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Fantasy Agnivarsha - The Incomplete Love Story (Original by Prince Agni) (Completed)

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The Final Update


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agni ko dafnake sabhi lout atte hain aur ishwat sabhike ankhon me asu the har

kisiko aaj agni kii bohut yaad arahi thi lekin agni aaj in sab se bohut dur jaa chuka

tha

agni ka parivar aur agni ke mata pita agni se hamesha ke liye dur hochuke the , deva aur jagu dono apne jaan se bhi pyare dost agni se bichad chuke the aur sabse jyada varsha ne apne pehle pyar aur apne jine kii wajah kho chuki thi sabhi ghar me ghuste hain agni ke papa agni kii maa se kehte hain agni's papa - hamara agni chala gaya hamesha hamesha ke liye hume chod ke chala gaya wo agni's maa - agni ka antim sanskar karr diya aap ne? agni's papa - nahin ish tufan ke wajah se antim sanskar nahin karr pae haan mantra path karke ushe dafnaya gaya hai ye sab sunke varsha kii himmat puri tarah se tutt jati hai aur wo wahan se bhag ke agni ke kamre me chali jati hai aur darwaza andar se band kardeti hai aur varsha ke piche piche sabhi doud ke atte hain kahin varsha koi galat kadam na utha le aur sab darwaza kholne ke liye varsha ko kehne lagte hain varsha agni ke kamre me ake diwar pe tangi hui agni ke ek photo ko nikalti hai aur apne sine me lagake rone lagti hai


varsha - agni aisha kyun hua ye nahin hona chahiye tha , mene tumhare sath bohut galat kiya hai aur mujhe tumse mafii mangne ka mouka bhi nahin mila me tumse bohut pyar karti hun ye bhi tumhe batane ka mouka nahin mila , abb meri ish jindagi ke mayene kuch bhi nahin hain tumhare bina aur me bhi apne ish jindagi ko khatam karr dungi , me arahi hun tumhare pass agni arahi hun ye bolke varsha apne dupatte ko kamre me latki hui pankhe se bandhne lagti hai aur ush dupate ko phanda banake apne gale me tangti hai aur latak jati hai lekin tabhi darwaze ko todd ke sabhi kamre me ajate hain aur varsha ko khud- khushi karte hue dekh fouran jake varsha ke sarir ko pakad lete hain jish se varsha kii ye koshish nakam hojati hai varsha's mom - ye kya karr rahi thi beta agar tujhe kuch hojata to hum kese jite tere bina varsha's papa - haan beta hum pehle hii apni ek beti aur agni ke rup me ek beta kho chuke hain agar tu bhi hume chod ke chali gayi to kese jiyenge hum varsha - me kya karun papa agni ke bina ye zindagi mujhse abb nahin jiya jaega , agni ke bina meri jindagi ke abb koi mayena hii nahin raha ishliye plzzzzz papa mujhe jane dijiye me jina nahin chahti hun , me bhi apne agni ke pass chali jana

chahti hun agni's maa - nahin beta aisha sochna bhi matt agni ne tumhare liye apni jaan luta diya hai taki tum sahi salamat raho aur hamesha khush raho aur agar tum aishi karogi to wo jahan kahin bhi hoga ushe taklif hogi tumhe ish halat me dekh ke , aur kya tum agni ke rooh ko takliff me dekhna chahti ho varsha - nahin aunty kabhi nahin agni's maa - to phir beti tumhe zindagi me age badhna hoga , ish dukh aur dard ko bhula ke khushiyon ka hath thamna hoga aur wese bhi agni hamesha hamare sath hii hai aur rahega hamare dilon me wo zinda rahega hamesha ke liye phir varsha agni ke maa ko gale laga leti hai aur rone lagti hai aur wada karti hai wo agni ke ish balidan ko kabhi jaya jane nahin degi aur hamesha khush rahegi aur zindagi me age badhti rahegi ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ raat ke 10.00 baj rahe the aur tufan abhi bhi kayam tha bohut tez barish ke sath bohut joron se hawa bhi beh rahi thi lekin itni khatarnak tufan ke bawajud ali khan aur rahul dono apne sathi warewolf's ke sath samshan me moujud the aur agni jahan pe dafnaya gaya tha ush jagah ko pehra derahe the


