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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Samrock19797

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Bhai yeh toh story hi ulti kar di
Husna jinda hai
Na koi mara, na hi tabahi hui
Par jin lok ko sabak mil gya
Abb soana ka part kaisa milta hai
Pegasus ka asli motive bhi abhi pta chalega
Or mujhe lagta hai ki
Karma ko nya sharir Or dil
Issi naye quest mai milega
Keep writing bro

Nice update bro
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Bahut qchhe or bahut hi badhiya update... Raja ka to baja diya baja... Ek pal ko to sach laga ki nanhi pari mar gai... Lekin apne hero sorry sorry shaitan ne usko bacha liya hihihihihi.... Ab koun saa adventure hai dekhte hai... Or sala sabki shaktiyan bhi leli.... Ab kitna or shakti layega bhaiye.... Waiting
thank you so much bhai.aise hi sath bane rahana aur support karte rahana bhai.next update thodi der me.aur jali hi aap ko pata chal jaye ga karma ka new adventure bhai.
 
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Dark_Shadow...

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Bhai yeh toh story hi ulti kar di
Husna jinda hai
Na koi mara, na hi tabahi hui
Par jin lok ko sabak mil gya
Abb soana ka part kaisa milta hai
Pegasus ka asli motive bhi abhi pta chalega
Or mujhe lagta hai ki
Karma ko nya sharir Or dil
Issi naye quest mai milega
Keep writing bro

Nice update bro
Waiting
thank you so much bhai.aise hi sath bane rahana aur support karte rahana bhai.keep supporting.next update thodi der me.bhai kabhi kabhi compromise karna padta hai.kab kaun kaam aa jaye bhavish me.sirf seona ka dusra bhag hi is update me pata chale ga bhai.
 

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UPDATE-47

Recap-

Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma husna ko jin lok se bachata hai aur jin lok k raaja ko sabak bhi sikhata hai .

Ab aage…..

Main-kuchh der apne bistar par aaraam karne k baad uth jata hu.aur jab maine khidakee se baahar deka to shaam ho chuka tha .aur suraj dhal chukka tha.isliye maine bina samay gavaye magic se apne aap ko fresh kiya aur dhyaan me baithne k liye baith gaya.q ki aaj mujhe dhyaan me baithna mere liye ek vardaan ka kaam kar sakta hai .q ki aaj hai meri agni pareeksha tha vo bhi apne aap se hi .

{dosto aap log yahi soch rahe hoge na meri agni pareeksha vo bhi apne aap se . to dosto main aap sabhi ko ek baar phir se yaad dila du meri buraee (bure karma) ne jo mujhe chetavni di thi vo aaj raat ko khatam hone vala hai.ab aage}

Main-apne maan me sochne laga ki vaise to mere pass locket hai no return land ka aur unicorn k leader ko jab maine mara tha .uski shaktiya bhi mere pass hai .un dono takatao k hone k vaja se mujhe yakin to tha.ki kaalee shaktiya raat hone par mujh par havi nahi hongi .lekin rah rah k mere maan me ye bhi khayaal aa raha tha ye sabhi shaktiya din me to mere kabu me thi. lekin raat ko agar mujh par galti se bhi bure karma ka kabja ho gaya to samjho main sab kuchh khoo hi dunga apna.isliye mujhe kuchh bhi kar k jald se jaldi mujhe seona k dusre bhag tak pahochna hoga aur ye bhi dekhna hoga unicorn ki shaktiyo ka kya asar hoga raat ho jane ka baad.q ki seona ne mujhe chetavni di thi. jis tarah vo din me meri achchhi shaktiyo ko bhadha rahi hai.vahee raat me ulta asar karengi.yehi sab kuchh sochne k baad main dhyaan karne me lag gaya.aur kuchh samay tak main dhyaan me baitha raha aur mujhe kuchh apni naee shaktiyo ka gayaan huva.uske baad main ne apne dhyaan tod diya.aur apna dhyaan tod ne baad mujhe bahot achchha lag raha tha.isliye maine bina samay gavaye husna ko bulaya apne kamare me.turant

Husna-maalik aap ne yaad kiya mujh ko.

