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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Abbasi

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Very nice update .........
keep it up bro .........
ab Rupavati ka raaz bhi dhere dhere khul raha hai
aur Karma ko kon si nayi shakti milti hai ???

Waiting for next update .........
 
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Aaaiii sala to iss bhutni ne bhi spirit king ko kabu kiya hua hai... Hayi sabas.... To sala sab ye baba ka kiya dhara hai usko chudail bnane me.... Very good... Aisa janwar maine to nhi suna bhai... Tum hi bta dena hihihihi.... Waiting
 
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Very nice update .........
keep it up bro .........
ab Rupavati ka raaz bhi dhere dhere khul raha hai
aur Karma ko kon si nayi shakti milti hai ???

Waiting for next update .........
thank you so much bhai.keep supporting.next update thodi der me bhai.karma ko kaun si shakti milgi ye to aap ko mere next update me pata chal jaya ga.aur ab dhire dhire rupvati ka razz bhi khule ga.
 

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Aaaiii sala to iss bhutni ne bhi spirit king ko kabu kiya hua hai... Hayi sabas.... To sala sab ye baba ka kiya dhara hai usko chudail bnane me.... Very good... Aisa janwar maine to nhi suna bhai... Tum hi bta dena hihihihi.... Waiting
thank you so much bhai.keep supporting.next update thodi der me.bhai koee apne naseeb se bhag nahi sakta hai aur rupvati k sath bhi vahi huva galti se hi lekin usne rakt pishaach ko apna gulaam bana hi liya.aur vo kaun sa janavar hai vo mere next update me pata chal jaye ga bhai.
 
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Bhai dark stone wala update bhi de dena 2din pahle kaha tha
thank you so much bhai yaad dilane k liye aur sath hi mujhe bahit khusi huva aap ko yaha dekh kar. i m very gald brother.kal uska update dunga main abhi main usko likh raha hu.keep supporting.next update thodi der me.
 
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UPDATE-49

Recap –

Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise rupvati ko nark lok ki aag ki shakti milti hai lekin rupvati us shakti ko jhel nahi pati hai aur vahee behos ho jati hai.aur hum logo ne rupvati k gupt thikana jis kabristaan k niche bana huva hai uske bare ne bhi thoda bahot jaan gaye hai .aur vahee dusri taraf karma apne pahale gate k pass pahoch gaya hai.
Ab aage…..


Main-is samay 7 gate k saamane khada tha .aur maine apne pahale gate ko chun liya tha aur uske taraf badhne laga tabhi mujhe pahale gate se ek aavaaj sunaee deta hai.

Aavaaj-anadar jane se pahale tume mere ek prashan ka javab dena hoga aur haa meri ek baat yaad rakhan jo bhi shakti tum istamaal karo ge apne manzil tak pahochne k liye. dubara vo shaktiya tum istamaal nahi kar sakte ho. lekin jab tum manzil tak pahoch jaoge to tumko ek naee shakti miljaye ga.aur ye raha mere prashan.

Batao aisa kaun sa jaanvar hai jo kabhi bhi apni palake nahi jhapkata hai na hi din me aur na hi raat aur na hi sote samay ?.

Main-saap (snake).mere itna bolte hi gate apne app khul gaya.aur main jaldise us gate me chala gaya.q ki mere pass samay bohot kam tha aur chunavtiya bhot jada thi.aur jaise hi maine us gate ko paar kiya main ek bahot hi khubsurat gaon me pahoch gaya.us gaon ko dekh k aisa lag raha tha. jaise khud kudrat meharbaan hai.q ki puara ka pura gaon haraiyali se bhara huva tha. kheto ki fasal ko dekh k lag raha tha yaha k log bhot mehanati hai q ki fasle itne achchhi dikh rahi thi. ki maine aaj se pahale itni achchhi kheti apne pure jeevan me nahi dekha tha.kul mila kar agar main kahu to vo gaon ek adarsh gaon mujhe lag raha tha.pure gaon me hariyali ka hona sundar sundar bag bageeche aur sabhi ka chhote lekin bahot hi khubsurat ghar aur pura gaon ekdum swachh tha.agar koee bhi is samay main jis gaon me main khada hu agar dekh leta to uska yaha se jane ka maan hi nahi karta. jaise is samay mera kar raha tha.mera dil to kar raha tha ki main bhi isi gaon me bus jau.lekin main aisa kar nahi sakta tha. q ki agar main yaha rah jata to meri duniya ko dungeon se main kaise bacha pata.isliya maine vaha rahna ka khayaal apne dil se nikal kar gaon k andar jane laga aur main is samay apne shadow k roop me tha.aur isliye

