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Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga jaise hi blue shadow ko dark ridersss k aane ka khabar milta hai.vaise hi blue shadow gayab ho k sabse pahale selstriya kingdom me pahoch jati hai.jaha uska saamana sab se pahale dark rider, phir dark riders ki sena se hota hai .vo sabhi kuchh kar pate usase pahale hi blue shadow apni shaktiyo k madadt se sare dungeons k portal ko phir se band kar deti hai aur ant me jiase hi alfan k dungeon k portal ko band kar k jane vali hoti hai blue shadow tabhi dark riders ki queen pragat ho jati hai vaha.
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Dark ridersss ki Queen- jaise hi blue shadow k protection vale kavach k jagah me pragat hoti hai.vaise hi ek baar phir se aasmaan me kala andhakaar chhane lagta hai.lekin is baar sirf alfan me hi nahi balki melbolina k aasmaan bhi kale padne lage the.aur dekhte hi dekhte pura ka pura melboalfan kingdom ghane kale andhere me khone lagta hai.aur
Blue shadow- Ye sabhi ghatna itna jaldi ghata hai ki blue shadow to bus dekhti rahti hai.aur huva bhi to asisa hi tha.blue shadow ne apni shaktiyo ki madat se aakhree dungeon k portal ko bhi band kar deti hai apni khaas shaktiyo ki madat se.jiske vaja se dark rider aur uski sena ko apni haar maan k vapasa apni duniya me jane pe majaboor hona padta hai.aur jaise hi vo sabhi apni duniya me vapas chale jate hai.vaise hi dark riders ki queen blue shadow k sab se takatvar protection vale spell k kavach me pragat ho jati.
Jiski umeed blue shadow ko to bilkul bhi nahi thi.asia kuchh so sakta hai.aur dark riders ki queen k aate hi palak jhakte hi pura melboalfan kingdom me andhkaar chhane lagta hai.aur ye sari ghatna blue shadow ek darshak ban k dekh rahi thi us samay.tabhi
Dark ridersss ki Queen- apne maan me khuchh padhti aur asmaan k taraf dekhti hai.aur uski k sath kale aasmaan me bahot joor joor se bijaliya takrane ki aavaaj goojne lagta hai pure melboalfan kingdom me.tabhi queen ka ghoda apne aage k dono pair jameen pe patak deta hai.aur uska pair jaise hi jameen ko chhuta hai .pure melboalfan kingdom me jaise bhukam sa aa jata hai.aur uski k sath blue shadow k protection spell vala kavach bhi tut jata hai.aur protection spell vale kavach k tutate hi dark riders ki queen blue shadow k ek samane aa k khadi ho jati hai.lekin vo dekhne se bahot gusse me lag rahi thi.us k pure shareer se gusse k mare laal lava nikalte huve dikh raha tha.aur ye kahana bhi galat nahi hoga ki agar koee aisa bhyaank roop k darshaan kar le to. dekhne matra se hi uska raam naam satya ho jaye ga.aur itna hi nahi jaise dark riders ki queen thi vaise hi uska humsafar I mean uksa ghoda bhi is samay vaise hi dikh raha tha aur dono is samay kuchh is tarah k dikh rahe the.blue shadow k samane.aur vahee
Blue shadow-bhi apne samane achanak se dark riders ki queen ko dekh k ek bar to vo bhi dar jati hai .lekin turant apne aap ko sambhaal bhi leti hai.aur vahee dusri taraf raajsabha me to jaise bhagdar mach gaya ho bhukam k jhatke k maisus hote hi. Aur lagbha yahee dar aur Ashanti ka mahol to pure melboalfan me faila huva tha
Dosto chalo ek chakar melboafan kingdom ka bhi laga lete hai ki vaha kya ho raha hai.
Melboalfan-k pure raajya me is samay sabhi logo k man me dar ,bhay aur Ashanti ne gher rakha huva tha.aur ye sab kuchh itna jaldi huva tha ki kisi ko kuchh bhi samajh me nahi aaya ki akhir ho kya raha hai ye.pahale to u hi achanak se din ka raat me badlana aur phir bijiliyo k tandav ki bhanak si aavaaj aur phir usi k sath bhukam k aane se lagbhag sabhi dar k mare kap gaye the.ye sab achanak kaise ho gaya kisi ko bhi is bare me nahi pata tha.sirf blue shadow ko chhod k.aur vahee
Raajsabha- me jab halaat bigadne lage to karma ne turant black shadow, seona , Pegasus aur husna ko is bare me turant pata lagne ko bhej diya aur khud sabhi ko shaant karne me lag gaya.
