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Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)
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Review ke liye thanks
Jab yug wapas ja raha tha tab master ne use angoothi diya tha
Yaad kijiye
Sheetal white clan ko belong karti hai
Next update me aur clear hoga sab
Saath rahiye
Aapki story badhiya hai ishiliye har update ka besabri se intzaar rahta hai aur aap par gussa bhi bahut aata hai hamko bhai lekin aap ke andar ka jo insaan hai wo itna pyara hai ki chupchap intzaar kar lete hain halaat ye hai ki abhi update do to next ka wait karne lagunga mai..ab update likhna suru karo chalo
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Thanks a lot bro
Aapka quote padhkar acha laga
Aap jaise passionate readers ke liye story likhkar maza a jaata hai
Story ka update mai jitani jaldi jaldi ho sake deta hoon
Jo aapne shayad notice kar liya hoga
Pichla update fast aaya tha
Rahi baat next update ki to kal tak ho jayega
Saath rahiye
Sona
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Lover_boy143
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Once again nice update
Is me koi shak nahi k
story unexpected turns le
rahi or sath hi hard work b
dikha rahe well new twist
story ko or interesting banate
sheetal ne to ate hi
bang bang ker di or jo bomb phori
yug pe k unki shadi bachpan me
te ho gayi ti kafi shocking situation
ti yug k liye
Balck clan walu ki taraf se
mohtat rahne ki zarorat hai
yug ko zahir c baat hai k wo loog
mask ki powers hassil karne k
liye kuch b karain ge
age ka intezar rahe ga kahani
kia mor leti
Is me koi shak nahi k
story unexpected turns le
rahi or sath hi hard work b
dikha rahe well new twist
story ko or interesting banate
sheetal ne to ate hi
bang bang ker di or jo bomb phori
yug pe k unki shadi bachpan me
te ho gayi ti kafi shocking situation
ti yug k liye
Balck clan walu ki taraf se
mohtat rahne ki zarorat hai
yug ko zahir c baat hai k wo loog
mask ki powers hassil karne k
liye kuch b karain ge
age ka intezar rahe ga kahani
kia mor leti
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Thanks a lot bro review ke liye
Story ko ghasit kar bada banakar post karne se wo excitement khatam ho jayegi
Aur story aap anticipate kar loge
Isliye itna turn of events hai
Sheetal aur white clan next update me milega jo kuch hi der me aapke sane aayega
Saath rahiye
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Ek agyat jagah par,safed rang ke alishan mahal me lunch kar rahe the Kareeb 12 log
"Sheetal ka phone aaya tha"mrs bhatnagar boli
"Hmm"mr bhatnagar ne sirf itna hi kaha aur sannata wapas kayam ho gaya
"Kya yug manega mummy??"wahan kha rahe ek lambe chaude aadmi ne poochha
"Zaroor shaan zaroor kyunki yug ke bina hamara kaam poora kaise hoga??"mr bhatnagar bole
"Suna hai bohut powerful hai??"shaan ne poochha
"Kamlesh apne bhaiyya ko dikha do"mrs bhatnagar ne muskurate hue kaha
Aur Kamlesh naam ke ladke ne apna tab nikala aur shaan ke haath rakh diya
"Wah,Wah.....Sheetal ki pasand buri nahi hai papa"shaan ne tab dekhkar kaha
"Lekin suna hai bina mask ke wo lachar hai??"Kamlesh ne is baar poochha
"Wo to tab dekhenge jab Sheetal use yahan le aayegi"mrs bhatnagar boli
Sab ke sab khush hokar ek doosre ko dekhne lage
Tabhi mr bhatnagar ka phone baj utha
"Haan sir......bas bohut Kareeb hai.......yug ko ekbar a jaane dijiye bas"bol phone rah diya mr bhatnagar ne
"Yoshodo sir ka phone tha .yug ko khatam karne ka jo plan hum logo ne banaya tha uske baare me pooch rahe the"mr bhatnagar bole
"Ek baar ye yug khatam ho jaaye fir red clan ka khatma hum karenge aur dark clan ki jagah yoshodo ke right hand hum banenge"Kamlesh khush hote hue bola
"Sab Sheetal par depend kar raha hai"shaan bola
Aur sabne sahmati se apna sar hilaya
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"Pakke taur par kuch keh nahi sakti yug.lekin agar didi aur jijaji ne aisa kuch kaha hoga to milkar baat karna padega"poly boli
