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Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)

Aapke hisab se story ki lead lady kise hona chahiye

  • Monica

    Votes: 19 76.0%

  • Rashmi

    Votes: 12 48.0%

  • Sheetal

    Votes: 7 28.0%
  • Total voters
    25
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Swaraj

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Crocodile said:
We are always with u , you are a very good writer and I am damn sure this story will also entertain us fully , but before start this story please complete your 1 running story Bholu jab raja bna bcoz those stuck on place from long time it’s a request to u
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That's an adapted story. I'm trying to negotiate with the original Writer once i get an approval i will finish it in 2-3 updates
Please read my current story beauty and the beast
 
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17 th CENTURY JAPAN
IGO PROVINCE
Aadhi Raat ek Anjaan se ghar me
"sab ja chuke hai, tum. Abhi tak nahi gaye?" ek vridh ne poocha

"poore Japan ko ek karke sabse bada ghata Hamaara hua hai" ek aadmi bola

"nahi desh ka bhala hua hai. Hum sab ka maksad khatam hua, sab apne ghar jayenge. Group ka maksad poora hua" vridh bole

"maksad group ka poori duniya par raaj karna tha" aadmi chillakar bola

"ghat jao yoshodo" vridh bola

CLANGGGGG

aadmi ne apna hathiyar nikal liya. Ek talwar

"ghar to mai jaunga buddhe lekin wo cheez milne ke baad" aadmi bola

"kya cheez??" vridh chillakar bola

"amaratv yani amar hona. Koi mujhe na Maar sake" aadmi ek kutil muskan ke Saath bola

"aisa kuch nahi hai mere Paas" vridh bole

"ha ha ha abhi pata chalega" aadmi haste hue bola aur apne talwar se Vaar karne laga

Har Vaar naapi tuli thi. Jise vridh har had tak rok rahe the

"ha ha mujhe rokenge aap. Aapne hi kaha tha ki mai sabse taqatwar hoon is group me ha ha ha" haste hue andhadhun Vaar karne laga aur

KHACHHHHHH

POORE PET ME AARPAAR HO GAYA TALWAR

"ahhh ye galat hai yoshodo" vridh itna hi bol paaye

"ha ha ha" yoshodo ne vridh ke kapde me talash li to ek chota sa dibba mila. Use ghat se pee gaya wo

"ha ha ye poori nahi hai. Isme se thodi maine bachakar rakhi hai jo tumhe kabhi paya nahi chalega kahan hai. Tum Sirf aadhi amaratv ke maalik ho sake" vridh khilli udate hue bola

KHACHAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKK

sar dhad se alag ho chuka tha vridh ka. Kate hue gale se khoon ki bauchaar nikalne lagi. Kata hua sar diwar ke kone me gira hua tha
Yoshodo ne apni talwar saaf ki aur aankhen band kar lkya

"aadhi hi sahi leki. Poori duniya me sabse taqatwar mai hi hoon. Mujhe rokne wala koi bhi nahi ha ha ha" yoshodo ghar se nikal gaya aur poore ghar me aag lagakar chala gaya

Ghar jal raha tha. Aur Japan me log nai azadi ka jashn mana rahe the

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INDIA PRESENT DAY

LORRENT INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL DELHI

"yess yess fuck me fuck me hard"

"uhh uhh i'm cumming baby i'm cumming"

"lunch break khatam hone wala hai Yaar Sirf sex se pet nahi bharne wala. Khana bhi hai kya??"

"hai na, Abey o haggu" ek awaz aayi

Chashma pehne ek ladka daudkar aaya

"paise laya haggu??" mote saand sa ladka bola

"j ji" bol apne pocket se 500 ka note liye usne mote ladke ko kaampye haathon se diya

"madarchod 1000 laane ko kaha tha ye to Sirf 500 hai??" mote ladke ne haggu bole Jaane wale ladke ke baal pakadkar kaha

"s sorry bartein lekin aunty ne P paise dene se mana kar diya" kaampye hue haggu bole Jaane wala ladka bola

THADD

ek zordar ghoosa air chitak kar door ja gira haggu Naam Ka ladka

"eew ye sab band karo Yaar" ladki boli

"chal randi ki aulad tu bach gaya esha ki wajah se warna itna Maar khata ki....." bol batein esha Naam Ki us ladki ke Saath chala gaya

"waise kya haggu Naam hai us ladke ka??" esha ne poocha

"nahi yug" bartein bola
 
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Nice start.
Japan se start hua hai story or amaratv ki bhi jikra hai to kuch alag tarah se kahani chalegi jaisa ki aapke or sabhi story hai.
Ye haggu kaun aa gya bhai.
Kaise kaise naam rakhe ho.
 
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Swaraj said:
Sorry bro story alag hai. Isme Akash ya doosre character nahi honge
Lekin story follow karte rahiye. Aapko achi zaroor lagegi
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Nahi jaise bhai aap ne likha tha iske first part me last update me ki..iske baad akash aur disha kabhi shahar me wapas nahi aaye.but shayad unka beta apne dada dadi ke sath aakar rahega isliye pucha
 
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Chunmun said:
Nice start.
Japan se start hua hai story or amaratv ki bhi jikra hai to kuch alag tarah se kahani chalegi jaisa ki aapke or sabhi story hai.
Ye haggu kaun aa gya bhai.
Kaise kaise naam rakhe ho.
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Review ke liye thanks.uska asli naam yug hai.uake baare me sab pata chalega patience rakhe.aur story ko support karte rahiye
 
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Kratos said:
Nahi jaise bhai aap ne likha tha iske first part me last update me ki..iske baad akash aur disha kabhi shahar me wapas nahi aaye.but shayad unka beta apne dada dadi ke sath aakar rahega isliye pucha
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Haan bro.last update maine waise hi diya tha.lekin baar baar wahi script se boriyat lagti hai
Aur wo story halki si soft thi
Ye story bilkul hardcore hogi.intense hogi
Saath rahiye aur is story ko follow karte rahiye
 
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