicorns ko kaid kiya huva hai.ya phir insabhi me se sirf ek me hi black unicorn hai.aur mujhko in sabhi infinite kaal Kothari me se sahi kaal Kothari ko chunana hoga.mere kuchh bhi samjh me nahi aa rha tha mujhe kya karna hai.isliye main joor se chilya ki mujhe kya karna hai koee hai kya koee mujhko bataye ga.lekin kuch bhi uttar nahi mila mujhko.phir main thak kar k apni search magic ka istamaal karne ko soch lekin ye kya kuchh huva hi nahi tabhi.
Locket-is kaal Kothari me kisi ki bhi shakti kaam nahi karti hai.galt kaal kothri tum ko usi me kaid kar de gi.itna bol kar locket se aavaaj aana band ho jata hai.
Main-ab samajh gaya tha.aur maine jo dusra anumaan lagaya tha mujhe vahi theek laga q ki sabhi me se kisis ek hi me black unicorn hai aur baki sab ya to aankho ka braham hai ya in sabhi me jo bhi yaha tak pahocha hoga vo bhi in kaal Kothari me kaid hoga.phir main shant maan se sochne laga kaise pata lagau kis kaal Kothari me kaha hoga black unicorn.aur
Main-vahee kadha ho kar sochne laga.kya karu .tabhi maine socha q na tab tak main dhyaan me baith jau mana ki yaha koee bhi saktiya kaam me nahi ayenge meri lekin dhayaan lagane se sayad koee baat baan jaye aur mujhe jo abhi shaktiya mili hai sayaad uske bare me hi kuchh pata chal jaye aur vahi shakti sayad black unicorn tak pahuchaa de.itna sab kuchh sochne k baad main dhyaan lagane k liye vahi kaal khothariyo k pass hi baith gaya. Dosto karma ko kuchh der dhyaan me baithne dete hai.tab tak kahi aur chalet hai.
Jin lok-
Jin lok me is samay afra tafri ka mahol dikh raha tha .pure jin lok me sainko ko surakhchaa k liye tainaat kar diya tha.jin lok k mahaaraaj ka kahne par.aur vaha ki janta ye sab kuchh dekh kar sabhi apas me tarah tarah ki bate kar rahe the.ab chalet hi jin lok k mahaaraaj k mahal me jaha.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj-abhi vo apne kakchh me apni beti k sath khel rahe the aur unki patni dono ko dekh rahi thi tabhi ek aavaaj dono ko sunaee deta hai.
Mahaamantree-(dosto vo aavaaj mahaamantree ka hi tha).mahaaraaj hamare jin jadugaro ne sab kuchh pata laga liya hai.aur is samay sabhi vishes kachchh me hai.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj- theek hai tum jao main abhi aata hu.
Mahaamantree –turant chala jata hai.aur unske kuchh der baad jin lok k mahaaraaj bhi chala jata hai kakchh se.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj-jaise hi vishes kachchh (kamra) me pahochte hai sabhi apne mahaaraaj ka khade ho kar swagat karte hai.phir sura hota hai asli mudda.
Jin jadugar-mahaaraaj.hum ne sab kuchh lagbhag pata laga liya hai .haal me ek vilupt huvi jin ki prajati yaha kuchh din pahale dekhi gaee thi aur usne kuchh jinkari jin lok k puskalay le ke kar gai thi kuchh din pahale. Jisase sab se jada us par hi shak hota hai .ho na ho in sabhi cheego me uske malik ka hath hoga.q ki bina malik k hukm k bina koee bhi itna dusahas nahi kar sakt hai.
Jin lok ka mahaaraaj-pustakaalay se kin chejo ki jaan kari li hai us jin ne aur mujho us jin prajati ka tasveer bhi dikhao.
Jin jadugar-ye raha us ki tasveer.ye bhale hi dikhne me bahot chhote se hai lekin hamse kaam nahi hai.is ne unicorn ki maaya bi jungle aur black book ki jankari le kar gai thi.jis din ye sari gatna huva vo dikhi nahi lekin kisi ne no retun land ki kitab padhi aur kuchh logo se pata chala ki kisi ne unki dimaag me jhakne ki kosis kar raha tha aur us kunve aur unicorn k maaya bi jungle k pass kaalee shakti k hone abhass huva hai hum sabhi ko. lekin vo kaun hai kaha se aaye hai ye sabh kuchh hum nahi pata laga paye hai aur nahi ni koee suraaj mila hai abhi tak .aisa lagat hai vo bahoh jada shakti Shali vo hoga q ki hamare jin pravesh dwarpalo ko bhi kisi ka aane aur jane ka pata nahi chala .isase hum anumaan laga sakte hai vo jo bhi the vo nahi chahate the kisi ko bhi iski khabar ho.phir bhi mahaaraaj hum ne us jin k pata laga liya hai aur vo kaha hai is samay vo bhi hum ne pata laga liya hai.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj-achchhi baat hai.sab se pahle us jin ko yaha kaid kar k lao.tabhi hume pata chale ga uska maalik kaun hai .aur vo yaha kis liye aaee thi.lekin dhyaan rakhna usko bahot svdhani se kaid kar k lana kisi ko bhi is baat ka pata nahi chala cha hiye aur ye bhi ailaan kar diya jaye puskalay me sabhi veshes pukato k liye ek vises maaya bi kamra banaya jaye jaha hume pata chal sake kaun kaya kar raha hai.aur us jin ko jaldi mere pass le kar ao aur us din jo shaitaan aaya tha .uske bare me pata lagane ki kosis karo .itna bol kar vo chala jata hai.aur usi k sath sabhi apne kaam pe nikal jate hai.