{Dosto karma ko kuchh der abhi raajsabha me sab ko shant karne k liye chhod dete aur chalte hai ek baar phir blue shadow aur dark riders ki queen k pass aur dekhte hai ki ab aage vaha kya hone vala hai.ab aage}
Dark ridersss ki Queen- ek dum gusse me blue shadow se bolti hai.tum ko kya laga ki tuhmare ye shaktiya mujhe rok sakti hai.itna bolte hi jaise hi vo kuchh bolti aur apni shaktiyo ka istamaal blue shadow pe kar pati tabhi vo apne aap ko apne duniya me pati hai.aur jaise hi usko is baat ka asbaas hota hai ki vo apne duniya me vapas aa gai hai.ye dekhte hi uska gussa bahot jada badh jata hai aur ek dum gusse me phir se alfan me jane vale portal k pass pahoch jati hai .aur jaise hi us portal me phir se pravesh karne vali hota hai tabhi vo portal bhi achanak se band ho jata hai.ye sab kuchh dekh k dark riders ki queen ka para badh jata hai aur aass pass ki cheege queen k gusse k mare aag se jalne lagta hai.aur vaha k drish kuchh is tarah ka dikh raha tha.
Kuchh der tak ek dum gussa karne k baad dark riders ki queen ka gussa thoda shaant hota hai.tabhi usko uski galti ka aisas bhi hota hai ki.kabhi bhi apne dusman ko kamjor nahi samjhna chahiye.jab usko is baat ka abhaas hota hai.turant vo vaha se gayab ho k apni dark riders ki sena k passs jati hai aur apni sena se bolti hai ki aaj bhale hi hame rok diya gaya ho.kuchh samay k liye us duniya me jane se.lekin jaldi hi hum phir se us duniya me jayenge aur aisi tabhi macheyenge ki dekhne vala ka ruh bhi kap jaye ga.
Ab samay hai apni shaktiyo ko badhane ka.main ab maine mahal me jarahi hu apni shaktiyo ko pura jagrit karne aur tum sabhi bhi apni saktiyo ko badha lo.aur dhyaan rahe koee bhi meri sadhana me badha nahi dalna chahiye.jab tak ki main khud apne mahal se bahar na aa jau aur ab vaise bhi jaldi baki dungeon bhi apni nedra se uth hi jayenge.itna bol k dark riders ki queenapne kuch khas salah karo ko sab kuchh samjha k apne mahal me chali jati aur phir uske salahkaar bhi apne kaam me lag jate hai aur dark riders ki sena apni shaktiyo ko badhane me laga jati hai.
{Dosto ab aap sabhi k maan me is samay bahot sare question aa rahe honge na.ki kaise aur aisa kya huva ki dark riders ki queen achanak se apni duniya me kaise pahoch gai.aur usko is baat ka pata bhi nahi chal paya na.}
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Dark riders ki Queen-gusse me blue shadow k taraf badh rahi thi. itna to hum sabhi ko pata hi hai lekin sath hi vo apne maan me ek spell padh rahi thi .jis k madat se vo blue shadow ko kaid karne vali thi.isiliye vo blue shadow se baat karte huve uske najdeek ja rahi thi.taki samane vale ko jara sa bhi abhaas na ho ki uske sath aane vale samay me (I mean agle kuchh pal me ) kya hone vala hai aur jab usko pata chale is baat ka tab tak bahot der ho chuki ho yahe plan tha uska.q ki kahi na kahi usko is baat ka abhaas bhi tha ki blue shadow uske raste me ek rukavat ka kaam kar sakti hai.lekin usko is baat ka jara sa bhi andaja nahi tha ki uske sath aane vale samay me ya kuchh pal me kya hone vala hai.aur vahee
Blue shadow-k samane dark riders ki queen jaise hi aati hai .blue shadow usi pal vo ek dum satark ho jati hai.aur uske maan sirf yahee chal raha tha.jo mere itne takatvar surakchha kavach ko bina apni shakti k istamaal k tod sakti hai.usko harana asaan kaam nahi hoga aur usase ladne me agar samay gavaya to ho sakta hai tab tak dark riders ki puri sena phir se vapas na aa jaye.aur aisa hone se mujhe kisis bhi keemat pe rokna hi pade ga.q ki abhi tak karma in sabhi k liye bilkul bhi taiyaar nahi hai.isliye mujhe apni takat se nahi maya se harana hoga aur vo bhi aise ki usko is baat ka pata bhi na chale aur mera kaam asani se ho jaye.
Phir kya blue shadow apne maan me ek maya bhi spell padthi hai.jiske madat se jo koee bhi jis duniya se aaya hai usko phir se usi duniya me vapas bhej dega.vo spell .lekin samasya ye tha ki vo apne spell ka istamaal kaise kare.tabhi uska dhyaan dark riders k ghode pe jata hai jo ki lagatar uske kareeb aa raha hota hai .bus phir kya blue shadow ne apna spell jameen pe istamaal kar diya.aur jaise hi dark riders k queen ka ghoda spell vali jameen pe apna kadam rakhata hai.vaise hi palak jahpkate hai dark riders ki queen apne duniya me vapas pahoch jati hai.
Aur ye baat alag tha ki blue shadow ko apne kaid hone k bare me nahi pata aur nahi dark riders ki queen ko bhi ye nahi pata tha ki vo bina lade hi chhal ki madat se vapas apne duniya me pahoch jaye gi.aur aage iske baad kya huva aap ko pata hi hai .
