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Romance AGENT-02 THE KERALA TRAILS (Completed)

AGENT 2 ki female lead koun honi chahiye???


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Swaraj

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1 baat ti mere zehan me k Meera Suraj ko kyu chori i mean k soch apne esa kia kuch to explain kr do r mai Meera ki shadi k bad Suraj r uski mulakat expect kr rha Hun ap se itna to kr hi sakte ho ap waiting for next update
Bro sabse pehle to review ke liye thanks
Suraj aur myra tab alag hue jab myra ko pata chala ki unke papa ka dehant ho gaya
Suraj waise hi bohut kuch chupa kar rakhta tha Myra lekin jab anwesha ko dabochane ke liye gaya tabhi bhi myra ko sach nahi bata paya
Myra ko laga ki jhoot ke buniyad par koi rishta nahi tikta isliye suraj se alag ho gayi
 

Zas23

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Guys please is story ki samajhne ke liye agent padhiye.kyunki bohut saare characters wahan se liya gaya hai

TURKEY
ISTANBUL
"Did you get it??"ek aadmi ne ek ladke se poocha
Wo ladka kaamp raha tha

"Wtf,you look scared as shit.lolz ha ha ha"sabhi hasne lage

"Y yesss b but you have to give that thing"ladka bola

"Hah why not btw what's your name kid"aadmi poocha

"F first tell me is this place safe??"ladke ne poochha

"Aah safe and sound,We are 5 here.but this place is located at the isolated part of the city ,got it"aadmi bola

"Good"ladka muskurane laga aur apna topi nikal kar rakh diya

"Wtf who are..."

CYOOM CYOOM CYOOM CYOOM CYOOM

paanch shot aur sabhi paanch khatam

Ladke ne kaan me haath dabakar bola
"Mission accomplished,aura out"
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USA EMBAASY ISTANBUL
"Wow buddy you were outstanding"aakash gale lagane ke liye aage badha

Lekin suraj ne haath aage badha diya hand shake ke liye

"My pleasure mr aakash"suraj bola

"Ye hamara teesra mission hai suraj ek saath,aur har baar tum pehle se zyada mazboot dikh rahe ho,RAW ne ek behtareen agent produce kiya hai"aakash bola

Suraj chup raha aur ghadi dekhte hue bola

"I think I should leave sir,my mission is over"bol uthkar jaane laga suraj

"Arey kam se kam dinner ke liye to ruko"aakash bola

"Later sir, goodnight"bol suraj nikal gaya

Aakash ki aankhen surkh hoti gayi.ye teesri baar hai jab suraj kaam ke baad seedha nikal gaya.afganistan ke baad pata nahi suraj ko kya hua??
Hasne khelne wala suraj kahan kho gaya??

Khair Aakash ne report banana shuru kiya

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DURGAPURA RAJASTHAN
"aah tumne to kamal kar diya suraj"jogiraj bola

"Kamal to tum bhi ho jogiraj"suraj bola

"Kya matlab??bye yahan kaise??ghoomna aaye ho??"jogiraj bola

"Mere paas bina time ke ghoomna nahi hota hai jogiraj.aur ab mai tumhare liye aaya hoon"suraj bola

"Matlab??..."

"Batata hoon.sabse pehle rao ko sab kuch inform karna ,fir professor ki help karna,fir celina ko maarna,wow"suraj bola

Jhat se bandook taan liya jogiraj ne.
"Bohut zyada jaan gaye ho suraj good by.....""

CYOOM

sar par goli lagi aur jogiraj wahi gir gaya

"Sniper help ke saath aaya tha jogiraj ji,chaliye khatam hua aapka khel ."bol waha se chala gaya suraj

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RAW HEADQUARTERS
"15 missions suraj 15 missions aur har baar sabko maarkar wapas aate ho"RAW ka naya chief vinod chilla utha

Suraj par koi asar nahi hua waise hi baitha raha

"Kya koi mission fail ho gaya sir??"suraj ne poochha

"Nahi hua lekin uska matlab nahi hai ki andhadhun sabko maarte foto,ISI to tumhare naam se hi kaamp uthti hai bhai,dekho se are not against any country beta,hum sirf desh ki suraksha mazboot karne ke liye hai"vinod bola