No return land-
Main-dhyan me baith tha .eka ek mujhe black unicorn ka janam aur usko kaise black sun ki shakti mili vo sabhi chege mere maan me dikhne lgai aur sirf itna hi nahi main maisus kar raha tha kaise black unicorn us samay maisus kar raha tha jab usko black sun ki adhi shakti mili thi is .dhyaan me baith huve mujhe laga jaise vo shakti mujme ab aa gai ho aur tabhi mere aankh khul gai.aur main sochne laga ye sab kuchh kya tha.kahi black unicorn meri madat to nahi karna chata hai aur agar vo chata hai to in sabhi cheejo ko dikhane ka kya matlaab ho sakta hai.tabhi mujhe yaad aata hai jab maine black box ko chuva tha tabhi bhi mujhko aisa hi maisus huva tha.aur ho na ho black unicorn bhi mujhse ye hi kahna chata ho bhale hi uski sari shaktiya usase alag kar diya ho lekin abhi bhi kuchh shaktiya usme bachi huvi hai.
Main-ab sab kuchh achchhe se samjh gaya tha ,main black unicorn tak kaise pahchanuga.mujhe bus ek baar phir se vahi shakti pahchaana hoga aur mujhko maisus karna hoga ga.isliye maine apni aankhe band kar liye apne apne maan me black unicorn ko kahne laga agar tum sun rahe ho mujhko to muko sanket do aur us shakti ko azaad karo taki main tum tak pahoch saku.q ki main ye kaam akele nahi kar sakta hu ye kaam hum dono ko mil kar karna hoga tabhi main tumko azaad kar punga.itna bol kar main shant ho gaya.tabhi maujhe mere maan me ek dard bahari aavaaj sunaee di.
Black unicorn-main to varso se aap ka intazaar kar rahu maalik .mujhe is duniya se azaad karo .mujhko apni maan ki aankho se khojne ki kosis karo aap ko turant pata chala jaye ga main kaha hu.aur ab main apni bachi huvi sari shakti aap k pass bhej raha hu bus dhyaan se dekhna aap ye .hamare paas ek hi ausar hai.aur itna bol kar vo apni sari shakti ko mere tarf bhejne lagat hai apni maan ki tarango k madat se.
Maine-turant apni aankhe khuli aur mujhe aakhir kaar vo kaal kothari mil gai jisme se vo tarange aa rahi thi .aur main bina samay gavae us kaal kathre k pass chala gaya aur mere gale ka locket ek dum safed rang ka hokar chamkne laga aur main ye dekh kar santust ho gaya ki maine sahi kaal Kothari k pass kahada hu.phir dekhte hi dekhte .main uske andar chala gaya jaha ek balck unicorn bahot kamjoor halat me pada tha aur jaise hi maine usko chuva vo mere andar sama gaya pahale to main kuchh samjaha nahi lakin baad me mujhe apni pith par kauch bante huve maisus huva jaise koee taitoo ban raha ho kuch der baad taitoo banna band ho gaya.aur black unicorn ek baar phir mere andar se bahar aa gaya bilkul mere saamane aa gaya.us samay vo kuch is tarah dikh raha tha jisko dekh kar main bhi usme hi khoo gaya.
to be continued………
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma medusa ko usi k shakti se usko harata hai.aur phir pahoch jata hai ek bahot hi bade kale rang k gate k pass.