Main-haa husna tum ek kaam karo .tum vapas melboafaan chali jao aur main kal tak vaha aaunga.aur meri sabhi jaano ko ye suchna de dena.aur un sabhi se ye bhi kah dena mujhe abhi kuchh raajya karyo se teharma me aaj raat ko rukna pade ga.sab achchhe se samajh gaee na husna tum.itna bolte hi maine melbolina k liye gate khol diya husna k liye q ki meri sabhi jaan vahi par thi.

Husna-g maalik.lekin main soch rahi thi ki….tabhi

Main-mujhe pata hai tum bhi mere sath chalna chahati ho na. lekin jaha main jaha raha hu vaha sabse jada khatra achchhi shaktiyo ko hi hoga.haa agar mujhe tumhari jarurat hoga to main tumhe bula lunga .ab tum jao.mere samjhane k baad husna mere gate se melbolina chali jati hai aur gate gayab ho jata hai husna k jate hi.ab mujhe husna ki koee fikar nahi tha.isliye

Maine-husna k jane k baad black shadow aur seona ko apne maan me yaad kiya.dono turant mere saamane aa gaye.

Black shadow aur seona-dono ek sath maalik aapne yaad kiya hum dono ko.

Main-tum dono ko pata hi hoga maine kis liya yaad kiya .mujhe bato vo jagah kaha hai .jaha aaj raat mujhe jana hai.

Seona-maalik vo jagah yaha se bohot dur hai.aur vo jagah samudra k andar hai.

Black shadow-ha malik main us samudra k andar gaya tha.lekin mujhe jada kuchh to nahi dikha lekin maine seona ki jaise hi kaalee shaktiya maisus kiya tha vaha par.is liye maalik mujhe pura yakeen hai ho na ho seona ka dusra bhag vahee hoga.tabhi

Main-kya us jagah ka koee naam hai.

Seona-dead sea.us samudra k andar ek bhi jeev jeevit nahi rah sakta hai.is liya uska naam dead sea pada hai maalik.

Main-theek hai vaise tum dono ne achchha kaam kiya hai.itna bolne k baad maine apne maan me recollect spell bola .turant maine seono aur black shadow me maan me se vo jagah dekh liye.aur pakal jhapkate hai us dead sea k pass pahoch gaya.is samay mere sath seona aur black shadow the aur pure aasamaan andere se ghira huva tha. q ki aaj amaavas ki raat thi. Jaha main kahada tha vaha thoda sa hi jameen tha vo bhi samudra k pani se charao tarf se ghira huva tha.us jameen par thode bahot ped paudhe the .amaavas ki raat hone k vaje se pura jungle ; samudra ka pani aur pura aasmaan andhere se ghira huva tha.aur

Seona-ne jaise mujhko kahna tha. jo na zinda ho na mara ho jiski pass hawa jaisa rafter ho jisko na pani chu paye na aag aur nahi koee kaid kar sake vo hi mujhtak pahoch sakta hai.main tuhme tab milungi jab aasmaan kala ho; jab kali raat ho aur hawa kaalee ho pani kala ho jungle kaala ho jameen kala ho. har ek cheeg kaalee raat ne dubi ho tabhi koee mujh tak poch sakta hai.aur main vahee main milungi.

{dosto jaise seona ne kaha tha us hisaab se amaavas k raat hone k vaja se hare k cheeg kaalee;raftaar k liye black unicorn mere pass hai aur vo bhi kala hai.aur nahi hi mujhe aag jala sakta hai nahi pani chu sakti aur nahi koee mujhe kaid karsata hai q ki main ek shadow hu.}

Main-abhi seona ki bato k bare me soch hi raha tha. sabhi eka ek samdura ka pani kaam hone laga aur dekhte hi dekhte samudra me se bahot lambe lambe ped nikalne lage.ye sab kuchh kisi ajube se kaam nahi tha .

Jis dead sea me koee bhi jeev jinda nahi rah sakta hai ab usi me se jaise jaise dead sea ka pani sukhte ja raha tha vaha par lambe lambe ped ugte ja rahe the.phir dekhte dekte vaha paura ek jungle ka janam ho gaya jaha kuchh der pahale sirf samudra ka pani tha.

