Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)

[Swaraj]

Superb update bhai

Thanks bhai

 

[Swaraj]

Fantastic update sir

Thanks a lot sona ji

 

[Swaraj]

Superb fantastic update bhai

Thanks a lot bhai

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai

 

[Swaraj]

Super update hai bhai

Thanks bhai

 

[Rahul]

Thank bro
Ye sab ninja hai.apne apne clan ke liye jaan bhi de sakte hai
Rahi baat powers ki to ye generation ke baad generation ke saath powers paas hue hai
Rashmi ko uski shakti uske papa se mili hui hai,tyson ko bhi wahi se powers mili hui hai
Yug ke earth powers mainly mask ki wajah se tha jo ab uske paas nahi hai.isliye filhal to wo lachar hai
Saath rahiye

ishiliye bola tha maine use mask se dur mat kariye agar dekha jaye to use agle hi update me marna chahiye bhai kyunki usne jo waar jhela hai wo normal aadmi nahi jhel sakta hai aur super powers hai nahi magar ek writer use marne nahi dega ye baat alag hai ishiliye use uske mask tak pahuncha do jaise bhi

 

[Vikram singh rana]

"shiksha??"yug ne siksha ke kamre me ghuste hi awaz lagai

Siksha kuch nahi boli.us din mall me yug ke jo bezzati bhare bol bole the tab se yug se filhal baatchit band tha

Siksha ke kuch na bolne ke bawjood yug kamre ke ander aaya
Siksha kuch likh rahi thi.yug ko dekh ke bhi andekha kar apna kaam karti rahi

"Jaanta hoon jaane anjane me hurt kiya hai maine,isliye aaj wada karta hoon kabhi hurt nahi karunga tujhe,ho sake to maaf kar dena sis"bol yug kamre se bahar nikal gaya
Siksha ne likhna band kar diya aur sochne lagi,yug jaisa bhola bhala iladka aisi badtameezi se kaise baatein kar sakta hai

Yug wahan se nikalkar Monica ke ghar ki aur badh chala
Monica bhi shayad yug ko expect kar rahi thi.isliye jaise hi yug ne darwaza knock kiya usne jhat se darwaza khola

"Dekho yug i can explain wo us shaam ko mai aur sahil...."Monica ne baatein karte karte yug ko dekha.use koi interest nahi tha Monica ki baatein sunna

"Dekho Monica tum aur sahil kya kar rahe ho mujhe isme koi interest nahi hai.sahil ko tum mujhse pehle jaanti thi.aur tumhara close hai wo.mujhe tumne kuch hi dino se jaana hai isliye mera koi haq nahi banta ki mai tum par apna adhikar jamaun"yug bolta gaya

Monica chup thi.yug ke baaton ka kya jawab de do he ja rahi thi

"Meri dosti jaisi hi rahegi jaisi pehle thi.lekin usse aage nahi badhegi"bol yug ne ghadi dekha aur uthkar chala gaya Monica ko hakka bakka chodkar

"Kya baat hai yahan bulaya hum logo ko?"shubham bol utha

"Treat de raha hai kya hame??"jyoti ne shubham ke kandhe par haath rakhkar bola

Rashmi bhi aayi thi lekin chup thi

"Tum kuch nahi bolegi??"yug ne poochha
Rashmi ka chehra laal ho gaya tha yug ko dekhkar
Mature ho raha tha yug.shayad

"Waise mai thoda kaam se ja raha hoon,kai dino tak wapas nahi aaunga"yug ne bola to sab ek doosre ka muh dekhte rahe

"Samajh me nahi aaya"jyoti ne kaha

"Matlab tu kahan ja raha hai kyun ja raha hai.poori baat to bata"shubham bola

"Kaam hai yaar"bol yug jaane lag

"Yug??"rashmi dheere se boli

"Bolo rashmi"yug bola

"Kuch nahi"bol rashmi chup ho gayi

"Ok guys chalta hoon bye"bol yug chala gaya apne ghar
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"Hmm mask abhi bhi hai tum logo ke paas??"dark clan ka master phone par tha zabuza ke saath

"Ji master"zabuza bola

"Yani wo ladka yug hi tha"master bola

"Ji"zabuza bola

"Aur rashmi use ........uff ab rashmi par bhi nazar hai uski??"master ne poochha

"Nazar rakho us ladke aur rashmi par"master bola

"Lekin aapne bola tha kaam hone ke baad wapas aa jaane ke liye"zabuza bola

"Nahi filhal wahi raho aur nazar rakho meri beti par"master bola

"Aap kahe to uda de us ladke ko??"zabuza ne poochha

"Filhal nahi,aage dekhenge"master bola

"Waise master ye mask hamne pehenne ki koshish ki thi.lekin itni asardar nahi thi.pata nahi kyun???"zabuza bola