Ab aage-
Main-jaise hi kale rang k gate k pass pahucha tabhi ek baar phir se mere gale k locket ne apna rang badalna suru kar diya.lekin is baar mujhe kuchh ajeeb sa maisus ho raha tha .q ki pahale 2 baar jab mere locket ne apna rang badla tha to maine kuchh bhi ajeeb maisus nahi kiya tha .lekin is baar ki baat hi kuchh alag tha.mujhe bahot ajeeb sa maisus ho raha tha .mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki jaise mere sath bahot kuchh bura hone vala hai.aur main cha kar bhi apni soch ko kabu me nahi kar pa raha tha.aur rah rah kar mere jahaan me sirf ek hi baat aa raha tha .abhi jarur mere sath kuchh bahot bura hone vala hai aur mera mujhse sab kuchh chhin jaye ga.ye sab kuchh mere maan me mere sath tab tak chalta raha .jab tak ki mere gale k locket me apna rang puri tarah badal na liya.lekin
Is baar mere gale k locket ne apne aap ko 2 rang me black-orange me badla tha. Jab puri tarah mere locket me apna raang badal liya tab kahee ja kar mujhe kuchh achchha maisus huva.mujhe aisa laga ki jaise main koee sapne dekh raha hu aur ek dum se kisi ne mujhko jagaya ho aur main vartamaan me aa gaya hu.is samay mere dimaag me sirf ek hi baat chal raha tha .ki ye abhi jo kuchh bhi mere sath huva kya ye koee braham tha ya sach me mere sath kisi anhoni hone ka sanket hai.aur vahee
Main-apne maan me bhagvaan se sirf ek hi prathana kar raha tha bhagvaan jaldi se mujhe is no return land se nikal do kasam se aaj k baad main is manus jagah par pair bhi nahi rakhunga.bhagvaan bus is baar meri madat kar do.main aisi hi tarah taraf ki minate kar raha tha.q ki aaj se pahale maine kabhi bhi ye sab kuchh nahi kiya tha. pata nahi aaj mere sath kya ho raha hai.maine aaj se pahale apne aap ko kabhi bhi itna laachaar aur asahaay nahi samajha tha .mujhe to kuchh bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha .ki ye sab kuchh ho kya raha hai.main kabhi der tak us kale gate k pass khada ho kar ajeebo gareeb cheejo k bare me soch raha tha .kabhi bhagvaan se minate karta to kabhi aage k khatre k bare me sochne lagat to kabhi darta aur na jane kya kya chal raha tha mere dimaag me. lekin main cha kar bhi apne soch ko apne vash me kabu nahi kar pa raha tha.aur to aur aisa to aaj tak mere sath kabhi bhi nahi huva tha.isliye main thak haar k black shadow ko bulaya lekin vo mere bulane pe nahi aa raha tha phir maine seona ko bhi bulaya vo bhi nahi aaee.phir kya tha
Mera-gussa badhne laga q ki dono mere bulane par bhi nahi aa rahe the.isliye maine gusse me aa kar apne gale k locket ko pakad k bahot jor se khicha.aur
Maine-jaise apne gale k locket ko khicha mujhe bahot joor se ek jhatka laga.vo jhatka itna jada jez tha ki ek baar to mujhe laga ki mere praan hi nilak jayenge aur main apne ghutne pe baith k lambi lambi sase lene laga. Jab main kuchh der tak lambi lambi sase liya tab kahee ja k mera gussa thoda sa shaant huva .lekin in sab me mera fayada ho gaya q ki ab mere gussa shaant ho gaya tha aur sath hi mere dimaag me chal rahe sare vichhar bhi ruk gaye the .ek tarah se socha jaye to vo jhatka mere liye kisi raam baan se kaam nahi tha.ab mujhe ek dum achchha lag raha tha.isliye maine black shadow ko phir se apne maan me bulaya .tabhi
Black shadow-maalik aap ne mujhe kaise yaad kiya .
Main-black shadow ki aavaaj sun k mujhe achchha laga.aur main black shadow se jab maine tumko bulaya to tum mere saamane q nahi aaye.
Black shadow-maalik main kaise aata .is samay to aap shadow k roop me hai.dosto aap logo ko yaad hoga jab main shadow k roop me hota hu to black shadow mere saamane nahi aaj sakta hai.aur
Main-ne jaise hi black shadow ki baat suni tab ja k mere dimaag ki bati jali.q ki dosto black shadow ne mujhe pahale hi bataya tha .ki jab main apne insane rup me raunga tabhi vo mere saamane aa sakta hai.aur main apne maan me ye mujko ho kya gaya hai itni choti choti cheege main bhul raha hu.jab se no return land me aaya hu sab kuchh main bulne laga hu .isliye turant maine apne insani roop me aane ka socha is baar.lekin ye kya main to apni insani roop le hi nahi pa raha tha.phir maine maan me sochne laga ki ab kya karu agar ek baar phir se jada sochne laga to pata nahi kahi phir se apne vicharo kabu kar paunga ki nahi isase achchha hai ki mujhe ab is gate k andar jana cha hiye aur jinta jadli ho sake to yaha se nikal jana cha hiye .q ki main jinta jada yaha rukunga mujhe lgata hai main apne sochne samajhne aur apne shaktiyo ko khote chala jaunga.ye sab kuchh soch kar maine mere saamane k kale rang k gate ko dekhne laga ki kahi koee spell vagera likha huva hai kya.lekin us gate par to kucgh bhi nahi likha huva tha.isliye maine us gate ko apne hath se dhakaa de diya .lekin
Mujhe-umeed to nahi tha. ki vo itni aashani se khul jaye ga .lekin vo gate ekdum aashani se khul gaya.aur jaise gate khula .main gate k andar jane k liye apna kadam badhane laga .abhi maine 2 hi kadam badhaya tha ki 2 aag (fire) se bani huvi janjeero (chain) ne mujhe jakad liye aur gasite huve andar khichane lagi aura main bhi gasite huve andar jane laga .q ki main mujbur tha us jangir k vaje se aur dusra karan ye bhi tha ki cha kar bhi main phichhe bhaag to sakta nahi tha .aur jab tak main kuchh samajh pata tab tak aag se bani jangiro ne mujho jakad liya tha .isliye main bhi apne aap ko uske havale kar diya.aur us samay mujhe vahee sahi lag raha tha .aur vahee
Main-kuchh der tak to mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki mujhe kaha le jaya ja raha hai.aur vaise bhi mera pura dhyaan us aag ki jangir par tha.jab mujhe kuchh hosa aaya to maine apne aap ko javala mukhi aur lava ki nadi k pass paya .main is samay javala mukhi k jameen par tha aur vaha kab kya ho jaye kuchh bhi nahi kah sakte hai .aur no return land k javala mukhi kya kar sakte hai main soch bhi nahi sakta tha. q ki abhi main kaid me tha jisko koee kaid nahi kar sakta hai usko kaid kar diya tha .aag se bani jangiro ne.g ha dosto aap sabhi bukul sahi soch rahe hai main is samay shadow k rup me tha .to bhala koee parachhaee ko kaise kaid kar sakta hai.lekin no return land me sab kuchh mumkin hai. jab main apne aap ko kaid kiya huva maisus kiya tab mujko pata chala.aur main apne maan me yahi soch raha tha .lagta hai isiliye har koee darta hai no return land ka naam sunte hi aur yahee vaja hoga jo ek baar no return land k andar jisne bhi kadam rakh diya to vo kabhi vaha se vapas nahi aaya is samay vo sab kuchh mujko bhi maisus ho raha tha .