Main – ye sab kuchh dekh k turant samajh gaya.ki ye sab kuchh ek maaya hai.ab mujhe bina der kiye is maaya bi jungle me jana hoga.aur seona k dusre bhag ko khojna hoga vo bhi bahot jaldi.isliye maine black shadow aur seona ko mere andar aane ka aadesh diya.turant dono mere andar sama gaye.aur main bhi us maaya bi jungle me jane k liye nikal pada.abhi maine us maaya bi jungle me apne pahala kadam rakha hi tha. tabhi mujhe ek aavaaj mujhko mere kano me sunaee deta hai.

Aavaaj-kaun ho tum aur mere is maaya bi jungle me kaha ghuse ja rahe ho.tabhi

Main-us kaalee kitaab ko lene aaya hu.

Aavaaj-jaise tumhari marji agar koee khud marna chata hai to main bhala q roku.main hu is jungle aur us kaalee kitaab ka rakshak.agar tum us kaalee kitaab tak pahochna chahate ho to tumhe yaha k niyaam manane padenge.nahi to hum mere jungle me hamesa k liye kaid ho jao ge .

Main-theek hai tum jo koee bhi ho mujhe jaldi bato mujhe kya karna hai mere pass jada samay nahi hai.(ek to mujhe pata nahi chal raha tha vo rakshak kaha hai q ki mujhko vo dikhaee nahi de raha tha sirf uski aavaaj sunaee de rahi thi aur dusri baat ye thi ki agar mere bure karma k jagne ka samay ho jaye ga to mere liye bahot musibat ho jaye ga isliye main jald se jald seona k dusre bhag tak pahochna chata tha.)

Aavaaj-thum theek kah rahe ho tumhare pass samay bahot kam hai .suraj ki pahali kiran tak agar tumne kaalee kitaab ko hasil nahi kar paye to tum yahi kaid ho jao ge.ab suno meri baat vo bhi bahot dhyaan se .

1.Pahala niyaam ye hai ki jo shakti tum ek baar is jungle me istamaal karoge vo phir se istamaal nahi kar paoo ge.


2.kaalee kitaab tak pahochne k liye tumko 8 gate ko paar karna hoga.7 gate tumko miljaye ga jab tum mere maaya bi jungle me jao ge.


3.8 gate tumko tab mile ga jab tum sabhi 7 gate ka rahasya ko suljha loge.

4.Har ek gate tak pahochne k liye tumko ek bhul bhulaiya ko paar karna hoga .jab tum bhul bhulaiya ko paar kar loge to tumko gate dikh jaye ga.

5.Har gate tumko ek paheli puche ga aur sahi javaab dene par tumko us gate k andar se kali kitaab ka ek hissa lana hoga .iska matlab ye hai ki uske 7 tukde ko jab tum 7 gate me se le kar aao ge tab tumko 8 va gate mile ga aur vahee mile ga tumko kaalee kitaab ka adhura bhag.aur

Aasha hai tumne sab kuchh samajh liya hoga.ab tum andar ja sakte ho.

Aavaaj-k itna bolte hi pura jungle aur bhi jada Ghana ho gaya .

Main-apne maan me yaar jitna jada asaan socha tha ye to unta hi samay lene vala hai aur pata nahi andar kaya hone vala hai itna bol kar main maaya bi jungle k andar apna kadam badha diya.jungle k andar intna jada andera tha. ki main to apne aap ko hi nahi dekh pa raha tha.is liye turant main apne shadow k rup me aa gaya.ab mujhe thodi dur tak kuchh kuchh dikhne laga tha.jaise hi maine thoda aur andar gaya to mere saamne ek pani ki bhul bhulaiya aa gaya.

Vo pani ka bhul bhulaiya kuchh is tarah se dikh raha tha.andar jane k liye 7 raste the .pani ki divare bani huvi thi.vo divari itna jada uchi thi ki mujhe pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki vo divare kitni uchi hai.ab mere saamane sab se badi musibat ki baat ye thi ki .main jada samay soch nahi sakata hu. q ki mere pass samay ki bahot aapurti hai.phir bhi maine thoda sochna hi theek samjha q ki pata nahi uske andar jane ka baad kaun si musibaat gale pad jaye aur sabhi badi baat ye thi ki jo power main istamaal karunga usko main phir se use nahi kar paunga.isliye mujhe bahot soch samajh kar apni power ka istamaal karna hoga.

