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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Kahe bhai log ye story pasand nhi aati kya.... Itna mehnat karke bhai isko likhte hain..... Comment karo dosto.... Agar koi iss story ko padhta hai to please everyone comment bhi kar diya karo.... Fantasy story hai action se bharpur or kya mangta hai tumko.... Comment karo yaar..... Request hai
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Recap-

Pichale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma seona k adhure bhag k pahale panne ko hasil karta hai .
Ab aage……….


Maine- jaise hi seona k adhure bhag k pahale tukda hashil kiya.aur main ek baar phir se maaya bi jungle k andar pahoch gaya aur mere saamane ek baar phir se ek naya bhul bulaiya turant aa gaya.is baar ka bhul bhulaiya aag se bana huva tha. aur uske andar jane k liye mujhe 6 raste bane huve the.aur main us aag k bhul bhulaiya se kafi door kahda tha. phir bhi mujho uske garmi ka aisas ho raha tha.jisase mujhe ye to pata chala gaya ki main is aag ki bhul bhulaiya ko shadow k rup me to nahi paar kar sakta hu.aur use badi musibaat ki baat mere saamane is samay ye hai ki main 6 rasto me se kaun se raste ko chunu aur kaun sa rasta mujhe meri manzil tak le ja sakta hai .q ki is baar main apni search magic ka istamaal bhi nahi kar sakta tha. q ki vo to maine apni pahale bhul bhulaiya me kar liya tha.isliye main vahee door kahada hokar sochne laga kaise paar karu.

Main-abhi is bhul bhulaiya k bare me soch raha tha ki tabhi maine maisus kiya ki us aag ki bhul bhulaiya ki aag ki lapte aur uski garmi pahale se kaee guna adhik badh gaee hai.aur jaise hi mere nazar us bhul bhulaiya par gaya to main ek dum se chok gaya q ki kuchh der pahle jaha bhul bhulaiya ka rasta ek dum achchhe se dikaee de raha tha. ab vaha mujhko sirf aag k alava kuchh bhi nahi dikh raha tha.aur main aag ki bhul bhulaiya ki aise halat ko dekhate sab kuchh samajh gaya tha .ki ye sab q ho raha hai.Q ki maine jinta jada sochne me apna samay barbaad karunga utna hi mera musibat badh jaye ga. Ab baat sirf itna hi nahi tha mujhpar to har taraf se musibat aa raha tha.aur ek to dhire dhire mere samay nast hote ja raha dusra vo aag ki lapte itna ho gaya tha ki jungle me aag lagna sura ho gaga tha aur vo aag bhi mere taraf badhte aa raha tha aur main pichhe hate ja raha aur pichhe hatna hi mujhe us samay samjhdari laga.aur jab tak ki mujhe koee upay nahi mail jata mujhe us samay yahee achchha lag raha tha pichhe hatna.tabhi mujhe kuchh apne andar maisus huva.aur usi k sath mujhe ek behatareen upay bhi mil gaya is aag ki bhul bhulaiya se nikalne ka.aur vahe

Mujhe- apne andar bahot uthal puthal maisus ho raha tha.jaise jaise aag ki bhul bulaiya apni aag ki garmi badha raha tha .vaise vaise hi mere andar ki uthal puthal badhte hi ja rahi thi.aisa mere sath q ho raha tha pahale to mujhko samajh me nahi aaya lekin jab maine aap ko shaant kiya. jab mujhe pata chala ki ye uthal puthal meri andar ki aatmao ki hai.mere andar ki atmaye itna uthal puthal isliye macha rahi thi q ki aag ki bhul bhulaiya ki garmi mujhe jhulsa rahi thi aur uska asar mere andar to dikhna hi tha.lekin jo kuchh bhi mere sath huva vo achchha hi huva .mere aatmao ki uthal puthal ki vaje se hi mujhko aag ki bhul bhulaiya se nikalne ka rasta mil gaya.isliye maine bina samay gavaye apni anadar ki kuchh aatmao ko apne andar se bahar bulaya aur un aatmao ko aag ki bhul bhulaiya ko sahi rasta khojane ko bhej diya .aur main bhi apna roop shadow se fire shadow me badal liye.