"Mask abhi tak sirf yug ko accept kar raha hai.isliye apni shakti aur de raha hai."master bola

"Fir is mask ka kya kare??hamare to kisi kaam ka nahi"zabuza bola

"Nahi.bina iske yug lachar hai.mask ho apne paas hi rakho aur aaye waqt le aana "master bola

"Ji"zabuza bola.aur phone rakh diya

"Tumne ye to bataya nahi ki master ki beti yug se bohut zyada hi pyaar karne lagi hai??"zabuza ke bagal me baitha kubda bola

Zabuza chup tha.rashmi ka pyaar yug ke prati har din badh raha tha

"Fir wo ladki koun thi jo park me behosh thi??"zabuza ne poochha

"Pata nahi,ye pyaar vyapar koi khalaji ka khel nahi hai,chalo chai peete hai "kubda bola aur dono nikal gaye
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Subah ke chaar baje the aur yug nikal gaya tha.
Poly aur harish ko ek jhooti kahani batakar

Uske peeche ek Saaya laga hua tha.jaise hi yug ne peeche mudkar dekha wo Saaya chup gaya

Yug ne charo aur dekha aur aage badh gaya

Rashmi ne rahat ki saans li.ek to chup chupkar yug ka peecha karna

Wow ek thrilling experience rahega.rashmi sochkar khush hone lagi

"waise hum ja kahan se rahe hai?"yug ne poochha

"Abhi tak pata nahi ise?? strange,aur aap isko mission me le ja rahe the??"muskura utha Chen

Yug gusse se kaamp utha.chen ki badtameezi badhti ja rahi thi
Sasuka bechara fans chuka tha dono ke beech

"Waise hum chal kidhar rahe hai??"yug ne poochha

"Hyderabad"sasuka bola

"India??lekin mujhe laga hum china ya japan jayenge"yug bola

"Kyun china aur japan kyun??"Chen ne poochha

"Martial arts ki shuruaat wahi se hui hai na??"yug bola

"Galat,martial arts ki shuruaat india se hui hai,yahan ke ek rajkumar ne boudhh dharm ko apnaya aur china chala gaya.wahan usne wahan ke boudd monastery ko martial arts ka gyaan diya.self defence ke liye,wo sab baad me
Suna hai Goutam buddha aur bodhisatv dono khud martial arts jaante the"sasuka bola

"Kya ??buddha ji khud Martial arts jaante....ohho mera dimag itna sab nahi le payega"yug bola

"Lekin ab jo naya master is clan ka leader banega,wo kya iske layak hai ??"Chen ne poochha

"Pata nahi chen.abhi wo kahan hai aur kya kar rahi hai wo hame bhi nahi pata.bas ek tip mili thi ki wo hyderabad me milegi,bas isliye ja rahe hai"sasuka bola

Ye sab sun rashmi saham gayi.yug red clan ka member??yani dushman clan ka hissa hai???au wo isi yug se pyaar kar baithi???
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"Madam ye jagah khatre se khali nahi"ek ladki koi 40 varshiya aurat se bol rahi thi

"Relax rachel nothing will happen"bol wo aurat jhoom rahi thi Disco me

"Madam raat kaafi ho gayi hai aur is tarah is night clubs me rehna thik nahi,ek bhi ladki nahi hai hum dono ke alawa"rachel bol uthi

"Fuuuu mai kisi se nahi darti rachel.aane do sabko
Dekh lenge"aurat bol uthi

"P please madam"rachel bol uthi

"Ok baba ok chalo"bol wo aurat aur rachel disco theque ke bahar a gaye
Bahar sunsaan tha sab.aur sunsaan sadak par do shaks ko dekh kar sahan gayi rachel

"Omg ek legendary ninja se milkar bohut acha laga "ek ladki ki awaz ne us aurat ko serious bana diya

"Mia????d dark clan se hai ye to"rachel ka muh khula reh gaya

"Mai itni famous hoon??"mia boli aur apne saath ladke ko dekhne lagi
Ladke ka muh poora dhaka hua tha aankhen safed thi

"Kya chahiye tum dono ko??"us aurat ne poochha

"Chahiye bas itna ki aap jaisi hai waisi rahe,red clan wale aayenge aapke paas aapko leader banane.baniyega mat"ladka bola

Aurat ne dekha dono ninja ko.dono top grade ke ninja hai
Inse ulajhna matlab mout ko dawat dena.

"Maine abhi decide nahi kiya hai"aurat boli

"Decide karna to wahi karna jo humne kaha hai"mia boli
Aur chali gayi.