Main-ye sab soch hi raha tha tabhi mujhe kisi ki dhadne ki aavaaj sunaae di .jaise hi uski dahaad mere kano tak pahocha javala mukhi me se aag ki barish hone lagi.aur to aur main jaha jameen par leta huva tha .aag k jangiro me kaid vaha ki jameen faat gai aur vaha se lava nikal kar mere shareer me gusne laga aur main cha kar bhi kuchh nahi kar pa raha tha .dhire dhire main us lava me dubne laga .ek baar to mujhe bhi laga ki ye mera ab aakhir paal hai.phir mujhe mera pahale sapna mere maan me mujhe dikhe laga jab main shadow bana tha us ke baad ka pahale sapna .
{dosto ye vahee sapna hai mere. jaha karma k bachche use nafraat karte hai aur sabhi desh k log mil kar dusri duni se aae huvi sena se lad rahe hote hai aur main vaha nahi hota hu}
Mujhe –jaise hi vo sab kuchh dikhne laga .tabhi maine apne maan me socha lagta hai isi vaja se sab mujhse nafrat karte honge .takat ki bukh ne mujhe bhi andha kar diya. bina jane samajhe main yaha chala aaya aur apni jaano ko sach bhi nahi bata paya.phir mujhe vo din bhi yaaad aa gaya jis din maine shadow banane ka socha kash maine us din yamraaj ki bate sun kar maaya bi jungle se chala jata to sayaad aaj main apni jano k sath hota .kahate hai na aakhri samay me hame hamari sabhi galtiyon ka aisaas ho jata hai aur vahee sab kuchh is samay mere sath ho raha tha.
Main-ab puri taraf lava me dub gaya tha.kuchh hi ansh mere shareer ka bacha tha.kuchh hi der me vo bhi dub gaya.jaise jaise main javala mukhi k lava me samate ja raha tha vaise vaise mujhe apni jeevan ki sare bate yaad ani lagai .ab to main bhi samajh gaya tha. ki ab main kisi bhi pal apne praan chhod dunga.q ki maine aaj se pahale kabi bhi maut ko nahi dekha tha intne karib se .aur
Mere-aankho ki pakle ek dum bhari ho gai thi .main to ab usko khol nahi pa raha tha .aur sath hi mere dil me jalan hone laga lekin main phir bhi kuchh bhi nahi kar pa raha tha.mujhe to aisa maisus ho raha tha jaise koee meri dil ko cheer raha hai aur mere shareer se usko alg kar raha hai aur main ek majboor ki tarah kuchh nahi kar pa raha tha. Ab sirf main apni maut aane ka intazaar kar raha tha .aur main bhagvaan se prathna kar raha tha .ki mujhko is shaap se mukti de do is dard se mukt kar do .q ki main apan dard bardast nahi kar pa raha tha. Phir dekhte hi dekhte main ek dum se behos ho gaya.aur mera pura shareer javal mukhi k lava k andar dubte hi ja raha tha.jaise uski koee seema hi na uski gahraee ki.aur ab to mujhko bhi pata chal gaya tha .ki ab main kisi bhi pal apne sabhi kartaav dard aur se mukt ho jaunga.
Tabhi mujhe-bahot se aavaaje mere kano me sunee dene lagi. lekin main apni aankhe khol nahi pa raha tha.aur un aavaajo ko sun k aisa lag raha tha. jaise vo sabhi aavaajo ko main bahot achchhe se jaanta hu.
