Fantasy aj the life of Ajay

[Aj raj]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Thanks bhai

 

[Aj raj]

Bhai story ko detail se likho sex itni detail se likhne ki zaroorat nai hai q kay kai readers sex ka part skip ker dete hai sex dikhao lekin zada detail ki zaroorat nai hai other wise bohat acha likh rahe ho kuch hat ke socha hai good mujhe adat nai hai review dene ki but kuch khas stories per deta hu ap ki story achi lagi to review de diya aur as a writer suggetion bhi

Suggestion achha laga bhai na to maine jayada story hi padhi h aur na hi aaj tak likhi isliye pahli baar dimag me aaya to socha likh ke dekhu koshish rahegi ki story me sex kewal unhi jagah par rahe jaha jarurat hai

 

[Aj raj]

Sahi kaha me sex ka part mostly skip he karta hu isiliye aaj tak shetan par comment nhi kia

Baki story bhut achi ja rahi hai aj bro
Par sabse badi baat yeh hai ki hajaron saalon me b hero vaccha kaise raha badha kio nhi hua

Baki pata toh chl he jayega aaghe

Iska karan story me tab pta chalega jub hum grah solars ki baat aur ajay ke real dad Laurence ke baare me baat karenge

 

[Aj raj]

bhai samjha ker fantasy story hai kuch bhi ker sakte hai kia reality me kabhi aisa huwa hai touch karte he insaan rakh bn gaya yehi to fantasy hai aage writer better know

Bilkul sahi bhai rahi Baat karan ki to wo bhi bahut jald pta chal jayega

 

[Aj raj]

Solara aur prarthvi ke time me antar ka sabse bada karan galaxy ka alag hona hai solars grah kisi anya galaxy me h aur waha ka time usi hisab se chalta hai

 

[ʜeisenberg]

waiting

 

[John Cena]

Waiting next

 

[Sabhi91]

Next update kb tak doge bhai

 

[softheart]

Age likho bhai

 

[Aj raj]

Next update kb tak doge bhai

Aaj raat ko hi