achanak hawayen aur joron se behne lagti hain aur hawayen itne jor se behte hain kii bade bade ped hawaon ke wajah se jhukne lagti hain aur uthne lagti hain aur ye nazara dekh ali khan samajh jata hai ali khan - doston taiyaar hojao waqt achuka hai wo sab arahe hain rahul - kyaaaaaaaaaa wo sab arahe hain ? ali khan - haan phir bohut hii tez raftar ke sath bohut sare dark force ke yodha aaa pahunchte hain aur ali khan aur ushke sathiyon ke samne rukte hain wo sare darkforce ke yodhaon ne kale rang ke labade pehen rakhe the ishliye unke sir se leke pav takk dhaka hua tha agar unke sarir ka koi hissa dikh raha tha to wo thi unki lal lal ankhen darkforce kii ye tukdi bohut jyada taqatvar thi bakike tukdiyon ke mukable , dark- force ke sare yodha bilkul sant khade the lekin ali khan aur ushke sathiyon mese adhe dare hue the aur adhe bohut hii gusse me the aur phir ladhai suru hojati hai aur pehel ali khan kii taraf se hoti hai

darkforce aur warewolf's ke bich jung chid jati hai dono hii paks ke yodhaon me ghanghor ladhai suru hojati hai , ye khatarnak tufan bhi inke ladhai ke samne kuch bhi nahin lag raha tha sare warewolf's apni apni asli rup me achuke the wo sab bohut bade bade bhediye ke rup me achuke the aur darkforce walon ke upar chalang laga rahe the aur dark- force wale bhi unka datt ke mukabla karr rahe the jese jese ye ladhai age badh rahi thi ye ladhai aur bhi khatarnak hoti jaarahi thi agle do ghante takk ye ladhai jari rehti hai lekin dhire dhire ish ladhai me ware- wolf's harne lagte hain darkforce ke age dekhte hii dekhte sare warewolf's mare jate hain sibay do ko chod ke aur wo dono the ali khan aur rahul darkforce wale sab milke inn dono ke upar hamla karrdete hain aur inn dono ko chandi ke chain se bandh dete hain jish se inko bohut takliff hoti hai aur ye log dard ke mare chillane lagte hain , chandi ke madad se hii warewolf's ko mara jasakta tha aur kamjor bhi kiya jaa sakta tha aur ish wajah se ali khan aur rahul dono bohut kamjor hojate hain aur behosh hoke girr jate hain phir darkforce ke ush tukdi ka leader sab ko agni ke kabr ko khod ne ke liye kehta hai , phir agni ke kabr ko khoda jata hai aur 20fiit khod ne ke baad agni dikhai deta hai aur darkforce wale ushe bahar nikalte hain aur phir wo agni ko apne sath leke chal dete hain


------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ raat ke 1.00 baje - agni kii lash ishwat ek purane bangle ke bade se hall me ek bade se table pe litaya gaya tha aur uske aas pass darkforce ke yodha moujud the phir unka leader sabko bahar jane ke liye kehta hai aur phir darkforce ke sare yodha ek ek karke sab ush hall se nikal jate hain aur ush hall me sirf do hii sks rehjate hain ek tha darkforce ke ush tukdi ka leader aur dushri thi uski sathi ush table pe agni ke sarir ke charo taraf candale jalaya gaya tha aur wo dono sks bassss agni ko ghurr rahe the phir wo dono apne pehne hue kale labade ko utar dete hain abb unka chehra saaf saaf dikh raha tha aur ye dono aur koi nahin agni ke asli mata pita yane kii vishal aur sheetal the sheetal - vishal hamare pass jyada waqt nahin hai hume jaldi karni hogi vishal - haan sheetal tum sahi keh rahi ho waqt tezi se gujar raha hai aur hume agni ko jaldi se convert karna hoga phir vishal aur sheetal milke agni ke upar se sare kapde hata dete hain agni ko puri tarah se nirvastra karr dete hain aur agni ke nirvastra hote hii agni ke jism ke sare jakhm unke samne ajate hain phir vishal aur sheetal dono milke agni ke unn jakhmon ke upar hath rakh ke sehlane lagte hain aur dekhte hii dekhte agni ke jakhm dhire dhire gayab hone lagte hain aur dekhte hii dekhte vishal aur sheetal dono apne saktiyon se agni ke jism ke sare jakhm ko thik karr dete hain