Suraj chup hi raha

"Filhal to rest karo ,chalo see you"vinod bola

Suraj salute kar nikal gaya
Nice update
 

Zas23

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POLICE COMMISSIONER OFFICE
DELHI
"Good morning sir"

"Aao aao anushka ,please have a seat"commisioner bole

"Thank you sir"bol anushka baith gayi

"ACP Anushka one of the brightest of the recent batch,bohut tareefen suni hai tumhari beta" commissioner muskurate hue bole

"Thanks sir "muskurate hue anushka boli

'well ek task tha tumhare liye"commissioner bole

"Kya sir??"anushka boli

"Dekho beta yahan jitne dange ho rahe hai in sab ki jad hasan sheikh hai. bheed ikathha karna,bhadkana,dhamkana ye sab me mahir hai"commissioner bole

Anushka sunti chali gayi

"Bohut dino se talash thi NIA ko aur IB ko.itne din baad uska thikana mila hai.aajkal kerala me chupa baitha hai"commisioner Bolte chale gaye

"Mere liye kya orders hai sir"anushka boli

"Batata hoon batata hoon.tum beta kerala ghoom aao aur thodi information collect karo.direct involve mat hona .sirf wahan ke local police se help le lena.apni poori family ke saath ghoomte aao"commissioner bole

Anushka hatash ho gayi.ye bhi koi kaam hai??
Dhat


Bujhe man se jaise hi wo uthne ko hui tabhi commissioner ne peeche se roka

"Anushka!"

"Jee sir"anushka boli

"Beta tumhare saath ek reporter bhi jayega,young hai aur capable bhi "commissioner bole

"Lekin sir kyun??"anushka boli

"Home ministry ka order hai beta,im helpless"commissioner bole

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DEFENSE SECRETARY OFFICE

"Sir jab aap ko promotion mila aur aap naye defence secretary bane.mujhe RAW ka in charge bana diya gaya to mai bohut khush hua tha sir,lekin pata nahi tha ki itna challenge bhara hai"vinod bola

"Tum deserve karte the vinod.isliye IB se tumhara RAW me transfer karwaya maine"ranjan bola

Haal hi mai ranjan promote hokar defence secretary ban gaya tha jabki vinod RAW ka naya head

"Waise sab thik thak hi hai sir lekin...."Bolte Bolte chup ho gaya vinod

"Pata hai vinod.use thoda time do aur missions se door hi rakho.baaki sab to perfect hai."ranjan bola

"Waise ek baat hai,police commissioner ne ek help maangi hai sir,just escort karna hai ACP ko aur observe karna hai"vinod bola

"Kushal ko bhej do,pichla mission bohut behtareen tarike se khatam kiya ladke ne"ranjan bola

"Sir....kyun na suraj ko bhej de"vinod bola

Ranjan chup raha

"Dekhiye sir pehli Baar to isme koi khoon khatana nahi hoga ,observation hai,suraj aaram se nikal lega"vinod bola

"Okay you are the boss,take your call"bola ranjan

"Izazat dijiye sir"vinod bola aur nikal gaya
Nice update
 

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RAJASTHAN
"Haan ....wah bohut khub,ani kaafi bada ho gaya hai na??.......suraj ka bhi acha result aaya hai lekin tujhe to pata hai ki college ke baad gum sum gaya hai.........kya????.....thik hai baat karti hoon usse.....abhi to freelancer hai repoter ka job dekh raha hai,chal rakhti hoon"anju sharma ne phone rakh kar suraj ki aur dekha

"Manju mausi ka phone tha,anirban poore state me first aaya suraj,batao ek shararti ladka itna aage badh gaya"anju boli

"Hmm achi baat hai,maa mai gym ja raha hoon"bol suraj nikal gaya

"Are sun to apne sifarish par aridman apne dost ko bolenge teri job ke liye singapore me ...."anju bolti rahi lekin suraj ruka nahi

Phone bahane laga.bike par hone ki wajah se suraj ne bike ko khada kiya aur call uthaya

Suraj-boliye sir

Bandish-5 din baad train me ja rahe ho tum

Suraj-aur kuch??

