Thriller Ahni (Iron) Darwaaza (Completed)

[syed arshad]

Bade

Bade bhai, don't wait for others. I'm here, comments ki jhadi laga dunga. Ye to studies ki vajah se busy hota hu isliye chota comment karta hu.

Bittu Bhai
Baat Comments Ki Nahi Hai Bhai....Jitne Bhi Log Padh Rahe Pata Chale To Khushi Hogi....Jo Waqt Translate Aur Typing Mein Lagta Hai Wo Kaargar Sabeet Ho Raha Aise Mehsoos Hoga....Aise Lag Raha Hai Jaise Khud Ke Liye Post Kar Raha Hu...

 

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Bhai

 

[syed arshad]

Gajab yaara



lagta h budhe ko koi daura padta h, jiski wajah se aisi harkate kar raha hai

Ab tak to sara maamla jamin jaydaad se he juda hua lag raha hai...

Baki dekhtein h aage kya kya hota h

Bhai
Budha Bhi Kam Ka Nahi Imran Ko Aisi Jagah Phansayega Ke Imran Apne Khwaab-O-Khayal Mein Nahi Ho Sonch Sakhta

 

[syed arshad]

Superb update dear

Nk Bhai

 

[syed arshad]

thanks bhai for new uptade
-baba-

Baba Bhai

 

[syed arshad]

Waiting dear

Bas Kuch Hi Der Mein

 

[syed arshad]

Aap Baba Se Kyun Nahi Puchte....!


Kya Puchu....?


Yahi Ke Is Mahaade Se Bhi Zyada Ahem (Important) Koi Cheez Thi....!


Aap Hi Bata Di Jiye Na....Baba To....


Achanak Ek Naukar Dinning-Hall Mein Aa Kar Imran Ko Ittela Di Ke Sardar Sahab Library Mein Uska Intezar Kar Rahe Hai....!


Fir Sahi....Imran Shaheda Ki Taraf Dekh Kar Sar Hilata Hua Muskuraya....
Fir
Wo Library Mein Aya....!


Sardar Daraab Thahel Raha Tha....Use Dekh Kar Ruk Gaya....Chandh Lamhe Use Ghoorta Raha....
Fir
Mukka Laherata Hua Bola....Main Tum Se Inteqaam Lunga....Tumhari Badtameezi Ka Inteqaam....Tumhe Bhaagne Ka Raasta Na Milega....Bas Ab Jao....Maine Yahi Kahne Ke Liye Bulaya Tha....!
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Imran Shaam Tak Daraab Castle Mein Maara-Maara Phirta Raha....Budha Daraab Haqeeqatan Uske Liye Paheli Ban Kar Rahe Gaya Tha....Uski Samajh Mein Nahi Aa Raha Tha Ke Use Kiss Tarah Raah Par Laye....Shaheda Ki Guftgu Ne Use Uljhan Mein Daal Diya Tha....Is Maahade Se Zyada Ahem (Important) Cheez Kya Thi....Kisi Ko Daraab Ka Haath Bekaar Kar Dene Par Majboor Kar Diya Tha....
Lekin
Agar....Uska Haath Waqti Taur Par Bekaar Ho Jata....Us Namaalum Aadmi Ko Kya Faida Pahunchta....
Agar
Waqti Taur Par Daraab Maahade Par Dastkhat Nahi Kar Sakhta To Kya Haath Acha Hone Se Yeh Kaam Na Ho Sakhta....Ab Sawaal Sirf Yeh Rahe Jata Tha Ke Maahade Ki Takmeel (Samaapan) Der Ho Jane Ki Bina Par Bhi Kisi Ko Faida Pahunch Sakhta Tha....!

Imran Iske Imakaanaat (Sambhavana) Ka Bhi Jayeza Liya....
Lekin
Yeh Khayal Be-Vazam Sabeet Hua....Maahade Ki Takmeel Mein Der Ho Jane Se Halaath Mein Koi Khaas Farq Nahi Padh Sakhta Tha....!