sheetal - vishal agni ke sare jakhm thik hogaye hain aur abb ishke sarir me phirse jaan dalni hogi , aur ye kaam sirf ek pita hii karr sakta hai jo kii tum ho vishal - haan me janta hun sheetal tum jao aur wo kitab leke aoo phir sheetal wahan se chali jati hai aur jab loutti hai ushke hath me ek motisii kitab hoti hai phir sheetal ush kitab se kuch mantra kuch der ke liye padhne lagti hai aur phir kuch der baad ek roshni ush hall me atte hue dikhayi deta hai aur phir wo roshni agni ke sarir me ghush jata hai sheetal - vishal adha kaam hogaya hai aur bakika abb tumhe karna hoga phir vishal apni ankhen band karrleta hai aur apne gardan ko upar kii aur utha deta hai kuch der ke liye vishal ka sarir kash(tight) hojata hai aur phir vishal apne gardan ko niche karta hai aur apni ankhen kholta hai aur jab vishal apni ankhen kholta hai to ushki ankhen puri tarah se red hochuki thi aur phir vishal apne muhn ko kholta hai aur gurataaa hai aur dekhte hii dekhte ushke muhn ke jabde ke do dant bade hojate hain aur nukile bhi jii haan vishal aur sheetal dono mriit insaan yane kii vampire's the aur phir vishal agni ke kandhe ko kaat leta hai aur ushka thoda sa khun pijata hai aur jab wo agni ke kandhe se apna muhn hatata hai to ushke muhn me agni ka khun laga hua tha phir vishal ek chaku se apni ungli ko kaat deta hai aur ushke ungli se khun behne lagta hai aur vishal apne ungli se behte hue khun ko agni ke muhn me dal deta


hai agni ke muhn me khun dalne ke baad vishal aur sheetal dono wahin bohut der takk khade rehte hain phir kuch waqt gujarne ke baad agni ke sarir me kuch der ke liye harkat hoti hai lekin jyada der takk nahin kuch der baad ushka sarir phirse shant hojata hai lekin abb agni kii sansen chalne lagi thi ishka matlab vishal aur sheetal dono kamyab rahe the agni ko convert karne me abb agni bhi inki tarah ek vampire ban chuka tha agle do dino takk agni behosh hii rehta hai phir do din baad agni ko hosh atta hai aur wo apni ankhen dhire dhire kholta hai aur jab ushki ankhen khul jati hai to wo apne aap ko bed pe leta hua pata hai phir wo dhire dhire bed se uth jata hai agni - (sochte hue) ye me kahan hun , hmmmmm jahan takk mujhe yaad hai me to collage me tha aur rocky aur john se ladh raha tha aur mujhe bohut choten bhi ayi thi are haan rocky ne to lohe ke salhia se varsha ke upar vaar kiya tha aur me bich me agaya tha aur wo salhia mere dil me sidhe laga tha lekin me to bilkul thik hun mere jism me ek bhi ghav ka nishan nahin hai jabkii aishe nishan mitne me salon lag jate hain ye sab kya hora hai mujhe kuch bhi samajh me nahin araha hai , akhir me hun kahan ye kamra kiska hai nahi ye mera ghar hai aur na hii hospital hai to me hun kahan

ye sab baten agni soch hii raha tha kii ushki nazar padti hai kamre ke khidki ke upar jo band tha , agni ush khidki ke taraf badh jata hai aur phir wo ush khidki ko khol deta hai jese hii khidki khulti hai suraj kii kirne jo bangle ke bahar feli hui thi kamre me padti hain aur jab ye suraj kii kirne agni ke upar padti hai agni ke muhn se ek dard- naak chikh nikal padti hai ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh agni kii chikh vishal aur sheetal sun lete hain aur dono bhagte hue kamre me atte hain vishal & sheetal - kya hua beta kya hua agni - band kariye ish khidki ko band kariye phir sheetal ush khidki ko pass me rakhe hue ek dande ke sahare band karr deti hai sheetal - beta band kardiya khidki ko abb shant hojao phir agni apne aap ko shant karta hai aur apne gardan upar uthata hai aur jab wo apne gardan ko upar uthata hai to dekhta hai ushke samne ushke mata pita