Main-kuchh der gaon me yaha vaha dekhne laga taki koee mujhe mil sake aur main jaan saku ki ye kaun sa gaon hai .tabhi mujhe meri manzil tak pahochna ka kuchh rasta pata chale ga.abhi main gaon me ghum hi raha tha tabhi mere kano me kuchh aurato ki rone ki aavaaj sunaee dene lagai aur main turant us aavaaj ki taraf badhne laga .aur maine jab us aavaaj ka pichha kiya to kya dekhta hu .gaon k bicho bich ek bahot bada sabha chal raha hai aur pura gaon vaha majud hai.sabhi dekhne me insaan hi lag rahe the aur un sabhi ki posakh both hi achchhi thi kisi ko dekh k nahi lag raha tha ki koee is gaon me garib hoga.sabhi sampanan lag rahe the.ab ye sab kuchh dekh kar mere maan me ye sawal aane laga ki sabhi jab dekhne se sampanan lag rahe hai to phir ye aurate ro (cry) q rahi hai. aakhir mazra kya hai.aur main bhi vahee door khada ho kar sab kuchh dekhne laga.taki main jaan saku aakhir us sabha me chal kya raha hai.

{dosto ab gaon k sabha k bare me batane vala hu .aur 2-3 character hi hai ab aage}

Gaon ka mukhiya-dekho bahan ye to apne gaon (samridhi) ki parampara hai.phir rone ka kya fayda hai.hum sabhi ne bhi apne bachho ki kurbani di hai.tabhi ye gaon sabhi sukh suvida se bhara hai.aur hum kar bhi to kuchh nahi sakte hai jo parampara sadiyo se chala aa raha hai. use mukh to nahi pher sakte hai na.nahi to tum ko to pata hai us kaale naag se hame kaun bachega paura ka pura gaon ek hi baar me vo kabristaan me badal dega.ab tum hi bato kya tum yahi chahati ho ki tumhari beti k liye pure gaon ko khatam ho jaye.

Aurat-main kaise karu apne beti ko apne aap se alag ye jante huve bhi ki aaj k baad main usko kabhi bhi nahi dekh paungi.

Aurat ki beti-maa main jaungi aap ab rona band kar do .aap meri liye pure gaon ko sankat me dal rahi hai.aur sirf maine hi to aaj nahi ja rahi mujse pahale bhi na jane kitni mao ne apne beti ko kurbaan kiya hai.tabhi

Pura gaon-sabhi ek sath ha tumhari beti bulkul sahi kah rahi hai.aur to aur yahee yaha ka niyam hai jab pahali beti jisko paida hogi us k 12 saal hote hi hame us kaale naag k jungle ne chodna hoga.

Phir sabhi k kuchh der tak samjhane k baad vo aurat vahee baith k roti rahti hai aur uski beti kuchh logo k sath apni maa ko aakhri baar gale mil kar un logo k sath apni aankhe nam kar kar vaha se chalai jati hai.aur uski maa vahee bathe huvi roti rahti hai.aur

Main-vahee dur khada hokar sab kuchh dekh aur sun raha tha lekin koee bhi mujko dekh nahi pa raha tha.ab main sab kuchh achchhe se samajh gaya tha .jaise ki is gaon ka naam samrithi hai.is gaon par ek kaale naag k raaz hai aur vo har aurat ki pahali santaan agar beti hogi to us beti k 12 sal hone k baad us kaale naag k jungle chhod k aana hoga.ye sab kuchh dekh k aur sun k main samajh gaya ki ho na ho mere mazil us kaale naag k jungle me hoga aur mujhe us bachhi ko bacha kar is gaon me vapas lana hoga.itna sab kuchh sochne k baad main bhi us kaale naag k jungle k pass jane laga .aur vahee dusri taraf gaon valo ne us ladki ko ek jungle k pass chod diya aur vaha se bhag gaye.