"Dekho beta,abhi mai office ke kaam me mumbai ja raha hoon.tum apni mummy ko le jao aur unhe samjhao ,kyunki abhi shaadi koi bachhon ka khel nahi hai jo kisi se bhi kar liya ya bachpan me tay kar liya"harish bole
"Dekhiye mai baat kar leti hoon phone par.wahan jaane ki kya zaroorat hogi"poly boli
"Nahi poly zaroorat hai,ye acha nahi lagta phone par kisi ko mana kar dena,jaisa ki yug keh raha hai ki Sheetal aur uske parents kaafi excited hai shaadi ko lekar.agar hum phone karke na kahenge to unhen bura lagega,behtar hai tum jao yug ke saath aur unse baatein karo"harish bole
Sheetal ki baat jab yug ne poly ko batai to unhone Sheetal aur mr and mrs bhatnagar se baat ki
Unhone shaadi ke liye zor diya to poly ne harish ko batana behtar samjha aur isliye wo harish ke saath shaadi par baatchit karti hai
Tay hota hai ki yug aur poly wahan jayenge aur shaadi ke liye na kar ayenge,Sheetal kaafi achi ladki hai.use koi bhi achi ladki mil jayegi
"Lekin beta tune ye tickets kyun li Sheetal se??hum khud bhi le sakte the tickets "harish bole
"Wo usne tickets bhej diye the isse pehle mai kuch kehta"yug bola
Harish ne aur baat nahi badhai
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THAILAND
Jakarta airport me aate hi poly aur yug ke aankhon ko baandh diya gaya
"Sorry aunty.ye ek custom hai.bura mat maniye"Sheetal boli
Poly kuch boli nahi lekin yug ko bura laga
Khair ye shaadi ke liye mana kar ye kissa hamesha ke liye khatam karne hi yahan aaye hi dono
Gaadi bohut der tak,ya kahiye kai ghanton se speed ke saath chal rahi thi
Fir helicopter se kai ghante ke baad jab un logo ki aankhen kholi gayi to samane ek safed mahal dikha unhe
"Wah,aaj ke zamane me bhi log itni aalishan makan me rehte hai yug??"poly tareef kiye bina nahi reh paayi
Aur fir dono mahal ke ander gaye
mr aur mrs bhatnagar aur kai logo ko dekha poly aur yug ne sabne namaskar kiye poly ko
To yug aur poly ne bhi sabko namaskar kiya
"Aap ka ghar to kaafi bada hai mrs bhatnagar"plot ne tareef kar di
"Mudde par aate hai"mrs bhatnagar boli
"Oh haan wo shaadi ki baat,to baat ye hai ki...."plot ko samaj me nahi a raha tha ki kaise bole
""Ki aap log shaadi ke liye taiyyar nahi hai,aur meri beti jhoot bol rahi hai ki yug ke mummy aur papa ne marne se pehle humse koi vada nahi kiya,hai na??"mrs bhatnagar boli
"Are aisi baat nahi hai.dekhiye ye shaadi ka mamla hai,bachhe padhai poori kar le ,mature ho jaaye fir to time hi time hai.lekin pehle ek doosre ko pasand karte hai,ya shaadi karna chahte hai wo janna bhi to zaroori hai"poly boli
"Yani aap ye shaadi ko maa kehne aayi hai"mr bhatnagar is baar bole
"Sorry to say.lekin yes"poly boli.
"Fir to hame bhi acting karne ki zaroorat nahi,waise aap apne bete ko yahan apne aankhon se samane marte dekhna chahengi??ya aapko doosre kamre me le jaya jaay ??"mr bhatnagar bole
"Ji???"poly ab uth khadi hui
In logo ke aankhon me haivaniyat dikhai dene lag gayi poly ko
Sabhi hasne lage,aur poly aur yug ko gher liya gaya
"Yug tension mat lo.jab tum maroge na,bilkul dard nahi hoga, promise,i love you yaar isliye tumhe zyada takleef dekar.nahi karungi"Sheetal ki awaz ne poly aur yug ko uski taraf dekhne par.mazboor kar diya jo ab poori tarah safed kapdo me thi
Yug ke sar par mout naach rahi thi
"Sheetal ka phone aaya tha"mrs bhatnagar boli
"Hmm"mr bhatnagar ne sirf itna hi kaha aur sannata wapas kayam ho gaya
"Kya yug manega mummy??"wahan kha rahe ek lambe chaude aadmi ne poochha
"Zaroor shaan zaroor kyunki yug ke bina hamara kaam poora kaise hoga??"mr bhatnagar bole
"Suna hai bohut powerful hai??"shaan ne poochha
"Kamlesh apne bhaiyya ko dikha do"mrs bhatnagar ne muskurate hue kaha
Aur Kamlesh naam ke ladke ne apna tab nikala aur shaan ke haath rakh diya
"Wah,Wah.....Sheetal ki pasand buri nahi hai papa"shaan ne tab dekhkar kaha
"Lekin suna hai bina mask ke wo lachar hai??"Kamlesh ne is baar poochha
"Wo to tab dekhenge jab Sheetal use yahan le aayegi"mrs bhatnagar boli
Sab ke sab khush hokar ek doosre ko dekhne lage
Tabhi mr bhatnagar ka phone baj utha