{dosto ab aap sabhi k maan me kuchh saval aaye honge jaise ki mere andar ki aatmaye …dosto ye vahee aatmaye hai jo maine teharma k khel pratiyogita me bhag lene k baad shikaar kiya tha.aur aag ki bhul bhulaiya me un sabhi ki upyog kar raha hu. Dusra ye fire shadow naya kaha se aa gaya .aap logo ko yaad hi hoga jab main no return land me tha tabhi mujhe ortharos ko harane k samay main puri tarah javala mukhi ki aag me jal raha tha .abhi maine vahee power use kiya hai .}

Main-apne aap ko fire shadow me badal liya q ki is aag ki bhul bhulaiya se aur uski garmi ko bardast karmne me aur vaha se bahar nikalne me no return land ki power ki madat kar sakta hai.ab main puri tarah javla mukhi ki tarah jalne laga .is samay drishya aisa tha ki jaise javala mukhi aur aag ka pradarshan chal raha ho .tabhi mere bheje huve aatma vapas aa gai.aur mujhme sama gaee.un sabhi k smate hi mujhe ye pata chal gayaki mujhe kun se raste se is aag ki bhul bhulaiya se nikalna hai .vo rasta tha 4 (chautha).phir maine bhi bina samay gavaye turant us raste k taraf chal pada .jaise hi maine 4 raste pe badhna suru kiya uski agni ka taap aur badhte ja raha tha .vo to achchha huva ki mere pass no return land ki javla mukhi ki shakti thi .nahi to main to pakka is aag ki bhul bhulaiya me hi jhulas hi jata.lekin maine turnt bhul bhulaiya se nikal gaya q ki uski aag mujhe ek baar phir se maisus hone laga tha. isliye apni gati badha kar aag ki bhul bhulaiya se bahar aa gaya.mere bahar aate hi ek vispot k sath pura aag ka bhul bhulaiya gayab hoga .aur pura vatavaran phir se pahale jaisa ho gaya .jaise ki kuchh huva hi nahi ho.phir maine bhi us bare me jada nahi sochte huve aage badh gaya jaha mere saamane 7 gate the aur jis gate ko maine paar kiya tha ab uka rang kale se safed ho gaya tha.aur main 2 gate ka pass khade aur main ab apne shadow roop me phir se aa gaya tha.tabhi ek baar phir se 2 gate se mujhe ek aavaaj sunaee dene laga.

Aavaaj-anadar jane se pahale tume mere ek prashan ka javab dena hoga aur haa yaad rakhan jo bhi shakti tum is istamaal karo ge apne manzil tak pahochne k liye dubara vo shaktiya tum istmaal nahi kar sakte ho lekin jab tum manzil tak pahoch jaoge to tumko ek naee shakti miljaye ga.aur ye raha mere prashan.

Ut (camel) jaisi baithak hiran jaise chal lekin meri shareer par ek bhi baal nahi hai bahto main kaya hu.

Aavaaj –k itana bolne k baad gate se aavaaj aana band ho gaya.

Main-gate 2 ki prashna k bare me sochne laga vahi khada ho kar.

{dosto apne hero ko thoda sochna ka time de dete hai aur ab chalet hai melbolina ne… }


Melbolina-
Melbolina –me jaha saam tak sabhi raniya karma k vasps aane ki taiyari kar rahi thi aur khus thi.tabhi un sabhi k saamane eka ek husna aa jati.jisko dekh k sabhi bahot khus ho jate hai aur apne maan me sochne lagte hai ki ho na karma bhi abhi aa jayenge .tabhi

Kristine-husna tum log to bahot jaldi aa gaye.aur maharaaj kaha hai kahi dikhaee nahi de rahe hai.tabhi

Husna-mahaarani isiliye to main yaha jaldi aaee hu .maalik ne apna ek sandesh bheja hai aap sabhi k liye.


Sabhi raniya-husna ki aise bate sun sakar sabhi uske aur dekhne lagti hai aur apna maan me sochne lagti hai ki aakhir kya sandesh hai mahaaraaj ka.

Husna-maalik ne kaha hai ki unko raajya ka kuchh jaruri kaam hai. teharma k raaja se is liye vo aaj nahi aa sakte hai .vo kal dopahar me yaha aa jayenge.itna bolte hi husna vo se gayab ho jati hai.


