Fantasy aj the life of Ajay

[Aj raj]

Nice update

Thanks brother

 

[Aj raj]

Superb update bro... Kahni bahut acchi jaa rahi hai. Keep it up

Bhai ek baat smajh nhi aayi solars planet ka jo scene chal rhi hai kya wo ajay ka sapna hai

Isme jo seen hai wo solars planet ka nahi walki kisi anya grah ka jaha wo shaks kaid hai

 

[Aj raj]

Thanks for reading story, comment and suppoort

 

[Jutt Bro]

Waiting

 

[tpk]

waiting for next update

 

[Aj raj]

waiting for next update

Shaam ya raat ko update Aa jayega

 

[Aj raj]

Waiting

Shaam tak

 

[Sabhi91]

Isme jo seen hai wo solars planet ka nahi walki kisi anya grah ka jaha wo shaks kaid hai

Bhai ye to smjh gaya. Galti se solar planet likh diya tha. Mai ye janana chahta hu ki jo since dusre grah ka dhikhaya gaya tha wo ajay ka sapna tha ya real

 

[Aj raj]

Bhai ye to smjh gaya. Galti se solar planet likh diya tha. Mai ye janana chahta hu ki jo since dusre grah ka dhikhaya gaya tha wo ajay ka sapna tha ya real

Maine situation aisi create ki thi ki thoda sa suspense bna rahe agar ise suspense samajh kar chalo to story me pta chal jayega lekin agar dout samajh rahe ho to aise hi bta dete hai

 

[Sabhi91]

Maine situation aisi create ki thi ki thoda sa suspense bna rahe agar ise suspense samajh kar chalo to story me pta chal jayega lekin agar dout samajh rahe ho to aise hi bta dete hai

Bhai agar aapne ye suspense diya hai to koi baat nhi ye mai story k sath hi janana chahunga. But mujhe padhne se ye nhi laga ki ye koi suspense hai. Mujhe laga shayed ajay ka sapna hai. Isly pucha tha