Maine-jab us jungle ko dekh to mujhe vo jungle ek dum samanya jungle ki tarah hi dikh raha tha.aur vo ladki sabha me to sabhi k saamane to bahot himmat juta k bol rahi thi. lekin vo us jungle k andar jane se dar rahi thi aur vahee bahar kahade ho kar thar thar kaamp rahi thi.tabhi dekhte hi dekhte pura ka pura jungle kala hone laga jisko dekh k aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne pure jungle ko shaap de diya ho aur pura ka pura jaungle uski har ek cheeg kaali ho gaee thi patte se le kar tane tak sab kuchh aur to aur vaha ki jameen bhi kali pad gaee thi. Ye sab kuchh dekh kar main to achambhit ho gaya tha .lekin

Ladki-ne jaise jungle ko kaale hote huve dekha to vo jor jor se rone lagi.tabhi kisine eka ek us ladki ko ghatista huva andar lekar chala gaya .aur

Main-ne to sirf us ladki ki cheekh suna paya tha. aur usko kisne kaale jungle k andar ghasit kar le gaya main bhi nahi dekh paya q ki sabh kuchh itna jaldi huva tha. ki main kuchh samajh hi nahi paya .main bhi us kaale jungle k andar jane laga tabhi.

Seona-maalik ho na ho isi jungle k andar mere adhure bhag ka ek tukda hai.main apni shaktiyo ko maisus kar sakti hu.

Maine-jab seon ki baat suna to muje pakka ho gaya.mera manzil isi jungle k andar hai.aur main bhi kaale jungle k andar chala gaya.lekin mujko us kale jungle k andar kuchh bhi nahi dikh raha tha.isliye maine vahee ruk gaya aur sochne lagaki ab aage kasie jau q ki main is samay shadow rup me hu phir bhi mujko kuchh nahi dikh raha hai.tabhi mujko mere maan me phir se seona ki aavaaj sunaee deti hai.

Seona-maalik aap persaan mat ho main aap ko vaha tak pahochane me madat karti hu q ki main apni shakti ko maisus kar rahi hu aur vo kis disa se aa rahi hai.aur main jaise aap ko kahu aap vaise chalte rahna.itna bol kar seona shaant ho jati hai.

Main-theek hai seona chalo.phir jaise jaise seona mujhe bata rahi thi main vaise vaise chalet ja raha tha aur kuchh hi samay me paoch gaya kaale naag k pass.lekin main usko dekh nahi pa raha tha.aur abhi bhi mujh ko kuchh naahi dikh raha tha.mujhe is baat ka pata tab chala ki main pahoch aaya hu q ki mujhe us ladki ki rone ki aavaaj mere kano me aa rahi thi .lekin main usko bhi nahi dekh pa raha tha.mujhe sirf uski rone ki aavaaj hi sunaee de raha tha.tabhi.

Kaala naag-kaun hai tu aur yaha tak pahucha kasie.ab aa gaya hai to yaha se mare bina jaye ga nahi to.

Main-vo to samay hi bataye ga.vaise kaala naag maine tere bare me bhot sun hai .kya tum marne vale ki aakhri ichchha puri nahi karo ge.tabhi

Kaala naag-jab tu marne hi vala hai to aakhri ichchha purikar k kare ga kya.itna bol kar jor jor se hasne lagta hai.phir kuchh der hasne k baad chal bol teri aakhri ichchha kya hai.

Main-mujhe jaana hai ki tum is ladki k sath kya karo ge.bus itna hi.

Kaala naag-main is k sath tab tak sambog karunga jab tak mujhe koee dusri ladki nahi mil jati hai.dusri milte hi main isko khaa lunga.itna bol kar phir se hasne lagta hai.aur vahee

Ladki-kaale naag ki bate sun kar aur jada jor se rone lagti hai.aur

Main-kaale naag ki bato ko sun kar aur jada gussa hone lagta hu.aur apne maan me sochne lagta hu. main apne kaun si shakti us kaale naag k khilaff istamaal karu ki vo mara jaye .aur kuchh der sochne k baad maine apne bure karma ko azaad karne ka socha .