Aavaaje-maalik aap aise hi bina kosis kiya kaise haar maan sakte hai. aap k liye hum sabne apna sab kuchh kurbaan kar diya tha.aur apne bhi hum logo ko vada kiya tha ki aap ham sab ko phir se zinda karenge.utho maalik utho.
Main-jaise hi vo aavaajo ne bola mujhe tabhi eka ek mere charo taraf ek kavach jaisa aa gaya .(ye aavaaj mere sabhi takato ki thi in me monark ,simba,crimson,black shadow aur seona the) .sabhi ki aavaaje sunane k baad maine bhi ek baar kosisi kar k dekhne k socha.q ki jab marna hi hai to apni puri kosis karne k baad marta hu. kam se kam pastava to nahi ho ga. ki maine bina kuchh kiye hi haar maan liya.isliye maine ek aakhri baar kosis kiya .sabse pahale maine absorption vala spell padha aur dkhte dekte puri lava mujhme samane laga jaise jaise vo lava mujh me sama rahe the.
Mujhe –to aisa misus ho raha tha .ki jaise koee mujh ko andar se pighla raha ho.us lava ka taapmaan itna jada hone laga ki mujhko ek baar laga kahi main faat na jau.q ki lava khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha .aur maine apni new (naee) kaalee shaktiyo ko kabu me karna sikha nahi tha . aur to aur mujhe ye bhi dar lag raha tha .kahee aise hi kuchh der aur chala to .ya phir aisa hi chlata raha to . tab main kya karunga.lekin main haar bhi is baar nahi maan sakta tha .q ki ab baat sirf mere akele ki nahi rah gaee thi .mere sath sath se kaee logo ki jaan daav pe lagi thi. (monark ,simba ,crimson , black shadow aur seona) .aur main aisa kuchh hone nahi dene vala tha .is baar tabhi maine medusa ki takat ka istamaal kiya apne janjeero par .vo thoda to sakt huva lekin main abhi bhi usko tod nahi pa raha tha .isliye main dhyaan lagane laga aag se bani jangir ki takat ko sokne me kuchh der kosis karne k baad .main aakhir kaar kamyaab ho hi gaya.aur maine us jangir ko tod diya aur apne aap ko azaad kar liya.aur
Maine-jaise apne aap ko azaad kiya turant main us lave se bahar nikal k bahar jameen par aa gaya jaha mere koee intzaar kar raha tha pahale se.lekin jo maine absortion spell use kiya tha vo abhi tak ruka nahi tha vo abhi bhi lava ko sokh raha tha .aur uska natiza ye huva ki mere shadow ka shareer lave k vaje se jalne laga puri tarah se .aur mera shadow roop bhi aag jasisa laal aur usme se aag ki lapte nikalna suru ho gaya tha .ab
Main-to jaise burning shadow ban gaya tha.lekin main ab uski garmi ko bardast kar le raha tha . tabhi jo mere intazaar kar raha tha vo mujh par aag k gole se hamle karne laga.pahale aag k gole se mujhe thoda dard huva lekin uske baad vo mujhpar jitne bhi aag k gole mara mujko kuchh asar hi nahi ho raha tha .q ki main to khud hi aag ki tarh jal raha tha .phir kaha mujhpar aag ka asar hone vala tha.tabhi
Main-tum kun ho aur q mujh par hamla kar rahe ho.jaldi bato nahi to main tumko khatam kar dunga .maine bahot gusse me bola usko.maine jaise hi gussa huva vaise hi aag ki lapte aur jada mere shareer me se nikalne laga.tabhi
Orthros-main hi orthros.yaha ka rakhvala hu.aur tera kaal hu .aaj tera yaha aakhri din hai .
{orthros –kutte jaisa dikhne vala maaya bi jeev hai. jis k pass 2 munh hai aur ek shareer hai.dosto orthros kuchh aisa dikh hai..}
Main-vo to abhi pata chal jaye ga.maine bhi us par aag se hamla kar diya lekin usko kuchh bhi nahi huva.ye dekh main samajh gaya jo yaha ka rakhvala ho.uspar ye lave ka asar kaha hone vala hai.tabhi
Orthros-ne bhi mujh par gusse me apni aag vali jangeer se hamla kar diya.lekin
Main-bhi is baar taiyaar tha.is liye maine sab se pahale absortion shakti ka rukh orthros pe kar diya.q ki main apni absortion shakti ko rokne me abhi kamyaab nahi ho paya tha. lekin maine uski disha badalna sikh liya tha.isliye jaise hi orthros ne mujh par hamla kiya .maine bhi us par hamla kar diya .mujhe pata tha usko harana itna asaan nahi hai. orthros ko sab se pahale kamjor karna pade ga.isliye maine uski shakti sokhne laga aur uske charo taraf lava ki baris karne laga jo sidha ja kar orthros pe gir raha tha.mujko pata tha vo lava uska kuchh bhi nahi bigar sakti hai lekin uska dhayaan to bhatka hi sakti hai .is liye maine lagataar lave ka hamla jari raka aur main kaamyaab bhi hone laga tha. Phir bhi orthros ne apni aag se bani janjeer se mujh par hamla kar diya tha.lekin maine ne samay rahte medusa ki power se aag ki janjeer ko pathar ka bana diya jisase vo janjeer mujh tak pahochne se pahale hi tut k gir gaee. jameen par.lekin maine apna halma jari rakha orthros par aur to aur maine medusa ki shakti se bhi hamla karne laga jisase orthros ka hilna band ho gaya.lekin usko dekh k to mujhe yahi lag raha tha vo abhi bhi bahot shakti Shali hai.