"Jo wo keh rahe hai wahi karna padega na madam??"rachel boli
Jawab me aurat kuch nahi boli.bas dono ko jaate hue dekhne lagi
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Monica apne khayalon me khoyi hui thi

"Kya hua mon??aajkal tera wo dost dikhai nahi de raha hai??"manjeet bola

"Wo bhaiyya wo.... actually..."Monica ko samajh me nahi a raha tha kya bole

"Samajh gaya,yani tune sahil ko chuna yug ke badle"manjeet bola

"Aisa nahi hai bhaiya dono ache dost hai mere.yug ko bura laga ki mai sahil ke saath dosti ka haath badha rahi hoon isliye ...."bolte bolte ruk gayi Monica

"Pata hai Monica,us ladke me mujhe sabse achi uski honesty lagi.aaj tak kabhi tujhse favour nahi liye usne.ek acha ladka hai yug.aur itni achi uski soch hai.sahil.ka to pata nahi lekin yug ko khokar tune kya khoya,wo tujhe jald pata chalega"bol manjeet uth gaya aur apne kamre me chala gaya

"Waise do din ho gaye hai abhi tak usne phone tak nahi kiya hai"Monica sochne lagi

"aapko pata bhi hai tyson?? rashmi un teeno ka peecha kar rahi hai"zabooza bola ek shaks ko

"Usse kya fark padta hai zabooza?"tyson bola

"Matlab??"zabooza samjha nahi

"Uska bhai hoon mai,usse lakh guna behtar hoon,waisi kamzor ladki kisi ka peecha kar kya kar legi"tyson muskurate hue bola

"Pata hai lekin apni dadaji ko di kasam ki wajah se....."zabooza bola

"Kya kasam??hah zabooza rashmi kamzor thi,kamzor hai aur kamzor rahegi.wo kya ukhad legi kisi ka,use bachane ke liye khud yug ko aana pada tha"tyson bola

"Pata hai,lekin kya master ko pata hai.ki unki beti ko maarne ke liye mia aur IAK ko kisne bheja tha"ek kutil muskurahat ke saath zabooza chala gaya

"Zabooza master ke marne ke baad unka clan ko mai chalaunga aur koi nahi.sirf mai"aankhen Neeli hoti gayi tyson ke aur charo aur thand badhne laga
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Rashmi chup chup kar yug ko dekh rahi thi.
Hyderabad me a gayi thi yug ke peeche peeche.aankhen band ki usne

"Soch liya rashmi??"jishnu ne kaha tha

"Haan,lekin promise karo tum yug ko kuch nahi karoge,use nahi sataoge aur pareshan nahi karoge"rashmi boli

"Acha promise,lekin ab to paas a jao darling"jishnu ne rashmi ka haath pakadte hue bola

"No touching jishnu,jab tak mai ye nahi dekh leti ki tum kitne sachhe ho tab tak no physical contact"rashmi boli

Aur aise hi rashmi aur jishnu ka rishta chal pada tha.
Rashmi ne jishnu se rishta joda yug ki wajah se

us raat jab yug ne rashmi ko bachaya tha tab sabse zyada rashmi khush hui thi,yug apne pairon me jo khada ho gaya tha
Yug ke baare me to sab kuch jaan liya,lekin apne baare me kuch nahi bataya.kya batati??

Idhar red clan ke naye master ko khojne ke liye Chen akele ek jagah chala gaya jabaki sasuka aur yug doosri jagah the.rashmi bhi doosre jagah gayi thi yug ke peeche peeche

"Yug tum ruko mai gaadi ka bandobast karke aaya.yahan jungle kaafi khatarnak hai.yahi rehna aur apna khayal rakhna"bol sasuka chala gaya
Aur rashmi yug ko dekh rahi thi.kaafi dubla ho gaya hai yug.thik se khata nahi hoga,apne sehat par dhyan nahi deta hoga.gadha kahi ka.agar uska bas chale to wo.....
Rashmi sihar uthi. dark clan ki halchal mehsoos hui use

"Wah jise khoj rahe the wo aakhir mil hi gaya"yug ke saamne ek ninja khada tha

"Bill,ye tumhari mout ka naam hai,itna jaan lo"ninja muskurate hue bola

Yug foorti ke saath daudkar ek ghoomta hua kick maar baitha us ninja par

THADDDDDD

Ninja ka chehra ek taraf ghoom gaya.aur usne apna chehra fir yug ke saamne kiya aur muskurane laga

Yug fir daudkar saamne aaya aur ek punch maara

THAAAAKKKKKKK
Roka apne haath se us ninja ne,lekin yug ne fir apne pair chala diye us ninja ke chehre par

THAKKKKKK

Ninja ne fir rok liya uske baar ko

"Suna hai tu master ahru ka mask pehenta tha??master ahru ko aur koi nahi mila kya apna mask dene ke liye??kam se kam.us ladke Chen ko to de hi sakte the"ninja muskurate hue bola

"Ab mai tujhe apni Power dikhata hoon"bol ninja ne pose liya yug ke saamne aur rashmi chaunk uthi
Ye ye ye to wahi ninja hai...