Sabhi raniyo-ne jab ye baat husna se suna to unka dil hi baith gaya .jiska itna intazaar kar rahe hai vo to aane vala hi nahi hai aaj .isliye sabhi ek ek kar k sabhi apne kamare me chale jati.aur vahi husna bhi gayab hokar apne kamare me chali jati hai.aur

Husna-apne maan me chalo achchha huva kisi se jada mujhse kuchh puchha nahi nahi to mera jhoot pakada jata .phir to maalik aur raniyo dono ka gussa ka kaher mujhpaar girta.aur vahee

Kristine-apne kamare me aate hi kisi soch me dub jati hai.aur sochne lagti hai ki aakhir kya baat hai .jo husna ko jhut bolna pada .jarur koee bahot badi baat hai jo hum sabhi se chhupaya ja raha hai.in 2-3 dino me jarur kuchh to bahot kuchh bura huva hai .kya mujhe abhi husna se puchhana cha hiye ki nahi.ya mujhe kal dopahar tak intazaar karna cha hiye.kya karu main kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha .itna sochte sochte Kristine so jati.

{doto aap sabhi k maan me bhi yahi chal raha haina Kristine ne husna ka jhut kaise pakad liya .kristine k pass power hai aur vo power hai. vo kisi ki maan ki bate aur bavnao ko jaan sakti ho.usme uski madat uski blue rang ki aankhe karti hai. }

Husna ki bate sun kar sabhi raniya thoda naraaz ho jati hai apne kamare me bine khane kahye se sabhi so jati .

Teharama-

Pichhale flashback me aap sabhi ne kaala kabristaan k bare me thoda bahot jaan gaye honge .q kaala kabristaan se log darne lage aur vaha jana band q kar diya .ab aage..

Flashback start once again-

Rupvati-ne rakt pishaach ko kaise rokna hai uska upay dhund liya tha.apne guru ki madat se.jiska iska istamaal vo amaavas k din karne vali thi.q ki purnima aur amaavas k din kaalee shatiyo k maalik ki shakti unke gulamo se jada rahti aur unke gulamo ki shakti apne maalik se bahot kaam hoti hai.ye baat rupvati ko uske guru ne sapne me bataee thi aur ek spell bhi bata di thi jisase rakt pishaach kuchh sala tak kaid ho jaye ga aur tab tak rupvapti ko apni shaktiyo ko badhana ka samay mil jaye ga.

Rupvati-ne raat hote hi rakt pishaach ko apne saamane bulaya aur kaala kabristaan me lejane ka hukum diya .aur ek kabristaan k nische gupt jagah bane ko kaha .

Rakt pishaach-bhi bina saval kiya apni maalkin k adesh ka palan kar raha tha aur is baat se bekhabar tha ki aaj uska jeevan badal jaye ga.tabhi

Rupvati-achchha kaam kiya tumne .rakt pishachh ek havan kund ka intazaam karo mujhe ek puja karni hai jisase me meri aur tumhari hun dono ki shaktiya aur badh jayengi.

Rakt pishaach-rupvati ki baat sun kar bhoot khus ho jata hai.aur apni maan me sochta hai ki.ek baar meri shaktiya badh jaye phir main bata hu.itna soch kar vo havan kud rupvati k saamane la deta hai.aur vahee

Rupvati-apne maan me isko bahot ghamand ho gaya hai na .aaj iski main sari akad khatam kar dungi.itna bol kar vo havan kund k pass baith jati hai aur apne maan me ek spell padhti hai aur vahee spell rakt pishaach ko doharane ko kahati .phir kya jaise hi rakt pishaach ne vo spell padha ki vo ek kaale gulab me badal jata hai.aur us kaale gulab ko le kar rupati apne gupt thikane se bahar aa jati hai.aur us kabristaan k bahar laga deti hai .aur jane se pahali us kaale gulab ko dekh kar bolti hai .rakt pishaach ab tum is kaid se kabhi bhi bahar nahi aa paooge aur nahi hi is kabristaan se bahar ja pao ge. sirf amaavas or purnima ko hi tum apni vastavik rup me kuchh palo k liye aa pao ge lekin is kaale kabristaan se nahi nikal paooge. Tabhi.

Rakt pishaach-maalkin mujhe mafi de aaj ke baad aisa kuchh nahi karunga jisase aap ko koee pareshani ho mujhe yaha se mukt kar do. aap jo kaho gi main vaise hi karaung.