Main-apne maan me sochne laga kaise isko haraya jaye.mere hamle lagataar chaalu the.lekin uska kuchh kar nahi pa rahe the.tabhi meri nazar aag se bani janjeer par padi jo jamin par girne k baad apne asli rup me phir se aa gai the.jisko maine pathar bana k toda tha aur maine ek aur khas vsesta us janjeer ka dekha sabhi lava apni disha badal le rahi thi .jaha vo janjeer padi thi .yaha tak ki jis lave se main hamla kar raha tha vo sabhi bhi.phir maine soch q na us jangir ka upyog orthros pe kiya jaya sayad kaam baan jaye lekin main shadow baan k nahi kar sakta tha .q ki main kuchh der pahale usme kaid tha. Ab mujhe apni insane roop me aana ho ga aur uske liye mujha samay cha hiya .aur uske liye mujh ko orthros ko bahot jada kamjor karna pade ga.q ki jaise hi main apni insane roop me aaunga meri new (naee) kaalee shaktiya kaam karna band ho jaye gi.isliye maine apni puri jaan laga di orthros ko kamjor karne me .usme lagbhag maine bahot jada shaktiyo ko kho diya.jab maine dekh ki orthros behos ho gaya hai.turant maine apni insani roop lene ka soch.aur kuchh der kosis karne k baad main usme kaamyaab ho gaya.aur turant us aag se bani jangiro le kar orthros ko band diya.tabhi
Locket-2% . itna bol kar shaant ho jata hai.
Main- samajh gaya mere pass sirf 2% shakti bachi hai.is liye maine apni black shadow sword ko yaad kiya aur chal diya orthros k taraf abhi main us par hamla karta tabhi phir se.
Locket-tum yaha kisi ko nahi maar sakte ho .ab vo haar gaya hai. Phir bhi tumne usko mara to tum yaha se aage nahi badh pao ge aur yahi kaid ho jao ge itna bol kar vo shaant ho jata hai.
Main-locket ki baat sun kar main turant ruk jata hu.aur apni talvaar ko vapas bhej deta hu.aur sochne lagta hu. ho na ho abhi yaha ka kaam pura nahi huva hai.nahi to main agle padav par jarur chala jata.aur vaise bhi mujhe har padav me kuchh saktiya mili hai.chalo ek baar main apne search magic use kar k dekhu kuchh hai kya yaha.kuchh der baad mujhe ek black box javala mukhi k andar rakha huva dikha.
Main –ne turant apna rup badal kar shadow ban k javal mukhi k andar pahoch aur jaise hi maine us black box ko touch kiya mere andar bahot si shaktiya samane lagi.mujhe aisa maisus hone laga jaise meri shaktiya lakho guna badh gai ho.aur main ab bilkul achchha maisus kar raha tha. aisa laga jaise mujhe mere sari chhini guvi shaktiya bhi mil gai ho.aur ab main kaee guna jada taktvaar ho gaya hu aisa maisus karne laga .lekin mujhe abhi tak ye nahi pata chala tha ki ye kaun si shaktiya hai aur kis tarake ki takate hai inme aur main inka kaise istamaal kar sakta hu .tabhi phir se vahi aavaaj.
locket-mubarak ho tumne sabhi padav paar kar liya hai .main ab tumhe tumhare manzil k pass le jaraha hu.aur tumhari shakti bhi 100 % ho gai hai. itna bol kar vo shaant ho jata hai.
Maine-jaise locket ki baat suni main to bahot khus ho gaya apne maan me chalo aakhir kaar black unicorn se ab milunga.aur dekhte hi dekhte main ek kaal lothri me pahoch gaya.
Main- jaise hi us kaal kothri me pahocha ek baar phir se mere saamane vahi nazara aa gaya jab maine no return land me kadam rakha tha aur vo drishya tha infinite gate ka aur ab main jaha khada tha mere saamane ka drishya infinite kaal Kothari ka tha.sabhi infinite gateo ko dekh kar mere saamajh .me ye nahi aa raha tha aakhir kaar kya yaha itne sare black unicorns ko kaid kiya huva hai.ya phir insabhi me se sirf ek me hi black unicorn hai.aur mujhko in sabhi infinite kaal Kothari me se sahi kaal Kothari ko chunana hoga.mere kuchh bhi samjh me nahi aa rha tha mujhe kya karna hai.isliye main joor se chilya ki mujhe kya karna hai koee hai kya koee mujhko bataye ga.lekin kuch bhi uttar nahi mila mujhko.phir main thak kar k apni search magic ka istamaal karne ko soch lekin ye kya kuchh huva hi nahi tabhi.