{dosto aap sabhi ne ek dum sahi suna bure karma ko azaad karne ka.dosto aap sabhi ko yaad hi hoga jab main dead sea k pass aane vala thi tab main dhyaan me baitha tha aur tabhi mujhe apne ek aur shakti ka pata chala jiski miadat se main apni kisi bhi sakti ko bandh sakta hai.aur us shakti ka istamaal maine apne bure karma par kiya tha. taki vo mujh par havi na ho.lekin main usko azaad karne vala hu q ki jaise hi main usko azaad karunga mere kali shaktiya bhi azzad ho jayenge aur main aur bhi jada takatvar ho jaunga white unicoron ki khoon pine k vaja se.jo meri raat me kaalee shakti ko aur badha dega.}

Main-apne maan me yahi sahi mauka hai abhi apne bure karma ka istamaal kar leta hu. q ki jab main usko istamaal kar lunga vo subha tak mujhpar havi nahi ho paye ga .yaha k niyam k anusaar.itna sochne ka mere chehare par ek smile aa jata hai. Aur main bina samay gavaye apne bure karma ki shakti ko azzad kar deta hu .phir kya dekte hi dekte mere aankhe ek dum se laal ho jati .jaha maine pahale kuchh bhi nahi dekh pa raha tha. ab main sab kuchh ek dum achchhe se dekh pa raha tha .tabhi

Aavaaj-bhai ye hum log kaha hai.

Main-apne aavaaj se bhai…main sab kuchh baad me bata hu sab se pahale is kaale naag ka kaam taman kar.maine abhi itna bola hi tha ki .us kale naag me mujh par hamla kar diya.

Kaala naag-mujh par lagataar ek k baad ek hamla apne jaher ka karte ja raha lekin uska ek bhi hamla mere kuchh bhi nahi kar pa raha tha .aur

Main-ab main jor jor se hasne lagta hu .main kaaliye naag puri raat aise hi mere sath khele ga ki. kuchh dum bhi hai tujh me.itna bol kar maine apne black shadow sword apne hath me le kar us k tarf jane laga.

Kaala naag-meri baat sun kar ek dum guse se apne visaal munh khool kar mere taraf aane lagta hai.aur

Main-ye dekh kar maine bhi apni rafter badha diya aur us kaale naag ka sar uske shareer se alag kar diya aur jab tak vo kuchh samjh pata uska kaam tamaan ho gaya tha.phir vo kaala naag dekhte hi dekhte ek panne me badal gaya aur vo panna mujhme sama gaya.aur mujhe us kaale naag ki shakti mil gaee.phir kya mera bura karma ek baar phir se mere andar kaid ho gaya aur main bahot khus ho gaya q ki maine ek teer se 2 shikaar kiya tha.ab mujhe kisi bhi baat ka tention nahi tha.phir dhire dhire pura jaungle hara hone laga aur mujhe vo ladki bhi dikh gaee.

Main-jaise hi uske tarf badne laga aur aur jada darne lagi aur pichhe haten lagi .lekin maine bhi bina kuchh bole uko jaldi se lekar jungle se bahar kar diya.aur jaise hi maine us ladki ko jungle se bahar kiya.vo ladki ek dum khus ho gaee aur khus hokar apne ghar jane lagi.uske jate hai .main bhi vaha se gayab ho kar ek baar phir se maaya bi jungle k anadr pahoch gaya aur ab mere saamane ek bar phir se ek naya bhul bulaiya aa gaya.to be continued…
 

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Very nice update bro ....
Karma ne kia idea lagaya hai ab jb tk wo jb tk book k parts hasil nahi kr leta tb tk bura Karma qaid rahe ga .......
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Je baat... Kya saap apni ankhe band nhi karta... Aisa hota hai kya... Waise bahut badhiya update tha... Akhir hai to kali shakti ka hissa n wo knowledge book... To jaha bhi rahega burai hi karega... Jaise ki yaha... Insaan ho khana.... Jab puri ho jayegi to bhi kaha tha insaan khayegi... Karma bure shadow se agar chhutkara paa jata hai to ias book ke chakkar me fanse ga... Kykoi shadow bhi insaan mar ke khata hai or book bhi khayehi.. Dekhte hain kya hota hai... Waiting
 
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