"Haan sir......bas bohut Kareeb hai.......yug ko ekbar a jaane dijiye bas"bol phone rah diya mr bhatnagar ne
"Yoshodo sir ka phone tha .yug ko khatam karne ka jo plan hum logo ne banaya tha uske baare me pooch rahe the"mr bhatnagar bole
"Ek baar ye yug khatam ho jaaye fir red clan ka khatma hum karenge aur dark clan ki jagah yoshodo ke right hand hum banenge"Kamlesh khush hote hue bola
"Sab Sheetal par depend kar raha hai"shaan bola
Aur sabne sahmati se apna sar hilaya
------------------------------------------------------------------
"Pakke taur par kuch keh nahi sakti yug.lekin agar didi aur jijaji ne aisa kuch kaha hoga to milkar baat karna padega"poly boli
"Dekho beta,abhi mai office ke kaam me mumbai ja raha hoon.tum apni mummy ko le jao aur unhe samjhao ,kyunki abhi shaadi koi bachhon ka khel nahi hai jo kisi se bhi kar liya ya bachpan me tay kar liya"harish bole
"Dekhiye mai baat kar leti hoon phone par.wahan jaane ki kya zaroorat hogi"poly boli
"Nahi poly zaroorat hai,ye acha nahi lagta phone par kisi ko mana kar dena,jaisa ki yug keh raha hai ki Sheetal aur uske parents kaafi excited hai shaadi ko lekar.agar hum phone karke na kahenge to unhen bura lagega,behtar hai tum jao yug ke saath aur unse baatein karo"harish bole
Sheetal ki baat jab yug ne poly ko batai to unhone Sheetal aur mr and mrs bhatnagar se baat ki
Unhone shaadi ke liye zor diya to poly ne harish ko batana behtar samjha aur isliye wo harish ke saath shaadi par baatchit karti hai
Tay hota hai ki yug aur poly wahan jayenge aur shaadi ke liye na kar ayenge,Sheetal kaafi achi ladki hai.use koi bhi achi ladki mil jayegi
"Lekin beta tune ye tickets kyun li Sheetal se??hum khud bhi le sakte the tickets "harish bole
"Wo usne tickets bhej diye the isse pehle mai kuch kehta"yug bola
Harish ne aur baat nahi badhai
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THAILAND
Jakarta airport me aate hi poly aur yug ke aankhon ko baandh diya gaya
"Sorry aunty.ye ek custom hai.bura mat maniye"Sheetal boli
Poly kuch boli nahi lekin yug ko bura laga
Khair ye shaadi ke liye mana kar ye kissa hamesha ke liye khatam karne hi yahan aaye hi dono
Gaadi bohut der tak,ya kahiye kai ghanton se speed ke saath chal rahi thi
Fir helicopter se kai ghante ke baad jab un logo ki aankhen kholi gayi to samane ek safed mahal dikha unhe
"Wah,aaj ke zamane me bhi log itni aalishan makan me rehte hai yug??"poly tareef kiye bina nahi reh paayi
Aur fir dono mahal ke ander gaye
mr aur mrs bhatnagar aur kai logo ko dekha poly aur yug ne sabne namaskar kiye poly ko
To yug aur poly ne bhi sabko namaskar kiya
"Aap ka ghar to kaafi bada hai mrs bhatnagar"plot ne tareef kar di
"Mudde par aate hai"mrs bhatnagar boli
"Oh haan wo shaadi ki baat,to baat ye hai ki...."plot ko samaj me nahi a raha tha ki kaise bole
""Ki aap log shaadi ke liye taiyyar nahi hai,aur meri beti jhoot bol rahi hai ki yug ke mummy aur papa ne marne se pehle humse koi vada nahi kiya,hai na??"mrs bhatnagar boli
"Are aisi baat nahi hai.dekhiye ye shaadi ka mamla hai,bachhe padhai poori kar le ,mature ho jaaye fir to time hi time hai.lekin pehle ek doosre ko pasand karte hai,ya shaadi karna chahte hai wo janna bhi to zaroori hai"poly boli
"Yani aap ye shaadi ko maa kehne aayi hai"mr bhatnagar is baar bole
"Sorry to say.lekin yes"poly boli.
"Fir to hame bhi acting karne ki zaroorat nahi,waise aap apne bete ko yahan apne aankhon se samane marte dekhna chahengi??ya aapko doosre kamre me le jaya jaay ??"mr bhatnagar bole
"Ji???"poly ab uth khadi hui
In logo ke aankhon me haivaniyat dikhai dene lag gayi poly ko
Sabhi hasne lage,aur poly aur yug ko gher liya gaya
"Yug tension mat lo.jab tum maroge na,bilkul dard nahi hoga, promise,i love you yaar isliye tumhe zyada takleef dekar.nahi karungi"Sheetal ki awaz ne poly aur yug ko uski taraf dekhne par.mazboor kar diya jo ab poori tarah safed kapdo me thi
Yug ke sar par mout naach rahi thi
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