Locket-is kaal Kothari me kisi ki bhi shakti kaam nahi karti hai.galt kaal kothri tum ko usi me kaid kar de gi.itna bol kar locket se aavaaj aana band ho jata hai.
Main-ab samajh gaya tha.aur maine jo dusra anumaan lagaya tha mujhe vahi theek laga q ki sabhi me se kisis ek hi me black unicorn hai aur baki sab ya to aankho ka braham hai ya in sabhi me jo bhi yaha tak pahocha hoga vo bhi in kaal Kothari me kaid hoga.phir main shant maan se sochne laga kaise pata lagau kis kaal Kothari me kaha hoga black unicorn.aur
Main-vahee kadha ho kar sochne laga.kya karu .tabhi maine socha q na tab tak main dhyaan me baith jau mana ki yaha koee bhi saktiya kaam me nahi ayenge meri lekin dhayaan lagane se sayad koee baat baan jaye aur mujhe jo abhi shaktiya mili hai sayaad uske bare me hi kuchh pata chal jaye aur vahi shakti sayad black unicorn tak pahuchaa de.itna sab kuchh sochne k baad main dhyaan lagane k liye vahi kaal khothariyo k pass hi baith gaya. Dosto karma ko kuchh der dhyaan me baithne dete hai.tab tak kahi aur chalet hai.
Jin lok-
Jin lok me is samay afra tafri ka mahol dikh raha tha .pure jin lok me sainko ko surakhchaa k liye tainaat kar diya tha.jin lok k mahaaraaj ka kahne par.aur vaha ki janta ye sab kuchh dekh kar sabhi apas me tarah tarah ki bate kar rahe the.ab chalet hi jin lok k mahaaraaj k mahal me jaha.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj-abhi vo apne kakchh me apni beti k sath khel rahe the aur unki patni dono ko dekh rahi thi tabhi ek aavaaj dono ko sunaee deta hai.
Mahaamantree-(dosto vo aavaaj mahaamantree ka hi tha).mahaaraaj hamare jin jadugaro ne sab kuchh pata laga liya hai.aur is samay sabhi vishes kachchh me hai.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj- theek hai tum jao main abhi aata hu.
Mahaamantree –turant chala jata hai.aur unske kuchh der baad jin lok k mahaaraaj bhi chala jata hai kakchh se.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj-jaise hi vishes kachchh (kamra) me pahochte hai sabhi apne mahaaraaj ka khade ho kar swagat karte hai.phir sura hota hai asli mudda.
Jin jadugar-mahaaraaj.hum ne sab kuchh lagbhag pata laga liya hai .haal me ek vilupt huvi jin ki prajati yaha kuchh din pahale dekhi gaee thi aur usne kuchh jinkari jin lok k puskalay le ke kar gai thi kuchh din pahale. Jisase sab se jada us par hi shak hota hai .ho na ho in sabhi cheego me uske malik ka hath hoga.q ki bina malik k hukm k bina koee bhi itna dusahas nahi kar sakt hai.
Jin lok ka mahaaraaj-pustakaalay se kin chejo ki jaan kari li hai us jin ne aur mujho us jin prajati ka tasveer bhi dikhao.
Jin jadugar-ye raha us ki tasveer.ye bhale hi dikhne me bahot chhote se hai lekin hamse kaam nahi hai.is ne unicorn ki maaya bi jungle aur black book ki jankari le kar gai thi.jis din ye sari gatna huva vo dikhi nahi lekin kisi ne no retun land ki kitab padhi aur kuchh logo se pata chala ki kisi ne unki dimaag me jhakne ki kosis kar raha tha aur us kunve aur unicorn k maaya bi jungle k pass kaalee shakti k hone abhass huva hai hum sabhi ko. lekin vo kaun hai kaha se aaye hai ye sabh kuchh hum nahi pata laga paye hai aur nahi ni koee suraaj mila hai abhi tak .aisa lagat hai vo bahoh jada shakti Shali vo hoga q ki hamare jin pravesh dwarpalo ko bhi kisi ka aane aur jane ka pata nahi chala .isase hum anumaan laga sakte hai vo jo bhi the vo nahi chahate the kisi ko bhi iski khabar ho.phir bhi mahaaraaj hum ne us jin k pata laga liya hai aur vo kaha hai is samay vo bhi hum ne pata laga liya hai.
Jin lok k mahaaraaj-achchhi baat hai.sab se pahle us jin ko yaha kaid kar k lao.tabhi hume pata chale ga uska maalik kaun hai .aur vo yaha kis liye aaee thi.lekin dhyaan rakhna usko bahot svdhani se kaid kar k lana kisi ko bhi is baat ka pata nahi chala cha hiye aur ye bhi ailaan kar diya jaye puskalay me sabhi veshes pukato k liye ek vises maaya bi kamra banaya jaye jaha hume pata chal sake kaun kaya kar raha hai.aur us jin ko jaldi mere pass le kar ao aur us din jo shaitaan aaya tha .uske bare me pata lagane ki kosis karo .itna bol kar vo chala jata hai.aur usi k sath sabhi apne kaam pe nikal jate hai.
