Fantasy aj the life of Ajay

[John Cena]

Bhai dusri taraf bhi jayega bus yuhi read karte rahe aur agar story me koi kami lage to jarur btaye

Kami to boht han tum story boht zyada jaldi fast forward shoro karwai ha jis sa kuch logon ko is ma kuch zyada interest nhi hoga jaise hero ka real dad kisi dosra planet wagera ka un ka qissa ka wo kaise aye kaise hero ki real mom sa shadi ki earth par rah gai phir hero ka bhai ko la kar chalega matlab ya sab ap ko flashback ma rakhna chahiye tha jis sa story ma jaan barhe hero ka pass powers han wo kitna salon tak zinda zameen ma reh bache ka roop ma boht sari kamiyan han. Magar ap ki first story ha chalta ha ab daikhna ya ka ap kaise story ko adventure or suspense wagera bnate han

 

[Aj raj]

Kami to boht han tum story boht zyada jaldi fast forward shoro karwai ha jis sa kuch logon ko is ma kuch zyada interest nhi hoga jaise hero ka real dad kisi dosra planet wagera ka un ka qissa ka wo kaise aye kaise hero ki real mom sa shadi ki earth par rah gai phir hero ka bhai ko la kar chalega matlab ya sab ap ko flashback ma rakhna chahiye tha jis sa story ma jaan barhe hero ka pass powers han wo kitna salon tak zinda zameen ma reh bache ka roop ma boht sari kamiyan han. Magar ap ki first story ha chalta ha ab daikhna ya ka ap kaise story ko adventure or suspense wagera bnate han

Bhai wo sub bhi story ke beech me hi pta chalega thanks for comment kyuki comment se hi pta chalta hai ki aapko kya pasand hai padhne me

 

[kumarrajnish]

Nice update bro

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Damha]

Bhai story ko detail se likho sex itni detail se likhne ki zaroorat nai hai q kay kai readers sex ka part skip ker dete hai sex dikhao lekin zada detail ki zaroorat nai hai other wise bohat acha likh rahe ho kuch hat ke socha hai good mujhe adat nai hai review dene ki but kuch khas stories per deta hu ap ki story achi lagi to review de diya aur as a writer suggetion bhi

 

[Crocodile]

Bhai story ko detail se likho sex itni detail se likhne ki zaroorat nai hai q kay kai readers sex ka part skip ker dete hai sex dikhao lekin zada detail ki zaroorat nai hai other wise bohat acha likh rahe ho kuch hat ke socha hai good mujhe adat nai hai review dene ki but kuch khas stories per deta hu ap ki story achi lagi to review de diya aur as a writer suggetion bhi

Sahi kaha me sex ka part mostly skip he karta hu isiliye aaj tak shetan par comment nhi kia

Baki story bhut achi ja rahi hai aj bro
Par sabse badi baat yeh hai ki hajaron saalon me b hero vaccha kaise raha badha kio nhi hua

Baki pata toh chl he jayega aaghe

 

[Damha]

Sahi kaha me sex ka part mostly skip he karta hu isiliye aaj tak shetan par comment nhi kia

Baki story bhut achi ja rahi hai aj bro
Par sabse badi baat yeh hai ki hajaron saalon me b hero vaccha kaise raha badha kio nhi hua

Baki pata toh chl he jayega aaghe

bhai shetan me sex main ne nai add kia ye original writer ne kia hai update 60 ke baad sex khatam ho jayd ga waha sex sirf 10% reh jaye ga but thanks for read

 

[Damha]

Baki story bhut achi ja rahi hai aj bro
Par sabse badi baat yeh hai ki hajaron saalon me b hero vaccha kaise raha badha kio nhi hua

Baki pata toh chl he jayega aaghe

bhai mere khiyal se mitti ke andar rehne ki wajha se hero ki umar ruk gayi hogi you know time travel scince

 

[Crocodile]

bhai mere khiyal se mitti ke andar rehne ki wajha se hero ki umar ruk gayi hogi you know time travel scince

Hahaha bhai time travel science ke baare me pata hota toh story likh deta ,

Baki writer better knows kio Umar ruk gyi

Vese b fantasy story hai kuch b ho sakta hai

 

[Damha]

Hahaha bhai time travel science ke baare me pata hota toh story likh deta ,

Baki writer better knows kio Umar ruk gyi

Vese b fantasy story hai kuch b ho sakta hai

to me kia yaha phd ker ke baitha hu movies daikha karo HBO per science kia genral knowlege bhi sikh jao gye