Bandish-flight ki tickets actually nahi kar rahe hai hum.kyunki ye travel low profile rakha gaya hai

Suraj-sir maine kuch bola

Bandish-pata hai,fir bhi clear karna acha hota hai.tum mile acp anushka se???.sweet ladki hai.apne batch ki top cadet.bilkul tumhari tarah.topmost agent

Suraj -mil loonga sir

Bandish- time nahi hai suraj.aaj hi nikal padi delhi ke liye,tc

Phone to cut gaya lekin suraj ko bohut gussa aaya

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DELHI
DING DONG
"A gayi beti"sumitra rawat khush hote hue boli

Anushka kuch nahi boli jakar sofe me dhamm se baith gayi

"Maa bohut din ho gaye ghoome hue,thoda tour kar le?"anushka ne poochha

"Mujhe door rakho"mr viresh rawat bole

Mr viresh rawat kendriya vidyalaya ke principal hai,unki dharmpatni house wife unki badi beti anushka rawat acp delhi police aur chota beta harsh class 9 me padhta hai

"Aap to rehne dijiye,bas ghuse rahiye books aur newspaper me"sumitra jhunjlahat me boli

"Waise beta tu bol kahan jaane ka plan hai??"sumitra devi boli

"Kerala kaisa rahega??"anushka boli

"Wah zabardast aaj hi inko bolkar ticket karwati hoon"sumitra boli

"Maa tickets ho gayi 5 din baad"Anushka boli

Sumitra khush hote hue boli

"Maa...wo..."anushka halke se boli

"Kya beta??"sumitra boli

"Mera ek d dost bhi wahan jayega"bolkar maa aur papa dono ki aur dekhne lagi

Sumitra devi na dono haath jod liye

"He bhagwan shukr hai.mujhe to laga tha ladke jaati se hi chid hai tujhe,waise kya naam hai uska??kya karta hai??ghar kidhar hai
.."sumitra ne questions ke bauchar kar diye

"Office relax maa shadi nahi kar rahi usse"bol change karne chali gayi anushka

Peecha se boli

"Koi suraj naam hai shayad"
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DELHI
shahar waise ka waisa hi mila suraj ko
Nahi bohut kuch badal gaya.sab kuch mila aur sab kuch kho diya
Myra ki shaadi bhi ho gayi.facebook par honeymoon ki tasveerein ...khush hai apne pati ke saath
Suraj muskuraya.nitin ke saath dosti tab tooti jab usne anwesha ke gayab hone ka kasoorwar suraj ko mana
Suraj use bata hi nahi paya ki anwesha isi agent sara hai
Koi bhi apna nahi hai ab is shahar me.

"Sir zahid,aapko pick karne ka order mila hai"ek aadmi car ke sheeshe nikalta hua bola

"Kaise pata chala mai wahi hoon"suraj ne bachkana test liya

"Photo mili thi,kandhe par bag,idhar udhar dekh nahi rahe ,age waishi hai aur...."

"Bas bas chalo"bol chadh gaya care suraj

"Suraj aap hum sab logo ke liye inspiration ho,aap ke kitne saare missions ka reference dekar train kiya jaata hai hamein ..."Zahid bolta ja raha tha lekin suraj ka dhyan wahan tha hi nahi

DING DONG

"Aap ??koun hai aap??"sumitra ne poochha

"Suraj sharma"muskurate hue suraj bola

"Ohho wahi suraj??ander aao beta.anushka nahane gayi hai aati hogi"bol sumitra devi chali gayi

Suraj ke liye garma garam nashta a gaya
Poori,sabzi ,jalebi aur lassi

"Are itna sab kuch "suraj khana dekh kar bola

"Are khao khao beta tum anushka ke dost ho aur pehli Baar aaye ho"sumitra muskurate hue boli

Tabhi anushka ander aayi
Gori aur khubsoorat pehli Baar itni khoobsurat acp ko dekha tha suraj ne

Anushka ne bhi suraj ko dekha.kisi bhi angle se reporter nahi lagta.
Chalak shatir aur bohut kameena type ka lagta hai
He bhagwan isi ke saath ye tour karna padega???
Anushka ne sar par haath rakh liya
Nice update
 

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DELHI
"mr suraj mere khayal se aapko poori instruction mil gayi hogi,kyunki mujhe nahi pasand koi mere kaam me taang adaye,pehle hi clear kar Doon"anushka sofe me baithkar boli

Suraj ne jhat se scan kiya room ka.posters nahi hai kamre me,books zyada hai aur bohut saman kam hai
Ek ladki kaam se kaam rakhti hai,do ladki padhne ki shaoukeen hai teen ghar me time kam de paati hai ....