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Blue shadow-dark riders ki queen ko vapas uske duniya me bhejne k turant baad phir se alfan k dungeon k portal to bhi se band kar deti hai vo bhi apne aur bhi shaktishali protection spell se.aur ye kaam jaise hi hota hai vaise hi sab kuchh ek baar phir se melboalfan kingdom ek dum samanya ho jata hai aur to aur log k maan se dar ,bhay, chinta aur Ashanti nikal jata hai .logo ko asie lagta hai ki jaise kuchh huva hi na ho .bus ye ek prakritik abada ho aur ab vo chala gaya.
Jaise hi ye sab samanya ho jata hai tab blue shadow bhi gayab ho k apni favorite alfan k jungle me chali jati hai. Taki apni naee shaktiyo ko aur achchhe se jaan sake.aur un hi naee shaktiyo ko achchhe se janane k liye dhyaan me baith jati hai aur sath hi adrish bhi ho jati hai.taki koee uske dhyaan me khalal na dale.aur vahee
Raajsabha –me bhi ab sabhi raajdarbari apne aap ko sambhaal chuke the.aur karma k sabhi takate bhi vapas aa gaye the.kisi ko bhi kuchh nahi pata chala tha ki aakhir huva kya tha.
Karma-ki sabhi shaktiya jaise hi apne khoj me nikalti hai charo disha me ye janane k liye ki melboafan me ye achanak ho kya raha tha.tabhi sab kuchh samany ho jata hai.aur kuchh der pure kingdom me ghoomne k baad bhi jab kuchh nahi mila kisi ko to sab vapas aa jate hai.tabhi
Black shadow –ko blue shadow ka ek pal k liye abaas ho ta hai .aur vo abaas chala bhi jata hai ki .q ki blue shadow ka koee suraag black shadow ko nahi milta hai.apna bharam maan k vapas chala jata hai vo bhi . aur vahee
Karma-raajdarbari jaise hi shaant hote hai vaise hi uski sabhi shaktiya bhi vapas usme sama jate hai.aur un sabhi se karma ko bhi yahe pata chala ki koee bhi aisa nahi tha ki ye kaam kare .ho sakta hai ye prakritik abada ho aur karma ko blue shadow ka shak ka bhi abaas hota hai black shadow se.ye sab kuchh pata chalne k baad .main apne maan ko shaant karta hu.aur apne maan me bolta hu.ki ab lagta hai mujhe hi sab kuchh pata lagane pade ga.lekin ye sab kuchh capital city se aane k baad hi in sabhi bato pe vichaar karunga.abhi k liye mujhe apne aap ko shaant rakhna hi hoga .pata nahi main phir se ashaant hoga gaya to kahee main apne aapne se bahar na aa jau.is liye maine ek lambi gahari saas leta hu.aur phir main mahaamantree ji se bolta hu.ab jab ki sab kuchh samany ho gaya hai.aur jis kaam k liye maine aur mahaamantree ji aap sabhi raaj darbariyo ko yaha bulaya tha. Us bare me charcha aarambh karte hai.
Main-meri baat sunte hi sabhi ka dhyaan mere tarf ho jata hai.main phir se ek baar bolna shuru karta hu.ha to jaise aap sabhi ko ab pata hi chal gaya hoga ki hum logo yaha dungeon k gayab hone k Vishay me baat karne aaaye hai .aur hum sabhi k charcha me prakritk abada ne kuchh samay k liye ek badha utpan kar diya tha.ab jab ki sab samanya ho chuka hai to.main charcha ko aage badata hu.
Jaise ki aap sabhi ne mahaamantree se suna hi hoga ki alfan ka dungeon apne aap aaj gayab ho gayab ho gaya tha.aur jaise ki aap sabhi ko pata ho ga ki dungeon kaha kaha aur kis desh me hai.lekin main aap sabhi ko phir se bata deta hu.is charcha ko shuru karne se pahale.
2 dungeon melboafan kingdom me.
1 dungeon teharma kingdom me.
1 dungeon garga kingdom me.
1 selstriya kingdom me.
1 sindriya kingdom me hai.
Main-ab aap sabhi ko pata chal gaya hoga ki kaha kaha dungeon hai.Jaise ki aap sabhi ko pata hai ki maine sindriya kingdom k dungeon ko hara k vapas uski sunaya me bhej diya tha.aur melboafan k dungeon ko samasya ko bhi samapta kar diya hai…
to be continued….
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Thank you so much intne achhe comments k liye bhai.keep supporting.next update kal shaam ko dunga main.
aur rahi baat story ko end karna ka to..jab tak sare point cover nahi hoga ye story main end nahi karunga aur ye apne speed se chale ga na hi bahot fast aur nahi hi bahot jada slow .ha ye part end ho sakta hai lekin is story ko abhi end hone me kafi time hai bhai.aur is part k end hone me bhi bahot time hai.
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