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Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)
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Nahi sequel nahi hai story bilkul alag hai.koi bhi character repeat nahi hai is story me
MEHAR1234
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Hmm ok wesa ap pehla beauty and beast khatam kar leta to acha rehta
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Wo bhi chalega.lekin waise to wo story prime par hai isliye is story par zyada focus karunga.lejin Ajnabee ke part 2 ki kuch request aayi thi isliye ise start kiya
Sequel isliye nahi banaya kyunki ek to ye students par focussed hai aur Akash apni student life khatam kar chuka hai
Doosri ye ki story same na lage sabko
kamdev99008
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swaraj bhai............... nai kahani ke liyeye bhi jabardast chamatkaari kahani lag rahi hai.............
keep posting
Arjun Singh 72
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Thanks bro.ye Ajnabee ka part 2 hai.sequel nahi hai lekin theme wahi hai
ye bhi jabardast chamatkaari kahani lag rahi hai.............
keep posting
High packed action ke liye taiyar rahiye
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for new story Swaraj Par tum to isko Beauty and the beast ke baad start karne wale the na
anyway ab start kiya he to har update ko update number bhi do aur index bhi bana dena 1st page pe. Keep writing
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Yug ne apane kapde sahi kiye.sar me chot lagi thi aur hont fat chuke the
Usne chashme thik kiya aur washroom se.bahar nikla
"Arey ye wahi fattu hai na jiski sab bajate hai??"ek ladki ki awaz aayi
"Sshh sun lega wo.dheere bol"doosri ladki boli
"To?ghanta kuch karega wo agar sun bhi lega.sala fattu kahi ka.hazaar baar bolungi fattu fattu fattu.haggu"pehli ladki boli
Ha ha ha ha
Ha ha ha
Aansu aur apman ka ghoont peekar yug apne class me gaya.black board me likha tha...
LOSER HAS ONE NAME-->YUG AKA HAGGU
usne jaise hi nazar daudayi sah has rahe the sab ke sab
"Shut up everyone ,pahal ho gaye ho kya sab ke sab??"ek ladki ne awaz uthayi.
Jyoti rana.haan wahi hai.yug ke ek achhe dost ki girlfriend
"Sharm nahi aati kisi ka mazak udate hue??"jyoti fir boli aur yug ke paas gayi
"Tu thik hai na yug??"jyoti ne poochha
"Kisi ne pareshan to nahi kiya na?"jyoti ne fir poochha to yug ne charo aur dekha.bartein aur uske chamche ghoor rahe the yug ki aur
"N nahi jyoti I'm fine"yug bola aur apne dekh ki aur gaya
Chupchap apne desk par jakar baith gaya aur class waise ka waise chalne laga
Class ke baad apna bag lekar jaise hi ghar ki aur jaane laga use shiksha dikhai di.poly mausi ki beti hai shiksha.
"S shiksha "yug ne haath hilaya
"Uff ye LOSER kaha se a gaya"shiksha ne apne aap se kaha .apne doston ke saamne yug ka aise aana uska insult kar dega.isliye usne sunkar bhi ansuna kar apne doston ke saath chali gayi
L lagta hai suna nahi hoga usne.haan warna apne bhai ki awaz join behen nahi sunti
Aankhen band kar yug sochne laga
3 saal pehle
"Choro mujhe mummy Papa"bol yug chhatpatane laga lekin usko police walo kaskar pakad rakha tha
"Beta mai samajh sakta hoon tum par kya beeti lekin hum abhi tak pata nahi kar paye ki accident jaise hua tha dono ka"acp sir ne mayusi ke saath kaha
"Yug hamare saath rahega sir.agar koi formality ho to bata dijiye"poly mausi boli
Dono aaye the police station kyunki yug ke parents ko mare hue 3 din ho chuke the
"Formality aise kuch nahi hai poly ji.lekin kya yug aapke saath rehna pasand karega??"acp bole
"Koi nahi hai iska acp saab hamare siva"poly aunty ne kaha tha.aur tabhi se poly aunty ke saath hi reh raha hai yug.
Apni aankhen kholi yug ne.pata nahi aur kitane din aise ghut ghut kar jeena hoga
"HAGGU idhar a??"ek awaz ne dara diya yug ko
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JAPAN PRESENT DAY
"Sadiyan guzar gayi hai sir fir bhi aapko lagta hai ye sach hai?are ye sab kahaniya hai,aisa bhi kabhi hota hai??"cigarette ka dhuan chod kar nakoro bola
"Nakoro jo sadiyon se chali a rahi pratha hai use follow karna hi hai.kuch to hoga??kuch to baat hogi??"sasuka bola
"Sir jaisa aapane kaha ho jayega lekin fir bhi mai kehta hoon.sadiyon se a rahi is bekar ke andhvishwas ka ant kijiye"bol nakoro chala gaya
Sasuka soch me pad gaya
"Kya ye sach much bekar sa andhvishwas hai??ye to tab se chali a rahi hai jab se ninja ka safaya ho gaya tha.poore japan me ninja groups raato raat gayab ho gaye the.ye kyun hua aaj tak pata nahi chal paya
Tab ke logo ne ek pratha banayi thi har saal amawas ki raat ko is ghar dekhne aayega
Saari raat yahi rahega aur subah wapas a jayega
Lekin aaj tak aisa kuch nahi hua hai ki ajeeb sa lage.