No return land-
Main-dhyan me baith tha .eka ek mujhe black unicorn ka janam aur usko kaise black sun ki shakti mili vo sabhi chege mere maan me dikhne lgai aur sirf itna hi nahi main maisus kar raha tha kaise black unicorn us samay maisus kar raha tha jab usko black sun ki adhi shakti mili thi is .dhyaan me baith huve mujhe laga jaise vo shakti mujme ab aa gai ho aur tabhi mere aankh khul gai.aur main sochne laga ye sab kuchh kya tha.kahi black unicorn meri madat to nahi karna chata hai aur agar vo chata hai to in sabhi cheejo ko dikhane ka kya matlaab ho sakta hai.tabhi mujhe yaad aata hai jab maine black box ko chuva tha tabhi bhi mujhko aisa hi maisus huva tha.aur ho na ho black unicorn bhi mujhse ye hi kahna chata ho bhale hi uski sari shaktiya usase alag kar diya ho lekin abhi bhi kuchh shaktiya usme bachi huvi hai.
Main-ab sab kuchh achchhe se samjh gaya tha ,main black unicorn tak kaise pahchanuga.mujhe bus ek baar phir se vahi shakti pahchaana hoga aur mujhko maisus karna hoga ga.isliye maine apni aankhe band kar liye apne apne maan me black unicorn ko kahne laga agar tum sun rahe ho mujhko to muko sanket do aur us shakti ko azaad karo taki main tum tak pahoch saku.q ki main ye kaam akele nahi kar sakta hu ye kaam hum dono ko mil kar karna hoga tabhi main tumko azaad kar punga.itna bol kar main shant ho gaya.tabhi maujhe mere maan me ek dard bahari aavaaj sunaee di.
Black unicorn-main to varso se aap ka intazaar kar rahu maalik .mujhe is duniya se azaad karo .mujhko apni maan ki aankho se khojne ki kosis karo aap ko turant pata chala jaye ga main kaha hu.aur ab main apni bachi huvi sari shakti aap k pass bhej raha hu bus dhyaan se dekhna aap ye .hamare paas ek hi ausar hai.aur itna bol kar vo apni sari shakti ko mere tarf bhejne lagat hai apni maan ki tarango k madat se.
Maine-turant apni aankhe khuli aur mujhe aakhir kaar vo kaal kothari mil gai jisme se vo tarange aa rahi thi .aur main bina samay gavae us kaal kathre k pass chala gaya aur mere gale ka locket ek dum safed rang ka hokar chamkne laga aur main ye dekh kar santust ho gaya ki maine sahi kaal Kothari k pass kahada hu.phir dekhte hi dekhte .main uske andar chala gaya jaha ek balck unicorn bahot kamjoor halat me pada tha aur jaise hi maine usko chuva vo mere andar sama gaya pahale to main kuchh samjaha nahi lakin baad me mujhe apni pith par kauch bante huve maisus huva jaise koee taitoo ban raha ho kuch der baad taitoo banna band ho gaya.aur black unicorn ek baar phir mere andar se bahar aa gaya bilkul mere saamane aa gaya.us samay vo kuch is tarah dikh raha tha jisko dekh kar main bhi usme hi khoo gaya.
to be continued………
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thank you so much brother.keep supporting.next update post kar diya bhai.read kar batana bhai kaise laga aap ko mera update aur koee sugession ya koee question ho to vo bhi share karna bhai.
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Thank you every one dosto.mujhe support karne k liye aur itne achchhe sujhav aur comments k liye.maine new update post kar diya hai.i hope aap logo ko mera likha huva pasand aaye ga .read and enjoy the story and share your valuable comments .good night friends and keep supporting.
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very nice update .......
Keeo it up bro .......
update read kr k maza aa gaya .......
Ab karma ko No Return Land ka raja bnao gy k os ko No Return Land se bahir le jao gy .........
Next update ka intezar rahe ga ...........
Keeo it up bro .......
update read kr k maza aa gaya .......
Ab karma ko No Return Land ka raja bnao gy k os ko No Return Land se bahir le jao gy .........
Next update ka intezar rahe ga ...........
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Unicorn and orthros ki bhi entry badiya thi
Or teeno hi olympian creature hai ( Medusa, orthros and unicorns).
Jis tarh se kahani ko joda gya hai vo bhi accha hai
Or orthros ko sirf god ya demi god hi mar sakte hai like Hercules does
Kyoki vo bhi ek mythological creature hai
Or napoleon lion ka father bhi jisse bhi Hercules ne mara tha
Bhai bhut badiya
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Unicorn and orthros ki bhi entry badiya thi
Or teeno hi olympian creature hai ( Medusa, orthros and unicorns).
Jis tarh se kahani ko joda gya hai vo bhi accha hai
Or orthros ko sirf god ya demi god hi mar sakte hai like Hercules does
Kyoki vo bhi ek mythological creature hai
Or napoleon lion ka father bhi jisse bhi Hercules ne mara tha
Bhai bhut badiya
Waiting for next update
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