yanekii vishal aur sheetal khade hain agni - aap log yahannnnnnnnnnn ? kahin me koi sapna to nahin dekh raha sheetal - (pyar se agni ke galon ke upar hath pherte hue) nahin beta ye koi sapna nahin haqeekat hai hum dono tumhare samne sach much hain agni - par aisha kese hosakta hai aap log to vishal - beta hum zinda bhi hain aur marr bhi gayen hai agni - me kuch samjha nahin papa? vishal - beta hum log abb insaan nahin hain hum log mriit insaan ban chuke hain matlab kii vampire's agni - kyaaaaaaaaaaa par kese papa? vishal - beta jish din rony ne mujhe mara tha aur pahadi ke upar se nadi me phenk diya tha ush hadse me me mara nahin tha lekin buri tarah se ghayal hogaya tha aur nadime behte hue bohut dur nikal gaya tha aur jab mujhe puri tarah se hosh

aya mene apne aap ko ek jhopdi me paya aur ush jhopdi me ek aur sks bhi tha jishne mujhe bachaya tha aur ushne bataya kii vo ek vampire hai aur ushne meri jaan bachane ke liye mujhe bhi vampire bana diya hai aur ushke baad me apni insaani jindagi gawake ek vampire banchuka tha phir mene bhi ush jindagi ko apna liya lekin tum logon ke pyar ne mujhe kabhi tum sabko bhulne nahin diya aur phir ek din mere hii samne rony ne tum sabke upar at- tack kiya ushme tum to bachgaye lekin tumhari maa aur bhai nahin bach paye aur mene hii unn dono ko baad me vampire me convert karke unko bachaya ye sab bolte waqt vishal aur sheetal ke ankhon se asu ke badle khun beh rahe the agni - aap logon ke ankhon se khun kyun beh raha hai vishal - beta hum log vampire's hain hum khun pike jinda rehte hain ishliye jab hamare ankhon se asu behte hain to wo khun hii hota hai agni - par papa me yahan kese aur mujhe to bohut choten lagi thi aur wo itni jaldi thik kese hua phir vishal aur sheetal dono agni ko collage ground se leke agni ke dafnane ke baad takk kii sari baten bata dete hain aur ye bhi ke agni bhi unke tarah ek vampire ban chuka hai


agni - kyaaaaaaaaaaaa me bhi aap logon kii tarah ek mriit insaan ban chuka hun ? sheetal - haan bete abb tum bhi hum mese ek ho agni - par maa aap ne aisha kyun kiya mere sath agar me margaya tha to mujhe marjane hii diya hota aap ne mujhe jinda karke sahi nahin kiya sheetal - beta tujhe chote se bade hote takk humne sirf chup chup ke dekha hai hamesha hii tere parchai banke tere sath rehte the aur tujhe hum dono pyar bhi bohut karte hain ishliye jab teri mout hui to hum dono ne tay kiya kii jite jii to tere sath nahin reh paye kam se kam marne baad hii tere sath rahenge ishliye tujhe humne hamari tarah bana diya phir agni jake apni maa sheetal ke gale lag jata hai aur ushke ankhon se bhi khun nikalne lagta hai , kuch der takk agni apne mata pita yanekii vishal aur sheetal ke sath baat karta rehta hai aur phir vishal agni ko leke hall me ajata hai jahan pe ali khan aur rahul dono bandhe hue pade the agni - papa ye kya ye dono yahan kya karr rahe hain vishal - beta ye hamare dushman hain , ye koi ali khan nahin hai ishka asli naam khudabaksh hai aur ye warewolf's clant ka king hai aur ye rahul bhi ek warewolf hai aur rocky aur john ko mohra banake bhejne wale koi aur nahin ye dono hii the