"Kahan kho gaye mister??"anushka boli

"Aapko painting ka shaouk hai kya??suraj muskurate hue bola

Anushka chaunk gayi

"Aapko kaise...."chaukte hue hi boli

"Aapke haath me kuch colours lage hue hai,lekin baaki sharir par nahi.wo bhi index finger aur thumb me,zyadatar yahi ungliyan use hoti hai painting karne me"muskurate hue suraj bola

"Baap re baap sherlock homes ko fail kar denge aap to"anushka ki hairaani abhi bhi kam nahi hui

Suraj muskuraya.

Tabhi ek 13-14 saal ka ladka kamre me aaya

"Ye anuj mera bhai"anushka boli

"Match kaisa raha??"suraj ne anuj se poochha

Ab hairan hone ki baari anuj ki thi

"Aapko kaise....."anuj bhi hairan tha

Suraj sambhal gaya
"Aise hi tukka mara"haste hue suraj bola
Lekin use ache se pata tha ki anuj ki photo drawing room par dekhi thi.cricket ke kai pose lekar photo liye gaye the,ek photo me to trophy uthaye hue tha
Aaj itna late aaya class ke itna late ya to tutions ya match hota hai,upar se kapde thode gande aur baal idhar udhar hai.matlab 90%chance hai
Agent hone ka matlab ye nahi ki sirf goliyan maarte firo

Apni akl se,soojhboojh ke saath,common sense,thoda fit thoda josh aur hosh
Bas yahi to chahiye ek agent banne ke liye

"Waise aap kaha reporting karte hai suraj ki??"anushka ne poochha

"Yuvanchal me madam,new start up hai.dekhte hai"suraj bola


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DELHI
"Maa ye sab kya hai sunaina didi aur manish jiju ko kyun bulaya hamare saath tour pe??"anushka boli

"Sunaina teri chaheti behen hai beta,kaise mana karti??"sumitra devi boli

"Tune bhi to tere bf ko is tour me shamil kiya didi"anuj aankh maarte hue bola

"Ek jhapad marungi anuj badi badi baatein karne lag gaya hai,ja apne room me ja"anushka gusse me boli

Anuj bhi gusse me apne room ki aur chala gaya

To tay din me mr and Mrs rawat,sunaina aur manish,anushka ,anuj aur suraj new delhi station pohunch gaye
Nice update
 

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LIBYA
MENTAL HOSPITAL
"Dr aanchal the patient has only 30 mins with you"ek army officer bola

Dr aanchal indian psychiatrist thi.aur aaj unka appointment tha patient se.lekin itni security wo bhi ek aadmi ke liye??? Jo pagal hai???

Poora body scan kar unhe le jaya gaya kai security ke beech ek kamre me

"Patient is inside"army officer bola

"Will you not come inside"dr aanchal ne poochha

"No"sapat bol darwaza khol diya gaya.aur dr ke ander ghuste hi band kar diya gaya

Dr aanchal ander ghusi to kaafi andhera tha kamre me.bas ek choti si roshni a rahi thi ek kone se

Dr aanchal ne dekha ek aadmi ke haath pair bandhe hue hai.haath pair to kya.kaha jaay to poora body bandha hua hai

Dr aanchal hairan reh gayi.koun hai ye aadmi???aur indian government ne use hi kyun chuna is aadmi se milne ke liye

"Welcome doctor"ek shaant si awaaz aayi

"A thank you,tum.....???"dr aanchal ne dekha wo ek bachha sa lag raha hai.koi 18-19 saal ka ladka.sadharan sa dikhane wala.shaant

"Mathematics"ladka bola

"Matlab??"dr aanchal ne poocha

"Duniya ke har cheez calculations par nirbhar karti hai doctor"ladka muskurate hue bola

Dr aanchal ladke ko samajhna chahti thi.isliye chup chaap sunti gayi

"Mai to soch raha tha mujhe koi pasand nahi karta.lekin aap aayi acha laga.pehli baar aayi hai lekin mai aapki khatirdari nahi kar sakta aise"ladka muskurate hue bola

