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Romance AGENT-02 THE KERALA TRAILS (Completed)

AGENT 2 ki female lead koun honi chahiye???


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Swaraj

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Update 01 & 02

Sab se pehlay sorry late padne ke liye but bro ramadan me busy thaa aur doosra aapki story badla pura hone ka wait kar raha taki is story ka pura lutf le sakoon ab jab badla bilkul end pe nazar aa rahi hain to phir isko shuru kia.
Magar bilkul 1st part ki tarah dhasu shurwat uske liye congrats and really maza aa gaya 2 update pad ke hi. Suraj ko waqt aur halat ne ab ek manjhay huay agent me badal diya lekin utna hi dangerous bhi hi gaya hain aur niyati shayad anushka se sath usko Kerala pohcha rahi hain shayad veer yodha zada time chup nahi bethtay hain is aur unki niyati inko agle gantavay ko taraf le jaati hain. Wow maza aayega bro...
Bro sabse pehle to review ke liye thanks aur
Thanks ki aap mere regular readers me se ek hai
Badla bas kuch ki updates me khatam hoga
Fir ek spinoff paschatap jo 5 doston ki kahani hai wo shuru karunga
Ab story par aate hai.bohut achi tarah se suraj ab taiyyar hai.lekin story me kai twist hai.jo dheere dheere pata chalega aapko
Anirban ka bhi bohut contribution rahega story me
Saath rahiye
 
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Swaraj

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Zabardast ek phir se saare pyrane ghav hare ho gaye Delhi pohach ker shayad myra ko to khud hi door ki tha suraj ne magar tees to hain na us zakhm.ki jo dil me pyar ke tootne se bana hai. Chahe reason koi bhi ho ab dekhna hoga suraj aur anushka ki jugalbandi ki gul khilati hain. Lagta to dono ka nature opposite hain.
Review ke liye thanks dost
Anushka ke saath suraj ka milan hoga ya nahi ye to pata nahi lekin story bohut emotional ho jayegi
Bohut twist hai aage
Saath rahiye
 
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Swaraj

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Superb update.
Suleiman's present aur past ko aapne bahut ache se describe kia.
Travelling ki scene bhi bahut acha tha.
Magar ek bar aur SURAJ aur MYRA ki tara anirban aur krithika ki bhi dil todne ja raha hai.This is bad.
Myra ki papa ki wajah se Suraj ki aur myra ki pyar khatam ho gaya.But anirban ki bhi same result ki kia karan hai?
Aur story rommance prefix par hai magar ye to tragidy ho raha hai.Real life me ek agent/detective/army uska life desh ki liye sacrifice korta hai magar isme uska family hi qurban deta hai sab jante hua bhi.Mujhe lagta hai anirban ko raw agent nahi hona chaiye.Ese hua to suraj ki family hi khatam ho jae ga.
Ye sab meri personal thinking hai.Aap aapke tara hi story likho.
Overall all nice work.
Keep it up....
Bro sabse pehle review ke liye thanks
Jaisa ki maine kaha mai story par kabhi bhi religion ko target nahi karta
SULEIMAN sahi hai ya galat wo aap decide kijiye
Anirban ki hi nahi balki uske kuch dost ek important part play karenge story me
Positive aur negative dono
Rahi baat anirban ke agent banne ki,to abhi mai kuch bol nahi sakta.kyunki story ka interest hi chala jayega
Agent series ki meri akhiri story agent-3 ke saath hi meri trilogy khatam hogi
Saath rahiye aur aise hi support kijiye
 
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Saif119

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Bro dont go upon religion and dont involve a quraan and all if u want to write plz write simply.
 
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JAIPUR
"Sir hotline me CIA line par hai"operator ki awaaz aayi bandish ko
subah subah bandish ko cabin me CIA ke call???

"All right connect me to CIA"bandish bola

"Hi bandish whats up??"aakash ki awaz aayi doosri aur se

"Subah subah aakash ka call,haal chaal poochhe ke liye to call nahi kiya hoga,kya baat hai"bandish ne poochha

Kuch der ke liye khamoshi cha gayi

"Aakash ??"bandish bola

"Bandish jo mai kehne wala hoon dhyan se suno,SULEIMAN naam ka ek top wanted terrorist par duniya ke saare agencies kaam kar rahe the,pata hai na??"aakash bola

"Pata hai aakash.lekin wo zinda bhi hai ya nahi pata nahi,jo kaidi LIBYA me hai usse abhi tak kuch pata nahi chala,hamari team se zero output nikla hai"bandish afsos karte hue bola

"Pata hai bandish hamne bhi apne representatives bheje the,MI6 ne bhi bheje the aur kaafi agencies ne bhi bheje the.lekin kaidi tas se mas nahi hua,khair chodo un baaton ko.SULEIMAN zinda hai aur apna network bada kar raha hai,sleeper cells activate kar raha hai.suna hai ek saath 20 deshon me attack karega,blast ke zariye.aur uska operation kerala se shuru hoga......"aakash bola

"WHATTTTTT????"bandish chair se khada ho gaya

"Problem ye hai ki na to hame pata hai kab,na pata hai kiske zariye na pata hai SULEIMAN bhi hai ya nahi ,na hame pata hai koun se 20 desh"aakash bola

"Kul milakar kuch bhi nahi pata"bandish bola

"Isliye.....CIA isbaar akele ......mera matlab ...."aakash bola

"Khulkar bolo aakash"bandish bola

"USA ko lagta hai ki is mission me bohut log maare jayenge isliye.........CIA koi help nahi karegi bandish ,ya fir mai khulkar kahun to i'm sorry"aakash bola