{dosto karma ko thoda bhul bhulaiya k bare me sochne dete hai aur tab tak hum log thoda rupvati ko dekh lete hai vo kya kar rahi hai}

Teharma-

Rupavati-apne maan me aaj mujhe aakhri bali dena hai.phir mujhe ek aur power mili hi jaye ga nark ki aag.uske milte hi koee bhi mujko maar nahi paye ga.isi k sath vo apne maan me jor jor se hasne lagti hai aur vaha se gaya ho jati aur pahoch jati hai kabristaan me jaha uska gupt thikana hai kaalee shaktiyo ko pane ka aur shaitano ko khus karne ki jagah.kabristaan me pahochte hi vo sidha apne gupt thikane me chale jati hai jaha usne 100 logo ko bandi bane k rakha tha bali dene k liye.aur rupvati bali ki spell padhne lagti hai phir kya dekhte hi dekhte ek murti me se aag nikalne lagti aur vo aag sabhi 100 logo ko apni agni me jala k bhasam kar deti hai.vo sabhi bahot chillate hai tadapte hai lekin unsabhi ki cheekh aur pukaar koee sunne vala vaha nahi tha.

Rupvati –ki bali jaise hi puri huvi .tabhi rupvati k andar ek bahot bada aag ka gola saamane laga .ye aag ka gola usi murti me se aaya thi jisne thodi der pahale hi 100 logo jala k bhasam kiya thi. Jaise jaise vo aag ka gola rupvati k shareer me sama raha tha .vaise vaise rupvati ka paura jishma aag ki tarah jalne laga .aur vo aag dhire dhire itna jada hoga ki rupvati ki chhamata se bahar hone laga aur vo bhi tadapne lagi aur jor jor se cheekhne lagai aur idar udhar bahagne lagai .lekin uska dard kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha aur nahi hi aag ki lapte .jab rupvati ye sab kuchh sambhal nahi paee .to vo vahee cheekhte cheekhate aur dard me tadapte huve behos ho jati hai.

Aur vahee dusri taraf rupvati k jane k baad king tanishk rupvati ka kamare me aate hai.unko pata chalta hai vo is samay kahi bahar gaee hai.jisase tanishk ko kuchh sanka hota hai.itni raat me aakhir uski bahan kaha gaee hogi.jab vo aaye gi tab puchh lunga apne maan me tanishk aisa soch kar vaha se apne kamare me vapas chala jata hai.

Dead sea-(maaya bi jungle )

Maine-kafi der sochne k baad maine apni search magic ka pani k bhul bhulaiya ko hal karne k liye istamaal kar diya .aur kuchh hi der me mujhko asli rasta pata chal gaya aur tha no 3 rasta.jaise ki maine pahale hi bataya tha vaha par kul 7 pani k raste bane the aur jisme se mujhko ek ko chunna tha aur vo maine chuna tha teesara rasta.aur 3 (teesara) rasta par jane k liye maine apne kadam jaise rakha vaise hi sabhi pani ki divare apne aap tutna suru ho gaee.isliye maine apni puri raftaar se vaha se aage nikal gaya.aur pahoch gaya 7 gate k saamane .aur vahee jase hi maine ne pani ki bhul bhulaiya ko par kiya pure pani ka bhul bhulaiya bhaf ban k hawa me gayab ho gaya.tabhi

Maine-apne maan me soch agar kuchh samay main agar vaha aur rahta to sayab main bhi bhaf me badal jata.phir maine vo sabhi cheejo k bare me sochna band kar diya aur pahale gate k pass pahoch gaya.sabhi gate kale rang k the .q ki main shadow k rup me tha is liye main sab kuchh bahot aasaanee se dekh pa raha tha .aur vahee mere jagah agar koee aur hota ya koee sadharn jadugar ya insaan hota saayad hi unko khuchh dikhta.aur

Main-ab gate 1 k bilkul saamane khada tha.tabhi mujhko ek aavaaj sunaee deta hai…..
to be continued..........
 

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Are sala ek ek khatam to dusri kahani shuru ho jati hai... Isme bhi wo unknown shadow help hi kar raha hai karma ki mujhe to lagta hai... Saat bhul bhulaiya saat gate saat sawal... Sabko kiya paar to milegi book inaam... Or idhar ye chudail roopvati to amar hone ki soch rahi hai... To kya ise koi nhi maar payega... Ye to gadbad ho jayegi.... Khair dekjte hain aage kya hota hai... Waiting
 
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