"Tumhara naam??"dr aanchal ne poochha

"Naam se kai baar uski sakshiyat aur haisiyat ka pata chalta hai doctor,mere papa ne mera.naam rakha atom,atom pata hai na aapko??"ladke ne poocha

"To atom naam hai tumhara??"dr aanchal ne poochha

"Atom kitni choti si cheez hoti hai na doctor??lekin kitni important???""haste hue dekha aanchal ka question ka sawal taalte hue ladka bola

"Tumhe pata hai tumhe yahan kyun rakha gaya hai??"dr aanchal ne poocha

"Log kehte hai ki mai pagal hoon,shayad isliye??"ladke ne muskurate hue bola

"Suleman ka naam suna hai???"dr aanchal ne fir poocha

"Aapke aadhe ghante se 1 minute 5 second extra ho gaya doctor??"ladka wahi shant swar me bola

"To isse zyada tum bologe nahi??"dr aanchal ne bola

"Dost hoti to zaroor baat karta"ladka bola


"To dost bana lo"dr aanchal boli

"Psychiatrist kisi ke dost nahi hote doctor"ladka bola

Dr aanchal samajh gayi ki ye ladka ab baat nahi karega.uthkar chalne ko hui.tabhi ladka bol utha

"Fir mulakat hogi doctor,bohut jald"

Dr aanchal ab ruki nahi
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NEW DELHI STATION
"Ye galat hai anu tune saara luggage suraj ko de diya "sumitra naraz hote hue boli

"Come on maa jiju aur bhai bhi to haath laga rahe hai"anushka boli

"Wah madam ??aapne ye naya bf bana bhi liya aur hamein pata bhi nahi chala??"aankh maarte hue sunaina boli

"Uff didi aap bhi.wo a just wo kya kehte hai..."anushka ko samajh nahi a raha ki kya bole


"... friend hai pata tha yahi kahegi,waise meri taraf se haan hai anu"sunaina anushka ke gale lagate hue boli

Train me baithte hi gupshup shuru ho gayi.lekin viresh upper berth me soye hue the

"Hadh hai kaise insaan se shaadi ki.maine,ya sona ya kitaab .bas jeevan me kuch bhi nahi hai "sumitra gusse se boli

Suraj muskuraya

"Aaj kal chor uchakke bhi bohut uthne lage hai train par,wo dekh sunaina didi wo kala sa ganja sa aadmi,kaise kaala chashma pehen kar baar baar gardan tedi kar idhar udhar dekh raha hai.aur briefcase se kuch nikal kar likh raha hai,mai abhi dekhti hoon"anushka josh me boli

"Relax madam wo aadmi mr kurupan hai,stock broker isliye baar baar brief case se papers lekar check kar raha hai mobile par"suraj bola

"Aur aankhon me kala chashma ??aur idhar udhar dekhna??"anuj ne poocha

"Bechare ka accident hua hoga shayad isliye gardan me operation hua.dhyan se dekho kuch stiches nazar aayenge aur ek aankh bhi kharab hai shayad isliye gardan tedi kar dekh rahe hai bechare"suraj ke Bolte hi anushka gusse se foolne lagi

Hah oversmart , zaroorat se zyada dikhawa karna anushka ko aise logo se sakht nafrat thi.lekin kya kare majboori thi.ab ye tour isi ke saath barbaad hogi
Lekin apna mission is ladke ke chakkar me fail nahi karegi anushka
Nice update
 

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KERALA
god's own country
Sachmuch kaafi lubhavna drishya tha .suraj bhi nazaro ka lutf uthane laga

"To mr suraj aap kahan reporting karte hai??"manish ne poocha

"Ji yuvanchal me"muskurate hue suraj bola

"Mujhe bhi bohut shouk tha journalist banne ka,lekin kya kare sunaina ko dekhkar dil chain sab lut gaya aur shaadi ke bandhan me bandh kar ek bank me choti si job karta hoon"manish haskar bola

"Arey aap bhi kabhi to lihaz kijiye bacchon ke saamne..."sunaina lajati hui boli

"Manish ek reputed bank ke General manager hai suraj "anushka boli

Sumitra bechari dekh rahi thi ki kaise anushka jaanboojh kar suraj ki insult kar rahi thi.lekin wo kya kar sakti thi.topic change karne ke liye boli