"Ninja skill ........beast power elephant stomp....."bol ninja ka sharir hawa me udd chala aur tezi se yug ke upar aane laga.yug hil bhi nahi pa raha tha us jagah se
Ninja ke sharir ke aaspaas yug ne ek haathi ka sharir dekha aur us ninja ka pair haathi ke pair jaisa ho gaya

THAMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

ninja ka pair yug ke sar par laga

"Akkkkkkkk........."muh se khoon nikla yug ke aur wahi baith gaya wo

"Beta ye to sirf trailer hai abhi to bohut kuch sehna hai,yahan tu marega wahan Chen ko mia thokegi,tum dono ki laash sasuka le jayega wapas ha ha ha"ninja ne fir pose liya aur yug apni poori shakti ek karke uth khada hua

"Ha ha dum hai tujhme,lekin kitna wo dekhenge.........beast power tiger claw"bol bijli ki tarah ninja yug ki aur udd chala aur uska haath ne sher ke panje ka roop le liya

KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH

"Ugghhhhh"yug samajh gaya ki uske bas ka nahi tha use ninja se ladne lekin shayad ab der ho gayi hai.usne aankhen band kar li,uska sharir udd chala aur...

THADDDDDD

"YUGGGGGGGGGG"daudkar rashmi yug ke paas pohunch gayi.poora chehra laal ho chuka tha.left side ke gaal ka chamda utar chuka tha.maans dikh rahe the.dhadkane dheere dheeme band ho rahi thi

"Yug aankhen kholo yug,mai kuch nahi hone doongi tumhe please yug please"roye ja rahi thi

' Are ye to rashmi hai.master ki beti clan ki kamzori kadi,hat yahan se warna tera bhi yahi haal hoga"ninja fir position lete hue bola

"Please please ek baar uth jao yug please"bol rashmi ne yug ke seene me apna sar rakh aur chaunk gayi.achanak uske aankhon ke charo taraf barf jamne laga ,usne apne aankhen band kar li aur kaafi der baad apni aankhen kholi to wo neele rang ki thi.
Uske muh se halke se nikla

"Ninja skills.............ice dragon power"
Aur aaspaas thand badhne lagi

Woooooowww
Very good and fantastic updates....

Actually me ye pahle hee samajh gaya tha ki Rashmi ka koi na koi relation jarur hai dark waalo se....

Kyoki jab Rashmi drugs ke paise dene gayi thi.....OR usne kaha tha ki uske pass paise nahi he....tab us supplier ne use harass kiya tha....

Tab achanak se dark waale aa gaye the....or us supplier ko mar kar kaha tha ki boss ki beti ko drugs dene ki himmat kaise ki.....ya Rashmi ke relation ka pata chala....

Lekin ak chij jo ki azib thi wo hai....ki aapne kaha tha ki dark waale paise ke liye kaam karte hai.....
Paise lekar wo koi bhi galat ka kar sakte hai.....
Phir aise mai agar Rashmi dark ke leader ki beti hai....to phir uske pass paiso ki kami kaise hogi..??....ye mera sawaal hai....

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Very good updates...
Thanks....

 

[Hellohoney]

Fentastik bro bhot badhiya matlab rasmi yug ke liye balidan deneko taiyar thi or last me to kamal kardiya yar rasmi ke pass powar gajab waiting for next update

 

[Monxster]

Nyc

 

[Swaraj]

ishiliye bola tha maine use mask se dur mat kariye agar dekha jaye to use agle hi update me marna chahiye bhai kyunki usne jo waar jhela hai wo normal aadmi nahi jhel sakta hai aur super powers hai nahi magar ek writer use marne nahi dega ye baat alag hai ishiliye use uske mask tak pahuncha do jaise bhi

Bro yug ko sabse pehle ye saabit karna hai ki wo sirf luck ke wajah se ek ninja nahi bana
Usme wo saare gun hai jo ek ninja me hona chahiye.aur wo saabit bhi karega aisa karke.
Agar aap is story ko dhyan se padhenge to maine yug ko ek weak ke roop ke dikhaya hai.mask ke layak bankar hi mask haasil kar sakta hai wo
Abhi to aap usko lagti villians ke saath ladte hue dekhenge abhi tak to main villain yoshodo ko maine dikhaya hi nahi
Jisse ladega yug.
Saath rahiye