An to karta hai ki andhvishwas ko band kar de lekin pata nahi kyun man nahi manta
Suna hai wo rakshas abhi bhi zinda hai.aisa kabhi hota hai kya??agar zinda bhi hai to poori duniya par hukm kyun nahi karta ya kiya abhi tak??
Cigerette ka dhuan chod kai sawaal liye chala gaya sasuka
Usne chashme thik kiya aur washroom se.bahar nikla
"Arey ye wahi fattu hai na jiski sab bajate hai??"ek ladki ki awaz aayi
"Sshh sun lega wo.dheere bol"doosri ladki boli
"To?ghanta kuch karega wo agar sun bhi lega.sala fattu kahi ka.hazaar baar bolungi fattu fattu fattu.haggu"pehli ladki boli
Ha ha ha ha
Ha ha ha
Aansu aur apman ka ghoont peekar yug apne class me gaya.black board me likha tha...
LOSER HAS ONE NAME-->YUG AKA HAGGU
usne jaise hi nazar daudayi sah has rahe the sab ke sab
"Shut up everyone ,pahal ho gaye ho kya sab ke sab??"ek ladki ne awaz uthayi.
Jyoti rana.haan wahi hai.yug ke ek achhe dost ki girlfriend
"Sharm nahi aati kisi ka mazak udate hue??"jyoti fir boli aur yug ke paas gayi
"Tu thik hai na yug??"jyoti ne poochha
"Kisi ne pareshan to nahi kiya na?"jyoti ne fir poochha to yug ne charo aur dekha.bartein aur uske chamche ghoor rahe the yug ki aur
"N nahi jyoti I'm fine"yug bola aur apne dekh ki aur gaya
Chupchap apne desk par jakar baith gaya aur class waise ka waise chalne laga
Class ke baad apna bag lekar jaise hi ghar ki aur jaane laga use shiksha dikhai di.poly mausi ki beti hai shiksha.
"S shiksha "yug ne haath hilaya
"Uff ye LOSER kaha se a gaya"shiksha ne apne aap se kaha .apne doston ke saamne yug ka aise aana uska insult kar dega.isliye usne sunkar bhi ansuna kar apne doston ke saath chali gayi
L lagta hai suna nahi hoga usne.haan warna apne bhai ki awaz join behen nahi sunti
Aankhen band kar yug sochne laga
3 saal pehle
"Choro mujhe mummy Papa"bol yug chhatpatane laga lekin usko police walo kaskar pakad rakha tha
"Beta mai samajh sakta hoon tum par kya beeti lekin hum abhi tak pata nahi kar paye ki accident jaise hua tha dono ka"acp sir ne mayusi ke saath kaha
"Yug hamare saath rahega sir.agar koi formality ho to bata dijiye"poly mausi boli
Dono aaye the police station kyunki yug ke parents ko mare hue 3 din ho chuke the
"Formality aise kuch nahi hai poly ji.lekin kya yug aapke saath rehna pasand karega??"acp bole
"Koi nahi hai iska acp saab hamare siva"poly aunty ne kaha tha.aur tabhi se poly aunty ke saath hi reh raha hai yug.
Apni aankhen kholi yug ne.pata nahi aur kitane din aise ghut ghut kar jeena hoga
"HAGGU idhar a??"ek awaz ne dara diya yug ko
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JAPAN PRESENT DAY
"Sadiyan guzar gayi hai sir fir bhi aapko lagta hai ye sach hai?are ye sab kahaniya hai,aisa bhi kabhi hota hai??"cigarette ka dhuan chod kar nakoro bola
"Nakoro jo sadiyon se chali a rahi pratha hai use follow karna hi hai.kuch to hoga??kuch to baat hogi??"sasuka bola
"Sir jaisa aapane kaha ho jayega lekin fir bhi mai kehta hoon.sadiyon se a rahi is bekar ke andhvishwas ka ant kijiye"bol nakoro chala gaya
Sasuka soch me pad gaya
"Kya ye sach much bekar sa andhvishwas hai??ye to tab se chali a rahi hai jab se ninja ka safaya ho gaya tha.poore japan me ninja groups raato raat gayab ho gaye the.ye kyun hua aaj tak pata nahi chal paya
Tab ke logo ne ek pratha banayi thi har saal amawas ki raat ko is ghar dekhne aayega
Saari raat yahi rahega aur subah wapas a jayega
Lekin aaj tak aisa kuch nahi hua hai ki ajeeb sa lage.
An to karta hai ki andhvishwas ko band kar de lekin pata nahi kyun man nahi manta
Suna hai wo rakshas abhi bhi zinda hai.aisa kabhi hota hai kya??agar zinda bhi hai to poori duniya par hukm kyun nahi karta ya kiya abhi tak??
Cigerette ka dhuan chod kai sawaal liye chala gaya sasuka
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