"Waise kerala ka khana kaisa hoga suraj???suna hai coconut oli use karte hai khane me"sumitra boli

"Are tum log tention kyun lete ho rajesh Iyer mera dost hai.aur hamare rehne ka intezam wahi kiya hai usne"manish excited hote hue bola

"Lekin jiju hum to hotel me rehne wale the"anushka boli

"Arey wahi bataya maine isko to naraz hote hue bola ki hamare rehte hue hotel me kyun rukna hai???mera bohut hi karibi school friend hai uska parivaar pehle delhi me hi rehta tha.uske dad retire hone ke baad wahan shift ho gayi poori family"manish bola

CHAI CHAI CHAI

ki awaz ne sabko excited kar dia

Veeresh rawat berth me soye hue the chai ki awaz se jaag gaye

"Mahashay ki neend tooti??mujhe to laga tha nagada bajana padega" vyang vaan chod diya sumitra ne

"Tumhe pata hai need kitni ZAROORI hoti hai sab logo ke liye???neend ke faayde..."viresh Bolte ja rahe the.

Sumitra ne haath jod kar bola.
"Dhanya ho prabhu apna gyaan band karo aur hame maaf karo"

Sunte hi viresh serious hokar fir let gaye.aur sab thahaka maar kar hasne lage.anushka bhi hasne lagi aur suraj ki aur dekha.jo anushka ko dekh muskura raha tha.
Aur anushka ki hasi gayab ho gayi aur serious ho gayi

Train toofan ki raftaar se kerala ki aur badh rahi thi
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PMO MEETING DELHI
"To dr aanchal kya laga aapko??"ranjan bole

Dr aanchal LIBYA se flight lekar a gayi thi.

"Sir mujhe lagta hai ki uska dimag disturbed hai.lekin mujhe lagta nahi ki wo pagal hai,balki ek aam ladka laga,itni security kyun???"dr aanchal ne poocha

"Umesh dr ko report do"ranjan ek meeting me baithe hue aadmi se kaha

"Dr aanchal zyada ki ch pata nahi.lekin ladka muradabad ka hai.bas itna pata chala hai.lekin uska connection france ke suicide attack me hai jisame 46 log mare the,sudan,somalia,aur Afrika mr bhi iska connection hai.aur suleman ka bohut Kareeb hai.suna hai ki ek baar ek officer ke gale ko kaat khaya tha isne.kaatkar gale ka windpipe nikal liya tha.tab se LIBYA me hai.lekin bohut khatarnaak hai isliye use kadi nigarani me rakha gaya hai"umesh ne baat khatam ki

"Sir mere khayal se hum zyada hi soch rahe hai,indian peace keeping Force United Nations ke saath kaam kar rahi hai,sab kuch thik hai abhi ke liye"sachin sinha army chief bole

"Waise mai is baat ka support karta hoon sir,har baat me intelligence department ka interference thik nahi hai"bharat rana naval chief bole

"Vinod kerala ki kya khabar hai??"ranjan ne vinod se poocha

"Ek raw officer ko ACP ke saath bheja hai sir,ek week tak report milegi"vinod bola

"Ok gentleman enough for today aur dr aanchal thanks once again for co Operation"ranjan bola aur meeting khatam ho gayi
Nice update
 

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KERALA
Dr aanchal ki flight Cochin airport par pohunch gayi

Apna bag liye wo ghar ki aur chal di.fresh MBBS kar lauti hai aanchal pata nahi kya dekha usme ki itni badi interrogation ke liye bhej diya LIBYA me
Lekin ye sab hitesh ne kyun nahi dekha???pyaar karti thi hitesh se lekin hitesh ne saaf kar diya ki wo shadi nahi kar sakta tha.wajah ye thi ki use ek successful ladki mil gayi thi.
Zid ke chalte aanchal ne bhi kadi mehnat ki.apne aansuon ko dabaye usne MBBS ki seat achieve ki
Lekin abhi bhi dil me ek tees si hai.....