Rupvati-ab aisa kuchh bhi nahi ho saktka hai.ha lekin jo tumne kiya hai uski saja to tumko mile ga hi.aaj se tumko yahi rah kar mere gupt thikane ki raksha karna hai.agar tum ye kaam apni imandari se kiya to main tumhe 3-4 saal (years) me mukt karne ka sochongi.aur tumne phir se koee aise vaise harkat kiya to pura jeeven yahi beet jaye ga tumhara kid me.itna bol kar rupvati vaha se chali jati hai.aur apne maan me sochti hai ki. rakt pishaach main tumko cha kar bhi nahi nikal sakti hu.q ki use liye mujhe bhot jada taktavaar banana hoga aur kaalee duniya ki teen sabse badi takato ko hasil karna ho ga aur to aur mujhe vo sonehare kitaab ko bhi hasil karna hoga.ye sab kuchh sochne k baad rupvati vapas mahal chali jati.aur dhire dhire apne guru ki madat se rupvati bahot si saktiyo ko hashil kar leti aur to aur usne kaalee duniya ki do sabse badi shakti ko hasil kar liya hai aaj.

{dosto ye kaala gulab vahi hai jab karna ne usko tood kar kabar pe rakha tha tabhi ja k usko rupvati k gupt thikane ka raste andar jane ko milta hai.vo kaala gulab aur koee nahi balik rupvati ka rakt pishaach hi hai.}

Flash back end.

Present-

Rupvati-ab apne besohi se utne lagi thi aur uska pura shareer nark lok ki aag se abhi bhi jal raha tha lekin ab usko pahale jaise takleef nahi ho raha tha.phir dhire dhire sare aag rupvati k shareer me sama jata hai.aur rupvati apne maan me bolti hai aaj mujhe kaalee duniya ki dusri shakti bhi mil gaee hai .ab bus ek aur sakti ko mujko hasil karna hi uske baad is puri duniya me mujhko koee nahi maar paye ga aur nahi hi hara paye ga.itna bol kar vaha se gayab hokar apne kamare me chali jati hai sone k liye.

Soul world(Hades wold)
Ha dosto aap sabhi ne bilkul sahi suna hai.soul world jaha ka maalik lord hades hai vaha par is samay kisi visay par bahot ghambhir charcha chal raha hai.jaha hades apne Cerberus (ek kutte ki prajati hai jiske 3 munh hote hai).sath baithe the .jaha uske 2 bate aur 1 beti thi bhi thi.

Hades- apne bate aur beti se bahot gusse me bolta hai ye sab kuchh ho kya raha hai jo soul yaha honi cha hiye thi .vo sabhi kaha hai abhi tak yaha aaee q nahi.


Hades k 3 no bachche-lord hades se humne soul collector ko is bare pata lagne ko kah diya hai .jo souls yaha honi cha hiye thi vo abhi tak hame soul hunter ne q nahi laya.aap befikar rahiye.hum sabhi jaldi pata laga lenge.tabhi


Hades-yahee tum sab k liye achchha hoga.itna bol kar vo vaha se gayab ho jata hai aur vahee

Hades k 3 no bachche-soul collector se jitna jaldi ho sake pata lagao 1thousand soul ki baat hi .itna bol kar vo teeno bhi vaha se chale jate hai .

Soul collector-soul hunter se bolta hai mujhe kisi bhi halat me vo sabhi soul yaha cha hiye.aur pata lagao kisne vo soul chori ki hai.soul collector ki baat sun kar soul hunter pata lagane k liye vaha se nikal jate hai….to be continued
 

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yaar ye paheli to hum school time padhi hai lekin yaad ko ni aa rahi bhaya.... Waise update mast Jabarzast hai majedar... Atmaye to karma bhi kha raha or roopvati bhi.... To hedes kisko pakdega... Kaise hoga iska ant... Waiting bro
 
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Nice update brother dekhte hai
Abb karna ko kon cc nai takat milegi
Orr abb toh Hades(god of underworld) bhi hero ke piche hai
Abb karna reapers or hunters de bachne ke liye kya scheme Or takat ka use krega
Or soana kab tak complete hogi
Pegasus ka role kab pta chlega
Rupwati ko karna kaise harayega
ya fir inke bich pyar hoga jo ki impossible hai
Bar dono ke ander ke ander black power hai
Karma ko vo milli hai or Rupwati ne usse bali de kar paya hai
Kyoki black power ek dusre ko attract kar rhi hai
Par aapas mai do baadi taakatayie dushman bhi ho sakti hai

Nice update
Waiting for next
 
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