aur ye pura plan ish rahul ne hii banaya tha ye sab sunke agni ko bohut gussa atta hai wo rahul ke taraf badh jata hai aur ushke piche piche vishal bhi agni - ye tune acha nahin kiya rahul aaj teri wajah se meri ye halat hai naa me jinda hun aur naa hii me mara hua hun ek mriit insaan banke reh gaya hun rahul - haan to tu kya ukhad lega mera bata sale bata ye sunke vishal ko bohut gussa atta hai aur wo pass me pade ek khanjar se rahul ke gardan ke upar halka sa chot karta hai jish se rahul kii gardan thoda katt jata hai aur khun behne lagta hai aur khun ko dekh agni ke hath per kampne lagte hain rahul ke gardan se behta hua khun agni ko ushke taraf khinch rahe the vishal - jao beta bujhalo apni pyass ish rahul ke khun ko pike phir agni apne upar se kabu kho deta hai aur ushke ankhon ka rang badal ke nila hojata hai aur bohut joron se chamakne bhi lagta hai aur agni ka muhn khulta hai aur ushke muhn ke jabde ke do dant dekhte hii dekhte bade aur nukile hojate hain aur agni rahul ke upar tutt padta hai aur kuch hii der me agni rahul ke jism se akhri bund takk ka khun pijata hai aur phir apne dant ko ushke gardan se nikal leta hai aur ek chikh nikal padti hai agni ke muhn se haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


ye sab dekh ali khan urf khudabaksh kii bhi fatt chuki thi agni ushke taraf dhire dhire badhta hai agni kii ankhen abhi bhi chamak rahi thi agni - papa chod dijiye ishe ye kisibhi makshad se aya ho collage me lekin kuch hii samay ke liye hii sahi par ye mera guru tha ishliye chod dijiye ishe vishal - par beta agar ishe abb chod diya to ye dibara vaar karega aur ye bohut hii khatarnaak bhi hai agni - koi baat nahin papa chod dijiye ishe agar dubara hamari mulakat hui to ush waqt ishki mout pakki hogi me keh deta hun abb chod dijiye ishe phir ali khan ko chod diya jata hai aur ali khan rahul ke murda sarir ko apne kand- he ke upar latkae wahan se chala jata hai aur agni kii ankhen jo nile rang se chamak rahi thi wo abb normal hojati hai aur agni apne kamre ke taraf badh jata hai ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- inn sab baton me pata hii nahin chala kii kab raat hogayi hai agni apne kamre me akela tha aur wo khidki ke pass khade hoke chand ke taraf dekh raha tha , ushke samne se ushki puri jindagi gujar jati hai

kese ushke ghar me sabhi ushe bohut pyar karte the , kese ushki maa ushe hame- sha pyar se subah uthaya karti thi , kese ushke papa ushe pyar se data karte the , kese ushke dono bade bhai ushki har jaroorat ko pure karte the , kese ushki bhab- hiyan ushko maa se maar khane se bachati thi , kese wo hamesha deva aur jagu ke sath collage jaya karta tha , kese wo hamesha deva aur jagu ke sath masti kiya karta tha , kese wo deva aur jagu ke sath chup chup ke cigaret aur daru pita tha , kese deva aur jagu hamesha ushke upar jaan chidakte the , kese vo varsha se pehli vaar mila tha , kese unn dono ka jhagda hua tha , kese ushe varsha se pyar hua tha , kese ushne pehli baar varsha ko kiss kiya tha , kese ushka dil tutta tha , kese ushne varsha ke liye apni jaan kurban kardiya tha ye sari baten ushke ankhon ke samne se gujarjate hain aur agni ke ankhon se phir se khun behne lagte hain agni - sab kuch khatam hogaya sab kuch khatam hogaya wo gharwalon ka pyar aur dulaar , wo doston ke sath masti bhare pal , wo varsha ke sath pyar bhare lamhe , sab kuch khatam hogaya sab kuch khatam hogaya , abb agni kii zindagi hii khatam hogaya ye thi kahani agni kii aur ushke incomplite lovestory kii

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