"Madam ..."cab driver bola

Aanchal apne khayalon se bahar a gayi.paise chukaye aur ghar me entry maarte hi sabne gale laga liya
Sunil aur meenaxi Iyer apne beti ko dekh khushi se foole nahi sama rahe the
Rajesh bhi bohut khush tha.ghar ki beti ne kai saal ke baad paair rahke ghar me

"Aww mere bacchi kitni dubli ho gayi.khana nahi milta the kya wahan??"meenaxi boli

"Maa tum bhi,pehle jaisi to hoon"aanchal muskurate hue boli

"Dhat moti ho gayi wahan jaake"rajesh ne behen ka taang kheecha

"Bhaiyya"bol daud gayi bhaiyya ke paas aur pair chooye . Aur rajesh ne sar par haath rakh aashirvad diya

"Ab ye to batao wo surprise kya hai,jiski wajah se mai yahan aayi??"aanchal ne poochha

"Tere bhaiyya ke rishte ki baat ho gayi hai"sunil bole

Aanchal bohut khush ho gayi.lekin fir ek halki si bujh bhi gayi

Aaj agar hitesh shaadi se mana nahi karta to wo bhi shadi shuda hoti

"Are ab dekh teri baari aane wali hai 22 ki ho gayi hai tu"rajesh behen ki halat samajh sakta tha.isliye topic change karne ke liye behen ko chidane laga

"Nahi abhi mujhe aage badhna hai bhaiyya,shaadi waadi nahi karni"bol fresh hone chali gayi apne room me aanchal

"Waise ladki aur ladki waale kab a rahe hai rajesh???"sunil ne poocha

"Bas aaj raat tak pohunch jayenge"bol rajesh bahar nikal gaya


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Is ghatiya mission me aane ka bilkul bhi man nahi tha suraj ka lekin kya kare,ranjan sir ne request kiya to mana nahi kar paya

PAKODA PAKODA

Station par gaadi Kareeb 15 minute tak rukegj

pakoda wala train me chadte hi sabne pakoda khaya.suraj ne mana kar diya aur let gaya

AREY???

fatak se seat se utha suraj aur bhaga bahar.pakode wale ne phone nikala pocket se aur phone karne laga

Suraj sun to kuch paya nahi lekin kuch sochne laga

Train ne whistle bajayi aur majbooran suraj ko wapas seat par aana pada

"Kahan gaye the"anushka ne dheere se poocha

"Wo washroom"suraj bola

Sab hasne lage.aur anushka bhi bina hase nahi reh paayi

Lekin suraj ko usse matlab nahi tha
Ek baar chai,ek baar samose aur is baar pakode
Teen baar un par nazar rakhi gayi aur suraj ko pata bhi nahi chala.
Khud par gussa aane laga suraj ko.itni silly observation????

"Suraj a jao khana kha lo"sumitra boli

Suraj berth se utra lekin uska dimag kahi aur tha.yani un logo ko pata hai ki kerala a rahe hai suraj aur anushka

Har pal ki nazar rakhi ja rahi hai.mission itna aasan nahi jitna dikh raha hai.

"Waise anushka tumse poochhe bina ek decision le liya"manish dheere se bola

"Kya jiju??"anushka ne poochha

"Wo actually mummy Papa ke request par tumhe ek ladka dikhane le jana hai"manish bola

"Jiju aap...."anushka ko hairani hui

"Relax anu ZAROORI nahi ki tumhe like karna hai ladke ho,bas dekh lo aur agar nahi acha lage to mana kar dena"manish bola

Anushka kuch boli nahi bas sochne lagi

Udhar suraj bhi soch raha tha
Nice update
 

Zas23

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ERNAKULAM JUNCTION
train late thi 40 minute
saamne ek sajjan khade the.jo in logo ko dekhte hi daud kar a gaya saamne

"Sunil uncle??"manish utsahit hokar bola aur pair chune laga to sunil ne rok kar gale laga liya

Sabse milne ke baad sunil ne suraj ki aur dekha

"Ye??ye koun...."thodi hairaani ke saath poocha sunil ne kyunki unko 6 logo ke aane ki khabar thi.fir ye

"Suraj....anushka ka dost hai.reporter hai.ghoomne aaya hai"manish bola

Sunil ne sunne ke baad zyada dhyan nahi diya aur INNOVA nikal laye

"Ji wo mai nahi a paunga,mujhe office me abhi report karna hai.aap log jaiye"bol muskurate hue suraj nikal gaya

Anushka dekhti rahi.fir sabke saath innova me baith gayi

Innova je jaate hi suraj daudkar wapas aaya.aur ek cup chai ke liye bola.chai peete peete bohut kuch chalne laga uske dimag me.paise chukaye aur fir hotel ke liye chala gaya