"Aakash tumne ye bohut badi help ki jo bataya ki SULEIMAN kya karne wala hai,rahi baat help ki to yaad rakhna ki 18 saal ke doodh peete bachhe ne tum logo ka pichwada bachaya tha afganistan me,RAW ek capable aur responsible agency hai aakash,we can take care of our country's security,sri lanka me LTTE ka safaya ho ya 1971 ki ladai,ya maldives ya nepal,ya european nation.ham logo ne sabko apna loha manvaya hai. Aur rahi baat help ki to we don't want help from anyone,aur haan SULEIMAN ke baare me poore duniya ko jaankari bhi RAW ne hi di thi"bol phone patak diya bandish ne gusse se

Aur sar pakadkar baith gaya.fir bell bajaya

"Sir!!"ek ladka aaya aur salute kiya

"Fatak se ek chai bolo aur turant delhi ke saath video conference ka session taiyyar karo"bandish bola

"Koi badi baat hai sir??"ladke ne poochha

"Mount everest se bhi badi,ab jao jo kaha wo karo"bandish bola
Aur ladka salute kar chala gaya

SULEIMAN naam baar baar bandish ke dimag me ghoomna laga

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MUNNAR
toyota qualis apne hisab se chal rahi thi.rajesh ko kaam tha isliye tour me nahi chal saka .anushka ne saaf saaf kar diya ki ye sirf ek tour rahega.shaadi ki baatein baad me jab wo kerala aayegi tab kiya jayega.shayad ye sunkar rajesh tour me shamil nahi hua
Lekin aanchal ko koi problem nahi thi.
Pehla reason tha ki anushka ke family se ghul mil gayi thi.doosra reason jo zyada important tha ek bechara sa freelance reporter suraj

Ek chote se chai ke dukan me gaadi ruki to sabne coffee ka order diya.aur kele ki bhaji jo is area me bohut chalti hai

"Yani aaj raat ko aapke changul me hasan sheikh hoga"suraj coffee peete hue bola

"Yes,mera pehla out of the city mission suraj"anushka khush hote hue boli

Suraj ko apna pehla mission yaad a gaya.kitni qurbani,kitna khoon baha,uska pyaar usse alag ho gaya,dost bhi chod chala gaya.

Halka sa man bujh gaya suraj ka.baar baar wahi sab yaad aata rehta hai beech beech me

"Waise gf hai tumhari??"anushka ne poochha

"Filhal nahi"suraj bola

"Oh to pehle thi ??"anushka haste hue boli

Suraj muskuraya

"Mujhse nahi poochoge mera bf hai ya nahi???"anushka boli

"Ek ACP ko koi pooch sakta hai unki koi bf hai ya nahi???"suraj haste hue bola

Anushka hasne lagi.suraj se baatein karna,Hasna,muskurana kitna acha lagta hai.lagta hai ki ye pal kabhi khatam hi na ho

"Suraj uff yahan ho.chalo gaadi chalne wali hai.fir mai tumhe batati hoon is raaste ke baare me"aanchal ka aagaman hua

Aur hasi gayab ho gayi anushka ki.serious hokar chai peene lagi

Gaadi apne speed me chalne lagi aur kuch der baad munnar pohunch gayi

"Saar you ready at 5:00 pm ,going kathakali dance program"vimal mathew keralite driver toote foote english me bola

"Suraj sir"ek hatta katta aadmi suraj ko dekhte hi zor zor se haath hilane laga

Suraj uske paas gaya

"Suraj sir,your booking at REVATI international hotel???myself Aneesh Kutty"bol us hatte katte aadmi ne suraj ka bag le liya aur ek gaadi me daal diya

Suraj uske saath chala gaya aur hotel me pohunch gaya
Achi khasi hotel thi ernakulam jaisi.4 star property hai

"Munnar beautiful place sir,you will enjoy here"Aneesh Kutty bola

Room par pohuchakar Aneesh Kutty room ke baare me bataya raha

"Outside window very beautiful sir"Aneesh Kutty bola

Suraj khidki ke parde halke se hataya aur neeche dekhne ja raha tha ki achanak ek awaz aayi
Shit pistol unlock kiya gaya

Aneesh Kutty ke silencer equipped pistol se goli nikli

CYOOMMMMMMMMMM
Iska matlab Kerala itna simple nahi hain jitna sab samjh rahe hain. Har qadam me maut ne apna kaal bicha rakha hain har ek.inch pe nayi saazish chal rahi hain. Ab dekhay kaisay is bhawar se bahat aata ha . SURAJ
 
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Iska matlab Kerala itna simple nahi hain jitna sab samjh rahe hain. Har qadam me maut ne apna kaal bicha rakha hain har ek.inch pe nayi saazish chal rahi hain. Ab dekhay kaisay is bhawar se bahat aata ha . SURAJ
Review ke liye thanks bro
Suleiman takkar ka villain hai,suraj abhi tak kuch bhi pata nahi kar paya hai suleiman ke next plan ke liye
Abhi tak sirf uske plans those bohut pata kiya hai
Kai jaane jayengi is mission me
Saath rahiye
 

Swaraj

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Bro dont go upon religion and dont involve a quraan and all if u want to write plz write simply.
Bro im not going against any religion,what I'm saying is how people are torchered in the name of religion.
Suleiman was good at heart,but he was not selected because he was Muslim,he was beaten because of his religion.and I'm not done with his past.
No person is born evil.the society and people around him/her makes them good or bad
Saath rahiye aur support kijiye
 

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Waiting for next update
 
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