Imran Ki Tafteesh Ka Mahaasil Sirf Yahi Tha....Wo Achi Tarah Jaanta Tha Baat Kuch Bhi Ho....Sardar Daraab Ise Apni Zubaan Se Nahi Dohrana Chahta....Shaheda Ke Mutaleekh Bhi Uska Yahi Andaaza Tha....!

Imran Ne Ek Baar Dr Najeeb Ke Saamne Bhi Yeh Tazkara Chedha....
Lekin
Usne La-iLmi Zaaher Ki....Use To Maahade Ke Mutaleekh (Sambhandit) Bhi iLm Nahi Tha....Wo To 24 Chaubeeson Ghante Plastic-Surgery Mein Gharq (Dooba) Rehta....!

Imran Bohath Jaldi Uski Baaton Se Ukta Gaya....
Kyun Ke
Usne Is Funn (Kala) Ke Mustaqbil (Future) Par Roshni Daalni Shuru Kar Di Thi....Saath Hi Usne Yeh Bhi Bataya Ke Wo Girls College Ki Kayi Badh-Surat Ladkiyon Ko Plastic-Surgery Ke Zariye Khoobsurat Banane Ki Peshkash Kar Chuka Hai.....
Lekin
Uske Apne Khayal Ke Mutabeeq Mashreeqi (Eastern) Ladkiyan Behiss Sabeet Hui Thi....
Kyun Ke
Unhone Uski Peshkash Ko Thukra Diya Tha....Unhe Apni Badh-Surti Ka Gham Hi Nahi Tha....Dr Najeeb Ne Is Par Badi Hairath Zaaher Ki....!

Baherhaal....Imran Ne Usse Jaldi Picha Chhudane Ki Koshish Ki....Wo Thaka Haara Imaarath Mein Daakhil Hua....Baraamde Mein Khada Sonch Hi Raha Tha Ke Ab Kya Karna Chahiye....Ek Naukar Ne Ittela Di Ke Sardar Daraab Bohath Der Se Uske Muntazeer (Waiting) Hai....!

 

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Wo Dinning-Hall Mein Shaam Ki Chai Pee Raha Tha....!


Imran Chup-Chaap Jaa Kar Baith Gaya....!


Bilkhees Ne Chai Bana Kar Piyaali Uski Taraf Badhai....
Aur
Shaheda Ne Daraab Se Kaha....Aap Bolenge Debate Hai....!


Oohhoo....Kyun Nahi....Main Debate Ki Sadaarat (Adhyakshata) Karunga....Aisi Surat Mein Kuch Na Kuch Bolna Hi Padhega....!


Fir Shaheda Ne Imran Se Kaha....Aaj College Mein Debate Hai....Mauzoo (Topic) Aisa Hai Ke Shaandar Taqreerein (Speech) Hongi....!


Kya Mauzoo Hai....Imran Ne Pucha


Aurton Mardon Se Bartar (Greater) Hai....Daraab Apni Phati Hui Awaaz Mein Ghurraya


Beshak....Beshak....Imran Sar Hila Kar Bola....
Balke
Subhaanallah....Behathreen Mauzoo Hai....!


Tum Bhi Chaloge....Daraab Ne Pucha


Zaroor....Zaroor....Imran Ne Bade Khaloos Se Kaha....
Lekin
Main Is Mauzoo Ki Mukhaleefat (Virodh) Mein Taqreer Karne Walon Ya Waliyon Ko Hit Karne Par Majboor Ho Jaunga....Main Ise Bardaasht Hi Nahi Kar Sakhta Ke Aurton Par Mardon Ki Bartari Sabeet Ki Jaye....!


Mukhaleefat Mein Yaqeenan Taqreerein Hongi....Debate Ka Matlab Hi Yahi Hota Hai....


Tab Main Yaqeenan Hit Karunga....Imran Ne Sanjheedgi Se Kaha


Chai Khatm Hone Ke Baad Wo Uth Gaye....!


Imran Ne Bohath Chaha Ke Wo Debate Ke Chakkar Mein Na Padhne Paye....
Lekin
Sardar Daraab Ne Use Majboor Kar Diya....!