SUNSHINE HOTEL
saaf suthri achi khasi hotel book kiya gaya tha suraj ke liye

Room me pohunchte hi phone lagaya usne

"Identify yourself"doosri aur se Awaz aayi

"Aura KE"suraj bola

"90 seconds for support starts now"doosri aur se awaz aayi

"Meeting with raw senior officials"

"Negative.meeting schedule is cancelled as of now,will get your priorities once meeting is rescheduled,times up"phone cut gaya

Suraj baith gaya bed par.karne ko kuch bhi nahi tha ab.thoda shahar ki aur jaya jaay....

Tabhi phone bajne laga

"Hello??"suraj bola

"Barkhurdar office se time mile to yahan a jaana .dinner ek saath karenge"manish ki awaz aayi

"Lekin aap log family gathering karoge aur mai wahan.....sahi nahi rahega"suraj bola

"Dekho chupchap chale aao zyada bahane baazi nahi"bol phone jaat deta hai manish

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IYERS​
IYERS ke ghar pohunch kar suraj idhar udhar dekhne laga

Achi khasi party chal rahi hai aur sab mast hai apne me

"AREY suraj kahan reh jaate ho yaar.a jao mila doon.ye hai rajesh bohut bade engineer hai.ye meenakshi aunty rajesh ki mata ji.sunil uncle se mil chuke ho aur......ye hai hamari pyari aanchal"
Manish ne sabko suraj se introduce karwaya

Suraj ne haste hue sabko namaste kiya.lekin aanchal ho hi karte koi jawab nahi diya usne

Party poore jor shor se chal rahi thi.sab apne me mast the.suraj ne ek soft drink ki glass pakad li aur idhar udhar bhatakte hue ek kone ke chair par baith gaya.

Lawn ka area bada Sundar tha.raat ka waqt to tha lekin fir bhi thandi thandi hawa suraj ko acha lagne laga.apne me ek gaana gungunane laga.zamana ho gaya jab suraj kabhi aise mood me aaya ho

"Sahab ko snacks serve karo"ek awaz aayi suraj ko

Chaunk kar dekha to aanchal khadi thi aur ek waiter haath me tray liye khada tha

Suraj ne aupcharikta ke khatir ek veg cutlet utha liya.waiter chala gaya

"Akele akele kya kar rahe hain??"aanchal ne poocha

"Ji gaana ga raha tha"haste hue suraj bola

Aanchal ko ladka thoda ajeeb laga.koun raat ko party me akele akele kone me baith gaana gata hai bhai

"Akelapan acha lagta hai aapko??"aanchal ne poochha

"Aap company dengi to akelapan door ho sakta hai"suraj haste hue bola

"Excuse me??"teerchi nazar se dekhte hue aanchal boli

"Mera matlab kerala ke baare me,yahan ka rahan sahan,khana peena.reporter hoon lekin kabhi kabhi travel experience bhi likh deta hoon"muskurate hue suraj bola

Aanchal ki baithane ki ichha bilkul nahi thi lekin kya karti suraj ke baat karne ka tarika aisa tha.mana nahi kar paayi

Aur baat karte karte suraj ke saath kab ghul mil gayi pat bhi nahi chala.

"To kal aap chal rahe hai na sight seeing par??"aanchal boli

"Wo actually???....aap a rahi hai kya??"suraj ne poochha

"Kyun nahi aati to aap nahi aate"aanchal boli

"Aisa hi samajh likhiye"suraj bola

"Aapko nahi lagta lines purane ho rahe hai???"aanchal muskurate hue boli

"Well kabhi bhi koi bhi lines purani nahi hoti madam.warna itne saare laila Majnu ghuma rahi karte"suraj bola

Aanchal ko.suraj acha lagne laga tha.lekin thoda ajeeb bhi lagne laga tha.
Aur suraj ko bhi aanchal bha gayi thi

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LIBYA
Main cell ka darwaza khula.

"Food"bol army official cell me ghusa aur bandi banaye us aadmi ke haath kholne laga

"They are in kerala"dheere se bola

"Calculations are never wrong,btw aaj kheer milegi??khane ka man kar raha tha"muskurate hue us aadmi ne kaha
Nice update
 
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