Usne Kaha....Isse Behathar Mauqa Aur Kaun Sa Hoga....Main Tumhe Apne Private Secretary Ki Haisiyath Se Roshanas Karunga....Mera Matlab Yeh Hai Ke Isi Haisiyath Se Mataroof (Introduce) Hoge....
Aur
Fir....Tumhe Kaam Karne Mein Asaani Hogi....Abhi Daraab Castle Mein Bohath Kam Log Tum Se Mataroof Hue Hai....!


To Aap Dusron Par Yahi Zaaher Karte Rahe Hai Ke Aap Ka Private Secretary Hu....!

Khattai....Khattai....
Agar
Logon Ko Yeh Maalum Ho Gaya Ke Tum Private Detective Ho To Tumhare Kaam Mein Dushwaariyan Pesh Ayengi....!

 

[Naina]

Brilliant update with awesome writing syed ji

 

[syed arshad]

Agar Aap Chahe To Minutes Mein Masla Hal Ho Sakhta Hai....!


Kyun....? Main Nahi Samjha....!


Meri Samajh Mein Mahaade Ke Alawa Abhi Koi Aur Kaam Ho Sakhta Hai....Jiss Ki Takmeel Nagawaar Hai....!


Kyun....? Yeh Tum Ne Kaise Kaha....!


Moti Si Baat Hai Sardar Sahab....
Agar
Waqti Taur Par Mahaade Ki Takmeel Na Ho Sakhe To Iska Asar Mahaade Par Kya Padhega....Kya Wo Waqt Guzar Jane Par Wo Mahaade Ki Takmeel Na Ho Sakhegi....?


10 Saal Baad Bhi Ho Sakhti Hai....Sardar Daraab Bola


To Us Mahaade Ko Khaarij-Az-Bahes Samjhiye....!


Chalo....Samajh Liya....Fir....!


Fir Kuch Dino Ke Liye Aap Ka Haath Bekaar Ho Jane Se Kiss Ko Faida Pahunch Sakhta Hai....!


Good....Sardar Daraab Chutki Baja Kar Bola....Very Good....Mujhe Umeed Hai Ke Tum Bohath Jald Maamlaat Ki Tahe Tak Pahunch Jaoge....Bas Ab Debate Shuru Hone Mein Thodi Der Rahe Gayi Hai....Hume Chalna Chahiye....Tum Dekho Shaheda Tayyaar Ho Gayi Ke Nahi....Wo Bohath Acha Bolti Hai....!


Imran Mayoosana Andaaz Mein Sar Hilata Hua Wahan Se Ruqsath Ho Gaya....
Fir
Thodi Der Baad Sardar Daraab, Bilkhees....
Aur
Shaheda....College Ki Imaarath Ki Taraf Jaa Rahe The....!


Debate Collegi Ki Ladkiyon Ke Darmiyaan Tha....Aadha Hall Mardon Se Bhara Hua Tha....Usme Kuch Sadargarh Ke Kuch Moazeezin (Sammaanit) Bhi The....
Aur
Daraab Castle Ke Rahne Wale Bhi....!


Taqreer Shuru Hui....
Aur
Kaafi Der Tak Jaari Rahi....10 Ladkiyon Ne Hissa Liya Tha....!


Shaheda Boli....Uski Taqreer Dusri Taqreeron Par Bhaari Rahi....
Lekin
Wo Inaami Muqable Mein Shareek Nahi Thi....
Kyun Ke
Uska Taalooq College Se Nahi Tha....!


Uske Baad Judge Sahab Faisla Karne Ke Liye Uth Gaye....
Fir
Achanak....Sardar Daraab Jo Sadaarat (Adhyakshata) Kar Raha Tha....Uth Kar Bheedh Ko Mukhateeb Kiya....Khwateen-O-Hazraat....Jab Tak Judge Sahab Apna Faisla Kare....Aap Apne Mulk Ki Azeem (Mahaan) Hasti Dr Ali Imran Msc-Phd-Oxun Se Mauzoo (Topic) Par Mavaafqat (Anukulan) Baseerat Afroz Taqreer Suniye....Aap Scientific Taur Par Yeh Sabeet Karenge Ke Aurat Mard Se Bartar Hai....Doctor Sahab Se Guzarish Hai Ke Stage Par Tashreef Laye....!